Denova's gates training

[denova]

Denova hit the ground with a loud thud, where he emerged from the cratr he had created, seemingly unscratched. Jumping at a slightly obtuse angle, he blasted off into the air. Running through the trees like pigs from a gun, he finally came out of the woods and to the cloud village. He would jump from rooftop to rooftop, to fimd a place to meditate quietly. Denova finally found the top of a tall building, where he focused all his chakra and began the process again. Multiply, divide, complete. Flatten, even out, complete. Harden, dry, complete. Explode, expand, complete. Denova let the energy die down and admired himself. He was getting good((DO NOT GRADE YET))

[::Himiko::]

Surotto Etoku ­(Slot Understanding)
Rank: "C" ; "B" ; "A" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: Slot understanding is the understanding of Slots, the more slots a puppeteer knows the more puppets they can control. This means that if a puppeteer wishes to control a Large Puppet they must know Forty Slots. This means that if a user knows Eighty Slots they can control one Huge Puppet, or One Large Puppet with Two Medium Puppets, or Four Medium Puppets.
Special: Must be a Puppeteer.
Drawback: Must be learned multiple times in order for the person to use more then one puppet. The more puppets you know the smaller distance you have when using The Puppet Technique. A limit though is stopped by how many puppets can be controlled. A Normal Puppet master is only capable of controlling up to Ten Puppets at a time, this means one puppet per finger. The only way a user is capable of controlling more then ten puppets at a time by chakra strings is if they use the Hitokugutsu (Human Puppet) on them self.
Description: A puppeteer automatically knows twenty slots, this enables them to control One Medium sized Puppet or two small sized puppets. The more you go into Slot understanding the more you can control. Each time learned the user learns five more Slots. When the user reaches up to a hundred slots, the it gets harder for a user to use multiple objects and the training raises up to B Rank. When the user reaches up to three hundred slots, then the training goes up another rank of A Rank as the training becomes endless after that.
Limit: Must know Ningyoutsukai Seigyo Keii Chuui Kajuu (Puppeteer Mastery Light and Medium Weight) Along with this. Must be learned multiple times.

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Himiko found herself jumping through the humble vilage of cloud's roof tops. The bright red gleam from the roof shingles has a quite elegant look towards them as she hurried across the many building.
The day was slowly transforming into night as the sun sunk slowly into the horizon. A beautiful orange glow seem to have stretched infinitely across the village of cloud. Himiko wanted to stop by the item shop then make her way to some missions. She was going to outfit her new puppet with some more weaponry and find herself a simple mission to fund herself.

The quite village was indeed a beauty to behold, which brought Himiko a great sense of pride as she flickers across its building tops. She would not be far from her destination until her eyes would catch the site of a figure upon the roof top. It seemed to be a small boy, black afro....and unusual.... attire. Moving silently, Himiko felt that she should investigate a little further.... This boy,... who seemed to be sitting and doing nothing else,...on that lonely little roof top.

He appeared not to be threating whats so ever, but rather the opposite. "MMm....maybe this could be very interesting training for me" Himiko said to herself. "I have plenty of time, there's no rush...why not?" Himiko continued on. As she moved closer to the building, she allowed chakra to pool at the bottom of her feet. Himiko would change her course downward, as she decided to scale the side of the building first, in silence, and then appear before the boy.

She channeled chakra around her to suppress noise mildly, as well as use her "transformation Jutsu" to change her appearance. She needed to be careful regardless of who this person maybe. Once in close contact with the boy, she would appear before him as another person. Her guise would conceal her true identity as she retrieved more information form the boy. Friend, foe? We are about to find out....

Changing her voice, Himiko, and in her old man guise, began to speak to the boy.

"Hey....hey you sonny.....what in tar nation ....are you doin.... way up here. All by yourself....?" Said Himiko as she mimicked a raspy voice....

[denova]

So there he was, sitting up ona roof, when an old man smoking a pipe comes up and asks: "Hey....hey you sonny.....what in tar nation ....are you doin.... way up here. All by yourself....?" Denova stared at the man for a moment, then replied, "Well, if you must know, I'm training. Denova stared down at the wide landscape and beautiful city. It was a wonder. Then Denova began to wonder how the man got up there. He pushed the thought away, and stood up. "May I help you?" Denova asked.

[::Himiko::]

The boy raised himself from the floor, looking to the main and replying to his question. "Training huh" olf man Himiko said. He appeared to be...some what very young. a Genin perhaps, but not one she recognized. Was he born in the village?

"May I help you?" the boy replied.

"Why yes you may! This is my building youngin...., and I don't know what your doin up here, but it seems fishy. You...sittin up here....all quite....alone. It ain't right right boy...what are you trainin on anywho?
said Himiko raspingly.

As the boy spoke, Himiko would continue to gauge the boys specification. The more information she recovered, the better. Himiko felt good that she was brushing up, but it was time to have some fun.....

[denova]

"Why yes you may! This is my building youngin...., and I don't know what your doin up here, but it seems fishy. You...sittin up here....all quite....alone. It ain't right right boy...what are you trainin on anywho?
This scared Denova. He didn't want to reveal to much to an old man; god knows what he is planning to do with this info. But...


Uh-oh. Denova was loitering. "AHH LOOK BEHIND YOU" Denova yelled, sounding very frightened. He dove off the building and ran as far as he could. He stopped and looked at the building. The little black dot (the man) was there. Denova felt he had made a bad impression. He slowly walked back to apologize.

As he walked up the side of the building, hands in his pockets. He got up to the top and apologized glumly.

[::Himiko::]

{{ok, I see the problem here. Denova, you state to many action in such little detail in such little time. Lets try to tone it down a notch, explain your actions in a bit more detail, and remeber, a single post is rouhgly 6 seconds. Only a S-ranked taimaster can move at the speeds in which your going, or it is going to take at least more then 6 seconds for your post.}}

Himiko would not fall for such a simple trick. First off, this is the village she was in. Its safe. Secondly, The boy should realize what he does before hand. His is showing off his immense speed. So its going to be obvious that he was a peson that favors tai jutsu. Thirdly, He was using bland trickery to fool the disguised Himiko. "Mmh.....this kid has alot to learn about the art of war" Himiko said to herself.

As the boy returned, he seemed very humbled and sorry. "You know boy.....there alot of things you still need to learn. Even as a genin...which you seem to be..., the world is still going to teach you much. COme now....what are you doing. Tell me, maybe i can help you a bit youngin....." Replied the old man...


{{Ps: Denova, I want you from now on to post and quote the technique your learning ok?}}

[denova]

{{The qoute is on the first page, where I started learning it))
I'm learnung how to open the chakra gates. One of the prerequisites. Speed of the mind." Denova said. "But how can you help me? You're just an old man" The words coming out of Denova's mouth seemed to flutter through the air, and the wind pushing by made a whishing sound in Denova's ears. Denova's silver eyes were fixed upon the old man, wondering who he was.

[::Himiko::]

Lol
nonono...I meant like this Denova:

Speed of the Mind
Rank: "C", "B", "A"
Skill: Skill / Knowledge / TaiJutsu
Effect: Within this, this type of knowledge and technique enables the user the capability of withstanding the elements of the Chakra Gates. They must learn this multiple times. Without this the Chakra gates become more destructive within the body. The body must be capable of enduring the gates, and this allows the body to endure the speed for the gate.
Special: ---
Drawback: Must be learned each time before they go into a new gate. For Gates one through three they must learn the "C" Rank version, for Gates four through six they must learn the "B" Rank version, and for Gates six and seven they must learn the "A" Rank versions.
Description: ---
Limit: Must become a Chakra Gate User.

And Help others keep track of the tp you have accumulated too. Place the amounts you have gained at the bottom of each thread. Like

"26/30"

This way, people don't have to break there necks looking for how much you have or don't have.
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I'm learnung how to open the chakra gates. One of the prerequisites. Speed of the mind." Denova said. "But how can you help me? You're just an old man"

"What n the hell! Respect your elders boy!" Himiko said in her raspy voice.

Looking back, Himiko was not complete oblivious to what the chakra gates where. She had read a few things here and there about the principle and properties to using the chakra gates. The gates allowed the person the push past all of there physical limitation, beyond that of the Human limitation....
"This boy....i hope he knows what he is doing" said Himiko to herself.

"Well now, It seems that i can help foo" Himiko said in her raspy voice once more. "You see boy, Just running around like your doing is fine and all. Meditation is fine and all. But then again, there still is much more to be done".

Looking around, Himiko spots a few hundred bricks in the conrner of the building roof top. A few strings also laid strewed about along with the bricks. With a flash and a flicker, Himiko quickly grabbed a few hundred bricks, and forcefully tied them to Denova's body. ((If you don't mind me controlling you for a sec XD))

"Now, Speed of mind trains your muscles to endure the massive strain on your muscles. So now, since you don't have the gates, and there is no strain to be had, you need to improvise boy. These bricks should weigh you down enough so that you movement sucks even more then it does now" (lol) Said Himiko

''At the same time, Im going to spare with you in your Hindered state. Fight my little toys, while tied up, then you should progress further then you already are doing now". Said Himiko

Luckily, The roof top was large enough for a small fight to commence between the two, roughly 20 sq meters, plenty of room. "You have roughly 200lbs on you now, lets see you fight" said Himiko as she began to unravel one of her bundled puppets from her back. She was summoning "Gumobura" to the field, (a large, fat puppet)

Himiko takes a few leaps back herself, positioning near the ledge of the building. Gumobura remains in the summoned state, rigid and waiting for commands. Upon reaching the edge, Gumobura would spring into action, charging forward to Denova's location. The puppet would throw a flurry of simple and straight punches. Nothing more then jabs here and there.

At the same time, Himiko watches close;y to Denovas action and body movements, gaging more information form him...

0/20

[denova]

{{LOOK at the first page! After Tieren's post it is quoted!}}

It all happened so fast. The First thing that happened, Denova was covered in bricks. The next thing that happened, he was attacked by a fat doll. "What the f.V.cK?!" Denova yelled. He threw his head to one side and dodged a punch, and then pushed all of his chakra up on the bricks on top of him. The punches came like rain in spring. Denova's chakra was evening. Another punch. Duck. Crap. Now I can't stand up. Denova thought. Denova's chakra was working fast. It had already hardened by then. Then, it exploded like a backed up pipe. "MERRY CHRISTMAS, B**CH!!" Denova yelled with exhilaration. He would spring off his fet and try to tackle the puppet's legs straight on, even while it was still punching him.

23/30

[adero]

+2 denova 25.30
+2 himi-chan 2.20 (Srry himi-chan.... I dont really see any training until you summon gumobura... if i missed something holla)

as for you denova, "{{LOOK at the first page! After Tieren's post it is quoted!}}" She means quote it at the beginning of every indiviual post whether its at the first page or not... do u have any idea how hard it is to grade tp, when we dont know what your training? you want tp, well make it easy, because im not going out of my way to find out what in tar nation (xD) your doing.

[::Himiko::]

{{Thanks alot adero. I was actually just beginning my fight here, i i actually excepted a on or something XDDD

Ok Denova, Time to get serious. Im going to kick it up a notch. Be sure to be VERY descriptive.

I'll give you some more pointers (But im sure you probably know most of them).
Training can consist with more then just...training XD, More things can be derived from your training then just a work out. 1) you can build your charries storyline a bit more 2) Give insight to your characters past 3) The reason why your learning the move 4)who taught you the move 5)Emotions and thought and goals when this move is done 6) etc.

Last things:
~State the feeling of your body a bit more. How does your muscle feel?
~State the distance between you and your enemies
~yea, thats about it XDDD

Ok, Lets begin. If you don't perform to the slandered in which i believe you should be at, I will send you to the hospital

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Himiko was surprised that the boy could keep up with her puppets at the state he was in. He was weighted down, head to toe, yet still dodging the flurry of punches. As the fight continued, Himiko would disconnect her chakra strings of her right hand, and place them upon her secondary bundle. She was going to summon "Kamakiri" to the field, Her devilish looking, four armed puppet.

Her puppet would hover around her back area and slowly unravel as Denova seem to begin to retaliate against Gumobura. "Mmmmmh....Still much to be learned Boy" Himiko said raspingly. It seems that the boy hard shifted his body into a charging position, to which he was going to tackle Gumobura.

Realizing this, Himiko Commanded Gumobura to match Denova's running speed, but still allow him to catch up. This task shouldn't be too hard since the boy was servily hindered, moving with the bricks and all. Himiko was going to let the boy chase after her puppet for a second or so, allowing the bricks to work on his muscles a bit more. If he remained close to Gumobura, even after the chase, Himiko would just command her puppet to side step Denova.

During this rather amusing run around, Himiko would command Kamakiri to join the fight soon after. Himiko ordered her puppet to hover straight forward to Denova as he continued to fight Gumobura.
She was going to allow Kamakiri to throw a few very light punches from Denova sides as he was preoccupied with Gumo.

Himiko Herself found that she was gong to shift her position as well. She decided to run along the sides of the roof top, positioning herself adjacently to Denova's back. "There boy, you gunna get a good work out today...bein a little genin of dis village and all"

As soon as Kamakiri would reach Denova's location, Himiko realized what she had to do. "Oh Crap! Im late! Gotta run!" Himiko yelled as she abandoned her puppets final attacks.
She commanded them to be bundled and returned to her back as Himiko left in a hurry.

"Catch yah later"

{Exit 2/20}

{{Sorry Denova, I promised Yori I do a quick mission with her. I'll be back to train later k? o.o;}}

[adero]

+6 himi-chan ^.^

8.20

[denova]

Speed of the Mind
Rank: "C", "B", "A"
Skill: Skill / Knowledge / TaiJutsu
Effect: Within this, this type of knowledge and technique enables the user the capability of withstanding the elements of the Chakra Gates. They must learn this multiple times. Without this the Chakra gates become more destructive within the body. The body must be capable of enduring the gates, and this allows the body to endure the speed for the gate.
Special: ---
Drawback: Must be learned each time before they go into a new gate. For Gates one through three they must learn the "C" Rank version, for Gates four through six they must learn the "B" Rank version, and for Gates six and seven they must learn the "A" Rank versions.
Description: ---
Limit: Must become a Chakra Gate User.

Denova's entire body ached like hell. "Catch yah later" The man said. Then Denova felt like an idiot for running around. Denova wanted to kill that man and his puppets. But, like as a kid in the academy, he knew that day would never come. Denova's emotional structure was very unstable due to the death of his parents. Anger built up inside him. He was enraged. Tormented. His chakra followed up with his anger, making hate. He hadn't learned anything about the move training with that retarded blowhole. Denova just stood there. He could do nothing. Should he try the move again? No. Will he? Yes.

Anger corresponding with chakra, with one yell that sounded un-human, his chakra blasted out from all of his body, flinging the bricks from him and off the building. He chakra swirled around him like penguins waiting to be fed. He was a monster. He would let the bricks fall and hit people. He didn't care. He didn't care anymore. That is what would make him strong.

[denova]

Speed of the Mind
Rank: "C", "B", "A"
Skill: Skill / Knowledge / TaiJutsu
Effect: Within this, this type of knowledge and technique enables the user the capability of withstanding the elements of the Chakra Gates. They must learn this multiple times. Without this the Chakra gates become more destructive within the body. The body must be capable of enduring the gates, and this allows the body to endure the speed for the gate.
Special: ---
Drawback: Must be learned each time before they go into a new gate. For Gates one through three they must learn the "C" Rank version, for Gates four through six they must learn the "B" Rank version, and for Gates six and seven they must learn the "A" Rank versions.
Description: ---
Limit: Must become a Chakra Gate User.

25/30

Denova realized he could not make anybody else do anything about this. He had to fix it. He had to make himself a god. With the sun turning away from Denova and the moon looking at down at him, Denova's reality was a mental and physical nightmare. Denova hated everybody. The entire world. Nobody had given him anything but hate. Denova sat down and cried meekly. He pushed the tears from his face and shouted at the setting sun. He tore around the top of the building, swearing and screaming at everything. A waterfall of anger ever swirling around Denova's mind affected his chakra. It tried to comfort him. It tried to calm him down. Denova pushed it away and began to punch and kick some of it.

His chakra decided it was time to get a little rough.

It wrapped around Denova's waist, arms and legs, keeping him from moving. Denova continued to scream. It seemed as if the appearing stars twinkled with laughter at Denova's misery. Denova cursed them. The setting sun waved goodbye at the horizon over the sea, and made a rarely seen green flash. It was like a spark of Denova's hope. He would try the jutsu once more. His chakra receded (is that a word?) and he calmed down. He sat down to try it again.

He wrapped the bricks around him again. He sat down with the weight of the bricks pushing up against his strained muscles and began to multiply his chakra.

[denova]

Speed of the Mind
Rank: "C", "B", "A"
Skill: Skill / Knowledge / TaiJutsu
Effect: Within this, this type of knowledge and technique enables the user the capability of withstanding the elements of the Chakra Gates. They must learn this multiple times. Without this the Chakra gates become more destructive within the body. The body must be capable of enduring the gates, and this allows the body to endure the speed for the gate.
Special: ---
Drawback: Must be learned each time before they go into a new gate. For Gates one through three they must learn the "C" Rank version, for Gates four through six they must learn the "B" Rank version, and for Gates six and seven they must learn the "A" Rank versions.
Description: ---
Limit: Must become a Chakra Gate User.

His chakra multiplied just like germs. His chakra would become too much for his body and seep from his skin. He would continue to multiply until he could hold it no longer. He multiplied his chakra double time and made it expand and get bigger. He was done with the first step.

Second, he evenly divided it all. Denova quickly pushed the chakra flat so that it would divide evenly all over his whole body. Not one part of his body had more than another. It was all neat and organized. The second step was done.

Third step: Turn it all into a boulder. Seems simple enough just like that. It was exactly what Denova did. (unusual metaphor coming up) He took all his chakra, put it in Photoshop, desaturated all of it and gave it a rocky statue like feeling. His chakra was completely still and unable to budge if the entire world was resting upon it.

All the energy went off like excited children on Christmas day. 4th of July. An adult getting a long wanted promotion. What ever you want to call it. It all just exploded like a nuclear bomb. It was amazing to see. Denova stood up.

He felt no resistance from his bricks at all. He just felt normal. Of course, normal is something Denova would never be. He smiled. The jutsu worked. He took all of the bricks off and flung them off the side of the building. His energy dissipated and degenerated. He fell of his bottom and looked at the moon. It still looked down upon him. Denova needed to be higher than the moon. Up in the realm of the gods. Then the moon would look up at him. Once he was a god. And yet,

Reality continued to ruin his life.

[Tieren]

Good job, Learned. Now have fun learning the other 2 before you can finally learn the 1st gate!!!!!!!

[denova]

((I won't. Nobody has fun training >.<))

Paiken (Cup Fist)
Rank: E
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: (In description)
Special: --
Drawback: --
Description: This stance is supposed to mimic the user holding a cup. This puts the character’s hand in a good position for blocking and striking, keeping the hands and arms of the user ready for a wide variety of techniques, and makes the shoulders ready for explosive movements. The wrist is in a position where it can easily strike or block, and the fingers are curled in with the index finger hooked out, which helps in trapping an opponent's arms while blocking. The arms can be used for short or long range techniques, as well as the elbows, combined with various feints and strikes.
Limit: Must be Drunk to do.

0/5

Denova strolled down the busy streets of the Kumo Village. His destination: A fancy restaraunt. Every step he took took him closer to celebrating learning the first prerequisite. He arrived at the restaraunt, finally. He stepped in to see it was packed. He managed to find a seat, and waited for the waiter to come.

"Hello. Have you decided what you want to order" The waiter asked in a gentle voice.

"I'll have some noodles with shrimp and a bowl of rice." Denova said. The waiter asked him what he wanted to drink.

" Umm... Your finest sake."

"I am sorry, sir, but you are too young to drink sake."

"But I want it." Denova said, very serious and stern.

"You will have to speak with the bartender."

Denova walked over the bar. He looked at the bartender angrily.

"Is something wrong?" He asked.

"I. Want. Sake." Denova said.

"No. You are too young."

Denova grabbed the bartender by his collar, swung him over the counter and pinned him up against a collumn. "Look, I want sake, and you are going to give it to me. Get it?" Denova said, inches away from the man's face. The man hesitantly pured Denova a cup of sake, which Denova downed hastily. "Hah. See? I caught the toad." Denova said, his eyes wandering across their sockets. The man seemed confused. Denova fell to the floor in a pile, and soon got up. "I-I-I'm ok. No worry. I'm fine. You are jealous. Eat it!" Denova said, staring down at the counter. Everyobdy in the restaurant stared. All was silent but Denova talking. Denova began to blush. "Stop staring at me like that!" Denova yelled, throwing his cup across the room. "Sir, have you lost your mind?!" The barteneder asked. Denova leaned in very slowly, and smiled sinisterly.

"Yes." He whispered. And with that, Denova flipped backward and landed on a table, crushing all their food. The couple threw their silver ware at Denova. Denova dodged. People began to throw food and anything they could get their hands on. Denova seemed to fit right into the foodfighting crowd, and the manager stepped out. He gasped. The waiter pointed to Denova, telling the man that he had started it. Denova looked confused. The manager ran up to Denova. "STOP!" He yelled. Everybody stopped and all went silent. "You. You can't do this. Stop it! Get out of my resttaurant." The manager said, shaking his finger at Denova. The man was short and fat, and had a big mustache and nose, but no hair on his head. The manager was very sweaty and his blue shirt underneath his black overall-suit was stained with his sweaty armpits. Denova looked at the man, zoomed over to him, and


punched him clear across the room. Denova fell to the floor, and he awoke with no recognition of what time it was or anything. He was lying in bed at his house and apparently, Denova had spent his entire 8 hour jail time sleeping.

[Tieren]

Learned, remember what I said to you in YIM about this.