Tenshu no Fuji-hime [COMPLETE]

[Arisu]

Sensor MASTERED

Mind's Eye of the Kagura
Rank: D, C, B, A, S(10,20,60,90,120)
Skill: Passive
Effect: The basic technique needed in order to learn all Sensor Techniques.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: The basic yet complex ability that allows Sensor's to find, sense, and track individuals over a vast range. This ability is done by the user closing their eyes and opening their mind's eye in order to see the advanced chakra systems around them. At A rank and above, Sensors no longer need to close their eyes in order to access their mind's eye. The user of this jutsu can only sense those up to the equivalent class rank of the rank they know. (i.e. If the user knows up to B rank in this jutsu they can sense characters of all the way from D to B rank. The basic range of this technique is ten meters.
Limit: Must fulfill all requirements to become Sensor in order to learn this technique.

Mind’s Eye Extension
Rank: D, C, B, A(10,20,60,90)
Skill: Passive
Effect: A technique used to increase the range of Mind’s Eye of the Kagura.
Special: ---
Drawback: --
Description: This technique is passively used to increase the distance of Mind’s Eye of the Kagura. At D rank this extends the maximum range of the technique to twenty-five. At every rank after D the distance will double until reaching a maximum range of two hundred meters.
Limit: Must know Mind’s Eye of Kagura.

Advanced Chakra Sensing
Rank: D(10)
Skill: Passive
Effect: A technique used to differentiate between chakra signatures.
Special: ---
Drawback: --
Description: This skill is used in conjunction with Mind’s Eye of the Kagura. This passive ability allows the user to differentiate between separate chakra signatures. A person will be able to tell if the chakra is that of a human or an animal. Also once the user sees an individual’s chakra signature once they will automatically recognize that persons chakra signature from then on.
Limit: Must know Mind’s Eye of Kagura.

Illusion Sensing
Rank: D, C, B, A, S(10, 20, 60, 90)
Skill: Passive
Effect: Allows the user to detect genjutsu.
Special: ---
Drawback: Does not break the genjutsu, only tells the user that a genjutsu is in effect.
Description: This technique allows the user to sense the various fluctuations in the chakra around them. These fluctuations will allow the user to identify that a genjutsu is in play. The user is able to use this technique with the same distance chart as Mind’s Eye of the Kagura. The user need not be affected by the illusion to see it. Also note that the user can only sense Genjutsu of the same rank of this technique. Meaning D rank Illusion Sensing can detect D rank Genjutsu and so on and so forth.
Limit: Must be a Sensor.

Lie Sensing
Rank: C(20)
Skill: Passive
Effect: Allows the user to tell when someone is lieing.
Special: ---
Drawback: Cannot tell exactly what the lie is.
Description: This technique allows the user to tell when someone is lying via the various fluctuations in the chakra around them. These fluctuations in the chakra system stem from the dishonest emotions that are given birth through them not being fully honest. Fluctuations also occur when the opponent may be telling the truth, but leaving out a major detail. Mind's Eye must also be active in order for this jutsu to be used.
Limit: Must be a Sensor.

Clone Detection
Rank: C, B(20, 60)
Skill: Passive
Effect: Allows the user to detect clones.
Special: ---
Drawback: Cannot detect the Onigami clones created by Demonic Illusions.
Description: Due to their sight of the chakra nature and advanced abilities the user is able to differentiate between a clone and a real person. At C ranked the user can sense any clone except those which are learned at the next rank. At A rank the user can sense any and all clones including Kage Bunshin this is because of the advanced sensing abilities that allow the user to differentiate between human and animals.
Limit: Must know Advanced Chakra Sensing.

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Revamp Directory

Important Links:

Old profile
Proof of additional 1500 TP
My Die Rolls!
Please add the needed Ryo, I guess the minimum awarded to Genin, I have no idea how much she had.

TP Table

D-Rank 500 TP!

23 D-Ranks: 230 TP
9 C-Ranks: 270 TP

C-Rank 1000 TP!

15 C-Ranks: 300 TP
10 B-Ranks: 700 TP

B-Rank 1500 TP!

4 E-Ranks: 20 TP
1 D-Rank : 10 TP
5 B-Ranks: 300 TP
9 A-Ranks: 810 TP
3 S-Ranks: 360 TP

A-Rank 360 TP

18 E-Ranks: 90 TP
17 D-Ranks: 170 TP
2 C-Ranks: 20 TP
1 A-Rank: 80 TP

[Arisu]

Again I will thank any staff member who ends up reviewing this, I know it takes a lot of work on your part with all the TP work and all, I only have three more after this one!

[Draven]

Katon - Goukakyuu no Jutsu (Great Fireball Technique)

• Needs its rank learned highlighted.

Tech count:
E- 13/My Count:13
D- 24/My Count:24
C- 26/My Count:25
B- 15/My Count:17
A- 10/My Count:9
S- 3 /My Count:2

Finally check your skill rolls thread. Needs fixing.

[KoKoKo]

Also oyu need atleast one more paragraph in appearance

[Arisu]

Highlighted the rank of the Katon Tech.

Took out two B-Ranks, added an A and S-Rank!

Rerolled what needed rerolling.

Added a paragraph to the appearance, no idea how that got accepted the first time.

Thank you for looking at this you guyyyyyys!

[Draven]

Katon - Goukakyuu no Jutsu (Great Fireball Technique)

• Needs its rank learned highlighted.

[Arisu]

Jul 9, 2014 22:20:07 GMT -7 Draven said:

Katon - Goukakyuu no Jutsu (Great Fireball Technique)

• Needs its rank learned highlighted.

I removed Katon - Goukakyuu no Jutsu, hopefully that takes care of both the highlighting(I had highlighted the wrong jutsu fml, and the additional C-Rank, I kept counting 26, weird)

[Nira]

Now I count 25 C ranks

[Arisu]

Jul 10, 2014 16:21:36 GMT -7 Nira said:

Now I count 25 C ranks

I KNEW IT!

There should be 26 now v_v

[~Emi~]

What May NOT change in Revamp

Village In
Bloodlimit
Techniques that is "Master Only" learned
Cannot Create Revamp during Roleplay such as Missions, Interaction Missions, and Events.
Items
Money

Even though the "soft weapon" has been changed, the sword is not equivalent neither type nor cost vise.

Senbonzakura (千本桜, lit. A Thousand Cherry Blossoms)
Rank: D. C. B. A. S.
Skill: Ninjutsu.
Effect: Raises small white petals from many cracks in the ground within the area (By Rank.)
Special: ---
Drawback: Requires the Hands of the user to be upon the Hilt of the Blade for Six Seconds after the Handseals, "Dog", "Serpent", and "Tiger", allowing a Good Amount of Petals to be Risen. Requires Constant Chakra Flow from the User to the Blade in that Six Seconds, leaving the user immobilized.
Description: The user must first, Stab their blade into the Ground, causing many crevices in the ground in a circle. Depending on Rank. D rank has a 2-meter radius, C rank has a 5-meter radius, B rank has a 15-meter radius, A rank has a 20-meter radius, and S rank has a 30-meter radius. This Technique acts as the medium for other techniques involving the many White Petals that rise from the crevices. These White Petals are many minerals in the ground, bunched together to take on a Cherry Blossom Petal. Then it is covered in a coating of chakra to give it a White Appearance and a light glow. Pushing chakra into the blade, small chakra petals form under the cracks, rising up into the air. How much the petals are capable of rising depends on the rank. The D Rank is 3 Meters. C Ranks is 5 Meters. B Rank is 8 Meters. A Rank is 10 Meters. S Rank is 12 Meters. Each Petal is One Inch in diameter. The amount of Petals increases by a different amount each rank. D Rank has Seventy-Five. C Rank has One Hundred and Fifty Petals. B Rank Has Two Hundred Twenty Five. A Rank has Three Hundred. In addition, S Rank has Five Hundred. The User can control the petals to a certain extend using wind currents (with the Fuuton Release). These currents are pushed down, over the sword and under the earth, where the are shot up from under the cracks. Then they can he pushed around using those currents. I.E: Gather up all the petals in one area within the crack circle diameter, make them circle slowly or quickly around you or anything else, make them go up, go down, Ect.
Limit: Doton Release. Fuuton Release. Blade Weapon

To have the fore-mentioned technique, you need to have the fuuton release.

[Arisu]

Jul 10, 2014 16:43:17 GMT -7 ~Emi~ said:

What May NOT change in Revamp

Village In
Bloodlimit
Techniques that is "Master Only" learned
Cannot Create Revamp during Roleplay such as Missions, Interaction Missions, and Events.
Items
Money

Even though the "soft weapon" has been changed, the sword is not equivalent neither type nor cost vise.

Senbonzakura (千本桜, lit. A Thousand Cherry Blossoms)
Rank: D. C. B. A. S.
Skill: Ninjutsu.
Effect: Raises small white petals from many cracks in the ground within the area (By Rank.)
Special: ---
Drawback: Requires the Hands of the user to be upon the Hilt of the Blade for Six Seconds after the Handseals, "Dog", "Serpent", and "Tiger", allowing a Good Amount of Petals to be Risen. Requires Constant Chakra Flow from the User to the Blade in that Six Seconds, leaving the user immobilized.
Description: The user must first, Stab their blade into the Ground, causing many crevices in the ground in a circle. Depending on Rank. D rank has a 2-meter radius, C rank has a 5-meter radius, B rank has a 15-meter radius, A rank has a 20-meter radius, and S rank has a 30-meter radius. This Technique acts as the medium for other techniques involving the many White Petals that rise from the crevices. These White Petals are many minerals in the ground, bunched together to take on a Cherry Blossom Petal. Then it is covered in a coating of chakra to give it a White Appearance and a light glow. Pushing chakra into the blade, small chakra petals form under the cracks, rising up into the air. How much the petals are capable of rising depends on the rank. The D Rank is 3 Meters. C Ranks is 5 Meters. B Rank is 8 Meters. A Rank is 10 Meters. S Rank is 12 Meters. Each Petal is One Inch in diameter. The amount of Petals increases by a different amount each rank. D Rank has Seventy-Five. C Rank has One Hundred and Fifty Petals. B Rank Has Two Hundred Twenty Five. A Rank has Three Hundred. In addition, S Rank has Five Hundred. The User can control the petals to a certain extend using wind currents (with the Fuuton Release). These currents are pushed down, over the sword and under the earth, where the are shot up from under the cracks. Then they can he pushed around using those currents. I.E: Gather up all the petals in one area within the crack circle diameter, make them circle slowly or quickly around you or anything else, make them go up, go down, Ect.
Limit: Doton Release. Fuuton Release. Blade Weapon

To have the fore-mentioned technique, you need to have the fuuton release.

Good catches there!

I have effectively changed it back to whip!

I have also removed the technique: Manifestation of the Deity, one of my C-Rank Genjutsu techs, and replaced it with the Wind Release! Fixing the problem with the Senbonzakura!

Now that I have Earth, Wind and Fire, here's my favorite song of theirs, BOOGIE WONDERLAND!



Thanks for everything guys, you're doing great work!