Lone Past, Present Sorrow(Training)

[Nara Maya]

Maya begun to preform seals as she begun to light up her hand with a red colored substances, hopefully for safety measures of course. She begun to emit that hand over the wolve's wound, and begun to heat up the temporary of the wound. So it was able to be stabilized...

As she had done that she begun to produce a form over heating temperance around her soft hands, allow her to better the temporary from one angle towards the next in a complete grimace of an ancient healing art. Was a in needy expression. To say the Least. As that was preformed she begun to turn the wove around and place her hand over the other side of the body to heat it up.

As that was done. She begun to over produce a single heat strut in order for it to keep in tack with the current source.

(2/10)

[Deleted]

+2 but just barely. It's not that your writings bad, it's just that you need to make your posts lengthy. I recommend at least 5 paragraphs per post.

[Nara Maya]

She sighed, as she looked at him, the wounded the dog, and made her way back towards him. She sighed, and took out her hand, as it glue red. And she placed it over the wounded dog's, chest. She then, slowly, begun to focus her energy, spiritual energy, and convert it into charka. Before doing so, she would. release, into her palm, and impale it towards the dog, heating up the dog's heat around it's body, for safe measure of use.

As that was done, she would feel a bit unversed and unsettled as if her head was hot, meaning she was or just received, a fever. Somehow, but that was nearly imposable correct? Or maybe it was not, who knows right? None the less the dog, seemed fine, and was able to be breathing, and working it's way back, and then the heat, dropped. Due to the coldness, of the Snow Village, She sighed, and slammed her butt on the cold, snow, to rest meaning relax.

(4/10)

[ladymia]

+3

[Nara Maya]

She sighed, as she was bit annoyed at the side effect and draw back, none the less she would press her hands over the dog's chest, at that minute, her hand glowed red, and it begun to slowly heat up the dog's body, in a semi, cause to heal it. Of the fever, she also tried to not over do the jutsu, because the dog can also experience a set of none existing, soothsaying, or diesel, or illness it did not have.

After doing so she put away the jutsu, but before she did, she felt ill. The fever she had had risen higher, she was not worried about her self, she could treat the fever with simple herb tea, or simple hot tea. She sighed a bit and sat down on the ground slowly.

After she sat down she got up, and would attempt to heal the dog again, by placing her hand over her chest she would begin to slowly, heat up the body's organs, and the skin, to give a warm, welcome to the skin, how the coldness in the air, prevented her, from treating the dog normal, without any cold breezing, for safety.

(7/10)

[ladymia]

Learned...just barely though.

Need to make your posts way longer

[Nara Maya]

SPOILER: Click to show

Ketsuki Gyouku (Blood Coagulation)
Rank: D, C, B
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Stops blood flow from injuries through clotting.
Special: --
Drawback: Large wounds can take a long time to stop the blood flow from.
Description: The user focuses chakra around their hands, creating a faint white glow around their hands. The user then places their hands on the wound, focusing chakra into the blood and coagulating it. Minor wounds take three movements to clot, whilst major ones require six movements, and critical injuries, such as a severed limb, requires nine movements to clot. For every rank above D you possess of this technique, remove one movement from the coagulation, to a minimum of one. For every difficulty rank above D you possess, remove one movement from the process.
Limit: Must be a medic.

Maya remained while she was, as she took a knife, she cut the a small participation of the dog's fur, and then slowly. Put the knife away, seeing the dog slowly bleed to death or begin bleeding to death. She took out one of her palms, and attempted for it to glow, yet nothing seemed to work at first. then she begun to gather charka around her hand again. As that happened her hand begun to glow a whitefish color.

After doing this she would begin to place her hand over the dog's bleeding would, and would begin to manifest charka around it to heal the wound.. But instead it slowly begun to clot.

(0/10)

[GO AWAY]

[Nara Maya]

She sighed, and begun to focus on the bleeding, resuming her stress on it, making it a near perfect sealing before taking, out the knife, and cutting it, after she cut deeper into the wound, she placed the knife back to where it belonged and slowly, begun to take out her right hand and place it over the wound, as she closed her eyes, she would attempt, to clog the wound, but however it did not work, and drained her heavily, because the wound was bigger and larger then the last one.

She keep her eyes closed and attempted to remain calm, which worked to some degree, as the healing process begun to slowly, clog. She then released her hand from the body, and sighed, breathing in and out of her breath to catch herself.

(2/10)

[Tieren]

+2

LONGER. POSTS. That's how you'll get more points. And stop constantly beginning with "She Sighed" It's really repetitive. Be creative. Work through each and every step of the technique you are training and think about every aspect. We aren't asking for novels, but if you keep doing repetitive motions over and over again in these really small posts, you're going to keep getting little amounts of points.

[Nara Maya]

He smiled, and begun to focus her charka still on the clogging of the blood to seal the wound slowly. Which was working fine still. But the drain was rather large from what it seemed for her. Yet she seemed to be battling it, she sighed to exhale, and inhale, twice. Before making the Clogging process go in depth, making the tissue of it, more towards it's self. Which which was a bit over board.

After she sealed the clogging, She took out her knife, and cut another wound on the dog, and then slowly. Placed the knife on the ground, before taking out her hand, and slowly. Making a fault white glow around her palm. After doing so, she would begin to press her hand over it, and slowly. Begin to resume her healing prepossess on the dog.

(4/10)

[Tieren]

+3
[7/10]

[Nara Maya]

She looked up and begun to quickly, allow her hand to glow bright white color, and would place her hand over towards the dog's or wolf's wound, whatever the species of this being was. And would begin the healing process of the dog. As that happened her flow of charka begin to increase, and raise fast. As she begun to emit more charka into the hand, for a bit of a faster pace of healing.

Which didn't work to well. It was like rushing to make a meal, and coming over cooked or under cooked. Which was rather annoying to say the least. She then cut of some of the quick pace moving charka, and remained healing the dog in the overall, normal way. The dog's wounds begun to slowly. Clog shut, and and the bleeding begun to stop as the wound begun to seal shut.

Which was rather better way of showing, it. She was a Medic, and an evil one at that. But that never stopped her from aching her goals. Which was rather strange, that the way she was experimenting on the dog. Or wolf was a better for the evil.

(7/10)

[GO AWAY]

[Nara Maya]

SPOILER: Click to show

Suji Rirakkusu (Muscle Relaxer)
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Relaxes the muscles.
Special:
Drawback: If overused, can erase muscle memory.
Description: The user focuses chakra into their hands and causing a light blue glow to emit from their hands. The user then places their hands over the afflicted area, relaxing the muscles over a course of two movements. If used for four movements or longer, the user’s muscles will soften and their muscle memory will fade.
Limit: Must be a medic.

She remained while she was, it seemed so calm and cool around the area, she was not sure where to begin her training. But like always she still had someone, the dog was here so it was good thing her was. She gave one deep long sigh before relaxing herself. And placing her hand out in the air, as it would begin to glow Light blueish color.

After that was done she would attempt to place her hand over the dog's sealed wound and would attempt, to make it's muscles, relax. though it didn't seem that way at first, the dog seemed to be struggling rather fastly, and making her focus more. She slapped the dog with her other hand in order to calm it down. Which succeeded. And his muscled had relaxed.

(0/10)

[GO AWAY]

[Nara Maya]

As she did this should, would slowly close her eyes for better control over the her charka, but she had wasted enough charka as it is for healing the dogged, her eyes slowly begun to fade, as she fell towards the ground and closed her eyes. She had awaken latter that night, with the dog barely alive. She dusted the snow off her, and slowly begun to. Allow the faint light blueish glow around her hand emit from her palm.

After that was done she would attempt, to make the muscles around the dog's wound heal up properly, before doing so so would gently pat the dog on it's head to slowly and gently give it support to tell it would be alright for her, and she'll be okay, she thought the dog was a she, could be a he, she was not sure.

(1/10)

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[Nara Maya]

She breathed slowly, from her mouth and then would begin to allow her hand to glow light blueish, as she placed her hand over the wounded dog, she would close her eyes, and would focus her energy on the dog's muscles, making them ease up slowly but carefully, Her leg jerked up and caused her to stop the jutsu.

It felt like some organically, Cramp. Sge begun to relax and ignore the pain, as that was done she would begin to form a light blueish glow around her hand in order to relax her muscles, but it was not intended for her but the animal instead as she begun to try and attempt and relax all his muscle.

(3/10)

[GO AWAY]