Training~ [private.]

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Ridairekuto
Rank: "C", "B", "A", "S" Rank
Skill: Nin
Effect: When the user is hit by any form of lightning (Includes jutsu's or natural) the user is able to make the lightning go threw their body and by channeling their chakra is able to redirect the lightning threw their hand anywhere they wish but must be a quick action.
Special: None
Drawback: If used to 5 times in a row the user's hand's start to get electrical burns making it impossible for the use to close their hand.
Description: When the user knows that they are about to be hit by lightning they start to channel their chakra threw their body to impress the impact, when they are hit the chakra then quickly lead's the lightning their the open channel way then made to send it out threw their hand. Depending on the rank of the technique means the rank that the user may deflect and redirect. When the user learns the "C" Rank they are capable of redirecting "C" Rank techniques. When the user learns the "B" Rank they are capable of redirecting "B" Rank techniques. This continues on till "S" Rank.
Limit: Lightning Release Skill (Raiton no Jutsu)


The clouds above me oozed and billowed across the awakening sun, casting the meadow into a shadowy darkness. A jagged bolt of lightning ripped the sky in half and as I begin, wincing as each icy raindrop pierced my skin. The violent wind whipped my hair into my face. Thunder rolled across the sky, seeming to crack the world in half and reveal the fury of the gods. It reverberated around the green landscape, eerily echoing as I desperately searched for shelter.
I've found none

“I've got no choice, but face it out here.” I stop in my tracks and wait for the man show himself. As if he's been waiting this entire time for me to tough it out, he poof out of thin air. With a smirk on his face, he looks at me and says “Looks like this is the perfect weather to train”. I flick my tongue inside my mouth and roll my shoulders as if I give up. I wanted to do this training somewhere dry, but it looks like I won't get that. I nodded to him while glaring, most likely my trainer had planned this.

I create some distance from us, but only enough to see what is coming at me. The veteran ninja began performing handseals. His hand and fingers move in a blinding speed motion and suddenly. I'm practically stunned in his motion as suddenly a light blue zig-zag comes at me. I break out of my trance and get into stance. As he instructed me earlier, I begin channeling my chakra all around me. I picture my chakra in a glow and wrap my entire body with it as the lightning jutsu hits me.

I wave my arm and try to redirect to another somewhere else. However, I'm not quick enough for it. My body drench and pain shoots through my entire body. I whimper and groan in pain as I fall onto the ground. “Are you finish already,” ask my trainer in a mocking tone. Before I beginning to freeze from the harsh cold water. Now, hot and in pain. I shake my head at the man. “Not-not yet!” Before I realized it, I've fallen to my knees.

I'm unaware when that happen, I have no memory of doing so. I slowly get up and can only imagine what I've taken was only a small and weak jutsu. The man doesn't wait to see if I am ready as he performs quick handseals. I quickly channel my chakra and prepare for what coming. I channel my chakra once again, feeling warm and safe as my chakra wraps and holds me. The energy spirals around as I take the blue energy wave that collides into me.

I let out a loud groaning noise. I move my hand and channel my inner energy with the bolt of energy. I redirect and push the bolt of energy into a different location. The small chakra wave of lightning nature hits the ground nearby as my body seems to be smoking. I lift my head up and glare at my trainer as he smirks. “How-how was that?!”

[Draven]

+10

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Raiton: Sakurai Uzu, 雷光: 丹色 木 雷光 渦, (Lightning Style: Cherry Blossom Lightning Swirl)
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user forms a shield out of lightning petals.
Special: “Hand Seals”
Drawback: Raiton: Sakurai must be active.
Description: The user forms the hand seals, focusing their chakra into the Sakurai petals around them. Releasing the lightning chakra, the user sends the petals spinning in tornado around their body, shielding them from sight and defending them by exuding equal and opposite force to the attack, negating it. The shield can withstand two C rank or lower strikes before being disrupted by further attack. Anyone coming into contact with the swirling Sakurai petals will find themselves suffering a mild shock akin to a severe first-degree burn. Tangible elements without strong electromagnetic fields (Doton and Mokuton) pass through this without difficulty.
Limit: Must have Raiton. Must know Raiton: Sakurai.


The wind blows harder and become more harsh. The clear liquid drops soaks through my clothing, sending chills and shudders through me. A loud boom can be heard from up above. So loud, so sudden, my body jerks and I scream out. The trainer laughs at me as he seems to be not bother by the storm at all. Lightning came, a brilliant shock of white in the graphite sky, forking silently to the unsuspecting ground - the thunderous boom always calling its warning too late.


“To avoid being struck by lightning and a cold. Let us stop for the day,” I suggested. However, he shake his head in disagreement. “None sense, the rain and lightning is part of your training.” I let out an ugh sound. He perform some handseals and create lightning Sakura petal petals. The trainer seems not to be bother by the rain water at all. They're light blue, and there's way more than I can stand here to count. I can only guess to be about of hundred of them? He performs a few more and suddenly they spiral around.

The sakura of lightning move as if they're protecting him. I see, it's a defense jutsu this time while it could also be used as a form of offense. He comes over to me to and show me what the handseals are exactly as I watch carefully. I match my fingers with his movement. However, just to trick me he sometimes add in a snake or horse in the mix. Because I'm so caught up in matching with his. The seals messes me up and I completely fuck up.

I glare at him and he just laughs at me. I shove him away and tell to walk away if he's not going to be helpful. For the most part, I got the handseals down. I channel my inner energy, my chakra. My body shudders from the wind and rain. My teeth chatters which is making it is making it harder than usual. First, I create my petals around me. They zip and zap from the rain and disperse, great. This requires me to do a several times until the petals finally stay in place.

I follow up with doing new handseals and focusing my attention on the petals to make them spiral. On my first attempt, they begin to spiral. Not so hard, I think to myself. On the second attempt, the petals do not move at all. I groan out and not sure how much longer I am able to last outside of this rain being so wet. I perform is several more times, a few times the rain and cold messes me up. However, a few times in there I perform it completely.

[Draven]

+10 learned

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Raiton: Sakurai Ran, 雷光: 丹色 木 雷光 ラン, (Lightning Style: Cherry Blossom Lightning Run)
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user creates paralyzing shots out of the Sakurai petals.
Special: “Hand Seals”
Drawback: Raiton: Sakurai must be active.
Description: The user forms the hand seals, focusing their chakra into the Sakurai petals around them. The user then releases the lightning chakra into the Sakurai petals, suspending them in the air in front of them. The user then catapults about ten petals forward with incredible speed, about that of a senbon. When impacting a target, these petals each cause shocking and paralysis that results in paralysis in the immediate afflicted area for two rounds.
Limit: Must have Raiton. Must know Raiton: Sakurai.



Streaks of pure white crackled against a stormy blanket of grey, shrouding hot silver clouds with its blinding incandescence, emanating the might of an imminent tempest. Jagged bolts endlessly protrude, filling the sky with undying flashes of radiance as I watch from inside of this cabin. Once my lips turned purple, the trainer decided to go inside and warm up. I've even changed clothes into something dry and warm. The clothing are beneath me, but it's something. I drink some hot chocolate before long, I get the signal from him as the trainer gesture his hands out the door. “What, but it's still raining..”

He laugh and exit the cabin without hearing another word from me. I just finally gotten warm and this storm is bullshit. I get into the rain, once again for this lightning style jutsu training. I get out into the muddy field, quickly getting drench from the rain as the storm roars. I'm clearly not happy about this, but he on the other hand, seems fine. When he change clothes, nothing was missing. Once again, he perform handseals and create more Sakura blossoms. I see, so we're still on this theme, I think to myself.

The petals seem not to be bother by the rain and flies off at great speed and hit a rock. Creating a small charge at it and smoke. That didn't seem to hard to do. Of course he gives me that look with “good luck, you're going to need it.” I shake my fist at him as I get ready while kinda scared of being struck by lightning. I perform the hand seals and create the blossom. I quickly do the second set and throw off several sakura at the target. For the most part, it worked out just as plan. However, the amount was not enough as my trainer did as he kindly tells me. “Nice going, but it lacking idiot.”

Doesn't he know who I am or where I'm from?! Why did my family send him to help with this? Oh yeah, because I'm branch family. I perform the handseals and focus chakra several times. Each time, I try to send more petals to it. At this level, it only one each time. Sometimes, the petals wouldn't make it due to the rain, winds and just disappears. I don't like this training, not one bit. I sigh out and keep going, only to appeals my trainer and get his approval. The petals move elegantly and fast in motion. I'm not sure how long I keep this up.

Finally, I hit the amount of petals my trainer has performed. I've send out about ten petals at once at the target location. They move so fast and hit the target. The target is already cover sparking and smoking from past attempts. As my recent attempt hit, it creates a bright spark to the point it's blinding! “Oh wow, nice I think you got it-” his voice is cut off as a real an azure blue zig-zag lightning comes striking down and hit the target. I let out a loud ahh and make a run for it in fear. On my right, is my trainer whose doing the same thing as we head back inside the cabin!

[Draven]

+10

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Lightning Clone
Rank: "B"
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user creates a clone made out of lightning that would be used for battle against opponents.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: When first learned the user is capable of creating one clone that are within the size of Medium size. The lightning looks similiar to that of a human but the chakra makes the lightning makes the clone look like a normal person. The clone may only last for an amount of two rounds per class level starting at "D" Class. Every time the user learns this technique the user may create another clone. The user must add in an amount of chakra to allow the clone to perform lightning techniques that the user wishes the clone to perform at later time. When the clone it hit the clone forces an electrical charge that may shock the opponent greatly immobilizing the opponent.
Limit: Lightning release

The wind was roaring in the great bare trees of the centre, as if it were some wild dark grove deep in a forgotten land. The leaves scud over the ground and take small flights into the air. As I toss my head back and raise my eyes to the sky a smile spreads from cheek to cheek. The branches sway like the arms of a soccer crowd and it their chaotic dance they are hypnotically beautiful. My mind relaxes and I feel the happiness of my life bubble up from within. The light I keep inside begins to escape from my pores.

Were it not for the passers by I would spin like a little girl again, arms out wide and fingers spread, but instead I keep my hands in my pockets and inhale deeply. This wind carries the fragrance of the woodland, the essence of my childhood days. The storm has passed some time ago from the previous days as I head back to my training location, but this time with several trainers. They all stand out, joking around and not doing a whole lot it seems like. I click my tongue and wave at them as they turn around.

I don't know any of them. I wave my hand out and one of them approaches me. “Today, we're going to teach you a clone jutsu, lightning style~” I'm struck back by this and tilt my head in interest. They gather around and perform handseals. From three different trainers to about 20 of them! They all move into a location as one of the trainers throws a rock and one of them burst out. If someone was close or something, it would shock them. Another of the lightning clonse does hand-seals and show off it can also do lightning jutus.

Suddenly they all start attacking each other. They perform taijutsu and explode once hit. I see, this could be more interesting than I originally thought. “Ok, so they're very useful.” I copy down their handseals and start practicing that first. It takes me a little before I finally get it right. Several times I've messed up completely. Although this portion is no big deal, it just getting into the habit of which hands go when and at what speed.

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The hard part is channeling your chakra correctly. My first attempt is horrible. The clone is the size of an ant. One of the trainers look at the clone, then at me, then back at the clone, and back at me. “Don't say anything.” He smirks and walks back at the others. They look at each other and laughs at my attempt. I shake my fist at them and continue to try, I finally get one at my correct size for my jutsu. The clone however, looks nothing like me and looks completely useless with a dead pan expression. The trainers laugh even more

“If you guys are here to just laugh at me, then leave,” I ordered. The frustration builds and I think I might explode - I take a deep breath. I want to shout at them, have a tantrum by rolling on the ground and beat my hands on the ground like a toddler with my feet kicking. I want to scream, while cursing, but I don't want to say words I don't can't take back and have them abandon me while spreading ill rumors, bunch of main branch assholes.

“Look, you're not channeling the chakra correctly and not doing the hand-seals at right. Your chakra control seems to be lacking. Your control over chakra should enhance the more you try.” I let out a deep breath. These guys seem like children who never grown up with them mocking me. Not even sure why so many is here. My next attempt fails like last time, nothing to show for it. I look at them and hope for some sort of or another. They give me nothing. I continue like for another hours with nothing but failed attempts until nothing shows up, my chakra ran empty.

I fall onto the ground, breaking down a bit. I'm not some sort of genius or anything like that. I just had trained with my friends. Learning at the same time as them. So, course I've failed and had a hard time. Failure is like my best friend, it's always there. Sometimes, I create a distance between me and him with success. However, success usually leaves me and leave me to failure. My back is on the floor as I huff out, trying to regain my stamina and chakra. One of the trainer comes over to me, and hands me a water bottle as I rest. “It's going to take you a while to learn this, it's a b rank jutsu. Failure is going to be with you for a while, but success is there if you keep trying.”

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There are days I wonder if my brain is a car engine or a car exhaust. Am I the master of what I think or are my ideas the result of deep thinking I'm only loosely self-aware of? These thoughts often comes while I rest and trying to figure this out. There is a third possibility of course, that is is both, and it depends on my feelings at the time. I feel most clear thinking and in control when I am calm and happy, more driven by impulses when I am fearful and anxious. My eyes stare into the bright blue sky that previous colored grey from the story of last night.

I slowly get to my feet while drinking my water bottle as I look over to the trainers. I wonder how they know what I was thinking earlier with success and failure. Maybe they're more similar to me than I thought, maybe they're mind readers, or perhaps I'm over thinking things like usual. One of the trainers, sitting on a fallen tree looks over. “Try channeling your chakra for now. Lightning nature is much different from earth style.” I take his advice and begin channeling my chakra in lightning nature. I create an aura of lightning around me.

I begin glowing and sparks fly around me. My hair stick up into the air while I channel my chakra. I put hand out and try to create a mini spark, but a controlling spark. First it just flies and creates blinding light. Not very controlling or stable. I continue to do this for several hours at a time in hope it works out. Over time, the lightning becomes more and more stable. More and more controlling as well as I get closer to grasping full extent of controlling the chakra nature. Not sure how long I've at this, quite a long time I know that much.

Time to see how much further I gotten in learning this damn clone jutsu, I think to myself. The others I flick my tongue and begin performing handseals and channel my chakra at the same time. I pour chakra in what I think is the correct amount. Finally, a clone appears by me, and seems to be perfect at first glance. It looks just like me and it even smiles at me. The trainers eyes open wide in shock. Before I had the chance to brag, the clone disappears from thin air. “FUCK!”

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There was a delicious moment where my face washed blank with confusion, like my brain cogs couldn't turn fast enough to take in the information from my wide eyes. Every muscle of her body just froze. The clone was here, it existed! It even moved and looked just like me! Then it was gone, what the hell?! My fist rise in the air and shake like it anger. My face is red both in anger and in shame. I had thought I've finally got this jutsu down and everything was finish! The trainer look at each other and burst in a laugh.

I pick up some rocks from the ground and begin slinging them. The trainers run off while laughter. My chest rise and lowers rapidly. Hot oxygen enter my lunges and hastily leaves as I start to calm down. I wouldn't be as mad if those guys didn't laugh or were somewhat helpful! Ah, whatever. I grab my water bottle and begin drinking. The liquid binges down my throat as I finish it off. I wipe my face off and try to figure what just happen there! I start performing the hand motion while channeling my energy into a smooth motion.

The clone appears and in full texture. The other me smiles and suddenly poof in smoke. I stand there, with my eyes staring into the empty space that once occupy from a clone of me, a being made from the seal and chakra with lightning nature. I grit my teeth and do the hand gestures again and there we go...And there it goes. Gone, just like it was never there! “I'm going to get this f'king jutsu!” I shout, kick dirt on the ground and throw my fist in every direction. My chakra is fine as I'm not so worn out yet.

I calm myself down I think back on those asshole words. I walk around in the forest, trying to calm myself down. Letting my mind find peace. It's possible I am my own worse enemy as I can't get it down because I was too round up from others. Bunch of jackasses, I think to myself. After walking around and getting my thoughts together. I get back in my training area and perform my handseals. My inner energy is in harmony and sync with my hands. I picture another me in my hand. Finally, a perfect copy of myself appears before me. I wait for it to disappear, but doesn't.

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My arms crosses over one each other on my chest. I raise my chest and my chin while grinning to myself. The three trainers shows up and begin poking my clone. “WATCH WHAT YOU DOING,” I shouted. I don't want them to screw it up and make it disappear after finally making it stay. One of them looks over to me. “If it done right, it won't be done in by finger pokes.” They poke the clone in every location they can. The clone me is not getting happy about this and shows it on his face. “Do you mind? Personal space!”

They all stop while staring at us both with grin on their faces. I don't like it, something tells me I've not done yet. “Well, let see if it can perform any lightning jutsu.” The clone me smirk and give them the middle finger. It perform hand motions while trying to channel chakra inside it, but nothing happens. Everyone stands around, watching expecting something to happen. The clone me tries again in attempt for something to happen, any jutsu will do! However, nothing happens at all, sadly.

“Alright, you've made it appear, but can't do any ninjutsu yet. Thankfully, this the last portion of the training. You now have to give it enough chakra to not only appear, but to peform jutsu without over doing it.” I dispel the clone and perform handseals while channeling my chakra. I do it just like before and make sure everything is correct. The clone appears again and begin doing handseals. What comes out is nothing, but embarrassment. I gave it enough chakra to do something alright, but it not any ninjutsu.

The clone farts and gives out a really bad smell. The trainers and me makes a lot of distance between us and it. The clone and the real me face are red. The trainer laugh their ass off and if I was alone. I laugh too, but seeing as I am the spot light and not alone. I cannot but hide my face in shame. I dispel the clone and begin performing the handseals again. I pour more chakra into the clone than last time. The clone shows up and explode instantly. I gave it too much chakra and mess everything up. Getting embarrass messed me up completely, damn it!

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I'm still doing this...I'M STILL DOING THIS?! The clone keep having mishaps or unable to perform jutsu. I get to the point I run out of chakra and nearly passes out. In fact, I do passes out at some point. I don't remember when it happened, but it did. I suddenly wake up with water pouring on my face. I jerk up and into battle position. My fists ready for a fight as I'm confuse what is going on. The damn trainers giggling to themselves while watching me. I really hate these guys, they're fucking assholes.

“You've been out for a few hours now, we decided to wake you up.” I huff and glare while slowly regain my composer. “Look, if you can't get it right by the end of the day. We're going to leave and report it to the main branch.” I clutch my fist and now I really want to murder them. How are they threaten me like this! “Shut your mouth and just watch me.” I begin performing handseals and moving exactly what is needed. I don't add in extra movements or anything. I channel my chakra correctly and create a perfect copy of myself.

I move in sync with my clone as it now occupy space that wasn't there before. The sun is slowly moving down in the horizon. The temperature is steadily lowering itself as time tick away. I perform the seals and create petals around me in a light blue made of energy. The clone however, does nothing at all. I dispel the clone and repeat the process. “Again,” I shouted. I do it again, and create the lightning clone. The clone make the seals and does nothing, I dispel the clone and try again.

My body begin to shake and tremble. My body feels heavy and my heart is racing. The other trainers don't say a word to me and watch with their cold stare. They're so cold and uncaring. I can't pay attention to them as I keep going. Pushing myself over the limit and create my clone. My clone looks worse off than I do, mirroring my chakra I guess. It perform handseals, slowly. I can no longer try to move in sync with the clone. The clone finally channels and creates sakura petals around it. I fall to the ground while smiling, seeing the clone finally able to perform jutsu. It disappears once body hits the ground and my mind goes blank.

[Draven]

+48

Each post is lacking about 1 paragraph in size.

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I feel as though energy is being constantly drained out of me, as though I'm leaking electricity. In this case, chakra. I'm so exhausted, too tired to eat, over-tired, fell asleep in an instant. I can no longer concentrate. I'm slowly heading home, feeling like a zombie as my feet drag onto the ground. My shoulders are slumped over and my head is facing the ground. I finally manage to get home and drop into my bed, resting. The cover wraps around me into a taco, the room feels cool and comfortable. The pillow is cool and so soft...

I wake up the next day, and don't feel fully rested. My eyes are blood shot as I drag myself back to the training area. None of the trainers are here, and it's unlikely they'll show up again. My hands move slowly and my chakra is being channel. The jutsu is learned, but now I need to properly master it because I can ever use it. My fingers and hands motion together. Moving in a set pattern and a set number. Chakra is flowing through me. From a glance, it could appear I'm doing everything half-ass.

However, this is me 100% in my current, tired state. The chakra begins forming a shape. Starting from the legs and up. Finally, creating a perfect me standing in place, looking a little better than I am right now. He begins performing handseals and channeling the chakra I gave him. Finally, creating Sakura petals around him. The petals look like something from a flower, but light blue. It's dangerous to touch them or you get zapped. The flow around the clone and seems the jutsu worked as I planned.

Then the clone and jutsu poof in thin air. If you were too close, you'll get zapped in an instant. I re-perform the handseals. Chakra flowing from my stomach and my chakra points. They create another me once again, standing there in all his wonder and awe. He repeats the same thing as the last clone, and the same thing happens to him. The cycle repeats itself so many times and not sure if it me, or my lack of chakra?

Without the teachers, I'm not sure what I am doing right or wrong here. Even if they were here, I'm not entirely sure how helpful they would be. I take in a lot of oxygen and exhale deeply as I continue this trend of training. A couple of times, the clone has actually lasted and done the jutsu, and other times. It just explode and poof as it never existed. I don't give up my resolve and continue to practice!

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How many times have I repeat these handseals? These hands move and connect to each other. The combination is drilled into my head to the point I can't forget or mess it up. My chakra is poured out and given out perfectly. Likewise, to the point I can't forget the amount. I can even give more or less for other jutsu depending on it rank. The chakra, the seals, and the jutsu itself completely drilled and unforgettable to me at this point. The clone appears into the world, like a new born child.

Then it disappears as if it never existed at all, just like that. Never a thing of existing, never a thing. The clone pop into the world, perform a few jutsu here and there. Doing what it can do and such. Then I destroy it by an attack or remove the chakra. All depending on my mood. I'm killing myself over and over. Letting it exist only long enough to serve it purpose. My mood is drained, my chakra is reaching it limit. I continue to kill myself until my chakra reach the very limits. Until finally, I'm too tired and sweaty to move.

[Draven]

+12

You should put in a TP tracker with each post. Makes things, consistent.

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Shunshin no Jutsu - Oshi (Body Flicker Technique - Push)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu/TaiJutsu
Effect: A Jutsu that allows a user to rush forward in almost instantaneous speed. Used to draw the user close to the opponent.
Special: ---
Drawback: May use 3 times a day. May perform 1 more each time learned. Passing amount renders the user's legs immobile due to severe pain. Unable to perform again unless gained medical treatment. Must move through an opening. Unable to maneuver around obstructing objects. Can't attack while performing any Shunshin or Variation.
Description: User is able to move forward in a straight line along the ground in almost instantaneous untraceable speed while temporarily masking the user's movements within 10 meters. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by focusing the user's chi along the ankles and foot. User mostly moves just with their ankles and feet. Jutsu takes up no movements. User may only use this Jutsu half of the movements may allow in a single round while rounding down. Example: User has 5 movements, user is able to perform Jutsu 2 times per round.
Limit: Universal NinJutsu or Universal TaiJutsu.

I run, feet kissing the land. Perhaps a little while ago I would have balked at idea of running so far and fast, now I relish the prospect. These feet were made to travel at speed and as light as the paws of a lion. Breathing steady, heart strong - a ninja must run! The warm humidity of the forest made me feel sticky and suffocated. Although, it's spring so maybe its just all the running. My clothes and hair, slick with perspiration, clings to my skin. I swat another pesky insect. Sweat rolled down my skin in thick, salty beads. I can feel my heart throbbing inside my chest.

My skin feel like it's roasting. I began bouncing slightly as I jogged, which wore me out quickly. I've settled to stumbling along behind the other as fast as I could. I'm vaguely aware of stinging in my leg. I was exhausted by noon. By then they had reached the stream. I went to my knees and filled my water bottle, trying to catch my breath. My lungs felt they will burst and my throat so dry. I bring the clear water up to my lips. I press it and allow the liquid flow down my throat while heaving.

After drinking, and catching my breath. I bolted down the forest path like an Olympic champion at the start gun. I covered the uneven paving stones with a great lolloping gait that suggested my ankles were made of tightly coiled springs rather than the sinew and bone. Each one of my mighty strides were worth at least two of the trainers. With the slightest of effort they out run me, barely breaking a sweat and not panting in the least. The others lean against a tree, waiting for me the straggler to catch up, grinning.

Once caught up, I embrace like a mother waiting for it child to return home from school. My mouth hangs open, my body is trembling as I fall on my knees. “Catch your breath, we've got more to covered,” of the trainers said. I've got the same assholes as before to help me with this training. I need to build stamina and speed in my legs. No matter how great my legs are, I'm still no much for them. If my legs are springs, then their legs are made of something other worldly! I hug the tree tighter, as my wind catches up with me.

My shirt is soak and visible dampen from the top and bottom. Not for the insects, my chest would be bare for the world. I grab my water bottle and pour it on top of my head in attempt to further cool myself off, it does very little. The three trainers begin joking and talking to themselves. Their own little group, their own group. We begin running again, they create distance between me and them rather fast.

[KoKoKo]

you need to put a tp tracker, even if it is only 10tp dude

8/10

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8/10 =.=


Slowly, I begin catching up to the group. My feet is fast and hitting the ground with loud thud noise. My mouth is hanging open as I bolt down the forest. I slowly catch up behind them. Until finally, I am with them with dust surrounding me.

[KoKoKo]

im not going to be a dick even though i think thats a +1

Learned