Takeshi Sa'orata [READY]

[thedapperraptor]

Basic Information

Name: Takeshi Sa'orata
Bloodlimit: Kyoudo
Height: 5'5
Weight: 120
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Alignment: True neutral
Birth Country: Land of Thunder
Village: (Cloud Ninja Village)
Special:

GenJutsu Specialist

Able to go into 6 Perceptions, May Master 4 of the 6 Perceptions.
Perceptions not mastering user may only go into it for 300 Training Points.
May use 400 Training Points into Universal GenJutsu.




NinJutsu Specialist

Able to go into 6 Releases, May Master 4 of the 6 Releases.
Releases not mastering user may only go into it for 300 Training Points.
May use 400 Training Points into Universal NinJutsu.



Taijutsu Non-Specialist

Able to go into 4 Fighting Styles, May Master 2 of the 4 Fighting Styles.
Fighting Styles not mastering user may only go into it for 250 Training Points.
May use 200 Training Points into Universal TaiJutsu.



Clan Non-Specialist

Able to go into 4 Clans, May Master 2 of the 4 Clans.
Clans not mastering user may only go into it for 250 Training Points.
May use 200 Training Points into Universal NinJutsu, GenJutsu, or TaiJutsu

 

Primary Weapon:


Arrow x15 (Overview)
Rank: "C"
Type: Secondary, Weapon, 10 per Quiver Slot, Arrow
Effect: A shaft sharpened at the front and with feathers or vanes at the back, shot from a bow as a weapon or for sport.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture An arrow is a shafted projectile that is shot with a bow. An arrow ranges between 18 inches to even 5 feet. However, most modern arrows are 75 cm (30 in) to 96 cm (38 in). The Range Increment of an arrow depends on the 3 parts that make up an Arrow. Every Arrow must have 3 part: an Arrowhead, a Shaft, and a Fletching. The Range Increment Adjustment with this item is dependent on the 3 parts.
Limit: These types of items may be bought inside any Hunting Shop.
Cost: 1,000 Ryo per Quiver Slot, or 100 Ryo Each




Bow, Compound - 30 lb. Draw (Overview)
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Piercing, Bow
Effect: A bow with mechanical aids to help with drawing the bowstring while reducing range.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A Tier 1 Bow. A Two-Handed Weapon. These weapons do +8 Amour Points of Weapon Damage. The Range Increment of this weapon is 30 meters. May be used in Mounted Combat. A Modern bow that uses a levering system, usually of cables and pulleys, to bend the limbs. It's laminated horn, wood, or bone. These bows are built with a recurve, which is made in 3 parts that interlock to make the recurve. The bow uses metal cams at each end of the bow. String is made of silk, and woven in a pattern through the cams. The cams are used to reduce the draw strength by 80% while keeping the draw power.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Hunting Shop.
Cost: 3,000 Ryo



Knife (Overview) x4
Rank: "C" Rank
Type: Secondary, 2 per Slot, Piercing/Slashing, Knife
Effect: An instrument composed of a blade fixed into a handle, used for cutting or as a weapon.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A Light Weapon. These weapons do +4 Amour Points of Damage. The Range Increment of this weapon is 5 meters. A knife has a blade that is about less than 1 foot in length. The user gains a +10 bonus on Sleight of Hand Skill to conceal a knife on their body.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 1,000 Ryo per Slot, or 500 Ryo Each.

Apparel:

Jacket
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Slot Holder, 2 Slots, Clothing
Effect: Jackets are mainly clothing worn over tunics and shirts and come in many different colours as well as several types.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture A sports jacket, known as a "sport coat" in the U.S. A jacket is a mid-stomach–length garment for the upper body. A jacket typically has sleeves, and fastens in the front or slightly on the side. A jacket comes with 4 pockets. 2 along the inside, and 2 along the outside. each pocket has the same amount of holding space as a half pouch. A total of 6 Pouches can be stitched into the Jacket. 2 Pouches may be stitched at the top of the Jacket (1 on each side) while 2 may be stitched at the bottom (1 per side). 2 more may be stitched at the top along the sleeves (Only half pouches).
Limit: These type of items may be bought inside any Tailor Shop.
Cost: 1,000 Ryo each.


Shirt
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Slot Holder, 0 Slots, Clothing
Effect: Shirts are clothing worn over the chest of a user's character.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Shirts come in many different styles and colors. A shirt is a cloth garment for the upper body. Originally an undergarment worn exclusively by men and women it has become a catch-all term for a broad variety of upper-body garments and undergarments. In some countries a shirt is more specifically a garment with a collar, sleeves with cuffs, and a full vertical opening with buttons or snaps. A shirt can also be worn with a necktie under the shirt collar. Shirts have no slots and they have no areas to carry pouches.
Limit: These type of items may be bought inside any Tailor Shop.
Cost: 500 Ryo Each.

Pants
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Slot Holder, 2 Slots, Clothing
Effect: Also known as trousers.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture There are so many different types of pants, with different designs and colors. Trousers are an item of clothing worn from the waist to the ankles, covering both legs separately. Shorts are similar to trousers, but with legs that come down only to around the area of the knee, higher or lower depending on the style of the garment. To distinguish them from shorts, trousers may be called "long trousers" in certain contexts such as school uniform, where tailored shorts may be called "short trousers". Trousers have 4 Pockets, 2 on the front of each pant leg, and 2 at the back where the butt is located at. Each Pocket has the same amount of holding space as a half Pouch. A total of 4 Pouches can be stitched into the pants. 2 Pouches may be stitched at the top of the pants (1 per pant leg) while 2 may be stitched at the bottom (1 per pant leg). The ones at the bottom may only have Half Pouches.
Limit: These type of items may be bought inside any Tailor Shop.
Cost: 500 Ryo Each.

Footwear 
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Slot Holder, 0 Slots, Clothing
Effect: Footwear can be worn on the feet of a person.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Outer coverings for the feet, such as shoes, boots, and sandals. Footwear refers to garments worn on the feet, which originally serves to purpose of protection against adversities of the environment, usually regarding ground textures and temperature. Footwear in the manner of shoes therefore primarily serves the purpose to ease the locomotion and prevent injuries. Secondly footwear can also be used for fashion and adornment as well as to indicate the status or rank of the person within a social structure. Socks and other hosiery are typically worn additionally between the feet and other footwear for further comfort and relief. Cultures have different customs regarding footwear. These include not using any in some situations, usually bearing a symbolic meaning. Footwear have no slots, but a Half Pouch can be applied along the inside of footwear.
Limit: These type of items may be bought inside any Tailor Shop.
Cost: 600 Ryo per Pair.

Secondary Equipment

Belt Quiver (Medium) (Overview)
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Slot Holder, Holds 10 Slot worth of Arrows or Bolts, Quiver
Effect: A quiver worn at the hip, or the belt of the user.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: The most common style of quiver is a flat or cylindrical container suspended from the belt. Many variations of this type exist, such as being canted forwards or backwards, and being carried on the dominant hand, off-hand, or the small of the back. Some variations enclose almost the entire arrow, while minimalist "pocket quivers" consist of little more than a small stiff pouch that only covers the first few inches. This Quiver may hold 10 slot worth of Arrows or Bolts.
Limit: These types of items may be bought inside any Hunting Shop.
Cost: 1,300 Ryo

[thedapperraptor]

Traits/Techniques:



Able Learner
Rank: "C"
Skill: Social Trait
Effect: The user has great aptitude for learning.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: When learning a skill, the skill states how many times a die roll may be applied to show how much they learned within that skill. Example, when a user learns "Botany" they gain 5 die rolls. This "trait" increases the amount of die rolls by 1.5 rounded to the highest number at 1 die roll per learning, however any number higher than 1 die roll is rounded down. For example: User learns Botany and gains 5 die rolls. With this Trait they will gain 7 die rolls. However if a user learns Lockpicking they normally get 1 die roll, however with this Trait they will gain 2 die rolls.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 2 Freebies



Dangeriously Curious
Rank: "C"
Skill: Chakra Trait
Effect: User has always been intrigued by Chakra, possibly because they were the child of a Chakra Master.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: User often snuck into their parent's laboratory or shrine to tinker with Chakra Devices, components and other items, and frequently caused quite a bit of damage and headaches for their parents as a result. The user gains a +5 Trait bonus on Use Chakra Device checks, and the user gains an additional die roll when learning the skill. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.

Courageous
Rank: "C"
Skill: Combat Trait
Effect: User's childhood was brutal, but they persevered through force of will and faith.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: No matter how hard things go, the user knew they can make it through as long as they kept a level head. The user gains a +2 trait bonus on Saves against fear effects. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.

Dirty Fighter
Rank: "C"
Skill: Combat Trait
Effect: Due to their upbringing the user knows how to hit at the right time.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: User would not have lived to make it out of childhood without the aid of a sibling, friend, or companion they could always count on to distract their enemies long enough for the user to do a little bit more damage than normal. That companion may be another Player Character, or a Non-playable Character (who may even be recently departed from their side). When the user hits a foe they are flanking they deal an additional +10 Armour Points in striking damage. This additional damage is a trait bonus. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.

Genie Blood
Rank: "C"
Skill: Heritage Trait
Effect: One of your ancestors was genie-kind. Select an element (Fire).
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: One of your ancestors was genie-kind. Select an element (Wind, Earth, Fire, or Water). User gains a +10 Armour Points Resistance against all attacks that utilize that element., and the user gains a +5% trait bonus on Sense Motive and Acting checks made against creatures of that sub-type. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.

.Latent Psion
Rank: "C"
Skill: Heritage Trait
Effect: Because of an unknown lineage the user has a stronger resistance against Mind-Affecting effects.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: The power to affect the world with the mind is very much a reality in your distant homeland. Although you may not even have been born in such a world, this power remains potent in your mind as well and protects you from assault mental assault. You gain a +2 trait bonus on saves against mind-affecting effects. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.


Elemental Pupil
Rank: "C"
Skill: Regional Trait
Effect: User has studied at the feet of the masters of Release Chakra, and so increased their own mastery of the elements.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Choose one of the energy types, Ice, Lightning, or Fire. When performing a Jutsu of "D" Rank or higher that deals damage of their chosen energy type, the Jutsu does 10 Armour Points of additional damage of the same type. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.

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Raiton no Jutsu (Lightning Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Lightning. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Lightning Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---


Sutatikku Nagare (Static Current)
Rank: "C"
Skill: Kekkai Genkai Ninjutsu
Effect: Allows the user to manipulate electrostatics and electric charges.
Special: Rat, Dragon, Ram, Tiger, Monkey, Dog, Horse, Rabbit once per 5 turns.
Drawback: Objects must be visible. While actively using this ability, the user must remain perfectly still, and no other jutsu may be used while the user is attempting to manipulate charges. Only metallic objects or semi-metallic objects can be manipulated.
Description: Allows the user to manipulate and control electrostatic, which is by definition electricity at rest. This gives the user the ability to move around both positive and negative charges on objects, which, in the end, can result in the ability to either repel or attract objects to and from each other. It must be noted that this jutsu strictly follows the concept of the Conservation of Charges. That means that without influence, all charges within nature are balanced at zero. Only when acted upon do these charges change. This ability is a requirement for all members of the Kyoudo Clan. When the user first gains this ability, they have only the ability to affect one object at a time within five meters of their person. At maximum, the user may move 10% of an object’s positive or negative charges to another object. While actively using this ability, the user must remain perfectly still, and no other jutsu may be used while the user is attempting to manipulate charges. Due to the relative electrical field produced by every person Kyoudo cannot affect people, and due to the low electronegativity of non-metallic objects, only metallic objects can be affected. It is only through mastery over the element of thunder that one can obtain this ability.
Limit: Kyoudo Clan only

Raiton - Rakurai Shuryuu (Lightning Style - Lightning Stream)
Rank: "D"
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user creates a steady stream of electricity against a single target.
Special: Ox - Monkey - Dog - Dragon
Drawback: "D" Rank require both hands. "C" Rank requires one hand.
Description: After forming the needed hand seals the user will create a fist sized orb of electricity and thrust it at a single target as a steady stream of electricity. At "D" Rank the lightning is only capable of knock a target back and inflict minor burns, and could reach a maximum range of 5 meters. At "C" Rank the lightning is able to cause first degree burns and numbness to the affected area, and reach a maximum range of 10 meters.
Limit: Lightning Release

[thedapperraptor]

Character Depth

Personality:

Takeshi is always had complicated feelings, just like anyone human being. Life and it's many stimulus can affect a person so greatly. No person can stay good or evil. Well, a normal human who doesn't see the world burn or be a ultimate hero of the world . So this would be the proper run down of Takeshi's personality. Bravery would the first thing would notice in battle. He never will back away from a challenge, even if the challenge itself was impossible to do.

He will try and try and try until he either passed out from exhaustion, killed(let's hope that doesn't happen) or He gets bored of the task at hand. Though, only one thing that could possibly frighten Keshi and it was Death. Something about always made think about things. Think about life and how cruel it can be at times. Death made his body stop or shiver, his mouth goes dry and start to develop a Thousand yard stare. He always had a bad experience with it like as if there were some weird type of demon mojo was in the air.

He had a weird combination of having a friendly attitude, even joke around if the time was right but he was a bit reserved when it came to his feelings. He wouldn't anyone long enough to consider that person to be a "friend". Mainly, Keshi always has been independent when doing tasks but he was going to change that. In order to survive in this world, either have friends who will help each other out or be the most powerful being. He had moments that if he made a mistake, he would on to it a bit longer than most people.

He would punish himself for that mistake, some might called that a disorder but he saw it more of not making another again. That would be one of his fault that he knew he had to get a hold of but if somebody makes a mistake like accidentally killing, that person should feel guilty and reflect on it. One moment when he was a child, he accidentally killed a baby bird which was already sick. He knew that he must be punished for it but no one would. He never forgive himself for it. His parents did pull the weight off his shoulders by talking. Now, he have less of his "everything-has-to-perfect" Behavior.

Keshi was natural curious and adventurous. Needing to get out outside and explore all of his surroundings, if not, he would be restless. Probably his energetic blood was like a blessing and a curse but he couldn't stop it. If he wasn't so interested with the world, he might have been a whole different person. He always thought what he his alter ego would be this awesome, cool looking dude with a peacoat and always had a cocky smile on his face but that's just a thought.


Appearance:

His Bloodlimit or Kekkei Genkai made him look like a member of the Kyoudo. The pale, luminescent or glowing skin when exposed to the sun at the right angle. His unkempt, spikey-like hair was white. It was begin held in place with a black headband(not shown in profile pic), creating it into a spikey bun. The reason his hair was spikey as his hair when he was younger was straight and the length would have been near his shoulder. His father cut it because it was too much of a distraction, long hair entering your eyes and mouth can any one lose their concentration.

His eyes were similar to the Kyoudo as it was either emerald green or sapphire blue. It was blue. Something but peculiar was apart of his eyes, it had gold specs were near his iris as if gold dust was put there by the wind. His other eye has the exact same thing, same pattern and same color. He always wanted to ask his parents about how did he get that trait but that opportunity was too late. He wondered were that was from as he knew both of his parents had blue eyes but without the bits of gold. Maybe it's a genetic trait that was random or maybe it was something else.

Scars were littered near specific place is on his body. One light scar over his nose was made by a tree branch that hit him in the face when he was younger. The rest of scars were mainly on his arms by his behavior, usually small scars made by repetitive pinching or digging his nails into his skin. In recent weeks, he has stop damaging himself to just simple mistakes but he sometimes has his moments.

His body type was lean. Lean and small. A reason why he is so lean. First, his parents were pretty light weighted people, his mother weighed 120 while his father weighed around 130-135, so it was normal for h8m be so darn light. His lean body type didn't have too much muscle, the most muscles would have to be in his legs. He was a runner so it would typically for his legs to look like that. Small feet, about 6-7 in men shoe sizes(but bigger than most females).


Finally his clothing. His makeshift hairband had a picture that he did when he was younger as he felt that his own Bloodlimit is something a individual should be proud with. He wore a navy blue sleeveless shirt that had thread that he used to repaired the battered, torn yet clean shirt. His shorts were black as he liked the color black. Anything that was black, Keshi liked it. That would have to training outfit which needed to be light so if was ever attack while training, he wouldn't be burdened by his own clothing. Most of the time, he would wear a tight long sleeve undershirt and over it, a short sleeve shirt. He only wear shorts as he believed pants were more professional.
 
Background:

His parents both being a part of the Kyoudo didn't live in the "Cloud Ninja Village". Instead, they lived miles away from the village and chose to live in the woods where they could get away from problems in the village. Though, they believed Deeply in their rituals and life styles that came from the Kyoudo. They pay all their attention to the code of the Kyoudo. They believed that being was not important than anything else excluding the traditions and anything  else.

A year later that Keshi's parents ventured into the woods and he was born in the woods as well. Life was simple for the pass few years after his birth until he was about 5. This is were his father took it upon himself to teach Keshi about the basics about Chakra and hand seals until it was indoctrinated into his mind. The training was especially difficult as learning hand deal and each of their meaning, it was so boring but he had to do so as his father forced him.

If we skip a few years(he would be 12 at this point) after that, Keshi, who knows about the basics on what a ninja should. He was growing to be a man. Training has been something that become a interest. A inspiration. Especially when he was training with his father, learning more about life and talking to his dad about the times when he was only a kid and how the "Cloud Ninja Village" was. Father used to be a ninja who didn't do too so he decided to be a street merchant selling Goods. He done this for a few years until he met Keshi's mother and this is where they decided to go into the woods.

One day when it was cold and clouds was covering the sun while raining. It was normal training conditions, this was making strong men weather. A distance, whining noise could be heard in the distance. Something was in trouble, he went away from his training session and walked in were the noise was. It grew in noise and he realized it wasn't a mere whine...someone was screaming! As he sprinted towards his home, the screaming grew louder and louder until...He was running faster, pasting the tree by tree. The door was close and he put his shoulder in front of his body.

Keshi bashed though the front door. He was ready to attack the person who hurting his family. He looked to see his mother in pain, sweating like crazy and his father, underneath her dress. Keshi's eyes widen in shock, what was a witnessing. A new sound came out of nowhere, sounded like a baby. His father began to smile and hold the baby up in the air. "What the hell." Said Keshi, under his breath so his father didn't hear him curse. He knew what this meant, he open the door that was behind him.

Keshi stayed outside so he could let his parents deal with his new sibling. His father and mother came out the house. The crying has stop, what now? His father handed Keshi a bag full of food, clothing, a map and picture of them. They say that when another child is born, they have to get the 1st child and make them move away. Keshi understand and he wasn't going to argue. They said goodbye and he left. He knew where he had to go. The cloud ninja village.

[Madame Loki]

I'd Like to see a little more on your appearance paragraphs, they look a bit malnourished. You'll also need Head Staff to approve of the bloodline, so make sure you send a PM.

[thedapperraptor]

Add more with Appearance and I'll be PMing someone right now

[Solus]

You have permission for Kyoudo.

1/3 too

[Father 'Suke]

Elemental Pupil: Pick your element

Please fix your bolding code as well.

[thedapperraptor]

Alrighty, I think I did what you said

[Father 'Suke]

2/3 - approved

[Skulking Shinzu]

Looking good.

3/3 - Approved!