Zeth [finished]

[»Omni»]

Name: Zeth Katsarrow Tren
Age: 26
Height: 6' 1
Weight: 147
Gender: Male
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Birth Country: Waterfall
Village: Sound
Special:

Mercenary
Taijutsu master.

No chakra control or use.

Secondary Weapons:

1 kunai
3 shuriken
5 light bombs
5 smoke grenades

Primary Weapon:

No main weapon

Personality:

Holds a deep grudge for people, never appears happy although is quite commonly happy when his targets are killed or recieves a great mission. Never smies and under normal cicumstances you can see the hatred in his eyes and mouth. Is dedicated to the use of weapons and hand to hand combatives because of his lack of ability in ninjutsu and genjutsu. Very free spirited and loves to sit and think unless it involves positive interaction with people.

Appearance:

An average build, slightly tall and thin. His eyes are that of evil intent and hatred when not purposely masking his feelings. His mouth never smiles unless it is relevant to his mission or he is alone. His medium length black hair hangs out of his hood and covers his left cheek and eye. He wears a dark grey-green hooded sweatshirt, and dark green pants, for night camoflouge. He has free-running shoes to make it easy to climb walls and trees without the use of chakra. He has a spiral seal on his right cheek.

Bloodlimit:
NinJutsu Techniques:

None

GenJutsu Techniques:

None

TaiJutsu Techniques:

None

History:

Zeth's parents abandond him when he was five, probably the first and foremost reason why he hates people. At first he didn't know what to do so he kind of sat around until he got hungry and went looking for food ussually asking others. At six, this is the best thing that happened to him, his parents were killed by a rogue ninja. He saw the whole thing because it happened right in the street. He felt happy for a long time until he realized it had no effect on his life. Zeth begged for meals and money on the street watching thieves wondering how hard it was to steal from someone. At 11 he decides that he is going to start thieving for money too, around the same time people stop giving him food because he is older, and who helps the older people. During the next year he thieves off of ordinary people and watches battle hoping to learn some fighting skills, but learns very few. Exactly on his twelfth birthday he attempts a bigger thief, alot bigger. Zeth walksslowly behind a shinobi in black robes and attempts to steal from his pouch, the moment he touches his first kunai the old shinobi hears it and turns around blasting a seal on his neck. He probably thought the man was much taller because of how low he aimed. This unkowingly seals Zeth's chakra. Zeth runs away and hides in an ally rubbing his neck because of the sharp pain. The next day he decides to join the academy, he spends a week filling out paper work to get in. When he finally gets in people already hate him because of the seal on his neck. A few people try to make friends with him but aren't friends long before they realize he has no chakra. People start making fun of him and calling him souless because it appears to them he has no chakra. Zeth stops trying to use chakra and trains excessively in weapons and stealth. He drops out when he turns seventeen because he has already trained on everything he could know from their weapons departments. He start doing murder for pay, not many but for him they are as easy as breathing. One murder he is asked to commit on a family who hasn't paid taxes, the only one that was hard for him. He sneaks into the room to find a family sleeping with there 4 year old son to comfort him, just as his parents did before they left him on the streets. Zeth snuck up on them and stopped for a second finally darting a kunai across all three throats almaost at the same time. The all choke on their blood as Zeth runs out the window. He takes a small break from murdering mainly because he ran out of jobs so he moves to the sound village at 23 and looks for work.

[fina]

Don't abbreviate the story; tell it how it is and don't hold anything back. Also, you're gonna have to give a decent paragraph for your personality and appearance; as it stands, it's too vague.

[jenzo]

Ok, even thou your a Mercenary Considered a Non Ninja you still got to pick some Specialist their.

Try picking some that go with your Mercenary.

[»Omni»]

I'll work on my bio at school.

[Kuro]

hey "hidden blade arm" is that an accepted weapon? I have a hidden blade gauntlet but that's a clan only weapon. If it's a custom weapon it has to be run through customs.

[»Omni»]

It's the same idea as the gauntlet but I didn't realize I had to be in a clan to use it? what's the clans name and motives or as much as you can tell me.

[Kuro]

well to use the weapon I went and made you need to be in a clan, but you still can't start with it. It requires training. If you want something like what I have, you can make it in customs, but here's what I suggest to you. I would start with a basic sword or maybe even no primary weapon. Because you can't start off with a custom weapon.

My clan is the Rokusho Family is a clan that was almost eliminated and is rebuilding themselves. But you would need to change almost all of your character to fall into the Rokusho clan.

So like I said I would just start off with a basic weapon that can be found Here so I would read through those weapons and pick one from there for now. And then when customs is open you can make one of your own hidden blades.

It's just mine requires being in the Rokusho Clan, having a seal that only the Rokusho can have, and then learning to manipulate chakra with the seal. It's more work than I think you'd be willing to go through.

[»Omni»]

I am still in the planning period I could just add or remove parts of my history, I would like your weapon but I will not us any jutsu.

[Kuro]

My clan can't just give you it's special weapon. You can't use it with out getting the clan's special seal. Which requires certain clan rituals, and handing out those techniques to a non clan member just seems wrong.

[»Omni»]

Ok I dumped that idea now I hope this is finsished

[adero]

secondary slots are still off... try rechecking those...

now then, are u sure u dont want to have starting jutsu , and are u sure u dont want a taimaster chakra control roll?

[»Omni»]

Yes and, yes, Besides I was going to be very picky about jutsu and I would need to create the ones I want. because they do not already exist. I did not use all of my secondary slots I know.

[adero]

you might as well use all your secondaries.... theyre free... same for your first primary weapon...

as for jutsu have u really checked the entire index? the release index, ninjutsu index n fighting style index? those are just a few but they have a LOT

(not pressuring u, just making sure u saw all your options xD)

[»Omni»]

I checked taijutsu and fighting styles I am interested in a koppojutsu and koshijutsu based character and you have neither of them in your index, and I am not interested in genjutsu or ninjutsu. Thank you for trying to optimize me.

[adero]

*shrugs*

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[pandoru]

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