Kotaro Kyoshou

[Kotaro Kyousho]

Basic Information

Name: Kotaro Kyousho
Bloodlimit:N/A
Height:5'7
Weight: 150 pounds
Age:15
Gender: Male
Alignment:Good Chaotic
Birth Country:Land Of Thunder
Village: Kumogakure
Special:

Weapons

Primary Weapon:

Secondary Items:

Butt Bag

Non-Weapon Items

Character Depth

Personality:

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[Kotaro Kyousho]

Techniques

Lightning Release

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Skill: Ninjutsu.
Effect: Creates ravens of lightning to attack your opponent.
Special: Tiger, Dog, Tiger
Drawback: Must be learned multiple times in order to truly master. The swallows dissolve if they pass out of forty meters of the user.
Description: The user forms the hand seals, creating ravens of lightning around them. The ravens are roughly two feet in wingspan. The ravens are comprised of pure electricity, and discharge into a shock of electricity when they strike an object. Each swallow discharges with a D rank shock. The user can control the motions of the swallows completely. When first learned, the user is only capable of creating up to five ravens at a time. Each time learned, the user can create an additional five ravens. When the user attains to capability of creating fifty ravens, the technique increases to a C rank technique, allowing for an additional five per training as usual. When the user reaches the capability of creating one hundred twenty swallows, the training becomes B rank. The user can create two hundred swallows, total, before they max out.
Limit: Must have Lightning Release.

Raiton - Rakurai Shuryuu (Lightning Style - Lightning Stream)
Rank: "D" - "C"
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user creates a steady stream of electricity against a single target.
Special: Ox - Monkey - Dog - Dragon
Drawback: "D" Rank require both hands. "C" Rank requires one hand.
Description: After forming the needed hand seals the user will create a fist sized orb of electricity and thrust it at a single target as a steady stream of electricity. At "D" Rank the lightning is only capable of knock a target back and inflict minor burns, and could reach a maximum range of 5 meters. At "C" Rank the lightning is able to cause first degree burns and numbness to the affected area, and reach a maximum range of 10 meters.
Limit: Lightning Release

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Yaibasattou (Blade Rush)
Rank: C
Skill: Taijutsu
Special: ---
Effect: In Description
Drawback: Leaves back exposed, if the enemy can get to it that is. Heavy on chakra usage. Can only be used 5 times a day
Description: The user gathers chakra into their bladed weapon of choice and then dashes forward for about 5-10 meters with the blade pointed outward. The chakra is released in a burst that flies outward from the blade in a cone shape. Aside from the impact of the blade, the chakra involved causes the enemy to be knocked backward, breaking through most defenses. Even if the strike is blocked, the force of the chakra will usually push an opponent back, leaving them open.
Limit: Must have a bladed weapon equipped

Quick Strike Training (D, C, B)
Rank: D , C, B
Effect: D Rank - Improves strike speed and power marginally; C Rank - Improves strike speed and power slightly; B Rank - Improves strike speed and power moderately.
Special: None
Drawbacks: Cannot learn Reflex Training.
Description: The practitioner is put through a series of rigorous repetitive movements to improve their ability to strike effectively with their sword. As they develop their training, their speed and power slowly increase.
Restriction: Must have a Senpai/Sensei of a Kenjutsu Dojo to learn.[/ul]

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Suiton: Chiisaimizubakahatsu (Tiny Water Explosion)
Rank: “D”
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: Creates a small wave of water that rushes towards an opponent.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: N/A
Description: The user performs the handseals described in special. There, they release chakra into the water and send a small tidal wave (about five feet tall) towards the opponent. The water moves at a speed of about ten miles per hour, so a direct hit from the water can be painful, but not life-threatening.
Limit: Water Release

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[atem.]

• Weight - Please state a unit for your weight. 150 what? Pounds? Snakes? Magic Fairydust Particles?
  
  
• Birth Country - Small error. The country is "Land of Thunder", not "Land of Lightning".
  
  
• Secondary Weapons - Please state which carrier you are using. I'm assuming it is the Butt Bag.
  
  
• Freebies - You cannot have Quick Strike Training as a Freebie. Only basic stances, releases, or perceptions. Please change this.
  
  
• Techniques - Please underline/bold which rank you are obtaining from Thunderstorm Ravens, which is most likely the D-Rank.

[Kotaro Kyousho]

I went back and edited everything that needed to be edited. I could've sworn that it was Land Of Lightning, but I went and changed it anyway.

[atem.]

Yeah, don't worry, it is a common error.

What is your third Freebie? Choosing to go without it?

[Kotaro Kyousho]

Initially I didn't see anything else I liked, but I decided on the Water Release.

[Ancestor Febrie]

You need to add another paragraph to appearance

[Kotaro Kyousho]

Alright. Another paragraph has been added.

[Ancestor Febrie]

All good 1/3

[goliath764]

2/3

[loyal]

[3/3]