Hayasa's Training (Invite Only)

[Falorein]

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Magen: Jinteki Harinezumi no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Human Porcupine Technique)
Rank: “B” Rank
Skill: Genjutsu
Effect: Rapidly pierces the opponent with illusionary weapons that come from nowhere, causing extreme amounts of pain and the loss of concentration.
Special: “Hand Signs”- Ox, Snake, Dragon, Rat, Monkey, Dog, Rabbit
Drawback: Can be broken with Kai.
Description: The user performs the handseals, creating the optical illusion of several hundred projectiles flying from every direction. These projectiles pierce the opponent in different places, causing an extreme amount of pain and fear. This ability can be broken with Kai, but the pain of the jutsu will linger for three turns.
Limit: Must know Figment Perception




Hayasa woke, the sun shining blinding him as he sloly opened his eyes, after a moment he rolled over and got up to get somthing to eat.He walked over to the pantry where he grabbed an apple, and got changed into his normal clothing.Hayasa stared at his reflection in the mirror, he was ready to train except one thing, his sapphire cloak.He rummaged through his chest and pullled out his sapphire cloak,and slowly put the cloak over him and tied it up.He headed towards the door,thrust it open and then walked out the door and the suns strong light covered his presence from the door way.
*
After an hour of walking Hayasa had reached his training spot he knew what had to be done, he needed to strengthen his mind to be able to control this gen jutsu.He walked around the clearing and tryed to find a place to train his mind he walked for a small while, he found a small stream , perfect he thought to himself.
He got postioned right near the stream and closed his eyes , he tried to center himself , he closed his mind and got rid of any thoughts .Hayasa felt a sensation run through his body he listened to everything around him , he heard a rabbit near by and tried to postion it .Hayasa listened more intently now he heard a small thud and another and again, he tried to work out what it was.After a minute he realised it was the rabbits heart he was slightly shocked yet deep down he knew straight away.

After a while of listening Hayasa decided it was not enough he needed to be aware of everything at once, he tried to broaden his mind he focused again.But this time it was diffirent he could feel all around him, small and big he listened intently trying to pinpoint everything.He did so with little success he tried yet again and still only could hear one or two things at a time, he continued.
*

After 3 hours of meditation he gave up,and decided he would have to practice at least an hour aday to fully master this gen jutsu. He got up and knew that the next thing to do for today would be chakra control, but how he thought to himself how would he train his control.After a few minutes he finally realised how.but he needed to prepare so he would have to stop for the day and head home and prepare for the next day where he would meditate then begin the real training.

[Falorein]

The next day Hayasa awoke, he grabbed his cloak and his prepared a pack of food for the day and headed out the door.Hayasa reached his training ground it was the same as he had left it, nothing had moved since the previous day. He looked at the stream that’s where he would begin, with an hour of meditation; He sat back in his previous position from the day before. Hayasa closed his eyes and listened, to everything trying to hear every subtle sound and hear every normal sound of the environment, after what seemed like and hour he grabbed an apple and ate it quickly and then got ready to begin what he had in mind.

Hayasa Headed towards the stream, he had just meditated on, Hayasa glanced at the stream, and he had decided to do one of the basic chakra control techniques. Walking on water, he knew to be able to do this, he had to maintain a perfect flow of chakra to his feet and it could not be too little or too much or it would not succeed.
Hayasa removed his cloak and his top bearing his muscular frame, and then he began to gather his chakra.Hayasa reached inside himself and guided the flowing chakra to his points in his feet, once he felt sure it was balanced enough, He walked on to the water as he took his first step, and he fell into the cool stream. Hayasa glided to the side of the stream, obviously he had too little, and it definitely not too much he thought unsure of himself.


As he reached the side of the stream, Hayasa climbed out of the stream shivering as a strong wind blew; he stood to full height and started once again, gathering his chakra to the balls of his feet, once again he pushed just a little bit more then last time. And he strode onto the stream once again falling straight through the surface; once again the cool of the stream hit him, this time he choked on the cold the stream felt a bit colder then before nonetheless he got out and continued. After hours of trying to walk on the surface with little luck, Hayasa decided to give up and try some other training involving strengthening the eye.


Hayasa climbed over to his pack, dried himself and redressed, ready to begin his eye training which he would need dearly to be able to perform most gen-jutsu. Hayasa stood to full height and he grabbed out 8 kunai from his pack, and he summoned some static around him and let explode hitting a number of trees around him.
The leaves of the tree he had targeted, had begun to fall and aimed the kunai at one of the fallings leaves and threw it missed he continued to pull them out aiming and throwing. He hit only two of the leaves out of the 7 he needed to target, he turned and collected the kunai and saw the sun had set and decided to head home and would continue the next day.



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[Uchiha Satoshi]

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[Falorein]

Hayasa awoke the next morning, he dressed quickly and headed towards the door after a long walk Hayasa had arrived.He set his belongings down on the ground,and walked slowly over to where he would do his routine hour of meditation.He bent down and sat on his rock,and stopped thinking like he had done the previous days.He opened his mind to all that was around him listened to the birds,rabbits and even the smallest of insects.After some time of learning and listening to the forest he had decided to stop,Hayasa got up and went to his pack which contained a small lunch of rice,an apple and a drink of water .

*

Hayasa scoffed them quickly and got ready for his next training routine,He removed his top and cloak and got ready to begin,
unlike the previous day it was quite warm.Hayasa strode over to the river bank and dug deep inside himself and started to activate his chakra,he let it flow through his entire body then he started to concentrate to his feet but he did this carefully, not to let it go over board. Hayasa felt he was confident with the amount of chakra focused in his feet,and he stepped onto the river and he felt a plunging feeling and his heart skipped a beat he knew he had failed again.After a moment he swam to the side of the bank and climbed back up and repeated the process with little succes after what seemd like a while he stopped and dried himself and put his clothes on.

*
Hayasa was eager to continue with his target practice so he pulled out his 8 kunai and built up static aiming for the same tree he had the day before,he realesed and the tree shook and leaves fell rapidly.Hayasa aimed his kunai and realesed one after the other he realesed at the end of his fire he looked at his progress,he had improved! he thought happily he had hit 3/7.
*

After half a day of practising his target practice he was now hitting a average of 5/7 ,he knew now he would stop and begin somthing else hand sign precision .He started practicing his signs only aiming to get them perfectly,as he improved he started to increase his speed and still the were perfect he was getting better he felt it, he knew it!

At the end of the day he was tired more then he knew and as he coillected his pack he collapsed, and his day ended right there and then.

[|Ayame Unbound|]

+8 26/80 please keep a running TP count in your posts.

[Falorein]

26/80

Magen: Jinteki Harinezumi no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Human Porcupine Technique)
Rank: “B” Rank
Skill: Genjutsu
Effect: Rapidly pierces the opponent with illusionary weapons that come from nowhere, causing extreme amounts of pain and the loss of concentration.
Special: “Hand Signs”- Ox, Snake, Dragon, Rat, Monkey, Dog, Rabbit
Drawback: Can be broken with Kai.
Description: The user performs the handseals, creating the optical illusion of several hundred projectiles flying from every direction. These projectiles pierce the opponent in different places, causing an extreme amount of pain and fear. This ability can be broken with Kai, but the pain of the jutsu will linger for three turns.
Limit: Must know Figment Perception

Hayasa awoke still exhausted from the previous day of training,
he could barely move still breathing hard Hayasa pushed himself up and lent on a nearby tree.After a moment or two he felt a strong aching in his left knee,he fell to the ground clutching it.
Hayasa knew it was a draw back from the days training he had endured,after a few moments the pain subsided and he decided to continue his training.He moved over to where he would begin his daily routine of meditation then trying to walk on water and target practice,He began first with meditation.

*
At about midday,he had finished his exercise without little improvement besides, his target practice where he had only missed one or two each time.Hayasa was still tired but he needed to continue so he got up and decided to actually try performing the jutsu,he needed a test subject

[Tenkai]

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[Falorein]

28/80

Magen: Jinteki Harinezumi no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Human Porcupine Technique)
Rank: “B” Rank
Skill: Genjutsu
Effect: Rapidly pierces the opponent with illusionary weapons that come from nowhere, causing extreme amounts of pain and the loss of concentration.
Special: “Hand Signs”- Ox, Snake, Dragon, Rat, Monkey, Dog, Rabbit
Drawback: Can be broken with Kai.
Description: The user performs the handseals, creating the optical illusion of several hundred projectiles flying from every direction. These projectiles pierce the opponent in different places, causing an extreme amount of pain and fear. This ability can be broken with Kai, but the pain of the jutsu will linger for three turns.
Limit: Must know Figment Perception

Test subject Hayasa thought of nothing, unless he used an animal but that would be cruel,would'nt it?
Hayasa thought about this for sometime and knew it would be cruel,but he might have to try it.Hayasa knew he could not use and object due to his academy days,he rembered a text about gen jutsu :

Genjutsu are techniques that use the chakra in the victim's nervous system to affetc their senses eg: taste,smell,hearing,sight and touch.

so he needed something living to be able to test this gen technique,after a moment or two Hayasa stood to full height and started to prepare a trap.After about 20 minutes Hayasa's trap was done,he decided to hide and wait for something to come along .He heard a noise it was a small mouse,Hayasa stared at his wood cage that hung over a piece of food.The mouse moved slowly towards the piece,once he was sure the mouse underneath he realesed the trap and the moused was caught.

Hayasa climbed over to his captive and bent down and put water in its cage, then stepped back and tried to perform the jutsu.
He looked into the captives eyes and slowly performed the hand signs,he then released a steady flow of chakra behind the hand signs.He performed the final sign,nothing happened except he felt his chakra drain nearly to point of fainting.Though thanx to the chakra control trining he felt he had one more shot left in him.

He poistioned himself for the next shot,once in his spot he looked at his captive he felt sorry for the mouse.He started to perform the handsigns with perfect precision,then he realeased his chakra behind his signs , he felt his chakra drain.Nothing happened once again,hayasa felt more drained then he had ever felt in his life and as he walked back to his pack he lent onto a tree and slid to the ground.

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Thirty Three of Eighty.

[Falorein]

33/80

Magen: Jinteki Harinezumi no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Human Porcupine Technique)
Rank: “B” Rank
Skill: Genjutsu
Effect: Rapidly pierces the opponent with illusionary weapons that come from nowhere, causing extreme amounts of pain and the loss of concentration.
Special: “Hand Signs”- Ox, Snake, Dragon, Rat, Monkey, Dog, Rabbit
Drawback: Can be broken with Kai.
Description: The user performs the handseals, creating the optical illusion of several hundred projectiles flying from every direction. These projectiles pierce the opponent in different places, causing an extreme amount of pain and fear. This ability can be broken with Kai, but the pain of the jutsu will linger for three turns.
Limit: Must know Figment Perception

Hayasa raised himself from the trunk of the tree around midnight,he felt alot better not fully recovered but better.Hayasa's first instinct once he was up, to check out his little captive,after realising his captive was fine he decided to give it some more food and water and get back to practising the Jutsu.

He postioned himself once again this time not as far as before once he successfully made eye contact with his little prisoner, Hayasa preformed the apporiote handsigns.This time as he realeased chakra he felt weird a diffrent sensation,he knewit had worked.The victim of his attack started to screech in either pain or fear he could not tell,but he instantly felt gulity and ran over to the cage and investigated the prisoner.The mouse was ok,But Hayasa felt insanely bad because he knew if it was successful the pain would linger.Hayasa wanted to realease the mouse but knew it was what he needed to do,so instead of continuing with his little friend in the cage he decided to do the other excercises.

Hayasa walked over to his meditation spot and cleared his mind and realaxed, he paid attetion to how things were to better understand how to create his figments.He particularly listened to the mouse innhis cage he seemed frightened and in serious pain.Hayasa guilt increased so he decided to stop meditating and head over and start to walk on water.

Hayasa plunged deep into the cool stream, for a moment his heart skipped a beat as he plunged.Hayasa swam to the ledge and climbed up the side and prepared to try again he concentrated,and felt deep within himself and pushed the exact amount of chakra to his feet.Hayasa took the first step and prepared for a plunging sensation, but none came he took another and the looked down.Hayasa had done it he had successfullay stayed on the surface of the water,he jumped up and his landed firmly ont the surface yet again.Hayasa walked over to the edge of the stream and got dressed and headed home for the day carefully taking his friend with him.

[Falorein]

33/80

Quote:Magen: Jinteki Harinezumi no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Human Porcupine Technique)
Rank: “B” Rank
Skill: Genjutsu
Effect: Rapidly pierces the opponent with illusionary weapons that come from nowhere, causing extreme amounts of pain and the loss of concentration.
Special: “Hand Signs”- Ox, Snake, Dragon, Rat, Monkey, Dog, Rabbit
Drawback: Can be broken with Kai.
Description: The user performs the handseals, creating the optical illusion of several hundred projectiles flying from every direction. These projectiles pierce the opponent in different places, causing an extreme amount of pain and fear. This ability can be broken with Kai, but the pain of the jutsu will linger for three turns.
Limit: Must know Figment Perception

Hayasa arrived at his training grounds the next day,he set his little captive down in the position he was in the previous day.Today Hayasa had decided to practice more on his target practice,to be able to follow targets as they move.So he went over to a tree to where he would first continue, what he had been working the previous days.


As he normally does Hayasa had 7 kunai ready he then would let eletricity explode,to hit his targeted tree.The leaves would fall and Hayasa would try to hit the leaves, from a long distance away. Hayasa stood at the ready with his kunai at the targeting aim he then let the static explode, sending the leaves to the ground.He aimed his kunai ready,then rewaleased sending it hurling at one of the leaves, he then realeased one after the other in succesion.After his first attempt he had hit 6/7 targets he aimed for he wanted to hit 7 ,Hayasa retrived his kunai and reapeated the process.

After hours of practice, he had 7 targets that had been hit the last six times, Hayasa was thrilled.Hayasa then decided to have a small snack ,a green apple and after he ate he retrived some food and water for the mouse in the cage and decided to head over to start practising the actual jutsu.

Hayasa stood a little distance away from the little captive,then Hayasa concetrated to be able to make eye contact with little creature.The mouse seemed to realise what he was going to do,and tried to doge making eye contact but hayasa was determined.After minutes of dodging he finally made contact with the little creature, as he did he started to perform the hand signs.

He performed the signs quick and realeased his chakra rapidly, but by doing this the jutsu backfired he realeasd to much chakra and it exploded out wards sending hayasa flying into the stream.
Hayasa choked as he hit the water,he knew he needed to reach the sides so he used the last of his strength and swam to the side.Once he reached the side he clung to the bank climbed up,collaspsing and falling uncounscious.

[Elgar]

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51.80

[Falorein]

51/80

Magen: Jinteki Harinezumi no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Human Porcupine Technique)
Rank: “B” Rank
Skill: Genjutsu
Effect: Rapidly pierces the opponent with illusionary weapons that come from nowhere, causing extreme amounts of pain and the loss of concentration.
Special: “Hand Signs”- Ox, Snake, Dragon, Rat, Monkey, Dog, Rabbit
Drawback: Can be broken with Kai.
Description: The user performs the handseals, creating the optical illusion of several hundred projectiles flying from every direction. These projectiles pierce the opponent in different places, causing an extreme amount of pain and fear. This ability can be broken with Kai, but the pain of the jutsu will linger for three turns.
Limit: Must know Figment Perception

Hayasa awoke still on the bank of the stream,felling a bit dazed he wondered how he got there and after a few moments he finally realised he had rushed the whole thing and botched the job.Hayasa was annoyed at this,how could he have been so foolish to screw the whole thing up he did not even no how long he had been out.

Hayasa laid at the banks edge unable to move for quite some time,while he laid there he meditated.Hayasa centered himself and investigated the sense of smell,he explored the forest full of smells. He smelt; mushrooms,trees,animals,water,cavesand even the air.Hayasa could smell evrything he continued to explore by invsetgating how the smell came about or even what to smells made what type of smell.He also investigated how animals reacted to the smell,he needed to know that soon he learn how humans reacted. So he could become even more of an illusionist, by even acting like his own techniques were real.

After a long time of exploration Hayasa attempted to move,with little success he went back to exploring.This time he wanted to explore sound and hearing,he closed his mind and listened to the things. But this time he took more care to note his own reaction to the sounds to be more realistic when his enemies heard his illusions.Hayasa heard a running stream,it soothed him the rushing water it would then calm as it hit a straight run.Hayasa then broadened his listening,he heard growls and nashing.He jumped as the things that gnashed and chomped,growled,he was seriously frighttened he noted that violent animals can be very frightening.

Hayasa stopped for a while and decided on something, genjutsu had become an art for him.Hayasa then used most of his strength and gathered his things including his rat and went back home to recooperrate for a few days.

[Falorein]

51/80

Magen: Jinteki Harinezumi no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Human Porcupine Technique)
Rank: “B” Rank
Skill: Genjutsu
Effect: Rapidly pierces the opponent with illusionary weapons that come from nowhere, causing extreme amounts of pain and the loss of concentration.
Special: “Hand Signs”- Ox, Snake, Dragon, Rat, Monkey, Dog, Rabbit
Drawback: Can be broken with Kai.
Description: The user performs the handseals, creating the optical illusion of several hundred projectiles flying from every direction. These projectiles pierce the opponent in different places, causing an extreme amount of pain and fear. This ability can be broken with Kai, but the pain of the jutsu will linger for three turns.
Limit: Must know Figment Perception

After 3 days of resting Hayasa finally returned to his training ground,with his pet rat which he tried out his gen jutsu on.
Hayasa then decided to get straight down to buisness,he put the rat down in its usual spot.Then he walked back a few paces,he started to make eye contact with the rat, but yet again he was trying not to look in Hayasas eyes.The two of them dodged each other for sometime,it became a game soon after awhile the mouse began to weaken and give in.

The mouse finally gave in and Hayasa then executed the hand signs perfectly, then he let the chakra flow as he did this he saw something diffrent in the mouses eyes.In those brief moments Hayasa saw for the first time, not fear but a sort of compassion from the mouse like it had grown fond of him.Hayasa saw this in the last second,he finally knew why the mouse gave in everytime and by this time it was to late and the jutsu had been executed perfectly.

The mouse cried in painand fear,after a few minutes of the squeaking it suddenly went silent.Hayasa ran over to the mouse and crouched he peered into the cage,he realised there was no movement.His captive had died.Hayasa wept for a few moments then buried the mouse and set a new trap he knew that he had to keep praticing.While he set an automatic trap Hayasa went over to some shrubs near by and decided to explore some more but with his sense of touch.

Hayasa closed his mind yet again,this time reaching out to touch diffrent things in the shrubbery.He memorised every felling he got, from the tingling ones to the replusive ones.Hayasa continued as he waited to catch something he touched plants,rocksand even water.He realised more about the natural way of things and how to react to evn syke out his oppenents.

Hayasa jumped as the cage door slammed close,he stopped feeling things and ran over to the cage inside was a rabbit.His new test subject, but this time he knew it would not be fore long because he felt the jutsu mastery just around the corner.Because he was stronger then ever before.

[Sayuri "Cupcake"]

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[Falorein]

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[Falorein]

69/80

Magen: Jinteki Harinezumi no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Human Porcupine Technique)
Rank: “B” Rank
Skill: Genjutsu
Effect: Rapidly pierces the opponent with illusionary weapons that come from nowhere, causing extreme amounts of pain and the loss of concentration.
Special: “Hand Signs”- Ox, Snake, Dragon, Rat, Monkey, Dog, Rabbit
Drawback: Can be broken with Kai.
Description: The user performs the handseals, creating the optical illusion of several hundred projectiles flying from every direction. These projectiles pierce the opponent in different places, causing an extreme amount of pain and fear. This ability can be broken with Kai, but the pain of the jutsu will linger for three turns.
Limit: Must know Figment Perception

Hayasa arrived back at his training spot ,with his rabbit in one hand and his pack in the other.He walked over to the clearing placing his pack on a fallen log,he then turned over to where he had put the mouse the previous day.Hayasa placed the cage on the ground, steppped back a couple paces then he got ready to begin the final stages of his training .

As Hayasa tried to achieve eye contact, the rabbit was unoccupied by him so it was difficult to achieve.After a few moments Hayasa made eye contact,he reacted and performed the hand signs in perfect form and motion.Hayasa then put a steady flow of chakra, into the hand signs the effect was almost strait away the rabbit started to cringe in pain.Hayasa knew this time he had done it and what he performed on the rabbit would have been very painful indeed.


Hayasa decided the rabbit had enough,besides he wanted to explore the sense of taste. So Hayasa began to forage anything and everything except things that were poisonous.He then sat himself down and spread the ttems out and infront of him,closed his eyes.Hayasa felt his way to and qbject which was an ordinary leaf,he ate it as he did so his taste buds tingeled and burned.Hayasa dropped the leaf in astonishment,a leaf could burn you? Hayasa asked himself.For the next half of the day Hayasa continued to taste things one after the other,with many astonishing results.

Hayasa decided after tasting so many rare and wonderful tastes,he would stop and finish for the day. He had relaxed his training today but tommorow would be a diffrent story he colllected his belongs and left to head home.

[adero]

+3... dude... write some actual training... what the heck like i can see some training... but more pertinence and detail please o.o

[Falorein]

72/80

Magen: Jinteki Harinezumi no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Human Porcupine Technique)
Rank: “B” Rank
Skill: Genjutsu
Effect: Rapidly pierces the opponent with illusionary weapons that come from nowhere, causing extreme amounts of pain and the loss of concentration.
Special: “Hand Signs”- Ox, Snake, Dragon, Rat, Monkey, Dog, Rabbit
Drawback: Can be broken with Kai.
Description: The user performs the handseals, creating the optical illusion of several hundred projectiles flying from every direction. These projectiles pierce the opponent in different places, causing an extreme amount of pain and fear. This ability can be broken with Kai, but the pain of the jutsu will linger for three turns.
Limit: Must know Figment Perception

Hayasa came back the next day,ready to continue his training to learn this certain gen- jutsu.Hayasa had been trying to succesfully learn this for days now, he felt he was on the verge of finally learning it. So today he was going to practice all the training methods he had used from the previous days of training.

Hayasa walked over to his meditation rock where on the first day he had meditated,but this time Hayasa would explore the senses: smell and hearing. He bent down and postioned himself on the rock,he then closed his mind and cleared his mind of all thought .Then letting his two senses guide him,Hayasa started to explore the workings of nature.Hayasa smelt smoke coming from the nearby capitol,he heard a pack of wolves communicating with one another.Hayasa smelt the fresh due of the morning grass,he heard the rustle of the billowing wind against the tree's in the clearing that he was meditating in.Hayasa felt he was closer to nature and working out the effects everything has on everything else to help him create perfect illusions.

After he was satisfyed with all he had heard and smellt, Hayasa decided to move on to training his chakra control by walking on water.He had achieved this once before,but he thought he should perfect it today.

Hayasa stood at the edge of the gushing stream,he knew he would have to time this perfectly.Hayasa began,he reached inside himself feeling everything in himself.Hayasa felt the chakra flowing around him in every part of his body,he needed to redirect that flow.Hayasa started to guide the chakra down to the points in his,feet as Hayasa did this he needed to feel the exact same as he had when he succeded at doing this the previous time.As the flow built up hayasa waited for that feeling,then there it! he maintaned that flow,not adding more or less to any part of his body he now stepped onto the water. He had not felt the cool water of the stream hit him so he opened his eyes and realised he had succeded in mastering to walk on water.


Hayasa stood at the ready with his kunai out,by far this was his favorite exercise.He loved hitting targets,and the last few times he had done this he had succeded.He had hoped to triumph again,he lined up his sight with the targeted tree and realeased a full static charge at the tree.Sending leaves flying in all directions he aimd then realeased one kunai after the other hitting all the targets,his eye tracking ablitites had improved tremondously.

Now was the last thing to revise the actual Jutsu itself,Hayasa was now eye level with his test subject.He knew what pain it would cause this little guy but he would let him go after this he promised.Hayasa stood to full height,and then paced backwards at least 5 steps and focused his eye sight he instantly met eyes with the rabbit .He then got to work he performed the hand signs one after the other,he then released his chakra accordingly.He felt a drain then the rabbit squealed in pain and then went limp,
and Hayasa fell to the ground he was sure he had finally gotted the hang of this jutsu.But would he need further practice using it?
he thought to himself.

[hotoka]

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