Hitsohi's training

[seishou]

+5 TP

[raiden]

(5/30)
When Hitoshi was done with his swim he dried off and got back on top of the water to continue his training. He put the bottle back in front of him and performed the hand seals and positioned his feet. He then shouted, "Suirou no Jutsu!" The The Spere attached istelf to his hand and enclosed around the bottle. The bottle started to fill with water in less than a second. Then because of the water pressure inside and the bottle being made of plastic, it began to crush itself in. But since this one only lasted for about a minute the bottle didn't break. He tried the jutsu again this time focusing on getting the sphere bigger and around the bottle even more. He perfromed the hand seals, positioned his feet, aimed his hand at the floating bottle, and yelled "Suirou no Jutsu!" One again the sphere attached itself to Hitoshi's and and began to enclose the bottle. The sphere was much bigger that last time but not at it's maximum size. The bottle filled with water once again began to crush itself in and after about two minutes it burst. After about another 30 seconds the prison collapsed. Hitoshi now knew that he could control the power but needed to work on the size and time he can hold. So he picked up the pieces of bottle, put them back on the shore and continued with the training.

He got back on the water and had an idea. He had an idea that after he was done with mastering the size and time limit he should try doing it with one of his water clones to see if they could both do one. But right now he needed to focus on mastering the time limit and size of the prison. He positioned his feet, performed the hand seals, pointed his hand at the water, and yelled once again "Suirou no Jutsu!" The Sphere formed bigger than ever and attached itself to Hitoshi's hand. It was at the average size of a prison but he needed it at it's maximum size. It lasted for about 5 minutes then collapsed. So he tried it again. He positioned his feet, performed the seals, pointed his hand at the water and said the magic words,
"Suirou no Jutsu!" He got it at the average size again and made it last for 8 minutes befor it collapsed. He decided after that to take a break.

[nokemono]

+5

[raiden]

(10/30)
After taking another long break Hitoshi got back up on the water and decided to try again. He positioned his feet so that his right foot was in front of the other, he performed the hand seals, pointed his hand at the water and said, "Suirou no Jutsu!"
The sphere once again attached itself to Hitoshi's hand and this time it was at it's maximum size but it only lasted for 5 minutes before it collapsed once again. He tried it again. He positioned his feet, performed the hand seals, pointed his hand at the water and said, "Suirou no Jutsu!" and the sphere appeared once again at it's maximum height and lasted for ten minutes before it collapsed. He got the size it's supposed to be at but he just couldn't get it to say for as long as he needed it. So he tried it yet again. He positioned his feet, performed the seals, charged even more chakra to his hands (for maximum power), and pointed it at the water. He then yelled with more enthusiasm then ever, "Suirou no Jutsu!!!" and out came the sphere that attached itself to his hand. He had a feeling of complete control over the sphere and after 20 minutes he commanded it to collapse and it did. He now had complete control over the time that he controlled it for.

Now he had to learn to do it with his water clones. So he performed the hand seals and summoned one of his water clones. They both positioned their feet, charged chakra into their hands, performed the hand seals and yelled out at the same time, "Suirou no Jutsu!" Then they both summoned prisons that were at their average size and lasted only 7 minutes. So they both tried it again. So yet again they both positioned their feet, charged chakra into their hands, performed the hand seals and yelled out at the same time, "Suirou no Jutsu!" They both summoned the prisons again and these were once again at their average height and lasted 15 minutes. Hitoshi thought to himself, "I can do this on my own but to be truly affective I need to have my clone do this so I can go up and attack. I guess I'll have to keep trying." So he and his clone did the jutsu one more time. They did everything they were supposed to do faster and with more effort than before. This time they both summoned prisions at average size again that lasted 17 minutes. Hitoshi took a deep sigh and dismissed his clone. He decided it was time to tgo home and try again tomorrow or later tonight.

[Yun.]

+5

[raiden]

(15/30)
Hitoshi, after a day of resting, ran back to the river to complete his training. He got on top of the water and performed the hand seals for his water clone which appeared right beside him. They both positioned their feet, charged chakra into their hands, performed the hand seals and yelled out at the same time, "Suirou no Jutsu!" The prisons attached to their hands at average size and lasted for about another 17 minutes. "Damn," Hitoshi thought, "It's the same as last time I need to finish this today." So he tried it again. He and his clone once again performed the steps for the start of the Jutsu and then shouted "Suirou no jutsu!" The prisons attached to their hands once again but his time they were at their maximum size. They had finially mastered one part but still needed the other because, after about 7 minutes the prisons collapsed. He took a deep sigh and said to himself "Im right where I'm at yeaterday except now I'm with a clone. Hmm seems like Deja vú all over again."

After a while a gennin named Naruki came along and asked Hitoshi if they would like to train together. Hitoshi said it was fine and they both began. Naruki was trying to learn the Kaze Ya no Jutsu so because his could go on water they decided to have a duel and practice their abilities. First Naruki performed the hand seals for an ability that no gennin should know the Kage bunshin no jutsu. Hitoshi was stunned "How did he learn that jutsu, Its an A rank! No matter I will combat with my own clones." And with that Hitoshi used his Mizu Bunshin no jutsu to make himself some water clones. Then the duel commenced. First Naruki's clones started coming out of no where trying to maul Hitoshi's. But because his had substance they put on a good fight. Naruki's clones were defeated in about a minute. Then Naruki tried using his Kaze Ya no jutsu but it failed to reach hitoshi in time. So in that three second opening Hitoshi used his inferno jutsu that he learned last time to get him off balance on the water. And it worked Naruki lost his chakra balance and fell in the water. Just when his head came up Hitoshi (just Hitoshi) performed the Suirou no Jutsu over Naruki. Hitoshi said with a smile on his face said, "Guess I win." So he made the prison collapse and got Naruki out of the water. They Talked for a bit and said their goodbyes and Hitoshi decided to go for another quick swim before continuing.

[Nira]

Pretty nice... +5

20/30

[raiden]

(20/30)
After Hitsohi's Swim he decided to continue with his training. He once again got back on top of the water and summoned his Mizu Bunshin for hopefully his second to last practice. He got in sync with his cone and they began, they both positioned their feet, charged chakra into their hands, performed the hand seals and yelled out, "Suirou no Jutsu!" The prisons appeared and attached to their hands at maximum size. They started to last for about 10 minutes before they collapsed. Hitoshi was so frustrated that he used his katana to kill his clone. After realizing what he'd done he summoned him again while laughing. After he was summoned again they continued with the training. Once again they positioned their feet, charged chakra into their hands, performed the hand seals and yelled out, "Suirou no Jutsu!" The prisons appeared once again and attached themselves to their hands. The jutsu lasted for about 15 minutes and then collapsed. Hitoshi was now really angry, this had gone on for too long and he had to finish this jutsu. So He and his clone performed the steps twice as fast but accurate and got out the prisons and had felt a mass amount of chakra in them when all of a sudden, the two spheres merged together to create an even bigger sphere but the sphere was too much for the clone so he disappeared. "Damn it," Hitoshi said, "If I don't get this under control I'm screwed!" So He focused all of his chakra into his hands to try and punch away the ball looming towards him. It didn't have any affect so He summoned a clone. He performed Housenka no Jutsu while his clone performed inferno and together the ball evaporated. After that his clone vanished and Hitoshi (tired as can be) decided to take another break.

[Umehara]

+6

Almost there.

[raiden]

(26/30)
When Hitoshi finishes his break he has a feeling that this will be the time he finishes this long jutsu. He gets back ontop of the water and summons his clone. But his one feels...different than his other clones. For some reason the chakra is more intense in this one that in the others. But He digresses and continues with his training. From the start he and his clone are completely in sync. So when they perform the hand seals and summon their prisons the cone doesn't lose his place. So they both positioned their feet, charged chakra into their hands, performed the hand seals and yelled out for the final time, "Suirou no Jutsu!" They both summon up spheres that attach to their hands at maximum size. They even stayed there more more than thirty minutes. Then When Htoshi let his collapse the clone's was still up. So he tried to see how long the clone could hold the water. He started to run around the clone and still he didn't budge. He started performing jutsu from all directions and still the clone didn't budge. And finally he returned to the village to get some dangos and when he came back with them the clone was still holding the sphere. Hitoshi was amazed he seemed he has mastered this jutsu after all. But still he wanted to see what he could do without the clone so he dismissed the clone and performed the seals on his own. He got a sphere at maximum size that lasted over another 30 minutes. In fact when a bunch of sand collected inside it, the water pressure caused it to from a giant condensed ball of mud that when he kicked went flying and crushed a small boulder. He had definatly mastered this jutsu.

[iaiden]

Lol. For future reference, just HOPE that the jutsu is learned. XD They could mess you up and make you do a 1-TP post.

Fortunately, that's not me. XD

+4 TP. Learned. Add to bio and enjoy it.

- Uchiha Atsuhiro, Game Master.

(( I forgot I was on my second account. So for future reference, this "Iaiden" account cannot give you TP. Sorry about that. Go ahead and count this, though. ))

[raiden]

Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique)
Rank: "D" "C" "B" "A" "S"Rank
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: A Genjutsu in which causes the opponent to see a grand horrifying vision. A Technique that is used by most of the ANBU kind but is known for all GenJutsu users in order to scare their opponents greatly hoping to perhaps make them run off in fear.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: The GenJutsu Non Specialist is only capable of learning up to the "B" Rank version of this technique. Depending on the Rank of the technique is dependent on how well, how far, as well as how large the user is capable of using this technique.
Description: The user creates and holds the rat handsign. As the user does so the figment of leaves begins to circle all around in circular fashion as the opponent is engulfed into the GenJutsu. Then the technique takes in place as what the user wishes the opponent to see they are capable of seeing. The figment however has to be considered to be a horrifying state of creation. When first learned the user is capable of creating horrifying images within Tiny to Small size. The user is also capable of creating an image within a Twenty Meter radius of the user. When the user learns the "C" Rank version they are capable of creating Medium to Large Size horrifying creations with a distance of Thirty Meters in radius of the user. "B" Rank allows them to create a Huge Size horrifying creation with a distance of Forty Meters. "A" Rank allows them to create a Gargantuan Size horrifying creation with a distance of Fifty Meters. "S" Rank allows them to create a Horrifying image of Sixty meters. If the user is a GenJutsu Specialist by the time they learn the "B" Rank version of the technique the user is capable of creating the image without the figment of leaves as a basis. With a GenJutsu Master the user is capable of creating the figment image without the figment of leaves as a basis when they learn the "C" Rank version of the technique. NonSpecialist will always create the figment of leaves.
Limit: GenJutsu Specialist is capable of going into all ranks of this technique.

Genjutsu, the ability to confuse the opponent and make them see what the user wants them to see. It's also the ability to make other people crap their pants when they get the living day lights scared out of them. Thats why Hitoshi had high marks in genjutsu in the academy and why he got the Narakumi no Jutsu from one of his dad's friends who's an ANBU black op. He ran to the training grounds to try out this move. But first he needed a test subject so he bit his finger to get out some blood and summoned big boss. When he appeared he asked, "What is it that you need from me?" Hitoshi said, "I need to practice a genjutsu but no one in the village wants to do it with me because it's the Narakumi no Jutsu. So because I know ocelots are brave and aren't easily scared by anything I wanted to see If I could practice it on you."The ocelot looked at him and said "I'd be happy to help, I'll let you know how it is each time and will display my reaction if it is that scary." And with that they began

The ocelot Got up and was ready for the genjutsu. Hitoshi put his right leg in back and made eye contact with big boss. He held out his hand in the seal of the rat and said, "Narakumi no Jutsu" and all of a sudden the ocelot was staring with a blank view into his eyes. From Big boss' point of view the gen jutsu wasn't scary. It was a temple with a big statue of death holding an hour glass and a purple and black coloring all over the place. There were no monsters and the brave ocelot wasn't afraid. After five minutes Hitoshi broke the genjutsu and asked the ocelot what he saw. He told him and Hitoshi wasn't surprised, after all this is a high ranking jutsu (even for a C rank version) and was used mostly by the ANBU black ops. So he had to try again. He kept the same position and used the seal. This time the ocelot saw the same background, except the statue of Death was moving with the knife in its mouth. The only movements it made was a side to side looking and looking at the ocelot. There were also two strange looking zombies. After another 5 minutes the genjutsu was broken and The ocelot told him what he saw. He realized that it was almost dark and that the genjutsu consumed a lot of chakra so they decided to call it a night and come back later or tomorrow.

[Naegi˚ 苗木]

+4

{4/30}

[raiden]

{4/30}
When Hitoshi went back to the training grounds big boss was already there waiting for him, he didn't even have to summon him. "well your here early." Hitoshi said. "I knew you would need my services again, so I just decided to show them a bit early." The ocelot got up and started to pace around this was the indicator that he was ready. So Hitoshi once again took one step back and had his right foot in front and his left in back. He performed the rat hand seal and hept eye contact with the ocelot. Then he said, "Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu" and then the ocelot sat down and was in a daze. This time the background had stayed with the purple and black color and the staue of death came alive again staring at big boss. Then after a while 4 strange looking hellish creatures came out and tried to scare the ocelot. It didn't work he continued to stay immovable. After Hitoshi broke the jutsu big boss went up to him and told him what he saw. Hitoshi sat down and said, "well at least I'm making progress (slow progress)." So they tried it again. The ocelot started to move, Hitoshi positioned himself and then performed the rat sign and said, "Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu" and once again the ocelot felt the affect of then genjutsu. The background was the same, black and purple, except this time it started to slightly move up and down creating a slime affect. Then the statue of death started to laugh and stare and the person occasionally showing an hour glass full of sand about to run out with the ocelots name on it. Then About 5 or six stange hellish creatures started to appear again and walk slowly towards the ocelot. Trying to scare it once again.It didn't work as once again the ocelot stayed still. When the jutsu was broken the ocelot told him what he saw. Hitoshi then took another sigh and decided that he had enough chakra to go one more time before taking a break. So the ocelot was ready to feel the affect of the jutsu but another gennin stepped in the way as soon as Hitoshi performed the seal and said, "Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu" He had stopped dead in his tracks. For a newly made gennin what he saw would haunt him every night. The walls were black and purple creating the same slime affect. The staute of death burst open to reveal the true death. Death rushed up to the gennin with the knife it its mouth and just stared at him. Then with a wavw of his hand 10 hellish monsters appeared and started to jump on the gennin starting to chew on his flesh. In the real world the gennin was screaming and wetting himself so Hitoshi broke the jutsu. When the gennin realized that it was over he collapsed. So Hitoshi dismissed big boss and carried the gennin to the hospital.

[Naegi˚ 苗木]

How about a +5 this time. n__n

{9/30}

[raiden]

{9/30}
When Hitoshi got back from the hospital he bit his finger, performed the handseals and summoned big boss. When the smoke cleared and he came out he went up to Hitoshi and asked, "how is the boy?" "He'll be fine," he said, "he's just in shock from what he saw." The ocelot let out a growl (that Hitoshi guessed was supposed to be a laugh) and said, "Well I guess judgining by what he saw it must have been pretty dcary. But ocelots don't scare so easily so by that time you make me wet myself you'll have mastered this jutsu (and in time for halloween)" So with that they started again.Big boss stood as still as a tree waiting for the moment. Hitoshi perfromed the hand seal and said, "Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu" and once again the boss was in a trance. This time the walls were moving up and down and spininng around him. The statue of death turned real and rushed up to him. Gave a smile and said "WELCOME TO HELL!" Just then the ceiling began to drip blood and at the top was his son hanging from the ceiling along with most of the ocelot pack. Then about 4 hellish creatures came out and started attacking him trying to rip him in half inside out. After about 3 minutes big boss said, "Hitoshi enough end it." And with that he broke the jutsu. He rushed up to the boss. "are you Ok?" he asked. Then Big boss slapped him with his claw and said "Now you comprehend what fear is?! Now you realize that you can make an ocelot begin to feel a breif tremor of fear?! Now do it again and show me the definition of fear."Unfortunately when Big boss hit Hitoshi he knocked him out so he'll have to wait untill he wakes up.

[{Hyuuga} NeoSen]

Hm, I must have been seeing things. What I last saw was 9/10, maybe it was just me.

+3

12/30

[raiden]

(12/30)
When Hitoshi woke up he realized that he had been out for over 3 weeks! Big boss must have put a pretty big hit on his head for him to have been knocked out that long. After coming to he realized he was in a hospital so He got up and signed out saying that he was fine. He then Realized that he would have to continue his training so he ran to his training grounds to do it. He performed the summoning jutsu and summoned big boss. He appeared larger then before, But then again he had been out for over 3 weeks so that was no surprise to him. "Well it seems sleeping beauty woke up." He said. "Ha ha very funny boss," Hitoshi replied, "Now shall we continue with our training?"

"Yes"Big boss replied and with that they continued with the training. Hitoshi took his stance with one foot in front of the other and held out the rat sign aimed at Big boss. He then Forced all of his chakra into his hands and eyes thinking of what he saw in his dream. While he was unconscious in the hospital he had a dream. He probably thought it was a side effect of him practicing the jutsu but it was one of the scariest things he'd ever seen. He had been in a Total back room. He couldn't see anything. Then torches turned on with his father on a wall pinned to it by knives and swords. The slowly 3 swords were forced into his chests taking the life right out of him. Then Death came and dragged Him down yelling, "YOU'RE GOING TO HELL!!!" They death grabbed he and his dead father and dragged the down through the floor into a Black area only lit of by hell fire in every corner. Then Hitoshi hit the ground and watched as death took his father's soul and turned it into one of his mindless monsters which then went towards Hitoshi. Accompanied by with was an army of monsters which the reached Hitoshi and brought him to Death. Death Grabbed him and said "YOUR SOUL IS NEXT HITOSHI. AND DON'T WORRY I'LL MAKE IT SLOW AND PAINFUL" And as soon as he reached Into Hitoshi and he stared to feel the pain, He had woken up in the hospital.

Hitoshi kept that dream in his head as he practiced on Big Boss. As he said, "Narakumi no Jutsu" He felt the image of the dram leave him and connect to big boss. Though the true dream itself had not manifested into big boss something almost as scary went into the proud ocelot. He appeared in a large room which he guessed was hell. Then all of a sudden The area lit up in a presentation of hell fire which then he saw people and strange creatures chained on a pillar near it burning slowly in the hell fire. The he saw Creatures praying to a statue of death when all off a sudden death broke free of that statue. The Death swooped and grabbed the ocelot and said "WELL WELL A LITTLE KITTY CAT HAS COME TO PAY US A VISIT MAYBE YOU CAN MEET YOUR FRIENDS. ALL YOU HAVE TO DO IS LOOK UP". And when He did he saw the rest of his pack nailed to the ceiling, covered in blood and cut open. Then he looked back at death who smiled and saids, " NOW IT'S TIME FOR YOU TO JOIN THEM HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!" And with that he took his knife and started to gut big boss. But before he would fell the pain he yelled out "End it Hitoshi end it now!" With that Hitoshi ended the jutsu. Big boss told him what he saw and then said, "That took up a lot of your chakra you should get something to eat, summon me if you need to continue" with that he vanished. Hitoshi left the training grounds to go and get some ramen.

[Tieren]

+4

(16/30)