~ A test of potential part 2~ (closed Nagaku)

[~KARO~]

Arena

This is a spar between Karo & Nagaku, Toda!!

I can post first or you can it doesn't matter to me.

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The trees of the forest hung overhead, the shinobi walking through over the land with his hands shoved in his pockets, a yawn being stifled as he tried to keep his mouth closed. In a few moments he would stop, standing against a tree as he closed his eyes, sniffing.

[~KARO~]

^{Standing on top of a nearby tree Karo was on a scouting mission as the leafs fall down from off of the trees he would then stop as he notices a unknown shinobi in the mix as he stops to investigate. Holding the snake hand seal he would move threw out the forest making no sound as he makes sure that he touches nothing with his hands. He would stop a the tree as he touches the bark from it as it leaves a yellow mark on the tree, he would then stand up as the leaves fall from out of the tree onto the shinobi's head as he starts to talk to him.}

~So your having fun state your name. Please.~

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[ note; use comma's a bit more often- without them, your sentences sound as if they are run on; and looks and sounds rather bad. Make sure to spell check afterwards, also.

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Multi-colored occuli fell upon the boys features, the crimson right eye staring at him with a slight dulled gaze, his expression matching such carelessness. Obviously, he wasn't interested in making the first move; to which he would turn his body towards the youngster, stretching his body gracefully. Lips parted in a yawn, and he held his arms loosely at his sides, smirking.

"It's rude to ask someones name without first giving your own."

[~KARO~]

[Once you look at it, it does look alittle messy]

Looking down upon my opponent I would notice his body language, he looked like he didn't care much for me. I would notice a smirk that wiped his face as if he was toying with me as he asked for my name. Staying upon the tree I would give my name despite my rude behavior.

~ My name is Karo Shinbon. Your? ~

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[ lose the first person. Also, don't hesitate to bulk your posts up with a little description. The size you have is good for a lazy person like myself, but if you enjoy roleplaying don't be afraid to add descriptions of the surrounding area, the actions your character makes, and his current emotions. Example:

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Nagaku leaned forward a bit, his right hand moving to slide through the dark strands of blue upon his head, his eyes closing whilst lips pursed tightly together. Really, he had become quite amused by the characters around him- some tended to be quite the show, however none really made an encore with him. Multi-colored iris opened to glance upwards towards the youth, a hand sliding into his shirt to withdraw a pack of cigarettes, placing the edge within his mouth slightly as he lit it, inhaling the smokes fumes.

A soft exhale would release the smoke in a slight wave of tobacco smoke, the random chirping of the birds within the forest making this by far the noisiest he had ever been into, the sun above head showing it was nearly noon. The sound of the rushing water nearby from the waterfall colliding over the rocks beneathe it gave a soothing tune, however; a white t-shirt topped by a long sleeved blue shirt wavered slightly in the passing breeze, the back of his left hand pressing against his hip as he nodded his head in thought.

"Nagaku."

The simple reply as the amekage lifted his right hand, the cigarette being placed between the fingers of his index and middle finger horizontally, his hand falling to his side as the cancerous stick also removed, the ashes falling upon the ground beside him as he gave a slight smokers cough. Oh yea- his lungs sucked badly.

[~KARO~]

[WoW!!!]

Karo watched as the shinobi brushed the strands of his blue hair, as he looked almost calm to say the least. He watched as the shinobi took out the most dangerous weapon of all as he lighted it up within the contents of his mouth. The burns of the cigarette would light up the face of the shinobi as the cloud of smoke surrounded his face, the smell would be tremendous. The smell would surround him as the bird flew off into the sky reaching for cleaner air. The name Nagaku would ring in his ears like a church bell ringing around a small village. Karo would give off a small sharp smirk the covered only the right side of his face as he tells the shinobi what was on his mind.

~If I don't get to you that cigarette will. My name is Karo. ~

Placing my hand deep within my right pouch Karo would attempt to take out three kunai. Feeling the holes at the bottom of the kunai Karo would take each one as he holds them tightly as he makes sure that his grip does not become loose, he would then leap to the other tree as throws the kunai at Nagaku trying to hit him in three places. The first kunai would head straight for Nagaku's head as the whistles from the air blow along with the speed of the deadly kunai. The second kunai would shine as it makes a course for Nagaku's chest as it twinkles like the sun. The last kunai would find itself heading for the legs of Nagaku as it burns threw the sky landing on the ground right by Nagaku's feet.

Karo would land on the branch of another as he lands with both of his hands meeting and making seals. Not letting his guard down he would make sure that his opponent is well in his sight as he looks on to see what would happen next.

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[ don't put excess description, however. The need of knowing how each and every kunai sounds is a bit unneeded xD; Also, when finished your posts, reread then before posting them up to make sure they make sense in your head. Refrain from using 'he' too much, don't be afraid to use other terms. Or, simply don't use one at all. Once using the characters name in the previous post, it would just make sense to know that th next posts would be merely following what the character spoken of is doing, until the mention of another person, of course.

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Nagaku frowned, head tilting to the side as he allowed the first to fly past him, his left index finger lifting to catch the next kunai through it's loop at the end of its hilt. He smiled softly, ignoring the third in which was at his feet, however making sure no explosion tag was upon it's hilt. A flick, and the kunai upon his left index finger would change it's direction- gripping between the hand of the shinobi as he would flick it towards the male whom was creating handseals. Such would only be a distraction as Naga jumped backwards, creating handseals of his own after placing the cigarette back against his lips.

[~KARO~]

[Alright. Lets see how this will be.]

Karo would notice that the shinobi had made the kunai come right back to him aiming for his head, slipping out a kunai he would throw it at the kunai heading for him as it Rica shade out of his way. A frown would wipe his face as he jumps over to the other tree just incase of a secret attack following the kunai attack, he would then lose focus of the shinobi. Landing on the tree about eastward of his position he would land with one hand up against the tree keeping his balance. Looking up he would activate the exploding tag that he left when he was on the tree above his opponent’s head as the tree exploded. A burst of fire would glow across the forest as Karo watched as the wind blows his hair in the opposite direction of Karo. Wasting no time he would use some simple hand seals as two ice clones appear beside him.

The clones appeared fast and swift to the left and the right of him as the cold feeling rushed threw his body just by standing next to them. One of the clones would rush to the rubble of the fallen tree as looked on to see was there any evidence of the shinobi’s body. Back at the tree Karo would get down on one knee as he forms the Tiger hand seal as his other clone looks over him like a watchdog. Karo would watch the clone to make sure that he sees ever detail of the clone’s movements and not letting the smallest thing past his sight.

~I know he is still alive. ~