Hayashi Hikaru

[Hayashi]

Basic Information

Name: Hayashi Hikaru
Bloodlimit: None
Height: 5'4
Weight: 80 lbs
Age: 10
Gender: Male
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Birth Country: Hi no Kuni
Village: Konohagakure
Special:

Weapons

Primary Weapon:

Secondary Items:

Non-Weapon Items

Character Depth

Personality:

Appearance:

[/b] Hayashi has an inverted triangle face. He has flawless skin, no imperfections aside from two scars on his left cheek, his skin is a bright tan color. He has green, almond-shaped, medium-sized eyes, he tends to keep a grumpy expression on his eyes. His nose is a small one and he has a medium-sized pair of ears. He has thin lips and a rather small mouth. He has short, black, wavy hair with long sideburns and long bangs hanging over his forehead, he also has hair hanging from the back of his head.

Body: Hayashi is rather tall for his age. He also has very long and muscular arms and legs, considering that he's 10 years old. His torso is slim but still doesn't look disproportionate to his arms and legs. Hayashi has huge hands and feet, he can grab weapons of almost any size with his hands, but he still needs the strength to use some weapons. Hayashi can't get too muscular though, otherwise his speed would be hindered from his size.

Clothing: Hayashi likes to wear a dark blue or black t-shirt under his tactical vest. He usually doesn't wear his chest rig as he thinks that it's just a waste of space and mobility on him. Whenever it's cold, he wears his cloak for protection. He carries a utility belt around his waist where he holds some weapons on the right side since he is right-handed. He doesn't like to wear his headband around his head so he carries it around his neck as it also could serve as protection against knife attacks against his throat.[/ul]

Background:

Traits:

[Hayashi]

Techniques


Freebies:

• Fire Release (Release)
• Lightning Release (Release) 
• Phantasm Perception (Perception) 
• Flame-Touched (Trait)
• Storm-Touched (Trait)
• Anatomist (Trait)

Fire Release Techniques:
Katon no Jutsu (Fire Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that DEAL with the element of Fire. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Fire Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---
Heat Mastery, when a user reaches to a point where they gain the full potential and understanding of fire and Heat the user is capable of many things. A technique such as this is a mastery of all Fire Techniques to where they do not have to worry about Minor Burns

Hanabi no Shinka: Kahen (Fire Flower of Evolution, Petal)
Rank: “C” Rank
Skill: Ninjutsu, Offensive
Effect: Shoots a six-inch bolt of fire at an opponent.
Special: Rat Handseal while Hanabi no Shinka is active.
Drawback: Uses one of the petals of the Hanabi no Shinka
Description: The user performs the Rat handseal while holding the Hanabi no Shinka. With that performed, a petal from the Hanabi no Shinka will separate from the flower itself and move over towards the shinobi’s right hand. It can then be thrown towards the opponent or further manipulated.
Limit: Must know Hanabi no Shinka

Hanabi no Shinka: Kahen Wangetsu (Fire Flower of Evolution, Petal Crescent)
Rank: “C” Rank
Skill: Ninjutsu, Offensive
Effect: Creates a crescent from a petal of the Hanabi no Shinka.
Special: A forward thrust of the left middle and index fingers.
Drawback: Uses a petal of the Hanabi no Shinka. Somewhat slow, allowing it to be dodged.
Description: Creates a crescent of flame from a petal of the Hanabi no Shinka. This crescent is simply shaped differently, allowing it to move differently as well as giving it a different style of attack, curved versus straight, when it must take a chance to cut through an attack.
Limit: Must know Hanabi no Shinka: Kahen

Hanabi no Shinka: Nibai Wangetsu (Fire Flower of Evolution, Double Crescent)
Rank: “C” Rank
Skill: Ninjutsu, Offensive
Effect: Creates two crescents which are used to attack the opponent.
Special: Moving to close the thumb, index, and middle fingers of the left hand, then stopping just as the about touch, and opening the three again.
Drawback: Uses two petals of the Hanabi no Shinka
Description: The user creates two crescents of flame which are then thrown at the opponent. They can be thrown in different directions simultaneously.
Limit: Must know Hanabi no Shinka: Kahen Wangetsu

Katon - Ryuuka no Jutsu (Dragon Fire Technique)
Rank: "C" "B" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The user quickly performs a large creation of blinding fire into the form of a large Dragon form. The Dragon must be used in the same concept as the Goukakyuu no Jutsu in which must be thrown by placing a hand in a circle form over the mouth of the user.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: This type of technique is better used if the opponent is bonded down and unable to be moved.
Description: A Large creation is created as the user performs the necessary handseals for the technique. As the user does so they raise their hand up over their mouth. By taking in a deep, breathe the user fills their lungs with chakra to in, which ignites the moment they blow out air. As the user blows out the creation of fire is made taking the form of a giant dragon like creature. The Dragon is quickly hurled towards the opponent as the dragon swivels and swerves moving like that of a Chinese Dragon. When first learned the Dragon does not explode forth but the very flames oozes out spreading out in all directions that would wrap around the opponent in a blaze of glory. When the user learns the "B" Rank version the user is capable of pushing so much power into the technique to where when it touches the target it is needed it is ignited in a mass blaze of glory, creating a grand explosion.
Limit: Must have the Fire Release

Hanabi no Shinka (Fire Flower of Evolution)
Rank: “E” Rank
Skill: Ninjutsu, Offensive, Defensive, Pre-requisite
Effect: Creates a small flower made of flames with six petals that are each six inches long.
Special: “Hand Seals”- Rat, Dragon, Monkey, Rabbit, Tiger, extending the left hand away from the body, then using the thumb, index, and middle fingers in a triangle-like formation.
Drawback: This ability has no real value beyond using it within a combo attack.
Description: This jutsu creates a flower made entirely of flames. The user performs the required hand seals, channeling chakra through the left hand’s thumb, index, and middle fingers. The left hand is then moved away from the body, and the three mentioned fingers form a triangle shape, while the other two fingers close like the user would make a fist. The built chakra then move upwards and out of the hand, sparking to life and creating a flower with six petals that are six inches long each. If the triangle formation is ever broken, then the entire flame disappears. This ability can almost be treated like a fighting style stance. Each use of a Hanabi no Shinka will require a set amount of petals to be used; after the petals have all been used, the ability must be re-performed. Any time that a part of the Hanabi no Shinka has been destroyed, so long as the whole flower is not destroyed, it will slowly regenerate unless it has been used for an attack.
Limit: Requires the Fire Release

Hanabi no Shinka: Mi (Fire Flower of Evolution, Seed)
Rank: “D” Rank, 5x “E” Rank Potential Additional Training
Skill: Ninjutsu, Offensive
Effect: Uses one of the petals of the Hanabi no Shinka to create a small orb of fire in the right hand.
Special: The forward movement of the index finger of the hand holding the Hanabi no Shinka.
Drawback: Uses one of the petals of the Hanabi no Shinka.
Description: The Orb ability of the Fire Flower of Evolution is a simple cantrip. Once the user has the Hanabi no Shinka in play, all the user must do is move the index finger of the left hand forward, and one of the petals of the flower will seemingly fade. The user will then open their right hand, revealing an orb of flame that bursts into life. The orb itself is small, with a diameter of about three inches. The orb itself hovers about two inches from the hand. The user at this point can either attack or continue a combo chain. Each time “E” rank training is performed, the shinobi then gains the ability to create one more orb. However, the ratio is always 1:1 for petals: orbs, so creating additional orbs will still require a petal.
Limit: Must know Hanabi no Shinka

Hanabi no Shinka: Mi Kyoudo (Fire Flower of Evolution, Seed Intensity)
Rank: “D” Rank
Skill: Ninjutsu, Supplementary
Effect: Doubles the size of an orb that has yet to be released. May also be used with all other Hanabi no Shinka forms.
Special: Almost closing (but not fully) the right hand, channeling chakra into the orb, and then rapidly opening the hand again.
Drawback: Can only be used on a singular orb once. To try to do so again will cause the orb to explode, potentially damaging the shinobi.
Description: This ability simply doubles the size of an orb created by the Hanabi no Shinka: Mi ability, which in turn doubles the effects of other Hanabi no Shinka abilities that utilize that orb. The danger with this technique, then, becomes learning not to over or underestimate the effects of the orb technique after this point.
Limit: Must know Hanabi no Shinka: Mi

Hanabi no Shinka: Mi Hoshi (Fire Flower of Evolution, Seed Star)
Rank: “D” Rank
Skill: Ninjutsu, Offensive
Effect: Utilizing an orb created from the Hanabi no Shinka’s Kyuutai ability, Kyuutai Hoshi creates a small burst of flame that erupts from the orb.
Special: Throwing the fire orb outwards then forming the half Ram seal.
Drawback: The user can be caught within the blast if it is exploded too quickly.
Description: The user first creates a fire orb utilizing Hanabi no Shinka: Kyuutai. Then by progressing the attack, the shinobi releases the orb, aiming it towards their target. At any distance from that point, the shinobi may perform the Half-Ram seal (the seal that Deidara uses to explode his clay things), which will cause the orb to explode in a small radius, perhaps a foot in diameter.
Limit: Must know Hanabi no Shinka: Mi

Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique
Rank:C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user is able to blow small balls of fire that can conceal projectiles to damage the opponent.
Special: Handseals
Drawback: ---
Description: The user performs a few quick handseals as they quickly take the same concept as that of the Goukakyuu no Jutsu. The user then spits out or hurls out up to five small sized fireballs towards the enemy. Each fireball creates massive amounts of burns but does not burst forth in an explosion. As each fireball makes contact with something, they spread out the fire creating a more of an area effect within the fire. The user is capable of using this technique in conjunction with multiple secondary weapons such as kunai or shuriken. The opponent is incapable of noticing the projectiles until the fire is extinguished in mid air. This technique is used typically to hide or to be used as a diversion for more of a powerful technique. As a D ranked ninja, the user is able of shooting 5 balls of fire. After the user goes up a difficulty class, they are capable of shooting 5 more fireballs.
Limit: Fire Release

Katon - Goukakyuu no Jutsu (Great Fireball Technique)
Rank: "C" "B" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The user is capable of performing a few handseals in which gives them the capability of blowing a large body of fire in size of a large sphere that has great fire proportions and explosive capabilities.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: Depending on the Rank, is dependent on how strong or how much the user is capable of doing with the Goukakyuu no Jutsu.
Description: The user quickly performs a few handseals. The user then places the hand over their mouth creating a small like circle. This technique in turn is then to help the user control the great flame. The use then blows out and creates a large fireball that twice the size of a normal human body. When the "C" Rank version is first learned the user is only capable of blowing out the Great Fireball that is cannot be moved or go anywhere else. This also means that the technique does not explode in a fiery explosion, but burns greatly to anyone that is caught within the technique. When the user learns the "B" Rank version then the user is capable blowing the Great Fireball into the distance, sending it away from the use it to hurl towards the very opponent. This technique is only capable of going into a straight line and this is capable of having the size three times the size of a human body. This technique when launched at an opponent then becomes dangerous because at this point the technique can explode causing damage that is even more devastating.
Limit: Must have the Fire Release

Fire Style: Inferno Technique
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Shoots small gout of flame towards the opponent.
Special: Ox, Monkey, Rabbit, Tiger
Drawback: Requires the user to exhale and keep their dominant hand cupped over their mouths. Once the user is out of breath of moves their hand, the technique falls.
Description: The user performs the handseals, energizing their hand and their esophagus with chakra. The user then cups their hand over their lips and exhales. The oxygen being expelled from the lungs combusts upon reaching the chakra from the hand, and the user blows it out a maximum of ten feet away. This is different from the Goukakyou no Jutsu in the fact that this comes out as a stream and not a fireball, and also different from the fact that once the user stops breathing out or moves their hand, the technique ends.
Limit: Fire Release

Lightning Release Techniques:
Raiton no Jutsu (Lightning Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Lightning. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that DEALS the Lightning Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

Armor of lightning
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user becomes charged with electrons, shocking those that come in contact with him or her.
Special: Snake, Horse, Dragon
Drawback: This jutsu will no matter what last for 5 posts, it cannot be dispelled, for it is self sustaining and after its performed, no more chakra is put into it. It does not discriminate between friend or foe, this means if you are injured a medical ninja will not be able to help you without getting shocked. This also makes the user glow with electricity giving away stealth. If a water based jutsu comes in contact with the user, then the armour of lightning jutsu will backfire, and the water AS WELL AS the lightning will hit the user.
Description: After performing the handsign, a few random sparks and shocks of electricity, usually yellow or bright blue will begin to emit from the user. Any things that comes in contact or very close to contact (a few inches from touching) the user will receive a shock. This may not stop the person from making contact with you, but will definitely slow them down a bit, or even leave a slight paralysis on wherever was touched.
Limit: Lightning Release

Raiton: Bu-ro Kusari (Lightning Style: Ball and Chain)
Rank: "C"
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user creates two electric orbs connected by an electric chain.
Special: Bird - Boar - Monkey - Rat
Drawback: Can only travel in a forward direction.
Description: Bu-ro Kusari is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning Release. When the needed hand seals are formed, the user would curve both hands into cups and use his/her chakra to create an orb of electricity in each hand that are sizes of the user's fists. Between each orb is a one foot chain made of lightning. When used in a ranged attack, the chain grows by one foot per three feet traveled. If the attack makes contact with a solid object, the balls would swing around the object and use the chain to ensnare the object. Once caught, the orbs would collide and release their energies by sending a strong electric current throughout the object ensnared, resulting in damage to the nervous system which leaves the target stunned for two full rounds, while inflicting minor burns to exposed flesh.
Limit: Lightning Release

Phantasm Perception:
Phantasm Perception
Rank: "C"
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: Jutsu allows the user to perform Phantasm Perceptions.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Phantasms can only be perceived by the user and target, unlike the previous 3 Perceptions. The impression created by a Phantasm exists only in the mind and is personalized for everyone perceiving it. All phantasms are therefore, Mind-Affecting Jutsus. Nightmare is a good example of such a Phantasm. If you want to keep your actions secret from everyone but your subjects, Phantasm is a good choice, whether you want to frighten or to deliver a message.
Limit: ---

Sensory Deprivation
Rank: "C"
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: Rather than creating an illusion of something, this Jutsu creates an illusion of absolute nothingness.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: A Mind-Affecting Technique. Affects 1 living creature. The user is able to perform this technique at a distance of 30 meters plus 15 meters per class level. The duration of this technique lasts for 5 rounds per class level. This technique may be negated. The Jutsu effect surrounds the target in a dark clinging shadow only it perceives, which blocks all auditory, olfactory, taste, and visual sensations. In addition, it blocks finely tuned senses of touch such as those that provide a creature with Tremorsense. A subject that fails its save is blinded and deafened, it gains no benefit from blind sensing techniques. The subject retains any telepathic or empathic links it might possess with other creatures while affected by the Jutsu.
Limit: Must know the Phantasm Perception.

[N A T S U M I]

Moving to Subs.

Wire is a primary weapon, dear. Not secondary, so please remove it and perhaps chuck it in your primary weaponry since you can still afford some more stuff (or not).

As a character that is starting out, you cannot start with anything that holds more than fifteen slots. So you'll need to remove the items sitting in your Non Weapons section. You'll be able to purchase those once your bio has been accepted.

Please bold or underline the C rank in the Katon - Goukakyuu no Jutsu (Great Fireball Technique) as the technique is multiranked.

If you have any questions or concerns, please PM me. Otherwise your bio is pretty good!

[Hayashi]

ok

[Father 'Suke]

• History: Anatomist doesn't really fit into the history and though that isn't a bad thing I'd probably prefer it link together more so than it is.
  
• Height/Weight: Let me get this straight. You are 5'6", 100 lbs, and only ten years old. Not completely disbelievable however I do recomend a small look at this chart I found for the averages for those of 10 years of age. It says that those of 10 years of age, average mind you, are generally 70.5 lbs and 54.5 (4'6") inches..
  
• Weaponry: You start with a main allowance of 13000 ryo and a secondary allowance of 30000. This is the grand total of all your money for the certain segments. Your two mains being "Wire" and "Longsword" both add up to a total of 8000 leaving 5000 remaining. No you don't need to spend all of it, just a headsup of what you have remaining. Now your secondaries also check out. The only problem I have is that you don't have any holsters for all your gear. No pockets so to speak.
  
• Freebies and Techniques: Check out
  
• Things to Fix
  
• A 15 slot (max) holster for your secondary items, use your main money allowance.
  
• All the added spacing between the copied in templates such as to the jutsu and main weapons. There is a lot of spacing between the different lines and you could probably get rid of those.
  
• Add a thing or two in the history about why you have the anatomist trait.
  

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[Hayashi]

History: I kind of over-looked that one, fixed!
Height/Weight: I was actually utilizing my own size at 10 for Hayashi, however I was actually 5'4 and 80 lbs. so I accidentally added extra pounds and inches.
Weaponry: I don't see the need for more primaries, as for the secondaries, I already got a holster for them.
Spaces: I don't know why that happens, when I pasted it, the lines looked together but when I posted it, they were somehow separate, fixed though!

[Father 'Suke]

Alright, thank you for the changes and everything now looks great.

1/3

[Nira]

Simple enough.

2/3

[N A T S U M I]

Perfect! 3|3