Eye For Improvement(grading Requested)

[Seito Uchiha]

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A warm summer day, with a slight breeze in the air. Grass reaching of about one foot tall covered the area. As a river flowed through the center. Almost one hundred feet a waterfall crashed down onto the water like the sound of thunder.

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Sakio, arrives at his desired training area. Closing his eyes, he thought to himself 'Well, i want to become strong don't i?...and i also and bored...i guess i can use this to pass time by.' As he sighed. Still with his eyes closed he began to concentrate, soon after he quickly opened his eyes revealing the 1 staage of the Sharingan.

Still, not really motivated at all be began to create a kunai trap in which fires kunai directly at him. Soon after created this Sakio begins to fire kunai at himself dodge the kunai as they came. 30 mins. went by as sweat rolled down his face kunai's flying every 10 seconds. Soon he quickly ran up to the trap and destroyes it. Soon his Sharingan disappears as he sat down breathing hard and tired.'Man! this would be much easier if i had a partner to train with me' he thoght to himelf. "Training alone is much more boring." he said sighing laying back into the grass closing his eyes making an imprint in it.

[Seito Uchiha]

Bored, Sakio felt no more need to waste time resting standing u p he pated his butt to pat off some dirt. 'I guess i'll have to use the clone jutsu' he thought to himself. Soon after he creates a clone and flips backwards and pulls out a kunai. "Ok! You know what to do" he said. Soon the clone begins to attack Sakio using a kunai attempting to hit him. As Sakio started to be backed into a coner he revealed his sharingan block every singal on of the clones attack.

Feeling pleased with the results he continued hours went by as the sun began to set and a strong breeze came over them.

The clone throws the kunai at Sakio. Having still using the Sharingan he used his kunai to deflect the kunai into the air quckly he jumped into the air retrieving the kunai; moments later he threw the kunai at the clone sending the clone into smokes.

Sweat rolled down his face as he returned his eyes to normal start. Breathing hard he stubbled home having used up all of his chakra. He was very pleased of himself as he walked into his room and laid on his bed. 'what a day...what a day indeed' he said to himself slowly faling asleep.

[Seito Uchiha]

It was early in the morning as the Sun shined through a window dirrectly into Sakio's face. As hi squenced he rolled out of bed. "Geez, and i was having a nice nap" he said mumbling as headed for the restroom. After he left the bathroom he quickly put on a freas uniform. 'time to keep training' he sad to himself placing his forehead protector on the left upper arm.

Grabbing a piece of toast and a jouce box he walkd out the door. With the toast in his mouth he noticed a man looking to be the ageof about 18 or 10 running through the area. AS the man ran he noticed a forhead protector with the emblem of the Star village. Seeing as this was strikly no allowed he quickly drank his juice box and dropped his toast as he began to pursue the man. "Hey! Stop!" said Sakio not afraid. THe man glances back and runs to the forest, with Sakio following closely behind. As they reached a clearing Sakio quickly uses Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique) appearing infront of the man.

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Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique)
Type: D-rank, Supplementary
Users: Hatake Kakashi, Gaara, etc.
A high-speed movement technique. It is described as 'appearing with the wind and disappearing like the wind.' It's a very basic jutsu and it appears that most shinobi above Genin-rank know it.
Using chakra to activate the body, the user is able to move from one point to another with extreme speeds. This super-fast movement is almost impossible to see with the naked eye. To a normal person, it would seem as if the user has teleported. The amount of Chakra used depends on the distance and elevation between the user and the destination.
Among the many users and villages, various variations of Shunshin no Jutsu exist. Gaara, for instance, uses the so-called "Suna-Shunshin" (, "Sand Body Flicker"), which uses sand to cover the user's movement. Other varieties include "Kiri-Shunshin" (, "Mist Body Flicker"), "Mizu-Shunshin" (, "Water Body Flicker"), and "Konoha-Shunshin" (??, "Tree Leaf Body Flicker").
Uchiha Shisui, one of the most talented Uchiha, was feared as Shunshin no Shisui (Shisui of the Body Flicker). This is probably a reference to this jutsu.
Level: 6
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Pulling a kunai Sakio say "Hold it right there! Do you know your not allowed to be here come now so i may report you to an ANBU!" he said in a firm voice. The stood with a grin on his face starring at Sakio "Just who the hell you think you are" the man said. "None of your concern. The concern is your entering this country knowing it's not legal" he said in a firm voice. "I'll ask one mroe time boy! whats your name?" the man said aggrivated. "Fine. Uchiha Sakio." Sakio said with un-motivated look on his face. "Janzu Mara." said the man in an polite voice. "I don't care about your name. Now come with me!" said Sakio going ito a fighting stance with his kunai. "What'd you say?! As if i'd come with you i can beat beaten by a boy what are you genin; i'm chuunin!" as he pulled out a kunai. "Very well." As Sakio charged at him not motivated whtsoever. Janzu quickly jumps into the air and throws the kunai at Sakio. Sakio evades the attack my backliping. Janzu land on the ground and begins to preform the Seneijashu (Hidden Shadow Snake Hand). Noticing this Sakio quickly uses sharigan to evade and returns to normal not enabling Janzu to notice his move. 'Wow the kids gots some moves' Janzu though to himself as he continued to use Seneijashu (Hidden Shadow Snake Hand) constantly. "Stay still boy!!" Janzu said pissed that he couldn't land a hit. Sakio secretly kep't preforming the Sharingan quickly. an hour went by as both of them began to slow down with Janzu having to use the same move as many times as he did and same for Sakio. Sweat rolled down both thier faces. When Sakio grins your finished now said Sakio. Preforming th handseals he uses Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique. Caught off guard Janzu was unable to evade.
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Katon: Gokakyu no Jutsu (Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique)
Type: C-rank, Offensive, Close range (0-5m)
Users: Uchiha Sasuke, Uchiha Fugaku, Uchiha Obito, Uchiha Itachi, etc.
Utilising a high amount of chakra, the user creates a large ball of flame. When an Uchiha clan member masters this technique he/she is recognized as an adult.
Level: 30

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Janzu screamed in pain as he feel to his knees from the burns. Using Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique) once more Sakio appeared behind him pulling out his sword and pointing it at the man's head. "Well, i held back so you shouldn't die fro those buns, aslo don't judge shinobi by rank skills is what makes a shinobi strong not rank!" he sai calmly
Janzu still screamed in pain as he was reluctant to say anything to him as he was ashamed he lost to a boy. Using clone jutsu he sent his clone out to go to ANBu forces and report this.

10 mins went by as five ANBU rushed in and question Sakio of what happened. They soon tied Janzu up and ran off somwhere. "I wonder where there taking him" said Sakio. 'hah i worked up alittle sweat i guess we can call that training for today' walking home with a pround grin on his face.

[Seito Uchiha]

As he approached his door, he noticed 2 other man withthe same Star Emblem on thier forehead. 'god...not again' he said with an unhappy look on his face. Chasing after them it began to get dark as still hadn't noticed him. As the shinobi looking to be in thier teens looked back they quickly began to speed up. Though Sakip had sweat running down his face he wasn't tired as still kep't the even ditance from them. When Sakio got to a clearing in a patch of the forst he quickly gotten close and used Body Flicker Technique.

As they stopped calmly they were shocked when Sakio appeared. "Who, are you?!" said one of the Star Shinboi. "hmm, second time today somone asked me that now come with me without a fight" sakio said hold onto the handle of his sword. "Were no here to fight, were looking for our sensei." they said in sync. "You mean that fool Janzu, well if that's him he already having a alittle chat with the ANBU" He said with an angry face. "What! couldn't be he's a chunnin..." said one of them. "Must've been a jounin that beat him" saidd the other. "No it was me, Sakio of the land of waterfall" sakip said in an upset voice relizing that fool Janzu taught them that. "Kima" said on of them. "Ganju" said the other. "Names are of not important to me." Sakio still holding a firm look. "I'm not in the mood for chasing you so just come with me" he said walking towards the boys. "hmph what are you genin, so your lies won't full use you couldn't possibly beat Janzu we just barely beat him last time it took both of us at were almost Chuunin class" Kima said pulling out 6 shuriken. "Ganju, we can't be caught were gonna have to force our way out." said Kima. "right" says Ganju as they whispered to another. "Stop the babling and come with me" as he continued to walk towards them with his hand still on hand on sword. "do-don't come any closer" as he threw the shuriken. Sakio noticed him do this he quickly using sharingan and followed up with Body Flicker Technique. Appearing behind them. "where'd he go?" says Ganju. Kima slowly looks in the coner of eyes notices Sakio had hi sword up to Ganju's back. "Look out! Ganj behind you!" says Kima. Ganju quickly dives toward and rolls facing Sakio when his eyes suddenly looked as if he was looking at a ghost "What are you and what's with your eyes" Ganju said. Kima quickly runs towards Ganju ans turns around. "I thought i noticed it before, your of the Uchiha clan i know about you being able to dodge moves." says Kima. "There still much to learn." Sakio said he returned his sword to his hilt. Ganju quickly uses Chakra Absorption Technique. as stands up.
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Chakura Kyuin Jutsu (Chakra Absorption Technique)
Type: C-Rank, probably: Supplementary, Short range (0-5m)
Users: Akado Yoroi
The user is able to drain chakra not only from touch from the palm, but also the palm being within close vicinity with the opponent. Mainly used in close combat and hand to hand fighting.
Level: 30
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"I don't know anything about this Uch---Uchiha clan thing but your going down i'll take every bit of your remaining chakra." Ganju said running towards Sakio. "Ganju wait! you can't beat him with that move!" said Kima hoping for him to stop. 'what an idot' Sakio thought to himself. As he appoached he pulls his sword out once more. Ganju laughes as he's 3 feet away running full speed at Sakio. Ganju grabs his arm. "What!? not chakra!" as Sakip turned into smokes revealing it wasa just a clone. Sakio uses Body Flicker Technique and appears behind him and hits him in the back of the head with the bottom part of his handle; knocking Ganju out. "What...what are you?! What have you done to Ganju?!" says Kima beginning to shake. " Nothing more than a shinobi doing his job." says Sakio. "It...it can't end this way." Kima said. Kima, begins to charge at Sakio with a kunai....losing himself in fear. Sakio uses Kiri Gakure no Jutsu (Hiding Mist Technique)
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Kiri Gakure no Jutsu (Hiding Mist Technique)
Type: D-rank, Supplementary
Users: Momochi Zabuza, Kurosuki Raiga
This jutsu envelops the surrounding area in a dense mist, causing anyone within it to lose the advantage of sight.
Level: 15
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Stoping Kima looked around "Where are you!?" says Sakio. "infront of you" replies Sakio. With Kima's head turned to thee left he turned to thre front at his eyes get big as a fist came towards him hitting him in the face and knocking him out. As the mist subsided Sakio once more sent a clone to the anbu base, and once more 5 Anbu arrived. "My god sakio....your going to put us out of a job...keep it up" says one ANBU as they quickly pick them both up and disappear with amazing speed.

Sakio, fell to his knees breathing hard and sweating as the sharingan disappeared. 'man not looking tired his hard.' he thought to himself stumbling home. 'that's enough training for awhile' he said to himself. For it was around 3am when he arrived home.


'Training over' hope i did alright (Not the best at RPing my first time trying)

[petalsofpain]

11 + 2 TP

[Seito Uchiha]

Sakio was tired as he arrived home stubbling into his bed. 'What a day' he thought to himself some to be falling alseep.

As the sun began to rise Sakios eyes rattled as they began to open. As soon as he realized he was awake he ran to the bathroom 5 mins past as he game out with a relieved look on his face. "heh hope i don't get the same suprise i did yesterday" he said heading off. He felt in heart this would be the day he achieved a new level of power. As he rarely smiled he did as he was filled with a sudden jolt of energy. When he arrived at the outskirts of town he noticed a building on fire. He stopped and ran over to check it out. There was screaming of multiple women as the building burned two shinbo were already there attempting to use water jutsu to put out the fire. Sakio noticed a women fell to her knees as they yelled my child! Without thinking Sakio ran into the building the smoke was too dense for Sakio to see. Sakio decided he's use Sharingan, having not seen the child inthe frst room he began to Body Flicker room to room till he arrived in a room with a young boy seeming to be uncountous he then runs in picks the boy and Body flickers to th outsige placing the boy about 100 feet away from the building. The boy laid motionless as a medical nin came to the scene. Sakio saw as the chakra in the boy stopped moving and he medical-nin pronounced the boy dead. Sakio asked what caused this fire and the women replied mercenary of a shinobi by the name of Fang" the lady said wth tears rolling down her face. "Do you know where thier headed?" Sakio said in a rushing voice. "To there base outside of town near the big waterfall...but it's not safe!" she said though Sakio already headed off by the word big waterfall; for there was only one big waterfall.

Still using his sharingan he arrives to find two guards guarding a tent. Sakio manages to use body flicker to arrive behind him with them noticing them he quickly chops them in the neck and drag them off behind a near by bush. 'These are the guys alright' he thought to himself using Sharingan to look at them trough the thin layer of tent. Seeing this as a perfect way to return the gift he jumps about 25 feet away. Preforming the nessesary hand seals he them preforms Katon: Gokakyu no Jutsu (Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique) sendin the tent to flames.

Katon: Gokakyu no Jutsu (Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique)
Type: C-rank, Offensive, Close range (0-5m)
Users: Uchiha Sasuke, Uchiha Fugaku, Uchiha Obito, Uchiha Itachi, etc.
Utilising a high amount of chakra, the user creates a large ball of flame. When an Uchiha clan member masters this technique he/she is recognized as an adult.
Level: 30

The tent went to flames as it began to fall apart crashing to the ground 4 men ran around screaming running around because they were on fire they eventually found the waterfall and cooled off and watched Sakio, the leader still stood shirt on fire. He had a eye back on his right eye with a scar on his left cheek he was big about 6'4". Sakio was astonished by the mans enduribility. the man replies "heh the same jutsu i did to that build" "A boy died because of you!" Sakio said pulling the sword from his sheeth. "Just a boy....i must be losing my touch...i was aiming for everyone there" he said grining. "What did you say?!" Sakio said charging the man with his sword, theman then Body flickers and appears behind Sakio. "I know your uchiha by those eyes...you havn't even reached 2nd stage...how can you exspect to beat me?!" the man said standing behind Sakio. "by doing this" he said. Using Kiri Gakure no Jutsu (Hiding Mist Technique). "heh, what a cheap trick" said the man

Kiri Gakure no Jutsu (Hiding Mist Technique)
Type: D-rank, Supplementary
Users: Momochi Zabuza, Kurosuki Raiga
This jutsu envelops the surrounding area in a dense mist, causing anyone within it to lose the advantage of sight.
Level: 15

Sakio then throws 2 kunai hiting the man in the back. 'Got him' Sakio thought to himself. The man didn't look in pain at all as pulled the kunais from his back. The man then yells "First Gate open" as his chakra somhow became storonger and then he follows up with the words "Second gate open: "energy gate" as his chakra began almost overwhelming in Sakio's eyes. With Sakio's loosing focus the fog cleared. "There you are!" he said with alomsot no color in eyes. He then uses body flicker and appears behind Sakio kicking him in the side rolling 20 feet across the ground; blood came up as Sakio slowely stood back up. He then came again with the same attack repeatedly kicking him in the side as more blood came from Sakio "heh, won't even put up a fight..." the man said as Sakio slowly got up. The man comes in for anothr kick Sakio them stopped the kick with his forearm blocking it. 'Whats this is moves are slower' Sakio thought to himself as he kep't blocking every attack that was attempting to hit him. The man stopped kicked and says "What's this you were hoding back?!" "No, i've been doing my best your the one slowing down" Sakio said. "You means you havn't noticed it?!" the man said laughing. "Noticed what?!" Sakio said. "You're eyes are redder meaning you've learned the second stage didn't you relize that when my moves seemed slow?!" the man replied as if Sakio was stupid. 'That explains alot...' Sakio thought to himself. "Your finished" Sakio said Kiri Gakure no Jutsu (Hiding Mist Technique)

Kiri Gakure no Jutsu (Hiding Mist Technique)
Type: D-rank, Supplementary
Users: Momochi Zabuza, Kurosuki Raiga
This jutsu envelops the surrounding area in a dense mist, causing anyone within it to lose the advantage of sight.
Level: 15

'Not this again...' the man thought to himself. "I'm going to end this now!" Sakio said. HE throws 4 Kunais with explosive tags attached to them. 'heh doesn't he know these arn't going to kill me' the man thought to himself pulling out one as his eyes big as he examined the kunai. "that bas--" the man said as they exploded. When the smoke cleared there was nothing in sight. Sakio then ties up the leaders mecenarys and escorted them back to to the anbu. 'heh i guess this is the training i needed after all' Saki said to himself running to a hill and watched as the sun set.

(Finnaly Done for realz)

[Seito Uchiha]

As the sun reached it peak of the sunset he hurrys off home. before going to be he sat at the edge of his bed thinking of when his parents would return, he concluded no time soon as he took of his forehead protector of his left shoulder and laid in his bed after sitting his ninja tools on his table. 'Yeah, i guess i have somthing to show them when they come back' he thought to himself not knowing he'd fallen to sleep.

Sakio, didn't wake up with a beutiful sun shine this morning but instead awoke to a rain storm, after sitting for a minute he hurrys to the bathroom in his usual routien. He sat looking out the window thinking of wheter he should keep training his sharingan. Well, i want to master it and i promise myself to train almost everyday sun shine or not he'd said to himself putting his forehead protector on his left shoulder. Retriving his ninja tools he headed out to train, the harsh wnds and rain consumed him as his teeth chattered. 'Was this a good idea ?' he thought to himself half way to the new training spot near the cliff. Thunder shook the ground as lighting lit the sky with none to be found outside but a few shinobi on patroll. The closer he got the training area the worse the weather seemed to be. Hail began to fall as he entered his area of choice.

Looking up Sakio noticed a man holding two swords above his head. Suddenly a lighting bolt arrose from the sword into the sky as the man chanted in another language. "He-Hey What are you doing?!" Sakio says holding his left hand above his head somwhat to shield his eyes. The man looked down curiously as he slowly lowered his swords the weather stopped. The man was wearing a caped hood not revealing his face. As the sun began to shine again Sakio noticed somthing as a breeze flew over his cape moved along with it revealing the man's forhead protector. 'Cloud emblem?' Sakio said squinting his eyes. "What are you doing here?!" Sakio said with his hand on the hilt of his sword(hilt: the handle of a sword) The man stares with no answer. Sakio gritted his teeth as he felt he was beig dis-respected. Sakio then preformed the nessesary handsigns for Katon: Gokakyu no Jutsu (Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique)

Katon: Gokakyu no Jutsu (Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique)
Type: C-rank, Offensive, Close range (0-5m)
Users: Uchiha Sasuke, Uchiha Fugaku, Uchiha Obito, Uchiha Itachi, etc.
Utilising a high amount of chakra, the user creates a large ball of flame. When an Uchiha clan member masters this technique he/she is recognized as an adult.
Level: 30

As the flames began to release from Sakio's mouth the man began to create a lighting like sphere above his head. Sakio didn't notice this as he went all out of the move. As move moves collide a huge red lighting flash comsumed the place. The light being so intense he had to cover his eys with his hand. As the light eventually disappeared so did the man. Sakio seearched for hours with no trace the man even existed. Soon Sakio gave up and resumed his training.

Sakio creates 10 basic clones of himself and orders them to attack as he fought them with sharingan. The clones attacked using Katon, body flicker, even explosive tags...Sakio still prevailed hadle 4 waves of the clones.( 4 Waves mean 10 x 4 = 40clones) Seeing the clones were no match for him he decided to test his sharingan detection skills aking one his old academy friends to set traps for him he headed into the forest not know what to exspect. Trees attempted to fall upon, him kunais attempted to cutt him, pot holes attempted to consume him, and senbon attempted to drug him (drugs used on tip to make him fall asleep)and even through it all Sakio prevailed. He continued the same thing 40 clones then traps tilll he was hit by 2 kunais which hit him in the arm and leg. Sakio was quickly rushed to the hospital where he was healed by a medic. 'Guess i should've only put non-lethal weapons there...but then again it wouldn't be as realistic' he thought to himself being escorted home and told not train anymore today. Sakio then sat around his house most the day concentrating his chakra towards conserving it.