Willump's training

[PainFoinmr]

Face in the Crowd
Rank: "D" Rank
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: A disguise technique where the user becomes one with the crowd to where they are part of a crowd.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: Must have at least sixteen people around that are not truly unique. This means that this crowd must look similar to where not one is completely different such as a crowd that is wearing brown, a group of mill workers, a group of mineworkers, or even a group of a clan that wears similar clothing, hair color, and eye color.
Description: A technique where it creates a subtle illusion over the form of the user and makes them like an in descript member of those around them. The features become subdued and their mannerisms are similar to those that are around the user. There must at least be sixteen members of the same type of people around the user for this technique to take effect. The user becomes like those around them, such as town guards, guests at a party etc. This technique is very helpful against those that wish to find the user by visual means.
Limit: Must know Glamour Perception of GenJutsus

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As Willump walked in streets of Yukigakure, he noticed some of his classmates, while he still was in Ninja Academy of Yukigakure. ''I bet they will want to ask me how am I doing and how are my ninja carrer advancing. Geez, I got nothing to tell them, nor I care about them,'' Willump thought. His face suddenly got careless, he really wanted to pass them getting unnoticed.

Sadly, a dark haired girl turned over and noticed Willump. Then she turned back and probably told her friends about what she just saw. And that was the truth, now all three of them turned at Willump and waved and started coming forth towards him.

If he could remember properly, these were Yui, Gree and Yuuni. 2 girls and a boy. They were smiling and greeting Willump. Willump decided to listen to them, he didn't have anything to do anyway.

''How am I doing? Well..'' ''Shit,'' he thought. Willump had nothing to say. Since graduating he rested and tried to forget awkward moments like this one. He couldn't come up with a good and true answer, so he decided to lie a bit so his ex-classmates doesn't get the wrong idea and don't spread rumors around the village - ''Well, I visited some friends of my parents in Yozamu. I lived with them for a few weeks to rest from the final test of becoming genin. And how are you all doing?''

Willump regreted his last sentence immediatly. He will have to listen to 3 stories now. If only he could escape somehow. Or at least remain unnoticed when he saw these ex-classmates.

''That's all I did,'' said Yui. ''Oh, that's very interesting!'' was all Willump said. He didn't even listen to what the girl said. He just hoped that they will never mention anything what they were telling right now.

It's sad that I am about to become Genjutsu master, but I can't even make myself escape from this. Suddenly Willump heard ''Have you been there?'' asked from Gree. That's bad, because Willump has no idea about what Gree was speaking. He decided to just reply with a short ''no'' and hope that Yuuni will tell a short story, will not ask anything and then they will be able to separate their ways.

''To become just as strong, as my father is, I decided to train right away after becoming genin. I learned some pretty cool tecniques to use offensively, but I also learned one simple genjutsu. You see this stream of people passing by us? I will go in the stream, stay right next you but I will dissapear from your eyes,'' told Yuuni. Then he made some handseals and walked in the crowd of shoppers. As Willump blinked, he could not find Yuuni anymore. He was starting to search for him furiously, he searched for Yuuni's brown boots on the left side and on the right side and in front of him, but everyone seemed so similiar, he could not find Yuuni again. Even Yui and Gree were impressed by this technique.

After a while of amaze someone next to between Willump and his 2 remaining ex-classmates said:''I'm here!'' It was Yuuni who appeared almost out of nowhere. Yui and Gree were really amazed by this technique and sent many compliments towards Yuuni.

Shocked by what he just saw, Willump said a quick goodbye and gazed at the crowd, Yuuni just dissapeared into. It was clearly no setup or mind affecting genjutsu. And then it hit him - it was ''Face in the crowd''. He had read about it in one of his schoolbooks. He had to learn it, because it would work so well to avoid contacts with people.

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+4; 4|10.

Very little training of the actual technique.

[PainFoinmr]

Face in the Crowd
Rank: "D" Rank
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: A disguise technique where the user becomes one with the crowd to where they are part of a crowd.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: Must have at least sixteen people around that are not truly unique. This means that this crowd must look similar to where not one is completely different such as a crowd that is wearing brown, a group of mill workers, a group of mineworkers, or even a group of a clan that wears similar clothing, hair color, and eye color.
Description: A technique where it creates a subtle illusion over the form of the user and makes them like an in descript member of those around them. The features become subdued and their mannerisms are similar to those that are around the user. There must at least be sixteen members of the same type of people around the user for this technique to take effect. The user becomes like those around them, such as town guards, guests at a party etc. This technique is very helpful against those that wish to find the user by visual means.
Limit: Must know Glamour Perception of GenJutsus

4/10

Willump knew the handseals, he had to make in order for this genjutsu to work. So there was no problem to go out in the streets and practice it.

First, he had to make sure there were at least 16 similiar looking persons. The best place to find them was in shopping district. Everyone looking busy, talking with their relatives or friends. Most of them had shopping bags. Willump took his backpack in hand so it looks like a shopping bag and it is easier to perform this technique.

He made the neccesary handseals and stepped in the crowd. He couldn't tell himself if it worked. At least no one was complaining about Willump disturbing the peace in town or being up to no good. Willump thought that he definitely needs more practice.

He walked down the street searching for more crowds. The village seemed empty and not much activity were going on. There were little people on the streets. As he continued to walk down the street, he saw some action nearby the local church. ''What a luck!'' said Willump to himself and rushed to church. A wedding was going on and there were many men in eminent clothes which all looked similiar. Someone would notice him if he walked straight in, but if he used thic technique he might even get some cake!

Willump made the handseals he had to and went in the mixed crowd. It was hard to maintain this tecnique because there were 2 groups of people - women and men. Men were in bright and plain clothes, while women were in similiar looking dresses. The two types of clothes mixed in, that's why it was hard to maintain the technique. Yet, this was a perfect practice.

Willump had to test limits of this technique. As he walked a little too far away from the crowd, his technique started to fade and if he stayed at this distance for too long, he would probably get noticed and someone would make him leave. Also, if he didn't move in the same pace as others, technique started to fade. He couldn't talk or sing too much in his voice. Yet, he noticed that his voice has changed.

A man from the crowd stepped up to him and said:'' Do I know you? I think you seem to be familiar, but I can't be sure. Can you reintroduce me to yourself?'' Now Willump was screwed. Whatever name he says, he will be caught, cause he doesn't know anyone from these guests. Well, it was worth the try:''I am Gary.'' ''Oh! That Gary! Now I remember you! Well, have fun! We will soon getting to eat cake. I heard it's decorated with strawberries! You know how rare are strawberries in these parts, right?'' man normallu answered. Willump just nodded and backed out from talking more.

That sure was weird. He either guessed a name or this technique is a strong one that makes others also believe that the user of it is actually part of the group.

And so Willump didn't get caught. After a while two young people, who just married gave every guest a piece of strawberry cake. Even this non-existing Gary got one. It sure was tasty, especially, if you don't get your hands on strawberries that often. After eating his cake, Willump started to feel exhausted. He slowly backed out of guests and started looking like usual Willump. This technique was succesful!

(OOC - I can write more posts without previous ones getting graded to make sure I learn the technique, right?)

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+5; 9|10.

Yes, you can.

[PainFoinmr]

After making a successful entrance in wedding, Willump thought that this technique must have more potential than just avoiding people you dont want to see. He wondered if he could sneak in bars for adults, if he could go in girls bathing house or sneak in group of people that didn't want to see them.

First he tried to sneak in bar. He didn't make it, because there weren't enough people. He went to bathing house, but he already noticed that there were less than 16 people. It was a problem - to find place suitable to perform this tecnhnique.

Sneaking in groups was also difficult, because group of 16 people was seldom to see. Saddened by this he took a walk around a town to just infiltrate group of random people in middle of the street. Then the greatest idea came to him. What if he sneaked in ANBU training?

As he proceeded to ANBU training place, he already started to perform his technique to get hidden as fast as he could. Sadly, ANBUs noticed him first and made him leave immediatly.

''Maybe this technique is actually made just for evading in public, not actual gaining anything'' Willump thought and didn't want to perform this technique for a while.

[Holy Grail]

1+
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[PainFoinmr]

Hanabi no Shinka (Fire Flower of Evolution)
Rank: “E” Rank
Skill: Ninjutsu, Offensive, Defensive, Pre-requisite
Effect: Creates a small flower made of flames with six petals that are each six inches long.
Special: “Hand Seals”- Rat, Dragon, Monkey, Rabbit, Tiger, extending the left hand away from the body, then using the thumb, index, and middle fingers in a triangle-like formation.
Drawback: This ability has no real value beyond using it within a combo attack.
Description: This jutsu creates a flower made entirely of flames. The user performs the required hand seals, channeling chakra through the left hand’s thumb, index, and middle fingers. The left hand is then moved away from the body, and the three mentioned fingers form a triangle shape, while the other two fingers close like the user would make a fist. The built chakra then move upwards and out of the hand, sparking to life and creating a flower with six petals that are six inches long each. If the triangle formation is ever broken, then the entire flame disappears. This ability can almost be treated like a fighting style stance. Each use of a Hanabi no Shinka will require a set amount of petals to be used; after the petals have all been used, the ability must be re-performed. Any time that a part of the Hanabi no Shinka has been destroyed, so long as the whole flower is not destroyed, it will slowly regenerate unless it has been used for an attack.
Limit: Requires the Fire Release

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Satisfied with his work with ''Face in the Crowd'', Willump knew that it was just the beggining. He was proud of it though, because it was very first technique he learned all by himself. Of course, this was no reason to take a brake, he had to go further.

A few months after he joined Ninja Academy of Yukigakure, all newbies had to find their abilities of ninja - if they were to become ninjutsu and taijutsu specialists, medical ninjas, sensory ninjas or even masters of something. In addition they had to find out what releases and perceptions they had.

Willump will never forget that day. He was the only one to become genjutsu master. If anyone became a specialist in genjutsu, then they had no more than one perception, while Willump had two. But what was weird - he had a release as well. And his natural release, not a learned one, was fire release. It was very weird, because it was so rare to see a natural fire release ninja in these snowy parts. People say, that there is something burning in their souls, something, that wants to get out and show itself. Nothing good comes of ninjas with fire release in these parts.

''But screw them. I have it and I will use it,'' inspired to finally make use of his fire release, Willump thought. He wanted to start with the very basic jutsu - Hanabi no Shinka. At first he thought it was very difficult technique, especially if you can't break the triangle formation of your fingers.

He gave it a try though. Rat, Dragon, Monkey, Rabbit, Tiger was easily performed, he never forgot handseals. Yet, he was very curious about learning to perform them with one hand. Although, he didn't see practical use for it yet. Next he extended his left hand from body and used his thumb, index finger and middle finger to perform a triangle. It wasn't really that easy to do or keep these fingers in position.

It meant more practice. Willump needed less of chakra concentration, but more of finger control. After a while, when he could finally keep a firm triangle of his fingers in place, he moved on to performing this technique. Trying it first time was reckless of him, because he was in his house. If it was successful, he would probably have set fire to it. This time he is in a place full of snow, but with some trees and no one to watch. It was good place to practice. First Willump successfuly made a fire flower on stump of a tree. He fast broke the triangle to not set fire on it. Next, he tried to make this flower on snow. Again - it was successful.

He didn't test his new ability any more. He knew it was capable of appearing anywhere, but he didn't want to try out if it can lit fire to wooden structures.

[PainFoinmr]

(OOC: gonna give this a bump and try my hand at detailed writing. Is cracling a real word and did I use it correct?)
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Yet Willump couldn't sit down patiently and do nothing. He had to see the fire flower again. He swiftly did the handseals and kept his finger in a triangle. This triggered the appearence of the fire flower. This was the first time he actually looked at it, noticing it's texture, it's color and much more.

At first it seemed like a little, scared candle light that wanted to become a part of good fire techinque. It was like a small star in the sky trying to become a part of an astrological sign.

Only after a while the star became something. It extended its petals. You could say that supernova occured. The petals looked very independant as they were large and tried to get away from the center of the flower. If you looked closely, it seemed like these petals contained lava. You couldn't really say what color they were, cause it changed from cheese yellow to blood red in less than a second. It was sparkling and glowing red.

This technique also wasn't silent. You could hear the colors of petals burning, just like you would be sitting next to a fireplace where only coals are left to burn their last power. These petals were cracling all the time. That was silent and relaxing sound.

After experiencing so detailed view on his technique, Willump knew that he has big plans for it.

[Umehara]

Learned.

And the word you're looking for is "crackling". And yes, you used it correctly.

Example of crackling.

[PainFoinmr]

Hanabi no Shinka: Mi (Fire Flower of Evolution, Seed)
Rank: “D” Rank, 5x “E” Rank Potential Additional Training
Skill: Ninjutsu, Offensive
Effect: Uses one of the petals of the Hanabi no Shinka to create a small orb of fire in the right hand.
Special: The forward movement of the index finger of the hand holding the Hanabi no Shinka.
Drawback: Uses one of the petals of the Hanabi no Shinka.
Description: The Orb ability of the Fire Flower of Evolution is a simple cantrip. Once the user has the Hanabi no Shinka in play, all the user must do is move the index finger of the left hand forward, and one of the petals of the flower will seemingly fade. The user will then open their right hand, revealing an orb of flame that bursts into life. The orb itself is small, with a diameter of about three inches. The orb itself hovers about two inches from the hand. The user at this point can either attack or continue a combo chain. Each time “E” rank training is performed, the shinobi then gains the ability to create one more orb. However, the ratio is always 1:1 for petals: orbs, so creating additional orbs will still require a petal.
Limit: Must know Hanabi no Shinka

0/15 (One additional training)

After seeing the potential of Hanabi no Shinka, Willump didn't wait long to improve his skills with it. Hid next goal was to obtain an orb of fire flower's petals. This had to be much harder than just making the flower to appear.

As this would be harded and more dangerous training, Willump grabbed bandage and went outside to a common training place. The Sun was shining and it wasn't snowing. A bright day, that you even had to close your eyes to not hurt your eyes from light. Maybe shades wasn't so bad idea in these parts at all.

Training area was empty. It seemed like everybody was jounin these days and didn't have to practice at all. There were some poles to do pull ups, a snow-clear place to do physical training like push-ups or sit-ups. And about 70 meters on north of this training place there were snow full place with some deep holes from powerful techniques. Some say that there used to be forest, but it was destroyed by powerful shinobi.

It was time to start with the training. Willump performed neccesary handsigns and made the fire flower. It looked weird to appear in such a cold place covered in snow. It was like blood stains in snow, very noticable. Next, Willump tried to focus his left hand on keeping the triangle in place and move his left hand's index finger to point at his right hand. And then he opened his right hand's palm. To be expected that nothing happened, yet a petal of fire flower dissapeared.

''That's really beautiful!'' Willump heard a girl's voice behind him. Instinctively he looked back and saw Yui, his ex-classmate. He was ready to perform his lately learned technique ''Face in the crowd'', but there were only two of them, so it would be no point to do it. It's sad that someone has to disturb him while he is training.

''I didn't know you could perform fire release jutsus!'' continued Yui and came forth. Immediatly Willump broke the triangle on his left hand and Yui protested:''Why would you do that? It was so beautiful flower. I have never seen one like that! Do it again!''

Willump didn't like this at all. He tried to calmly shoo her away:''What are you doing all the way out here? It's cold outside, you know? You will get sick.''

But Yui persisted in seeing the fire flower:''It doesn't matter if I can see it again! Just do it and I won't ask for it again!''

Willump sighed, performed the handseals and made fire flower appear. ''Are you satisfied now? Can I continue my training?'' Willump unpatiently asked her.

''No! Who do you do it? Can you teach me? You aren't supposed to have any releases as genjutsu master, Willump!'' Yui was keeping Willump from training.

''Yes, it is a genjutsu. Everyone sees it as an technique I can't perform,'' Willump lied to her, then broke the triangle of his fingers again, ''I see it as a shuriken. What others see, depends on themselves. And I'm done now. See ya!'' Willump left without hearing if Yui has anything else to say.

Way to break his training. Willump went home again. He put down the bandages he took and carefully reread the description of technique. ''... hand holding the hand holding the Hanabi no Shinka.'' These words stood out of the entire text. He never actually tried to touch the fire flower.

Hyped he went to his stove and made the fire flower on it. As he moved his hand closer to it, he didn't felt any heat from it. He extended his middle finger and moved it so close, it almost touched it. He still didn't felt anything. He didn't want to get hurt, so he thrusted his finger right trough the flower and moved it back immediatly. He felt nothing, like it would move troughout empty air. It was time, to pick it up. As he moved his hand towards the bottom of flower, he started to feel a little heat from the flower. Yet, he still wanted to pick up the flower to perform his technique better. When Willump picked up the flower, his hand didn't start to burn or anything. The heat was coming from his chakra flowing trough the flower. He really did have fire chakra.

Willump decided to make an orb, if he has come this far. He extended his index finger this time, pointed at petal and then moved his finger towards his right palm. Then he opened his palm and there it was. A dark, red orb appeared in his palm. He could move it as he pleased and he also felt heat from it. And now it was heat capable of hurting someone, not just his chakra.

It was time to break the triangle. Making a fist of his left palm, Willump noticed that the orb didn't disappear with the flower. He was supposed to do something with it in order to it disappear.

Willump went outside and moved his right hand to closer to snow. It melted fast. Very fast. Even if the snow was 30 centimeters from Earth's surface, this orb was capable of melting it all. Then Willump just touched the ground. All that left from the orb now was ashes. This was the first technique he knew that was capable of hurting someone this bad.

The next day Willump decided to go to training place again. He wanted to make sure that he knew every aspect of this technique. Of course, he didn't at first. After destroying one orb, he couldn't make another appear from the same flower. He wasn't capable of doing anything special with the orb than moving it around in his hand. So what's the purpose of having six petals, when he can use only one? Actually, maybe it wasn't true. If he focused really hard, he could see another petal slowly fading. Yet, it never disappeared.

''I knew you were practising it again!'' Willump was startled by the same voice he heard yesterday, ''What are those holes in snow? Did this flower made them? What exactly is it? It's a genjutsu capable of also doing something only I can see?''

After hearing all that, Willump still didn't face Yui. All he wanted to do was train and perfect this technique. This is a training place after all. Why can't you have peace and calm here? This time Willump actually was annoyed by Yui and wanted her to feel angry about it. He broke the triangle of his fingers and loudly said:''Ahh, Yui! You just had to come now, right? To break me off the focus, right? Great job!''

He didn't know what to say next. He now angrily stared at Yui waiting for her reaction. He hoped that she will do the right thing and leave him. But she didn't do that. She came closer to Willump, put hands on her hips, leaned towards him and with angry voice answered:''Oh yeah? You know it's impolite to talk like that with girls. No wonder you have no girlfriend! I just tried to be interested in your career as shinobi!''

Well, that was something. Willump triggered a dialogue. That was a huge mistake and he regretted it. He had no idea what to say now. To apologize? To make her actually mad? It wasn't brilliant, but he came up with this:''I didn't know that, Yui. I'm sorry. Perhaps, we can meet up tomorrow and train together? I could even try and show you how to make that fire flower for yourself!''

The mood was ruined and Yui actually agreed on this. Willump was saved, he left for home once again. And practiced on stove. Again. As he made an orb, he had to go outside and destroy it. Again. Willump didn't even bother to wonder what others, who passed his house were thinking about these holes in snow. But it was all worth it. He managed to remove the second petal and make it into second orb. It asked much more chakra and much more focus. Yet, the power of this orb was not upgraded. It was no surprise that twice the power should ask twice the chakra.

That didn't conclude his training. Obtaining power of two orbs were good, very good for him, but there still was one thing, he had to do - test their power. What would happen to a tree or a dummy if Willump was holding this orb and thrusted his hand with full power?

The next day was the perfect time to try it out. He knew where Yui was and he could evade her and pass by undisturbed. Obviously, what he said yesterday were lies. Now a snow storm started. It obviously aimed at Willump's face. It was like blaming him for what he did. It didn't allow him to proceed trough city, it was blowing really hard and he hadn't taken his scarf today, so it was really easy to catch cold now. Willump was smart enough to abandon the training for today. Hopefully, he won't run in Yui on the way home.

Snow storm continued the whole day to the evening. If wind could talk, it would say someting like that:''Okay, I stopped for now. But if you ever do that again, you won't get your training again!'' If Willump opened the door to outside, he would get a painful breeze of blade of wind in his face. It really seemed like wind himself hated Willump. Wouldn't be a big surprise if it actually did.

The next morning seemed better for Willump. He looked forward on continuing his training, so before he left he grabbed his scarf. It wasn't long or good looking one. It was just blue with some white figures painted on. Yet, it was very reliable scarf - if it had to keep Willump warm, it would, it guarded his life. This scarf was made by his mother when he was little, so it was very precious to him. He wouldn't bear the pain if he would come to lose it or destroy it.

After he carefully putted the scarf around his neck, he locked the door from outside and went to the training site. There were no signs of Yui or anyone else. Just a regular white day, snow covering everything it can and reflecting all light it can.

Willump then looked for something to test his fire orbs on. He did find an old pole lying in snow. It was frozen and probably would break too easily, but it was worth trying. In a couple of seconds, Willump already held an orb in his right hand. Then he thrusted his hand very fast toward, facing the pole. Surprisingly, it didn't went trough. The pole was unscratched. No scratch was left even after the second orb.

''It's not even close to perfect,'' Willump sadly thought. All he could do for now was improve it and hope that if he has to use it, it will hurt his opponent.

[Holy Grail]

10 + granted to the D rank. ~

[PainFoinmr]

Hanabi no Shinka: Mi (Fire Flower of Evolution, Seed)
Rank: “D” Rank, 5x “E” Rank Potential Additional Training
Skill: Ninjutsu, Offensive
Effect: Uses one of the petals of the Hanabi no Shinka to create a small orb of fire in the right hand.
Special: The forward movement of the index finger of the hand holding the Hanabi no Shinka.
Drawback: Uses one of the petals of the Hanabi no Shinka.
Description: The Orb ability of the Fire Flower of Evolution is a simple cantrip. Once the user has the Hanabi no Shinka in play, all the user must do is move the index finger of the left hand forward, and one of the petals of the flower will seemingly fade. The user will then open their right hand, revealing an orb of flame that bursts into life. The orb itself is small, with a diameter of about three inches. The orb itself hovers about two inches from the hand. The user at this point can either attack or continue a combo chain. Each time “E” rank training is performed, the shinobi then gains the ability to create one more orb. However, the ratio is always 1:1 for petals: orbs, so creating additional orbs will still require a petal.
Limit: Must know Hanabi no Shinka

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The ANBU training place would now be perfect. It's a shame he didn't get in last time. He could only imagine how it looked like inside - infinite supplies of shurikens, kunais and different bombs. Archery targets that would be used as a target for long range jutsus, kunais and shurikens. Many human like dummies to practice close range jutsus and taijutsu on. And of course a huge variety of weaponry. It sure would be perfect to sneak in there and get a training. Perhaps there are even personal trainers for every type of shinobi.

Willump had to test the full pontetional of the fire orb. He wasn't in an ANBU training grounds, but he still had to test it on something human like. No one would agree to get hurt for no reward. So Willump came up with this - a cabbage, a bag of sand, a coat and a a trash can and the best glue he could find in Yukigakure. He glued trash can to the bottom of sand bag, put a cout on it and glued the cabbage on top of this all. This was his training dummy.

His hand already held an orb. It was deeply red, looking like devil bead. There was no time to waste. He punched the dummy with all his might. He aimed for the main body. After a short moment there was sound of metal droping on ground. The whole dummy was on ground. He could see some sand out of the bag, getting mixed with snow and black burning marks on the sack. One leaf of cabbage was lying on ground. It was still usable, Willump placed his dummy on ground and prepared for second attack.

There was no need to remake the Fire flower. He just needed a lot of focus on making the second orb. Trying to make the same chakra of flower flow trough his finger into his right hand, Willump struggled with it. It was very hard, perhaps even harded than remake of the flower. After a while, he had the second orb in his right hand. It was smaller, not that colorful and not that graceful as the first one. He didn't have bigger expectations of impact for this orb.

He forced his hand to go trough his target with all the strenght he had. The dummy hit ground again, yet not all of it. He didn't use enough glue so the cabbage came off and hit Willump right in the face. It was quite painful, because this wasn't a small cabbage, it really was of a size of a head.

It was time to end his practice. His head was dull, he just grabbed his new non-alive friend and dragged it in his house, holding it by a burnt opening in the sack.

[¯\_(ツ)_/¯]

All-mighty Mod Masaa gives this mortal +5 points for his training.

[PainFoinmr]

Hanabi no Shinka: Mi Kyoudo (Fire Flower of Evolution, Seed Intensity)
Rank: �D� Rank
Skill: Ninjutsu, Supplementary
Effect: Doubles the size of an orb that has yet to be released. May also be used with all other Hanabi no Shinka forms.
Special: Almost closing (but not fully) the right hand, channeling chakra into the orb, and then rapidly opening the hand again.
Drawback: Can only be used on a singular orb once. To try to do so again will cause the orb to explode, potentially damaging the shinobi.
Description: This ability simply doubles the size of an orb created by the Hanabi no Shinka: Mi ability, which in turn doubles the effects of other Hanabi no Shinka abilities that utilize that orb. The danger with this technique, then, becomes learning not to over or underestimate the effects of the orb technique after this point.
Limit: Must know Hanabi no Shinka: Mi

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Twice the size = twice the power. Well, that's what Willump thought. Of course it was incorrect, but it did apply for this combo technique. It can be combined in many different varities with other jutsus of fire flower and Willump still had a long way to go, to discover which combo would suit him the best and do the most damage.

Willump's new power of being capable to create 2 orbs from a fire flower, without need of recreating the flower, were a great boost to learn this technique. If he failed to double the size of one orb and made it go to waste, he could always make a second one appear.

Of course, it was always the best, to do it in the first try. Or at least catch a grasp on how to do it in the first try.

He was standing in his house, in an empty room facing his practice dummy from last time. If he succeeds in this technique, the dummy should be destroyed by mere power. A trash can, sack of sand and cabbage, dressed in a coat. It had no big changes since last time. It was still quite durable opponent.

He has practiced enough to get an orb in his hand in less than 3 seconds. So he already had one. Then Willump looked at the cabbage, wanting to destroy it, then he looked at his hand holding the orb. He slowly tried to close it and bear the pain that was caused by the orb. Though he was holding orb many times, he still couldn't completely make his chakra safe to himself. After his hand was almost closed, he focused all his chakra to the orb. When he was ready, he swiftly opened it wide open and thrusted towards the dummy. He didn't want to look at his orb, it was too dangerous and he would still see the result from the impact.

Sand was slowly falling out. Willump didn't hit it too hard, so he shouldn't have to remake his practice dummy after every hit. From this he still could see that he didn't obtain the result he wanted to.

Using the second petal, to make the second orb. He repeated steps he made earlier - almost closing his hand and then opening it wide open. Just this time he wanted to look at the orb to see if it was enlarged at all.

When he opened his hand, he took his time to look at the orb. It would be quite sad if it would be the same size or even worse - smaller. When he looked at the dark red thing in his hand, he noticed that it is a little bit bigger than usually, but not twice as big. He slowly destroyed this orb. Now he had to make another fire flower. With every try orb became bigger, yet it was doubled in size only after a few hours.

When it was twice as big, twice as powerful, Willump used it at the dummy with full power. The sack was set on fire, coat was burning and trash can even melted. Cabbage was cooked. It had destructive and powerful effect. Willump looked forward to using his newly learned skills.

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+9; 9|10.

[PainFoinmr]

Hanabi no Shinka: Mi Kyoudo (Fire Flower of Evolution, Seed Intensity)
Rank: “D” Rank
Skill: Ninjutsu, Supplementary
Effect: Doubles the size of an orb that has yet to be released. May also be used with all other Hanabi no Shinka forms.
Special: Almost closing (but not fully) the right hand, channeling chakra into the orb, and then rapidly opening the hand again.
Drawback: Can only be used on a singular orb once. To try to do so again will cause the orb to explode, potentially damaging the shinobi.
Description: This ability simply doubles the size of an orb created by the Hanabi no Shinka: Mi ability, which in turn doubles the effects of other Hanabi no Shinka abilities that utilize that orb. The danger with this technique, then, becomes learning not to over or underestimate the effects of the orb technique after this point.
Limit: Must know Hanabi no Shinka: Mi

9/10
After completing Ninja Academy, Willump's knowledge grew fast and in previously unknown way. He would have never thought about learning fire release techniques. But now he already knows a vast variety of them. Well, you couldn't say it's vast variety, because there are many shinobi out there, who are so much superior than him. Perhaps, he will even be able to face strongest of them someday. But before dream, comes more training.

Living in Yukikagure wasn't always cool. There are snowstorms or just cold days. It was difficult training outside. And even worse, Willump was anti-social and there were people outside. Though, if he wanted to become strong, he should learn to stay warm in coldest days and, damn, go outside. There wasn't much difference about training inside or outside. What scared him was that he could burn down his house at this rate. Training fire jutsus sure had their downsides as this one. Especially, when he learned to double the effect of them with Hanabi no Shinka: Mi Kyoudo.

[Holy Grail]

0+ please write a parpragh or two of training, what you wrote is fluff.

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