Giera Hozuki ((DONE, ready to be checked))

[giera]

Name: Giera
Age: 17
Height: 180cm
Weight: 65kg
Gender: Male
Alignment: Neutral (Rebel)
Birth Country: Mizu no Kuni (Land of Mist)
Village: Kirigakure (Village hidden in Mist)
Special: Ninjutsu Master

Ninjutsu Master (Freebies)

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Doton no Jutsu (Earth Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Earth. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Earth Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

Suiton no Jutsu (Water Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Water. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Water Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

Mokuton no Jutsu (Wood Release Skill)
Rank: "B"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Wood. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Wood Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: Must have Doton no Jutsu (Earth Release Skill) and Suiton no Jutsu (Water Release Skill).

Secondary Weapons:

Primary Weapon:

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Great Sword (Overview)
Rank: "C"
Type: Main
Effect: Swords that slash hack, dice and anything else within this genre that reaches a certain length.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Any bladed weapon that is longer then four feet, to even a whopping six and a half feet in length. weapons range from any types of blades such as the the Nodachi, the Great Sword, the Odachi, the Zanpacto. Any of these weapons or any weapon that fits within the length is considered as a long sword.
Limit: These types of weapons may be capable of being bought inside any Weapon Shop
Cost: 8,000 Ryo

Personality:

Appearance:

Bloodlimit:

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GenJutsu Techniques:

TaiJutsu Techniques:

History:

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Giera's parrents, Muroi Hozuki (mother) and Jookan Hozuki (father) was born on the island from where the Hozukis originally lived. They were the ancestors from those who had stayed on the island, when others had left with merchandisers, thus making them live in this tribal society. Giera's parrents didnt like the situation in this, in their eyes, primitive society, but stayed in it because of the lack of motivation. The motivation arrived short after the two had been declared man and wife, in the form of pregnancy. The two parrents would do anything for their child to have the best upbringing, and when Giera was born the two were desperate to get away. So with the help of a merchandiser, if a great sum of money is help, Muroi and Jookan was transported to Kirigakure, where they setled. Because of the desperation and the great deal of money lost on that account, Giera grew up in the poor neighboorhood of Kiri. It wasnt really the best place to grow up, But Giera learned a lot from it, and looking back at his childhood, Giera is almost happy by the view. His parrents were good and loving, all though Giera rarely admits it because of his current age.

Academy Arc
A fact that Muroi and Jookan hadnt predicted was the difference between Hozukis and "human beeings". Muroi and Jookan quickly made their skin resemble human skin, but Giera who had no power of his inherritated abilities were bullied around, because of his odd look, and "jelly-nesh". This didnt make him sad though, it only made him stronger. Giera developed a sence of standing up against norms, and beeing yourself. When Giera learned to control his membran (skin) he didnt want to change it at first, because he saw it as a admitance that he would please the crowd to fit in. His parrents told him to do otherwise, because it was creating many odd situations, and now that Giera have gotten used to it, he's actually more comfortable, and makes friends a lot easyer. The academy exame went okay. Giera only just managed to pass, because he had been bussy with a lot other things than just studying (look above)

Genin Arc
At the passing of the exam Giera was given his huge sword. Giera couldnt carry it at that time, and only took it out from time to time to look cool, only to come back embarrased and lock it away because a flock of old grannys had giggled about that "sweet little boy" as they said. But ofcourse the time came where Giera was able to carry it around, and he still is this today, and whenever he wields it, he feels just a tiny bit proud of himself.[/ul]

[giera]

NinJutsu Techniques:

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Atsui Usumaku (Transitional Membrane)
Rank: D, C, B, A
Skill: Ninjutsu, Supplementary
Effect: The user is capable of controlling the thickness of their transitional membrane. This technique is mandatory for all under the Hozuki bloodlimit. This is because it grants them their survival in battles and harsh weather conditions.
Special: ---
Drawback: Switching from ranks that are not next to each other takes 1 post (You cannot instantly switch from D rank thickness to B rank.). One can only switch their rank up or down one time per post.
Description:

During training, the user is capable of adjusting and altering their internal water pressure in their bodies. Doing so results in an increased density of their outer membrane. Chakra released from their nuclei protrusions allows water to be pressurized in a certain way underneath their transitional membrane thus resulting in the thickening and solidification of their skin. In order to switch from a higher rank of thickness to a lower, the user must decrease the amount of chakra released from their nuclei protrusions. Also, the user leaves their palms and the soles of their feet remain permeable (D ranked), thus allowing the usage of the water inside of them no matter what rank their in.

* D ranked: Very thin and moist layer of skin. This is the default layer of skin the Hozuki are normally in. Under this rank, the skin is most permeable, meaning they are able to absorb large amounts of water. Although they feel no physical pain, ninjutsu and genjutsu based attacks can affect them. Also, this skin is not suggested for harsh weather conditions. Exceedingly hot or cold weather can evaporate them or freeze them easily..

* C ranked: Under this rank, the transitional membrane is a similar thickness to that of the human skin. Can withstand any kind of weather conditions a human could. Since skin is more solidified, physical assaults on a Hozuki are more effective.

* B ranked: Under this rank, the water within their bodies is pressurized by chakra to the point in which it resembles a rock like thickness and texture. An Hozuki under this rank becomes stronger when landing physical attacks by half the rank of the attack they are using (a D rank punch gets an extra E rank damage added on). Speed is decreased by half a movement.

* A ranked: Under this rank, the water within their bodies are at the highest point of pressurization in which resembles a metal like thickness and texutre. An Hozuki under this rank becomes stronger when landing physical attacks by half the rank of the attack they are using. Speed is decreased by a full movement. Limbs are less prone to breaking. This state can only last for 3 posts before going back to D ranked thickness because it consumes a large amount of chakra.

Limit: Must belong to the Hozuki Bloodlimit, No slots are used up. Every Hozuki member begins with the D ranked version of this technique and work their way up.

Mugen Korosu (Infinite Breath)
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu, Passive
Effect: People under the Hozuki bloodlimit are able to breath underwater for as long as they’d like.
Special: ---
Drawback: Some jutsus may not work underwater.
Description: Due to the evolution of the Sagasu Tribe, the Hozuki are able to breath underwater without the need to come up for oxygen. This may serve as an advantage for hiding from an opponent near bodies of water and surprise attack them. Remaining underwater is also a method of “relaxing” in order to become more energized.
Limit: Must belong to the Hozuki bloodlimit.

Kaishin Shimasu (Regeneration)
Rank: C, B, A
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user is capable of regenerating any part of their body that has been lost.
Special: --
Drawback: Process can be extremely slow at first, leaving one vulnerable for attack. User needs some kind of surplus water source.
Description: The Hozuki are capable of regenerating any part of their body that they wish. By pumping their chakra and mixing it with either water from near by, or from the rest of their body, the lost body part is grown back in a certain amount of time.

* C ranked: Rate of growth is 3 post for every foot. When assisted by bodies of water, 1 ½ post.
* B ranked: Rate of growth is 1 post for every foot and a half. When assisted by bodies of water, ½ a post.
* A ranked: Rate of growth is instantly.

Limit: Must belong to the Hozuki Bloodlimit. User cannot grow additional limbs other than the ones that have been lost.

Body Flicker Technique
Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique)
Rank: "C" Rank
Type: NinJutsu/TaiJutsu
Effect: A High speed movement technique where a user moves from one point to another as if appearing to teleport in a short distance in almost untraceable speeds. User moves in 10 meters
Special: ---
Drawback Able to use 3 times a day when first learned. Each time learned after first time user is able to use it one more time. If user uses it passes the number capable, leg muscles cramp dramatically and user is unable to move till medical treatment. May only be used on the ground in a straight line whether facing forward or away.
Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination. When used this technique does not take up any movements. However a user may only use this technique equal to half the amount of their movements per round rounding down. Thus 3 movements user may use it only once per round. 15 movements user may use it 7 times per round without it taking up a movement.
Limit: User must have a Character.

Kiri Shunshin no Jutsu (Mist Instantaneous Body Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu/TaiJutsu
Effect: A High speed movement technique where a user moves from one point to another as if appearing to teleport in a short distance in almost untraceable speeds. User moves in 10 meters
Special: ---
Drawback May only use so many times as user knows Shunshin no Jutsu, 瞬身の術, (Body Flicker Technique). Unable to learn multiple times since it runs off of Shunshin no Jutsu, 瞬身の術, (Body Flicker Technique).
Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A technique in which a person creates an amount of mist within and all around them to confuse the opponent as the move from one area to another. Nothing to dramatic occurs as the user simply does it within arm's length of the user. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination. When used this technique does not take up any movements. However a user may only use this technique equal to half the amount of their movements per round rounding down. Thus 3 movements user may use it only once per round. 15 movements user may use it 7 times per round without it taking up a movement.
Limit: Must know Shunshin no Jutsu, 瞬身の術, (Body Flicker Technique), To Start user must be in The Hidden Village of Mist. Must have Water Around, Water Release.
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[shadowwind]

Hello there, just a heads up, since you're part of a blood limit you're only allowed 3 jutsu ranked C or below, you have far too many. You also need to post up the descriptions for your freebies, which I'm guessing are Suiton, Doton, and Ototon.

[atem.]

Its also spelled "Hozuki", not "Huzoki".

EDIT: Moar stuff.

Can only either start with Utility pouch or water bottle belt. Can't have both.

50 Senbon = Only 10 slots used. If you are going with the utility pouch, please fill in the final 5 slots.

For Mizukame, please post the entire overview of the weapon, THEN post the description of it under it if you please.

More personality, more appearance, IMO.

Since you are Hozuki, you MUST start with Atsui Usumaku (Transitional Membrane), Mugen Korosu (Infinite Breath), and Kaishin Shimasu (Regeneration). Since that is three techs right there, thats all you can have for now. You must learn more techniques ICly.

You can keep Shunshin and Kiri Shunshin, since they are Academy techs. Also, since you attended the Academy, don't forget you get those techs too. You don't have to post them, though.

When you copy those 3 techs, both Regeneration and Transitional Membrane have multiple ranks. Make sure you underline or bold the rank you know, which would be the lowest.

Good luck.

[giera]

-Its also spelled "Hozuki", not "Huzoki".
heheh... something must've slipped there ^^ edited

-Can only either start with Utility pouch or water bottle belt. Can't have both.
Chosen to have bottles, since that would fit my char the most. Can i have a minor slotchase (such as the one strapped onto my leg on the picture) for one slot (5 senbons)?

-For Mizukame, please post the entire overview of the weapon, THEN post the description of it under it if you please.
To be honest, I cant see how I've done anything wrong on the description of my weapon. I first describe the over-all info (2 meters long, weighs 20kg), then i go into detail with the blade itself (white and blue) and ends up with describing the handle, chain and bell.

-More personality, more appearance, IMO.
Added a couple of lines in appearance and Personality, where Ive also added a new paragraph. Added a little more history also.

-Since you are Hozuki, you MUST start with Atsui Usumaku (Transitional Membrane), Mugen Korosu (Infinite Breath), and Kaishin Shimasu (Regeneration). Since that is three techs right there, thats all you can have for now. You must learn more techniques ICly.
Fixed!

-When you copy those 3 techs, both Regeneration and Transitional Membrane have multiple ranks. Make sure you underline or bold the rank you know, which would be the lowest.
Okay, I just asumed it was obvious that i used the highest rank possible, but I see the logic in it.


Bear with me if I've spammed jutsus, and messed around in the specialties and freebies, but I've been on several other sites, and have never heard of all these things before.

Thanks for checking my app ^^

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