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Figment Perception Rank: "C" Skill: GenJutsu Effect: Jutsu allows the user to perform Figment Perceptions. Special: --- Drawback: --- Description: Figments cannot produce real effects, nor can they change things that already exist. If you want to create the illusion of a soft breeze, birdcalls, the aroma of a fresh-baked pie, or the sight of a loved one, you probably want a Figment. Remember that everyone within range perceives the same thing. Everyone smells the same type of fresh-baked pie, for instance, and reacts appropriately for them; a fresh-baked meat pie attracts carnivores and repels herbivores. Limit: ---
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Keeping A Distance Rank: "C" Skill: GenJutsu Effect: The affected person's vision is obscured to where they see everything at x2 closer than normal. Special: "Handseals" Drawback: --- Description: A Mind-Affecting Technique. Affects 1 creature. The user is able to perform this technique at a distance of 7 meters plus 6 meters per class level. The duration of this technique lasts for 5 rounds per class level. This technique may be negated. Jutsu that distorts the opponent's vision. The user distorts the opponent's vision making them see everything x2 closer than normal. When the affected target sees something at 10 meters away it is really 20 meters away. When the affected target sees something that is 1 meter away it is really 2 meters away. When the affected target sees something arm's length away it is really 2 arms length away. Limit: Must know Figment Perception.
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Last Edit: Jul 5, 2014 8:50:03 GMT -7 by Captain M
Chuunin
Head of Research Institute of Yukigakure no Sato.
A-Rank: 4950/5500
Dual Brains Rank: "A" Type: Augmentation Effect: User has 2 brains. Special: To perform: 3 hour; Duration: Permanent Drawback: --- Description: Takes up 5 Augmentation Points. User has 2 brains, 1 in their head and 1 located in another location. Whenever the user makes a Will Save, the user rolls twice and takes the higher roll. Limit: Must be a Ritualist for Augmentation Rituals. Cost: Market Price: 35,000 Ryo Performing Price: 26,000 Ryo
Last Edit: Sept 27, 2014 17:50:53 GMT -7 by Captain M
Chuunin
Head of Research Institute of Yukigakure no Sato.
A-Rank: 4950/5500
Iron Will Rank: "C" Always 20 Training Points Skill: Supplementary Effect: User is more resistant to mental effects. Special: --- Drawback: --- Description: User gets a +2 bonus on all Will Saves. Limit: Must learn from Universal Miscellaneous.
Last Edit: Aug 5, 2014 8:19:53 GMT -7 by Captain M
Chuunin
Head of Research Institute of Yukigakure no Sato.
A-Rank: 4950/5500
I know profiles, and especially revamps are annoying and a lot of work, so thank you to whoever decides to do this, I thank you and wish you good luck.
And yes I have tried to cover all my bases with this revamp, but there will probably be some errors, I will correct them as swiftly as I can.
Thank you.
M
Chuunin
Head of Research Institute of Yukigakure no Sato.
A-Rank: 4950/5500
Not moving to subs because I've got a big load of work for you: All your medical techs are outdated. You will need to replace those. Luckily due to the revamp you'll get the medical skills for free, so that's basically extra TP. ^^ For the new medical techs, look in the professions index, and for the skills you get for free look for more info here: Link
“By God, sir, I’ve lost my leg.”, “By God, sir, so you have.” ~The Earl of Uxbridge, noticing he lost something, to the Duke of Wellington at the battle of Waterloo.
There is no more herbalism or animalist. Here are what you can go into for medic spec: (Medical, Alchemy, Dian Xue Shu, Sensory, Soulcaster, Ritualist: Augmentation, Ritualist: Restoration)
This is a minor point though so change at your leisure since you had no herbalism or animalist techniques.
Your chart adds up but your S rank count in your A class section is incorrect. Because your Healing Hands, Mass(critical) would make your last S rank totals add up to 900 not 890.
110*7+130=900
Anyway it should be a quick fix to remove a 20tp tech from somewhere to account for this.
mmm welp you need to update your skills. They have been recently changed. For example:
First Aid: Cauterize Wound Rank: "E" (10 Training Points at all Times)
That part of that skill should now read as a D rank technique. Thus your tech count will be off once you fix this small issue. Example:
First Aid: Cauterize Wound Rank: "D"
Finally this part of your B class chart "3 D & C-Rank Techniques : 30 TP"
Can you separate it into D and C ranks rather than combining the count
Final note: These changes would streamline the grading process a bit so graders can simply count how many total techs you have via ranks, and count them in your bio.
There is no more herbalism or animalist. Here are what you can go into for medic spec: (Medical, Alchemy, Dian Xue Shu, Sensory, Soulcaster, Ritualist: Augmentation, Ritualist: Restoration)
This is a minor point though so change at your leisure since you had no herbalism or animalist techniques.
Your chart adds up but your S rank count in your A class section is incorrect. Because your Healing Hands, Mass(critical) would make your last S rank totals add up to 900 not 890.
110*7+130=900
Anyway it should be a quick fix to remove a 20tp tech from somewhere to account for this.
mmm welp you need to update your skills. They have been recently changed. For example:
First Aid: Cauterize Wound Rank: "E" (10 Training Points at all Times)
That part of that skill should now read as a D rank technique. Thus your tech count will be off once you fix this small issue. Example:
First Aid: Cauterize Wound Rank: "D"
Finally this part of your B class chart "3 D & C-Rank Techniques : 30 TP"
Can you separate it into D and C ranks rather than combining the count
Final note: These changes would streamline the grading process a bit so graders can simply count how many total techs you have via ranks, and count them in your bio.
I believe I have edited everything that you stated, thank you very much Draven.
I shall correct any other mistake found during the course of the reviewing.
Chuunin
Head of Research Institute of Yukigakure no Sato.
A-Rank: 4950/5500
Also I would like to mention to whoever gives this the final okay, that all my Ryo have vanished. Considering I only made two IC posts, none of them of purchasing nature, I suggest putting in the starting Ryo for a Chuunin, thank you very much!
Chuunin
Head of Research Institute of Yukigakure no Sato.
A-Rank: 4950/5500