Kitsurugi Hasuzune (FINALLY DONE)

[Kitsurugi Hasuzune]

Name: Kitsurugi Hasuzune
Bloodlimit: Shitakuma
Height: 5'9" (1,80 m)
Weight:165 lbs (75 kg)
Age: 18 years
Gender: Male
Alignment: True neutral
Birth Country: Mizu no Kuni
Village: Kirigakure
Special:
Ninjutsu- Specialist
Genjutsu- Non-Specialist
Taijutsu- Non-Specialist
Clan- Specialist

Weapons

Primary Weapon
Sword, Short (Overview)
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Piercing/Slashing, Sword
Effect: Swords that slash hack, dice and anything else within this genre that reaches a certain length.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A sword with a blade that ranges between 1 and a half feet to 3 feet. These swords can be any types such as the Short Sword, or the Tanto, Baselard, Cinquedea, Gladius, Kodachi, Xiphos or even the Mechete.
Limit: These types of weapons may be capable of being bought inside any Weapon Shop
Cost: 2,000 Ryo


Appearel:

Butt Bag Type 1 (Overview)
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Tailor, Slot Holder, Holds 15 Slots (15 for Items of Scroll Length), Bag
Effect: A waist pack worn with the pouch in back.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture A pack worn at the back along a belt at the waist. Water repellent collar with drawstring pack with quick release closures attached to 1 inch cinch straps and a top carry handle. It has a vented bottom with keeper clips to attach to the belt, or straps to wrap around a belt. The compartment has the dimensions Height of 10.25 inches Width of 10.5 inches and Depth of 7 inches. The interior holds 15 slots of scroll length as well as main objects that fit in the same dimensions. Normally extra clothes is held in this spot as well as other non combative supplies.
Limit: These types of items may be capable of being bought inside any Tailor Shop.
Cost: 5,500 Ryo

Secondary items:

6x slots Kunai (Overview)
Rank: "C" Rank
Type: Secondary, 2 per Slot, Piercing/Slashing, Knife
Effect: A digging tool, a bit like a trowel. The blade was soft iron and unsharpened because the edges were used to smash plaster and wood, to dig holes and to pry. Also used as a knife.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: The kunai is conventionally wrought in ranges from 6 to 8 inches, with the average at 7 inches. The kunai was used by common folk as multi-purpose gardening tools and by workers of stone and masonry. The kunai is not a knife, but something more akin to a crowbar. The blade was soft iron and unsharpened because the edges were used to smash plaster and wood, to dig holes and to pry. Normally only the tip would have been sharpened. The uses to which a kunai was put would have destroyed any heat-treated and sharpened tool like a knife. There could be multiple kinds of kunais such as handless ones, or even double sided kunais as long as they are within the same length.
Limit: These types of items may be capable of being bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 1,000 Ryo per Slot, or 500 Ryo Each.


7x slots Grenade: Smoke
Rank: "C"
Type: Secondary, 1 per Slot, Explosive, Grenade
Effect: A Grenade that gives off thick smoke when it explodes; used to make a smoke screen or to mark a position.
Special: ---
Drawback: May harm the user if not thrown right.
Description: Smoke grenades are used as ground-to-ground or ground-to-air signaling devices, target or landing zone marking devices, and screening devices for unit movement. The body is a sheet-steel cylinder with emission holes in the top and bottom. These allow the smoke to be released when the grenade is ignited. Two main types exist, colored smoke (for signaling) and screening smoke. It fills an area radius of 15 meters with thick smoke. The smoke may come in different colors if the user wishes. Different color smoke could be used for information value if need. It takes 6 seconds before it explodes.
Limit: These types of items may be capable of being bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 1,500 Ryo Each


2x slots Goggles
Rank: "C"
Type: Secondary, 2 per Slot, Gadget, Apparel/Surveillance, Spectacles
Effect: Protective eyewear that usually encloses or protects the area surrounding the eye in order to prevent particulates, water or chemicals from striking the eyes.
Special: ---
Drawback: May hold up to 4 kinds of Surveillance Vision.
Description: There are different types of Goggles. There are different types of Goggles such as Cold Weather Goggles, Swimming, Power Tool Goggles, Blowtorch Goggles, Welding Goggles, Laboratory Goggles, and Aviation Goggles. Goggles are often worn as a fashion statement in certain subcultures, most often as part of the cybergoth subculture. They are usually worn over the eyes or up on the forehead to secure 'falls'. Goggles have enough carrying capacity for 4 types of Surveillance Vision. Does not fit in Scroll size Slots.
Limit: These types of items may be capable of being bought inside any Gadget Shop.
Cost: 2,000 Ryo per Slot, or 1,000 Ryo Each

TOTAL: 15/15 Slots used.

Character Depth

Personality:

Intuitive- Kitsurugi always predicts what could the future throw at him and stays with the guard up even if the background is calm. This lets his mature part get out. His parents always told him that this is one of his best characteristics. This also helps him set the stage if he is attacked and have an advantage in some battles. This is why he stays hidden mostly times.

Emotive- He is hard to be controlled when it comes to emotions. He gets angry very easy if he doesn't like something. Mostly of his angry vanishes, but if something marks him he will always seek revenge on that. He shows mercy to everyone who aids him and disrespect to the ones that hurt him or his feelings. The only things that calms him is the flute (got from his mother) or a good talk with his friends.

Childish- The pranks are one of Kitsurugi`s specialities. From when he was a child, he liked to play and touch everything that was interesting at senses and put some ,,traps'' to laugh a bit. This is why he got punished in school and by his parents. Still, in the kindergarden he was very acclaimed by his friends. This is representative (somehow) for Kitsurugi, and it makes him forget sometimes about his family incidents.

Fast-Thinking- If the circumstances press him, he gets fast ideas, even if they are not good and could bring him to failure. This is mostly time an advantage in any battle with anyone, and in his travels. When not in battle, this fast thinking is combined with deep meditation, so he learns fast many techniques. When meeting someone he can see fast the way that person is, making him choose more accurately his friends and foes. Fastness is what Kitsurugi aims for in many actions of him.

Persuasive- This is a good attribute of him. He uses it for mostly claiming items (that belong or don't to him). It also use his attribute to show people that he is right, even if not, giving him the edge in any trades and easily turning someone fight for his cause. If someone is starting to suspect him of something he gets nervous, making a breach in his lucidity and sometimes gets him to partial failure. In the end, he manages somehow to get back on his feet so he is mostly times able to repair the situations.

Appearance:

Face- His face is oval with green almond eyes with a tone of white , black long spiky hair and a pointy chin with a dark blueish skin complexion. The lips are blood red and his nose is a bit round and small. His cheeks show the best his feelings, because when he is angry, they turn powerfull red and if he is blushing (rarely) it gets a tone of normal white skin. He hasn`t got any scars or tatoos on his face. When he is in light, his hair gives a sensation of sparkling.

Body- Kitsurugi`s body isn't wearing any t-shirts, showing his muscular well trained body. the sword being held on his back with two cream colored straps going around his shoulders. He has a skull tatoo on both shoulders one smiling and one sad. Kitsurugi has a row of pierce on his neck very close to vital points, so he can tactile analyse every time where to strike on it. When not finding what to do, Kitsurugi climbs a high tree, and starts meditating and thinking his next step. His dad also taught him how to feel lower pain in corpse by instant relaxing of the body.

Legs- The legs are (as the body) well trained. they are hidden by a long pair of white pants with a dragon belt holding them (it seems like eating its tail). The feet are in brown sandals with tiny wings at the ending of them. When he is climbing trees he puts some sort of short claws at the end of the sandals. The slides of his pants are very long so he can store there small scrolls or some tags for fast use.

Special features- His ears have an additional muscle which lets him move his ear in the direction he wants to listen. This helps him easily locate his enemy. This feature also helps him at closing his ears for a better sleep. As I told you upper, His hair gives you the sentiment that it is shining in powerful sun. The pierces that he has in the neck is another major special feature because he can sense the vital points of someone's neck even if he can't see it.

Hair (detailed)- The hairstyle he has, it's spiky and long. there is a strand on his left eye, hiding it. It has 70 cm(from the middle of head to his back). If the person that he kills is worthy, he paints the ending of his strand with the blood of him. When nervous, he plays with hair mostly curling it and pulling it. He is carefully looking at his hair, because is a way of getting style in fights.

Background:

Kitsurugi Hasuzune was grown by his parents in a very hard way. from the age of 8 years, he started training every day because of his dad. Every time his dad shouted at him, he got angry but didn`t show it, instead he ran in the forest and started to punch and scrach the trees, crying. The only thing that made him happy was when he got in the bed and his mother started singing with her angel voice and played at the flute. When the song finished she ended it with a kiss on his forehead and a ,,Goodnight``, which helped the boy fall asleep.

When Kitsurugi turned 18 there was no ,,Happy Birthday`` or any presents. His dad kicked him out of the house telling him that he should earn his existance alone. His mother gave him the flute (which he learnt to play from his mother to calm him) so he will remember everything about her and even his dad. He wanted to find the best job that would fit him, but still should be far from his house. That was a very sad moment in Kitsurugi's life.

He went to be a trader in Venalicium, but only lasted 15 days. He was fired by his boss because he always had its goods stolen and everybody stopped to buy from market and laugh about Kitsurugi`s blindness (eventually he would start cursing). He stole a loaf of bread and run away. On the road he met some strangers (which turned out to be some old friends of him) and got from them some money. Kitsurugi promised to turn their favor when they will need and showed his respect with a bow in front of them, continuing his journey for a job.

After not finding anything that fits him, he thought that he should roam the world and help everything that he could so he will get money from the people and see the world, make new friends, and search for making his dad happy. He started to socialise with some grown ups and elders about what he could do with his quest and how could he get into his father´s attention. Some of them told him that he should find his way to do this, and some told him some strange theories but everything he tried wasn´t enough for his dad, which was clearly aging very fast because of the sadness. He died at the age of 67 years leaving everything to his son. He donated half to charity and half gave to his mother, saying that he doesn't need this type of money, but earned one.

1 month later, Kitsurugi discovered that his dad didn´t left only the goods (which he used for charity and helping his mother as told higher). He found a letter in which said: ,,Kitsurugi, everything i wanted is to see you being the best ninja ever. I wanted you to be better than everyone and to beat every challange you will get. If you read this, I hope you will understand that I wanted to train you hard to get to this point and even upper. I am happy to see that you got this big. you may now become the ninja I dreamed of. Thank you for being like this.´´
Kitsurugi´s tears started to go down his face as he read and swore that he will become how his dad wanted to... THE BEST NINJA!

[|Ayame Unbound|]

This bio was already moved to NF...

Your height you converted wrong, it should be 5'9"

Weight you only need the 264 not the .xxx

Medical non-specialist doesn't exist, please remove that.

I'm only counting 12 slots of secondaries, you can have 15.

You need 5 paragraphs minimum for the writing sections since you're part of a blood line

You can have 3 freebies which are releases, perceptions, and stances, and 5 techniques C rank or lower.

[Kitsurugi Hasuzune]

ok gonna look over them once again tomorrow because i should go to sleep (realy tired) thanks for the obs...

[Kitsurugi Hasuzune]

Oto no Jutsu (Sound Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Sound. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Sound Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---


Fuuton no Jutsu (Wind Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Wind. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Wind Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

Suiton no Jutsu (Water Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Water. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Water Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

Jutsus:

Kusomimi (HellsEars) learned x1
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: Without this Jutsu the Clan is capable of just listening with sharpen hearing. What this Jutsu does is by using the chakra along their eardrum, labyrinth system, as well as the outer ear of the body the user makes their ear into something of a sonar. This sonar system enables the brain to remember certain points by sound wave frequencies that hits the ear from a pebble hitting the water, to a person walking along grass. The Sonar system enables the Shitakuma clan to basically see. This is greatly used when Rain falls down for every time a drop hits the ground it emits a sound so basically they are capable to see for the first time in their lives. When first learned the distance that one is capable of understanding and remembering is the distance of fifty meters. After each time learned the distance goes up by twenty meters.
Special: The first time learned the user must do the signs of Dragon, Rabbit, Dragon, Ram. After the first time there would be no need for the seals.
Drawback: Must be trained into this more then once. Without the proper training of a technique such as Kusokesuni and Advanced version sounds could cause dizziness or damage to the user. The sounds to create this must be sounds that are greatly abrupt and fast which must be near the ear like a Flash/Bang grenade.
Description: When sound frequencies hit the ear it creates a sonar in which the mind remembers in a certain distance until the sound waves hit the ear once again. It looks as if the user is capable of seeing in such a way but it is just a technique that enables the user to know where to go and how far objects are at. They are capable of seeing shapes, and size, but the thing is they are not capable of seeing defined objects.
Limit: Only a technique for the Shitakuma Clan


Kusokesuni (Hells Drownout) learned x1
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu (Somewhat)
Effect: With the use of one's ears and when a person needs to use their sense of hearing to see, the Kusokensuni is a specialized technique in which the user of the Shitakuma clan is capable of drowning out certain sounds waves up to certain frequencies. Example: If a Shitakuma member is in a large battle where their is a fairly amount of yelling and fighting going around, the person is capable of drowning out all sounds to a certain frequency for example like lets say the sound waves that is being pushed from the ground giving more stability. The technique must be learned ten times. Each time learned a user is capable of drowning out up to a certain amount. When first learned the user is capable of drowning out frequencies up to ten thousand hertz. After mastered the user is capable of drowning out up to one hundred thousand hertz of frequency. Remember a normal human is capable of hearing up to twenty thousand, this is way beyond then that of a regular body.
Special: When first learned the user needs to use the hand signs of Boar, Dragon, Tiger, and Horse. After the first time, hand signs is not needed.
Drawback: Drawback is that the user must train in this type of technique more then once in order to drown up higher frequencies. Another drawback is the fact that they are only capable of listening to one frequency at a time, so in a sense if they wished to listen to their own comrades, it be slightly more difficult that creates a massive confusion in which case may go against each other for a moment or two until the sounds is justified to where they understand.
Description: The way this feels is that the user is capable of drowning out certain frequencies in which they can hear certain sounds to accurately pin point where they need to go. What is interesting was the way this works, basically it is like a strong sensory. Within the mind of the user all sounds are muffled to an extent as the sound they concentrate on comes forth with more of accurate sense. The sensory and the sounds still work, in which they are capable to see. Example if there were a strong amount of yelling, the sound waves that hit the ears still react in which they can still use as a radar to help them move about (Acts like they can see figures) but of course does not damage the user's sense of balance and hearing.
Limit: Only those of the Shitakuma clan is capable of performing.


Tremor Sense learned x1
Rank: "D" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: By pouring their chakra into the ground, by using th earth release the user is capable of sensing or seeing in a sense what is along the ground, in the ground, identifying what is around them.
Special: ---
Drawback: Someone needs to touch the ground in order for the person to see. This means that even the user can see by stepping. This also means that the user must be touching the ground at all times. This technique does not work on water, sand, or metal or ice. The ground is to loose for the user to see the vibrations along the ground, or is to concentrated which creates less vibrations.
Description: When first learned the user is capable of seeing in a radius of five meters. After each time learned it increases by ten meters. When ever the user steps, or when another steps in the radius of tremor sense, the mind of the user picks up the vibrations along the feet creating a somewhat of a picture of the user. Since people have water constricted within their own bodies as well as metalic components of the body a user could see the movements of the body in blur like motion, where they can guess if an attack is coming towards them. This is the beginning stage of the tremor sense technique and is the foundation of the tremor sense techniques. When learned their is a thirty percent chance that the user is capable of defending against melee attacks within arms reach. This however does not mean that after each attack someone comes forth to role a die. It just means that the chances of trying to stop melee attacks is not as well or as concentrated as one would wish it to be.
Limit: Anyone can learn, but it takes an extreme amount of chakra unless they master earth techniques or is part of the Shitakuma clan. Can only be learned if learning the blind way of life.

[Holy Grail]

Jul 22, 2013 15:30:06 GMT -7 |Ayame Unbound| said:

You can have 3 freebies which are releases, perceptions, and stances, and 5 techniques C rank or lower.

I am gonna to say this because, you do not get 5 techs, you get 3 techs, and 3 freebies because you are a bloodlimit char

also please add 'slot' after how many times you have the secondaries, saves us from second guessing of how many you have~

[Antonia Aries]

Also, there is something Ayame and Ane missed to note, or at least I didn't see. It's just a small error but it wouldn't hurt fixing it..

Birth Country: Mizu no Kuni
Village: Mizu no Kuni

Mizu no Kuni (Land of Water) Cannot be your village, because, well, it's a country.
If you are willing to go to the hidden village of the Water Country, that would be Kirigakure. So, the right thing to say would be:

Birth Country: Mizu no Kuni
Village: Kirigakure

Also, allow me to note that even though your birth country is Mizu no Kuni, you don't have to be from Mizu no Kuni, instead you actually want to, this meaning. You can as well be from the Snow village, grass or whatsoever. Why I am saying this is because there are some villages that give one incentive bonuses when they decide to join them such as additional starting money and such. If you are interested, these villagers are located in This Threat.

Another minor error,

Secondary Items
Butt Bag Type 1 (Overview)

Actually the Butt Bag doesn't fall under the secondary items section.. It falls under an apparel section or slot holding items' section, but not Secondary as the butt bag itself is a "Main" item. I am not saying that you cannot have it but that you simply misplaced it's positioning.

[Kitsurugi Hasuzune]

Oky doky, Sorry for being such a DUMB and thanks to everybody. If anything else is wrong please let me know (i really want this character after all the the time i spent thinking about the text). Thanks again and hope i will be accepted... ;D

[Deleted]

You're not dumb. Not in the least. In fact I'd say you were very competent in following the above instructions.

1|3 Accepted.

[|Ayame Unbound|]

Your appearance and personality still need to be longer for a bloodline character. The minimum is 5 paragraphs 5 lines each and those two sections are too short for that I'm afraid.

[Kitsurugi Hasuzune]

hmph... Just a little more brainstorming and i got 5 paragraphs and 5 sentences at everything so i hope i will make ayame (finally) happy ;D
Hope to get some more accepts! (btw thanks to Kaizu for the accept )!!

[Holy Grail]

mmk, you still need a few sentences for the appearance and personality still, your just a little short for the 5 paragraphs with 5 sentences.

[Kitsurugi Hasuzune]

Ok hope the last post i put here... I read everything 3 times and i had 5 paragraphs and 5 sentences. hope to get some replies soon!

[|Ayame Unbound|]

Mark that each of your techniques is learned once, since they can all be learned multiple times. Once that is done you have my 1/3

[Kitsurugi Hasuzune]

you wanted to say 2|3? (kaizu gave me 1 accept earlyer)

[Umehara]

2.3

Just PM one more staff member. If no one gives this proper attention, I'll be sure to call them to this submission myself.

[Deleted]

Imma derp, that's why the acceptances were reset

3|3 though bro.

Moving.

Enjoy your stay.