Hanbei

[Hanbei]

Basic Information



Name: Hanbei

Bloodlimit: None

Height: 5'1

Weight: 102 lbs

Age: 13

Gender: Male

Alignment: Evil Neutral

Birth Country: Rice Field Country

Village: Taketana

Special:

Weapons



Primary Weapon:

Secondary Items:

Non-Weapon Items

Character Depth



Personality:

Appearance:

      Hanbei wears two satchels on his sides, one for storing candy, and one for his marbles which he often tosses at trees or plays with. He seldom colors his fingernails/toenails when he finds proper dye in neighboring villages. Hanbei's eyebrows are surprisingly plucked and groomed, believing that his face is still beautiful, despite what his mother had said.


Background:

[|Ayame Unbound|]

Alignment; you'll need to pick one. It can change through RP if needed.

You should pick a specialist for now since it effects things like movements and that, you can change them as you learn though!

Can you quote the overview for marbles?

All the writing sections need to be 3 paragraphs. So history is fine, appearance needs a bit more, and personality needs quite a bit more!

[Mist]

i notice several things missing from here..


since you did not notice them he first time around im going to reference you to look at the character submission thread. you missed several things.

For one special means specialists which are descrived in the submission thread and specialist thread.. You will need to put down the proper specialists.

Next you are able to have main weapeons ad more slots worth of secondary weapons. You will also need to chose a slot holder item.

you also missed the part in the submission thread that says in appearance, personality, and history require a minimum of 3 paragraphs. you will need to write more paragraphs in each of these sections.


as far as im aware you are un-able to switch alignments without the multiple personality trait. speaking of traits you are missing you're 5 freebies and 5 starter techniques.


I must ask that you read through the character submission thread but carefully this time. ake sure to follow through the things i pointed out and not to ignore anything within my post or the submission thread.


you're app will be moved into the N/F(not finished) board until these changes are made

[Hanbei]

Techniques

Abilities:

Phantasm Perception

Rank: "C"

Skill: GenJutsu

Effect: Jutsu allows the user to perform Phantasm Perceptions.

Special: ---

Drawback: ---

Description: Phantasms can only be perceived by the user and target, unlike the previous 3 Perceptions. The impression created by a Phantasm exists only in the mind and is personalized for everyone perceiving it. All phantasms are therefore, Mind-Affecting Jutsus. Nightmare is a good example of such a Phantasm. If you want to keep your actions secret from everyone but your subjects, Phantasm is a good choice, whether you want to frighten or to deliver a message.

Limit: ---

Glimpse of Fear

Rank: "D"

Skill: GenJutsu

Effect: User plunges the subject directly into a waking nightmare, immersing it in a world of fear for a brief instant.

Special: "Handseals"

Drawback: ---

Description: A Fear, Mind-Affecting Technique. Affects 1 creature. The user is able to perform this technique at a distance of 6 meters plus 7 meters per class level. The duration of this technique lasts for 5 rounds per class level. This technique may be negated. User plunges the subject directly into a waking nightmare, immersing it in a world of fear for a brief instant. The change happens so fast that many creatures do not consciously sense it all, but a failed save means the sudden shift in perception registers long enough to leave the subject shaken for 5 round per Class Level. Sightless creatures and creatures immune to fear effects are not affected by this Jutsu. In addition, a target that fails the save to resist this Jutsu also takes a -4 penalty on all saves made to resist Jutsus with the fear descriptor for the duration of this Jutsu.

Limit: Must know the Phantasm Perception.

Boomer

Rank: "D"

Skill: GenJutsu

Effect: Creates a large Booming sound in a target's head.

Special: "Handseals"

Drawback: ---

Description: A Mind-Affecting Technique. Affects 1 creature. The user is able to perform this technique at a distance of 30 meters plus 15 meters per class level. The duration of this technique is instantaneous. This technique may be negated. Creates an illusory Boom sound in the target's skull. Only the target may hear the sound. The boom Confuses, Deafens, and Shaken the target for the duration of 1d4 rounds.

Limit: Must know Phantasm Perception.

Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing

Rank: "C"

Skill: NinJutsu/Supplementary

Effect: Allows a Non-Ninja the ability to perform Advanced chakra techniques.

Special: ---

Drawback: Non Ninjas must learn in order to learn Advanced chakra techniques. Ninjas gain this technique for free in the beginning however does not add into Character Class like other starting techniques. Does not work on Animal Companions.

Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed. Allows a user to learn up to "C" Rank Chakra related Techniques.

Limit: Universal NinJutsu Technique.

Phantasmal Tripwire

Rank: "D"

Skill: GenJutsu

Effect: User creates a phantasmal image of a tripwire by forming the thoughts of the subject’s subconscious mind into something that its conscious mind can visualize: a wire strung in front of its feet.

Special: "Handseals"

Drawback: ---

Description: A Mind-Affecting Technique. Affects 1 living creature. The user is able to perform this technique at a distance of 7 meters plus 6 meters per class level. The duration of this technique is instantaneous. This technique may be disbelieved once interacted with. Only the Jutsu’s subject can sense the phantasmal tripwire. The user sees only a vague shape near its feet. The target first gets a save to recognize the sensation as unreal. If that save fails, the subject believes the tripwire is real. The subject then must succeed on a second save or fall prone.

Limit: Must know the Phantasm Perception.

[|Ayame Unbound|]

Looks good but the slot holder can only be 15 slots at most. Just fix that and you're good.

[Hanbei]

Done ^^ -whimpers- please dun be mad at me :< I know I'm stubborn.. -waves white flag- I chowwy Dx

[|Ayame Unbound|]

1/3 Nicely done!

[👺 Usiel]

2.3

[Hanbei]

I need 3 out of 3 again now.. ^^ Had to fix it... -sadness- Don't forget me! D; <3

[|Ayame Unbound|]

There was a mistake here that needed to be changed there 1/3 once more.

[👺 Usiel]

2.3

[Deleted]

3/3