Black Ice.....Training

[chotzu]

Suiton: Chiisaimizubakahatsu (Tiny Water Explosion)
Rank: “D”
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: Creates a small wave of water that rushes towards an opponent.
Special: Dog, Dragon, Rat
Drawback: N/A
Description: The user performs the handseals described in special. There, they release chakra into the water and send a small tidal wave (about five feet tall) towards the opponent. The water moves at a speed of about ten miles per hour, so a direct hit from the water can be painful, but not life-threatening.
Limit: Water Release

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As the star glisten in the ever lasting dark black sky, Chotzu would lay awake from wonder. He looked up into the sky and watched the stars in a field of grass. As his legs were crossed and elbows behind his head, he lay awake from the deep thoughts that rest apon his mind. He thought back to when he was alittle kid and his true firend. They shared so many times together that he would remeber them forever but now times would change. Chotzu had wasted so much time doing nothing and always being carried around, now was the time to get strong, he would train in the morning to come, now was his time, now was the time to get serious, now was the time to get stronger.

In the Dusk...........

Before the sun could touch the earth Chotzu was up, taking a shower and getting ready for training. As he stepped out the shower, he would have to walk to the wooden chair and grab his towel. He dried off, put a long sleeve black shirt and baggy black pants. As he looked into his food supplie there was nothing but oatmeal and some strawberries, so he would make oatmeal. Finding a match, Chotzu then found a pan and went outside and out the water on......................In 10 minutes the water was boiled and he then poured the water into the dry food. As the water mixed, he then chopped up some strawberries into little bits and stuck them in. In a couple of mintues the food was gone and Chotzu was wiping bits of food from around his mouth. He then washed the pots and pans. Chotzu them walked into his room and put on his ninja shoes and got his backpack.

The Morning will consume.............

Walking along the path and leaving his home secure, Chotzu them drifted into the forest and then thought for a minute. "Mabe, I should go train in the water" and from there he walked from a nearby path, that lead him to the ocean. As he looked around, there was sand apon the ground and little sea stars that stuck apon the rocks, this would be the perfect place to train or learn an attack. From academy, they teach you how to strech the perfect way, so there is no cramps and there is no muscle pains in the process of Chotzu training. As he lifted from his streching, it was time to learn a jutsu, D rank was his aim.

At that moment, Chotzu then walked onto the ocean, using cakura to hold him above the water. He then reached in his backpack and pulled out a small piece of paper. Apon the paper, was the symbol of a Dog, Dragon, and a Rat. At that the top in chinese was a the title Chiisaimizubakahatsu and the description at the bottom. He though about the symbols and tried to remeber them. He then ran off the water and put the paper in his back pack and place that far from the water. As he put the back pack down, he then took the paper out once more and then followed the symbols, for they would show him the jutsu.

He then in a jiffy ran back to the ocean and almost forgot to put chakura in his feet. As he stood, he then closed his eyes and in a slow motion, he did the hand symbols, slowly but surely he got them. As the ocean then shifted, the waves would rise slowly and then they would charge at him but very slowly. As they hit him, it was not much force and would only cause Chotzu to step back a couple of steps but it was not enough. He then preformed the Symbols again but in a sudden change of events, the water would stay low and would not move. "What the hell......." but he would not give up, for that was for weaklings and chumps. He then quickly, did the patterns and in a rush, the waves formed 5 ft and as he opened his eyes they were heading at him, he was then knocked back onto the sand, he then looked up from a daze, spitting sand out of his mouth.

[Kuro]

+10

Add it.

[chotzu]

Koorisuberi (Ice Sliding)
Rank: “D”
Skill: Kekkei Genkai - Ninjutsu, Supplementary
Effect: Allows the user to move around on the ground or water as if they were skating on ice. Cuts travel time by half.
Special: “Hand Seals” – Serpent, Dragon, Tiger
Drawback: It is easy to track down anyone who uses this technique anywhere besides an ice terrain.
Description: By manipulating water molecules and chakra to underneath their feet, the user slides across the ground or water as if they were skating on ice allowing them to travel much faster then the average shinobi’s running speed with less strain on their muscles. With each step, the area stepped on is left covered with some frost.
Limit: Anyone of the Haku Bloodlimit may learn. Requires both the water and ice release. Requires “Water Creation” and “Ice Creation”

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A Childhood Memory......................

Getting up from the sand, Chotzu was nearly knocked out from the tidal wave. As He shook the sand of his shirt, he then dugg his finger deep in his ear to pluck the sand particuls out of his ears. He also breath heavly out of his noes to push the sand out of there also, with a smile on his face for this time brought back memories. From his time when he little and growing up, him and his best had come to a beach like this, maybe this one. They had heard stories from the older ninja that there was teasure buried in the far sand. The two would wake up very early and run to the beach and get shovels and digg for the treasure. They would laugh together and would get sand all over them. As the days grew on and the nights came alittle faster, Chotzu's best firend would have to move more quickly trying to find it. Chotzu mood would be base apon progress of the digging, he would push his firend way to hard.

One day, his firend would not take it and just agrue and leave Chotzu to all the digging, slowly digging, he would put down the shovel and find his firend. As they seemed to meet in the same place, Chotzu would also see a unknown girl along side of his firend, for his firend had matured and found love inside of a girl that lived in the village, Chotzu would be second place from there on and he could not take it. As the weeks past on, he would make a realations to this female and they would be firends. One day she told him to come to the beach and as they meet, Chotzu and this female would lay apon the sand and watch a sunset and as the sun went down the girl came closer to the lips of Chotzu, as sun was gone, the golden dripping hunny from the sun lasted for a couple mintues and then the sun was gone and they where still kissing.


From the far mist would come Chotzu's firend, in a angry manner, he would try and punch Chotzu. His firend missed and Chotzu laid a punch apon his face, making his noes bleed, the girl would then cry and run away, they both after her in a race to see who would get there first and then his firend would then stop running and run home crying. Those next few months without a firend would suck..............

Time For Training....................

Snapping back to earth, he was in a daze and time had not really left him, for it was alittle sample of a huge movie. Looking at the ocean, he just wanted to sit there and remeber back on all the good times but he had to train. Making sure all the sand has left his body, he decided it was time to learn a ice jutsu. He would only use the ocean if nesscary. He then walked to the bookbag that lay on the rocks. As he took out his book of jutsu, he found some candy and chewed it, it was blueberrie his favorite. As he digged for another piece, he had found one in the deep interior of the book bag. He then pulled out the book of jutsu and then found a ice jutsu called Ice sliding.

He needed to first learn the seals and get them stuck in his mind before any thing. He then practice the jutsu very slowly, messing up the first time and going back for support, he then did the seals again.....Serpent......Dragon.......Tiger......would be the seals that left a burning image in his mind. Chotzu, then did the seals in a fast motion and sped across the sand and unto the water, where he would slid and speed across the water. As he came to the water, ripps would start to form but in a split second, he flew flat on his face. As he got up, he rubbed his nose, for the pain shot came fast. He then walked of the water in disappointment but still going to try this move again. He went back to the books and studie the seals some more.

He had found his mistake, he had produce the seal wrong, he felt like a idot. He then put on a serious face closed his eyes and let his hand produce the seals, they burst out of his hand, one by one and with the Ice in his eyes, he charged across the oceans and before he charged he was sliding on the ground, leaving bits of frost behind, as he glided across the water, it spit and the water touch his face, glistening in the afternoon sun.

[Deleted]

Plus 8. Like the storyline, just, not enough training.

[chotzu]

More Training.............

As the sun glisten off the face of the warrior, he would close his eyes to protect himself from the harmful UV rays. As he closed his eyes he could picture the perfect training for this jutsu. This was the time to have fun. He set up a 10 of longs in the water, letting them float but sure not to move them in the wronge direction , he then tied them up with wire. He then paced back 20 steps away from the water and he sped full speed at the logs, at the last moment, he jumped from the water...............he was in mid-air and then at the last 3 logs, he landed on them and grinded off of them like a skate board.

He would try again, this time 30 paces backwords. He then spurg across the water and was almost there but at the last second, flew from the sky like a missle. Almost, tripping when he hit that last log, he summer salted onto the water. As he swam, he then climb out of the water using chakura and then lifted himself standing apon the water.

This would the last time, he as he looked at the logs, he then closed his eyes again and then punched chakura into his feet, as the chakura pushed, he sped across the floor and then in the right moment he jumped up and flew. He had went all the way over, he had finally did it.

[Masakuni]

+2
(10.10) Learned.

[chotzu]

Fuuton Kaze no Senbon (Needles of the Wind)
Rank: D Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: ---
Description: The ninja gathers air with his hands and mixes it with chakra, by doing this he transforms them into sharp and deadly needles. The needles are almost invisible so it is hard for the enemies to see them. Because the needles are made of air they cannot be blocked or deflected. The only way to ensure safety is to dodge them.
Limit: Wind Release

Silent Shot.................

Landing on the water in a peaceful manner, while hands touching the wavy water. Chotzu slowly rose with a smile on his face and at the tip of the ice berg. This was his second move that he had mastered and there would be more. The birds raced past in the sky, and a couple of them chased each other, playing a tag like game. Over in the trees, were the rotens racing for nuts and claming there property, seting a new standard for the forest. He also peeked back over to his backpack, making sure it was in the same place. Though then flew past his mind, that, what if he had not trained? he would be the same old Chotzu, weak. At that moment, Chotzu sped towards his bookbag and before he touch the surface, he front flipped onto the sand.

Landing on the sand, kneeled down, one hand on the sand. As he got up, he walked to the bookbag and pulled out the book of jutsu's, and looked for wind jutsu. Finding the perfect one, he decided this would take much time to learn and it was already in the afternoon. The sun would drop and he would be out in the night training but if that what it would have to take, then he would stay in eternal darkness. He would advance unto a move called Needle of the wind and he would read the description. This would be perfect for future dreams and he figured this would be a good time to learn this jutsu.

For this jutsu, there would not be any need of multipul seals, it would be simply, his chakura and his third element, wind. This would be similar to ice jutsu needle but would work differently because they were a mix of chakura and wind. Chotzu then put the book down in its place and got ready for this next jutsu. Think about the shape of the needles and what size they needed to be he would learn then train.

Gathering wind in his hand, the trees that where near breezed and the leaves swishhhh back in fourth. Feeling the air incicrle his hands, it was soft, almost like touching a cloud. When he younger, he would use wind to blow dirt out of his cuts and when he did not know how to whistle, he would put his pointer and index up to make sounds. The sand at his feet blew and he stood there wind in his hands and then he added chakura. The chakura then pumped out of his body and into his hands, mixing and forming whats to be needle. Then, in a small image in his mind, little needles began to take place, and in the same time, they where taking place in his hands. Invisble, but yet he could feel them and when he closed his hands, it was like sebon needles.

To test these needles out, there would have to be a target lined up somewhere. As Chotzu opened his eyes, he looked dead at a limp tree, dying it seemed from the heat. This tree would be cut and used for paper. He then realsed the needles and in a blast they took off and hitting the tree fast. Not really knowing, when and where they would hit would seem the problem. As he went over to the tree they made a thump noise, so that what gave them there location. Examaning the tree, little tiny holes where then made in the tree but the needles where gone. He had made the needles perfect.

[Masakuni]

+9
(9.10)

[chotzu]

Fast Pace...............

From the looks of thing, this jutsu was all under hand. Chotzu would not need much more work from this and his goal had already been accomplished. He would need a advantage for this jutsu and to find that out he must learn how to produce this jutsu much faster. He then did it again, he put his hands in a cup formation and blew air into them as the chakura mixed and made the needles.

He then slowly place them between his knuckles and tossed them at the tree. He then did the process much faster and tossed the needles at the tree, they were like invisable bullets, pieceing the tree, making small indentations. He then played around alittle bit with the jutsu

[hotaru]

+1 \^-^/

[chotzu]

Kirigakure no Jutsu (Hidden Mist Skill)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A Skill where a user uses the water around them to create a massive mist to fill around the user.
Special: Handseals
Drawback: ---
Description: A skill which creates a very dense fog that descreases the surrounding visibility to near zero. It produces an environment perfect for a silent assassin who follows an opponent through sound. This mist can not be blown away by any type of Wind Jutsu.
Limit: Water Release

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Dark Covering..............

The needles stuck into the tree, making the tree like a dart board. Leaves falling, from the natural branchs, making small noises as the drifted slowly apon the ground. The indent of the tree made a spiral like cordination and flowed down the tree like slow hunny pour from a glass. The trees goldenss made it sparkle in the eyes of chotzu as he looked up from the ground, dirt sprinkling on his shirt. Thats was great, he slowly picked up his head, now was the time to go for a C rank. As he walked over to the bookbag, he looked up into the sky and again noticed that the birds chased each other, following after each other. This sky would not just make up birds but different kinds, eagles, hawks, blue jays, etc. they all lived in harmony, dominating the sky.

This would bring a quick smile apon the face of chotzu as he notice a brown small bird taking food from another bird, as the brown bird darted away, another black bird would swoop up, kill the brown bird for the food and travel an unknown distance. The brown bird spiraled towards the ground and lands on the sand. As chotzu walked over with curiosity on his mind, bacause of such a silent kill would bring wonder to his mind. As he creeped forwards, the bird twiched, and then went dead, eyes open, not very peacefully.

He would be brought into the after death and rott for eternity, never to see the real world, never to see earth again. A scary thought indeed but this happens everday, without much care from Chotzu anyway. Examining the bird, he notice that there was a claw into the face of the brown bird, blood poured out the neck of the bird. Suddenly, the bird twiched again, and with a hand to the neck of the bird, he twisted it like a bottle cape, breaking it's neck and making it helpless to the real unknown pain of death, as it systems shut down, it eyes still peered over to the eyes of Chotzu.

He would pick it up and bring it over to the bookbag, saving it for dinner. Dingging into the bookbag and pulling out a rather heavy book, filled with many jutsu from wind to water to ice. Flipping the pages, new jutsu would reflect off his eyes one by one but many were not avaliable to him yet. He would then flip over to the C jutsu, only to be stopping at one, his own village jutsu. This would be a challenge indeed but he would do his best. At that moment, he looked apon the ocean one more time and used it as a ever lasting resorce to his ability.

He then step by step walk apon the water, with the burning image of seals apon his mind. Making ripples in the water ever step he took, small water splashed apon his foot. He then sat apon the water, so he could yet again practice the long heal seals. For some reason they where not long but rather short, for the handseals before hand been practice for him. They stayed with him like a perfect memorie only to leave his mind in death. He performed the handseals, slowly but surely, not even making a slight mistake. Then he stood, it was like a movie, the animals stop and looked for they were curois themselfs.

As stood still for a quick second, he then speed burst in his handseals and in a matter of seconds they where performed and then the secret mist began. He came slowly, one last look at the animals and then they where gone. It had been sucessful, blocking out visitation and dropping it down to zero. It covered the ground but still showed the evergreeness of the trees. A thought in his mind then sprug up, the animals where perfect prey......

[chotzu]

Disappearing in the mist.............

A white great covering, covered the face the Ninja. The soft mist gentle at most, dampined his face, feeling like a soft angel from above. He suddenly, pictured the animals where the places were, and how they where standing. He would have to train in this thick mist and get usted to it for his next mission would have something to do with this. With a sudden move of the leg, he suddenly moved quitely making no unessary noise, this would do his good in the long run. As he came apon the sabdy beach, haze was everywhere, Chotzu then walked into the forest, the bushes guiding his way. As he stumbled apon a short stump inplanted into the ground, he then put both of his feet apon the stump standing alittle taller than usual. As the seconds passed by, he then blew into his hand, mixing chakura and wind making needles. Then with a swing of the wrist, they flew from his hand and landed into some near-by trees. As they landed they made a knocking noise into the wood, and it scared some of the animals, so they took off scattering like a whole bunch of marbles. Suddenly, with the wind from his breath, the needles where made again and tossed at moving objects. As they sturck the creature, it flew with a thump and landed, it was a black shadow lay still but it was not much more than a bird or a squirrle

[Tenkai]

+6
+2
`8.30]

It is out of 20 since you are D-Rank.

[chotzu]

Wait, I was not dont with my thread

[adero]

Out of 30...

and all NF training is graded as is. Just make a new post continuing

[chotzu]

Disappearing in the mist.............

A white great covering, covered the face the Ninja. The soft mist gentle at most, dampined his face, feeling like a soft angel from above. He suddenly, pictured the animals where the places were, and how they where standing. He would have to train in this thick mist and get usted to it for his next mission would have something to do with this. With a sudden move of the leg, he suddenly moved quitely making no unessary noise, this would do his good in the long run. As he came apon the sandy beach, haze was everywhere, Chotzu then walked into the forest, the bushes guiding his way.

As he stumbled apon a short stump inplanted into the ground, he then put both of his feet apon the stump standing alittle taller than usual. As the seconds passed by, he then blew into his hand, mixing chakura and wind making needles. Then with a swing of the wrist, they flew from his hand and landed into some near-by trees. As they landed they made a knocking noise into the wood, and it scared some of the animals, so they took off scattering like a whole bunch of marbles. Suddenly, with the wind from his breath, the needles where made again and tossed at moving objects.

As they sturck the creature, it flew with a thump and landed, it was a black shadow lay still but it was not much more than a bird or a squirrle. As the trail of blood leaked towards the stump that stay stuck apon the ground, it stained the dirt floor, sepping into the soil. This was surly not the goal, for he need to kill a deer or something bigger. At that moment he then tried again, blowing into his hand and forming needles, he tossed them at the tree. The animals then scattered, running rapid, he then tossed the needles at a moving animal killing it instantly.

He then peered over and noticed that the animal had been struck right into the head, the needles hang in his brain. This was another small animal, he was disappointed, very. He would not give instead try again but this time slower. He then stood still for a second and listen to the sounds of the trees filling the brezze blow apon his skin. He then blew up up into the air and using his wind element and blow the bushes around. He then noticed a big animal 4 hine legs and two horns standing in a particular spot. Did his eyes play tricks apon him or was this figure really there. He squinted harder, he then blew into his hands once more and made the sharp wind needles.

With the flip of his wrist, the needles flew out of his hand and into the path of the deer, also noticing it was a male by its horns, he would not go down easy. They stuck a direct hit, he then before the deer could run, he tossed ten more at the deer, all ten hit. All of a sudden the image of the deer changed into a huge black shadow, it then charged at Chotzu with rage. Chotzu stood still apon the tree stump, waiting watch, as it charged he had known what it was. It was a bear.

Bear Attack...................

It was a massive bear, Chotzu's eyes had fooled him. It was huge black bear. As it came apon the area, it then roared loudly. No sudden movement because a slash would end Chotzu's life, another would ripp him apart. Stareing into the eyes of the bear would show his emotion towards Chotzu. The fire in it's eyes, would leave an eternal memorie of this, burning. As the moments passed, the bear then lifted his palm into the air. Chotzu, knew he had to protect himself. The bear then swung his fist towards Chotzu, claws sticking out. He backflipped off the tree stomp and onto the ground. He then jogged down to the sandy beach, the bear had cominted war, and he would be killed.

Stepping onto the sand, the bear came to the beach roaring, flopping its fat. This bear would not be much of a compition if had just walked into the water, bacause Chotzu could just swim cicrles around him. As the bear ran towards him, slash, Chotzu donking and dodging. He then backflipped all the way to the water adding chakura to his feet as the where in mid-air. He would kill the beast fast in a hurry, it had started something that it would soon regret. The mist had un thicken and bear was there, so he would have to lure the bear into the water. Chotzu mocked the bear, as he stood apon the water, and the bear roared with a loud roar and followed into the water swimming thinking it would catch up and ripp Chotzu apart. As the bear swam, it placed itself in a perfect position for attack of all kinds. Chotzu then smile and mumbled, "What a dumb bear" he then place his hands upward and unleashed handseals.

The mist then thickened, blocking out vistitation to zero, he could only see a shadow but that was good enough. The bear just floated in the water, roaring loudly giving it postion away easy. Chotzu then did two sets of jutsu, the first was his Ninja Art:Ice Sliding.....It made him two times fast in the water. The other set was an attack on the bear, his Ninja Art: Chiisaimizubakahatsu, a waved formed into the ocean about 5 feet, the chakura then took over and it flew at the bear hitting it in the head, almost drowning the bear under water. Chotzu then blew into his hands forming needles of wind, he the slid over to the bears head and let off. The needles dug deep into its head, in his face, blood pouring out, The bear roared from the pain, and then after a couple more needles, stop still and the sunk into the bottom of the ocean, the blood rose to the surface, a dark spot just sat...............

Perfect Kill....................

As he stepped apon the sand, it crumped apon his feet. He then put the jutsu book on a tree stomp. He sat next to the book, and breath in and out, what a rush. As he got ready to go, he had heard another roar, he peered around, two more bears had come. They both charged, Chotzu swunging and clawing. Chotzu jumped up off his feet and ran, but before he could jump into ninja speed, the bear had slash his back and cut him. He fell out the sky like a missle and dropped apon the sand. He then looked up and the bear was all ready apon him.

Ducking and rolling out of the way, he then blew into his hands again, forming needles, ten in each hand. Tossed them, they stuck but did not make much damage. He then headed for the forest and as he ran into the mist and thick forest he would pick them off. As they came, walking slowly, the bears looked around, not noticing that Chotzu had climbed a tree. The mist made a perfect covering, he then unleashed needles, hitting the bears, picering them. He then took cover behind a branch. As the bear looked around, the one on the left would become, Chotzu's first victim. He then made a needles kind of thick and he tossed them, as it came it flew right into the eye of the bear, as the bear got hit, it went insane and started to hit the other bear.


It then was clawed by the other bear in the face. He then ran into a tree, knock itself unconsions, one down, one more to go. Falling a victiem to Chotzu's rath, one bear remain standing. He then remeber his sword, thick enough to slice the bear but he had forgot it at the beach. He had made his way for the beach, almost hitting the trees, the bear had caught his trail and chased him. Bears where fast but Chotzu was faster, making it to the beach, he had came out on the otherside of the beach. Looking over, he had notice the books and his sword was by the tree stomp, he then made his way to the otherside of the beach but the bear had followed him and jumped into his path. The bear was not letting Chotzu go no futher but he would prevail. Chotzu then ran to the bear and ducked for he tried to swing, again. The claw then caught leg and made a cut but if he had not moved quick enough, his leg would have been ripped off. He stood back to back with the bear, and with a speed burst he had reach his sword.

The sword of his clan, had gleamed, with a single swing, the bear would be cut in half, forming needles in his hand, he tossed them at the bear, with the bear blocking the needle it would creat a distraction, he then with ninja speed sped over to the bear and with a single swing cut the bear in half. It had been a crazy fight but it was over. He then instead of head home skin the bears of there fur, so he could sell it for money or just wear in the winter.

[Tenkai]

I meant 30 lol.
+10

`18.30]

[chotzu]

*Here I go again*

Chotzu a man of water and ice. His jutsu was seemed as yet a threat to all mankind if he had ever gotten to powerful, he could become a problem for society. A danger to all but for now his skills needed to be sharpen and so did the senbon needles that he had carried on his pouch. Chotzu would become what his family had been awaiting for him to become or just his mother. She had been so shocked the night the little boy had used a knife to end the life of a much bigger and older man but he had not cared for such and took his mind off such memories as he brought the bear skins back to his home.

As he poured through the door he had already been very tried and had some deep cuts and scratches here and there over his body. They would be pictures or memories that would not be forgotton, eternal scars. Locking his door and fixing up the house alittle Chotzu flew to his bed where he would sleep and dream a thousand dreams...

Daytime...

Chotzu awoke to a fresh start but his scratches still stung alittle but he had rubbed speacil hurbs up there so that the body could healed before going out to training. The bears claws was then transfored into hid mind thinking about man who had died by the hand of the bears but he had been a survivor.

Chotzu ate his breakfast and hurried out the door to train alittle more before the day would be let go again and he would have to make some of those days he missed. He walked fast to the beach beach to see an old man waiting and sitting down watch the shore. "I've been waiting for you" he said as he watch the ocean.

{Training with an older one.....

The old man kept talking but kept his face in the direction of the ocean as if he had been looking out there forsomthing. He turned slightly to see Chotzu behind him, "Come sit with me" he said with a soft tone. "What is your name" and Chotzu spoke....Chotzu. "Well, that's a nice name, well my is Tasuku Tao but you could call me Master Tao.

I was watching your show with the bears and I thinked you handled your self pretty good for starters, (chotzu took that comment in respect) how about I help you train to become better at everthing you do young warrior, I have plenty of knowledge of the ice, water, and wind jutsu's, so how bout I help you improve on that mist jutsu".

Chotzu decided that it could not hurt him but keep him moving faster in the mastery direction. The old man got up from the spot he had been sitting in and followed the old man down the beach side alittle bit. "Now go on the water and make the mist and go in it hard for the longer the mist last the better". Chotzu then left Tao and stood apon the water. He proformed the hands seals and put alittle more chakura into them. By doing that Mist would thicken making it very hard to see.

He then got up off the water and found the old man. "Good, now I have one thing for you todo today and that is to find me as I walk into this deep dence forest, this won't be as easy as it sounds but you will survive if you listen carefully to the noise around you, now lets being" he the trailed off to the forest disappearing down the rode. Chotzu then picked up his thick metal sword and placed it in its holder on his back.

He then ran up a tree and bounced from branch to branch to cover ground. As a couple of minutes passed by the mist was still thick and Chotzu was starting to get the hang of the mist being so thick. He stopped a few times to listen to see if anyone had been walking by but this time he spotted a shadow moving in the very thick mist. He decided this was his time to snuf the man out of there so he founded the branch near him. He then threw kunai at him, the thing stopped and dodged the dodge the kunai. He then went still but Chotzu could only see him as a black blurr.

A couple seconds later the blurr threw a explosive tag at the tree and sent Chotzu to the floor below. Getting up slowly his head had be hit on the ground giving him a headache. Chotzu then looked around to see that the man had been gone. He shook his head to rid the dizzness and ran after the man with quick speed. Slowly look around he noticed that the man had been behind him walking the opposite direction. So Chotzu took out his sword and headed after the man in green. When he got to about 7 feet away he tossed kunai at the man but he simply avoided them and threw a explosive kunai in the ground but chotzu did not notice it and got blowen backwards for the tag was places a few feet infront of him.

The old man then sped up down the trail but Chotzu had been on the ground. He got up again and wipped the water off his face and the dirt of his clothes. He then walked down the road to regain his energy and then pushed chakura into his feet to boost in speed where he caught the old man jogging. Chotzu then thought for a second and made wind needles. The mist dampend and it made a great covering but he had been forgetting about listening to the sound and threw the wind needles. The stuck the man right in the back since he could not hear them coming but he was brought by a shocker. The man was a clone disappearing into smoke as the needles went through him. Chotzu was then attack by 12 clones coming from the branches with kunai in there hands.

With a 360 degree spin he manged to take about 7 of them out while the others surrounded him. His sword was then places into the dirt and he decided he needed some pratice so he pulled out two kunai and took the 5 head on. A slash at one and a kick at another they where all turned to smoke. Chotzu finally finshed the last on with a stab to the heart, as he burst into smoke a note was placed on the floor that said beach, chotzu gathered his things and headed for the beach.

As he arrived he noticed that the old man had been there watching the waves. He had a red cloth under him this time as he sat on the sand he patted his hand down.

"Come sit, there's much to learn"...

[Tenkai]

Form noticeable paragraphs when you train. It is very hard to read it in one big paragraph -- I actually lower scores if you have a bad format >.<

[chotzu]

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