Raven's training!!! [T][P]

[KAZUKI]

Doton-Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu(Double Suicide Decapitation Technique)
Rank: "D"rank
Skill: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu
Effect: A technique where the user hides within the ground for a brief moment to surprise attack the opponent from underground.
Special:---
Drawback:---
Description: The user takes the time to push into the ground by using their Earth Release.The user pushes into the ground quickly so that to be used against the opponent later on.The user at this point cannot necessarily move within the ground at this moment,but the user does know by feel of when an opponent is right under the user reaches up to take the opponent and drag them back down to the ground in one fell swoop without movement or notice.The opponent is unable to move for one post and the user is capable of slamming out of the ground with one movement.
Limit: Needs the Earth Release.

Zarbon was walking on the forest observing the beautiful nature of his village,because he is now a ninja he thought to himself "As the sky falling and the wind blowing stand for something or die in the morning". Those words meant to him that time is precious and shouldnt be waisted and therefore its a perfect day to train but the was one problem,He doesnt know what to train.

He continoud his walk on the forest.He was so stressed and dedicated to find a new jutsu.While he was walking he saw a mole closeby eating his prey Zarbon thought to himself "This is could be interesting" As he was gazing deeply on the mole.When zarbon was getn closer and closer to the mole he startled the mole and it dug a hole underground attempting to hide from Zarbon.Zarbon sayed "Interesting technique u got their little one"He moved on continouing with his walk as he thought about the moles technique that hides underground .Zarbon got a smirk smile and sayed "Finally!!, training has begun!".

As Zarbon was still preparing for the technique which he got an idea from the mole,He began to do a 100 push ups.When he finished his push ups he started stretching and exercising and sayed with a grudge voice "its time!"

Zarbon took a brief silent moment listening to nature while his eyes was closed.He opened his eyes and concentrates his Earth Release chakra as he stood still.He concentrated very hard and releasing his Earth release to the ground and he was pushes in the ground slowly,He added another bit of his chakra in the process.Zarbon was finally underground.He then went back up to the surface and sayed "I did it!!" as he fell down because of exaustion of his training.

[|Ayame Unbound|]

You need to list a TP count in each post, so this one should have been 0/10

+2 2/10

Only the last paragraph was training. You also need to check your grammar and spelling before posting.

[KAZUKI]

TP 2|10

The next day Zarbon woke up as he was dreaming of the technique he saw.He quickly rushed awake and wore his everyday clothes and rushed to the back of his house.He stood their hearing the voices of nature and then saying calmly "ahh nature always calms me down".He gathers his Earth Release to his legs but nothing was happining.He applied more chakra in the process.Instead,his right leg started to move underground.

Zarbon laughed has his right leg was underground and saying "I applied to much chakra on my right leg Ill try both legs.He used his left leg to jump up in the air and made a backflip and landing to the ground.He then started to get grumpy because he wanted to move on to the next training so that he can be oneday become a sannin.This inspired him and focused alot of chakra on both legs.He suddenly started to go underground as he was doing this he was smiling.The jutsu stopped when only his legs was underground "This is gonna be a long day" saying calmly.

Now Zarbon used his hands to get back into the ground,And again focussing his chakra this time he focused his chakra the way that nature inspires him to get in the zone.He imagined he was in the middle of a huge forest.He applied chakra to his whole body and then eventually starting to going underground.He applied a little chakra in his legs.

Zarbon was underground at last! He stayed for a bit in this process.Trying to think about how he did it.He thought about it and decided to try again.He applied Doton chakra onto his whole body and more on his legs,He started going underground again and went deep underground.He quickly pushed himself up onto the surface and smiled and sayed "im getting the hang of this"

[KAZUKI]

TP 2|10

The next day Zarbon woke up as he was dreaming of the technique he saw.He quickly rushed awake and wore his everyday clothes and rushed to the back of his house.He stood their hearing the voices of nature and then saying calmly "ahh nature always calms me down".He gathers his Earth Release to his legs but nothing was happining.He applied more chakra in the process.Instead,his right leg started to move underground.

Zarbon laughed has his right leg was underground and saying "I applied to much chakra on my right leg Ill try both legs.He used his left leg to jump up in the air and made a backflip and landing to the ground.He then started to get grumpy because he wanted to move on to the next training so that he can be oneday become a sannin.This inspired him and focused alot of chakra on both legs.He suddenly started to go underground as he was doing this he was smiling.The jutsu stopped when only his legs was underground "This is gonna be a long day" saying calmly.

Now Zarbon used his hands to get back into the ground,And again focussing his chakra this time he focused his chakra the way that nature inspires him to get in the zone.He imagined he was in the middle of a huge forest.He applied chakra to his whole body and then eventually starting to going underground.He applied a little chakra in his legs.

Zarbon was underground at last! He stayed for a bit in this process.Trying to think about how he did it.He thought about it and decided to try again.He applied Doton chakra onto his whole body and more on his legs,He started going underground again and went deep underground.He quickly pushed himself up onto the surface and smiled and sayed "im getting the hang of this"

[KAZUKI]

He decided he needed a rest before his chakra ran out,He went inside his house opened the fridge and ate a full meal,After his meal he went to bed and slept for 24 hours.He woke up the next morning,went to the shower,brushed his teeth, and he wore his clothes.He then went to check outside the window and he saw birds singn, it was a peaceful day.He quickly rushed outside "Im mastering this jutsu 2day hear me otogakure!!" he sayed loudly,He gathered more chakra on his body and legs he,he started to go underground as fast has he did last time.He was deep underground mastering the jutsu.

[|Ayame Unbound|]

+5 7/10 Doing better.

[KAZUKI]

TP 7|10

After hours of training he decided to call it a day,He sat on the ground looking up in the sky daydreaming about the technique he so desperately to learn.He quickly stood up, with a serious look on his face "No more time wasting i will conquer this jutsu here and now!!" he sayed loudly.He started warming up by stretching his leg and doing frog jumps in order to strengthen his legs, He started gathering earth chakra taking his time doing so,he gathered enough chakra for the technique to be used and going deep underground.He released chakra to his feet and legs.He went deeper underground than before but he still wasnt happy he quickly rushed up to the surface and sayed "one more time",gathers earth release chakra by taking his time allowing chakra to travel fast when he is calm,He concentrates chakra to his legs and feet and descends underground."Smiles" then ascend to the surface "I did it" He sayed.

[KAZUKI]

After hours of training he decided to call it a day,He sat on the ground looking up in the sky daydreaming about the technique he so desperately to learn.He quickly stood up, with a serious look on his face "No more time wasting i will conquer this jutsu here and now!!" he sayed loudly.He started warming up by stretching his leg and doing frog jumps in order to strengthen his legs, He started gathering earth chakra taking his time doing so,he gathered enough chakra for the technique to be used and going deep underground.He released chakra to his feet and legs.He went deeper underground than before but he still wasnt happy he quickly rushed up to the surface and sayed "one more time",gathers earth release chakra by taking his time allowing chakra to travel fast when he is calm,He concentrates chakra to his legs and feet and descends underground."Smiles" then ascend to the surface "I did it" He sayed.

[KAZUKI]

After hours of training he decided to call it a day,He sat on the ground looking up in the sky daydreaming about the technique he so desperately to learn.He quickly stood up, with a serious look on his face "No more time wasting i will conquer this jutsu here and now!!" he sayed loudly.He started warming up by stretching his leg and doing frog jumps in order to strengthen his legs, He started gathering earth chakra taking his time doing so,he gathered enough chakra for the technique to be used and going deep underground.He released chakra to his feet and legs.He went deeper underground than before but he still wasnt happy he quickly rushed up to the surface and sayed "one more time",gathers earth release chakra by taking his time allowing chakra to travel fast when he is calm,He concentrates chakra to his legs and feet and descends underground."Smiles" then ascend to the surface "I did it" He sayed.

[KAZUKI]

After hours of training he decided to call it a day,He sat on the ground looking up in the sky daydreaming about the technique he so desperately to learn.He quickly stood up, with a serious look on his face "No more time wasting i will conquer this jutsu here and now!!" he sayed loudly.He started warming up by stretching his leg and doing frog jumps in order to strengthen his legs, He started gathering earth chakra taking his time doing so,he gathered enough chakra for the technique to be used and going deep underground.He released chakra to his feet and legs.He went deeper underground than before but he still wasnt happy he quickly rushed up to the surface and sayed "one more time",gathers earth release chakra by taking his time allowing chakra to travel fast when he is calm,He concentrates chakra to his legs and feet and descends underground."Smiles" then ascend to the surface "I did it" He sayed.

[KoKoKo]

+2 tp

total 9/10

[KAZUKI]

TP 9|10

As Raven was confident that he had mastered the jutsu he headed back home but to find his uncle cooking his favourite food,His uncle served Raven.As Raven finished his food his uncle asked "how is that jutsu you were training? Geting better? Have you mastered it?".Raven replied "I certainly did uncle, why u asking uncle?.His uncle sayed "well I need to see it with my own eyes because you were alown when you did it now if i see it you will be confident enough to do it infront of people or danger".Raven with a determened look at his eyes as he thought his uncle was giving him great advice. "Shall we uncle" he sayed directing a way outside.As they moved outside and find a good spot to practise the jutsu.

His uncle took out his bow staf and ran straight at Raven wielding his bow staff attempting to hit Raven.Raven observed and calculated the speed and distance of his uncle,He quickly jumped up and jumping from tree to tree,His uncle followed.Raven thought of a way to outsmart his uncle so he blinded his uncle with leaves so that his uncle cant see,Raven descended from the trees and attempting to use his new technique,He quickly gathers enough chakra and descended underground.His uncle sensed Raven was somewhere near and he was not on the trees so he descended,While he was looking for Raven,Raven ascended to the ground doing a surprise attack on his uncle leaving his uncle proud but still hurt. "well down you did it Raven's uncle sayed".

[KoKoKo]

Learned

[KAZUKI]

Mar 13, 2014 7:18:49 GMT -7 KoKoKo said:

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Katon-Goukakyuu no Jutsu (Great fireball Technique)
Rank: ("C")"B
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user is capable of performing a few handseals in which gives them the capability of blowing a large body of fire in size of a large sphere that has great fire proportions and explosive capabilities.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: Depending on the rank,is dependant on how strong or how much the user is capable of doing with the Goukakyuu no jutsu.
Description: The user quickly performs a few handseals.The user then places the hand over their mouth creating a small like circle.This technique in turn is then to help the user control the great flame.The user then blows out and creates a large firball that twice the size of a normal human body.When the "C"rank version is learned the user is only capable of blowing out the great fireball that cannot be moved or go anywhere else.This also means that the technique does not explode in a fiery explosion,but burns greatly to anyone that is caught within the technique.When the user learns the "B" rank version then the user is capable blowing the Great Fireball into the distance,sending away from use it to hurl towards the very opponent.This technique is only capable of going into a straight line and this is capable of having the size three times the size of a human body.This technique when launched at an opponent then becomes dangerous because at this point the technique can explode causing damage that is even more devastating.
Limit: must have the Fire Release

[KAZUKI]

[30/80] *got "C"rank version now learning the "B"rank version*

Early in the morning Raven woke up earlier than before,got him thinking,"is there something that i must do? Why would i wake up this early?" Raven curiously asking himself.He got out of bed,made his bed and sat on the beg he glanced down thinking about his future for a moment.He went to the bathroom and took a hot shower,He always sings while his showering.He finished showering he wore his battle suit incase for a battle or danger coming his way,he armed his pockets with his weapons,kunai and smoke grenades including hira-shurikens.He went outside looking to find answers from his brain by relaxing it calming it,He continoud his walk around the village and spotted a nice quiet field he went there and observed if there was any danger near him,his observation was complete and their was no danger nearby.He sat down like a buddha and meditated.It was a nice day,not that hot,not that cold only a warm breeze.He meditated for 2hours and finally opened his eyes and stoped meditating,and slept on the ground because he was tired,for a brief moment he was dreaming of becoming a fire lord (the strongest katon no jutsu user) on his dream he used a "B"rank version of the great fireball jutsu it allows him to control it and is able to move it causes a grand explosion.Raven woke up surprised and shocked,"So this is why i woke up so early i must master my fireball 1 of my dangerous moves but how would i learn the "B"rank version? If i do so here i would risk burning this field full of trees(he thought to himself)I should probably walk or run.Raven started running it was part of his training,He exited the field and ran as fast as he could and finally found a place to train a katon move.It was a place full of rocks no grass seemed to be nearby he started doing jumping jacks and push ups."hmm what should i do now?"he sayed.He saw a huge rock,he took a kunai out of his butt bag and threw it on the rock."Ok lets start with the "C"rank version.He performed a few handseals gathering chakra to his lungs,He then places his hand over their mouth creating a small like circle and blew a large body of fire in size of a large sphere.It hit the rock scattering pieces of rocks all around.

Raven moved on,he saw a huge mountain this time he gathered more chakra this time.He performed a few handseals and placed his hand over his mouth creating a small like circle and blew out the enormous flames bigger than before and hit half of the mountain creating a avalanche.Raven was terrified shiffering as he thought he was going to die.He ran but the avalanche was getting closer "I will not let this avalanche kill me"he said loudly,he performed another few handseals placed his hand over his mouth and gathered enormous chakra and blew the gigantic flames,it hit the avalanche and Raven moved side to side while blowing the technique in fear the avalanche would hit the rest of the village.The avalanche was history,everything was black on the ground."What a dangerous, yet a usefull technique"he sayed.He fell because he used up all his chakra and layed on the ground.

[KoKoKo]

you do not start with 30tp if you already have the 'C' rank you start with 0

+4 sorry but there wans't a lot of training in there

[KAZUKI]

TP [4|80]

As Raven was dazed near the rocky area but no more a rocky area because his fire devastated the area.A man was taking a walk wondering around otogakure,He spotted smoke and reacted quickly to see what had happened,He saw Raven knocked out unable to move.In the same time He was curious what had happened in the area,"was this boy ambushed?"the man thought to himself.He picked up Raven and rushed to the nearest hospital,medics observed him and they told him his fine but must avoid training for at least 5days.Raven sighed and lied that he will not train, he was dismissed from the hospital and he told the old man that his intention is to master the final level of the great fireball jutsu "B"rank.The old man understood the boy because he wanted to master his own jutsu before learning new jutsu.The old man agreed to help him.He took him in a deserted place were no one usually goes there "alright first things first,show me the "C"rank version of this technique"the oldman requested.Raven replied, "ok you might want to stand back".He did a few handseals and covered his mouth with his hands making a small circle,Gathered enough chakra and blew the great fireball."woah! If that technique hits a human being it could mean death" the oldman sayed."ok boy I've seen enough,now to train even more,the "B"rank version allows you to move while firing the great fireball jutsu are you aware of that?" oldman asked. "Yes i know" Raven replied."Try to use your chakra on your feet so that you can be able to run or walk while doin this technique".He did a few handseals and places his hand over his mouth creating a small like circle and blew the great flames,while doing so he moved a little chakra on his feet as well and walked forward while blowing the flames.The flames disperched.The oldman shouted "you fool! Try to control your flames dont let it disperch!".Raven angrily replied "dont call me fool! Or Ill kill you" saying that to the oldman with a serious look at his eyes.Raven again did a few handseals placed his hand over his mouth and blew the intense great fireball jutsu,He puushed down some chakra on his feet and started walking forward but couldnt run,he again pushed down chakra again and again till he was able to run normally.

"That was the "B"rank version but still not enough effort and power nor movement"oldman telling Raven. "Raven got annoyed by the oldman's voice and did a few handseals and placed his hand over his mouth and blew an enormouse flame but he didnt move while doing so.A while later when Raven stopped the move.He was gasping for air,the oldman decided he should take a break.He took the break and slept like a baby for 8hours.He woke up,rushing to training,he quickly did the needed handseals and placed his hand over his mouth blew the enormous flames and pushed enough chakra for him to run at high speed.He was running side to side with the technique.He was happy with his results,and ditched the oldman no longer needing him.

[|Ayame Unbound|]

I looked in your bio and the C rank is not in there, please provide a link to where you trained it so we can confirm.

[KoKoKo]

Ayame he does have it - he put some of the 500 tp into it

+5 tpp (total 9/80)

[KAZUKI]

9/30 Raven went to the pier near his house, watching otogakure. He realised he needed help with this jutsu, he went around thd village and spotted murdock.He asked murdock for help with the great fireball.Murdock was willing to help him and they were ready to begin. Murdock performed the 'b'rank version of the greatfireball, and told raven he should focus more chakra in the technique and should get stronger than before. Raven started doin handseals, pushed more chakra into the technique and exhaled the fireball. It was bigger but it caused a little explosion, Murdock sayed try again. Raven performed thd handseals slower than usual taking his time,gathered massive amount of chakra,and exhaled. The fireball was bigger and caused an explosion better than last time. He wasnt amazed he tried again. This angered him and performed the handseals faster and gathered extremely massive amount of chakra and exhaled. It was massive the fireball caused a grand explosion destroying half of park nearby,murdock laughed an yelled 'run!' they ran till they were far away from the explosion. Murdock told Raven that 'your anger triggers fire release' they sat down hopyng the will carry on the next day murdock thought it was wise if they rested now.