Risan Fies

[Risan]

Basic Information

Name: Risan Fies
Bloodlimit: ——
Height: 4’’ 8’
Weight: 90 lbs
Age: 12
Gender: Male
Alignment: Neutral Good
Birth Country: Oto no Kuni
Village: Otogakure
Special:

[/b]

• Enchantment
• Phantasm
• Pattern
• ---
• ---
• ---

Taijutsu Specialist

• Kyokugoma
• The Art of Throwing
• Capoeira
• ---
• ---
• ---

Ninjutsu Non-Specialist

• Wind
• ---
• ---
• ---

Clan Non-Specialist

• Art of the Bard
• ---
• ---
• ---

Freebies: 12/12

[/ul]

Equipment

Primary Equipment

[/b]
Rank: B Rank
Type: Secondary, 2 per Slot, Bludgeoning, Yo-yo
Effect: A aerodynamic, rounded shape Yoyo Base of varying levels of strength, dependent upon material.
Special: Must be a member of Kyokugoma to fully utilize.
Drawback:--
Description: A small item with a screw axel keeping the two halves connected. With two rounded hemispheres, the item is well designed to be sleek in its movements, attaining the least amount of air resistance possible to allow for greater speeds of movement. Has several modifiable holes and slots across its surface and in the bearing chamber itself. The two halves of the Yo-yo are more of a rounded disk shape with a rough 1-2 inch thickness.
Limit: None
Cost: 4,000 Ryo per Slot, 2,000 per Yo-yo


Wire x1
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Slashing, Soft Weapon
Effect: Metal drawn out into the form of a thin flexible thread or rod.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Wire is a single, usually cylindrical, flexible strand or rod of metal. Wires are used to bear mechanical loads and to carry electricity and telecommunications signals. Wire is commonly formed by drawing the metal through a hole in a die or draw plate. Standard sizes are determined by various wire gauges. Wire is normally sold in Bundles. A bundle of Wire is 15 Meters. (May only start with 1 bundle for New Characters)
Limit: These types of weapons may be capable of being bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 3,000 Ryo per Bundle, 200 Ryo per Meter

Non Categoriezed Plucked Instruments, Medium (Lyre) x1
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Instrument, String Instrument
Effect: Plucking (Italian: Pizzicato) is used as the sole method of playing, on instruments such as the guitar, oud, sitar, banjo and harp, either by a finger or thumb, or by some type of plectrum. This category includes the keyboard instrument the harpsichord, which formerly used feather quills (now plastic plectra) to pluck the strings.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Some of the non Categorized Plucked Instruments are as Appalachian Dulcimer, Autoharp, Baglama, Bajo Sexto, Balalaika, Bandura, Bandurria, Barbat, Begena, Boronua, Bouzouki, Bugarija, Buzuq, Cavaquinho, Ceng, Charango, Chitarra Battente, Chitarrone, Charango, Chitarra, Chitarrone, Citteren, Cuatro, Cumbus, Dan Bau, Dan Nguyet, Dan Tranh, Dan Ty Ba, Diddley Bow, Dombra, Domra, Doshupuluur, Dutar, Duxianqin, Ektara, Gayageum, Geomungo, Gottuvadhyam, Gravikord, Guitarron, Gusli, Guqin, Guzheng, Kantele, Kanun, Kobza, Konghou, Kontigi, Kora, Koto, Krar, Kutiyapi, Langeleik, Laud, Liuqin, Lyre, Mohan Veena, Monochord, Nyatiti, Oud, Pandura, Pipa, Psaltery Quinqin, Ruan, Requinto, Rote, Rubab, Rudra Veena, Sallaneh, Sanxian, Sarod, Saz, Shamizen, Sitar, Tambura, Tanbur, Tar, Tiple, Torban, Tres, Tricordia, Ukulele, Valiha, Veena, Vihuela, Yueqin, Zhu, and Zither. Any instrument that ranges between 2 to 3 feet in length or size.
Limit: These types of items may be capable of being bought inside any Musical Shop.
Cost: 4,000 Ryo
[/ul]

Secondary Equipment

[/b]
Rank: "C" Rank
Type: Secondary, 2 per Slot, Piercing/Slashing, Knife
Effect: A kunai is a tool derived from the masonry trowel.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A Light Weapon. These weapons do +4 Amour Points of Damage. The Range Increment of this weapon is 5 meters. A kunai has a blade that is about less than 1 foot in length. The user gains a +10 bonus on Sleight of Hand Skill to conceal a knife on their body.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 1,000 Ryo per Slot, or 500 Ryo Each.

Caltrops x4
Rank: "C" Rank
Type: Secondary, 16 per Slot, Piercing, Caltrops
Effect: A spiked device thrown on the ground to impede characters.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A Light Weapon. These weapons do +1 Amour Points of Damage. The Range Increment of this weapon is 5 meters. A caltrop is a 4-pronged iron spike crafted so that one prong faces up no matter how the caltrop comes to rest. The user scatters caltrops on the ground in the hope that the opponent steps on them or at least forced to slow down to avoid them. 1 slot of caltrops cover an area 2 meter squared. Each time a creature moves into an area covered by caltrops or spends a round fighting while standing in an area, they may step on one. If the opponent steps on a caltrop the Caltrop deals 1 Armour Points of Damage, and the opponent's movements is reduced by 1/2 because its foot is wounded. This movement penalty lasts for 24 hours, or until the creature is treated with a First Aid: Healing Hard Check, or they are healed from minor wounds. A charging or running creature must immediately stop if it steps on a caltrop.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 1,600 Ryo per Slot, or 100 Ryo Each

Spyglass x1
Rank: "B"
Type: Secondary, 2 per Slot, Gadget, surveillance, Survival
Effect: A small handheld telescope.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Objects viewed through a spyglass are magnified to 4 times their size. Characters using a spyglass take a -5 penalty on Observation checks per 18meters of distance to the target.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Gadget Shop.
Cost: 4,000 Ryo Each

Flint (Overview) x2
Rank: "C"
Type: Secondary, 20 per Slot, Gadget, Survival, Tool
Effect: A rock device created to use as a source for creating a spark.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture Flint is a hard, sedimentary cryptocrystalline form of the mineral quartz, categorized as a variety of chert. It occurs chiefly as nodules and masses in sedimentary rocks, such as chalks and limestones. Inside the nodule, flint is usually dark grey, black, green, white, or brown in colour, and often has a glassy or waxy appearance. A thin layer on the outside of the nodules is usually different in colour, typically white and rough in texture. Scrape tool with any knife (or sharp object, like a rock) to create small magnesium shavings. Ignite shavings with built-in sparking insert. Start hundreds of fires with a flame source of 5,400°F. Safe; fireproof in solid form. Carry in a pocket or attach to bag with included chain loop. It's measurements is 3 inches by 1 inch by 0.5 inches and weighs 1.4 ounces.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Gadget Shop.
Cost: 2,000 Ryo per Slot, or 100 Ryo Each

Handheld Inspection Tool x1
Rank: "B"
Type: Secondary, 1 per Slot, Gadget, Surveillance, Optics
Effect: An optics system used to peer through cracks of doors and in windows without being compromised of their location.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture The Handheld Inspection Tool is a lightweight, highly portable inspection tool that puts an extremely low light black and white camera into a system that is perfect for inspecting containers and rooms or looking around barriers. The Handheld Inspection Tool allows the operator to view the picture in the attached eye-piece or transmit to 1 or more monitors. The Handheld Inspection Tool comes in two pieces, an extendable tube that is 1/2 inch wide 8 inches long that extends to 16 inches, and the main system that is 2 by 2 by 8 inches. The tube may be attached to the main system by screwing it in. User is able to look through an opening found in the main system and see through the tube as well.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Gadget Shop.
Cost: 5,000 Ryo Each
[/ul]

Apparel

[/b]
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Slot Holder, 10 Slot, Wearable Container
Effect: Butt packs are small to medium sized packs worn around the belt, above a person's behind, similar to a fanny pack.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture The butt pack has the volume for 10 Slots, so it can hold a plethora of items inside. 1 Butt Pack takes up 3 Pouch Slots when applying to Individual Integrated Fighting System apparel and other basic apparel. It can be attached to a Modular Lightweight Load-Carrying Equipment system, attached to Basic Apparel, or carried like a Wearable Container as it has a handle along the midsection of the pack along the top. Butt packs are commonly worn by military during missions to carry combat essentials while keeping their hands free. Butt packs are stylish packs that can be worn by anyone to carry everyday essentials.
Limit: These type of items may be bought inside any Tailor Shop.
Cost: 2,000 Ryo Each.

Leg, Individual Equipment x2
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Slot Holder, 3 Pouches, Rig
Effect: The leg panel attaches to the user's belt and thigh in 2 places for comfort and function. It is a carrying system designed to allow the user quick access to objects near the leg.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture A rig that can hold up to 3 individual pouches. Leg rigs attach to the belt and secure around the thigh with high quality nylon or leather with clips. A highly useful rig used by all military style members. it is lightweight, reliable, and completely customizable storage expansion for different purposes. It has a small Modular Lightweight Load-Carrying Equipment system. Most medical personnel use this to hold medical kits, while crossbowmen will use this for clip holders.
Limit: These type of items may be bought inside any Tailor Shop.
Cost: 2,500 Ryo Each.
[/ul]

Character Depth

Personality

[/b] Risan comes from an eclectic background. Father was a musician and mother was an acrobat so both taught him the joys of being in front of crowds. He has taken those words to heart and as he grew up, he was always wanting to be the center of attention. Making others laugh was a high priority..by whatever means necessary. Whether it be cracking jokes, playing songs or even making a fool of himself. Definitely had gotten in trouble on more than one occasion in class due to wanting to "lighten the mood."

Disciplined: Rigorous training by both his parents formed him to be someone who wants to perfect their craft. Whether it be showcasing his talents in voice training, playing instruments or even harnessing the art of Genjutsu, Risan always puts forth 100% when diving into something he truly is dedicated towards. Those things that matter little to him do fall by the waist side as they don't capture his same dedication. 

Guarded: "Keep your cards close to your chest" rings true when dealing with Risan. As much of a jokester he is, someone who is preceptive enough can tell that there is a sense that those jokes are masking something. Whether Risan himself knows this to be true or not is up for debate but there are definitely walls which the young boy guards himself with.

Sly: Micheviousness is second nature to the bard. Whether it be pranks, jokes, or even spinning wild tales, there is always an ulterior motive when he does something. Nothing in this life is free, he surely understands that and in this world, information is a form of power..being someone who seems so approachable as he does tends to get you access to some juicy tidbits.

[/ul]

Appearance

Background

[/i] entertainers as parents and not be the life of the party. This, however, got him into loads of trouble. Whether it be cracking jokes in class, playing along with any instrument he snuck in while the teachers were giving their lectures, or even the few t times he acted out extravagant scenarios he would concoct in his head for all to see. This garnered him quite a reputation among his classmates and even upperclassmen since plenty of times he was also seen with his family in town putting on impromptu performances for everyone to see.

In truth, Risan always felt he had to be “on.” The performance never seemed to stop and any sort of emotion he was feeling, whether it be stress, sadness, happiness or even complacency, all had to be put to the side for the sake of making sure others were better off. Risan had gotten quite good at putting up a facade so no one knew what was really going on in his head. Being the entertainer he was, people often felt comfortable around him to share intimate details or just gossip they heard. When discovering that this kept happening over and over, Risan figured out that knowledge had power and if he used what he learned right, he could force a situation in his favor.

Academically, he was a pretty good student. Not top of his class but certainly not failing his tests. He had excelled at the physical training due to his parent’s lifestyle and always helping them out during their shows in town. On top of his TaiJutsu training, he had found solace in Genjutsu. There was something so fascinating about mind altering tactics. They certainly made for much more interesting times once he got the hang of it…definitely upped his pranking game.

As graduation came, Risan had his sights sent on new horizons. To what adventures await him, he could not say nor did he have any idea what life would bring him. That was exactly where he wanted to me. Stepping out into a new chapter in his life, Risan held his head high with a smirk on his face. Into the unknown he would go.[/ul][/ul]

[Risan]

Wind Release

D RANK

Air Bullets
Rank: "D" (10 TP)
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: This technique shoots multiple bullets of air at the victim with intense speed.
Special: Handseals
Drawback: ---
Description: Range of this technique is 30 meters + 15 meters per Class Level. Duration of this technique is instantaneous. Target is 2 or more creatures, no 2 of which may be more than 10 meters apart. This technique shoots multiple bullets of air at the victim with intense speed. The bullets also have great power, enough to subdue a whole group of targets. At "D" Class the user may release 3 Air Bullets. The amount of Air Bullets increases by 2 per Class Level. Each Air Bullet deals 4 + 1 Armour Point of Piercing Damage per Class Level.
Limit: Must know Wind Release.

Windy Escape
Rank: "D" (10 TP)
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: User turns into a vaporous substance for a brief moment.
Special: Handseals
Drawback: ---
Description: Range of this technique is personal. Duration of this technique is Instantaneous. Target of this technique is the user. User responds to an attack by briefly becoming vaporous and insubstantial, allowing the attack to pass harmlessly through them. The user gains DR 10/Chakra against this attack and are immune to any poison, sneak attacks, or critical strike effect from that attack. The user cannot use windy escape against an opportunity attack they provoked by performing a Jutsu, using a Jutsu-like ability, or using any other Chakra ability that provokes an opportunity attack when used.
Limit: Must know Wind Release.



Pattern Perception

---


Enchantment Perception

D RANK

Boost of the Athlete
Rank: "D" (10 TP)
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: This Jutsu allows the recipient to tap hidden reserves of stamina and health through sheer mental power.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: A Mind-Affecting Technique. Affects anyone 1 creature. The user is able to perform this technique at a distance of 7 meters plus 6 meters per class level. The duration of this technique lasts for 2 rounds per class level. This technique may be negated. The blood pumped through Hedrick’s veins. He could hear the staccato sound of his heart beating, and he felt remarkably well. He knew that he had the stamina to accomplish anything right now… This Jutsu allows the recipient to tap hidden reserves of stamina and health through sheer mental power. The subject believes in this so strongly that the effect actually manifests. Through use of this Jutsu, the user is able to raise the Toughness of one subject by 1 per Class Level. (+4 Maximum)
Limit: Must know the Enchantment Perception.

Boost of the Defender
Rank: "D” (10 TP)
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: This Jutsu allows the recipient to tap hidden reserves of tactical knowledge through sheer mental power.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: A Mind-Affecting Technique. Affects 1 creature. The user is able to perform this technique at a distance of 7 meters plus 6 meters per class level. The duration of this technique lasts for 2 rounds per class level. This technique may be negated. Jadred was a seasoned warrior. He knew all the ins and outs of battle. Ever since the GenJutsu Master had performed the Jutsu, though, Jadred had seen things in a new light. He dodged in and out of the battle, parrying and weaving like never before… This Jutsu allows the recipient to tap hidden reserves of tactical knowledge through sheer mental power. The subject believes in this so strongly that the effect actually manifests. Through use of this Jutsu, the user is able to give a Dodge bonus of one subject by +1 per Class Level. (+4 Maximum)
Limit: Must know the Enchantment Perception.

Boost of the Quick
Rank: "D" (10 TP)
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: This Jutsu allows the recipient to tap hidden reserves of speed and agility through sheer mental power.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: A Mind-Affecting Technique. Affects 1 creature. The user is able to perform this technique at a distance of 7 meters plus 6 meters per class level. The duration of this technique lasts for 2 rounds per class level. This technique may be negated. Garrett felt quick. In fact, he felt faster than he had ever felt before. Ever since the GenJutsu Master had performed the Jutsu, he could see straighter, and he knew that when the time came, he would be ready to move like the wind… This Jutsu allows the recipient to tap hidden reserves of speed and agility through sheer mental power. The subject believes in this so strongly that the effect actually manifests. Through use of this Jutsu, the user is able to raise the Agility of one subject by +1 per Class Level. (+4 Maximum)
Limit: Must know the Enchantment Perception.



Phantasm Perception

D RANK

Glimpse of Fear
Rank: "D" (10 TP)
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: User plunges the subject directly into a waking nightmare, immersing it in a world of fear for a brief instant.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: A Fear, Mind-Affecting Technique. Affects 1 creature. The user is able to perform this technique at a distance of 6 meters plus 7 meters per class level. The duration of this technique lasts for 5 rounds per class level. This technique may be negated. User plunges the subject directly into a waking nightmare, immersing it in a world of fear for a brief instant. The change happens so fast that many creatures do not consciously sense it all, but a failed Will save means the sudden shift in perception registers long enough to leave the subject shaken for 5 rounds per Class Level. In addition, a target that fails the Will save to resist this Jutsu also takes a -4 penalty on all Will saves made to resist Jutsus with the fear descriptor for the duration.
Limit: Must know the Phantasm Perception.

Phantasmal Force
Rank: "D" (10 TP)
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: With this Jutsu the user can create a phantasmal image that torments the foes.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: A Fear, Mind-Affecting Technique. Affects 1 creature. The user is able to perform this technique at a distance of 30 meters plus 15 meters per class level. The duration of this technique lasts for 5 rounds per class level. This technique may be negated. The phantasmal force has the same movements as the user while it deals 20 Armour Points of subdual damage on each successful attack. Note that because the phantasm is inside the creature's mind the phantasm can always make a full round attack of 3 movements per round. If disbelieved or if the creature leaves the user's line of sight the phantasmal force immediately dissipates.
Limit: Must know the Phantasm Perception.



Art of the Bard

D RANK

Four Becomes Three
Rank: "D" (10 TP)
Skill: Supplementary
Effect: Allows the bard to slip away unseen.
Special: --
Drawback: Must be used in a group of four or more.
Description: One of the skills of the bard is knowing when they are no longer needed or when to bow out. Thus in groups of four or more, the bard included, the bard can use their knowledge and skill to slip away from the group unseen. This will not work if someone is paying direct attention to the bard at that time.
Limit: Art of the Bard.

Jigoku no Mimi (Hells ears)
Rank: "D" (10 TP)
Skill: Supplementary
Effect: With this technique the Bard is capable of pinpointing the location of a noise within a small area.
Special: ---
Drawback: Cannot be used to hear techniques that silent the user's movement. Must be trained multiple times.
Description: Bards are around sounds constantly and all their training in the musical arts hones their hearing. They are capable of further training their ability to hear to allow them to listen and precisely pinpoint the location a sound is coming from as long as it is within ten meters of themselves. They can continue to train their ability to pinpoint the location of a sound to increase the distance it can be pinpointed from by ten meters each time, capping off at fifty meters.
Limit: Art of the Bard

Koemen (Sound Style: Voice Mask)
Rank: "D" (10 TP)
Skill: Supplementary
Effect: The user alters the sound of their voice.
Special: ---
Drawback: --
Description: Most people can alter the sound of their voice, yet they can never never quite make it perfect. Bards, on the other hand, have such a great understanding of pitch and tone and have such excellent control of their voice that they can imitate any voice they have heard flawlessly.
Limit: Art of the Bard

C RANK

Song of Mana
Rank: "C" (30 TP)
Skill: Ninjutsu, Vocal
Effect: Aids in Chakra Regeneration
Special: Singing
Drawback: Affects allies and enemies.
Description: The bard sings a song of inspiration that extends in a ten meter radius with the user at the center. The song lasts for three posts and for each post those in the area will recover a D rank worth of chakra, the caster excluded.
Limit: Art of the Bard. 'Singing'.


Kyokugoma

D RANK

Basic Yoyo Style Knowledge
Rank: D Rank (10 TP)
Skill: --
Effect: Allows the user to undergo learning in Kyokugoma
Special: --
Drawback: --
Description: A prerequisite for each of the five styles of using a Yoyo. Before one can even consider learning the specialized tricks, they must learn the basics. Such tricks include the Sleeper, Trapeze, Round the World, and so forth.
Limit: Must be Kyokugoma

Unending Sleep
Rank: D Rank (10 TP)
Skill: Ninjutsu/Supplemental
Effect: Allows near infinite Sleepers with the Yoyo
Special: Handseals
Drawback: Constant drain of an E rank per post whilst in use
Description: By using chakra to stream down the string and excite the bearing, it makes the Yoyo spin faster. Provided the Yoyo doesn't begin to burn up from friction, the Yoyo itself can continue to spin endlessly.
Limit:Must be Kyokugoma, 4A style excluded.

Friction Grip
Rank: D Rank
Skill: Supplemental
Effect: Allows the yoyo to 'stick' to surfaces
Special: Handseals
Drawback: Constant drain of an E rank per post whilst in use, doesn't work against shiny / slippery surfaces
Description: By using chakra to stream down the string and excite the bearing, it makes the Yoyo spin faster. During this spinning the amount of friction builds up allowing the yoyo to grip a surface. In addition to this, Friction grip also creates a large amount of heat due to the increased rotation of the yoyo.
Limit:Must be Kyokugoma

Walked by the Dog
Rank: D Rank
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Allows the Yoyo to propel the user up a wall
Special: Handseals
Drawback: Constant drain of a D rank per post whilst in use, can only go straight, doesn't work on slippery surfaces
Description: By using Unending Sleep on a Yoyo when launched against the wall, the user can use it to travel up to 30 meters in a straight line before having to be recast.
Limit: Must know Unending Sleep, Must know Friction Grip

Finger Gauntlets
Rank: D Rank
Skill: TaiJutsu/Supplemental
Effect: Allows the user to use Ninja Wire as String.
Special: --
Drawback: --
Description: User knows how to wrap their finger in such a way so that the Ninja wire won't harm their finger. It's very tricky but with some improvised materials the user can pad their finger so that it will supplement this technique. Improvised material can range from simple ninja tape, a bit of cloth, hand wrappings, anything that is of flexible material that can go around the finger without inhabiting it. After that is done user wraps the Ninja wire and ties a knot so that its loose enough yet tight enough to be functional.
Limit: Must be Kyokugoma.

String Equip/Un-Equip
Rank: D rank
Skill: Taijutsu/Supplemental
Effect: Able to equip or un-equip a Yo-yo string.
Special: --
Drawback:--
Description: The user can take their thumb and slip a string loop over a finger, or slip a loop off a finger without the hassle of using more than one movement to do so. Used for the quick exchange of Yo-yo’s or to free up the hand for other tasks. One way to learn this is put a rubber band over the thumb and pinky so that the rubber stretches over the back of the hand. Then the user must use that hand to take the rubber band off using only that hands thumb.
Limit: Must be Kyokugoma.

Yo-yo Roundhouse
Rank: D rank
Skill: Taijutsu.
Effect: Sends the Yo-yo arching 180 degrees around the user Horizontally (considered a strike).
Special: --
Drawback: Range is limited to string used.
Description: Like a how a baseball player throws a ball from the side, a Yo-yo artist can send their Yo-yo in an arch starting from the Yo-yo wielded side of their body and retrieving it form the other in a rough 180 arch in front of them. Though it is only a rough 180 degrees because the retrieval needs a line of sight back to the hand to prevent tangling with the users body.
Limit: Must know Basic Yoyo Knowledge. Must know Unending Sleep.


The Art of Throwing

---

Capoeira

---

---

Traits

Stalker Resilience
Rank: "C"
Skill: Combat Trait
Effect: Through their upbringing the user has learned how to observe a target and strike with the most amount of damage.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Through careful observation the user can strike harder in critical strikes. For every round the user observes a target without attacking, the user learns how the target moves and searches for weaknesses (maximum 10 round observing). After the 3rd round the user learns how to attack within the kinks of armour, bypassing Hardness. Every round of Observing the user gains +6 to Attack Damage when they hit with a Critical strike. Observation only applies to the first attack. Afterwards the user will have to observe for at least a full round again. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.

Hidden Hand
Rank: "C"
Skill: Combat Trait
Effect: User's concealed weapons strike fast and true.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: User gains a +5 trait bonus on Sleight of Hand checks made to conceal light weapons and a +5 Armour Points in Attack Damage when making an attack with a light weapon during a surprise attack. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.

Mirror Mind
Rank: "B"
Skill: Chakra Trait
Effect: The user's mind tries to force a mental effect to be shared.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A user who spent their lives under the thumb of mental tyranny has learned how to oppose those shackles. Their mind becomes as dangerous as a trap. Once per day per Class Level, when the user is forced to roll a save against a mind-affecting effect with a rank equal or lower than their class level (D ranks as a D class, C ranks and below as a C class, etc), the user can make their foe suffer the same roll. When this ability is triggered, the original performer must make a save against their own mind-affecting effect equal in difficulty as the save the user endured. If the mind-affecting effect gives a person total control over their victim, and both sides fail their saves, the mind-affecting effect is cancelled both ways. This trait replaces 2 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 2 Freebies.

Contortionist
Rank: "C"
Skill: Combat Trait
Effect: The user is double-jointed can squeeze their body through spaces most people cannot.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: User can attempt to squeeze through tight spaces and out of cuffs by dislocating their bones, moving their body and relocating their bones again. This grants them a +20 trait bonus to Escape Artist. To do this, the user must spend a round attempting to squeeze through the space or out of the cuffs, and a second round putting their bones back into place. If they do not take the time to put their bones back in place, they are considered Exhausted. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.

Talented
Rank: "C"
Skill: Social Trait
Effect: User is a virtuoso musician, actor, or storyteller.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: User gains a +5 trait bonus on checks with a single Musical Instrument, Artisan and Performing Arts, or Fortune Telling skill, and gain a +1 per die roll when learning the skill. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.

[ᖫᖭØMNÏᖫᖭ]

Hello Risan,

Solid submission here, and you are well on your way to getting this form cleared, and accepted. However before I can grant you the 1/3, I need you to adjust some minor mishaps for me alright?

Checklist Down Below:

Main Issue to be Fixed for Completion

Okay so the main and only real mistake is your techniques and freebies will need to be adjusted.

-You're missing the Pattern Perception which is required along side the Phantasm Perception in order for this character to use the Enchantment Genjutsu tree. Your freebies do check out, however because of this issue; you will have to adjust them to accommodate the perception you are missing.

(My suggestion would be to swap out one of the Ninjutsu Releases you are wanting to start with, and replace it with the Pattern Perception technique instead. Mainly because you can always train the ninjutsu releases you want afterwards just like everything else.)

Minor Issue to be fixed for Completion
-Your TP is spent correctly, however you must add the actual number of TP the technique costs you near each one. (Just put the number above its corresponding technique in parenthesis.)

-Similar to the techniques its important that you post the actual traits themselves. I know you have them listed, but unfortunately I still have to have you add that. You can do this in a separate post within this thread for easy organizing.

Notes

-Everything else is good and wonderful. I enjoyed reading about the personality and so on.

-Your allowance spending has been accolated as follows:
Primary: 7,000 ryo out of 12,000 spent
Secondary: 27,000 ryo out of 30,000 spent
Apparel: 7,000 ryo out of 8,000 spent

---

Grade Summary:

- Missing the Pattern Perception
- Suggested to swap one of the freebies used on releases out for the Pattern Genjutsu instead; in order to keep the TP Allowance spent the same way.
- Add the number of TP needed for each technique.
- Add the actual Traits themselves to your bio submission form.
- 1/3 from me, Pending until changes are made.

(If all this word lasagna confused you I apologize ahead of time. Please don't be afraid to ask questions if necessary.)

[Risan]

Thank you! The only thing your word lasagna made me was hungry Hopefully I got to all your edits.

[ᖫᖭØMNÏᖫᖭ]

Yes satisfactory work.

1/3

[Cadoc]

2/3

[👺 Usiel]

3.3