Fire on the water [T]

[Eos]

[20|30]

Eos came up with the idea how avoid the flames. Remembering the fact that wet clothes or things burned slower, bloody-haired decided to see if the fire could touch her when she is wet. Performing the same hand seals for the third time, girl carefully watched at the rising black mist to the sky. She even more closely looked at forming clouds which reminded a scene from some horror film. At any rate, Eos finally felt a gentle rain, falling from the clouds. This rain didn’t bring the life or hope to this world; it was a prophet of another disaster. Holding the lighter in her hand, Eos smiled like a creep; she prepared for another wave of fire which would destroy Mother Nature even more. Well, it’s time.

Girl ignited the lighter and threw it on the ground, watching how fire started eating residue of previous blaze. Bloody-haired watched how fast fire was coming at her shoes but, surprisingly, it didn’t touch her although she was oiled. So it works. Eos was proud of herself but girl knew it wasn’t the last step. Now she must perform the jutsu as fast as possible just to make sure she won’t fail any hand seals in real battle. At first Eos released the jutsu, allowing fire to fade away. Carefully looking at burned trees and a few animals, bloody haired puckered her forehead. She wasn’t happy about her work; she wanted to see an empty desert here. For the last time performing hand seals, she slowly released chakra from the whole body. Mist, clouds, rain: everything was like the previous two times but this time red-haired performed jutsu way faster. Eos again ignited the lighter, watching how slowly the hurt rabbit died, how the last living creatures passed away. Now this place could be called a true desert.

When the place became lifeless, Eos bitterly laughed. She closed her eyes for a second, trying to remember how the place looked before. Probably the game called ‘find five differences’ wouldn’t fit here because the place was absolutely changed. Maybe it would be beneficial because new creatures, new plants now had great opportunity to revive this place. Unfortunately, for now the place became a graveyard for a lot of micro worlds. Looking at one burned tree, Eos saw the same blond girl. She turned her head to the right and she saw the other woman who was almost all red; only her skin was white. ‘I cannot believe I live in world where ninjas are controlling nature.’ Woman said sadly, seemingly blaming Eos. ‘Ha, soon you will be like useless… Hahahaha… Like a dog… Nobody will believe in gods… Hahaha… You will die if no one believes in you.’ blond girl said to the woman, obviously teasing her.

All sudden the two women figures had gone. Eos didn’t understand if this was reality or her imagination; this training seemed to be unrealistic. Thinking if she was one step closer to madness, girl performed hand seals again. She used the same jutsu and sit on black burned ground. Girl listened how oil landed on the ground; flammable liquid prepared Eos and empty place for another attack of fire. Unfortunately, bloody-haired didn’t want to set on fire an empty place; she just sat there alone, holding a lighter in her hand. She knew as a shinobi she had exclusive power to control the nature; from now on she had a special right to destroy the nature, deceiving the laws of nature. Bloody-haired felt this training taught her the lesson: one reckless decision or move can pull off the person to death. I believe the legend was true. I’m not mad and I really saw spirits. Otherwise I would be dead thought Eos, looking at the lighter.

[ustez]

Learned.

[Eos]

[[OOC: As far as I remember, you cannot rate my training posts because you aren't Assistant, Moderator, Head Moderator or Admin. So please, do not spam my training thread. Thank you for understanding.]

[kuragari]

lmao I'm not sure if that was a joke or not xDDD

anyways please do not grade any threads unless you are a staff member

+10

[Eos]

Suition: Baburu Kokyuu (Bubble Breath)
Rank: "C"
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Creates hundreads of bubbles for a limited time when the user breathes, with small amounts of chakra within.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: Blocks the users sight, eventually.
Description: Once the jutsu is used, the user breathes steadily and bubbles come out. The jutsu may only last up to 12 seconds (2 posts) if the user keeps the rabbit handseal.The bubbles multiply in numbers creating a field of bubbles, opening time for another jutsu or to escape. Also in each bubble a small amount of chakra is stored to be used in conjunction with other techniques.
Limit: Water release.

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‘Secret life. Little living worlds’

Some people claim that people are living on earth which is the same as one huge bubble. One day it will explode and take away hundreds of lives. However, others maintain that human creates his own bubble and lives there. It’s like a separate world; only sometimes those separate words can see each other through translucent walls. When human dies, his little world disappears somewhere with him, leaving with no trace or signs of existence. Maybe it’s true, maybe it’s not; nobody can tell this.

Eos was sitting on the branch. Nobody could tell how she managed to climb there; actually nobody saw her climbing in trees: probably it wasn’t a part of dancer’s job. At any rate, she had a new purpose today: learn a new and less dangerous jutsu because after the previous two trainings, which almost cost her life, bloody-haired preferred something more relaxing and calm. Bubble technique was a very good choice since she had thought about a few quite harmful combinations with this jutsu. At first Eos pulled a blue scroll where was the whole information. This time she had been reading very attentively; sometimes she read a paragraph twice if she believed that she didn’t understand something. When she finished reading theory, bloody-haired decided to take some action. Unfortunately, she didn’t start to perform hand seals and waste her chakra like she did previous times. Now she was sitting and thinking of all possibilities which could be dangerous to her.

Remembering the text, bloody-haired thought how she should fight the breathing problem: she didn’t want to suffocate like a fish on a dry land. She asked herself how singers breathed while they are singing extremely long and difficult notes; the answer should be a few tricks on breathing. Sadly, girl wasn’t a singer: since childhood she loved to dance with dangerous tools. However, prowling at artistic corner helped her to realize something: when she breathed with her chest, it seemed she had made way less space for air in lungs. When red-haired concentrated her breathing and stomach, it seemed that the breath was way deeper. Unfortunately, girl didn’t notice this miracle until now although she had been using this trick herself while dancing. It’s weird that I haven’t seen this before. However, we will see how useful this will be.

Training the breathing exercise, Eos felt it was more and more difficult to stay at the different breathing manner although she felt it was better for the entire organism. Habits are habits but training is training. Habits cannot disturb training thought bloody-haired, slowly but surely repeating the same breathing exercise. Girl decided to stop the breathing exercise: she felt a little bit dizzy; probably it was because of too much fresh air at the same time. Returning to normal breathing tempo, Eos read through the scroll again. She memorized hand signs and repeated its sequence in her mind.

Bloody-haired unsurely performed hand seals; she seemingly had some doubts about the jutsu. Slowly releasing chakra from her body she breathed out a few bubbles. Unfortunately, she it wasn’t the result which she expected. In a vision of jutsu she saw thousands of bubbles flying around her; what she saw right now was absolutely pathetic. Eos decided to stop wasting her and review the performance of jutsu in her mind, realizing she had made another unforgivable mistake. For the third time I’m failing new jutsu. Maybe some people would say it’s normal but I believe they say this just because they want to console them. Am I that weak? thought Eos, silently sitting on the branch. Red-haired realized she had made two mistakes; the first one was she used not enough chakra to the justu. Well, in those bubbles are implanted a little bit of my chakra, so I shouldn’t be saving it so badly. Girl wasn’t sure about the second mistake: she as breathed out air not properly.

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+7

[Eos]

[7|30]

Every single finger carefully performed hand seals like dreading to make a mistake. At the same time bloody-haired concentrated a huge amount of chakra in her mouth, lungs and hands. When chakra ran through her lungs, she didn’t expect she could breathe so easily; at first it looked her lungs expanded until enormous size or air in it was suppressed so densely that every molecule barely could find a place in lungs. When the other part of chakra reached her mouth, she didn’t understand what was wrong. Chakra was circulating normally but she at first Eos felt weird taste of blood and later on it had changed to iron. Eos knew it was alarming situation because she shouldn’t feel a taste like that. Is there a blood in my gullet or lungs? Is it internal bleeding? Bloody-haired felt how her heart was beating even faster, her mind focused on fears and doubts but she still continued the jutsu. When the last apathetic hand seal was performed Eos breathed out almost a hundred of bubbles which were flying all around her. The wind carried them away from girl, tree; they carelessly flew away: probably every child would want to catch some of bubbles. Speaking of children, one little boy was stalking Eos while she had been training. At first bloody-haired didn’t notice his little body but when he saw bubbles, boy abandon his cover. ‘I don’t like stalkers like you kid. Get out of here.’ Eos said very strictly and rudely. ‘I’m sorry… But… could you perform this bubble miracle only for me?’ boy asked and modestly looked down. ‘No.’ with this word, all the bubbles had exploded. Meanwhile, Eos said jumped out of tree, heavily breathing. When she landed on the ground, she felt her lungs were more heavy than usual. Then she tried the same breathing exercise which she was practicing before; concentrate her breathing point at stomach.

‘Go and play with some kids… Or whatever kids do.’ Girl turned back to the boy and left him alone. Slowly walking through green field, bloody-haired reached the derelict house. She climbed on the roof, carefully watching where to put legs; every step was important because she didn’t want to fell down. Comfortably sitting on the roof, she was thinking of the jutsu Well, if this the same symptoms continue for three more times that means I managed to harm myself inside. What a talent. Red-haired was curious if she successfully performed the jutsu even though she was a little bit tired and her breathing was out of rhythm. But the most important thing was if she would felt the same taste of blood and iron again; it was the only thing to find out. Performing hand seals, Eos repeated casual ritual: she concentrated her chakra to the most important points, she breathed in very deeply and, finally, when the jutsu was prepared, she breathed out thousands of bubbles. She looked at little creatures; thinking of how many damage those little creatures can do if they were used properly. Of course, she didn’t see the little wonder which she had made; the jutsu was only a tool which she could use for killings. Unfortunately, this jutsu probably could kill her because she felt the same blood and iron taste in her mouth. As far as I remember, I wasn’t licking iron.

The same boy was stalking Eos; she knew this because she could feel when someone was looking at her. ‘Come out of there little brat. I told you I don’t like stalkers. Run away or I’ll kill you.’ Eos said to the boy, checking if she still had her beloved katana. Boy got confused but she managed to say: ‘I’m going to die today. Please, could you do this bubble miracle for me?’ Eos was in shock because she had never faced a person who asked her to do a favor before. ‘I’m not going to sacrifice my life for you.’ Bloody-haired stared at kid with cold and unpleasant look. ‘Your chakra harms you, it’s too obvious. You are lack of chakra control. If you can't control your chakra, you will harm yourself inside and later you will die. Anyway, let me help you, I can heal your wounds.’ Boy used hand seals, creating a blue color around his fingers. He carefully touched bloody-haired, healing her wounds from inside. ‘Now can you show me the bubbles? I’m going to die today because my organism is poisoned; medics cannot find any cure. They say that at any moment my heart will stop beating and I’ll die.’

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[Eos]

[14|30]

With those words, Eos got stiff. She couldn’t move because the word ‘die’ had sounded in her ears. Every technique which I had been learning recently was almost deadly to me. What should I do with chakra control? Why is my chakra so hostile to me? thinking of this, bloody-haired carefully looked at boy. He looked like little creep; probably twelve years old but he looked very weird. His white short hair was slowly fluttering, his tired blue eyes were stuck into Eos, and his whole body seemed like made of glass: if the wind blew, he would crash into million pieces. However, the most surprising feeling was that Eos liked the boy but at the same time she hated him.

‘Fine, I’ll do it.’ Eos mumbled and carefully looked at the boy. Performing hand signs, she manipulated chakra inside her like a little puppets. She breathed in a lot of air into lungs, at the same time contributing chakra in three different parts: lungs, mouth and hands. Unfortunately, this time Eos performed the jutsu even worse; she felt the same blood and iron taste in her mouth. When she slowly breathed out the bubbles, she saw little blood marks on transparent walls. Blood-haired was in shock: for the third time her own chakra hurt her. Questioning herself why this was happening to her, girl realized quite stupid oppositions in her life. From birth she could control water and wind although her desire was fire. She had never understood the main principle of water: Eos only had been dreaming how to set on fire the water. This circumvent of nature law had brought chaotic state in her body; Eos chakra and body was fighting each other like water fight fire.

Bloody-haired fell on the knees, coughing bloody bubbles to the air. More she coughed, more bloody bubbles crossed the sky; Eos felt how strength abandoned her and she fell on her stomach. Her breathing was heavy; it seemed her lungs were playing the march of pain. ‘I cannot do anything.’ Eos almost cried while coughing. Her bloody lips bitterly said the words; she had never admitted the fact like that. Meanwhile the boy hurried to use some unknown hand signs again. His medic skills were almost near genius level although he was just a twelve years old. He gently touched Eos’ back, healing girl’s inner wounds. In minutes bloody-haired felt better although she still couldn’t move. In fact, she wasn’t allowed to move until her body and chakra will find harmony. ‘How could you describe water?’ boy asked quite naively. Eos opened her eyes very widely; if someone saw her like that, probably that person would thin she was a frog. ‘Well, I believe the water is the contrary element to the fire. You know, like laws in the nature: weaker is eaten by stronger. The same here: fire is beaten by water. It’s like vicious circle with no end; everyone’s dying, everyone’s not save.’

Boy looked at Eos, smiling quite sarcastically. ‘Do you know that when a place is burned, the water can restore place. After heavy rain, grass will start growing, insects will find their home, birds will have some food, and predators will expand their hunting fields. See, the elements complement each other. One finishes something and the other starts something new.’ Boy paused a bit. ‘That doesn’t mean that blue and red always have to fight each other.’ Eos freeze with those words; he was like a seer who saw the main problem in her life: a permanent fight not with enemy but with herself.

Probably for most of people such a conversation would look funny or pointless but in special case the words can harmonize the person. This exceptional case was Eos; this talk helped her to realize her mistaken point of view at her gift of life: water release. The little spiritual changes forced her body and chakra search for a little compromise: at least they weren’t trying to do more and more damage to each other. She felt calmer and more confident. ‘You know, if you were older, I would definitely ask you for a date.’ Eos stood up and brushed down all the dusks from her red pants and while blouse. Hurrying to do a miracle, bloody-haired placed hand positions like guitarist played the guitar: gracefully, surely and calmly. Breathing in in the air, she felt that no more knives were running through her veins, no more sharpen glasses weren’t rising to her gullet. Breathing out the air, girl she released a few hundreds of bubbles which were flying where they wanted. Eos seemed to be happy that finally her chakra wasn’t hurting her; she didn’t feel the taste of blood and iron and she saw no marks of blood on the bubbles.

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+5
It's a nice read, but there's not enough training. Try being a little more descriptive on how you prepared and preformed the jutsu.