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Doton: Rikujou Douyou no Jutsu (Earth: Ground Shaking Technique) Rank: "D" Rank Skill: NinJutsu Effect: The user slams their hands against the ground as the user creates a miniature like earthquake in order to try and unbalance the enemy or opponents all around for a more of a deadly like attack. Special: "Hand Seals" Drawback: The user's hands must stay upon the ground at all time. When the user is capable of reaching "A" Class the knowledge of placing their hands onto the very ground becomes obsolete, and the user is capable of performing the technique without having their hands along the ground. Description: As the user slams their hands against the ground, the user is capable of creating a miniature like earthquake along the ground. The ground rumbles lightly as the very earth moves in all directions in a ten-meter radius. Every time the user gains ranking in difficulty class the distance of the technique increases by ten meters. Limit: Needs the Earth Release.
Hotaka Smirked and Made the hand seals focusing the Charka from his body in to his hands. He slams his hands into the ground in a handstand manner and says "Doton: Rikujou Douyou no Jutsu!" He pushes the charka from his hands out in to the Earth feeling a slight tremor that gradually gets bigger. The rocks from the mud clone start shaking rapidly as the tremor moves out from Hotaka.
Last Edit: Aug 30, 2014 11:32:27 GMT -7 by h0lder0fh0pe
Post by Father 'Suke on Aug 30, 2014 10:56:26 GMT -7
Mizukage: +8 Learned
Hope: If you are training the technique, please put in your post a signifier of how much TP the technique is worth and you are training towards, and also a spoiler or quote holding the technique itself. In respect of cubone's posts he had the technique in a spoiler followed by a 0/10 meaning it would take 10 TP to learn. Now, I ask you to do the same any time you are training jutsu as it helps us, the staff, know what jutsu you are attempting to learn and also how much TP into the technique you require. I'll give you a +1 for now, but please follow my advice such as in the next post if you are still learning this technique, you'd put in "1/10" at the beginning or end of your post.
Last Edit: Aug 30, 2014 11:01:56 GMT -7 by Father 'Suke: added in note for hope
Doton: Rikujou Douyou no Jutsu (Earth: Ground Shaking Technique) Rank: "D" Rank Skill: NinJutsu Effect: The user slams their hands against the ground as the user creates a miniature like earthquake in order to try and unbalance the enemy or opponents all around for a more of a deadly like attack. Special: "Hand Seals" Drawback: The user's hands must stay upon the ground at all time. When the user is capable of reaching "A" Class the knowledge of placing their hands onto the very ground becomes obsolete, and the user is capable of performing the technique without having their hands along the ground. Description: As the user slams their hands against the ground, the user is capable of creating a miniature like earthquake along the ground. The ground rumbles lightly as the very earth moves in all directions in a ten-meter radius. Every time the user gains ranking in difficulty class the distance of the technique increases by ten meters. Limit: Needs the Earth Release.
Hotaka get's back to his feet after the small tremor. Well then now that I have an idea of how it works lets see if I can get Mizukage-Sensei's face into the dirt, he thinks. With his Sensory Breathing active he looks at The Mizukage while doing the required hand seals. Hotaka focuses the Charka from with in him and channels it into his hands. He takes a step forward and slams his hands onto the ground and stands on them, the ground around him starts to shake. the rocks from the mud clone start to thrash violently as the tremors move out from Hotaka. He opens his eyes and "watches" as the tree's around him start shaking and finally he "sees" the Mizukage start to loose his balance. Leaves fall from the trees down to the ground where they only just jump around until the Tremors end. "How'd I do Mizukage-Sensei?" Hotaka asks.
Post by Father 'Suke on Aug 30, 2014 14:26:51 GMT -7
Thank you for the comeback Hope. Truly thank you. However I can only award a +3 this time. Try for a bit more detail throughout the technique. Describe the way your chakra trembles inside the technique even. Adding bits of humor and flavor also are ways to lengthen the training post and give yourself some comedy for doing the best you can.
Adamant the Water Shadow stood, unfazed by the practicing of his Genin's ninja art. The trees would tremble and lose leaves, yet the lord of the Hidden Mist remained steadfast.
"You need more work-- consider what you are doing in your art.. dig deep into your self as soil and pull out your chakra. Perhaps then you will be able to move me."
Doton: Rikujou Douyou no (Earth: Ground Shaking Technique) Rank: "D" Rank Skill: NinJutsu Effect: The user slams their hands against the ground as the user creates a miniature like earthquake in order to try and unbalance the enemy or opponents all around for a more of a deadly like attack. Special: "Hand Seals" Drawback: The user's hands must stay upon the ground at all time. When the user is capable of reaching "A" Class the knowledge of placing their hands onto the very ground becomes obsolete, and the user is capable of performing the technique without having their hands along the ground. Description: As the user slams their hands against the ground, the user is capable of creating a miniature like earthquake along the ground. The ground rumbles lightly as the very earth moves in all directions in a ten-meter radius. Every time the user gains ranking in difficulty class the distance of the technique increases by ten meters. Limit: Needs the Earth Release.
Hotaka gets back on to his feet Okay lets see if I can make some branches from those trees fall, Hotaka thinks. He walks closer to the trees, so he's about four meters from them Here should be good enough, he thinks. Hotaka focuses his Charka Makes the required hand seals and sends it to his hands, it feels like there's an earthquake going on inside of himself. This is new Hotaka thinks as he slams his hands on to the ground "Rikujou Douyou no Jutsu!" he shouts and stands on them, the "Earthquake" feeling going on inside him rushes into the ground and starts making an actual earthquake around him. The trees around him start shaking violently as more leaves rain down around him and the Mizukage, small snaps can be heard as twigs start to join the rain of leaves, and soon a whole branch falls right in front of Hotaka. and then a few more fall around him until it looks like an actual earthquake happened in the Mizukage's back yard. Hotaka stands on his feet moves his head round him and says "Yea...I'm not cleaning this up."
Last Edit: Aug 30, 2014 14:54:37 GMT -7 by h0lder0fh0pe
Doton: Rikujou Douyou no Jutsu (Earth: Ground Shaking Technique) Rank: "D" Rank Skill: NinJutsu Effect: The user slams their hands against the ground as the user creates a miniature like earthquake in order to try and unbalance the enemy or opponents all around for a more of a deadly like attack. Special: "Hand Seals" Drawback: The user's hands must stay upon the ground at all time. When the user is capable of reaching "A" Class the knowledge of placing their hands onto the very ground becomes obsolete, and the user is capable of performing the technique without having their hands along the ground. Description: As the user slams their hands against the ground, the user is capable of creating a miniature like earthquake along the ground. The ground rumbles lightly as the very earth moves in all directions in a ten-meter radius. Every time the user gains ranking in difficulty class the distance of the technique increases by ten meters. Limit: Needs the Earth Release.
Hotaka flips from his hands to his feet and "looks" at the trees and then at the Mizukage "watch me knock down a few trees Mizukage-Sensei" Hotaka said. He focuses the Charka and feels the same earthquake feeling from last time, Hotaka makes the required hand seals and flows the charka to his hands which are now pulsing with Charka, he then jumps up and slams his hands onto the ground and shouts "Rikujou Douyou no Jutsu!" The charka rushes from Hotaka's hands and into the ground starting tremors the go out from his hands, The fallen leaves start jumping off the ground while the branches start trashing around violently, The trees start shaking and loosing up the soil around them. Hotaka "looks" at the trees Come on and fall all ready he thinks as he hears a sickening snap and tree roots snap out of the ground and cause one of the trees to fall to the ground. Hotaka flips back to his feet "Whoo I took down a tree!" he says enthusiastically "oh and you might want to get the jerk who hit me to clean this up Mizukage-sensei" Hotaka adds with a cute smile.
The tree wouldn't be dealt with by the ANBU member. He had more pressing objectives to do, such as watch over the Kage. Later on, Hyobe would do something to get rid of the fallen timber, yet for now he continued to watch Hotaka.
"Very good, young ninja." Hyobe stepped towards him, "Now, using those small pebbles from my Mud Clone, show me your understanding of earth manipulation... this calls for the Tamashi Danmaku." Had Hotaka known which technique the Kaguya had mentioned, then he would realize that it was one that dealt with using pebbles to attack an opponent. He just wished to see what sort of control the boy had over the Doton Release, given his time training his first technique.
-- Train this technique without attacking anyone other than the trees and two remaining Mud Clones.
Doton: Tamaishi Danmaku (Earth Element: Pebble Barrage) Rank: "D" Rank Skill: NinJutsu Effect: A simple technique used as a distraction in which the user uses a few hand seals concentrating along the chakra towards the ground. Doing so, the user takes the chakra and the rocks to push forth sending multiple small grape sized like pebbles towards the opponent. Special: "Hand Seals" Drawback: The amount of pebbles depends on the rank of the user. Description: Small like stones are created along the ground in pebble form as they are pushed up along the ground and sent flying towards the very enemy or enemies depending on the type of distance the enemy or where the enemy is standing. This type of attack is somewhat of a basic like attack and is to be considered more of an annoyance or distraction. Limit: Needs the Earth Release.
Doton: Tamaishi Danmaku (Earth Element: Pebble Barrage) Rank: "D" Rank Skill: NinJutsu Effect: A simple technique used as a distraction in which the user uses a few hand seals concentrating along the chakra towards the ground. Doing so, the user takes the chakra and the rocks to push forth sending multiple small grape sized like pebbles towards the opponent. Special: "Hand Seals" Drawback: The amount of pebbles depends on the rank of the user. Description: Small like stones are created along the ground in pebble form as they are pushed up along the ground and sent flying towards the very enemy or enemies depending on the type of distance the enemy or where the enemy is standing. This type of attack is somewhat of a basic like attack and is to be considered more of an annoyance or distraction. Limit: Needs the Earth Release.
Hotaka activates his Sensory Breathing, now being able to "see" Hotaka finds the clones standing six meters ahead of him well lets see what the Tamaishi Danmaku can do, he thinks. Hotaka focuses his charka and feels the same earthquake sensation he senses the mud clone's remains and wills them to rise into the air. Now with the pebbles in the air he "looks" at the left mud clone Lets see here...hitting him in the face sounds good,he thinks Hotaka sends three pebbles at the clone on the left, Hitting him in the throat and chest jarring him but not knocking him over. Hotaka sends the last two pebbles at the Clone and hits him in the face breaking off his nose and in his right shoulder leaving a small chip in it, the clone rushes him ready to punch him when Hotaka drops down places his hands on the ground and says "Rikujou Douyou no Jutsu"
the Clone loses balance but manages to stay on his feet. Hotaka Wills more pebbles into the air while the clone is wobbling, he sends five pebbles at the clone hitting him square in the chest knocking him on to his back.
Hotaka flips into the air and lands on the clones Chest "hey clone nice to see that your laying down...but I'm goanna have to make sure you stay where you are." he says with a smirk, he wealds more pebbles behind him to lift into the air with the Earthquake sensation growing a fraction, and sends them into the clones face shattering it making it look like a broken dolls face.
Hotaka "looks" toward the other clone "Yo ugly I just killed you clone brother!" He shouts at the other clone who rushes him, Hotaka smirks what an idiot he thinks and wills five more pebbles into the air, he then sticks his tongue out at the rushing clone and just as the clone is about to hit him Hotaka jumps over his head and sends pebbles at the clone. as Hotaka lands behind the clone he turns back around and does a back handspring to get further away kicking the clone in the jaw while doing so, serves the clone right for trying to hit me with my back turned he thinks. The clone has a few chips on his torso, he's missing his right hand, and his lower jaw is just gone, laying in pieces on the ground between Hotaka and the mud clone,
"Hope I took your jaw with my feet when I kicked you" Hotaka taunts and raises the pieces of the clones jaw "seems like it's in a few pieces but you can have it back buddy" he remarks before unleashing the jaw pieces at the clone as it rushes Hotaka in a rage.
The jaw pieces hit the clone dead in the chest making a hole and the clone falling face first on to the ground,
Hotaka walks up to the clone as it tries to get up "No, no clone you need to stay on the ground" he says as he commands five more pebbles into the clones head officially caving in the back of its head, as the Earthquake sensation goes away. Hotaka "looks" at the Mizukage "How was that Mizukage-sensei?" he asks.
Last Edit: Aug 30, 2014 22:21:31 GMT -7 by h0lder0fh0pe
Doton: Tamaishi Danmaku (Earth Element: Pebble Barrage) Rank: "D" Rank Skill: NinJutsu Effect: A simple technique used as a distraction in which the user uses a few hand seals concentrating along the chakra towards the ground. Doing so, the user takes the chakra and the rocks to push forth sending multiple small grape sized like pebbles towards the opponent. Special: "Hand Seals" Drawback: The amount of pebbles depends on the rank of the user. Description: Small like stones are created along the ground in pebble form as they are pushed up along the ground and sent flying towards the very enemy or enemies depending on the type of distance the enemy or where the enemy is standing. This type of attack is somewhat of a basic like attack and is to be considered more of an annoyance or distraction. Limit: Needs the Earth Release.
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Slowly, the Mizukage worked up the same hand seals as Hotaka had. This would be his first time using the technique, but he felt confident in his ability to learn it, thus showing his pupil another way in which he could manipulate the earth.
"Focus on what you are doing; work with the element and anything that involves the element," Hyobe explained. The Mud Bunshin that he had created lay defeated across the ground and as he slammed his hands into the Hebi seal, his chakra activated and pressed forth from his being. The man's ranking was higher than that of the Genin's, thus he had more know-how in willing the Earth to his bidding.
From straining his chakra to a level of intricate manipulation, Hyobe began to call forth the remnants of one clone. It's body pieces slowly began to rise from the ground, and as he clenched his fist together, the pieces began to break apart. One arm literally erupted into a dozen smaller pieces as the Kaguyan Water Shadow displayed his level of control to the pupil. Focusing his mind to cause the twelve pieces to crumble into even smaller pieces of rubble, the man pushed more chakra into the technique, which made the hovering stones rotate quickly and lose diameter. These pieces of pebbles would smash into the tree that Hotaka had capsized, causing it to become bore with holes. The Tamashi Danmaku reminded Hyobe of the Hessendan technique of the Kaguya--that is, it could be used to penetrate things and it required one to be able to control small flying rounded projectiles.
Continuing his display to Hotara, the man summoned more chakra to will the remaining pieces of the broken head to rise from the ground. Quickly, the head broken into many smaller pieces, which would then rejoin to create five larger ones. Although these had been larger than the shrapnel that they had been made up of, these pebbles still were small-scale. They floated through the air around Hotaka as Hyobe began to slam them into the ground.
"This technique calls for one to be able to disperse earth and then fuse it together with chakra in order to attack properly," for a third time, he displayed this D-Rank jutsu, using the rest of the broken clone's body to create a conglomerate of floating pebbles. About thirty of them had been made this time; the volley had been cast skyward before they came plummeting back down towards the earth. No one would be in the way of the miniature meteor shower, yet the velocity in which they traveled left craters that reflected the size of the pebbles once they crashed into the ground. Even though Hyobe had at first chosen to not learn this technique, he felt it only right to further express his understanding of Doton and the art of training to his fellow Hazian.
The Mizukage was easy enough to find. His face was plastered everywhere. If Masa were here with malicious intent he'd have him cornered. They were similar in height and weight, but, in skill and experience, Masa stood heads taller. And his companion, Masa wouldn't comment. If you heard his mumbling, stringy and child could be deciphered.
As an estate it lacked security. A vault over a wall and you were in. A high percentage of the village could clear it standing. You'd need a menacing barrier, spanning physical and ninjutsu elements in its defense. A lesson for later.
He'd reveal himself to both in a grand gesture: tying his slashed Kirigakure headband to his forehead.
"I want to return, my rank restored and my crimes dissolved." He dropped to a knee. "I will grandly show my talents on that whelp there, Lord MIzukage."
The Dragon Butai member that had been stationed on the roof of the Mizukage's abode leapt into action as the nukenin made his way into the vicinity. As Masa fell to a knee, he would find a katana against the flesh of his neck. Any hostile movement against the reigning Water Shadow, and heads would roll. Hyobe himself turned to face the man and crossed his arms. He appeared loyal, he knew of his prowess. Yet it was his fugue-state that seemed to throw the Mizukage off... Hyobe thought for a while before he made his decision.
"You have my permission to be re-instated into the village, shinobi; you hail from the Kaguya, no? One with your bloodline is family here--I myself possess the Shikotsumyaku heritage." Hyobe unfolded his arms, now motioning for the man to rise. "A mission would prove your worth to this village. For now, you are under strict supervision until you complete the assigned task. It won't be too hard for one of your ranking.."
He handed Masa a scroll with the mission details. Had he chosen to accept it, he was yet one step closer to embracing the fervor of the mist-laden village. It appears that some of the mission objectives have been altered.
Name: [ The Thief. ] Rank: C IIC Length: 2 days Difficulty: Easy Description: So apparently, a member of the village has been stealing from our local stores. At first it was small things, trinkets that would not be missed, or where not treasured by their owners. However now, its getting more personal, and people are finding their homes invaded by this intruder. No one has been attacked, though he has been seen by a few victims. Apparently, one has seen him climb up walls, and accomplish many acrobatic maneuvers only one trained under the shinobi art would be capable of. Possibly a rogue ninja. One of the victims has the description of the suspect, so it'd probably be best to start there. Objective: Find and apprehend the thief at his hideout without killing him. Bring his head back to the Mizukage. Reward: 3,187 Ryo
Today was the day. Ijin had heard the recent news of the new water shadow and he wished to meet him. He had seen his face on posters around the village but seeing a picture and the deal meeting were different things. The last shadow was the one who took him and his mother in as refugees so he wanted to see how the new mizukage behaved.
He had finally made his way to his estate, noticing the door had been kicked in. This would normally be cause for alarm but the mizukage could handle himself, plus bodyguards were sure to be close by. He could hear racket from the backyard so he slipped around the house and made his way to the noise.
Once behind the house he saw quite a sight, the mizukage was with another shinobi. There was another on his knees with a blade pressed to his neck by an ANBU member. Is this a bad time?" he questioned as he watched to see what was going on.
"I trust me"
TP
D Rank 500/500
C Rank 500/1500
B Rank
A Rank
S Rank
The intentions had been cut short by one of the many ANBU orbiting the Mizukage. As one held Masa down with a cold katana against his neck. He was capable, but against an ANBU he'd have a tough time.
Masa rose and accepted the scroll. He gave it a read "..strict supervision..," resonated to his weaker personality.
"Stay in your corner, child," Masa mouthed. He hoped the Mizukage didn't see that.
"I shall erase this fake, Lord."
If he had the leeway, he'd hop over the fence heading off to complete this mission.
Ijin walked up to his mizukage with a smile on his face. As he approached the one ninja that was on his knees rose and ran out from the premises. As he approached, Ijin looked the other young shinobi up and down real quick. He wasn't sure what to make of him but but it mattered not.
"Greetings mizukage sama. Sorry for the intrusion but I wanted to see if I could just have a word and meet you face to face." he stared into the eyes of the water shadow, trying to sense what kind of person he was.
"Anyways, my name is Ijin. Nice to finally meet you."
"I trust me"
TP
D Rank 500/500
C Rank 500/1500
B Rank
A Rank
S Rank