Master Chiyo I found you! (T)

[Nekomata Minh]

There isn't enough description as to how she is training this for me. I know this is a simple D Rank. Yet even talented people could mess up smashing something with a pole. Not that you character might do that. But I mean simply stating she practiced it over and over isn't really working.

At least in my opinion. In general I feel in order for me to give a full grade I'd like for you to try explaining the actions she performed TO practice it. Instead of stating she practiced it.

I'm sorry if this seems harsh, but I'll have to grade this as a +4
You have 6 more points to gain if you want to use this technique.

[Kan Kan]

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Foot Smash [4/10 TP]
Rank: D
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: The user smashes the opponent foot quickly with the bottom end of their staff.
Special: None
Drawback: None
Description: The user brings their staff down swiftly and smashes an opponent’s foot with their staff. The foot is then pinned to the ground and leaves the opponent unable to move away if this hits.
Limit: Must have a Bôjutsu Training Scroll or Bôjutsu master.

"This so hard!" Kan Kan exclaims. For the first time in her training she complained. Master Chiyo came up to Kan and empowered her. "You see Kan you shouldn't rush everything you do. It takes patience for a person to finish his or her tasks." Kan sat on the floor, dissapointed of wha she have done.

"Maybe we should go back to basics, Kan you forgot your warm-up." Kan's eye suddenly widens. "Oh..." She exclaims. She summoned a staff from her scroll and begun warming up. First up her head, rotates it one way, then the other way, nods it up and down, and lastly she shake it side to side. Next was her the shoulders, she moved them around in a circle, then the other way, back and forth, and side to side.
Then she stretched her whole arm, flex out your finger tips as she stretches out her whole arm, then she curled her fingertips and also curled her whole arm. After that she worked her hips around, she moved circular around one way, then around the other way, and then side to side, and lastly back and forth. Next was the knee stretches, she bent her knee back, and then extend it out in front of her, when she reach forward or back all of the way she hold it there for a few seconds, enough to stretch it but not enough to injure it.
And last was her feet and toes, she moved her feet side to side while lifting her toes upwards, then she moved her feet up and down while pointing her toe downward.


After she finished warming up, she holds her staff lightly. With a deep breath she exhales. "For the honor of my family and kusagakure!" She yelled. Flawlessly, Kan strike the ground and ends that by pinning it with a high amount of power. "Finally!" She exclaims.

[The Bearer of Bad News]

most of that had very little to do with the technique in question. :/

+2 for the training.

what's your current tp? you get either a +1 or +2 bonus depending on class level (+2 for 100-1495 tp (D and C classes), +1 for 1500-5495 tp (B and A classes))

[Kan Kan]

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Foot Smash [6/10 TP] +2 for being a D Class
Rank: D
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: The user smashes the opponent foot quickly with the bottom end of their staff.
Special: None
Drawback: None
Description: The user brings their staff down swiftly and smashes an opponent’s foot with their staff. The foot is then pinned to the ground and leaves the opponent unable to move away if this hits.
Limit: Must have a Bôjutsu Training Scroll or Bôjutsu master.

Kan looked really happy with her accomplishment but Master Chiyo looked at her with no emotions at all. "Kan you haven't done it yet!" Kan frowned upon seating on the ground, seemingly so upset about what happened. "You need focus Kan." Master Chiyo tried to enlighten Kan but it didn't work. "Let me make it easier for you." Master Chiyo grabbed a large piece of leaf from a tree. "This will make it easier for you to pin the ground." After demonstrating what to do. Kan begins to do the technique again with lighter mood.

"I can do this." Kan breathed deeply. She focused herself entirely on the leaf. With a sudden jump, she threw her staff. "ninja art: bo staff style!" She summons a staff upon her landing. She smirks, she hold her staff and swirled it around like a ferris wheel. "Prepare for this!" She swings her staff swiftly. After swinging the staff, she jumps and tumbled around flawlessly until she gets closer to the leaf. "Take this!" With precise aim she strikes the leaf, pinning it to the ground. "Yes! I finally did it!"

[The Bearer of Bad News]

Learned

[Kan Kan]

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Epic Rapid Throw (0/80) +2 tp for D class
Rank: "B"
Skill: TaiJutsu/Supplementary
Effect: User is able to throw a ranged weapon once more within a movement for only 4 movements.
Special: ---
Drawback: Only works within 1st Range Increment.
Description: With the Improved Rapid Throw technique the user may throw 1 ranged weapon for 4 of their movements per round. This allows the user to throw 2 ranged weapons within 4 of their movements. If user has Quick Aim this technique works with Far Shot.
Limit: Must be a Throwing Specialist. Must know Greater Rapid Throw.

After practicing bo staff techniques under the guidance of Master Chiyo, Kan went to an empty field to improve her twin rising dragon scroll attack. She sat on the ground, thinking everything that happened for the past weeks. "I've been training non-stop, though I need to continue my training to be a strong kunoichi. Stronger than anyone in kusagakure!" Before she starts, Kan grabbed one of her scrolls that contains a sandwich, a sandwich that seems to be important to her. 

After she finished eating the sandwich, she rested under the shades of the trees. Thinking about everything she have done that angered Vlad, Kan stood up in a grumpy structure. "He deserves it! Six months? After the six months deadline that he gave to me, I'll show him!" She breathed heavily. After getting angered she got pumped up. "I'll show that bug whose he's messing with!" Grabbing two scrolls from her bag, she begun placing them around her.

By using the ram hand seal, the scrolls around Kan started to swirl around her like a dragon. She jumped in the middle, seemingly it looked like Kan is spinning like crazy but it's only due to her quick summoning style. Her hands touched the seal symbols one by one until she have enough weapons to throw at her target. "Get ready!"

[Kan Kan]

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Epic Rapid Throw (0/80) + 2 TP from being a D Class
Rank: "B"
Skill: TaiJutsu/Supplementary
Effect: User is able to throw a ranged weapon once more within a movement for only 4 movements.
Special: ---
Drawback: Only works within 1st Range Increment.
Description: With the Improved Rapid Throw technique the user may throw 1 ranged weapon for 4 of their movements per round. This allows the user to throw 2 ranged weapons within 4 of their movements. If user has Quick Aim this technique works with Far Shot.
Limit: Must be a Throwing Specialist. Must know Greater Rapid Throw.

'Swoop!' with a sound of sudden strike, the tree was fatally hurt. This time she didn't hurl two weapons but a single one in a huge amount of force. The dance of the scrolls has ended. Kan landed the ground, seemingly looking upset about what she did. "I can't do this I need to stay calm. Focus Kan focus." She sat on the ground breathing heavily. "I didn't intend to hurt the tree that much..." She then stood up from her pace and suddenly she became empowered. 

"I'll give this another try." Kan grabbed her scrolls again and begins to perform her attack. "Alright! ninja art: twin rising dragon!" The two scrolls begun to swirl around her unlike from before it's swirling really really fast. Kan's eyes suddenly turned fierce, she didn't recognize a single thing as she looked to her surroundings. She even yelled for an unknown reason.

As she touch the symbols, one of the scroll was thrown forward. As the scrolls returned to their normal state, Kan landed vertically which hurts her upon her landing. Upon gaining consciousness she asked herself, "What just happened?" She even vaguely remembers a thing. 

[Kan Kan]

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Epic Rapid Throw (0/80) +2TP from being a D class
Rank: "B"
Skill: TaiJutsu/Supplementary
Effect: User is able to throw a ranged weapon once more within a movement for only 4 movements.
Special: ---
Drawback: Only works within 1st Range Increment.
Description: With the Improved Rapid Throw technique the user may throw 1 ranged weapon for 4 of their movements per round. This allows the user to throw 2 ranged weapons within 4 of their movements. If user has Quick Aim this technique works with Far Shot.
Limit: Must be a Throwing Specialist. Must know Greater Rapid Throw.

One thing is for sure though, Kan was possessed by something which could be her emotions or something far worse. She tried to stand up but she failed. Her back is hurt but not to the point where she can't move anymore. She tried again, for this time at least she'd succeeded. "Why did it happen?" Alas she remembered something. Though the only thing that she'd remembered was the time that she was mad at someone. That someone is Vlad for sure.

"Ok Kan focus yourself!" Kan tried to redo everything she did. For a couple of times she failed. As she looked at her surroundings, trees are collapsed, ground is filled with kunai marks and everything. "I messed up real bad." She then started to seal the kunais back to her scrolls. "Why does thing thing takes too long to master! There's only one thing to do in this training and I sucked up real bad!" She frowned, not knowing what to do she sat on the ground thinking nothing but her failures. 

"How did I managed to increased my speed the last time I trained with my dragon scrolls? Oh by being focused and calm though maybe it's just because of my physical strength." Kan started to do a couple of push ups and some curls ups to develop power and flexibility. She also begun holding a kunai, swinging it back and forth, up and down, and side ways with increasing speed, time after time.

[Kan Kan]

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Epic Rapid Throw (0/80) +2TP for being a D class
Rank: "B"
Skill: TaiJutsu/Supplementary
Effect: User is able to throw a ranged weapon once more within a movement for only 4 movements.
Special: ---
Drawback: Only works within 1st Range Increment.
Description: With the Improved Rapid Throw technique the user may throw 1 ranged weapon for 4 of their movements per round. This allows the user to throw 2 ranged weapons within 4 of their movements. If user has Quick Aim this technique works with Far Shot.
Limit: Must be a Throwing Specialist. Must know Greater Rapid Throw.

The surroundings are pretty dull, little to no light source can be seen aside from the bright lit moon. Stars are sparkling, the wolves are howling, and the trees are dancing under the full moon, yet still a person a female rather can be seen training endlessly as soon as another person arrived.

The man is either tall nor fair, as he walks to the her in a distance. Nothing can be seen on the aside from his shadowy figure that stood up straight upon stopping right in front of Kan. She stopped, seeing that there's a person who kinda needed help in which she can't ignore. "Hello sir, are you lost?" She asked. "Certainly not but maybe your the one who needed a hand." With a deep thought, the voices' familiarity strikes Kan which made her stood in shock.

Her body became cold, and her teeth begans to chatter. "Sir are you-" She didn't even get the chance to finish up her words when the clouds covering the are suddenly went pass by, that's when she saw  his face. 

[Kan Kan]

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Epic Rapid Throw (0/80) +2 for being a D class
Rank: "B"
Skill: TaiJutsu/Supplementary
Effect: User is able to throw a ranged weapon once more within a movement for only 4 movements.
Special: ---
Drawback: Only works within 1st Range Increment.
Description: With the Improved Rapid Throw technique the user may throw 1 ranged weapon for 4 of their movements per round. This allows the user to throw 2 ranged weapons within 4 of their movements. If user has Quick Aim this technique works with Far Shot.
Limit: Must be a Throwing Specialist. Must know Greater Rapid Throw.

The ground stood still, the breeze became cold, and no other sound can be heard aside from the creepy sound of whistling that's created by the wind that went pass by the forest the trembled every piece of Kan's body. Her gazed can't be moved. Exagerrately, her mouth and eyes are wide open. She even tried to speak but it only ended up in gibberish.

When the scene cooled down, that's the only time she managed to speak up for herself. "Master Chiyo! What are you doing here?" She frightenly asked. "So this is what you meant when you said that you wanted to make your own style..." Kan protests that she did it due to her love for weapons and scrolls were the easiest way for her to show her that kind of love. "No no no Kan, I'm not trying to argue with or anything but it seems like your having a hard time mastering your twin rising dragon scroll technique." In her disappointment, her head bowed with her arms are down below her, "So you've been watching me..."

With a short sigh. Kan continued on swinging her kunai back and forth in which she's  been practicing all day long. "You see Kan, you won't be able to finish up anything if you'll just do that all day long." Kan stopped silently as she dropped her kunai into the ground. "Then what should I do... I can't even focused myself intirely on this thing..." Master Chiyo picks up his stick and horizontally he place it on the ground. As he jump, he sat on his stick and begins on meditating. "Huh?" Kan silently copied what Master Chiyo as she also begins to meditate calmly.

[Kan Kan]

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Epic Rapid Throw (0/80) +2 TP for being a D Class
Rank: "B"
Skill: TaiJutsu/Supplementary
Effect: User is able to throw a ranged weapon once more within a movement for only 4 movements.
Special: ---
Drawback: Only works within 1st Range Increment.
Description: With the Improved Rapid Throw technique the user may throw 1 ranged weapon for 4 of their movements per round. This allows the user to throw 2 ranged weapons within 4 of their movements. If user has Quick Aim this technique works with Far Shot.
Limit: Must be a Throwing Specialist. Must know Greater Rapid Throw.

"Oh the wind..." The calm breeze suddenly slapped her face. "Where am I?" She surveys her surroundings looking for somebody in this lucid flight. "This is the astral world, this  is the place where we connects our minds and souls to one's inner self..." Kan desperately lurched around to find the mysterious voice. "Who are you? Where's this place? Please answer me!" A beam of light suddenly appears. "I'm your inner mind." Kan questioned herself on why she's in an astral world. "Perhaps you're here because of meditation" Kan got surprised seeing that the thing can read her mind. "I'm your thoughts after all, it's no surprise that I can do that." Kan was mesmerized by the event.

"So why am I here?" The light burst out of laughter as it circles around her. "Why don't you ask yourself? In fact you're the one who came here in the first place." For a moment she stood in silence as she tries to remember why she's there. "Oh I remember now, Master Chiyo made me come here to umm.... I don't really know." The light continued to laugh at Kan's foolishness as it dance around the dreamy orange background.

"Still clueless aren't you? At least try a little more of digging into your mind." Kan still can't quite understand the thing that the light asks her to do. "Deeper? I don't even know how deep I'm in right now... It's really hard you know." The light continued to intimidate and annoy her until she actually had enough which forced her out of the astral world.

[Kan Kan]

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Epic Rapid Throw (0/80) +2 for being a D class
Rank: "B"
Skill: TaiJutsu/Supplementary
Effect: User is able to throw a ranged weapon once more within a movement for only 4 movements.
Special: ---
Drawback: Only works within 1st Range Increment.
Description: With the Improved Rapid Throw technique the user may throw 1 ranged weapon for 4 of their movements per round. This allows the user to throw 2 ranged weapons within 4 of their movements. If user has Quick Aim this technique works with Far Shot.
Limit: Must be a Throwing Specialist. Must know Greater Rapid Throw.

The darkness lays around the gloomy skies. She searched for reason as the forest whispers behind her ears. The one question is why. She had looked around to find the answer, but the truth is, the answer is already in front of her. Continuous endeavor bears inside her mind. She can't even bother her master that's still meditating during this fine hour. The answer is her key, though it lead her clueless in her current situation. At last she stopped on her tracks to finish off what she had started.

With no clues to clear her thoughts, she sat down on a stamp to think of a further solution to her problem. "Why?" She questioned herself repeatedly until she ran out of breathe to catch on. She thought that it could be connected to her inner peace, so she breathed deeply and exhaled it slowly as she figured out to herself how to relax. "I see, you're here again." Kan calmly approached the light and asks it what to do. "Hmm... Let's make this easier, think of things that angers you." Kan undoubtedly think of Vlad. "Well you should at least forget about it, just think of nothing OK?" Kan was about to speak when the light suddenly forced her out of the realm.

She opened her eyes and saw the morning glory shines upon her face. It's already morning. Kan raised her arms, stretching them to their full extent. Master Chiyo looked at Kan, smiling as he knew that this time his student finally found peace in her heart. Though he could be wrong. Kan continued with her endeavor but for sure, she made some progress. Kan jumped into the air, sweeping her arm around as quickly as she can to grab her scrolls. Her thought suddenly sink in. "For those persons who discriminated me and humiliated me, I won't let your actions turn me to into a loser, I'll rise with victory on my hands, peacefully..." Master Chiyo looked at her with amazement as if you look from a distance its like a tornado swirling around like a maniac. She'd let out a battle cry that initially brought tears to her eyes. "For justice! Twin rising dragon scroll!" The scrolls danced around her. While on a move she quickly unsealed the weapons and threw them forward. Unlike her previous attempts, she actually hit the trees one by one with fast and powerful force. As the scene settled down, she fell unto the ground landing while spitting out some blood. "I maybe overdone it..." Her body felt weak. With Master Chiyo behind her, they went to the nearest hospital to give her medical attention.

[Kan Kan]

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Epic Rapid Throw (0/80) +2 for being a D class
Rank: "B"
Skill: TaiJutsu/Supplementary
Effect: User is able to throw a ranged weapon once more within a movement for only 4 movements.
Special: ---
Drawback: Only works within 1st Range Increment.
Description: With the Improved Rapid Throw technique the user may throw 1 ranged weapon for 4 of their movements per round. This allows the user to throw 2 ranged weapons within 4 of their movements. If user has Quick Aim this technique works with Far Shot.
Limit: Must be a Throwing Specialist. Must know Greater Rapid Throw.

"Kan kan!" The only word that covered the hallway, the sound of wheels continously moved upon as they enter a room. 'Beep beep beep' it sounded like an alarm clock. On her side there's master Chiyo alongside Kan kan's parents. They stood their and waited for signs. 

"Kan kan what did you do?" Her mother cried as she  enters the room. "Mom I'm ok now, don't worry about me." Kan kan's father moved closer to Kan kan and whispered something that made her shocked in fear. It was this moment that she knew that her dad won't be pleased by the scene she'd created.

She stayed in the hospital for a while, thinking of what her father said to her. Alas the reports came up. It seems that it wasn't critical that it's ok for to be discharge today. 

I opened my eyes and get out of my bed. I sat behind the window, seeing a lot of people minding their own busines. And outside I heard, it was master Chiyo's voice. I'm glad that he cared about me like a father would do. As soon as he leaves, I immediately gathered my stuff and quickly followed him downstairs.

The two exited the hospital and that's when an argument arose. "Kan you stay there and rest, you shouldn't force yourself to train. With your condition, it'll be hard for you to sustain your trainings." Kan insists. "I'm already ok master, just please let me train again. Here." She hands out the papers to master Chiyo to prove that she's on a good condition to continue her training.

"Ok fine, just take it easy." Kan nods. "I will and for this time, you'll be my opponent." Master Chiyo laughed. "Well suit yourself."

The two entered an empty field, and begun to looked serious.

"Ready old man?"

"Ready as you are."

Master Chiyo quickly summoned his staff in front of him and begun swirling it around like an expert staff user.

Kan grabbed two of her scrolls and begun using a handseal to summon her staff. She grabbed it and charged towards Master Chiyo.

"Haaaa!" Kan begun striking him with full force. Though he just evaded everything and begun twisting his staff to Kan's, flipping it out of her hand which rendered her weaponless. 

"I'm not done yet!"

Kan quickly jumped and summons three kunai that went straight to Master Chiyo. 

Master Chiyo quickly dashed sidewards and smashed his staff to the ground to gain momentum that enabled him to flip backwards. Though he soon noticed that Kan was gonna trike him from behind with her staff on which he quickly blocked, kicking Kan away from her weapon. 

"Ugh, I'm now gonna use my trumph card!"

Master Chiyo quickly initiates his defensive stance to blocked the incoming weapons.

"Bring it on."

Kan placed two of her scrolls on her side and begun activating them with her handseal. 

"Twin dragon scrolls!" 

The two scrolls begun swirling around her. She initially jumps in the middle to summon every kunai to throw it to master Chiyo.

Chiyo know this technique so he continously dashed sidewards to dodge the attacks. He soon realized that the kunais' speed became quicker, unlike from the last time time he trained Kan Kan to execute the technique. Upon noticing, he changed his direction, flips backwards and begun swirling his staff to the point that it blocks everyone one them until he noticed that one of them has a bomb tag attached to it. He quickly deflected it aa it exploded mid air. 

"Not yet!"

Chiyo then noticed that some of them have strings connected to Kan.

"Now!"

The kunais quickly followed Chiyo's direction but then he found a kunai on the ground on which he pounded and deflected to hit the strings which cut them. He later got closer to Kan and pointed his staff to her face.

"Master Chiyo..."

"Relax Kan, I just noticed that your throwing skills became faster than the last night we've trained. Just continue what you're doing then you'll become a force to be reckon with."

Kan smiled and waved goodbye as they depart the place and went to their own path

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learned

[Kan Kan]

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Staff Knowledge (D rank version)  (0/10) +2 TP for being a D rank 
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: The user trains to become better at using staff weapons to attack and defend.
Special: None
Drawback: None
Description: The user trains to become better at using staff weapons to attack and defend. Practicing with your staff can include random trining exercises using your staff, block and strike training with your staff, and sparring, without the use of specific techniques with your staff.
Limit: You must have a Bôjutsu Training Scroll or Bôjutsu master to learn any rank. Must know Basic Stance. You must know 100 TP in Bôjutsu to learn B rank. You must be a Taijutsu specialist or master and know 200 TP in Bôjutsu to learn A rank. And you must be a Taijutsu specialist or master and know 400 TP in Bôjutsu to learn S rank and this must be taught by a staff master. 

"Ok Kan go! We're gonna be practicing how to do the basics of the bo staff." Chiyo demonstrated the attacks and Kan followed. She swiped her staff to the left and after that to the right. Left, right, left, and right. She continued on doing this until she got used to it. She then started to exert more force to provide extra speed that helped her master the swipe attack.

"Now for defending." Chiyo swipe his weapon up and down, left and right. Kan Kan held her staff on both ends and started blocking the attacks. Left strike, down strike, right strike, up strike. They started slow and as soon as the time goes, Chiyo started to go faster that Kan fiercely tried to keep up with his speed on which she surprisingly managed to do so. She started to get used to it that she'd begin blocking his attacks fluently.

"Time for sparring." They held their staff on both ends on which they started to get into an offensive stance. Up strike down strike. Their staff taps each other until Chiyo decided to speed up everything. He started to quickly pound Kan's staff, though Kan didn't let her guard down as she also increased her speed. Chiyo also increased the force that he is exerting on which Kan noticed and begun giving her all of her strengths to block off Chiyo's attack.

The sparring ended with a blast. "You've done well student, let's meet again on your next training." Kan is delightful of what she'd accomplished this day, she joyfully went home to greet her parents.

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learned

[Kan Kan]

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Double Toss (0/30 TP)
Rank: "C"
Skill: TaiJutsu/Supplementary
Effect: User has practiced tossing 2 ranged items at once without them flying wild with each throw.
Special: ---
Drawback: Only works within 1/2 of 1st Range Increment.
Description: Taking up a movement, the user can throw 2 ranged weapons with 1 hand instead of 1. In this way, the user's attack will consist of 2 ranged weapons at a target. If user has Quick Aim this technique works with Far Shot increasing the range to a full 1st Range Increment.
Limit: Must be a Throwing Specialist. Must know Rapid Throw.

It's a beautiful day for Kan. A day for her to practice her techniques. She grabbed one of her scroll and placed it on the ground. She unfolded it and a lot of written symbols showed up. "Time for learning something new."  She placed her hand on one of the symbols and begun summoning a kunai and after that, another one was summoned. She threw the two but it landed on different directions.

Kan knew that this would be difficult for her. She tried throwing it faster on which she thought would help it land on same direction which gladly helped but the disposition between the two is still great. Kan now knew that it was the speed that she's lacking at. She grabbed another set of kunai and begun striking back and forth.

She started slow. As the time goes she made it faster. Repeating it again and again until she get her desired speed. She even did it to a tree which left some marks and scratches to it. "I won't let Vlad pick on me again! I'll beat him someday!" Her perseverance made her go quicker in which she noticed right away. She's glad that she actually made some progress.