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If I lose I can never excuse myself till I grow old and enjoy my wealth you don't stand a chance matter of fact you don't have half the stance to stand if you stood if you have half a chance im sick and tired of this crap people saying I cant rap kncking me to the floor somehow I have to find a back door through all this nonsense prove everyone wrong this is my theme song the flo just seems to zoom along before long I will be on top no longer spittin rhymes on the bus stop time for me to adjust this my name is steve my favorite day is xmas eve my mom says im naive now let me take my absence without leave
its kinda sad and pathetic, how you jump on this dude it makes me mad and angry, so I'm a come at ya rude Kanaye, I know you just wanted to freestyle quick i feel you kid, relieve ya stress, thats how I handle my shit really they tried to test me, contest me, even best me even though the last freestyle I had was sorta messy
its sad to see you crabs....stuck in the bucket[no diss] but ya main course meal so I'm feeling like....fuck it did I curse, oops oops, don't jump on me Heero my language at a ten, but them fools want me at a zero? last battle that I had, between atsu and "the kid" the fan girls came in, boo'd every flow I did
Shinta, your diss and remix, didn't even make sense dropping cake and losing weight? some sort of self pretense? weights a serious thing, you sure you even wanna to talk might fix that confidence after a walk on the block nothing you don't know, that is if you don't know ya flow is like BO, takes some toilet paper, just go
lets keep it clean, lets keep it fresh, lets keep the flow pg if that ain't cool, if that ain't tight, I'll stop it, please believe me whats the point in battling, over a r-p site online creditably won't give you bragging rights "so I type a couple words, now I'm thinkin I'm hot" you think its truth, but the truth is: its not
my dude Jae, Jai, Joe....whatever ya name is ya flow so deep, touchin the back of my eyelids I'm asleep and frankly, I'm to weeded to flow right I guess its why my analogies don't even sound too tight but its iight cuz I'm cool, just chillen, being me the "J" to the "A" to the "I" bout to go to sleep.... peace
[falls asleep]
Really, why are you guys wasting your time on this shit, Kanaye wrote a freestyle, and if anything we are suppose to support his freedom of speech and literature ya feel me, this ain't no bash show man, people coming in here talking about how someone can't rhyme, maybe its not that he can't rhyme, but maybe he just doesn't know how to write his bars in a way that goes. I was bored out of my mind, listening to music, said "lets go see what the naruto people are doing" and then the first thing that catches my eye is this :/ I mean serious, people type what they feel, someone comes to get feedback, not be dissed and shit, so you basically dissed and kicked this kid out of his own thread O.o naw naw naw I don't like that shit, its fools pulling down other dudes stuff down trying to be the best that get on my nerves. What happened to just chillen with ya homeboy's on the block or in a car and busting a freestlye to have a good time. Honestly, hip-hop ain't dead, but don't make it sick man >_> [as I said I am a little ummm, chea, so I was on youtube getting in a big ass arguement with some dude over hip-hop, don't ask me why, so I guess this lit up a light bulb] honestly, Jae[I'm not sure what your real name is -_-;] does have a mean flow, I mean I heard his stuff on myspace and that shit was tight, but then all these fan girls come up in here talking about, "oh Jae just killed joo, oooo your thread is locked boy." naw naw naw, your flow is to mean and vicious to be wasting on this forum trying to lower Kanaye when he doin his own thing, and that goes for you Shinta :/ , so why you all on him when you should be in the studio with Jae making some hits too keep that hip-hop movement going "fam". Honestly I could see if this was a battle or something like me and Atsu had, but dude was having a cipher moment, "The Official (Diss) Remix." take that ish out. No disses to any of you peoples [even though I'm realizing I did kinda diss Jae and Shinta my little spit, sorry, we still cool, I'm in a just don't give a ish mood right now :/] but its for your own good........ why the hell I'm telling you all whats on my mind I don't know...ummm chea, have fun Naturotarians. Peace out to all of my none fan's since I have none on this site.
oh yea, and Kanaye, your on something, just try not to bite some stuff, I heard a little bit of Weezy F's stuff in there with the Shark In the Water ya feel me. You just need to learn how to write a bit with some fixed bars on that four count ya feel me.
"you don't stand a chance matter of fact you don't have half the stance to stand if you stood if you have half a chance"
its cool, but for some odd reason I feel like I heard that from someone else, just be careful with that iight, good job though. Jae let me in yo studio so I can umm, rock the mic witcha ya and get atsu to sing the chorus [friendly competition is all it is, but both making paper ya smell me like Jim Jones....well not Jim Jones, cuz he ain't as really as I thought cuz of what you told me in the c-box, ballin be fallin right lol]
Most niggas' flows is booty, yet they callin' 'em hits. Don't they know the only thing that come from booty is shit? Lyrically inclined to prophesy that the god's arrived. Cakin' up and cuttin'. "Blue Magic" to any who need supply. Ain't no trappin' where we at. I call it kickin' & pushin'. So all we do is "Lupe" while we smashin' and kushin'. I get work, eight hour shift like I'm goin' for legal. On the grind, push "State Property" like I'm lookin' to "Siegel". Never hungry, constantly digestin' "juice" and "bread". Seein' me? Nigga, save face like a celibate "Superhead". Clockwork, fam. Both hands on my six. That's where I keep the pump to lift a nigga off of his kicks.
And what's this about Atsu don' fell off his game? I could retire and come back like Jay, and shit would still be the same. My rep is set in stone, but I ain't "Tsuchi". I get brain and move on. You niggas prolly tongue-swirlin' the koochie. Don't get it twisted, it's a fact that I was thoroughly gifted. Few niggas know about the hustle, but many claim that they lived it.
You see I couldn't talk the talk or walk the walk still I tried to unlock my flo inside of me I guess I failed with all these haters tryin to diss maybe they want to see me enter a black abyss After time I did learn I had flo and yes, it exist I aint tryin to sit in the front seat I prefer to relaxe and watch the view as it flies by me It aint all about the rhyme acting like if you don't put it in their its some kind of crime It's about gettin a message through to kids let em no that it cool to do the opposite of left which is ugh, right
Lupe is my insperation the whole reason I got involed in this rap group I spit my rhymes from the heart if that aint cool don't tear me apart you see I am smart I am good they should form some kind of chart to prove that I aint the lower class you try to label me as I was kicked to the curb like im addicted to herb *looks down at watch* opps, I guess I went to far my time is up this was my victimless crime
Straight Up? I now know my Rap didn't make sense. That was my first freestyle, and now its in past tense. Now I sit on the Throne wit a New Style. I know I need to stop bein' a Fuckin' Diss Child.
On the Real, this Rap ain't here gon' mess wit no one here. This Little Sample Freestyle is about something that brought me a tear. It's about a kid in my school that was really startin' somethin. And now he is in my Rap, boy can't mess with Cliff Somethin'.
This B---- Fuckin' Wit me His name is Andrew, He Say he Betta then me Cause He a White Dude. Since He Say he From Korea, he be smokin' dat Bamboo, But You Tryin' to Diss me like you from fuckin' Bellevue?
Cause You Know. I am the American Dream. The Destruction and the Chaos, Man the Never Ending-Bleed, The overpriced weed and the Murderous Regime. He is just a front. Give him a Black Mask, Let him know what it is to house clean.
Yeah.
If I kill you, tell'em you played my game. I hope yo Bullet Holes become mouthes to say my name. Cause It's a Real Fuckin' Shame (Such a Shame). This Beast in my Heart ain't mutha fuckin' tame.
Andrew, you b----. No One Fuckin' Likes you. When Niggaz see you in the school, they all wanna Ice You. I got an Appetite for Destruction, Wheres My Menu? So when you ready, Tell Me Whats Your Issue.
Eh. >_> Bitin' a Lil off of Lupe's "Put You On Game".
This little situation was pretty bad. And after I got home and a whole lot of shit happened, I wrote in my Rhyme Book (Which you Are a Slave To). Just to relieve some pain and shit. On the real? I didn't mean to diss you Kanaye. Lol, Remember I told you in the C-Box. Your last couple Rhymes were pretty Hyphy. I hate to be thought of as a Hater or something. Ishi, I'll be your fan, cause that spit was pretty hot. O=
Last Edit: Apr 19, 2008 19:25:57 GMT -7 by Deleted
Now. Lol. I think you were thinking that we were doubting you because you are white. But. Lol. I didn't know you were until just now. Go Get 'Em Slim Shaddy [#2]! (Rotfl. I thought you were Black with some of those Spits.)[/size]
Last Edit: Apr 20, 2008 19:48:59 GMT -7 by Deleted
OMG he's white O.o.....no, I know a white kid that flows wild, probably better then me. I wont get into the subject about Black and White when it comes to music...this is an rp site :\
When it all started it was just me a young MC trying to pull himself up back on his feet Everytime I knocked down I would pull myself up afraid to admit defeat pretty soon I was gonna acheive this feat.
[x2] So let me tell ya a story ((A story)) When failure was not an option (( not an option)) Wouldn't be accepted
Now I was freestylin clown afraid to come down even though I was not on top I was havin fun on the run from the snitches I looked back on my life took a couple steps back with my hand around the mic It was obvious I needed stiches to stich up the mistakes I made
I'm comin in like big L so please step back', before I pull it out my pocket and pull the gat'. Nigga's say they real as me but they fruntin', and ol boy in the tights you need to stop stuntin'. (diss)-- Yo bitch keep callin and I only hit it one time, She won't that fine, so i bought one, and two nicks make a dime, everytime i'm out i'm lookin for a nigga to fight, i'd hit em up so quick he'd loose his sight, now it's night time So I might have to go to the studio and drop a few lines. My swagga ain't dat killa, but at least i got swerv', Some say I can't rap, but they got some nerv', They even threaten to kill me but it ain't they word', cuz' they sittin in the back, just hatin and scurd'. I got more bread than pillsbury french toast', and they never see me get it, i'm like a ghost', and i'm bout to stop flowin now, i'm startin to roast, no need to boast, i'm out.
They wake up. With a stomach ache. Feelin like they drinkin out of deaths cup Life going by so fast they need to catch ones breath afraid to go outside where many died bombs flashin outside of saddam's empty palace. Scared of Islam's, many have become. We are undeclared cause we never cared. All they want to be is spared. We declared war, and yet we unprepared. Not sure where to look, and how many familes we took It's sad watching a five year old cry over his dead dad Shouldn't happen. We need to open our eyes. stop bein blind, and maybe we can ride to the future. take a look of what we become we the reasons their family got hung. They shed a tear but we dont hear become a mute to sorrow and unafraid of fear....