Kamizuru Yasuo; the wasp lord ~ Edited

[.::Yasuo::.]

Name: Kamizuru Yasuo
Age: 18
Height: 5' 10''
Weight: 158
Gender: Male
Alignment: True Neutral
Birth Country: Earth
Village: Stone
Special:

Ninjutsu Master
--Water Release
--Earth Release
--Wind Release
--Fire Release*
-Lightning Release*
--Wood Release*
--Sand Release*
--Ice Release*




Grandmaster(x2)
--Kamizuru Clan Mastery
--Bug Master

ANBU*
--Falcon Division


Note: All items marked with (*) are projected for the future.

Secondary Weapons:

Ten Handle-less Kunai: 5 Slots
Twenty Exploding Tags: 5 Slots
Five Kunai: 5 Slots

Primary Weapon: --

Personality:

Yasuo is a simple man. Care-free, laid back(some may even go so far as to say he's lazy), and even a little bit of a closet pervert, though he'll never admit to that. He has a booming laugh and a contagious smile that one can't help but return. He's almost always upbeat and he's very easily excited, which could be either good news, or bad news depending on the situation. He's respectful, in his own special way, to both his superiors and the women of the Kamizuru clan. All in all, he's a bit of a goof ball.

But this joyful, goofy man is also a master deceiver. His irresistible smile never reaches his eyes, which are cold, calculating, and critical. In any given situation, he evaluates the possible courses of action and takes the one he feels will be most to his benefit, regardless of the consequences to others. After all, self-preservation is paramount, isn't it? As is gaining power beyond anyone else.

Appearance:

Underneath the traditional robe and cowl of Kamizuru males, Yasuo typically wears loose loose fitting pants of various colors, always in dark shades, held up by a piece of tan colored rope. His upper torso is almost always bare(save for the robe, of course), revealing a slim, yet chiseled, physique. His feet are also void of clothing. On his right shoulder-blade is a small series of birthmarks that bear a strong resemblance to a wasps nest.

His eyes are bright blue in color, and ringed by a navy outline. His hair, which is medium in length, is just one shade away from platinum blond. His face, like his body, is thin yet strong. He's also relatively handsome.

Bloodlimit: N/A
NinJutsu Techniques:

Freebies

Doton no Jutsu (Earth Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Earth. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Earth Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

Fuuton no Jutsu (Wind Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Wind. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Wind Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

Suiton no Jutsu (Water Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Water. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Water Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

Other Techniques

Bī Kontorōru (Bee Control)
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: A technique that allows the user to control bees within areas capable of controling.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: This allows the user the control the Bees in the use for their techniques. All Bees have abilities as that of normal bees.
Limit: Kamizuru Clan

Bee Surgery
Rank: B
Effects: Forms a hive of bees within the recipient's body, giving them access to the jutsus of the Kamizuru clan.
Special: ---
Description: This ritual is easy to perform, but difficult given the pain. First, the surgeon will make the incision in any area on the recipient's body. It must be fairly large and easily accessible. Once this is complete, the Kamizuru will take the bees and literally thrust them into the recipient's body. Without proper stability, the bees will sting and possibly kill the recipient. However, the role of the first medic is to synchronize the chakra flow of the recipient's body, calming the bees and allowing them to live inside the body without killing the recipient. The second medic will use their skills to alter the body structure of the recipient, creating the hive-like interior. This is the most difficult part of the procedure, and may require the help of the first medic. If all is done correctly, the bees will begin to multiply, and a full colony will be formed in 3 days.
Drawback: The process requires three hours to complete. If performed improperly, the bees may sting and kill the recipient. If starting out with, takes up 1 jutsu slot for Kamizuru clan members, 3 for non-clan members.
Placement Requirements: Several mating Kamizuru bees, 2 medics B-rank or higher, 1 surgeon willing to perform the operation, 1 Kamizuru member 16 or older.
Cost: 25,000 Ryo if not starting out with.

Dekiagari Hana (Ready Flower)
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user calls bees from the surrounding area to him.
Special: Tiger, Boar, Horse
Drawback: Does not work in environments without bees.
Description: The user forms the hand seals, creating a sweet, enticing scent with their chakra that will bring forth bees surrounding area to meet the user.
Limit: Kamizuru Clan, Must have Bī Kontorōru (Bee Control)

Kuchiyose: Kyojin Suzumebachi (Summoning Technique: Giant Hornet)
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user summons a giant hornet, which expels a large blast of wax from it’s mouth.
Special: Tiger, Ram, Monkey, Boar, Tiger
Drawback: Consumes a large amount of chakra
Description: The user forms the hand seals, summoning a giant hornet. The hornet then opens its mouth and expels a powerful flow of wax from within. The wax flows outward and over the opponent, trapping them for three rounds if successful. The hornet disappears after this.
Limit: Kamizuru Clan, Must have Bī Kontorōru (Bee Control)

Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Animaru) (Summoning Technique (Animal))
Rank: “D,” “C,” “B,” “A,” “S”
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A summoning technique that allows the Beast Master or Animal Companion user to summon the Animal Companion the same rank as the rank the user knows in the technique.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture 1-A; Picture 1-B, Picture 1-A; Picture 1-B A technique that allows the user to summon up an Animal from one location to another whenever needed. The user takes out a scroll or an object that may have the Animal Summoning Seal on it and allows the user to summon up an Animal that may have the Seal on the Animal, or within the facility of where the animal may be at in order to Summon it. In order to summon something “D” Rank, user must learn “D” Rank Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Animaru) (Summoning Technique (Animal)). In order to summon something “C” Rank, user must learn “C” Rank Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Animaru) (Summoning Technique (Animal)). In order to summon something “B” Rank, user must learn “B” Rank Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Animaru) (Summoning Technique (Animal)). This continues on till “S”
Limit: Must have an Animal Companion, or Beast Master for Animals.

Shageki Hachi (Gunshot Bee)
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user fires a bee from their fingertip at high speed.
Special: Tiger, Ox, Rat
Drawback: --
Description: The user forms the hand seals, then extends their finger like a gun, launching a bee with their chakra. The bee is wrapped in a small bubble of chakra and points it’s stinger out. If it strikes the opponent it deals damage like a thrown kunai.
Limit: Kamizuru Clan, Must have Bī Kontorōru (Bee Control)

Hachitsume (Bee Claw)
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user summons five bees to his fingertips, then strikes the opponent with their stingers.
Special: Rat, Horse
Drawback: --
Description: The user forms the hand seals, calling a bee to each of their fingertips. The bees rest with their stingers outstretched from the fingertips. The user then wraps a faint bubble of chakra around the bees to protect them and strikes the opponent with their fingertips, stinging them.
Limit: Kamizuru Clan, Must have Bī Kontorōru (Bee Control)

Hachitate (Bee Shield)
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: A swarm of bees deflects a thrown projectile.
Special: Tiger, Monkey, Horse
Drawback: Can easily be destroyed by ninjutsu or strong attacks.
Description: The user forms the hand seals, summoning a mass of bees to condense in front of them. This shield is useful for stopping low level projectiles, but is useless against ninjutsu and higher level strikes.
Limit: Kamizuru Clan, Must have Bî Kontorôru (Bee Control)

GenJutsu Techniques:

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TaiJutsu Techniques:

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History:

Growing up in a Hidden Village can impact a boy's outlook on life. After all, death follows a Shinobi everywhere he goes. This was a lesson Yasuo learned early in life, the day his mother was killed in the line of duty, the day his father changed. He was an academy student at the time, only eight years old. Like all children would do in the same situation, he cried. And cried. And cried. And when the tears would no longer come, he managed to get on with his life. Its amazing how quickly children recover from loss.

He continued his education in the Shinobi Arts, particularly excelling at Ninjutsu. At ten years old, his father began teaching him to control bees and wasps. It was not long after this that he began to notice that, while he had a hard time with the different species of bees, he could easily entice wasps and hornets to do his bidding. And so he began training with just those. Before long, he had complete control of them. In the academy he was jokingly named "The Wasp Lord of Iwagakure." A name he found he rather enjoyed.

Months came and went and eventually became years. Through all that time, his father drilled him every waking moment in Ninjutsu and the art of survival. Yasuo was taught the value of strength and self-preservation. The boy began to interpret the things his father taught him in the wrong ways. To his understanding, self-preservation was to be put above all else, regardless of the situation. Only the weak allowed themselves to be killed. So he vowed to become strong and threw himself into his training.

Eventually, Yasuo graduated from the academy and officially became a Shinobi. Then the day came that his father, a member of the ANBU reconnaissance team, returned from a hunt. He had led a team of ANBU to confirm the sighting of an A ranked Missing Nin. It was a sighting they had, in fact, confirmed. But it was at a high cost. Two members of the team had been killed and Yasuo's father was in critical condition. It turned out that the A ranked missing nin had joined a larger group. The last act of the dying man was to tell the Kage where the criminal cell was located. The group was later hunted down and killed.

On the day his father breathed his last, Yasuo shed no tears. On that day, he swore never to end up like his father, a man he had respected, but who, in death, he now considered weak. He would live on. He was just thirteen. He began to train once again.

[|Ayame Unbound|]

Mark all the releases you are not starting with as Future.

You need Animal Summoning to have the Hornet Summon.

Mark ANBU as future.

A gourd of wasps is not allowed either.

[.::Yasuo::.]

Marked required items as future and such.

Two things I need to clarify though:

By Animal Summon, do you mean this:

Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Animaru) (Summoning Technique (Animal))
Rank: “D,” “C,” “B,” “A,” “S”
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A summoning technique that allows the Beast Master or Animal Companion user to summon the Animal Companion the same rank as the rank the user knows in the technique.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture 1-A; Picture 1-B, Picture 1-A; Picture 1-B A technique that allows the user to summon up an Animal from one location to another whenever needed. The user takes out a scroll or an object that may have the Animal Summoning Seal on it and allows the user to summon up an Animal that may have the Seal on the Animal, or within the facility of where the animal may be at in order to Summon it. In order to summon something “D” Rank, user must learn “D” Rank Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Animaru) (Summoning Technique (Animal)). In order to summon something “C” Rank, user must learn “C” Rank Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Animaru) (Summoning Technique (Animal)). In order to summon something “B” Rank, user must learn “B” Rank Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Animaru) (Summoning Technique (Animal)). This continues on till “S”
Limit: Must have an Animal Companion, or Beast Master for Animals.

Or this:

Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Summoning Technique)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: This is the start of all Summoning Techniques, without this technique the user is incapable of Summoning what they wish whether it may be Animal, or Weapon.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: Even though one is capable of learning how to use this, they still must under go a massive amount of training in order to be capable of summoning up grander and larger types such as "A" and "S" Rank Summons.
Description: A Technique where the user makes a contract binding with that of the very Animal like summon. This blood can be used as a contract to which is capable of being used as on a scroll, or perhaps even a tattoo. There are many different types of summons but the most known are the Animal Summons. The Animal Summons are used to help with various tasks within battles and situations that may occur. However one must remember that one must have great respect for the summon, and are known to even fear summons. The summoning Technique however is capable of being used for other types as well such as weapons.
Limit: This is the basis of all Summoning Techniques. Without the capability of this technique all Summoning process is incapable of occurring.

Or did you mean something else entirely?


Also, the idea of Bee/Wasp Gourds is actually mentioned in the Kamizura Clan's index page. If they aren't allowed, mention of them should be removed to avoid this confusion.

The bee techniques of the Kamizuru have unique advantages, garnered from spending such time with them. The Kamizuru clan can call bees, wasps, and hornets from nearly nothingness, while some more conservative members have been known to carry ‘bee gourds’ to help lessen their chakra use.

The weapon in question also complies with all guidelines. A character may start with a "C" ranked weapon as long as that weapon has no techniques conformed specifically to it. According to the weapon index, the Gourd is, in fact, "C" ranked. It also has nothing conformed to it, it only serves as a holding space for my Wasps since my character hasn't had the Bee Surgery(which he HAS to have in order to host the insects inside of him). Gourds are made to hold things in them, are they not? Why not wasps?

However, I will remove it for now and either create the item as a custom at a later date and hope it's accepted, or ask permission from the Admin.

[|Ayame Unbound|]

Yeah our admin has stated before no insect gourds are allowed, I tried to make this case with my butterfly clan, its a no no.

And the Wasp is actually considered a Mythical Animal summon I believe, so the mythical version of the first tech you posted ^^

Edit: By the way site standards say sigs are at max 450x200, I think you may be a bit over, please shrink it.

[.::Yasuo::.]

Updated

[|Ayame Unbound|]

I apologize for the mistake, I spoke with the admin and you need Animal summoning not mythical. And you needn't take up being a Summoner if you don't wish to ^^

Everything else is good!

[¤ Lady Raиu ¤]

Mark the D rank on the summoning tech by either bolding it, underlining, etc.

It is 1/3 approved now, you need two more.

[▐Shibu]

Once you do the bolding/underlining as Tenkai said...

2 | 3

[roko]

3/3