The Protector in the Dark! [Revamp]

[Mirage]

Reserved for more crime fighting skills!

[Mirage]

Bio Link
Death Thread Link
Total Training Points:

500 Training Points
E -2
D -11
C -5
B -3
A -
S -

1500 Training Points
E -
D -5
C -9
B -1
A -2
S -

Revamping my guy with the 2 TP giveaways that occured after I stopped RP'ing with him. Also, using the site update scrap for this.

[Christoff]

Not staff but I thought I would offer what help I can.

I count 15 total D ranks in your bio when you have listed 16 in your TP Chart. I also count 13 C Rank techniques when you have listed 14. Also if you total the techniques in the 500 Training Point section of your chart it comes out to 510 TP. Fix that and you'll be well on your way.

[Mirage]

Oh yah, good catch, I added a C and D rank to get it up to snuff again. What you count is correct, just remember that as the last tech goes over the limit it goes down in TP required to learn (That 10 TP to be precise)so that's fine.

[Christoff]

In your first post you have a section that says TP Counter: [0/500] Not sure what your intent with that part of the format was, but I thought I'd bring it to your attention. I don't think that is something you necessarily have to change since it's part of your own template so...

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[Dr. Neuro, RN]

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