CAN I PLAY WITH MADNESS? [T]

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I will not hide my face
I will not fall from grace
I'll walk into the fire, baby
All my life I was afraid to die
But now I come alive inside these flames...

The next jutsu was a very basic jutsu that Amara wanted to learn. It was one that deals with defence and as a non-master of fire jutsu, she was going to need all the defensive techniques that fire has, as there are not many of them. This one was supposed to make a large explosion around her body that uses the force to deflect incoming attacks. It is a very complete defence but it can only be used so many times. It also happens very fast as well, but while it is happening, one can perform more handseals to follow up with it. Fire is not her forte but not all techniques are deplorable, so it was a pity to know that some fire skills needs a build-up of other techniques in which she cannot waste her time going into, otherwise she would have mastered this skill and be a mistress in anything fire.

Anyhow, this current technique was unique in the fact that it would radiate out form her body in every direction creating a sphere of bursting flame that would deflect all incoming projectiles and also push anything near her away. She has even heard that when mastered this technique, it could push objects as far as thirty five meters away! Although she has heard a rumor that some can get it even further. Amara knew the hand seals for this technique and was ready to try it out. She formed all twelve hand seals as quickly as she could and then put forth her chakra willing it to be converted into a fire nature. The result did not hurt her but it did make her body feel very warm all of a sudden.

It made her entire body sweat. Something didn't go quite as planned, so she tried again. This time she used a little more chakra but not a lot more. The effect was the same, she was not creating fire she was merely heating her body up which was very draining. She tried a few more times before she gave up and sat down in frustration. She was missing something but what was it? Perhaps there was more to this jutsu that meets the eye. It was almost as if something was in disguise, and not wanting to come out into the open. After a moment of thinking this over, she finally knew what the problem was. Amarantha knew what she was missing and she wanted to finish this before she runs out of time.

The sun was setting and she knew she would need to figure out and implement her idea before it was too late at night. She would of course stay later than normal if need be but she has only just been discharged from hospital, she doesn’t want to go back. She formed the hand seals again and this time she was paying attention to what her chakra was doing. This time when her body became warm she could feel the chakra there as if it was trying to force its way out of her skin and body. She just had to find a way to let it out. Release it. There was a trick to it and she could almost feel it! Once the chakra ran its course she would then form all twelve hand seals once again and summoned the required chakra. This time when she activated the jutsu she tried to relax her body, she was hoping that a relaxed body would not be tense enough to hold back the fire nature chakra.

When she did this, she got exactly what she was looking for. A burst of flame emitted off of her body, however it was very weak and didn't travel more than a foot away from her body. She would need to try a bit harder than that, a single foot was not going to protect her from anything as it was nowhere near the distance away from her required nor even the strength required. She started to practice now that she had an idea of how the jutsu was supposed to work. The hand seals were doing most of the work, all she had to do was relax a little in order to allow the jutsu to radiate from her. She would summon an amount of chakra and then release it from her body, she was not summoning the chakra to any individual part of her body but rather she was keeping a thin layer all around her body.

This was allowing her to emit the flames in all directions. The female was at it for a lengthy amount of time, trying to refine the jutsu until she managed to get it to just the right amount were it was strong enough to repel an oncoming attack and also went further than a foot out. As a matter of fact she managed to radiate flames from her body in a five meter radius. This was a very good accomplishment for her and she was very glad that she had succeeded in practicing the jutsu. There was still a lot of room for improvement but Amarantha would tackle that wall another time.

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Katon Kyuuka (Fire - Flame Sphere Technique)
Rank: "C" "B" "A" "S” Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A Defensive technique to where the user concentrates on the chakra within their body. The user pushes the chakra out as they use the body heat within their very body to create a sphere of flaming heat all around the user in a grand radius. Depending on how well the user knows this technique is dependent on the distance, this technique can be used.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: If the user is capable of performing this technique twice in a battle or twice within every ten rounds, the user will collapse with fatigue and high temperature.
Description: This technique is used as a defensive style technique. The user concentrates on the chakra within their body and exerts out in a large blast. The chakra is pushed out in a blazing flame and creates a large amount of heat to be used as a defensive technique. The technique pushes or removes anything around the user, to allow the user an amount of space needed. When first learned the technique is capable of being pushed in a five-meter radius. Each Rank learned the technique increases in distance by ten meters. This would be the basis for all NinJutsu Specialists. However if the user is a Non NinJutsu Specialist the distance only increases by five meters. If the user is a NinJutsu Master, the distance increases by fifteen meters.
Limit: Must have the Fire Release

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And all I can see
are these flames around me.
And all I can think
is I'm here alone.
Please find me and save me...

Learning Katon Kyuuka at the lowest level had been a success, Amarantha now wanted to proceed into the next level, level B. But first, she wondered exactly what fire is? And then through her training series of the element, fire is a process in which substances combine chemically with O2 A.K.A Oxygen from the air which as of consequence, gives out bright light, heat and smoke. But with Katon Kyuuka, if not learned properly, it will either not work and be a waste of chakra, or it will burn and cook you alive without the effects of killing you. And so, fire itself is able to envelop a volume as long as there is a need of oxygen for it to consume, to grow. Such is the nature of flames, and Amara knew this because she had spent plenty of time studying it.

She was not well versed with higher level techniques of the Katon release minus one but she had learned enough of the basic techniques to know the basis of katon techniques. And since Katon had not change for this technique it was obvious that the same rules, the same clause, and the same laws of fire still applied here. With that in mind, this technique would be easy to formulate. If all an expanding sphere of flame needed to be created was the oxygen it required to burn then all Amara needed to do was to provide the oxygen. It was a different attempt than what she had done with the lowest level, but in her way of thinking, whichever is best shall win. Now, in order to create such a situation she would have to create an absorption-like intake in a small radius in order to create a high amount of oxygen in a small space.

This would allow the flame to burn quickly and efficiently. In this regard the flame, well-tended with oxygen, would burn a stable blue instead of a flickering orange. Blue for it will be hotter than the usual orange-like flame due to the pressurised approach. With the plan in mind she knew that all she needed to do was execute this plan. Amara began to suck in the air around her, creating the environment needed to create the jutsu. The way for this to work was from the usage of her chakra. Since this was the basic formation of the technique there was no need to find oxygen rich air.

All she needed to do was grab the basic mixture of air and stuff it into the sphere which she will create. Of course anybody and everybody knew that air did not stay in one place if there was low pressure around it. It would dispel so that it would find balance. Though not to worry. The final step of this technique, then was the creation of a chakra sphere in which to keep the air packed tightly. With this, it could not escape. It was only partially difficult to make the sphere so strong so that air could not pass through it, this was a simple; solid round shell technique that did not require much complexity in its formation.

Therefore it did not take too much chakra. The female then produced a spark, after all this was formed, and the technique was successfully executed. The spark was created by the build-up and sudden release of Katon based chakra. And when it was released, anything in the area near her from would be deflected back from her. The perfect defence. But creating it was easy, it’s the distance of the release that needs work on…

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Katon Kyuuka (Fire - Flame Sphere Technique) [10]
Rank: "C" "B" "A" "S” Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A Defensive technique to where the user concentrates on the chakra within their body. The user pushes the chakra out as they use the body heat within their very body to create a sphere of flaming heat all around the user in a grand radius. Depending on how well the user knows this technique is dependent on the distance, this technique can be used.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: If the user is capable of performing this technique twice in a battle or twice within every ten rounds, the user will collapse with fatigue and high temperature.
Description: This technique is used as a defensive style technique. The user concentrates on the chakra within their body and exerts out in a large blast. The chakra is pushed out in a blazing flame and creates a large amount of heat to be used as a defensive technique. The technique pushes or removes anything around the user, to allow the user an amount of space needed. When first learned the technique is capable of being pushed in a five-meter radius. Each Rank learned the technique increases in distance by ten meters. This would be the basis for all NinJutsu Specialists. However if the user is a Non NinJutsu Specialist the distance only increases by five meters. If the user is a NinJutsu Master, the distance increases by fifteen meters.
Limit: Must have the Fire Release

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Even if the world ignites into flames
you'll be right here by my side.
And as it burns away,
you smile at me and say
that, "not even death could take me away from you..."

After the well-earned break, she pulled out the scroll for the technique she was currently learning and skims the information looking for another way to create this defence. The hand seals were simple enough, and as her fingers laced through all twelve of them, she suddenly felt her chakra awakening to the familiar sensations that the seals created. Fire was a very dangerous element, and is mostly used in destruction. However it to her means a heartbeat but with the hidden purpose for destruction. And she must admit that when she first heard about the jutsu, it surprised her in the fact that the technique was not only a fire type technique, but it was defensive as well. Defensive not offensive.

However her surprise moment did not last long. Her chakra was gathered toward her chest, pooling around there while a very fine sheet of it was suddenly directed toward her arms and legs. Virtually giving her a very thin coat of chakra. This chakra was directed to cause her body heat to raise significantly, raise to the point of fire. She gradually began pushing out this chakra infused with her body heat, and oxygen, and awaited to see if anything would happen. At first nothing happened aside from a very odd sensation occurring within her chest, like her body had just stepped into a lava pool.

Inhaling deeply, she gradually pushed this outward along with her chakra and watched as a large sphere suddenly began to form. Most of it in her current position appeared to be chakra, but the faint flicker of flames danced along the edges of the sphere but not to the point of it being considered a flame sphere. Frowning slightly, she removed all the chakra from around her and began to rebuild it within her chest. She was missing something, and that something was very vital to this jutsu. If only she knew what it was? Amarantha had no problem before. She even created blue flames.

And as much as the attempt before was easier, more ways are better than one and she was not about to give up. Whisking through the handseals again, Amara gathered up her chakra to the point when it was threatening to burst from within her. She studied the heat consuming her body and soul and used the chakra to raise it to a considerable height. Beads of sweat flowed down her neck, pooling around in between her breasts, yet her body temperature continued to raise. She closed her eyes, concentrating on allowing the chakra to fully envelope and consume her in heat.

The feeling was uncomfortable, yet not to the point of harm or discomfort. And as she slowly began to push the chakra out, Amara suddenly heard a crackling noise. The noise best resembling a burning flame, or most likely the sounds of crackling twigs in a campfire. The swirling, snapping – like motion and sound filled her ears, echoing inside her mind as she envisioned a large sphere forming out of fire rotating around her. And the moment Amara opened her eyes, there it was. The heat was searing her, but she was not burning in anyway. It was just very hot, and she was drenched with sweat.

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Katon Kyuuka (Fire - Flame Sphere Technique) [10]
Rank: "C" "B" "A" "S” Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A Defensive technique to where the user concentrates on the chakra within their body. The user pushes the chakra out as they use the body heat within their very body to create a sphere of flaming heat all around the user in a grand radius. Depending on how well the user knows this technique is dependent on the distance, this technique can be used.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: If the user is capable of performing this technique twice in a battle or twice within every ten rounds, the user will collapse with fatigue and high temperature.
Description: This technique is used as a defensive style technique. The user concentrates on the chakra within their body and exerts out in a large blast. The chakra is pushed out in a blazing flame and creates a large amount of heat to be used as a defensive technique. The technique pushes or removes anything around the user, to allow the user an amount of space needed. When first learned the technique is capable of being pushed in a five-meter radius. Each Rank learned the technique increases in distance by ten meters. This would be the basis for all NinJutsu Specialists. However if the user is a Non NinJutsu Specialist the distance only increases by five meters. If the user is a NinJutsu Master, the distance increases by fifteen meters.
Limit: Must have the Fire Release

[Celaena Kamyuja]

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Even if the world ignites into flames
you'll be right here by my side...

Seeing that this doesn't affect her, Amara watched as the sphere grew in size and expanded outward from her. It almost looked as if she was telekinetic and was pushing it all away from her using only her mind. Although she was unable to determine the exact length this sphere moved to, but it was no doubt solid and moving fast enough to move at least seven, eight meters. Once the sphere cleared, she moved over to another area and prepared to go again.

Amarantha’s fingers laced through the same twelve handseals again in a fast motion. Growing exhausted over the amount of heat already, she wiped away the perspiration on her forehead and began to concentrate on focusing her chakra toward her chest again. The heat suddenly washed over her, building and building until the point when she actually thought she was could to pass out and was forced to close her eyes and pray that indeed she wouldn't faint. The heat consumed her and expanded out with the slight push of her chakra. Amarantha stumbled forward slightly and await for the sphere to properly form.

When she open her eyes, the flames were already rotating around her. All in assorts of reds, oranges and yellows. Even though blue was hotter, this was indeed a beautiful sight considering she was caught directly in the middle of it. As the flames continued to spin and whirl around her, her chakra expanded and the sphere grew in size before it was pushed away. Amarantha’s gaze drops to the ground and she noticed that it was indented and blackened by the flames and power of the technique and as the edges of the dome surrounding her sped away, she notices that keeping her eyes open while inside the dome was suddenly not such a good idea after all.

The dome disappeared, but she found herself far too hot to resume this training for now and decided to call it quits for the time being while she cooled down. In the meantime, Amarantha read the scroll carefully, sitting down on the ground beside burnt grass. The handseals were easy, yet the description clearly didn't mention much about the technique whatsoever. She felt that she was performing it correctly, but yet something was still missing... Just what was it?

Standing yet again, Amarantha weave through the twelve handseals again before focusing her chakra toward her chest. The cool breeze had cooled her enough to the point when she felt alive again. So building up all the heat didn't seem to bother her like it had before. Closing her eyes, the female allowed the chakra to envelope her, causing her body heat to raise and raise until she felt that she was going to catch fire. At this point, Amara swallowed and pushed the chakra out after forming the sphere along with the flames that now encircled her. But just how much flames where there? And was the distance appropriate now?

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Katon Kyuuka (Fire - Flame Sphere Technique) [10]
Rank: "C" "B" "A" "S” Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A Defensive technique to where the user concentrates on the chakra within their body. The user pushes the chakra out as they use the body heat within their very body to create a sphere of flaming heat all around the user in a grand radius. Depending on how well the user knows this technique is dependent on the distance, this technique can be used.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: If the user is capable of performing this technique twice in a battle or twice within every ten rounds, the user will collapse with fatigue and high temperature.
Description: This technique is used as a defensive style technique. The user concentrates on the chakra within their body and exerts out in a large blast. The chakra is pushed out in a blazing flame and creates a large amount of heat to be used as a defensive technique. The technique pushes or removes anything around the user, to allow the user an amount of space needed. When first learned the technique is capable of being pushed in a five-meter radius. Each Rank learned the technique increases in distance by ten meters. This would be the basis for all NinJutsu Specialists. However if the user is a Non NinJutsu Specialist the distance only increases by five meters. If the user is a NinJutsu Master, the distance increases by fifteen meters.
Limit: Must have the Fire Release

[Celaena Kamyuja]

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I've been waiting here for you...
I hope you get here soon.
The flames are right outside my door...

She was almost there, after a long time of training, she was almost there. And now it was time to go back to the old ways. Even so, it was so exciting for Amara to see that her jutsu was improving in front of her eyes. The increased power was a great accomplishment but there was more that could be improved. She could still increase the radius of effect. This was the part that would be difficult but she was hopeful that between the new chakra control practice and the new hand seal combination she was going to be able to at least triple the radius.

The female formed the hand seals again and this time instead relaxing as she had done so in her lower level training of this jutsu, she will force fed it more chakra causing it to expand. It was immediately better to the previous attempt. It did not triple the distance but it was a good two or three meters wider. Amara was not going to stop at such a paltry increase though; indeed she was not going to be happy unless she at least doubles her distance. She would then perform the jutsu again, forming the handseals and summoning the needed chakra she would then release the fury of fire natured chakra around her in a violent sphere.

This time she was trying even harder to push it out. Amara would get it to go a little further yet again. She was certain she added at least another meter to the radius. That would bring her total up to 4 meters wider. It still wasn’t good enough. She still felt that she could push herself even further. Amara would continue in this fashion well into the day as she would repeat ably use the jutsu again and again getting the technique to expand far beyond what she was capable of before.

She would get past a seven meter increase and then an eight meter increase. At the ninth meter she finally started to have difficulties but she was determined to round it off. Amarantha was going to hit ten meters tonight even if it would feel as though it would kill her, she will beat this. She stuck to it throughout the night and luckily no overwhelmed feeling of death did not greet her. And in the end, Amarantha met her ten meter increase target. This brought her total distance of effect to fifteen meters.

It was hard work and she might need to do a bit more tomorrow just to make sure she had a handle on the technique. Amarantha would do it tonight but at the moment she is so tired that the only thing she desires was a nice fluffy bed to sleep in. Her fingers folded, but no, she could not continue. Maybe she has mastered it, maybe not but at least her mark was reached in the end.

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Katon Kyuuka (Fire - Flame Sphere Technique) [10]
Rank: "C" "B" "A" "S” Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A Defensive technique to where the user concentrates on the chakra within their body. The user pushes the chakra out as they use the body heat within their very body to create a sphere of flaming heat all around the user in a grand radius. Depending on how well the user knows this technique is dependent on the distance, this technique can be used.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: If the user is capable of performing this technique twice in a battle or twice within every ten rounds, the user will collapse with fatigue and high temperature.
Description: This technique is used as a defensive style technique. The user concentrates on the chakra within their body and exerts out in a large blast. The chakra is pushed out in a blazing flame and creates a large amount of heat to be used as a defensive technique. The technique pushes or removes anything around the user, to allow the user an amount of space needed. When first learned the technique is capable of being pushed in a five-meter radius. Each Rank learned the technique increases in distance by ten meters. This would be the basis for all NinJutsu Specialists. However if the user is a Non NinJutsu Specialist the distance only increases by five meters. If the user is a NinJutsu Master, the distance increases by fifteen meters.
Limit: Must have the Fire Release

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The dragon is wreak havoc in my brain
Plays my emotion, a never ending game...

We generally don’t believe anything bad will happen to us. Things like earthquakes, tsunamis, and zombie apocalypses happen to other people. We all firmly believe this… until suddenly that first bastard bites us on the ass.
I, for one, resent the hell out of this prospect.
And that is one of the main reasons why Amarantha trains, also besides that it is fun and the knowledge intake is good, but she would never know when Karma will turn around a become a stroppy bitch. Be prepared, that is one motto which every shinobi needs to retain in life. Back to matters at hand, training, she calculated that she only needs about sixty points worth of knowledge before she has reached the mastery limit of Katon release. And with that in mind, her hands flew through twelve simple hand seals.

Also in mind was the fact that this jutsu caused a dragon to be spewed from her very mouth, a dragon symbolizing either the Traditional Chinese Dragon, or the Japanese Dragon. Passionate all of a sudden about creating a large graceful and extremely beautiful creature, Amarantha didn’t even realize her chakra had started to swell up within her until it was right at the last moment. After all her mind was focused on the detail of a dragon’s head. The first thing that popped into her mind was a large muzzle with thousands of razor sharp teeth. The head was well muscled and two large flaming green eyes burned brightly. Two large pointed ears soon surfaced through the flames along with a large beard flowing out from the Dragon's chin and whiskers, cascading in waves of fiery silk. Two large antler – like horns then appeared just behind the ears, positioned in the direct center of the Dragon's head.

The rest of the surrounding head soon burst into a large flame as the main tore out across the crown of the Dragon before the neck began to extend. The long spiralling neck stretched out for what appeared like miles from within her mind, sprouting four large tree – trunks for legs and four long smaller trunks for the hands and feet. Each claw was deadly sharp and was of the colour of black crystal. Two large wings were folded into the Dragon's body as she pictured it pushing out from a small, confined space which would soon be her mouth. Thousands and thousands of scales rippled along this giant creature, beginning from the tip of the Dragon's muzzle, filling its head and racing down along its neck until they eventually grew in size to cover the entire body. As the scales grew in size, the Dragon's wings began to extend, spanning in over thirty feet.

If Amarantha’s eyes were not open this grand sight would have been nothing but a figment of her very creative imagination. Although the creature within her mind was an extremely colourful beast, the female knew that once the Dragon came forth from her mouth, the bright colourings within her mind would dissolve into a pure, even more beautiful colour: Fire. As powerful and dangerous as this element could be, its sights are always the most grand and spectacular in her eyes. And as the scales of the Dragon reached the very tip of its tail, the last and final section of the tail soon burst into a long, wavy tail of fire.

With the Dragon's image held firmly within her mind, and the chakra swelling up from within her chest, she began to direct it upward toward her lungs and throat to coat all the important organs that will soon be host to the fire within her. Heat and smoke filled her lungs first, threatening to burn the bags that were primarily used to contain air for her to breathe. As the chakra mixed in with the air and carbon dioxide, the smoke flared up from deep within her, the amount clearly enough to cause a person to heave, but as her eyes closed tightly, tears silk-lining her long eye lashes, she gradually pushed the smoke and chakra up toward her throat before it would eventually exit from her mouth.

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Katon - Ryuuka no Jutsu (Dragon Fire Technique) [10]
Rank: "C" "B" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The user quickly performs a large creation of blinding fire into the form of a large Dragon form. The Dragon must be used in the same concept as the Goukakyuu no Jutsu in which must be thrown by placing a hand in a circle form over the mouth of the user.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: This type of technique is better used if the opponent is bonded down and unable to be moved.
Description: A Large creation is created as the user performs the necessary handseals for the technique. As the user does so they raise their hand up over their mouth. By taking in a deep, breathe the user fills their lungs with chakra to in, which ignites the moment they blow out air. As the user blows out the creation of fire is made taking the form of a giant dragon like creature. The Dragon is quickly hurled towards the opponent as the dragon swivels and swerves moving like that of a Chinese Dragon. When first learned the Dragon does not explode forth but the very flames oozes out spreading out in all directions that would wrap around the opponent in a blaze of glory. When the user learns the "B" Rank version the user is capable of pushing so much power into the technique to where when it touches the target it is needed it is ignited in a mass blaze of glory, creating a grand explosion.
Limit: Must have the Fire Release.

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I am fishing for the Dragon.

When a fiery dragon wants out of your mouth, don’t hold him in.
Amarantha’s throat was burning with chakra and flames, and her trembling hands struggled to form the needed O symbol for this technique to properly take effect. The chakra focused to her hand formed a thick coat to prevent herself from being burnt, but as she struggled to hold on to the flames and the image of the Dragon within her, she feared that this was not going to work. But as her lips fit perfectly within the small circle that her hand had created, Amara opened her mouth as wide as she could and extended the rest of her fingers before throwing herself backward and pushing the flaming beasts fourth. As the flames continued to lick around inside her mouth, the female pushed all of it to the surface and waited until a large burst of fire erupted from her mouth to spill out into the open.

Her mind then released that imagine of the huge Dragon and once the flames protruding into the air grew big enough, the Dragon's head soon began to form. The creation forming before her was exactly what she had visualized within her head. The large muzzle opened to release a thunderous roar and as the neck of the Dragon poured out of her mouth, she began to find herself losing power in pushing out this large beast. The scales rippled to life as they formed the Dragon's scaly body and the moment the wings exited from her mouth, they began to open. At the pure size of the beast, Amara began to wonder what it would feel like standing at the mouth of this thing, and not behind it.

The amount of damage this alone could cause would be chaos and such a terrible, yet loveable sight to witness. One could simply not choose. But as the tail finally left her, the Dragon's swirling body literally began to bob up and down like an actual Sky Dragon, the speed was perfect, and the grace that the creature moved in was amazing. Such a deadly technique, yet such a beautiful sight to watch. The female had always thought of each jutsu that she creates, a master piece of beauty, such abilities enable her to create such beautiful creatures to do her bidding. The target before her was a lone stump of a tree long cut down.

The stump was strangely high as the cutters had not properly chopped it down to a proper size. But Amarantha believed that once the Dragon reached the target, the stump would either be shorted visibly, or would be nothing but a large pile of ashes. As the Dragon neared its target, Amarantha staggered forward slightly, dropping her hand from her mouth. The large frame of the flaming creation wrapped around the stump and began to dissolve and create a large inferno. Although there was no explosion, the sight was still grand to the woman.

The stump continued to burn, the sound of crackling wood filled her ears and heat coming from the engulfed area before her was extreme. She seriously doubted that any other life tapped within this space of landscape would have survived such a large fire, but with nature, it always has its surprises and advantages against bush fires, why should this be no different? Seeing that she had successfully destroyed the stump and part of the landscape surrounding the stump, Amara was able to take a rest before attempting it again.

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Katon - Ryuuka no Jutsu (Dragon Fire Technique) [10]
Rank: "C" "B" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The user quickly performs a large creation of blinding fire into the form of a large Dragon form. The Dragon must be used in the same concept as the Goukakyuu no Jutsu in which must be thrown by placing a hand in a circle form over the mouth of the user.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: This type of technique is better used if the opponent is bonded down and unable to be moved.
Description: A Large creation is created as the user performs the necessary handseals for the technique. As the user does so they raise their hand up over their mouth. By taking in a deep, breathe the user fills their lungs with chakra to in, which ignites the moment they blow out air. As the user blows out the creation of fire is made taking the form of a giant dragon like creature. The Dragon is quickly hurled towards the opponent as the dragon swivels and swerves moving like that of a Chinese Dragon. When first learned the Dragon does not explode forth but the very flames oozes out spreading out in all directions that would wrap around the opponent in a blaze of glory. When the user learns the "B" Rank version the user is capable of pushing so much power into the technique to where when it touches the target it is needed it is ignited in a mass blaze of glory, creating a grand explosion.
Limit: Must have the Fire Release.

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I thought we weren't allowed to use templates for training :[

[Celaena Kamyuja]

[/b][/font]ternal Chaos[/div]

[/b][/font]eadway: 010 out of 040
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You must have a dragon hidden inside you. When you need, you let the dragon out…

After attaining a full stomach, Amarantha was back for some more festive fiery fun forming fantastic flames for future use. Currently she was trying to improve the Dragon Fire technique which was proving to be a bit more difficult then she originally predicted. She had already failed to make the technique faster, much less explode, although she learned a lot about it while trying, and she was not about to give up with increase the agility of the technique. She tried to make it more agile by trying to adjust the jutsu after it was activated. However, now she was going to try and adjust the Dragon Fire Technique while she was activating it, but also use pattern work for direction.

The idea behind working the chakra while she was forming the jutsu was that she would have the Dragon follow a designated path after its creation. The way she would, supposedly, create this was to have the image in her head and use extra chakra to try and guide the fire dragon after its creation. It will not be as good as controlling if freely after its creation, but it would still be a huge improvement being able to direct the dragon along a give course of movements. It wasn’t what Amara had in mind for the Dragon Fire technique’s improvement but it would still be an improvement. All she had to do was figure out how to do it.

She start by starting the hand seal combination, she would gather a bit of extra chakra and try to direct it to make a map of where she would like the Dragon Fire to travel. Once she had that down she was about halfway through the hand seals. She was forming the hand seal slowly on purpose to give herself more time to think and the slower pace allowed for better understanding as well. It may take a lot of time to do right now but if this worked she could try to make the jutsu activate faster at a later date. For now though the slow hand seals were perfect for figuring out if it was even possible in the first place.

It all took Amara about one whole minute forming the handseals and then when she released the Dragon Of fire she half expected it to just up and fizzle. However to her surprise it came out at the same speed and it followed her prepared pattern. The only down side was that it took too long to activate. She was hopeful that she could remedy that of course but it was going to take a lot of effect to do it. She wasn’t sure she was up for the gruelling challenge of forming in her mind complete patterns within a few seconds of the jutsu being activated.

She was going to try it though, and it was bound to be difficult, but then Amara hasn’t exactly had an easy life now has she? She was used to the challenge. Sometimes the challenge would be a bit much but she would always try. Odds were if she couldn’t do it there were not many that could. Matter of fact any fire jutsus she couldn’t learn that she saw other do would cause her to become overbearingly jealous. But that can’t be helped, she was at a limit as it is. Fire was simply not made for her…

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Katon - Ryuuka no Jutsu (Dragon Fire Technique) [10]
Rank: "C" "B" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The user quickly performs a large creation of blinding fire into the form of a large Dragon form. The Dragon must be used in the same concept as the Goukakyuu no Jutsu in which must be thrown by placing a hand in a circle form over the mouth of the user.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: This type of technique is better used if the opponent is bonded down and unable to be moved.
Description: A Large creation is created as the user performs the necessary handseals for the technique. As the user does so they raise their hand up over their mouth. By taking in a deep, breathe the user fills their lungs with chakra to in, which ignites the moment they blow out air. As the user blows out the creation of fire is made taking the form of a giant dragon like creature. The Dragon is quickly hurled towards the opponent as the dragon swivels and swerves moving like that of a Chinese Dragon. When first learned the Dragon does not explode forth but the very flames oozes out spreading out in all directions that would wrap around the opponent in a blaze of glory. When the user learns the "B" Rank version the user is capable of pushing so much power into the technique to where when it touches the target it is needed it is ignited in a mass blaze of glory, creating a grand explosion.
Limit: Must have the Fire Release.

Lol. Thanks. I wouldn't really call this a template. It just very tidy. However, I would have changed it immediately if Herro had said so, but he didn't so I had not. If its a problem, I will remove it

[Father 'Suke]

+10; 10|40

It is tables that there is a written rule that they are not allowed. However, when I quote your post and look at the coding, it is just blockquotes and a different font when you are typing the training. The "template" or div code is only for the red lettering header up top which is fine as it doesn't interfere with your training post portion.

[Celaena Kamyuja]

[/b][/font]ternal Chaos[/div]

[/b][/font]eadway: 020 out of 040
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SARCASM – Only a dragon could pull off a face that says, “YOU FAIL.”

The Kamyuja had been trying to get the jutsu to be faster for hours. She could not get it, she was getting more proficient with the jutsu but she could not get the complicated image to stay in her head while trying to formulate the fire chakra, and planning a sequence of movements in her head. It just took too long. She was not going to want to use such a jutsu if it took a whole minute to use. In the world of jutsus and shinobi, an attack that takes one minute would mean death before it could even be used.

Amara was starting to think that it was not possible to increase the agility of the jutsu. The complexity was just too great for her to be able to compensate for, her mind was not refined enough to multitask that many things at once. Woman or not. She was above average but not that good. She wasn’t a master. Perhaps someone could make it work but she was obviously not the one.

This left one thing that Amara could try and improve; the explosive properties. The female may be able to make the Dragon Fire Jutsu explode in a fireball of death; it was bound to be very hard though. This was, however, the only thing left for her to try and improve. Making it explode wasn’t the only way to improve the power of the jutsu; however, she could also make the fire itself more intense. However the exploding kind of fire dragon would be more desirable.

Amarantha was going to start by making the Jutsu more intense. She figured that after making the flames more intense she could focus on making it explode. She remembered before that by using a tiger favouring hand seal combination that it caused the jutsu to explode, however fear has it that it would blow up in her face. She was hopeful that she could have it explode later. To do this she was going to use what she didn’t use back when she was trying to make the jutsu faster.

She determined that she couldn’t make it faster but she did find out that she could make it explode. Now she has found that she cannot make it more agile either and this left one option to her for improving the Dragon Fire Techniques. The hand seal combination she held off on was a set that favoured the Dragon hand seal. Before Amara held off on using that particular combination as she found out that the tiger one blew up in her face, and that gave pause to her continuing in the case that the dragon one made it even more dangerous. She was going to have to try it now though.

She would gather her chakra and then formed the handseals that she didn’t use before. Once completed, she would then activate the jutsu in hopes that it would give her the desired results. The effect was actually quite promising, the fire dragon did not explode but it did travel outwards and was far more intense in heat and flames. In all aspects it was a slightly more devastating version of the jutsu. It was still slow traveling and was not useful for direct attacks unless the target was bound somehow, but now it would deal far more damage if it hit someone. She still wanted to increase the damage though and to this extend the female was going to aim for making the jutsu explode.

Fireworks was needed…

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Katon - Ryuuka no Jutsu (Dragon Fire Technique) [10]
Rank: "C" "B" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The user quickly performs a large creation of blinding fire into the form of a large Dragon form. The Dragon must be used in the same concept as the Goukakyuu no Jutsu in which must be thrown by placing a hand in a circle form over the mouth of the user.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: This type of technique is better used if the opponent is bonded down and unable to be moved.
Description: A Large creation is created as the user performs the necessary handseals for the technique. As the user does so they raise their hand up over their mouth. By taking in a deep, breathe the user fills their lungs with chakra to in, which ignites the moment they blow out air. As the user blows out the creation of fire is made taking the form of a giant dragon like creature. The Dragon is quickly hurled towards the opponent as the dragon swivels and swerves moving like that of a Chinese Dragon. When first learned the Dragon does not explode forth but the very flames oozes out spreading out in all directions that would wrap around the opponent in a blaze of glory. When the user learns the "B" Rank version the user is capable of pushing so much power into the technique to where when it touches the target it is needed it is ignited in a mass blaze of glory, creating a grand explosion.
Limit: Must have the Fire Release.

Oh thank God. Don't care if this makes me a freak but rules means a lot to me and I intend to follow them. Thanks Ryo. However don't you mean 20/40 not 10/40. Gohan did grade me lol. P.S. I am running out of ideas here. Its getting cruddy.

[Father 'Suke]

My fingers type too fast, no comprehend what the eyes see.

+8; 28|40

Sorry, though beautifully written there wasn't enough training to compensate full points.

[Celaena Kamyuja]

[/b][/font]ternal Chaos[/div]

[/b][/font]eadway: 028 out of 040
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Do not meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup.

Amarantha had made some good progress in improving the Dragon Fire Jutsu. She didn’t manage to make it exploded yet but she had a solution for that in mind. She just needed to put the whole thing into effect. The idea was that she could combine the two hand seal combinations into a slightly larger combination that would hopefully make it travel further and explode into a blast of destructive fire. After she managed this she would be satisfied that she had improved the jutsu. It wasn’t as good an improvement as she wanted but she would take it.

She was ready to get started too; she would gather a slightly larger amount of chakra then before and as she did that she would be forming the handseals required for the jutsu. She was also be careful, over use of chakra is wasteful and she hates it when things turn out bad from over use of chakra. But at least chakra can be controlled and modified, hand seal combination always remains the same. Once the seals were completed, she would unleash the fire jutsu with a sense of purpose, if it wasn’t for the fact that Amara had been practicing for so long she might not have had as good an attempt in bring her down. As it happened, she was actually very glad she had gone through all the trouble of trying all the other things, small maybe, but that was what trainings for.

The jutsu was harder to control then she expected but luckily she had some practice in controlling the jutsu when she was trying to improve the agility of the Dragon Fire Technique. It was also much stronger then she thought, however, with the practice she had with trying to make the technique faster. All this together paid off as she managed to make a giant fire dragon that created a gigantic explosion in the direction that Amarantha wanted. It didn’t hit the target she wanted but it was such a huge improvement that she knew all she needed to do was practice a bit with the new improved version. As practice makes perfect.

She would use it over and over again as she improved her proficiency with it. She was using a lot of chakra to do so and as such she had to take a break every now and again. She would continue to practice with the jutsu until she was confident that she could use it both in the heat of combat and also with precise precision. Amara was trying various way to make the jutsu and it was fairly inspiring how she could be at full sprint and send a flying dragon made of flame in the direction she desired, and even more satisfying to see it burst into a large explosion! Amarantha has been working on this jutsu for days now and she has finally got something to show for it.

It wasn’t traveling faster, and it wasn’t more agile, but it did leave a big bang. The explosion was far greater then she gathered and was sure this jutsu could be used in a lot of ways even if she wasn’t able to hit a mobile target, she was able to use this jutsu in other ways that would be useful. Happy for now with her progress she would pack up her stuff in the area she was training in and she would head back home for some well-deserved rest. She might Practice a bit more with the jutsu in the morning but at the moment she was quite exhausted, and somewhat spent.

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Katon - Ryuuka no Jutsu (Dragon Fire Technique) [10]
Rank: "C" "B" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The user quickly performs a large creation of blinding fire into the form of a large Dragon form. The Dragon must be used in the same concept as the Goukakyuu no Jutsu in which must be thrown by placing a hand in a circle form over the mouth of the user.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: This type of technique is better used if the opponent is bonded down and unable to be moved.
Description: A Large creation is created as the user performs the necessary handseals for the technique. As the user does so they raise their hand up over their mouth. By taking in a deep, breathe the user fills their lungs with chakra to in, which ignites the moment they blow out air. As the user blows out the creation of fire is made taking the form of a giant dragon like creature. The Dragon is quickly hurled towards the opponent as the dragon swivels and swerves moving like that of a Chinese Dragon. When first learned the Dragon does not explode forth but the very flames oozes out spreading out in all directions that would wrap around the opponent in a blaze of glory. When the user learns the "B" Rank version the user is capable of pushing so much power into the technique to where when it touches the target it is needed it is ignited in a mass blaze of glory, creating a grand explosion.
Limit: Must have the Fire Release.

*cries*
I gathered as much... Being sick makes things a lot harder but oh well. Thankies...

[Celaena Kamyuja]

[/b][/font]ternal Chaos[/div]

[/b][/font]eadway: out of 040
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Dragon, Dragon, DRAGON! Are you satisfied yet?!

A new day, a new test. And while she continually rolled through the required hand seals for the jutsu which creates a fire dragon, chakra was not yet summoned until she felt it was ready. The hand movements were superb, but that was expected after all the training of the technique. Now she just had to master it. Forming the hand seals, her chakra awoken by the call of training. She felt off, but hopefully that wouldn’t affect her training.

She felt the fire chakra blossom deep within her, and as she allowed that to boil, she coated her throat with chakra as well as her right index and thumb skin so that she would not damage herself from the flames. Next she brought said hand up to her mouth and formed an O hand seal so that her lips rested in the center of said shape. Her body leaned back by the sudden force of chakra from deep within her suddenly rising up her insides before imagining the dragon to complete this jutsu.

There he lay, deep within her mind, a vast red-golden dragon, fast forming; with thrumming vibrating from his jaws and nostrils, and wisps of smoke. Beneath him, under all his limbs and his huge coiled tail, and about him on all sides stretching away across the unseen realm of her imagination, shimmered countless flame waves and breath created sparks. And when his eyes opened up, he was summoned up to task once again.

Amara opened her mouth and allowed the flames, and smoke exit her mouth. The head shortly after formed in solid detail yet in all his flamed glory. The speed she was never good with and could not quicken, but the size as all of the dragon exited her lips in a fiery song was impressive. The mass of dragon flames disturbed the target before her before exploding in grand fireworks of oranges and reds with a bit of yellow. The oxygen spent up the area and before long, the object that once lay in the path of her technique was nothing but a pile of blacken ash. She cancelled the technique and squealed delightedly. Was this good enough?

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Katon - Ryuuka no Jutsu (Dragon Fire Technique) [10]
Rank: "C" "B" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The user quickly performs a large creation of blinding fire into the form of a large Dragon form. The Dragon must be used in the same concept as the Goukakyuu no Jutsu in which must be thrown by placing a hand in a circle form over the mouth of the user.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: This type of technique is better used if the opponent is bonded down and unable to be moved.
Description: A Large creation is created as the user performs the necessary handseals for the technique. As the user does so they raise their hand up over their mouth. By taking in a deep, breathe the user fills their lungs with chakra to in, which ignites the moment they blow out air. As the user blows out the creation of fire is made taking the form of a giant dragon like creature. The Dragon is quickly hurled towards the opponent as the dragon swivels and swerves moving like that of a Chinese Dragon. When first learned the Dragon does not explode forth but the very flames oozes out spreading out in all directions that would wrap around the opponent in a blaze of glory. When the user learns the "B" Rank version the user is capable of pushing so much power into the technique to where when it touches the target it is needed it is ignited in a mass blaze of glory, creating a grand explosion.
Limit: Must have the Fire Release.

Not bad for one who is sick with the flu. I may have just written this out of my … HEY NO BAD LANGUAGE HERE! <---

 

[Gohan]

Learned.

Not sure what you wanted as far as seeing if it was different.

It was certainly well written and had training in every paragraph!