Senshi Odayakama

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Basic Information:
Rank: Genin (Low Ninja)
Affiliation: Hidden Mist
Shinobi: B-Class
Training Points:1965/3000
Suiton:510/500
Doton:160/500
Cooking:53/125 +10 tp gained
Observation:10 SP +5 tp gained
Phantasm:80/?
Name:Senshi Odayakama
Bloodlimit:None
Height:4,6
Weight:110
Age:10
Gender:Female
Alignment:Good (Neutral)
Birth Country:Mizu no Kuni
Village: Kirigakure No Sato

Special: Ninjutsu Specialist, Genjutsu Specialist, Clan Non Specialist, and Taijutsu Non Specialist.

Weapons: Katana, Shuriken, Kunai.

Primary Weapon:
Sword, Longsword (Overview)
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Slashing, Sword
Effect: A weapon with a long metal blade and a hilt with a hand guard.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A One-Handed Weapon. These weapons do +8 Amour Points of Damage. A longsword (also spelled long sword, long-sword) is a type of sword characterized as having a cruciform hilt with a grip for two handed use and a straight double-edged blade of around 100–122 cm (39–48 in). The longsword is characterised not so much by a longer blade, but by a longer grip, which indicates a weapon designed for2-handed use or 1-handed use. Examples of Longswords: Katana, Jian, Tachi, Scimitr, Shinai, and Waster.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 4,000 Ryo

Secondary Items:
Shuriken, Bo (Overview)
Rank: "C" Rank
Type: Secondary, 15 per Slot, Piercing, Shuriken
Effect: A shuriken is a small piece of metal with sharpened edges, designed for throwing.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A Light Weapon. These weapons do +2 Amour Points of Damage. The Range Increment of this weapon is 5 meters. Although they are thrown weapons, shuriken are quick and easy to draw, thus allowing the user to draw such weapons without the need of a movement. A shuriken can't be used as a melee weapon. Bo-shuriken are throwing weapons consisting of a straight iron or steel spike, usually four-sided but sometimes round or octagonal in shape.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 1,500 Ryo per Slot, or 100 Ryo Each. (15)

Kunai (Overview)
Rank: "C" Rank
Type: Secondary, 2 per Slot, Piercing/Slashing, Knife
Effect: A kunai is a tool derived from the masonry trowel.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A Light Weapon. These weapons do +4 Amour Points of Damage. The Range Increment of this weapon is 5 meters. A kunai has a blade that is about less than 1 foot in length. The user gains a +10 bonus on Sleight of Hand Skill to conceal a knife on their body.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 1,000 Ryo per Slot, or 500 Ryo Each. (2)

Shuriken, Hira (Overview)
Rank: "C" Rank
Type: Secondary, 15 per Slot, Piercing, Shuriken
Effect: A shuriken is a small piece of metal with sharpened edges, designed for throwing.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A Light Weapon. These weapons do +2 Amour Points of Damage. The Range Increment of this weapon is 5 meters. Although they are thrown weapons, shuriken are quick and easy to draw, thus allowing the user to draw such weapons without the need of a movement. A shuriken can't be used as a melee weapon. Hira-shuriken are constructed from thin, flat plates of metal and generally resemble popular conceptions of shuriken.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 1,500 Ryo per Slot, or 100 Ryo Each. (15)

Non Combat Items:

Scroll: Tiny (Overview)
Rank: "C"
Type: Secondary, 1 per Slot, Book, Scroll
Effect: A roll of parchment or paper for writing or painting on. This scroll has a 10 Capacity.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A scroll is a heavy sheet of fine vellum or high-quality paper. The sheet is reinforced at the top and bottom with strips of leather slightly longer than the sheet is wide. Scrolls are usually fitted with reinforcing rods at each end rather than simple strips of leather. To protect it from wrinkling or tearing, a scroll is rolled up from both ends to form a double cylinder. (This also helps the user unroll the scroll quickly.) The scroll is placed in a tube of ivory, jade, leather, metal, or wood. Most scroll cases are inscribed with Seals which often identify the owner or the Jutsus stored on the scrolls inside. The Seals sometimes hide traps. The Center Rod of a Small Scroll 8 inches in length while it is 1.8 inch in diameter; the paper is 0.436 millimeters thick making the roll 10 feet of paper an outer diameter of 2.5 inches.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Book Shop.
Cost: 1,250 Ryo

Cloak Type 3 (Overview)
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Tailor, Slot Holder, Holds 15 Slots (15 for Items of Scroll Length), Cloak/Harness
Effect: A Cloak that holds an amount of items inside without giving a hint that the cloak may actually hold items inside.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture A Harness and Cloak that attaches to one another. This harness is attached to the chest to be held up right that have long strips of leather reaching down to the cloak that attaches to the end of the cloak. Consider each strip to be a thick belt that attaches to the chest harness. Each harness has 5 pouches that holds 1/2 a slot each. These pouches are scroll length so they are able to hold knives, senbon, kunai and other items that are the same length as a scroll. This Cloak only has 6 belts that have a total of 15 slots to carry items inside. When hands are hidden inside user gains a +10 circumstance bonus to Sleight of Hand and Pick Pocket.
Limit: These type of items may be bought inside any Tailor Shop.
Cost: 1,700 Ryo

Cloak Type 1 (Overview) [Rainbow Cloak]
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Tailor, Slot Holder, Holds 5 Slots (5 for Items of Scroll Length), Cloak/Harness
Effect: A Cloak that holds an amount of items inside without giving a hint that the cloak may actually hold items inside.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture A Harness and Cloak that attaches to one another. This harness is attached to the chest to be held up right that have long strips of leather reaching down to the cloak that attaches to the end of the cloak. Consider each strip to be a thick belt that attaches to the chest harness. Each harness has 5 pouches that holds 1/2 a slot each. These pouches are scroll length so they are able to hold knives, senbon, kunai and other items that are the same length as a scroll. This Cloak only has 2 belts that have a total of 5 slots to carry items inside. When hands are hidden inside user gains a +10 circumstance bonus to Sleight of Hand and Pick Pocket.
Limit: These type of items may be bought inside any Tailor Shop.
Cost: 900 Ryo

Character Depth[/b]

Personality: Senshi is a kind person, but also one who is oblivious at times to the way people feel due to her child like demeanor. She tends to be respectful to most people, even strangers. She dislikes people who believe they are superior over others just because of a bloodline, wealth, or such menial matters. What is needed for her respect is none of those things. All you need is the skill and humbleness not to brag. Loyalty, honor, and strength is what attracts her to liking somebody.

Senshi is studious and likes to be serious about things rather than be silly or boisterous. Not easily angered and a typically calm girl as her name. She is a thankful person and tends not to forget when she owes somebody. Well mannered and honorable thanks to the discipline she received as a child. Senshi typically studied whatever books she could when not training, her own form of relaxation at times. Her mother who was the more intellectual one often tried to mold Senshi to be like herself.

Senshi is somebody who would normally back down if challenged, but is no means a coward. She will only fight battles for either the sake of the mission or if she knows she can win. Senshi is somebody who likes to experience something new, and therefore in extension enjoys fighting new enemies. Senshi is the kind of person who appreciates new information even if its not very useful seeing she sees herself as a shinobi. She believes that there are only three reasons why any shinobi should fight according to her mother: To defend your friends and family, to defend your home, and finally...to defend your way of life. Due to this Senshi became a philosopher of sorts thinking of how she wants to live, but nothing solid yet.

Appearance:
Senshi has long brown hair that is smooth but sharp at the tips. It is long and flowing, but sometimes tangled. She has a oval like face and a clear complexion. She has a smooth nose and amber colored eyes. Her eyes are slightly oval-shaped and look calculative. Her lips are a pale white and smooth.

Senshi has a agile and petite body frame. Her skin is pale white and smooth, shiny. Senshi has no chest development yet seeing she isn't even in puberty. Her arms are thin and somewhat more skin color then the rest of her body with the exception of her legs due to working out, training. Senshi looks well toned for a girl training in the shinobi arts. Her hands are usually abnormally hot and pink.

Senshi wears a pair of cargo jeans along with a blue shirt with fishnet underneath. Senshi would wear a green jacket on top of that with the Kirigakure insignia across the back. Senshi has her bag around her stomach tied securely. Senshi would wear her headband around her neck most of the time, and tends to alternate where it goes. She wears her sword on her back tied by a black strap. She wears plain blue shinobi sandals and often has a black scarf wrapped around her neck.

Background: She was born on January 7th in Kirigakure No Sato. It was a snowy month and it was a process where her father feared for his life as Senshi's mother was yelling and trashing in the hours of labor screaming bloody murder. After being conceived all was good and my family was in awe as they had her in their arms. Their first and only child they treasured her and held her close.

After three days in the hospital and being discharged the family eagerly took their new daughter and showed their close friends and other relatives for "bragging rights". She grew bottle fed and was paraded around a bit as an infant.

Her mother took leave from being a shinobi for a while. Her mother Akane Odayakama was a doting mother who tended to spoil her daughter too much at times and was very nosy in whatever her daughter did. Her father Aishi Odayakama was a man much like Senshi personallity wise, but as the father had to be more strict not being able to be as lenient as his spouse.

As Senshi grew into her toddler years, her father taught her to read at around three years old. He read to her every night, and also went ahead and taught her the alphabet so she could read herself. Senshi loved to read and would tend to read whatever she could get her hands on and asked questions to sometimes complete strangers if she didn't understand something.

When she became four years old, her mother and father took turns teaching her the arts of the shinobi. Senshi took a while to learn the basics almost three years including the basic art of the sword. During this time her parents drilled whatever education would be important as she went to the Academy.

Senshi when about 6 years old was always trying to be the teachers pet often using the only ninjutsu she knew the forbidden "Chibi no Jutsu" on her teachers. Her parents began to teach her the academy three jutsu and she mastered all of them within the same year as she had guidance and support. Impressed by her performances her teachers reccomended moving her to more advanced classes and for her to learn more at a faster pace. Her parents seemed rather eager as they themselves began to teach her more advanced Ninjutsu and some Genjutsu at that time.

Within this time Senshi was getting stressed at the expectations of her, but broke the barriers as she learned and mastered the use of whatever jutsu her parents asked of her to use. Senshi eventually took the exam to make genin and passed with no problems other then her age. She is younger then the age of 12 or 13 and so is younger then most gennin. That itself was a problem as in the more advanced classes, she was often picked on due to her age either leading to a punch to the nuts, or getting told on to their teachers.

She made friends with the various other shinobi family kids, and not many clan children liked her and likewise. Her parents are currently both out of the village on a long term mission although she doesn't know what it's about. She is concerned for sure about them, but she is sure they will be back eventually. Until then she has the family residence under control she supposes as she is eager to start her shinobi career.

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Shinobi Techniques/ Jutsu:
TP:1965 
Water Release TP:510
Doton:160
Phantasm:80
1000 Collected From Ten Year Anniversary [Not Spent]

1.Water Release
Suiton no Jutsu (Water Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Water. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Water Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

2.(learned five times) Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu (Water Clone)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited; however, it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state. When first learned the user is capable of having or capable of creating up to Five Clones. Each time learned the user learns this technique the number of Clones is capable of increasing by one. The maximum amount of clones is Ten for the Difficulty Class of D Rank. For each Difficulty Rank Increase the number increases by five of maximum but learning is still one per learned.
Limit: Water Release 

3.Suiton - Teppodama
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: Allows a user to shoot a ball of water out of their mouth.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: The Teppodama is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does some hand seals which then causes a a big ball of water to come from the users mouth and then hit their target.
Limit: Water Release

4.Phantasm Perception
Rank: "C"
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: Jutsu allows the user to perform Phantasm Perceptions.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Phantasms can only be perceived by the user and target, unlike the previous 3 Perceptions. The impression created by a Phantasm exists only in the mind and is personalized for everyone perceiving it. All phantasms are therefore, Mind-Affecting Jutsus. Nightmare is a good example of such a Phantasm. If you want to keep your actions secret from everyone but your subjects, Phantasm is a good choice, whether you want to frighten or to deliver a message.
Limit: ---

5.Floor of Horror
Rank: "C"
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: This Jutsu causes the target to think that the floor or ground below them has turned into a living, writhing horrible mass of barbs, tentacles, teeth, and claws.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: A Mind-Affecting Technique. Affects 1 living creature. The user is able to perform this technique at a distance of 7 meters plus 6 meters per class level. The duration of this technique lasts for 1 day per class level. This technique may be negated. The illusion is visual, audible, and reasonably believable to the touch. The base surface appears as such for a 35 meter radius around the affected target, causing the target to climb up upon stairwells, tree limbs, furniture or even try hang to columns and rafters in an effort to get away from the floor. Fully convinced that the floor or ground is alive, targets of Floor of Horror have been known to remain in such a position for hours at a stretch, afraid of the horrors that seem to seethe across the ground and floor. While under the effect the target suffers a ‒2 against additional saves.
Limit: Must know the Phantasm Perception.

Jutsu Learned:
1. Kirigakure no Jutsu (Hidden Mist Skill)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A Skill where a user uses the water around them to create a massive mist to fill around the user.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: A skill which creates a very dense fog that descreases the surrounding visibility to near zero. It produces an environment perfect for a silent assassin who follows an opponent through sound. This mist can not be blown away by any type of Wind Jutsu.
Limit: Water Release

2. Suiton – Suirou no Jutsu (Water Prison)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A Technique that may be used in order to trap an opponent by creating a prison made of water. The water is used so that the opponent may drown within the water if the opponent does not know how to escape forth.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bushin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.
Limit: Water Release

3. Sweet Talk
Rank: "D"
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: A Jutsu used to make the user's words seem sweeter.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: A Mind-Affecting Technique. Affects anyone who sees the user. The user is able to perform this technique on themselves. The duration of this technique lasts for 5 minutes per class level. This technique may be disbelieved once interacted with. User can feel the Jutsu make anything they say feel more favorable to all that hear it. This Jutsu sculpts the sound of their speech into calming, charming words.
Limit: Must know the Phantasm Perception.

4. (D) Suichuu (Underwater)
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Allows the user stay underwater for some time.
Difficulty Class
D Rank Difficulty Class - 20 minutes
C Rank Difficulty Class - 40 minutes
B Rank Difficulty Class - 80 minutes
A Rank Difficulty Class - 120 minutes
S Rank Difficulty Class - 180 minutes

Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: After returning to surface the user must rest half of the time used underwater. As example, if the user has stayed under for 20 minutes, he’ll have to rest 10 minutes before the jutsu can be used again.
Description: Simple technique used by channeling chakra to mouth, lungs, ears and eyes. With chakra moved to mouth and lungs the user gathers air from the water and is able breath underwater, chakra guided to ears protects from the aching caused by pressure, lenses of chakra protecting eyes work like swim goggles.
Limit: Must have Water Release

5.Betrayer's Visage
Rank: "C"
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: The user warps the subject’s perception of nearby creatures so that friends adopt the appearance of foes and foes adopt the appearance of friends.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: A Mind-Affecting Technique. Affects any 1 creature within the range of the technique. The user is able to perform this technique at a distance of 7 meters plus 6 meters per class level. The duration of this technique lasts for 5 rounds per class level. This technique may be disbelieved once interacted with. The user warps the subject’s perception of nearby creatures so that friends adopt the appearance of foes and foes adopt the appearance of friends. The user may dictate the subject’s perception of up to 2 creatures per Class Level. Intelligent subjects (Semi) may attempt a Sense Motive check (Difficult) at the beginning of each turn to sort all creatures’ true allegiances. Success ends the Jutsu. Even if the subject fails this check, they may attempt a Save to disbelieve the Jutsu under any circumstance that prompts disbelief. Examples include suffering damage from creatures that appear to be friends or struggling to communicate with friends that no longer seem to share the subject’s language.
Limit: Must know Phantasm Perception.

6. Suiton – Suijinheki (Water Encampment Wall)
Rank: "B" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: Creates a wall of Water in order to act as a barrier for the users.
Special: Handseals
Drawback: ---
Description: Suijinheki is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and the proceeds to blow out a jet of water from their mouth to act as a water barrier from incoming attack. This water can also be directed at an opponent with a simple movement of the user’s hands. This is the type of technique where it is capable of blocking different types of techniques. If the technique is not the opposite of Water it is capable of deflecting or blocking against techniques that are within the ranks of B or lower.
Limit: Water Release

7. (D) Suiton: Yuugyo No Jutsu (Water Release: Art of the Fish Swimming About in Water)
Rank: "D," "C," "B," "A," "S"
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user creates small fish made purely of water in a large body of water. By holding a certain handseal the user can cause the fish to explode.
Special: Handseals
Drawback: None
Description: The user, when standing very near or upon a body of water, gains the ability to create a small number of fish below them. The user must form handseals and send his or her chakra into the water to form the fish, once that is done the user has control of the fish for no more than three posts before they dissipate back into regular water. The user, once the fish have been created, is able to control the fish and cause them to swim toward a target and leap from the water. At "D" Rank the user can create up to three fish, and each of the Fish have the same explosive power as an Exploding Tag. At "C" Rank the user can create up to six fish, and each of the Fish have the same explosive power as an Exploding Tag. At "B" Rank the user can create up to ten fish, and each of the Fish have the same explosive power as two Exploding Tags. At "A" Rank the user can create up to fifteen fish, and each of the Fish have the same explosive power as two Exploding Tags. At "S" Rank the user can create up to twenty fish, and each of the Fish have the same explosive power as three Exploding Tags.
Limit: Water Release

8.Suiton - Suiryuudan no Jutsu (Water Dragon Projectile)
Rank: "B" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: Creates a massive sized like Dragon to attack the opponent when used upon.
Special: Handseals
Drawback: ---
Description: Suiryuudan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a long string of hand seals which then causes a column of water in the form of a dragon to rise from the water and then strike their target.
Limit: Water Release

9. Suiton: Chiisaimizubakahatsu (Tiny Water Explosion)
Rank: “D”
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: Creates a small wave of water that rushes towards an opponent.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: N/A
Description: The user performs the handseals described in special. There, they release chakra into the water and send a small tidal wave (about five feet tall) towards the opponent. The water moves at a speed of about ten miles per hour, so a direct hit from the water can be painful, but not life-threatening.
Limit: Water Release

10.Curse of the Putrid Husk
Rank: "C"
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: This illusion forces the subject to believe their flesh is rotting and falling off their body, and that their internal organs are spilling out.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: A Fear, Mind-Affecting Technique. Affects 1 living creature. The user is able to perform this technique at a distance of 7 meters plus 6 meters per class level. The duration of this technique lasts for 2 rounds per class level. This technique may be negated. This illusion forces the subject to believe their flesh is rotting and falling off their body, and that their internal organs are spilling out. If the target fails their save, they are dazed (and horrified) for 1 round. On the following round, they fall unconscious for 1d10 minutes, during which time they cannot be roused normally.
Limit: Must know the Phantasm Perception.

11. Shunshin no Jutsu - Oshi (Body Flicker Technique - Push)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu/TaiJutsu
Effect: A Jutsu that allows a user to rush forward in almost instantaneous speed. Used to draw the user close to the opponent.
Special: ---
Drawback: May use 3 times a day. May perform 1 more each time learned. Passing amount renders the user's legs immobile due to severe pain. Unable to perform again unless gained medical treatment. Must move through an opening. Unable to maneuver around obstructing objects. Can't attack while performing any Shunshin or Variation.
Description: User is able to move forward in a straight line along the ground in almost instantaneous untraceable speed while temporarily masking the user's movements within 10 meters. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by focusing the user's chi along the ankles and foot. User mostly moves just with their ankles and feet. Jutsu takes up no movements. User may only use this Jutsu half of the movements may allow in a single round while rounding down. Example: User has 5 movements, user is able to perform Jutsu 2 times per round.
Limit: Universal NinJutsu or Universal TaiJutsu.

12. Shunshin no Jutsu - Ken'in (Body Flicker Technique - Pull)
Rank: "D"
Skill: NinJutsu/TaiJutsu
Effect: A Jutsu that allows a user to rush backwards in almost instantaneous speed. Allows the user to retreat from the opponent.
Special: ---
Drawback: Takes away the number of usages Shunshin no Jutsu - Oshi (Body Flicker Technique - Push). Same distance applications apply. Same drawbacks apply when over using.
Description: User is able to move backwards in a straight line along the ground in almost instantaneous untraceable speed while temporarily masking the user's movements within 10 meters. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. Supplement of Shunshin no Jutsu - Oshi (Body Flicker Technique - Push) while using same schematics.
Limit: Universal NinJutsu or Universal TaiJutsu, Must know Shunshin no Jutsu - Oshi (Body Flicker Technique - Push)

13. Shunshin no Jutsu - Ko (Body Flicker Technique - Arc)
Rank: "D"
Skill: NinJutsu/TaiJutsu
Effect: A Jutsu that allows a user to rush in an arc in almost instantaneous speed. Allows the user to avoid the opponent's attack and gaze.
Special: ---
Drawback: Takes away the number of usages Shunshin no Jutsu - Oshi (Body Flicker Technique - Push). Same distance applications apply. Same drawbacks apply when over using.
Description: User is able to move in an arc along the ground in almost instantaneous untraceable speed while temporarily masking the user's movements within 10 meters. User may move forward, or backwards if they know Tweh version of Shunshin. This Jutsu is used to get around and behind an opponent without sacrificing multiple Shunshins. Supplement of Shunshin no Jutsu - Oshi (Body Flicker Technique - Push) using same schematics.
Limit: Universal NinJutsu or Universal TaiJutsu, Must know Shunshin no Jutsu - Oshi (Body Flicker Technique - Push)

14. Water Style: Mythical Leviathan Waterball Jutsu
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: User spits out five small water balls from thier mouth at the target
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: Can be dodged, must spit each water ball in successtion
Description: User does said handseals and forms chakra within thier mouth. The user then spits out a small water ball that will break on contact with anything. The ball does not explode, it simply bursts, causing C rank force damage rather then anything else upon contact. The user, continues to spit out four more small waterballs, creating five in total in the end. The user must spit out each one individually, rather then all at once.
Limit: Water Release, Teppodama

15.Kishinryuu Teppodama
Rank: C (40 TP)
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The dragon shoots a large ball of compressed water from the mouth.
Special: Handseals
Drawback: Must have Suiton - Suiryuudan no Jutsu activated
Description: Standing on the dragon, formed by the Suiton - Suiryuudan no Jutsu technique, the user will form the dragon handseal, causing the Dragon to open his mouth and from there it will shoot a large ball of compressed water, that is roughly a meter and a half in diameter. The ball of water can travel up to fifty meters, but after twenty five meters it will lose most of it's strength. The water can come from three sources, the dragon itself, a body of water that's in contact with the dragon or a water creation technique from the user.
Limit: Must know Teppodama, must know Suiton - Suiryuudan no Jutsu

16. Daibakuryuu no Jutsu - Great Exploding Current
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: If an opponent is standing above a lake or a large form amount of water the user is capable of creating a small vortex within the water so then the opponent is capable of falling through.
Special: Handseals
Drawback: ---
Description: After doing the needed hand seals a vortex of water will form, sucking anything on the surface above it down to the depths below.
Limit: Water Release, must have a lake, or a grand water source, more so then a normal water technique.

17. Suiton: Mizuame Nabara,(Water Release: Syrup Capture Field)
Rank: C - B rank
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Using this jutsu, the user can spit a stream of extremely sticky oily syrup that covers the ground and holds opponents in place.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: If used too much, the user can become very dehydrated and needs to drink water to wash away the syrup out of their system. Cannot be used more than 5 times in a battle. Any ninja capable of walking on water can avoid being stuck in the syrup, but needs to do so before being caught.
Description: The user performs the necessary hand seals and with just a few seconds of preparation, the user spits out a stream of sticky syrup out of their mouth and aims it at the opponents direction of the field. The C rank technique had the ability to spit a mid level stream of syrup towards the opponent or the opponents area causing them to stick where they are for 2 attacks. The B rank technique has the ability to spit out a very rapid hit to the opponent causing them and the area they step on for three attacks. The damage dealt to the opponent by the B-rank attack is like being hit with a Water Dragon Blast Technique. The oil is extremely flammable so stay caution of it's sensitivity to fire.
Limit: Water Release, experiences on performing technique that exit the mouth.
18. Pressure Jet
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: User shoots a stream of water towards the opponent.
Special: Handseals
Drawback: Easier to dodge at longer distances.
Description: A simple jutsu utilizing the water release. User performs the hand seals Snake, Dragon then transfers charka to their throat, creating a steady stream of pressured water from their mouths, that then hits the opponent for D rank damage. The jet stream has a maximum range of 10 meters and travels in a straight line. Speed is equivalent to throwing a kunai.
Limit: Water Release.

19.Suiton no Tate (Shield of Water)
Rank: "C"
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The Suiton no Tate acts in a manner similar to the Suna no Tate. By using water and combining it with the users chakra, they can allow it to move around the body to deflect small incoming projectiles or even use it for techniques.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: The shield can not really block taijutsu attacks, constantly absorbs a very very small amount of chakra.
Description: Small currents of water flow around the body of the user, capable of deflecting small jutsu or even extinguishing C-rank or lower katon techniques . This jutsu activates automatically unless the user himself chooses to "disable" the ability in a situation. Does not acquire the awareness of the user to defend (can block strikes that the user can't see, like the sand shield has been known to do).
Limit: Water Release

20. Suiton: Oxyhydro Conversion Technique
Rank: "B"
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Converts oxygen and hydrogen in the air into water.
Special: Automatic when performing a water jutsu.
Drawback: It is easy to exceed your chakra level when creating large amounts of chakra- the amount of water needed will automatically be created when you cast a water jutsu when you are not around a water source. Therefore, if you cast a technique and you do not have enough chakra to cast both the technique and create the amount of water necessary, user is incapable of making the technique work.
Description: After spending a large amount of time utilizing water techniques, the Water Shinobi begins to understand the true composition of water. They use this to such an effect that they can create water out of nothing. This is automatic when casting a water jutsu and there is no water source. Be honorable when creating techniques. A small bottle of Water does not have enough substance to create a clone.
Limit: Must have 500 training points into techniques that focus only on Suiton no Jutsu. Once you have obtained 500 training points in Suiton techniques, they gain this technique automatically.

21. Doton no Jutsu (Earth Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Earth. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Earth Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

22.Doton: Rikujou Douyou no Jutsu (Earth: Ground Shaking Technique)
Rank: "D" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The user slams their hands against the ground as the user creates a miniature like earthquake in order to try and unbalance the enemy or opponents all around for a more of a deadly like attack.
Special: "Hand Seals"
Drawback: The user's hands must stay upon the ground at all time. When the user is capable of reaching "A" Class the knowledge of placing their hands onto the very ground becomes obsolete, and the user is capable of performing the technique without having their hands along the ground.
Description: As the user slams their hands against the ground, the user is capable of creating a miniature like earthquake along the ground. The ground rumbles lightly as the very earth moves in all directions in a ten-meter radius. Every time the user gains ranking in difficulty class the distance of the technique increases by ten meters.
Limit: Needs the Earth Release.

23. Doton - Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu (Double Suicide Decapitation Technique)
Rank: "D" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu / TaiJutsu
Effect: A technique where the user hides within the ground for a brief moment to surprise attack the opponent from under ground.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: The user takes the time to push into the ground by using their Earth Release. The user pushes into the ground quickly so that to be used against the opponent later on. The user at this point cannot necessarily move within the ground at this moment, but the user does know by feel of when an opponent is right above. When an opponent is right under the user reaches up to take the opponent and drag them back down to the ground in one fell swoop without movement or notice. The opponent is unable to move for one post and the user is capable of slamming out of the ground with one movement.
Limit: Needs the Earth Release

24.Deido Nohara no Jutsu (Mud Field)
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Causes the area (10m x 10m) around the user, given that it is earth and stone, to become mud.
Special: Rat, Dog, Boar
Drawback: It does not work in certain environments, such as tile and metallic floors.
Description: After the hand signs are performed, the user slams his/her hands into the ground. If the environment allows it, the area around the user will become a thick and heavy mud. No chakra is required to maintain the state of the area.
Limit: Earth Release, Water Release

25. Deido Bunshin no Jutsu (Earth Release: Mud Clone Technique)
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu Defensive, and Offensive
Effect: Allows the user to create clones out of Mud.
Special: Dog, Rat, Boar, Ox
Drawback: Needs a source of mud that can supply enough mud to make the desired amount of clones. Ex: If there is only enough mud to make four clones, you cannot make eight, only four.
Description: Using mud in the area, the user can create mud clones depending on his/her ninja rank/class. Because the clones are made of mud, they are more durable than most other clones. May take two hits to destroy instead of one. The personality of the clones depends on the user’s personality. The user can channel thoughts with the clones. The weight of the clones and amount of mud needed depends on the user's body weight. Finally, the user can control what the clones say, and control the clone’s actions. The Mud Clones are capable of using any technique that deals with mud.
D Ranked Ninjas: Up to four Clones at a time.
C Ranked Ninjas: Up to eight Clones at a time.
B Ranked Ninjas: Up to 16 Clones at a time.
A Ranked Ninjas: Up to 32 Clones at a time.
S Ranked Ninjas: Up to 64 Clones at a time.
Limit: Must know Earth Release.

26. Doton - Dochuu Eigyo (Underground Fish Projection)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: By using the similarity of Doton - Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu (Double Suicide Decapitation Technique) the user is capable of moving through the earth and all around.
Special: "Handseals" before performing
Drawback: Technique cannot be used through Sand
Description: The user uses the basic Doton - Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu (Double Suicide Decapitation Technique) as they slam down into the ground. Doing so the user is capable of moving about within the ground capable of rising, singing and capable of pushing through the very ground in multiple types of ways. This type of attack may be used so then the user may move away from the very opponent and attack at the moment's notice.
Limit: Needs the Earth Release, Must have knowledge of the Doton - Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu (Double Suicide Decapitation Technique)

27. Doton Doryuu Taiga (Earth Flow)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The user creates a large massive like Earth slide by using a reverse ingenuity towards the normal
Special: "Hand Seals"
Drawback: The rank of the user determines how strong and how large the mud like slide can become. When the user is A ranked, the knowledge of placing their hands onto the very ground becomes obsolete.
Description: The user focuses the chakra along the earth as the user does the hand seals. By using a reverse creation the user makes the ground softer, makes the ground into a mud like substance as the user creates a mudslide towards the enemy in a straight line like cone. The Difficulty class is dependent on the distance the technique can be used. The stronger the user gets the stronger the mudslide becomes. Since this type of technique is being run by the chakra of the user this means that, the opponent cannot walk along the mudslide.
Limit: Needs the Earth Release.

28. Doton: Deido Uwadzutsumi no Jutsu (Earth Release: Art of the Mud Envelope)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Envelops the user in a sphere of mud which is capable of blocking up to a "C" ranks amount of damage.
Special: "Hand Seals"
Drawback: Only lasts for three turns. Is capable of handling one "C" Rank amount of damage before breaking. Requires a mud source. The technique cannot be used on an opponent.
Description: A technique that is mostly used for its ability to trick the opponent, Deido Uwadzutsumi no Jutsu surrounds the user in a sphere of thick mud, which can be utilized as a defense. The mud at the bottom of the sphere hardens, so that the user is capable of escaping if they know the use of the Dochu Eigyo. The sphere lasts until it is broken, the user has dispelled it, or three turns have passed since it was created. The sphere is, at maximum, three meters in height and two meters in diameter.
Limit: Must have Deido Nohara. Must have Doton no Jutsu.

29. Doton: Deido Yakiire no Jutsu (Earth Release: Art of the Mud Hardening)
Rank: "D" Rank
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Hardens the mud around the user instantly into rock capable of being used with other Doton no Jutsu techniques.
Special: "Hand Seals"
Drawback: The distance for the technique is limited to the user's knowledge of Doton Soushi.
Description: Another tricky technique meant to be used against opponents who have found their feet stuck within the depths of the mud. By channeling their chakra throughout the ground, the user can instantly return any mud created by Deido Nohara into solid rock, which is then capable of being used for other Doton no Jutsu. The technique serves two purposes; to catch the unwary and to return to the field to a more advantageous area for the user.
Limit: Must know Deido Nohara. Must have Doton no Jutsu

30. Phantasmal Swarm
Rank: "C"
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: The target believes that it is suddenly covered by a swarm of thousands of insects.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: A Fear, Mind-Affecting Technique. Affects 1 living creature. The user is able to perform this technique at a distance of 30 meters plus 15 meters per class level. The duration of this technique lasts for 5 rounds per class level. This technique may be disbelieved once interacted with. The target believes that it is suddenly covered by a swarm of thousands of insects. It experiences the insects biting and stinging it and burrowing underneath its skin, driving it into a panicked state. The target may make a save to disbelieve the existence of the phantasmal swarm, but the residual images of the swarm leave the target shaken.
Limit: Must know the Phantasm Perception.

31. Ishikyojin Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Stone Golem Summoning)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The user gains the capability of understanding, and creating an amount of Golem like stone creatures to fight forth against on coming opponents. The Golems are to be considered as large Slow like creatures that are moved by the chakra the user pushes through in order to create and sustain.
Special: "Hand Seals"
Drawback: The more that the user knows the more golems the user is capable of creating forth. Hands must stay along the ground at all times depending on the Difficulty class of the User. If the user is D Difficulty, class the hands of the user must stay along the ground at all times. If the user is C Difficulty Class, the hands can be removed for six seconds before they must put their hands back along the ground. For every Difficulty class above C, the number of seconds the hands can be removedincreases by six. These Golems are extremely slow so techniques like the After Image will not be able to be seen and understood.
Description: The user creates a few hand seals as they slam their hands down against the ground. Doing so, the user is capable of creating a Giant Golem made out of stone at the size of four meters high. The golems are slow, but extremely resourceful against TaiJutsu like attacks. Each Class up the user becomes the stronger the Golems become in order to be capable of withstanding certain amounts of attacks. At D Difficulty class, the Golems are capable of withstanding Three D Rank TaiJutsu techniques. At C Difficulty Class, the golems are capable of withstanding up to Three "C" Rank Jutsus before suddenly shattering. At B Difficulty Class, the Golems are capable of withstanding up to Six "C" Rank Jutsus before suddenly shattering. At A Difficulty Class, the Golems are capable of withstanding up to Nine "C" Rank Jutsus before suddenly shattering. At S Difficulty Class, the Golems are capable of withstanding up to Twelve "C" Rank Jutsus before suddenly shattering. Each time relearned, the user is capable of pushing through yet another Golem, but one Golem must come out every six seconds with a maximum amount of 4 additional golems.
Limit: Needs the Earth Release.

32. Doton: Tamaishi Danmaku (Earth Element: Pebble Barrage)
Rank: "D" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A simple technique used as a distraction in which the user uses a few hand seals concentrating along the chakra towards the ground. Doing so, the user takes the chakra and the rocks to push forth sending multiple small grape sized like pebbles towards the opponent.
Special: "Hand Seals"
Drawback: The amount of pebbles depends on the rank of the user.
Description: Small like stones are created along the ground in pebble form as they are pushed up along the ground and sent flying towards the very enemy or enemies depending on the type of distance the enemy or where the enemy is standing. This type of attack is somewhat of a basic like attack and is to be considered more of an annoyance or distraction.
Limit: Needs the Earth Release.

33. Doton: Rikujou Kasui Reizu (Earth: Ground Spike Raising)
Rank: "B", "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A Technique that works within an area effect. Depending on the user's rank, the distance Spikes raise up along the very ground in order to stab the opponent greatly.
Special: "Hand Seals"
Drawback: The user must touch the very ground in order for the Spears to shoot up along the earth to stab against the very opponents in question. The Spikes that come forth in rapid succession and does not come forth at the same time. Spikes pop up from the very ground as they are launched around in an area effect, or in a cone, to line like effect, and since this occurs the technique begins near the user as they go forth towards the opponent. This is the "B" Rank version of the very technique while the added "C" Rank that is added along with it is considered the more adaptable version where spikes may come forth by how the user may wish. When the user is capable of reaching "A" Class the knowledge of placing their hands onto the very ground becomes obsolete, and the user is capable of performing the technique without having their hands along the ground.
Description: The user quickly presses on a few seals as the user slams their hands against the ground. By focusing their chakra along the ground and using the earth release giant like shards of spikes shoot up from the very ground. The Spikes that come forth are brought up in different sizes from five feet, to even seven feet high. If the opponent is struck down along with the spikes, they are capable of piercing through and puncturing within. The spikes come up in a sequential order when first learned moving from the user heading towards the intended target if possible. The way this technique works is that when the user learns the more adaptable version of this technique then the user is capable of pushing off different styles of spikes in a more of a diverse manner that are in a non-sequential form.
Limit: Needs the Earth Release.




Skills/ Traits:
Chakra Lore
Rank: "D"
Skill: Skill
Effect: A skill for basic Chakra Jutsu understanding allowing the user to identify and read all Chakra matters.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A person versed in Chakra Lore knows the basic principles behind Chakra. They are tuned in to secrets about the world around them that most others do not and know how to read Chakra Scrolls or Writings. They may not be able to perform Jutsus, but they can read Chakra Writings and generally tell what it is all about. Some practical applications of Chakra Lore follow: Identifying Jutsus, Identifying Chakra Items, and Deciphering Scrolls. Look in Jutsu Lore Skills thread found in the Skills and Traits Index for more information. Each time learned user gets 5 die roll to increase the skill.
Limit: ---


Water-Touched
Rank: "C"
Skill: Chakra Trait
Effect: User's share an affinity with elemental water.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: User gains a trait bonus of Damage Resistance of +10 Armour Points against creatures and attacks with the Water type. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.


Singing
Rank: "E"
Skill: Skill
Effect: A skill that turns a character into an accomplished singer.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: The Character with this skill is an accomplished singer and can use this ability to entertain others and perhaps earn a small living. No skill check is required to sing in most circumstances. The character can also create choral works on a successful skill check. Use Musical Instrument Task Skills to see what a user can do and the difficulty checks as Musical Instrument Task Skills are similar to Singing. Look in Task Skills thread found in the Skills and Traits Index for more information. Each time learned user gets 5 die roll to increase the skill.
Limit: ---

Cooking
Rank: "E"
Skill: Skill
Effect: Cooking and Baking allows the user to create superb dishes.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With a successful Cooking/Baking check, a cook can make nutritious meals out of just about any edible substance and can create hot meals even in the wilderness. Failure means that the food is disgusting and inedible. Cooking a meal generally takes no more than an hour, although the preparation of ingredients and dishes may take several. When choosing this skill the user must choose either Cooking or Baking. Baking is the ability to cook by dry heat without direct exposure to a flame, typically in an oven or on a hot surface. Look in Task Skills thread found in the Skills and Traits Index for more information. Each time learned user gets 5 die roll to increase the skill.
Limit: ---
52/125

Tracking
Rank: "D"
Skill: Skill
Effect: Characters use this skill to follow the trail of animals and other persons.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Can be learned by an Animal. Tracking means the user found a trail if they gain the check, while failure means they did not. If user fails this initial skill check, they simply cannot find that particular trail. After finding a trail, further checks may be necessary depending on the situation. Darkness, falling rain/snow, a dust storm, moving from one terrain to another (such as from sand to rock), one trail splitting into 2 or crossing water are examples why a user might need another Tracking check. Look in Task Skills thread found in the Skills and Traits Index for more information. Each time learned user gets 5 die roll to increase the skill.
Limit: ---

First Aid: Healing
Rank: "E" (5 Training Points at all Times)
Skill: Skill
Effect: This skill allows a character to properly tend to the sick and injured.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: While some basic medical knowledge is inherent in this skill (to the extent such can be said to exist), the character’s role is to provide an optimal environment to facilitate the patient’s own recuperative abilities, by monitoring the patient and tending to his needs as required.
Novice: Diagnose; Tend to injured characters such that their wounds heal at a faster rate; critical care requires 10 minutes/wound; can distinguish whether an individual is dead or merely unconscious.
Average: Stabilize a character knocked unconscious from trauma; critical care requires 6 minutes/wound; with a successful Average skill check to resuscitate a dying character.
Advanced: Function as a midwife to deliver children; diagnose injuries; critical care requires 4 minutes/wound
Expert: Properly set broken bones; amputate limbs; critical care requires 3 minutes/wound
Master: Critical care needs 2 min. per wound

Observation
Rank: "E"
Skill: Skill
Effect: This skill focuses certain powers of observation - sight, smell, hearing, and touch.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Can be learned by an Animal. A failed check indicates that the character is oblivious until the thing is pointed out to him. This skill is important for ferreting out advancing enemies or ambushes, generally real-time events and actions occurring, versus scrutiny, which covers static objects or areas. A Game Master may roll an Observation skill check for a Character any time there is an NPC, monster, event or happening that a character might notice, even if he did not specifically state that he is monitoring his surroundings. Characters are capable of noticing any event within their perception. Observation reveals only facts, not motivation. If user has 25 or more Ranks in Evidence Analysis user gains a Synergy Bonus +10 to Observation. Each time learned user gets 1 die roll to increase the skill.
Limit: ----
5 TP
10 SP

[Dr. Neuro, RN]

I'm catching you now, before you ask to get this graded. I highly suggest going over our Character Submission Information[ thread to see if you can correct the many mistakes in this profile. You need to read that thread thoroughly before posting our template and filling in the information.

[dandead10]

Ah I see now, I'll edit this asap. I didn't read through it very thorough. Also any good idea of where I should put the training points? Also I'm going to get rid of anything unecessary and just keep the bare bones needed for now then add on to it. I think the basic information is alright although this is my first time on this site, so I'm not too sure. I think it's more about the personal information on the bottom...or maybe my techniques? Both? Also I see safe warm environments aren't much fun to read...hmm so why not switch it up to something else while I'm at it. If you could give me some pointers on what exactly I should fix that would be helpful. I read about three paragraphs per aspect already and I will do that...

[dandead10]

I edited it, although I don't know if I fixed everything you might be going for. Also, I noticed there seem to be absolutely no Naruto canon jutsu like the ones I am using. Does this mean that the jutsu I had planned to use are not going to be allowed? I looked in the index and other areas and well...I don't see any actually from the show.

[Dr. Neuro, RN]

We do have Canon jutsu but our site isn't dependent on them. Im going to help you in steps so that you're not worried about doing too much at once. First, I need everything to not be bold. I'd rather nothing be bold than everything. Of course if you are familiar with Proboards you can fix this and bold certain things. If not, bottom left corner when you edit, press BBCode. Get rid of the bold code: [ b ] and [ / b ]

As for jutsu, you get 6 Freebies and 5 starter techniques.

Freebies are Traits, Skills, Releases, Perceptions, and Stanced. Any veteran of the site will tell you to go through traits and pick out 6 of them. When doing so, be weary that some traits count as two freebies. But that will be stated in the jutsu template at the bottom. Traits will be found in the Index, under the Professional Sub-Category.

Before we go further, also I'd like you to separate your history so it isn't one large clump. I won't even touch that because it is just one massive wall of text. After that, we can move on. If you have more questions about Freebies, feel free to ask for help.

[dandead10]

I've done all of what you have asked me to do, I unbolded everything and added the traits with skills. Also I'm not quite sure what you mean "releases" I don't see anything really under that section that would classify as a release.

[Dr. Neuro, RN]

Releases are the jutsu that allow you to use an element.

Example:
Suiton no Jutsu (Water Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Water. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Water Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

Each elemental release has one. Basic ones such as Water, Fire, Earth, Wind are "C" Rank. Ice, Wood, Sand are "B" Rank. Paper is "A" Rank. You'll find the same system set up in Genjutsu, only they require perceptions. You cannot use a Release or Perception without the initial technique. Stances a little more lenient. But to use a Fighting Style, you are required the Stances of that fighting style.

Your next step for this bio is to post the overviews for your skills and traits. You'll also need the full overviews for your items. As well as staying how much of each item you have. Don't get frustrated, you and I will get through this. =D

[dandead10]

Okey doke, done and done. I've accomplished all of that you requested. I'm not sure if I have to have Suiton in the traits section though in order to use Suiton Jutsu. Surely all shinobi are born with one so would I need to mention that as a trait? Also could you explain how training works? I don't quite understand how the system operates.

[Dr. Neuro, RN]

Looking much better at this stage. Weapons wise, put a number to how many Kunai and Shuriken, bo that you have. I suggest trying to max out your 30,000 allowance on everything. Main Weapons as well. You have a 13,000 allowance on that. Try to hit 13,000. You can sell the extra Wespons that you don't want. That utility pouch has an overview, add that in place of what you have.

Now for your techniques that are listed, delete that. Go through our jutsu and find 5 that you like. If you go into a release, grab the release jutsu like the example I gave you in the last post. Your 5 starting techniques can be E, D, or C ranked, so choose whatever you want. Always check restrictions when going into clans and be careful not to grab a B, A, or S ranked technique.

If you grab a technique that has multiple ranks, you have the lowest rank of that technique until you train further into it. Put brackets, parenthesis, or an underline under the rank you learned so we can keep track of that. Outside of that, I think you're ready to go.

[dandead10]

I did that and now I am prepared to enter the shinobi world. Going to sell a lot of the junk I have. Anyway I really appreciate all your help on this. I don't think I exceeded the cost limit. However, if I did no biggy I'll get rid of something. I really could use the jutsu books to quickly progress and well yeah. Any other problems I should brush up?

[Dr. Neuro, RN]

You can use a bigger slot holder item. Go from the list in the character submission information thread and then find the overview to get the best item available to you. Books are considered as main weapons and come out of that allowance, so your a bit over the 13,000. While at the some the you are way under on your secondary allowance, which is 30,000. You don't have up have more, but is recommend it.

[dandead10]

I spent some more for secondary weaponry, a bigger bag, a extra pouch to wear on her side. I think I'm happy with this. I'm going to be selling the greaves and the hammer anyways. I'm not quite exceeding, but I definately added some more. I got rid of the small jutsu book and added a tiny scroll instead, now it's just about maxed out as its going to get. As for my secondary fund I really don't see too much else of what I want. If I really needed to, I could potentially in the future go and loot the bodies of my enemies no?

[dandead10]

I've just about finished I think in my opinion. Do you think I need to go edit anything else before I try to get my character graded? Also what exactly is the purpose of the Jutsu Book? I assumed that I needed it to learn new jutsu? It isn't really clear on how new jutsu may be learned. Also as for training threads any advice on how to start one and how to receive missions?

[Dr. Neuro, RN]

Get rid of the book and take a holster item from this list and get rid of the one you have. Good to go after that.


Cloak Type 3 (Overview)
Tactical Vest Type 2 (Overview)
Chest Rig Type 1 (Overview)
Utility Belt Type 2 (Overview)
Butt Bag Type 1 (Overview)
Back Quiver (Large) (Overview)
Ground Quiver (Large) (Overview)
Belt Quiver (Large) (Overview)

[dandead10]

Done, I replaced the holster and got rid of the book. Thanks for helping me out all this time.

[Dr. Neuro, RN]

Messenger bag is still there. After that's gone I wouldn't mind moving this to Submissions for you

[dandead10]

Sorry about that, didnt realize it was still there. Now it's gone. I appreciate all the aid you have given me Crimson. Your a real nice guy to he helping a newbie like me.

[Dr. Neuro, RN]

With that, I place my stamp of approval.

1.3

[dandead10]

I'll wait patiently for the other admins to grade the other two thirds of this. Also, it seems there aren't many Mist Shinobi is there? E.e weird, there is so much Lore and possible history to be had even though the village wasn't really seem that much.