Princess training her butt of (get slim or die)

[🔥Bootysmith🍑]

It was early in the morning Elizabeth was still sleeping in her soft princess bed when she heard wind blowing side to side she woke up and looked out side the windo and she saw a tornado she then went to bed and after a few hours the tornado vanished she woke up took a shower and put on her everyday clothes which were all pink.


She picked up her new weapon which is the longsword and she wanted to put it to use she didnt know which technique to train and so she thought of the tornado that she saw that was spinning wild then she remembered a technique that's like a tornado then she said to herself "if i can master a technique like that i would be invisible".without wasting time she went out to the training field and prepared to train she warmed up first after warming up she said "TIME TO GET SLIM OR DIE"


she then deciding that today she was going to train FUUTON:RANBOUKAZENETeN(VIOLENT WIND Twisting) she performed the needed handseal and she applied chakra to her feet after she spinned on her heels two times when she was going for the third she fell.she the got up and tried again handseals and applied her chakra to her legs and she spent an hour trying to spin but she just fell after 2hour training and falling she took a break and told herself that this time she's going to make it.she took a 30min break and she went back to training.

She performed the needed handseal and applied her chakra to her feet she managed to spin three times and she formed a violent wind but it was not enough it was still weak she tried again and she applied more chakra to her legs she spinned for the first time and she felt the wind blowing she wind for the second and the third the she blew a huge wind she was happy that now she had mastered a new jutsu she tried again she performed the needed handseal and applied chakra to her feet she then spinned with her heels and she performed the jutsu well but after a long training she was dizzy and she faited.she woke up after 3hours and went home to get some sleep.the next morning she woke up early and she asked one of her friends to try and attack her with fire ball her friend agreed and then her friend fired and elizabeth performed the needed handseal and pushed her chakra to her feet and spinned 3times she dispersed the fire ball jutsu easy and she was happy that she mastered a new jutsu


fuuton:ranboukazenenten(violent wind twisting)
rank: C
skill:ninjutsu
effect:the user spins on their heels three times,each spin releasing a violent burst of wind from all directions that is use to repel incoming attacks or push enemies away from them.
Special:handseal
drawback:the user performs the handseals and applies chakra to their feet.they then spin on their heels three times.each spin releases violent burst of air that extends about eight feet out. This burst of air is used to displace incoming projectiles and possibly jutsu,depending on the opposing jutsu strength and element(i.e water or fire would be easy to disperse versus earth which would be difficult due to weight and density).this jusu is also used to knock opponents who come too close to the user away from them.the user is capable of going into D rank training as many times as they want each time increasing the number of their spins by one and thus the number of air burst by one
limit:must have wind release

[Mist]

+3

Since you're new I'll give ya some neat training pointers. Make sure to start out with how many training point you have and need to complete. In you're current case it would be 0/20 when doing a new jutsu. Right now non you're next post it will be 3/20. Please check out this post which fully describes training even with a neat chart. You're currently a D class character so you would be at the top left of the chart trying to learn everything below that.

As for training I gave you points only for the time you trained so i didn't include the first two paragraphs. Instead of saying "you trained for two hours" describe what you are doing. Two hours seems a bit long people usually say they repeat and action for a few minutes. Points are awarded by how much action you're character puts into training. You're off to a good start.

Keep up the work and things will get easier

[🔥Bootysmith🍑]

TP=3|20

the next day Elizabeth woke up and took a shower she then took her sword and went out to the training field she drew up a plan of how she was going to train today


first she wanted to improve her speed so she ran about 2miles on her village to make her legs more stronger and faster.after running 2miles she drank a lil water and she wanted her legs to be strong and fast so she did some frog jumping she did about jumps hops and took a break for five minutes she then went back and did more frog jumps this time she increased by 50 and she did 250 jumps and she felt the burn she then did her third training which was jumpin from tree to tree at a very high speed she first stretched and she jumped to about fourty trees back and forward for about 40minutes she took a 5min break and went back to jumpin tree to tree the second time she jumped 50trees at a time of 30 min and she was happy so now she said the fourth training.

On her fourth training she was going to apply her chakra to her legs and run on top of water she got ready and she started running slowly she reached about 3miles the she started to sprint back she took 30min to sprint back and she was happy with her results but she told herself that she can do better she tried again she ran 3miles sprinting and she did it in 25min now when she came back she made it in 20 minutes now she said said her next training was climbing trees she focused her chakra on her legs and climbed a tall tre about 15feet and now she was ready to begin her jutsu


she got into position and performed the needed handseals she then applied her chakra to her feet after she spinned one time and a blast of wind blew she did again applied her chakra to her feet and spinned 1time she released a violent burst of air that extented about 6 feet out she after felt dizzy and she then got herself together and did about 3spin and the spin released a burst of about 18 feet.she spinned five times and each time she spinned the burst increased by one in total now her 3spins release a violent burst of air extending 21 feet each spin extended 7 feet out

[|Ayame Unbound|]

+2

Only the last paragraph had training that actually applied to the technique. Your training should almost all be about the techniques, not other things that don't have anything to do with it.

[🔥Bootysmith🍑]

TP=5|30

the next day Elizabeth was going to train the same technique again she got of bed early and went out to the training she brought some food to and some water she then got ready and started training.

Last time each of her spin was 7 and she wanted to increase it she got ready and got into position she and she started she performed the needed handseal and applied chakra to her feet and she spinned once and released a violent burst of wind from all direction her wind reached 7 feet then the second time she spinned twice and the wind reached 14 she the tried three spins and she reached 21 she did spinned for about 15times with the same results of 21 she then took a break and went to call an old man to help her the old man was the master of fire they then started training the oldman performed some handseal and attack Elizabeth and Elizabeth performed the needed handseal and she spinned three times a large amount of wind blasted the fireball away Elizabeth was happy they did this about 7 times and on the eigth time Elizabeth's each spin increased by one the total of her jutsu when she did three spins was 21.


Then the oldman started throw all kinds of weapon Elizabeth performed the needed handseal and she spinned and repeled the weapons away the old man kept throwing kunais and shurikens from every direction and Elizabeth spinned and blocked them this time she did this jutsu 15 times blocking the weapons

the old man then tried using wind senbon and elizabeth performed the jutsu and blocked all the invisible needles like they were nothing the oldman kept on firing and Elizabeth kept performing the jutsu and blocking them after she performed the jutsu for the tenth time she felt dizzy and they called it a day.


She went home to get some sleep and the next morning she wanted to put her jutsu in use she saw a man training in the field she picked up a rock and threw it at the man the man got angry and threw 5 shurikens at Elizabeth and Elizabeth just smiled and quickly performed the needed handseal and applied her chakra to her feet she then screamed the name of the jutsu "fuuton:ranboukazenenten(violent wind twisting)" she blocked the shurikens no sweat and the man came running to Elizabeth,ELIZA performed the jutsu and blasted the man away the man fell back badly and Elizabeth was happy that she mastered a fierce jutsu

[KoKoKo]

+5

Just an fyi - as a D rank shinobi - C rank training is /30 not 20 Mist made a mistake.

[🔥Bootysmith🍑]

10|30
The next day Elizabeth was pissed and he wore a blck vest and a mini skirt then put on the ninja stuff and went out to do her training she said to herself"Today im gonna master this jutsu BELIEVE IT" she then walked around the village and went to her training field without wasting time she got ready to train did some stretches and warm ups the she began she closed her eyes and performed the needed handseals and then closed her eyes and focused her chakra on her feet she imagined a large amount of blue chakra on her feet she then spinned once on her heel and a large amout of wind which blew 8 feet out she did this again

she then saw that eight feet is her maximum she then performed the whole jutsu she performed the handseals applied chakra her feet and concentrated the chakra there she then spinned 3times and infused her chakra with the wind then a large amount of wind span like a tornado and blasted about 24 feet and it broke down two tree she did this jutsu again near five trees and broke all of them she the thought she was ready.

After two hours of hardwork she thought it was time she looked around the village and try out her new jutsu.while walking she saw a 3boy bullying a small kid she pointed a finger and said to them "hey yoh dumbos Leave the kid" the bullies just ignored her and she got mad and threw a rock at them on to find out that they were all skilled masters they chased Elizabeth and she ran to the open the first bully threw everything he had at Elizabeth kunais,knives and shurikens from every direction elizabeth quick performed the handseal and focused her chakra on her feet and shouted out the name of the jutsu "VIOLENT TWISTING WIND" and she spinned and repeled all the weapons after she ran close tho the boy and performed this jusu near the boy the first bully got knocked out cold by this jutsu then the second bull tried to burn Elizabeth with his fireball but Elizabeth took action quick before getting burned by the fireball she performed the violent twisting wind juts and blocked the fire ball she then ran towards the boy and performed the jutsu again and bully number two was knocked out cold.the last boy saw how dangerous Elizabeth is and froze there Elizabeth performed the needed handseals concentrated her chakra to her feet then spinned three times and sent the boy flying she then after fainted for over using her chakra and woke up in a hospital.

[Deleted]

+6; 16|30.

[🔥Bootysmith🍑]

TP=16|30
After Elizabeth woke at at the hosital the doctors told her that she used too much chakra and could've killed herself.the doctor told her to take two days of rest to gather her strength,but because Eliza is hardheaded she didnt listen to the doctors she thought taking two days to recover would just a waste of time.

She took one day without doing anything and she just rested and recovered she then went back to training she went out to find the master of this technique and it wasn't hard because may people in her village knew that jutsu and an old man took her under his wing and taught her the jutsu properly the began to train she showed the old man how she did this jutsu she performed the need handseals then she applied chakra on her feet she imagined a large amount of intense chakra on her feet she then spinned three times and each spin released a violent burst of air that extended about eight feet out and she shouted the name of this jutsu "FUUTON:RANBOUKAZENENTEN (VIolent Wind twisting" this wild wind blasted to a total of twenty four feet and the old man was quite amazed by the talent this girl hand and he told the m girl how they were going to train.

The oldman showed her how to perform the handseals and how to become one with the wind and Elizabeth then took the old man's advise she performed the needed handseal correctly and slowly applied chakra to her feet she the became one with the wind and spinned three times like a tornado and shouted the name of the jutsu she performed the jutsu like a master now the old man told her to do it faster she did it faster but when she did it faster the amount of wind that blew was weaker so the oldman arraged their training time table they were going to traing from 6am till 11am then take a two hour break and train from 14:00 to 18:00 in the morning from 6am to 11am she performed the jutsu 50 times and from 2pm to 6pm she also performed 50 times they did this and they train this for two week each time after Elizabeth performed this jutsu she felt dizzy and fell but after too weeks she was able to perform this jutsu and after performing it the effects were little she didnt fall she just acted normal.

After the oldman saw that Elizabeth had mastered this jutsu he thought it was time the explored and tried out this jutsu they went to a bar were the bullies of the village stage the old man got there and told the bullies that the little girl Elizabeth called them fat and the fat bully got angry and threw Elizabeth out the window he the after threw many weapons as much as he could and Elizabeth performed handseals and focused her chakra on her legs and shouted the name of the jutsu "vIOLENt windt twisting" and spinned three times and a large amount from all direction blew the weapons of and the big fat bully ran to his four friends for help they came running and each of the bullies performed a jutsu the first bully fired wind needles Elizabeth performed the jutsu and blocked the man the second one fired a large amount of fireball jutsu Elizabeth performed the jutsu again and she blasted the fireball away then the third bully used water to try and wipe Elizabeth but elizabeth performed the jutsu for the fourth time and the water couldn't get near elizabeth.


The bullies then agreed to fire at the same time the first bully threw 15 kunais and 10 shurikens the second bully fired 20 wind needles,the third bully blew a large amount of fireball and the last blasted a large amount of water each of this attack were coming from a different direction elizabeth wasted no time she performed the handseals quick then applied her chakra to her legs the spinned three times and infused her chakra with the wind none of the bullies's attack got close to Elizabeth their attacks backfired and they ran away like little childre after fighting three man Elizabeth was sure that now she had mastered this jutsu the old man was amazed

[|Ayame Unbound|]

+6, If you have microsoft word I recommend running your post through that first for the spelling and grammar check.

[🔥Bootysmith🍑]

TP=22|30
It was a sunny monday morining,everyone was busy with their everyday chores.Elzabeth was bored to death and she watched on as the other people moved around working,she wanted to get her butt off the chair and do some work.After sitting and watching people Elizabeth realised that she had an unfinished jutsu to trainin she didnt waste any and she quickly brainstormed and drew the plan for he training.


She first started by going to the library.when she got there she looked for something that deals with her wind release luckily she found many scroll of jutsus she then went through them one by one searching for the violent wind twisting.After 30 minutes in the library she found the scroll that shows how the jutsu is done.


She took the scroll and go out of the library she was very excited and she said to herself "today is the day i master this jutsu".she then went to her normal training field and was ready to begin her training.

She first started by reading how to perform the jutsu and what is needed to master this jutsu.after reading the scroll she took it and put it infront of her where she could she it.she started performing the handseals slowly,she performed them multiple time in order to get used to them.when she thought she had them she performed the handseals fast and sliped her finger on he fox handseal she the tried again and sliped again on the fox handseal she then did the fox handseal alone and she had no problem .she said back to my jutsu she read the scroll and slowly performed the handseals correctly.she then tried them fast and this time she got them correct she performed the again to make sure she got them and she had them.

She said "now phase two" she went back to the scroll and saw that the jutsu needs the user to apply chakra to their feet knowing that she was good with chakra controle she smile and she got up and closed her eyes.she listened to the sound of nature while she gathered her chakra to her feet.as she was breathing she imagined a large amount of chakra getting to her body and moving torwards her feet and after she thought she gathered enough chakra on her feet she breathed out and opened her eyes.


She then went back to her scroll and it was time for the final step phase three.it was to spin on her heels.she thought it was easy so without wasting time she got into position and spinned one time then second time then when she went for the third time she fell.she got up and tried spinned again one...two...three and she did the three spins on her heels.


Now it was time to combine everything that she had learned and perform the jutsu she was excited that she was finaly goin to master this jutsu.she got into position performed the needed handseals then closed her eyes and applied her chakra to her feet after enough chakra was applied she spinned one time and a large amount of wind blew for about 8 feet she started over again performed the handseal gathered chakra to her feet and spinned twice and a large amount of wind blew for about 16 feet and now it was the final thing she performed the handseals again,gathered chakra on her feet and spinned but she fell because she wasnt focused she was too excited she then got up and slaped herself and said "damn it Eliza focus".she got in to position again and performed the needed handseals,gathered chakra to her feet and shouted the name "VIOLENT WINd TWISTING" then she spinned three times on her heels and a large amount of wind from all direction spinned for about 22 feet it was intense she performed the jutsu again and again and she got it right everytime she tried it.

She was happy with her results and she went home and awarded herself with a cup of ice cream.

[~Emi~]

+6

28/30

You still need to check your grammar

[🔥Bootysmith🍑]

Tp=28|30
After a month of sweat and tears Eliza said it was time she fineshed her training and move on to the next one.she went to the libraby again to get the scroll then came back with it.she was too excited and she couldn control herself.

She got into position and began to perform the handseals.like always she started by performing the handseal slowly and she got them all correct.she then performed the handseals fast and she was like a machine the handseals performe were just perfect.


Then she closed her eye and started gathering natural energy and transfering it to her feet.she started by doing it slowly.she took about 5minutes meditating and gathering natural energy.she imagined chakra entering through her mouth and nose then moving to her feet.

After gathering her chakra of her feet it was time to be one with the wind.she concentrated and spinned once a burst of wind infused with chakra a violent burst of wind twisting in all direction blew for about eight feet.she then started from the bottom.

She performed the handseal very fast gathered chakra to her feet then spinned on her heels three times and shouted the name of the jutsu.she practiced this jutsu for two weeks each day she practised it five times.

[~Emi~]

+2

Learned, but still, grammar xD

[🔥Bootysmith🍑]

TP=0|10

Jigoku no mimi(hell's ears)
rank: D
skill:ninjutsu
effect:with this technique the user is capable of figuring the location of where a sound is coming from.this takes a post in order for this type of technique to take place.
Special: "handsigns and holds with the boar"
drawback:the user must stand still,with their eyes closed in order for the user to gain the capability of judging the direction of the sound.
Description:The way this works is that the user concentrates along the sound release as they push their chakra along towards their ears.As the user does this,they concentrate on certain sound that surrounds the user.if the sounds are in a large area and more sound is created the user is capable of identifying the general location as to where the sound is coming from.
Limit:must have sound release.



It was a beautiful morning the wind was blowing freshly,the sun was shining bright the birds were singing and flying around and you could hear the water flowing and the fish were jumping as high as they could.for Eliza it was another boring day she had nothing to do.she wanted to get strong then she went out to the library to do some research.



Elizabeth got to the libraby and she went through the village's jutsu scroll searching for a cool jutsu to learn today.she found many scrolls it was hard to decide which one to train today the librbrian recomended the Jigoku no mimi(hell's ears).Elizabeth took the scroll and went out to the training field.


She got to the training field and prepared to begin the jutsu.she firstly started by reading the scroll first she read it till she understoop what it was saying then it was time to start


The jutsu required handsigns and Elizabeth got into positions and put the scroll where she could she it she looked into the scroll and performed the handseals slowly then held the boar.she performed the handsigns slowly looking at the scroll multiple times so she could keep the handsign in her head.she then thought she knew the handsigns by heart she performed them slowly without looking at the scroll and she got them right then she performed them very fast and she got confused she went back and looked at the scroll then performed the handsigns fast and held the boar hand sign this time she got them right.


Step two Eliza closed her eyes and pushed her chakra to her ears.while breathing she imagined her chakra moving to her ears.after she applied enough chakra on her ears she then concentrated on a certain sound.she concentrated on a fish which was jumping up and down in the lake she didnt get its location properly so she started over again.


She performed the needed handsigns and held the boar handsign then she closed her eyes and applied chakra to her ears and concentrated hard on a man who was walking in the bushes.she could hear clear where the man was and every footstep the man took.


She then performed the handsigns again,closed her and applied chakra to her ears then concentrated on a rabbit that was in the bushes.she could hear as it chewed the leaves she then heard a bird twitting then concentrated on the bird she got the location of the bird and she martered another jutsu.

[KoKoKo]

Please work on your grammar a little

I know i'm not perfect but Capital letters after full stops etc is pretty basic.

+5

[🔥Bootysmith🍑]

5|10

The next day Eliza woke up early in the morning.She woke up took a long bath to relax her muscles then when the sun came out she got out of the house and went out to the bushes to explore and learn more jutsus.While in the bushes she heard weird sounds.The birds were twitting,lions roaring and the wind was blowing very nice.


She heard many sounds that got her attention she tried following the sounds,but she got lost in the woods and she didn't find where the sound was coming from.She sat down and thought of how she was gonna get home.While lost in the woods she said she was going locate all the sounds she heard.


She heard a loud sound and she wanted to find out where it came from.She stood up closed her eyes.The she performed a couple of handsigns her hands were moving flawlessly when she performed her handsigns and it was like they were touching they way she performed them.She then held the boar handsign.She applied chakra to her eyes.applying chakra to her eyes was very easy since she was very good at chakra control.She the focused on the sound that she heard.She located where the sound came from and then went there only to find out it was a tiny cricket.She picked it up and ate it.


She heard more sounds and she still had time.She quickly performed the needed handsigns then held on the boar handsign she closed her eyes,applied her chakra to her eyes and concentrated on the sound that she heard.With the jutsu she found the location of where the sound was coming from and she could tell it was a cub tearing the neck of a lioness.She smiled and said to herself "you don't wanna go there lil princess you'll get eaten".


It was getting late and she was still in the woods lost.She sat down and tried to figure out how she was going to get home then she remembered while coming here she heard water flowing in a river and that river was near her village.


Without wasting time she quickly performed a couple of handsigns then stoped on the boar and held it,then she closed her eyes and applied chakra to her ears and concentrated.She then tried listening to all the sounds in the wild and tried to find a river.While concentrating she heard a droplet she concentrated on it hard and found the location of it.

She went there and the droplet was of water coming from a river and at that location she could hear the water running in the river.She went to the river drank a little bit of water it was almost dark.At this time in her village usually they play music before the sun sets.She realised this and tried to locate the music.


She performed the needed handsigns and held the boar handsign then she closed her eyes and applied chakra to her ears.She concentrated and heard the sound of a violin.She then concentrated hard on the violin and she knew the song that was playing.She located the sound and went there and there it was she had found her way home using her ears.

[|Ayame Unbound|]

+5, grammar still needs quite a bit of work. Like I said, a spell check would be very helpful, you can find them online if you don't have one on your computer.

[🔥Bootysmith🍑]

0|30

Futon:bukisuraisu
rank: "C"
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Using a weapon or one's hand the user slashes the air creating a sickle shape gust of wind mixed with chakra that speed out cutting anything in its way before eventually dissapitating
special:---
drawback: Accurancy count and as the gust keep movin, they can damage anything in the area.
Description: Not to be confused with TEMari's "kamaitachi no jutsu" which requires a fan. The user gathers chakra to their hands or weapon and slash the air diagonally infront of them with much force as a sickle shaped gust of wind blows out incredibly fast. It can cut down opponents, inflicting a moderate amount of damage and chop down trees. It has even been known to cut through rock when used with enough force. Can also repel weapons even sound waves
Limit: Must have wind release



It was an ordinary day in the hidden village of sound, the sun was shining bright, it was a good day to go fishing or do out door things. Elizabeth was lying on his bed thinking of her days back when she was young. While lying there she received a letter from her father written "HELLO ELIZA MY CHILD, I AM COMING TOMMOROW TO TEACH YOU SOME OF THE JUTSU THAT I HAVE LEARNED WHEN I WAS YOUNG BE READY TO LEARN TOMMOROW". Eliza was happy that her father is taking interest in her.


She did not want to disappoint her father so she said to herself "tommorow i am going to show father that i can become a great ninja like the kage".Eliza then got up, put on her ninja gear and said "i have to be ready for tommorow i want to impress father, i am going to train a new jutsu today". She got out of the house running with excitment and went to the library.


In the library she went through a couple of jutsu scrolls searching for a cool jutsu that will impress her father. She remembered that a father like wind jutsu and swords she thought to herself "i bought a new sword i can use it in my jutsu to impress father".


She found a scroll with a wind jutsu, she went through it then decided she was going to learn it. She took it and went o her usual training spot. She started by reading and tried to understand what the jutsu required. After reading she stood up, it was time to begin.


She put the scroll where she could see it and took out her sword. She read the first step of the jutsu then she glosed her eyes and gathered chakra to her sword then she slashed the air infront of her diagonally with force. A gust of wind blew out, she could see the grass moving.


She moved and faced a train. She held her sword and gathered chakra on to it, she then slashed the air diagonally infront of her. A gust of wind blew out and went straight to the tree, she was hoping that it would bring the tree down, but it just shaked the tree and all the leaves fell. She performed this jutsu seven time the tree did not fall it just went side to side.


She then said to herself "i am not leaving and resting until i bring this tree down". She started again, she closed her eyes and gathered chakra to her sword then she slashed the air diagonally infront of her with a great force infusing the wind with chakra. A burst of furious a blew and choped the tree down. She was happy, she took a break to go into the river and drink some water.


Whe she came back she did not waste any time she took out her sword and moved to another tree. She gathered chakra into her sword then she slashed the air diagonally and released a burst of wind infused with chakra she choped down the second tree. She kept going choping down trees and increasing the strength of her jutsu. When she was done training she counted the number of trees that she had chopped down and found that they were 15 trees. She then saw a big tall tree and said "hello there mr tree, you will be closing the ceremony today". She gathered chakra to her sword then shouted out the name of the jutsu Futon:Bukisuraisu then she slashed the air diagonally infusing the wind with chakra. A burst of wind blew towards the tree and blew the poor tree. Eliza then took the scroll and said "That's it for today, i shall come for you again tommorow". She then went home to take a long shower.

[~Emi~]

Your grammar is improving, good

+7

7|30