The hidden mansion (Invite only/Training)

[Paper Planes]

Oni continued to train for the lightning bullet jutsu, and by 7:30 about an hour and a half later he had felt that he had completley mastered the jutsu. He could now shoot 5 bullets, one out of every finger and have them shoot out just about as fast as he could throw a shuriken. The lightning bullets were just like any other weapon he used except they were made of lightning and a little smaller (No duh). The only thing Oni never got used to was the od tingling sensation he got after performing the jutus one too many times. He hated the numbness his arm got, he probably would never get used to it. Oni had just finished about all of his training and he was get going back to the mansion when something fel out of the air besides him. Aww great Hage what are you going to have me do now Oni thought as he bent over and grabbed whatever was on the floor. It turned out to be a scroll. Oni opened up the scroll and read the inside of it, a feeling of dread spreading across his body.

Oni
Good job with learning the jutsu
Just one more thing I need you to do
Meet me on the roof at 9 o clock
~Hage

Oni looked around the mountainside, wondering how Hage managed to get the scroll down to him. The mountainside was empty, except for Oni of course. The blonde haired shinobi sighed and tucked the scroll away, he headed back towards the mansion and went up to his room. At 9 o clock Oni got up and headed for the roof, he landed silently on the roof and looked around quickly, but it was empty. Oni sighed and sat on the roof, wondering how long he was going to have to wait. Suddenly, he saw a white thing fly at him, instinctivley Oni jumped into the air, he jumped over the white blur in time to see it was a little paper airplane. The airplane soun around in mid-air and headed back at Oni, who drew a kunai and put the airplane in half. Suddenly it was followed by a loud Boom! the paper airplane had exploded, sending Oni flying backwards a good 10 feet onto the other side of the roof. Oni scowled and stood up just in time to see another one fly down at him, but this time Oni knew what to do. He charged up chakura in his hands and jumped into the air, performing three handsigns and shooting a few bullets of lightning at the airplane.

One of the bullets connected with the airplane and caused it to dissapear into smoke. Oni grinned as he landed back on the roof. He heard a Woosh! sound behind him and ducked as a paper airplane flew right over his head, Oni shot a lightning bullet at that airplane and watched it dissapear into smoke. Oni looked around There's only one way he can be doing this, Kai! Oni made the rat handseal and paused for a moment, he felt the genjutsu fade away until he was standing face-to-face with the real Hage, who was holding a timer. "1 minute 23 seconds" Hage announced, stopping the stopwatch. "Not bad, but not good. You beat your father, but not the other Oni" and with that Hage turned and left, leaving Oni.

((6/10))

[Kinz]

+2 dude you did almost zero training there on the technique. you trained yourself, but other then saying you could do it and preforming it once in that little fight you didnt use it again sry but i dont think i can give anymore then this

[Paper Planes]

Too true, okay well now I'm kinda stuck...


Oni sat on the roof for a while, he just stared at the landscape. He thought he was done, that he had memorized the jutsu, finished and he could just continue learning another jutsu. But he felt that he hadn't finished yet. He couldn't beat the other Oni, his uncle, who murdered his parents. Oni stood up, an odd firey rage burning inside him, he needed to beat this person. Just by memorizing jutsu after jutsu like this wasn't going to work, he needed to master every jutsu he had, learn every aspect of it and take care of all the small flaws. Oni jumped off of the roof, he shook his hands and got ready to take care of the one big problem he had, the numbness. Oni ran over to a grassy plain and began to focus his chakura, determined to take care of the minor flaw he had. He performed the 3 simple handsigns needed and shot several lightning bullets out of his hand.

But Oni didn't stop there, he continued to performed the handsigns again and shot another set of the lightning 'bullets' out of his hand. Quickly followed by another series of bullets, Oni kept on firing the bullets out of his hand, after the 4th round he felt his hand beginning to tingle but didn't stop. Oni continued to fire the lightning bullets out, he felt his hand grow number and number until he finally had to stop, he couldn't feel his hand anymore. The blonde haired shinobi sat down and rested a little, he knew he had solved the problem. Of course his hand would still grow numb after multiple uses, but it wouldn't bother him as much when it did, which was vital when he was in battle, he couldn't let something like that slow him down.

[The Asko]

+2 TP

[Paper Planes]

* Phoenix explosion
Rank: C-S
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: Once your shuriken and/or kunai egnighted they fly through the air in silence. when it comes in contact with anything it explodes in flames
Special: Monkey; Rat; Tiger
Drawback: as it increases in rank it gets bigger so when you launch it, it will damages you.
Description: after you do the certain handsigns your shuriken and/or kuni are egnighted in fire shaped as small phoenixs. Then when it comes in contact with anything it explodes in fire. Depending what rank you are it can be stronger. You need Fire Release to learn it. C ranked- Small handsized phoenix, small explosion (6-9 feet) B ranked- phoenix about the size of Akamaru, medium explosion (12-15 feet) A ranked- Phoenix size of a great dane, big explosion (18-21 feet) S ranked- size of a phoenix, huge explosion (27-30 feet)
Limit: only people from stone or leaf villages can use this jutsu because that is the only places where the teachers are. Phonex and his brother Hiyin.

Oni stood on the roof of the mansion he was staying at, his blonde hair swaying over his muddled green eyes. It was night, a calm errie silence had fallen over the mountain side. Oni was deep in thought, he was thinking about some events that had occured in his life recently. Hage had told him that the other Yasashi Oni, his evil uncle who had murdered his parents had managed to get a better time than him in a training exercise. This didn't bother Oni of course, he knew it didn't matter, but he was thinking that all the techniques Hage had taught him the other Oni already knew. How would Oni be able to defeat the other Oni if the only jutsu's he knew were just the ones the other Oni knew. Sure he had his own technique, kaze kago, but Oni thought he needed to know different jutsu's then the other Oni if he was going to defeat him. As if on cue, Hage had came up on the roof at that time, he walked over to Oni and said "You ready to learn the next jutsu?" Oni didn't bother to turn and face Hage, instead he said "Hage, is there any jutsu that you have me to learn that the other Oni doesn't know?"

Hage blinked, he looked at Oni a little bit confused. Then he seemed to understand what Oni was thinking and placed a comforting hand on his grandson's shoulder. "Well, I believe that there are a few jutsus that Oni couldn't learn." Oni looked hopefully over at Hage, it was just what he wanted to hear. "You know that our clan originated from the thunder village? That's why were here, it's an old outpost that led to the old main house before it was moved to the land of earth." Oni looked at Hage, his expression had changed to a suprised one, he hadn't known that. "Yes, so there are plenty of leaf village techniques that Oni wouldn't know. Take the Phoenix explosion for example. Let's see if you can learn that one" Hage said, he turned and dissapeared, leaving Oni to train alone. The blonde haired shinobi looked at the empty space where Hage was moments ago, then shrugged to himself and racked his brain to remember what the Phoenix explosion was exactly. After a moment or so he remembered, it was a jutsu that he needed some shuriken and kunai for. Once again as if on cue Hage came back up with a box of shuriken and kunai he had. Oni thanked Hage and pulled a shurkien out of the box, ready to begin.

He held the shurkien his hand and examined it, he remembered he had to set it on fire first, then it would take the form of a phoenix and fly through the air silently, then explode. Oni figured he would learn the basic version of the jutsu, he didn't think he would be able to master anything else. He looked down, he remembered back to his days at the academy where he had learned the correct handsigns. It took him almost a minute to remember the handsigns, at least he thought they were the correct handsigns. Oni threw the shuriken and performed the hansigns, he watched the shuriken intently as he moved his chakura and concentrated towards the shuriken. He watched as the a feeble spark came out of the shurkien before it fell below him and clattered feebly to the floor. Damn...maybe those weren't the right handsigns Oni thought to himself as his eyes stared at the shuriken which blended in perfectly against the black roof at night. He leaned over and picked up the metal star, he threw it up again on an instinct and performed the handsigns again and focused his chakura t the shuriken again, hoping for something better then a spark.

However the same thing happened as last time. A small glowing ember came out of the shuriken and floated onto the rooftop where it just faded away. He was busy watching the spark so he almost jumped when he heard the clankering as the shurkien hit the rooftop. Oni picked the metal weapon up again, he looked at it and wondered if he'd have any better luck with a kunai. Oni threw the shuriken back into the box which created a chain reaction of clinking noises as the shuriken hit all the other cold metalic weapons inside the box. Oni stuck his hand in the box gingerly and pulled out a kunai, he turned back and placed his finger in the circular ring end of the blade and spun it around a few times. Oni threw the kunai into the air and performed the hand signs quickly and watched as the kunai had the same result as the shurkien, however it landed on it's tip, sticking into the rooftop. Oni was seriously beginning to question whether the handsigns he was doing were right or not. The blonde haired shinobi picked up the kunai and spun it around again, ready for a second go with the kunai.

[Paper Planes]

Oni threw the kunai up in the air for a second time, he performed several handsigns and then waited to see what would happen to the kunai. The kunai once again just like every other time Oni did it gave out a feeble spark that died quickly and hit the ground, the kunai hit the roof with a Clang! and began to fall off of the roof. "Shit" Oni hissed and jumped off of the roof, he grabbed the kunai and landed quietly on the ground. He turned around to see if anyone had heard anything, but the house seemed as quiet as it always did. Oni jumped back up, he landed back on the roof and looked at the kunai, he figured he maybe had the right handsigns, he just needed more practice. Oni paused for a second, he needed to work on his chakura control a little bit. He dissmissed that thought so, he figured for now he would just continue to train. Oni threw the kunai into the air again and performed the few handsigns needed and watched as a feeble spark once again emerged from Oni's weapon. But before it fell a second spark came out of the weapon before it hit the ground.

Oni looked at the kunai and shrugged, maybe it was just lack of practice after all. He picked up the pointed weapon and tried again a few more times, but the spark count stayed at two. Oni then tried with a shurkien, he managed to get two sparks but nothing more with that weapon either. Oni sighed, he knew it was going to be a very very long night at this rate. He continued to train with a shuriken, and slowly through the night the spark count began to increase. Oni was able to shoot out about 7 or 10 sparks by the end of the hour. He figured that if he continued at this rate he would be able to use the jutsu well by the time the sun came up, which gave him a good 6 hours or so to perfect the jutsu. Oni decided to switch to the kunai and he picked a kunai out of the box. He spun the kunai a few times expertly and threw it into the air, performing several handsigns and drawing his chakura into the weapon. Several sparks burst out of the kunai, it was falling towards the ground but Oni quickly shot out his hand and caught it, which turned out to be a big mistake. "Ow hot! hot!" Oni yelled, dropping the kunai onto the floor. The kunai was in fact very hot, which showed that Oni was training.

Oni picked up the kunai after he was sure it wasn't burning hot. The handle was still warm, but it was tolerable. Oni threw the kunai up in the air and performed the handsigns again, he watched as sparks erupted from the metal frame of the kunai and then clatter onto the floor again. Oni again began to wait for the kunai to cool off. He suddenly had an idea, if he could get a bucket of water from the mansion he wouldn't have to wait for the kunai to cool every time he used the jutsu. Then again the kunai would be wet, but he'd figure something out for that. He jumped off of the roof quietly and landed on the balcony of one of the rooms. Luckily the room was empty inside, so Oni slid the door open and crept into the room, he didn't want to wake anyone up. He snuck down the stairs, then he remembered they had been destroyed. Oni reached into one of his village flak jacket pockets and pulled some string out of it. He tied it around one of the railings that were still attached to the second floor and jumped down, he landed quietly and then snuck into the kitchen. He took a bucket of water, and before he could stop himself, a bag of chips. Oni then opened the door and walked outside, he applied chakura to his feet and ran up the side of the house and went up onto the roof.

The blonde haired shinobi quickly ate the bag of chips to restore his strength....and because he liked chips. After finishing off his quick snack he stood up and picked up the kunai, which was no longer burning hot. Oni threw it up in the air and performed the jutsu again, a shower of sparks shot out of the kunai and it clattered to the ground again. Oni opened the water bottle and poured some water on the kunai, which caused steam to rise out of the kunai. Oni picked up the metal weapon again, it was slippery and wet. He tried to use the jutsu again, but only a couple sparks came out of the kunai before it hit the rooftop feebly. Oni examined the kunai with a frown. Hmm, I guess that won't work, I'll just go get another weap- suddenly Oni realized why Hage had brought up so many weapons. "You think of everything don't you Hage" Oni said to himself as he threw a shuriken into the air and performed the handsigns.

[Tieren]

+5
+7
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+12 total

[Paper Planes]

The metal star created a little shower of sparks, it fell onto the rooftop and hit the ground, creating the same clanking noise that Oni had come to know and hate. Oni wondered what time it was as he walked over to the box and picked out a weapon randomly, it turned out to be another shuriken. The blonde haired shinobi threw that shuriken into the air and began his training again. He had only been practicing for an hour or 2 now, so he still had plenty of time before the sun rose. Oni began to practice using all of the weapons in the box, there were only about 30 or 40 weapons in there so he found himself having to go around and pick up all of the weapons again and put them back in the box. He practiced for about an hour or so, it was about 2 in the morning. The first 20 minutes were the boring and repetive parts of training, he didn't improve at all and he felt drained from the amount of chakura he had spent. But as he continued to train, he could see and feel himself improving. It started pretty small, the sparks began to increase in size, to the point where Oni had to back up to avoid getting hit by the embers.

At the moment the young shinobi was going around and picking up all the weapons he had used, they were just lying on the rooftops. Unfortunantley for Oni, it was nightime and the sky was dark, which made it hard for him to pick up black weapons lying on a black roof. It took him almost 10 minutes to put ball the weapons back in, and Oni was getting irritated from wasting so much time. The blonde haired shinobi picked a kunai form the box and took a moment to gather his chakura and his focus. Oni threw the weapon into the air and performed a few handsigns, then jumping back as sparks exploded from the surface of the kunai before it fell to the ground. Oni took another weapon from the box, making a mental note to himself to throw the weapons farther away. THe weapon he picked up this time was a shuriken. Oni threw the metal star into the air, throwing it a foot or two away from him this time. He performed the nessasary handsigns and watched as embers exploded from the shuriken, and then witnessed something he had not seen yet. The embers went out, and then came back in towards the shuriken, one or two of the sparks attached to the metal weapon before it clattered back onto the ground.

Oni stared at the shuriken for a moment, staring at the few glowing dots on it before the dots faded away. He walked over to the box and pulled out another shuriken, and wondered whether it would happen again. And sure enough, a few of the sparks attached to the shuriken before it fell back onto the ground. Oni grinned when he realized what was going on, that he was improving in the technique. Energy and morale boosted, Oni walked over to the box and picked a another weapon out of the box, a shurkien again. He continued to work on the jutsu, mentally keeping track of how many sparks stuck to the weapon each time. It started out as a small number, only one or two each time. But within 10 minutes or so, the number of sparks increased to a point where Oni couldn't count how many had fallen on the metal weapons, which were seriously beginning to get hot.

[Paper Planes]

Oni worked his way through the entire box again, as he continued to train for the jutsu. More and more sparks clung onto the weapons he was using. Eventually by the time he was done there were small flames that were on the weapons. They didn't take up the whole weapon yet, so Oni wasn't done. He went through the box one more time after that, it only took him about 15 minutes to do. The flame on his weapons slowly spread across until at last, on the last few attempts a flame covered the entire weapon he was using. Oni was tired completley at this point, he had practicing non-stop for almost an hour now, he had several very small burn marks on his hands that were irritating him every time he picked up a weapon. He sat down on top of the roof and looked out at the dark mountain side and relaxed. Oni stayed still for about a minute, just taking a break from all the training he was doing.

But something in the forest caught his eye. Something was coming out of the trees, it was an odd grey vapor rising out in an odd serpent like formation. Oni stood up, it was a trail of smoke coming from the forest. Better go investigate this Oni thought to himself, he took some weapons off of the rooftop and placed them in his jacket, then took off at a blinding speed, heading off for the source of the smoke. He silently jumped through the forest, barely making any sound when he landed on a branch and leaped onto another one. He had the cover of darkness too, it was only 3 or 4 in the morning, so he still had an hour or two before the sun rose. Silently, Oni landed on a branch and looked around, the source of the smoke had to be somewhere nearby. Then, Oni heard a noise, instinctivley the shinobi leaned his back against the tree, and listened again. Someone was laughing, it wasn't a merry cheerful laugh but a cruel greedy one. "Hey Larry, stop hogging all the beer" a voice trailed to Oni's ears. Curiosly, Oni crept over closer towards the noise, until he found a small clearning with a few people sitting around a camp fire.

Upon closer inspection, Oni found that there were three men sitting around a fire. None them seemed friendly, and at that they all appeared to be drunk. There was one who was drinking out of a beer bottle at that moment, and Oni assumed that was Larry. One of the other ones picked up a bundle of supplies and examined it, then gave out his harsh laugh again "Ha, stupid villagers. Raiding their village was so easy, they thought some Phoenix spirit was going to save them or something" he laughed, and the other two laughed along with him. Phoenix spirit eh? I'll give these bandits something to laugh about Oni thought to himself as he formulated a plan. Silently, Oni pulled out a kunai and threw it towards the bandit's fire, then quickly performing the seals needed for the Phoenix explosion jutsu. The kunai burst into flames and hit the fire, making the fire bigger all of the sudden. Luckily, the alcohol had slowed all the men's reaction time and so they didn't see the kunai, just the fire exploding and doubling in size. There eyes widened in suprise, and a small bit of fear could be seen.

[Paper Planes]

The fear stayed in the bandit's eyes, but the one who seemed to be the leader shook his head immediatley and said "Must've been a stupid bird that just fell into the fire or somethin'." Which of course, would never happen but either the other two were very stupid or very drunk because they both nodded and relaxed a little bit. Oni smiled to himself, this was going to be too easy. He pulled out two shuriken and jumped off two another treee, making sure to be quiet. He threw the other two shuriken and did the same thing, only he hit two trees on the other side of the campfire. The two Phoenixs exploded into the two trees, lighting them on fire. The bandits, mystified and now very afraid quickly jumped around and looked for something to put the fire out with. Oni took advantage of this confusion to throw seveal more weapons around the campfire and create a ring of flames around the bandits.

The bandits were panicking as if it were the end of the world. They jumped and screamed and knocked over almost everything. They were dumping all the water they had on the flames in an attempt to extinguish them. Meanwhile Oni was sitting back in a tree about 10 feet away from the fires, shaking his head in mirth. These bandits were incredibly stupid and they deserved whatever they were going to get. Oni considered getting the supplies and returning them to the village, but that thought was quickly gone as he realized he didn't know what village they were talking about. "Boss! Boss! Were all out of water" Larry was yelling frantically to his 'boss' who turned and swore loudly. "So use something else! Just get me out of here!" the third bandit whose name Oni had not yet figured out yet was throwing everything and anything he could find to extinguish the flames, which were starting to get closer to the bandits now. Out of desperation, the third bandit picked up a barrel of beer and dumped it onto the flames. What? No dammti! Oni thought as he jumped out of the tree, just in time.

The fire almost seemed to explode into the air, it was out of control now, Oni didn't know what to do. He ran back to the mansion and tried to put the flames out in vain, but it was immpossible for him. The flames were too intense and he couldn't get close enough to put the flames out, which were now spreading and starting a forest fire. Shit! was the only thing Oni could think of now, the fires had almost spread out over the entire forest and would soon each the meadow, and maybe work it's way up to the mansion. Just as all hope was lost, Oni heard an odd noise. The sound of rushing water. He turned around to see Hage about 50 feet up in the air, emmitting an enourmous amount of water onto the forest fire, which was about to spread onto the rest of the mountain. When the massive amount of water made conact with the fire, the fire just died down quickly and dissapeared. Hage fell to the ground next to Oni, who was staring at the burned trees, and the smoke rising out of the forest. The smoke seemed to be taking shape of a Phoenix to Oni's astonishment, but only for a brief second.

[||Yuuku||]

+18 TP

((30/30))

Im assuming you were learning the C rank.

[Paper Planes]

((Yeah sorry I forget a lot ))

Fuuton - Tsuin Doragon no Jutsu (Wind - Twin Dragon Technique)
Rank: B-rank
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Requires the only seal of dragon. It utilizes the element of wind to create two dragons that swirl around the user and can be moved through the air by chakra usage towards a target. The two dragons become feirce winds and collect any debris or anything that swirl around within it, and charge towards an enemy, slashing at them with fierce winds and a powerful blow. If the seal is formed upsidedown, the wind dragons can be used in a vaccuum sort of way; basically when the dragon's hit the user, the only effect it has on them is that it sucks the air out of them, causing lack of oxygen and possible suffocation.
Special: Handseals : Dragon (reverse dragon)
Drawback: If used incorrectly, or not strong enough to weild this technique, the jutsu could backfire. Expecially dangerous when using reverse version, if not utilized well, suffocation could become your downfall.
Description: When created, it becomes two twin dagons, about 5 feet in diameter, length varies to the distance of the opponent. They look like traditional chinese dragons, no color since wind is transparent, color can change to the debris that is collected.
Limit: n/a

Oni stood on top of the roof of the mansion, where he always stood when he was going to learn a new jutsu. This time, Hage had given him a scroll for the jutsu, Tsuin Doragon which was supposedly a very powerful jutsu. Hage had told that this would be one of the last jutsu’s he would learn here, after all he had to go back to the leaf village and help with the reconstruction. Obviously no one else was coming, and the only other Yasashi was that Daan kid. Oni sighed and jumped off of the roof, he headed towards the forest he had accidentally burned and got ready to learn the jutsu. The handseals that were need to perform the jutsu were simple, he just had to perform the dragon handsign and then the jutsu would work. It sounded simple enough, but Oni knew the jutsu was going to be very difficult to learn.

The blonde haired shinobi got to work, Hage said he would have to get rid of all of the dead trees, so he figured he might as well start now. He gathered up most of his chakura and then performed the dragon handseal, he shot out his chakura into the dragon seal and waited for the result. Nothing happened, except for a small breeze passed through. Oni cursed and tried again, but once again there was just a small breeze. ”Jesus this is going to be hard” Oni said and he got to work and began to train. He tried to perform the jutsu again, but the result was just a small breeze. Oni kicked a tree in frusteration, which wasn’t the smartest thing for him to do. The shinobi leaned against a tree and wondered what was wrong. He had learned plenty of wind style techniques before, but none of them started out this badly.

Oni sighed and stood up straight again. He began to focus and build up his chakura again, He performed the dragon handsign and waited for something to happen. He did the handsign over and over again, trying to get a powerful wind blast or dragon to come out. But nothing really happened except for the small breezes of wind that came out when he tried to perform the jutsu. After about 20 minutes or so, Oni began to wonder if this was kind of cruel, sick joke Hage was making just for him to get frusterated or something. Despite all his nagging doubts Oni continued to try and learn this jutsu, which at the moment seemed impossible to do. He continued to train for an hour or so, he really couldn’t see any signs of improvement besides the fact that the tiny gusts of wind were getting stronger, but that could’ve just been him. The young shinobi stopped and took a 10 minute break of or so, trying to build up his chakura again.

[Paper Planes]

Oni returned to the barren land of trees, he decided something. He remembered back when he was going the lightning dragon jutsu. He needed to build up a massive amount of chakura and just explode it out. ”Alright, here goes” Oni said to himself as he began to build up a massive amount of chakura. He felt all his chakura rush up into one part of his body. It built up in his body, the chakura was getting hard to contain just in his body now. Oni formed the dragon seal and got ready to release all of his chakura out and have it form into a giant wind dragon…actually two giant wind dragons for that matter. He felt the chakura inside him build up to a point were it was too much for him to take, he released all the chakura out and focused it with the wind element. A giant explosion of wind released out of Oni, it sent Oni flying backwards about 20 feet onto the ground, along with knocking down a few trees. Oni lay face down for a few seconds, his head resting in the muddy dirt. Finally, he risked moving his head up, the back of his head was filthy, along with the back of his clothes.

Oni picked himself up slowly, he hated the feeling of having muddy clothes. Then again he didn’t know anyone who didn’t. The shinobi leaned against a tree and looked at the mass explosion of wind he had made. His plan had sort of worked; he didn’t mean the results to be so…disastrous. Oni looked at his muddy clothes, and just when he thought things could be worse, it started to rain. Godammit!! Oni cursed to himself and looked up at the sky, rain poured down on his head and ran down the side of his face. He looked away and back at the muddy ground, which was now flooding with water. Oni couldn’t train by the way he had just had, it wasted way too much chakura each time, and it would hurt too much each time he used it. But Oni’s stubborn side took over, he glared fiercely at the muddy dead forest and began to build up his chakura again.

Oni began charging up the chakura in his body again, trying to build it up to it’s full extent. He made the dragon handseal again and focused all of his chakura again, his green eyes flashing with determination. He focused all of his chakura outwards in the form of the wind element, and was thrown backwards like a rag doll as another giant explosion of wind was created. This time though Oni wasn’t as lucky, his back scraped across the back of some branches of a tree. He skidded across the mud and landed in a little hole that was made by his body. Oni lied in this crater, his eyes shut. He felt a stinging sensation in his back, he didn’t want to know what it was though. Finally though, the shinobi got up slowly, he stood up and leaned against a dead tree, ironically the one that had raked his back. Oni slowly moved his hand to his back and felt the large cuts on his back, he winced in pain as he felt the cuts sting.

[Paper Planes]

Oni turned to head back to the mansion, he decided he was going to stop training for now. It was raining to hard, and he was too tired and banged up. He began to trudge gradually towards the mansion, his back stinging. He reached the edge of the burnt forest and looked down, an odd fiery sensation suddenly filled Oni. He stopped and turned back ”Not yet, one more go” he said to himself as the rain poured down on him. He gritted his teeth and trudged back to the middle area of the forest. Shakily, Oni formed the dragon seal and began to draw what was left in his body into one spot. It took him twice as long to gather his chakura this time, but soon he felt the chakura beginning to build up inside of him again. Oni released the chakura out in one go and shot backwards again, as another giant explosion of wind came out and shot him backwards. Oni hit the ground and heard a cracking noise. Everything began faint to him after that and he passed out.

Where am I… Oni thought to himself, he slowly opened his eyes and found himself staring at a ceiling. He felt the cut on his back, but the pain was nothing now, it didn’t really bother him. Gathering what little strength Oni had left, he sat upright and leaned against the wall that the bed was facing. His eyes adjusted to the dim lighting and in a couple seconds Oni realized he was sitting in his room. He looked outside and noticed it was dark outside, but not too dark. He had only been out for a couple hours, it was about 9 or 10 right now. Oni laid back on the bed for a few minutes, just trying to regain his strength. Training for this jutsu was going to be a lot tougher than he had originally expected. A scent caught the shinobi’s noise, he looked around and noticed a plate of food lying right next to his bed. Oni’s stomach gave a rumbling noise at that very moment, reminding Oni how hungry he was. Oni picked the plate up and began eating, and in a in a minute he was completely finished. Oni felt renewed, but he still felt damaged from the last time he attempted the training.

Oni stood up and got out of the bed, he leaned against the wall and took a few deep breaths. He was going to go back outside and continue to train for that jutsu, he knew that Hage wouldn’t approve of him going out like this, but he needed to learn that jutsu. It was an odd sensation that Oni had, that he had to learn the jutsu. He staggered out the mansion and headed slowly out towards the dirty area that used to be the forest. When he approached the edge of the forest, Oni noticed the ground had turned into mud. He stood on the side of the forest then, and then began to build up chakura. Then Oni stopped, he knew better then to try and do that training again. ”Maybe I should go practice chakura control until I’m fully healed” Oni said to himself and walked off, heading to a place where he could practice controlling his chakura.




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[hotoka]

+ 2
+3
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+6

Though I know it's not much, I am not giving TP for you waking up in room, searching for good places to train or to describe the landscape. I like describtion and such but yeh, this might explain why it isnt that much.

[Paper Planes]

Oni walked slowly back towards the mansion, wondering how he was going to practice his chakura control when his answer arrived right in front of him. Hage was leaning on a giant boulder, he waved and smiled at Oni amiably, which made Oni sick with dread. ”Hello Oni, ready for some training?” Hage asked Oni, who paused for the barest fraction of a second before nodding. ”So, where does the giant boulder come in place?” He asked, looking at the giant boulder Hage was leaning on. ”Well, to be able to perform this jutsu well you need to be able to control massive amounts of wind at one time. So I took the liberty of making these two vents –Hage pointed at a vent a couple feet away from the boulder, and then one directly under the boulder- all you have to do is use your daitoppa jutsu on one of the vents, and suistain the boulder from falling back onto the ground just with the wind.” Oni blinked a few times, and then nodded. It made sense, but it was defiantly easier said than done. ”Well, good luck” Hage said and walked off, leaving Oni to train alone.

Oni took a deep breath and walked over to the second vent. He mixed all the chakura in his lungs and shot out an enormous explosion of wind out of his lungs which shot into the vent and came up the other opening, sending the boulder 7 feet into the air. Oni quickly pressed both of his hands down onto the vent, the palm of his hands pressing tightly against the metal slits in the vent. He felt the air currents rushing through, but they couldn’t hold the boulder, and it went back towards the vent. Oni pressed his hands down even tighter and pressed in chakura towards the wind, trying to stop the boulder from falling. Oni failed miserably, the boulder shot right through the air and hit the vent with a loud Thud! Sending Oni jumping back. The shinobi looked at the boulder, then at his hands. He had pressed his hands against the metal so hard, it had made small red marks on the palm of his hand.

”Jesus, okay this is going to be really hard” Oni said to himself, this boulder levitating training was probably the hardest thing he had ever done…well, not the Hardest but it was still pretty hard. The blonde haired shinobi took another deep breath, ready for round two. He shot out another Daitoppa and let loose a burst of wind down the vent, the air rushed through the vent and shot the boulder back into the air. Without a moment to waste, Oni pressed his hands down against the metal vent again and pushed his chakura into the wind again, trying to hold up the boulder. The boulder just fell through the wind once again and crashed onto the ground again. ”Dammit!” Oni cursed, he looked at the boulder again with irritation. He took a little break after that, his ears were ringing slightly from the loud banging noise that the boulder made when it hit the metal vent. He relaxed for a minute or two, then got ready to try it again.

Oni resumed his grueling training assignment given to him by his grandfather, he tried again and again to stop the boulder from falling, but every time he’d set up a barrier of wind, the boulder would come right down and crash through it, hitting the vent with a loud thud. Oni’s hands were becoming sore from the amount of times he had now thrown his hands down onto the vent and pressed chakura into it. His head was spinning from the annoying ringing noises that the boulder made each time it hit the metal vent. Also, Oni was drained from the amount of chakura he had been using when he tried to hold the boulder up, which was probably the most frustrating thing of all. Every time he would set up a barrier of wind to hold the boulder, it would just crash through the barrier and ram against the metal vent again.

[Daanver]

[ Yep, I'm back from inactivity ]

Haymaker
Rank: C
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: An overhead two fisted strike, this devastating attack usually knocks an opponent down into the ground, creating a crater with the opponents body.
Special: None
Drawback: Very slow due to the wind up but comes down rather quickly.
Description: Gathering chakra into both of the users fists, the user strikes down with both simultaneously in order to severely damage the opponent.
Limit: Must be at least Champion level and know all D-ranked techniques.

...the hit landed extremely unsuccessfully. Daan missed the dummy entirely, mostly due to the fact that the jutsu used so much chakra and was so powerful that, even if the dummy only swayed slightly, Daan would miss his mark. And it had somehow swayed, so Daan obviously missed his mark. His hands came in contact with the floor and it cracked open, exposing the fact that the wood was old and ragged. Daan rubbed his hands and saw several splinters. He sat down, and using healing hands, one at a time, each one healing the other hand, he healed them. He got a chance to sit down while the dummies ‘regenerated’. How could he make it more accurate? He stood up and decided it was time for target practice. He went down the stairs and started his way out the door. It seemed eerily quiet this time of day – everyone, which would be the kid, Oni, and Mr. Old and Grumpy, Hage, would probably be downstairs, eating or something like that. He took a quick look in the kitchen and discovered nothing there. ‘Odd...’ he thought ‘maybe they went on a training mission.’ He shook his head. ‘Meh, what do I care, anyways? Where ever they could be, I couldn’t care less.’ He quickly grabbed a scroll from the table, probably some sort of basics training scroll, by the looks of it, and put it in his backpack. ‘A good practical joke will calm my nerves’ he thought, smiling. He walked out the door and off he was to whatever training ground he could find.

He walked near a river, making full air rotations as he walked along. He practiced chakra flow while he was stretching by releasing chakra from his palms as he made the rotations. He didn’t feel like having a long warm-up today, as he was still slightly concerned to the location of Hage and the Oni kid, and he knew he wouldn’t be able to concentrate. He found a perfect spot near the end of the river, when it flowed into the lake; it looked very similar to his old training ground and home at which he had spent several hours of the day training. ‘Good times, Daan, good times’ he thought to himself as he smirked a amused smile. There was a large tree in the center, just as with the old training ground, and the water ran in tiny little rivers; only slightly bigger than before. Daan immediately started with his plans. He grabbed berries from the surrounding trees, red and purple ones, and squirted their rich liquid juice in a small breakfast bowl he had brought along. Once he had finished squirting the berries into the bowl, he found a large, flat spot near the tree. There, he put leaves and soft dirt under a large pile of stone. Had you not known what he was thinking, you would’ve thought of it as total insanity. He put his fingers in the berry mix and started drawing a red circle in the ground, small enough to be the top of a dummy’s head. He then put a purple circle around it, a small amount of leeway for Daan to have a mistake but still know he was on the right track. He put on his ANBU mask in case of any sort of sneak attack, and it looked pretty cool in his opinion. Training could now begin.

He grabbed a branch from the tree and began climbing up. It was a rather tall tree, probably the distance he would keep from his opponent in a real battle. ‘Good thing’ he thought ‘after all, training is preparation for the real thing. You want to make it as authentic as possible. He closed his eyes and slowly raised his hands behind his head. He opened his eyes again, knowing he could not aim accurately with closed eyes. He felt the chakra start to flow from within him. It made him excited and nervous. Once the chakra had reached his hands, he clenched them into fists. And there he jumped. He thrust his fists down to the floor and felt the shockwave of the chakra bouncing back from the stone jump into him. He was surprised by the power; most of his other jutsus were much easier to control. But, the question was, did he make his mark. He lifted his head to see where the small crater was. He saw it, a bit to the left of the purple circle. ‘Shoot, what had gone wrong?’, he thought. He went step-by-step through what he remembered from the time when he had started to when he had finished. And then he remembered – about halfway through from jump to impact he had closed his eyes. ‘Ugh’ he thought, ‘why didn’t I think about this before? It’s all about the seeing.’ He sat down to consider how to keep his eyes open; after all, it was impulse for him to close them, after all the warm ups. Nobody had ever told him to close his eyes during the warm-ups, he just sort of did. A relaxation thing. He made a mental note that he had to shift his warm ups to never closing his eyes, too.

But now was still the problem of how to not close his eyes. He had almost enough power in his hit, and could control his chakra so that when he hit the ground, he could do it without losing much chakra. But his accuracy – yikes. In a real fight, if he had been as accurate as he had just been, the enemy would’ve killed him before he had a chance to actually had a chance to stand up from the attacks. He got back up into the tree so that when he got an idea, he could immediately test it. He looked at the sun. Judging by it’s position, it would probably be... about 3 PM. Yikes, he had already spent a few hours outside since he’d left the house, though most of them had been searching for the perfect training location. Still, he had no time to loose. He wanted to since this jutsu within the next day, and accuracy was just a minor bump in the road compared to all the other crap he did and had to do. He concentrated on accuracy. How could he keep his eyes open? And, looking at a thick branch below it, he had it. A brain blast that would turn this training around. He knew his brain thought that, since it’s such a long distance down, the impact would require the reflex of closing the eyes when going down. And at the same time he knew that he needed to be this distance from the ground to make the training authentic. Unlearning the reflex would take days – time he didn’t have if he wanted to beat the kid. So, he would jump down, onto a branch, and then he would jump again, and then onto the ground, making the training realistic and nulling the need for a reflex. He jumped down, hit the branch, and...

...well, let’s say, it went well, but not too well. Daan jumped down, hit the branch, jumped again immediately, and hit the ground. He had made it right on the edge of the red territory, only there was one catch; there was not crater, just a kink in the stone. In the short distance, he had forgotten, in all the excitement that he didn’t have time to prepare enough chakra for the jutsu. So, he would need to control his chakra forcefully and quickly. Well, perhaps it wouldn’t be the most powerful form of chakra, but it would have to work if he was going to make his mark. He realized what this meant, though; he would have to work at chakra flow. And he had thought this would be a day where he could skip a warm up. There always seemed to be a need for it. Thank god for his TaiJutsu teacher, and of course his grandfather; always stressing chakra control. People thought TaiJutsu specialists needed almost no training or control to get the job done; that it was the NinJutsu guys who were the real hard workers. Well, maybe certain TaiJutsus could be learned quickly if a skilled ninja did something with it, but other than that... He got into a warm-up stance. He knew the drill. Step slowly every jab, get to the tree, punch the tree, start again. Over and over, until he felt comfortable. And that he did, until late into the day. At five, it would be training time again. Til then, it's warm up time.

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[Arkai]

+5

Only because you put so much detail. Try focusing on training more.

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