Sakuragi Kotoe (Finished)

[Koto]

Basic Information

Name: Sakuragi “Kazeraikou” Kotoe (櫻木　琴恵)

Bloodlimit: Kazeraikou

Height: 5’4”

Weight: 110lbs

Age: 14

Gender: Female

Alignment: Neutral Good

Birth Country: Kaminari no Kuni

Village: Kumogakure no Sato

Special:

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• Medical
• Alchemist
• Animalist
• Sensory
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Taijutsu Specialist

• Tessen Jutsu
• Aikido
• Art of Throwing
• Busōsen
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Ninjutsu Non-Specialist

• Lightning Release
• Water Release
• Wind Release
• Ice Release 
  
  

Clan Non-Specialist

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Equipment
Primary Equipment

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Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Slashing, Fan
Effect: A fan designed for use in warfare and martial arts. Fans are used for offensive and defensive purposes.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A One-Handed Weapon. These weapons do +6 Amour Points of Damage. This weapon appears to the untrained eye as nothing more than a beautifully crafted fan. In fact, the vanes of the fan are crafted from steel, and the tips are needle-sharp. These weapons are too large to create a feint and make an opponent think it is a normal fan. These items are normally small and no longer than 1.2 m (4 feet).
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 4,000 Ryo

Sword, Short (Overview)
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Piercing/Slashing, Sword
Effect: A weapon with a long metal blade and a hilt with a hand guard.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A Light Weapon. These weapons do +6 Amour Points of Damage. A short sword is about 2 feet in length. Examples of Short Swords: Tanto, Baselard, Cinquedea, Gladius, Kodachi, Xiphos or even the Mechete.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 2,000 Ryo [/font][/ul]

Secondary Equipment

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Rank: "B" Rank
Type: Secondary, 57 per Slot, Piercing, Senbon
Effect: Senbon are metal needles with a point at both ends. They often serve a medical purpose.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A Light Weapon. These weapons do +2 Amour Points of Damage. The Range Increment of this weapon is 10 meters. Are weapons used for acupuncture. For this reason, senbon deal non-lethal damage.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 5,700 Ryo per Slot, or 100 Ryo Each.

Shuriken, Hira (Overview) - 3 slots
Rank: "C" Rank
Type: Secondary, 15 per Slot, Piercing, Shuriken
Effect: A shuriken is a small piece of metal with sharpened edges, designed for throwing.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A Light Weapon. These weapons do +2 Amour Points of Damage. The Range Increment of this weapon is 5 meters. Although they are thrown weapons, shuriken are quick and easy to draw, thus allowing the user to draw such weapons without the need of a movement. A shuriken can't be used as a melee weapon. Hira-shuriken are constructed from thin, flat plates of metal and generally resemble popular conceptions of shuriken.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 1,500 Ryo per Slot, or 100 Ryo Each.

Knife (Overview) - 2 slots
Rank: "C" Rank
Type: Secondary, 2 per Slot, Piercing/Slashing, Knife
Effect: An instrument composed of a blade fixed into a handle, used for cutting or as a weapon.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A Light Weapon. These weapons do +4 Amour Points of Damage. The Range Increment of this weapon is 5 meters. A knife has a blade that is about less than 1 foot in length. The user gains a +10 bonus on Sleight of Hand Skill to conceal a knife on their body.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 1,000 Ryo per Slot, or 500 Ryo Each.


Kunai (Overview) - 3 slots
Rank: "C" Rank
Type: Secondary, 2 per Slot, Piercing/Slashing, Knife
Effect: A kunai is a tool derived from the masonry trowel.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A Light Weapon. These weapons do +4 Amour Points of Damage. The Range Increment of this weapon is 5 meters. A kunai has a blade that is about less than 1 foot in length. The user gains a +10 bonus on Sleight of Hand Skill to conceal a knife on their body.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 1,000 Ryo per Slot, or 500 Ryo Each.[/font][/ul]


Apparel

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Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Slot Holder, 0 Slots, Clothing
Effect: Footwear can be worn on the feet of a person.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Outer coverings for the feet, such as shoes, boots, and sandals. Footwear refers to garments worn on the feet, which originally serves to purpose of protection against adversities of the environment, usually regarding ground textures and temperature. Footwear in the manner of shoes therefore primarily serves the purpose to ease the locomotion and prevent injuries. Secondly footwear can also be used for fashion and adornment as well as to indicate the status or rank of the person within a social structure. Socks and other hosiery are typically worn additionally between the feet and other footwear for further comfort and relief. Cultures have different customs regarding footwear. These include not using any in some situations, usually bearing a symbolic meaning. Footwear have no slots, but a Half Pouch can be applied along the inside of footwear.
Limit: These type of items may be bought inside any Tailor Shop.
Cost: 1,200 Ryo per Pair.

Dress
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Slot Holder, 0 Slots, Clothing
Effect: A dress is a garment consisting of a skirt with an attached bodice.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A one-piece garment for a woman or girl that covers the body and extends down over the legs. Dresses are more often worn by women and girls. The hemlines of dresses vary depending on the whims of fashion and the modesty or personal taste of the wearer. Dresses have no slots and they have no areas to carry pouches.
Limit: These type of items may be bought inside any Tailor Shop.
Cost: 1,000 Ryo Each.


Robe
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Slot Holder, 0 Slots,
Effect: A robe is a loose-fitting outer garment. Unlike garments described as capes or cloaks, robes usually have sleeves.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A gown worn as part of the academic regalia of faculty or students, especially for ceremonial occasions, such as a convocations, congregations or graduations. A gown worn as part of the attire of a judge or barrister. A wide variety of long, flowing religious dress including pulpit robes and the robes worn by various types of monks. A gown worn as part of the official dress of a peer or royalty. Robes give a +10 to Sleight of Hand when worn. Robes can have special straps stitched in place, allowing the Robe to stay fluid and not be bogged down. 1 Robe may have up to 10 of these Straps. Each Strap may have up to 5 Half Pouches stitched in to keep objects inside.
Limit: These type of items may be bought inside any Tailor Shop.
Cost: 1,000 Ryo Each.

Pouch, Quick Loader x2
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Slot Holder, 1 Slot, Pouch
Effect: A short sized pouch capable of holding 1 slot of items of short length.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture A leather, cloth, or other material pouch that can easily hold 1 slot worth of items not of Scroll Size. The dimensions are 5.24 inches in height, 4.25 inches wide and 2.25 inches in depth. The primary purpose for these pouches are to hold all kinds of secondary items that do not exceed the height or width in dimensions. Primarily they hold smaller objects such as hira or bo-shurikens, alchemical pouches, and other items in similar size. For longer items see the Scroll Pouch. Quick Loader Pouches may be sold individually and attached to belts or other strapped objects, or may be sold as part of Basic Clothing. Characters attempting to conceal an item in a quick loader pouch gain a +10 circumstance bonus on their Sleight of Hand Check. Multiple Pouches may be purchased connected together.
Limit: These type of items may be bought inside any Tailor Shop.
Cost: 200 Ryo Each.

Pouch, Utility x2
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Slot Holder, 2 Slots, Pouch
Effect: A long sized pouch capable of holding 2 slots of items of 8 inches in length.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture A leather, cloth, wooden material case that can easily hold 2 Scrolls. The Dimensions are 8 inches in height, 5 inches width and 2.5 inches in depth. This pouch is specifically designed for items with lengths longer than 4 inches. These pouches are primarily meant for scrolls, kunai, knives, senbon and other items with similar lengths. Utility Pouches may be sold individually and attached to belts or other strapped objects, or may be sold as part of Basic Clothing. Multiple Pouches may be purchased connected together.
Limit: These type of items may be bought inside any Tailor Shop.
Cost: 400 Ryo Each.
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Character Depth

Personality

Kotoe is an introvert, in every sense of the word. From a young age, she was already not very talkative. On the outside, she pretends to be sociable, not overdoing it by trying to be everyone's friend, but simply to be as social as she needed to be to be viewed as normal. When she was a child, she enjoyed doing things by herself, often wandering around the village on her own. She enjoyed the freedom and the temporary escape from her parents. She often played with dolls or built snowmen outside for fun. She wasn't exactly shy, but she found it very difficult to make friends. She was never too close to anyone and it often takes her a very long time before she can call someone a friend. 

Her favourite thing to do on her days off is make sweets. Before she became a shinobi, she always liked to go to cake and candy shops. Now she sometimes helps her mother at the cafe, making cakes and cookies. At her house she often spends countless sleepless nights thinking of new menu items and seasonal treats, even though she never really eats them herself. She enjoys seeing the satisfaction of customers when they eat her food. When she has a holiday, she is seen helping out in the kitchen. 

A very rational person on the outside. Kotoe can get very emotional as well, especially if it concerns the people she cares about the most. Although the list is short, she becomes defensive and protective of them. She is also very loyal to her friends and village and expects the same loyalty to be returned by those who she calls her friends. As a result she doesn't take betrayal lightly and refuses to forgive anyone who has betrayed her in the slightest. 

As a Genin, she is very serious and hardworking. She spends hours and hours in her house training. She often trained with her father, who was a trainer the academy. A stubborn girl, she never knew her limits and would often push past her personal and physical limits. Kotoe looks up to both her parents and dreams of one day becoming a medical ninja like her mother was.

She is also very straightforward, not one to beat around the bush. If she doesn't like you, she will definitely tell you. This can further complicate her relationships with other people. She is sympathetic and empathetic of most people, except for those who like creating dramas or want attention. One of her major pet peeves is someone who pities her because of her illness. As a result she doesn't like people making a big deal out of it and will often try to hide it from others.

Appearance

The most distinct feature of Kotoe is her one streak of hair falling in the center of her face, between her eyes. She has black hair that is cut short to just past her shoulders and lavender-grey coloured eyes. Her complexion is slightly pale, giving off the impression that she's under nourished half the time. It doesn't help that she is quite slender, only weighing 50 kilograms despite her height. She likes everything about her body with the exception on her flat chest, something that she struggled to accept since she was a child. Every possible chance she tries to show her femininity but often fails as she looks down on herself compared to the other women in her village and her clan.

Her attire is broken down into two styles: her normal tomboyish look and her feminine look.

Her normal tomboyish look which she insists is just for convenience, consists of a black yukata, separated top and bottom. Normal yukatas are more like a dress which she doesn't like to wear especially when she is on a mission. Instead, she had her yukata especially made, worn almost like a regular shirt and pants. The garments are made of 100% silk, smooth to the touch and elegant in appearance. She ties a white obi around her waist, also made from silk. Her obi is normally used to carry some of her weapons, as she doesn't like to always wear a weapon pouch. When she does wear a pouch however, she straps the pouch underneath her obi, to secure it in place. She also wears white tabi socks and a geta shoes. From time to time, she also carries a white katana, usually when she is out patrolling the village. The katana was given to her by her father, a family weapon passed down from her great grandparents.

Her more feminine look is simply a kimono. Because of the restriction in movement when she wears one, she never wears one outside of the family manor. Her favourite colours are blue and white so her kimonos are often a mixture of those colours. She loves wearing kimonos in the winter and will often wear one when she has guests over at her house. All of her kimonos are also made of silk and have some kind of flower pattern on them. She is not a big fan of accessories, wearing hardly any even when she wears her kimono. The only accessory she will sometimes wear is a necklace, hidden underneath the layers of clothing, given to her by her mother.

In every day life, she prefers to wear short sleeves and a skirt, but hates wearing heels. One will often see her in either her black yukata or a plain shirt with a white blazer and a matching skirt. Koto was never a real fashionista and doesn't take any interest in things like make-up. She wears very little make-up, only the occasional lip gloss or lipstick only because of her pale complexion. Sometimes she will wear a long black dress but only for very formal events. She believes in the idea that as long as you are beautiful, what you wear doesn't matter.

Recently, she prefers to wear aqua blue coloured eye contacts. This slight change gives her appearance an eerie yet sharper look, enhancing her facial features. When she is working for or with other shinobi, her black yukata is replaced with a white dress, a change to give off an air of maturity, earning her the nickname Icy from other shinobi. She sometimes changes her hair colour too, depending on her mood.

Background

The Birth of a Goddess 

Kotoe was born to two loving parents, the eldest of three children. Although she lived in a family where boys were more favoured than girls, both her parents were very doting on her. She was born in the winter, one day after New Years, and was seen as a gift from the gods. From the time she was very young, her relationship with her parents were strong, especially with her father. They would play in the snow and he would take her to places around the village. This didn't change even with the arrival of her younger brother and sister. Her parents shared their love equally between the siblings and Kotoe became very protective of them too. They were known around the village as a tight knit family and was well respected by others. Her father was a shinobi and her mother a retired medic. 

When she was seven however, this beautiful family image was shattered. Kotoe was just beginning to understand the concept of a shinobi and was readying herself to enter the academy. At that point, her father had already told her about her kekkei gekkai, and the possible dangers of it. She remembered the night when she was playing out in the garden when she suddenly heard a cry from her mother. She rushed into the house and saw two men at the front door. She recognized them as two of her father's friends. Their expressions grave, she knew that they were not here for a simple visit. 

It was that night that she lost her father forever...

New Beginnings 

Her mother never really told her how her father had died, only that he had been killed by another shinobi. For a long time the once cheerful family mourned quietly for the loss. Kotoe helped her mother around the house and took care of her siblings, while being an academy student. Life was not easy without her father. She remembered sparring with one of her classmates, just like she normally did, practicing her reflexes when suddenly her vision changed. She couldn't really understand what was happening, but it was almost like a double vision. All of a sudden she saw different colours, blended together. Her classmate screamed in terror, running away and Kotoe passed out soon after. Her mother then told her about her kekkai gekkai, passed down to her by her father and that she had awakened its ability . 

At the age of 12, her mother remarried to a man named Sakuragi Ren. He had also been one of her instructors at the academy. She saw how caring he was to her mother, who had fallen quite ill after the death of her father. Kotoe wasn't opposed to their marriage, although she refuses to call him her father. She respected Ren a lot and would often train with her in his manor after school. She learned a little more about her bloodline and practiced some jutsus from scrolls her father had left behind. Although surprised and slightly scared of this newfound ability, she was determined to follow in her father's footsteps. 

On her fourteenth birthday, she was just helping out at the cafe like usual when she felt her muscles hurt. At first, she didn't think much of it, probably tired and stressed from training. So Kotoe didn't say anything and continued her busy life. But then one day when she woke up, she found her muscles hurt so much she couldn't get out of bed. Panic ran through her mind as she called her mother for assistance. Her mother had been a medic but couldn't diagnose her. After several trips to the hospital, the results came back. It was a mild case of fibromyalgia, which made most of the muscles in her body hurt quite frequently and make her very tired. Since there was no cure, she would have to live with it. 

[Koto]

Techniques:

Kekkei Gekkai Jutsu

Chibi Ryuugan (Little Dragon Eye)
Rank: "C"
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The power of the Ryuugan Doujutsu is unleashed, allowing the user to see the elements of Lightning, Air, and Water up to a certain distance and increase general seeing distance of one's eyes.
Special: ---
Drawback: Cannot see out of natural line of sight, takes a negligible amount of Chakra to maintain. Cannot pierce Genjutsu.
Description: The first stage of the Kazeraikou Doujutsu forces a temporary change of the user's eyes. The iris and pupil of the eye become one and change to a color decided at the first awakening depending on their mood. The color is like a cloud and swirls around the user's eye when looking around. Small lines of white will flash across the eyes like lightning bolts and continually do so as long as the eye is active. With the First stage of the Ryuugan Doujutsu unleashed, it allows the user to see the elements of Lightning, Air, and Water within normal viewing parameters. One's natural sight is also enhanced giving the capability of 2x zoom capabilities. The user sees the elements as three new, vibrant, and opaque colors that mesh perfectly with their normal vision, giving the user the ability to see the three elements without hindering their normal vision in the slightest. Of course normal vision can hinder this special sight, as the user cannot see through walls or other things as normal.
Limit: Must be a Kazeraikou, must have Raiton, Fuuton, Suiton releases.

Arashi no Kiero (Channeling of the Tempest)
Rank: "C", "B", "A", "S" ("B" Rank Additional)
Skill: Ninjutsu/Supplementary
Effect: After activating the Ryuugan, the user will be able to channel lightning, water, or wind chakra into each hand.
Special: Handseals
Drawback: Wastes a D Rank amount of chakra each turn.
Description: By learning to channel their unique chakra into a normal Raiton, Suiton, or Fuuton jutsu the user is capable of controlling where it begins. After completing the handseals used for the jutsu the user channels one element of chakra to each hand. (IE: Lightning and Water; Water and Water.) Others are able to see the element from each hand because they exude the element given to them. This is used for the other jutsu of the clan and simply having this jutsu active wastes chakra each turn. To learn the clans techniques they must have the corresponding rank of this jutsu. An additional B Rank training can be done any time after the B Rank version of this technique to remove the handseals needed. Though the same amount of time applies to get the channeling to succeed.
Limit: Requires at least Chibi Ryuugan

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Techniques:

Medical Jutsu

Healing Hands (Minor)
Rank: "D"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A Healer gains the ability to heal Minor Wounds within an amount of time.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: When laying the hand upon a living creature, the user channels positive energy that cures Minor wounds within the amount of time performing a "D" Rank technique in handseals. While curing Minor wounds this technique brings higher wound levels down by 1 step. Since undead are powered by negative energy, this Jutsu deals damage to them instead of curing their wounds.
Limit: Must be a Medical Doctor.

Healing Hands (Light)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A Healer gains the ability to heal Light Wounds within an amount of time.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: When laying the hand upon a living creature, the user channels positive energy that cures Light wounds within the amount of time performing a "C" Rank technique in handseals. While curing Light wounds this technique brings higher wound levels down by 1 step. Since undead are powered by negative energy, this Jutsu deals damage to them instead of curing their wounds.
Limit: Must be a Medical Doctor. Must know Healing Hands (Minor)

Chakra Scalpel
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The user creates chakra blade along the index and middle finger that is no longer than 1 inch long.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture The user creates chakra blade along the index and middle finger that is no longer than 1 inch long. This allows the user to create a highly precise cutting tool. This can be used for highly accurate incisions necessary for surgeries and anatomical dissections. Unlike regular scalpels, the Chakra Scalpel can make cuts inside the body without actually creating a wound, limiting the risks of infection. The chakra scalpel can also be used offensively, although it requires great precision to be effective. Because of this requirement, using the chakra scalpel offensively is highly unusual. In heated combat, even the greatest Medical Doctors will not be able to exert the precision needed to make fatal cuts, but it can still effectively cut muscle tissues and tendons, rendering the target immobile.
Limit: Must be a Medical Doctor.

Ease Pain
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: Ease pain immediately removes any lingering effects of pain, including penalties imposed by debilitating Jutsus.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A touching technique. Ease Pain immediately removes any lingering effects of pain, including penalties imposed by debilitating Jutsus. It does not heal any damage or other effects not directly related to pain. If the target creature is under some effect that causes continuing damage, the pain is eased only for a moment. Ease Pain cannot bypass the need of Extended Handseals, or extended movements. This technique does not allow a user to move about and act normally if there is damaged limbs, or if a Technique damages Movements or Handseals. The duration of this technique is Instantaneous.
Limit: Must be a Medical Doctor.

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Techniques

Taijutsu

Shuuketsu Tessen Sutansu [Closed Fan Stance]
Rank: D
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: The basic position for techniques with a closed fan.
Special: --
Drawback: --
Description: The user stands with their feet shoulder width apart and one slightly forwards. The dominant hand will hold the weapon at shoulder height with the weapon pointed forwards.
Limit: Must be a follower of Tessen-Jutsu.

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Techniques:

Ninjutsu

Water Release Skill
Rank: "D"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A prerequisite technique that allows the user to perform Water Release techniques.
Special: Handseals
Drawback: ---
Description: This technique does not count against the user's Release Training Points. Water is one of the basic elemental nature transformation techniques allowing the user to manipulate pre-existing water by turning their Chakra into Water. It takes much more ability to create the water outside the body than to manipulate what is already available or expel it from their mouths (Need Water Creation Technique from Jutsu Enhancement Techniques). Water Release techniques can not only change shape but state as well. Moreover, the water becomes more solid in the process as well, and certain techniques can even allow the user to increase the water's density or viscosity, making it a suitable element to capture the targets. Offensive water techniques seem to inflict harm from the sudden force that they exert, which would cause massive internal damage to a human. Any Save Difficulty mentioned in a technique, whether Fortitude or Will is based off of 10 + 2 per Class Level + Impeccable Will. Some Ice Release techniques need pre-existing ice, snow, or water nearby in order to be used. Techniques that require a small source of water nearby is measured between 1.5 to 6 cubic meters. Medium is measured between 6 to 30 cubic meters. Large is measured between 30 cubic meters to 350 cubic meters. Huge is measured between 350 cubic meters to 1,500 cubic meters. Colossal is measured by anything more than 1,500 cubic meters.
Limit: Must learn for Water Release NinJutsu.

Wind Release Skill
Rank: "D"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A prerequisite technique that allows the user to perform Wind Release techniques.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Wind release is 1 of the 5 basic elemental nature transformations. Most offensive Wind Release techniques are performed by making chakra as sharp and thin as possible, however, wind can also be generated as a large, concussive force to overwhelm a target. Wind-based techniques are mainly short to mid-ranged offensive techniques that combine brute force and keen precision to deal slashing damage. Wind Release also specifies in deflecting and even reflecting attacks. Wind Techniques come in 7 Wind Effects, which interfere with ranged attacks, or impose penalties on some skill checks. Wind Effects are described in the Combat section of the Player's Handbook under Weather in the Movement and Position section. Any Save Difficulty mentioned in a technique, whether Fortitude or Will is based off of 10 + 2 per Class Level + Impeccable Will.
Limit: Must learn for Wind Release NinJutsu.

Raiton no Jutsu (Lightning Release Skill)
Rank: "D"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: This technique does not count against the user's Release Training Points. With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Lightning. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Lightning Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

Water Release Ninjutsu

Locate Water
Rank: "D"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: User can sense water within a vast distance.
Special: Handseals
Drawback: ---
Description: Range of this technique is 120 meters + 60 meters per Class Level. Area of effect is 120 meters + 60 meters per Class Level centered around the user. Duration of this technique is 5 minutes per Class Level. User senses the direction and distance of a body of water such as a lake, stream, or ocean, even if it is underground or beyond the user's sight. This Jutsu cannot be used to sense the presence of water in a creature's body or small amounts of water such as that contained in a flask, cup or barrel. This Jutsu is blocked by even a thin sheet of lead, but it will pierce illusions.
Limit: Must know Water Release.

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Techniques:

Clan Jutsu

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Techniques:

Miscellaneous Jutsu 




Skills





Traits

Anatomist
Rank: "C"
Skill: Combat Trait
Effect: The user has far more knowledge of the Anatomy than most due to their upbringing.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: User has studied the workings of anatomy, either as a student at university or as an apprentice mortician or necromancer. User knows where to aim their blows to strike vital organs. User gains a +5 trait bonus on Damage when making Critical hits. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies

Hidden Hand
Rank: "C"
Skill: Combat Trait
Effect: User's concealed weapons strike fast and true.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: User gains a +5 trait bonus on Sleight of Hand checks made to conceal light weapons and a +5 Armour Points in Attack Damage when making an attack with a light weapon during a surprise attack. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.

Patient Calm
Rank: "C"
Skill: Faith Trait
Effect: As a child, the user has struggled to suppress a sharp temper, but the care and patient respect of a trusted community leader rubbed off on them.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: As they grew older, they developed a remarkable ability to keep calm and collected when performing a task they are familiar with. Chose 5 Task skills and the user gains a +5 trait bonus on said skills. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.

Inspired
Rank: "C"
Skill: Faith Trait
Effect: A positive force, philosophy, or divine presence fills the user with hope, and is a guiding force of inspiration.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Once per day, The user rolls twice and take the better result on Skill checks. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies

Alchemical Adept
Rank: "C"
Skill: Chakra Trait
Effect: User is skilled in creating Alchemical items.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: User gains a +10 trait bonus on Alchemy checks made to create Alchemical items. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies

Sacred Touch
Rank: "C"
Skill: Faith Trait
Effect: User was exposed to a potent source of positive energy as a child.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: User was exposed to a potent source of positive energy as a child, perhaps by being born under the right cosmic sign, or maybe because one of their parents was a gifted healer. By taking up the movement of "C" rank handseals, the user may automatically stabilize a dying creature merely by touching it. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.

Havoc of the Society
Rank: "C"
Skill: Chakra Trait
Effect: Through countless hours studying vast libraries of Chakra power, they have learned how to cause greater damage to their foes.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Whenever user performs a Jutsu that deals damage, user gains a +10 trait bonus to the total damage dealt (damage is applied to a single attack, cannot be applied to multiple attacks). This damage is considered force damage regardless of the type of damage dealt by the Jutsu. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.


Focused Study
Rank: "C"
Skill: Social Trait
Effect: A trait that automatically increases the rank of a Skill per Class Level up to "B" Class Level.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: All humans are skillful, but some, rather than being generalists, tend to specialize in a handful of skills. At "D" Class, "C" Class, and "B" Class, such humans gain +20 bonus in a skill of their choice as a bonus technique (User may Choose the same, or a different Skill per Class Level). This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.

Able Learner
Rank: "C"
Skill: Social Trait
Effect: The user has great aptitude for learning.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: When learning a skill, the skill states how many times a die roll may be applied to show how much they learned within that skill. Example, when a user learns "Botany" they gain 5 die rolls. This "trait" increases the amount of die rolls by 1.5 rounded to the highest number at 1 die roll per learning, however any number higher than 1 die roll is rounded down. For example: User learns Botany and gains 5 die rolls. With this Trait they will gain 7 die rolls. However if a user learns Lockpicking they normally get 1 die roll, however with this Trait they will gain 2 die rolls.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 2 Freebies.

Trained Medic
Rank: "C"
Skill: Regional Trait
Effect: User has studied medicine and chirurgery, and recognize on sight the signs of ailments and toxins.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: User gains a +10 trait bonus to all First Aid checks, and gains a +1 points per die roll when learning the skill. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.

Physician
Rank: "C"
Skill: Heritage Trait
Effect: User is trained to the healing arts.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: User has +20 Skill points to divide as they wish among all First Aid, Botany, and Herbalist. At each Class Level the user gain an additional +5 Heritage skill Points to place in any one of these skills. User gains +1 Heritage Points per die roll when learning the skill. User also gains a +10 to all First Aid Skills. Through advanced training in medicine and healing techniques, the user can set bones, suture lacerations, and apply a myriad of balms, unguents, and other remedies to speed the healing process. Such care requires 1 minute. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies

[Skulking Shinzu]

Everything looks fine. Bloodlimit characters require five paragraphs in appearance, but one of your paragraphs is quite large, so I can count the total as five. Only issue I see is your starting techniques.

To start as a Kazeraikou, you need the Arashi no Kiero technique, which requires Chibi Ryuugan, which requires Wind, Water and Lightning release. You have Water, but are currently missing Wind and Lightning in your starting techniques.

[Koto]

Thank you for the review!

Fixed!

Edit: Added a paragraph to Personality, which is what I think you meant instead of Appearance.

[Skulking Shinzu]

Ops yep, personality. Looks good now.

1/3

[Cadoc]

Looks good, characters gain 10 free techniques called freebies which are Releases, Perceptions, Stances, Skills, or Traits. Generally, its recommended that you take traits

[Koto]

Thanks for the reminder. Updated!
Please let me know if there are any other mistakes.

[👺 Usiel]

2.3 It's 12 Freebies, not 10 lol.

[ᖫᖭØMNÏᖫᖭ]

3/3

Accepted