Floating like a cloud. (training)

[geninjames]

Kaze Ya no Jutsu (Wind Arrow Technique)
Rank: "D"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: User is capable of breathing inwards and exerting outwards a large like arrow to pierce into the opponent's body.
Special: User takes in a deep breathe filling their lungs with air.
Drawback: Only one may be created at a time.
Description: The user molds chakra and breathes in. He or she then blows out and an arrow made of wind is shot from the user’s mouth. This arrow may be blocked as it is just a large consumption of wind, however it can not be deflected away. This means that the object must be large in size enough to defend from one against the wind. The size of the arrow is the size of the opponent's mouth with the length of three feet as it can travel up to the distance of twenty meters. This technique is used for short range to steer an opponent away from the user.
Limit: Must have the Wind Release


James walked through a bright green underbrush. Some burrs caught on his pants. Looking around he found a nice clear opening. Wiping off his microphone he announced to the woodland critters. "The famed MC K will begin his training of the wind arrow technique. I do not believe what I am seeing a whole bundle of amazing is now about to pass his lips.


James inhaled a large amount of wind. this wind was like no other it cut his insides and made him say "ow". The second time he tried to inhale the air he was more careful. Doing this wrong could get him to make an arrow go though his lungs. The air spiraled in his chest. Involuntarily James let a little wind escape his lips. It was a split second and all tge wind came rushing out in no direction cutting his on the inside a little, bit not enough to sever nerves only increasing the pain. James rolled onto the ground holding his lips. He needed to focus his chakra on protecting his insides while forming the arrow.

The third time he tried to form an arrow he formed his chakra in his mouth to form a protective barrier on his insides while also spiraling the wind into an arrow like shape. with all his force he blew out a small arrow that pierced a tree chipping off a bit of bark. It was obviously not enough.

This time James decided to try and force more air into his lungs than he ever has before. The effort while intended well caused him to go blue in the face and release it all very quickly. The lack of air went really hard on his system. The high altitude of the mountains didn't help one bit. James took a few minutes catching his breath.


Taking another breath slowly James was able to inhale much more wind. The wind mixed with his chakra quickly after he reached a maximum amount of air. He spiraled tge chakra and air in his chest cavity. James released the massive amount of air in an arrow that stuck in a tree. deciding he was done for the day he went home. Ge might come back and try again tomorrow.

[Nira]

Hrm, first post is an introduction one, so it doesn't contribute to the points.

Repeated attempted, different forms of failure. A standard form of training.

+5

[geninjames]

5/10
Kaze Ya no Jutsu (Wind Arrow Technique)
Rank: "D"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: User is capable of breathing inwards and exerting outwards a large like arrow to pierce into the opponent's body.
Special: User takes in a deep breathe filling their lungs with air.
Drawback: Only one may be created at a time.
Description: The user molds chakra and breathes in. He or she then blows out and an arrow made of wind is shot from the user’s mouth. This arrow may be blocked as it is just a large consumption of wind, however it can not be deflected away. This means that the object must be large in size enough to defend from one against the wind. The size of the arrow is the size of the opponent's mouth with the length of three feet as it can travel up to the distance of twenty meters. This technique is used for short range to steer an opponent away from the user.
Limit: Must have the Wind Release


The next day in the woods James jumped around on tree branches trying to perform the technique. Inhaling he molded the chakra in himself firing it at a branch. The arrow disappeared when it got a foot away from the branch. James repeated severing the thin branch.

The performing of the Jutsu took more chakra than he intended. James molded less chakra, but made it more of an arrow shape inside his body trying to limit excess chakra loss. Blowing the arrow out it seemed like the veins weren't that good. The arrow was not directed in a proper manner causing it to miss its mark.

Trying again James focused more on the veins when molding. This led to the head being more like the end of a sharpened stick instead of an actual arrowhead. When release this was evident in a more piercing arrow the terminal velocity would be achieved much faster now. The tree it went through had a small hole, but a deep one.

Deciding that was enough for the day James stretched a little before deciding to head to look at missions.

[Nira]

+3

[geninjames]

8/10
Kaze Ya no Jutsu (Wind Arrow Technique)
Rank: "D"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: User is capable of breathing inwards and exerting outwards a large like arrow to pierce into the opponent's body.
Special: User takes in a deep breathe filling their lungs with air.
Drawback: Only one may be created at a time.
Description: The user molds chakra and breathes in. He or she then blows out and an arrow made of wind is shot from the user’s mouth. This arrow may be blocked as it is just a large consumption of wind, however it can not be deflected away. This means that the object must be large in size enough to defend from one against the wind. The size of the arrow is the size of the opponent's mouth with the length of three feet as it can travel up to the distance of twenty meters. This technique is used for short range to steer an opponent away from the user.
Limit: Must have the Wind Release

On the way to look at missions James spotted a practice dummy. The perfect opportunity to try out his new technique with proper application. The young shinobi inhaled molding his chakra into the desired trait, and exhaled missing the target due to imprecise lip movements. Focusing more on his lips he moved them in a puckering fashion feeling where he blew with his hands.

He tried for a second time inhaling the chakra. When he molded it in his chest he puckered his lips. Inside his mouth an arrowhead appeared as he exhaled sharply into the direction of of the dummy head. The arrow went throw the eye of the dummy making a shallow hole in the concrete behind.

[~Emi~]

+2, learned~

[geninjames]

Dogou hari no jutsu (Roar of Needles)
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: This attack is a cone area affect type attack. The user inhales air while forming the three seals. (It basically looks like they are going to perform Sauskes Katon no jutsu.) The user then exhales by roaring aloud in the direction they wish to attack in, damaging that area with a thousand or more needles.
Special: Handseals
Drawback: Multiple uses (such as 3-6 times of use) of this jutsu could cause the user to pass out from an irregular breathing pattern.
Description: A huge blast of air shoots out of the users mouth with a thousand or less chakra needles flying within it and fans out in a cone-like shape.
Limit: Must have Wind Release

James previously master the wind arrow jutsu preparing him for spitting out senbon like lyrics. As before with the the wind arrow jutsu he inhaled a large amount of air before performing handseals. That were required for the technique to work. What inside his body he could feel the senbon taking their shape. He tried to focus on toughening his insides, but a stray senbon punctured his stomach. James let out a quiver of pain releasing the air.

Recovering quickly He repeated the same as before with the gathering of chakra in his lower intestine. He blew out senbon at an irregular rate causing him to stop breathing for a few seconds. James decided to take a couple minutes resting before continuing.

This time he succesfully completed the technique, but only spit out five senbon. That simply was not enough for him he had to make more. James braced himself before inhaling a large amount keeping the senbon in his chest splitting them up into many smaller pieces and imbueing them with chakra. He passed out while holding his breath for the technique.

James awoke four hours later to motice thatcthe clearing seemed different. The target had been moved. James carried on with his training nonetheless. He created senbon into the air. Shhoting them around him.

James tried again performing the handseals then blowing out. A large mass of senbon went out of his mouth decimating the side of a tree. His smile of satisfaction went away when he say a rival villages ninja come from behind the tree with seven kunai.

[geninjames]

Bump

[Father 'Suke]

+4

Just not enough there fore a full 10. Now also as it is a C-rank you could have either messaged a staffer to get them to grade it or you could have continued making more than one post to elevate the grade as well. Up to you how you want to do it from here on.

[geninjames]

4/20
Dogou hari no jutsu (Roar of Needles)
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: This attack is a cone area affect type attack. The user inhales air while forming the three seals. (It basically looks like they are going to perform Sauskes Katon no jutsu.) The user then exhales by roaring aloud in the direction they wish to attack in, damaging that area with a thousand or more needles.
Special: Handseals
Drawback: Multiple uses (such as 3-6 times of use) of this jutsu could cause the user to pass out from an irregular breathing pattern.
Description: A huge blast of air shoots out of the users mouth with a thousand or less chakra needles flying within it and fans out in a cone-like shape.
Limit: Must have Wind Release

The ninja didn't look familiar. The headbands were missing signifying that they were rogue ninja. Dodging the kunai James reacted. "My lyrics cut deep like senbon, if you challenge my village then its real on." James performed the handseals forming the chakra into his lung he coated his throat with it.

"Oh no, this is impossibru" The rogue ninja yelled out in unison. They hadn't prepared for mad skillz such as those they assumed they were witnessing. To laymen such as these the handseals and way he presented himself made it seem nearly identical to a certain fire technique.

Inhaling James merged his chakra with the wind. Observing his surroundings James blew what he hoped to be senbon this time. To his surprise nothing happened. He then realized he had forgot to hold the seal.

"Oh hahahahahahahahahahaha, do you believe you can beat us with this puny technique?" The rogue nin motioned sharply with his arm many times.
"Ye-yeah boss good one." One of the six other ninjas said.
Turning his head to one side in a quick motion he replied with a loud and brash. "Thanks lackey."

The ninja enclosed on him. Frantically he tried again. This time he had more success in holding the air inside his body and compressing it into senbon. Holding the ram handseal he blew out. This time it was only a couple senbon and a gust of air.

The air blew the leader nins hair and on of the senbon grazed his cheek. Instead of brushing it off he reacted, overtly so. "Oh my god guys. MY HAIR!" The rogue nin fell over clutching his cheek. "We will beat you next time, CLOUD NINJA." He spit out the last bit in a his. "Boys take me away." The leader ordered.

"Ok boss." The other rogue nin said in unison picking up their boss and taking him away from the forest.

James thought about why his attempt was unsuccesful, but couldn't take hus mind iff of the encounter. "That was weird." He announced aloud.

[N A T S U M I]

+2; more actual training dear.

[geninjames]

Bruh, im illiterate i can't be doin dis


6/20


Dogou hari no jutsu (Roar of Needles)
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: This attack is a cone area affect type attack. The user inhales air while forming the three seals. (It basically looks like they are going to perform Sauskes Katon no jutsu.) The user then exhales by roaring aloud in the direction they wish to attack in, damaging that area with a thousand or more needles.
Special: Handseals
Drawback: Multiple uses (such as 3-6 times of use) of this jutsu could cause the user to pass out from an irregular breathing pattern.
Description: A huge blast of air shoots out of the users mouth with a thousand or less chakra needles flying within it and fans out in a cone-like shape.
Limit: Must have Wind Release


'That was odd' James thought to himself. He was weirded out by what happened, but he did not stop his training session. He became lost in the repetitive motion of performing handseals. The mere act of breathing in had become a sort of second nature to him due to the wind arrow technique that he had already mastered. The Roar of needles was different however. It required him to form his chakra into a thousand tiny slivers of air shaped like senbon.

This proved a difficult task at first. When the wind entered his body he began as normal forming it into a ovular shape before finalizing it down into the many senbon that would make it up later on. The batch of needles did not, much to his chagrin, turn out like he wanted them. The chakra pieces got tangled about preventing actually spitting it out correctly or effectively.

Attempting to learn from this James wondered why he did not get it that time. From his observation it was due to his body trying to involuntarily take a breath. He attempted again this time doing the same as before. He had better of an ability to hold his breath because he was a ninja so the few seconds it took to prime the technique were negligible at vest. Tgis time it was halfway decent with a large amount of senbon produced.

((Dudes got fast learner trait if that helps at all, and he isn't supposed to be completely dont this round.))

[Father 'Suke]

+2

A helpful tip from me is possibly include training in every paragraph and also making your posts two paragraphs longer.

[geninjames]

8/20 ((breh))

Dogou hari no jutsu (Roar of Needles)
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: This attack is a cone area affect type attack. The user inhales air while forming the three seals. (It basically looks like they are going to perform Sauskes Katon no jutsu.) The user then exhales by roaring aloud in the direction they wish to attack in, damaging that area with a thousand or more needles.
Special: Handseals
Drawback: Multiple uses (such as 3-6 times of use) of this jutsu could cause the user to pass out from an irregular breathing pattern.
Description: A huge blast of air shoots out of the users mouth with a thousand or less chakra needles flying within it and fans out in a cone-like shape.
Limit: Must have Wind Release

"Brah!!!!" James yelled as he got out of bed. He had been dreaming the night before about his failed attempt at molding the chakra correctly. He got up and in his government housing type room he breathed inward. As he breathed inward he could feel the air rushing to take its place. During this moment he attempted to perform the handsigns, but mucked one up. It seemed that the One he mucked up was very important as he blew the air out only to realize that the senbon was coming out sideways. He choked for a second, his throat was ripped up by the technique.

Thwarted he was, but he did not stop. He got up and drank some Oil. This helped the consistancy of his throat as he prepared again. The air was inhaled at the same time as the handseals performed. James winced at the pain that he felt as he did it, but it didn't deter him. On the contrary it gave him a rage that he used to forcefully blow out the senbon. He had formed them in his mouth contrary to what he was doing earlier. This time there was much more success. James spit out a couple dozen senbon into his wall.

This was however a construct of his rage, so he had to try and recreate his success multiple times. He formed the handseals as he did before and did the forming in the mouth the same, but for whatever reason he didn't produce a sizable number of senbon. He theorized that this was due to his lack of focus. He had a small problem with that.

James went to sleep early that day. Getting into his pajamas he slipped into bed. After a few hours of sleep and pretended he was being attacked. He woke, quickly Performing his handseals he concentrated on the forming of the senbon hiding his inhale as a gasp of surprise. He focused for a moment creating it in his mouth he blew out hard forcing a few senbon into the ceiling, though it wasn't satisfactory.

[Father 'Suke]

+7
You are getting better.

[geninjames]

((Just five more)) 15/20
Dogou hari no jutsu (Roar of Needles)
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: This attack is a cone area affect type attack. The user inhales air while forming the three seals. (It basically looks like they are going to perform Sauskes Katon no jutsu.) The user then exhales by roaring aloud in the direction they wish to attack in, damaging that area with a thousand or more needles.
Special: Handseals
Drawback: Multiple uses (such as 3-6 times of use) of this jutsu could cause the user to pass out from an irregular breathing pattern.
Description: A huge blast of air shoots out of the users mouth with a thousand or less chakra needles flying within it and fans out in a cone-like shape.
Limit: Must have Wind Release

James felt like he was almost there. He ran into the woods to attempt to get it down pact. Once surrounded by trees he continued running as he tried to go through the motions and inhaling he found that he couldn't get enough air for a thousand senbon. Inhaling, James tried to fill up his lungs as much as possible. This didn't take long before it started to make him cough. So, for hours on end he practiced inhaling as much air as possible to get enough to make a thousand senbon.

To try out his ability James staged a mock combat with him jumping from branch to branch attempting to do the technique. Mich to his chagrin while attempting to complete the jutsu he landed on the next destination which forced the air out. He fell over taking a hit to the knee before getting back up. "Lets try that again he said." He resumed to his hopping about and the same thing happened again.

Instead of trying again only to fail James decided to do something different. He, instead of hopping around trying to complete the technique, inhaled deeply and tried to hold it for as long as he could. This worked well for a time. He would try, then fail, then try again. Each time he got longer and longer on the time he could hold his breathe.

Deciding that it would be enough he performed the technique as he had earlier, but incorporated holding more air in. With his ninja training he was jumping from tree to tree performing the technique on wood targets strategically placed for the ninja of the village.

[Father 'Suke]

+7

[geninjames]

Yay for learning.

22/20

[geninjames]

Goutetsu no Kamae #1 (Strong Iron Stance #1)
Rank: "E"
Skill: TaiJutsu
Effect: A simple upright stance used with most Goutetsu 轟鉄 (Strong Iron) Practitioners.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture Standing with one arm behind their back and one extended, the user is ready for a quick strike with their fists and feet. This leaves them open for quick spins and jumps that will power their attacks.
Limit: Must learn from a Master of Goutetsu 轟鉄 (Strong Iron)

After the long bout of ninjutsu training James had used up most of his chakra. Instead of going home he just left to the Dojo of strong iron to practice tai-jutsu. A basic fundamental for any ninja. He was instructed to stand with one hand behind his back and one in front. This stance offered minimal security, but it was a pillar for learning the techniques to follow.

Doing as he was told he stood there.... before getting hit with a cane. Apparently he had been doing it wrong, and the blind deaf and mute instructor showed him again. Once again he repeated it, and once again he was smacked with a cane. James came to the conclusion that he was supposed to dodge the attack from that stance. So instead of getting whacked again James bent backwards to avoid the blow. This was followed by the cane promptly coming back down upon him.

"Hey! What was that for?" James yelled to the trifecta disabled instructor before realizing his mistake. "I'm sorry sensei." This time he spoke out of respect instead of being snarky. He reassumed the position and continued to dodge the methodical whaling of the cane.

As time went on he became more accustomed to moving in and out of the position. It became like a second nature preparing for a strike or a dodge. While to him it seemed like a silly pose, James continued the practice of holding the position for many hours.

[Nekomata Minh]

Pfffft silly pose. I`d like a little more details about how your character did what, how it effects them, and how they rebound from it. You know? Put some flair to it even though it is an E Rank. Other than that I feel as if you did a fairly good job. But, I will be cracking down on these ok?

+5 LEARNED