village gate training thread, invite only.

[shinzo-kori]

(NO ONE LISTENS TO HIM ANYWAYS, T-PAIN T-PAIN! I'm about to go to sleep....night -_- zzzzz)

[Umehara]

Honoo Kei (Flame Whip)
Rank: "C"
Description: Taking upon a source of flame, the user pulls it into their hand and then immediately snaps it forward. A whip made of purely of flames emerges from it. The whip has an elastic attribute, and can be as long as 5 feet. It lasts for one post for every 10 ninjutsu the user possesses, and burns upon a forcible impact.
Limit: Uchiha Technique

The Chuunin was reminded of the importance of his training, pulling himself away from his bed to sit up and pop the knuckles of his hands. His head tilted to the side, the peripheral vision caught view of a scroll that lay in the corner of the room. Coaxed to examine it, he placed either arm upon the side of the bed and pushed himself to stand. How it ached him to have to move from his comfortable position, languidly pursuing the contents of the scroll before elevating his gaze slightly. "Hmph..flame whips. We supposed to be Indiana Jones, now..?" he muttered. Tossing the parchment backwards, he had managed to memorize the contents that lay within. Atsuhiro forcefully threw back the door to the shack, brusquely moving out into the distance so as not to harm anything with the initial stages of the jutsu.

So had it been..standing in the midst of that nothingness, Atsuhiro began to manipulate the chakra flow of his body into a condensed material. In that position, the swift motion of it toward the palm would be more than an easy feat. The arm was outstretched afront him within only a matter of moments, a small ball of flame appearing betwixt his fingers. It crackled and turned to his very well as his eyes narrowed, the oceanic hues seeming to glimmer against the brilliance that was displayed from such a physical manifestation of power. The alternate hand quickly snapped toward the appendage at only a second's notice, and the true form of the jutsu would come to conclusion. "Katon..Honoo Kei." he muttered. Quickly engulfing the entire flame with his hand, the fingers would curl inward to envelope the flame in flesh. The ivory daggers upon each of his fingertips managed to press down to form crescents in his palms, the concentration of the utmost importance as he formed his instrument of firey destruction.

The Chuunin would thrust his arm to the side, thereafter reversing the direction and unleashing a maelstrom of flame that was birthed amongst the atmosphere. An elongated tendril of heat would crackle and spark to life, embers now dancing about the air as he whipped it in a full circle before thrusting the appendage downward, beckoning the weapon to follow suit. A magnificent pattern of flame began to dance about his very wrist, coiling outward until forming the essence of the very jutsu. Red...amber...crimson...it all contorted and twisted to his will, the Chuunin periodically swiping back and forth so as to give a wave of intensity to the immediate area. "Hmph...good enough." he stated. He broke out into a dash forward, his speed at an undeniably high degree as his legs worked expertly to keep his momentum at its maximum efficiency. Soon, the shinobi leaped forward, turning a full frontflip and beckoning the whip to his command.

It performed a spiral as the Chuunin's body rotated in mid-air, the intense waves of heat emanating from the manacle slowly causing the air to thicken. His feet pushed the sand upward as he would then land, the crackling whip of Katon essence dispersing from his grasp. Atsuhiro curled and uncurled his fingers in reassurance after its dissipation, ensuring that he would find no harm done to his frame as a result of performing such a magnificent display of manipulation. His ministrations would have to continue minutes later...but at this particular interval, the Chuunin would simply reflect upon the comprehension and application of such a jutsu.

In a quick transition did the feeling from before arrive yet again. Atsuhiro's body crackled with an unknown electricity, the heavens above beginning to part in wake of the power that would descend from the crown of his head to the soles of his feet. "What..?" he questioned. This was the only true response that he had to such a happening. As his gaze was elevated toward the skies, he could make out the faint visage of a beast. Suspended in animation, its very countenance seemed to call him..beckon his every will...forcefully snatching his soul from its depths and calling him forth to get on bended knee. "Soon..soon you shall liberate this world." it called. The Chuunin pinned both hands to his ears in an attempt to increase the coherency of such a statement...but the very presence perished before he could further inquire about the source of such a thing.

Genjutsu? ...No. The Uchiha quickly engaged the Sharingan Eyes, allowing him to perceive all that lay before him. His body turned to and fro, the head snapping from side to side in an attempt to rid himself of the annoyance that plagued him. Nothing came; Atsu withdrew the chakra from his eyes, the three tomoe vanishing from view as the blue essence returned. Truly, this magnificent force had to have been tormenting him for a reason. It spoke of prophecy, but most entities were spitting blasphemy from their mouths when talking in such a manner. A single tendril of electricity passed the fingertips thereafter, the Chuunin's eyes narrowing. This being..this unknown source...was teasing him.

[40]

[Hmph]

+9 <333
I still love the way you write XD

[Umehara]

Ooc:

Thank ye! -Salutes-

Ic:

As he stood out in that distance, Atsuhiro lifted his right arm toward the air yet again. The chakra manipulated..coaxed into moving up the appendage and settling upon his palm once more. He lowered his head for only a moment, the obsidian bangs falling in an unkempt fashion about his countenance as the flame was birthed once more. "Katon.." he whispered. It seemed to spiral down the arm before reversing direction, crackling and roaring before that sphere of firey elegance was once more placed into the center for his grasp. He quickly wrenched the arm downward thereafter, the hand encircling its own sphere and twisting it yet again. The Chuunin's teeth grit slightly in the wake of its power, all of the intensity presented yet again as that whip of flame was born.

Atsuhiro turned toward the distance and pulled one of his kunai from its holster, twirling it upon a finger for seconds before he would let it fly forward. "Now, then.." he began. The words trailing off, the Uchiha thrust his hand forward and watched as the firey manacle followed the projectile with the utmost ease of catching up in the middle of its propulsion. The speed with which he would do such a thing was by far an incredible feat, easily wrapping the hand of flame about the kunai's handle and pulling it backward in a quick snap of the appendage. So had it been...the projectile was sent hurling back toward him, a deep red appearing upon the handle to signify just how hot the whip had become. A dance would soon come into fruition as Atsu turned his body, his eyes never leaving the kunai in its frenzing, varying motions.

He was able to snap the whip in what appeared to be random fashions, either a horizontal or vertical swing allowing him to seize it before it could speed off in mid air. A reverse pull with the kunai wrapped up, and the object would be forcefully ripped from its path and alternate the direction in which it would fly. The legs were graceful here...positioning themselves and stepping with the utmost finesse, bending and straightening in conjunction with the small kata that he appeared to be doing. Atsu was sure to kick up sand in the moments he would pirouette, before precision came into play and allowed him to retrieve the very kunai that he was thrusting in multiple directions with the crack of the Katon whip. Finally, he would jump backward, the kunai beginning to fall from the skies onto the sand below.

"Now!" he exclaimed. Atsu lunged forward, his entire arm beckoning the whip to extend in a straight fashion so as to collide with the kunai and send it flying forward. Success..the end of the tendril of flame violently struck the kunai in the center of its frame, a multitude of sparks now flying in random directions as he'd send the kunai flying forward. The scream of it against the wind was defeaned only when it embedded itself into the wall of the shack, a crimson glow yet again causing an onlooker to realize just how hot it was to the touch. A shake of the arm, and the chakra was yet again released. It was all coming to a close..the jutsu would be his to claim, and he would be sure that it was comprehended in its entirety.

[41]

[Hmph]

+8
17/20

[Umehara]

[17/20]

It was coming to a close at this point. Atsuhiro ambled toward the shack now, his feet trudging along the endless mounds of sand as a single hand was placed into his pockets. His lips pursed together, the heat emitted from the kunai that was embedded in the establishment was too great an intensity to be tangible at that point. "Hmm..better get that out of there.." he muttered. A single hand was dropped down to his side now, his eyes scanning the distance before he turned and yet again placed his chakra into the palm. His epidermis seemed to brighten only slightly as he once again summoned the Katon element to do his bidding...forcefully allowing the chakra to escape from the flow within his person to manifestly burst forth in a radiant sphere.

He would allow the other hand to withdraw from its resting position thereafter, seizing the ball of fire that was slowly lifting from his grasp. It began to swirl before being clutched, the elongated whip of fire yet again free to do his bidding as he walked into the distance for a few paces. Expertly, he turned around and reared back with the hand that the whip was clinging to, an amazing velocity granted as it flickered forward and wrapped itself around the entirety of the kunai. It was almost laughable, watching as small embers began to catch upon the side of the shack..but they would easily be taken care of. For this interval of the training, his obstacle was to merely remove the heated kunai from its place.

The Chuunin wrenched backward with the powerful tendril of Katon proportion, the metal following suit as it was freed from its prison. Small pieces of wood were ripped from the sides, though nothing that would be noticeable to any who would come upon it...at least, if they were not of true observation. He turned and pulled a slot in his bag open as the kunai flipped and twirled, securing it in the slot as it neatly fell into place upon his side. Afterward, the Uchiha would close it and thrust his limb languidly afront himself. A small crackle of fire ensued, and the whip would be no more. "Hmph...too easy." he muttered.

[42]

[Hmph]

+3

Learned

[shinzo-kori]

[32/70]

Jai continued on his training with the tornado while practicing moving around it. He watched closely to all of its movements, every once in a while getting burned by the flames that would blow his way. Jai was making progress, and now he had to take a break and try and get himself together again. He was feeling light headed, but it was really the fact that he was placing chakra into the tornado while dodging it at the same time. He sat back down in the sand and closed his eyes, listening to the breeze of the desert sand and waiting for his head to get back in place. Jai looked up into the blue sky while the sun heated up his skin. He took in deep slow breathes, and when he was ready he placed his hands together. He focused his chakra once again, focusing on the wind and fire release and then got ready to do the jutsu.

He placed his hands together and kept his eyes closed as he created the handseals. “Rat, Dog, Horse, Rabbit, Dragon, Boar, Horse.” Then he felt that warm sensation in his right hand. This time he did not hesitate to take in the large gulp of air and hold it in while the flames grew. The flames in his hand grew as he began to twirl them along the surface of the sand to start a small flaming whirlpool. Then after mixing the right amount of chakra into his lungs, he blew out the air into the center of the flaming spiral. The wind caused the flames to spin even faster, and seconds later the flaming tornado grew about four feet wide. Jai quickly pushed it forward away from him and jumped back to watch the damage it would cause. It kicked of sand all over the place, and it even grew an extra five feet for a total of nine.

Jai studied its movements, as the wind would push along the side of it and cause the tornado to spin off to the side. Jai was beginning to see the patterns the tornado made as certain winds would push it. Jai ran over to it and decided to practice holding the tornado with his chakra, and fighting around it without getting hit. Jai practiced his Caporiea as he avoided the tornado. He would first fall to his hands and lift his legs into the air, quickly pulling to the side to spin off and blow wind in the direct of the tornado. It wasn’t enough to push the tornado away, but it did lean it back so it wouldn’t burn Jai. Then he would bend his arms down and swing his legs around from behind him in front of him. As his legs rubbed the surface of the sand, it kicked sand and wind into the bottom of the tornado causing the bottom to move back and the top doing the same soon after.

Then Jai pushed up onto his feet and waited for the tornados next move. Still having a good control over the tornado with his chakra, he had a few more minutes to practice moving around it. The tornado pushed back towards Jai and almost hit him, but he quickly dodge rolled to the right and began to bounce around ready for the next move. The tornado pushed towards Jai again, but Jai dodge rolled to its side and faced it as it continued down its path. Jai pulled his arm back, and using his Hi Kobushi techniques, threw flames at the tornado forcing it to continue forward. He got better at this, but now he needed to take a break for the fact that he had a large headache. As he let go of the tornado, he sat down onto the ground and closed his eyes. Well, most powerful techniques too a lot of work, but he was getting there.

[Satu Akira]

+6
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((38/70))

[Kinz]

Rowidren saw Jai training some new technique out in the distance. The two leaf nin had grown accustom to training fits, throught this stay in sand. Rowidren hoped it would end soon, but who was to know. Jai was actually doing what seemed to be intense training at the moment. "Hey Jai. Hows things." Rowidren didn't want to disturb him, but He was at a loss for something to do. "Listen, I can't find anything good to train in the shack, you got any ideas?' Rowidren asked this with a twinge of hopefullness. Really he had been working very hard over the past few days on his summoning, but now he needed to get back in touch with what he truely loved. Ninjutsu.

[shinzo-kori]

Jai sat in the sand, sweat drenching off his chest from all of the hard training he was doing. It was quite intense with all of the heat and doing a fire release jutsu at the same time. He turned around when he heard Rowidren's voice and then pulled himself up to his feet. So he wanted to learn a new technique, well Jai had the perfect one for him. He smiled as he dusted his hands off."So you want to learn a jutsu from old Jai huh? haha ok then I got one." Jai turned to the side and took in a large breath in his lungs. Then he began to mix his own chakra into his lungs for the jutsu to actually work. Then he released his breath and from his mouth fired a large verison of the wind arrow that had a arrow head shaped as a drill. It cut the air in a loud screaming noise and collected sand around it as it blew miles away till it hit the surface."Called a drill arrow...." Jai said as he picked up his bag and found the scroll for the jutsu."...Here it is, good luck. Maybe you can use it on my new jutsu as a target for your training."

Kaze Kiri no Jutsu (Wind Drill Technique)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B Rank
Effect: ---
Description: The user creates another arrow from his mouth that is fired from the mouth. This time though the arrow is in the shape of a drill, much like the arrow Kidoumaro uses in his last attack against Neji. The drill passes through stone and tree but once it hits the ground it dispels. This arrow can drill through a person.
Limit: Wind Release

(sorry for taking so long, got caught up in the C-Box....you can understand lol XD)

[shinzo-kori]

Katon Gufuu- (Fire Tornado)
Rank: B
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user makes the hand signs for the jutsu. Then the user does a fire based jutsu such as Goukakyuu no Jutsu, then the user uses more chakra and makes wind take the fire and the wind then begins to twirl the fire around and round until eventually it is a swirling vortex of doom and terror. The fire tornado will last for as long as the user has the chakra to sustain it.

Genin: 2 posts 5 ft

Chunin: 4 posts 10 ft

Jounin: 8 posts 20 ft

Kage: 16 posts 40 ft

Special: rat, dog, horse, rabbit, dragon, boar, horse
Drawback: The user will feel light headed from the chakra loss and when the user does this jutsu after it is a tornado even the user can not control where it goes or what it burns all the user can do is control how big it is or how fast it spins. It may even go towards the user and hit the user instead of its opponent.
Description: This is in the opponent’s eyes (it is a boy). He will see the user making hand signs and the user blowing fire out but he won’t see the hand signs being made from behind the fire then he will see the fire being lifted up and start twirling around how big it gets is chose by the user.
Limit: Must Have Katon: Fire Release must have fuuton: wind release

[38/70]

After giving Rowidren a jutsu to study, he got back to his vigorous training. He sat back down in his spot and crossed his legs, slowly placing his hands together to meditate. Then he focused on his chakra, as each chakra point in his body fired up, he began the handseals for the jutsu. “Rat, Dog, Horse, Rabbit, Dragon, Boar, Horse.” Then he felt a warmth in his hand that soon turned into a flame. As the flames enlarged in his hand, he began to take in a deep breath and mix his chakra into his lungs. Then he held his breath and began to twirl the flames around in a spiraling motion that would send the flames to the ground. After the flames formed a small flaming whirlpool on the ground, Jai released his long breath and blew out the wind chakra into the center of the flames. The flames then began to spin off into a much larger tornado within ten seconds. It was quite amazing how quickly he could form the tornado now.

Jai realized it was to close to stand next to, and pushed it off. The tornado was about nine feet wide and ten feet tall. It scared the desert sand as the sand blew out into the sky rapidly. Jai then controlled his chakra to let the tornado continue its powerful movement along the sand. Jai stood back and watched as his jutsu spread along the desert sand, every once in a while nearing himself. If it ever got close, Jai would dodge roll to the side and avoid the flames, practicing his Taijutsu while avoiding it. He did this for about ten minutes till he became really light headed from holding it. He let go of the tornado and fell to the sand taking in deep breaths from all of the training he was putting himself through. Jai looked up into the sky and placed his hand over his face to block the sun from his face. ”When will we be able to go home….” Jai said to himself in a rather disappointed voice out loud.

He didn’t focus on whether or not Rowidren heard him though. He had to get back into his training, so he placed his hands together again and closed his eyes. Focusing on his chakra was the most important thing to do if he wanted to keep the tornado flow. He felt like he was getting great control over his chakra, and now he could last even longer when holding his chakra. He moved a large amount of chakra into his hands and began the string of handseals. “Rat, Dog, Horse, Rabbit, Dragon, Boar, Horse.” The handseals were much quicker, and he soon felt the heat in his right hand. Then Jai began to swirl the flames along the sand as he took in a deep breath. He held his breath and let his chakra mix into his lungs to mold the wind release, and then he blew out the wind into the center of the small flaming whirlpool and watched it grow in both weight and width. After it got to the point where it could do damage, Jai pushed it forward.

Jai watched the wind patterns, judging the tornado’s next move. It was pretty easy after a while of doing it, like he could see the future. Jai would dodge roll to the side to avoid the tornado, and then roll up onto his arms into a spin that threw his legs towards the flames. The wind from his legs pushed the tornado slightly away as he flipped back onto his feet and focused on its next movement. The tornado then rushed at him as Jai quickly span off to the side and threw the back of his arm towards the flames, letting his own Hi Kobushi techniques blow flames into it. Then Jai pushed off and did a backwards handspring, getting about a five foot distance between himself and the tornado. The bottom of the tornado began to push towards Jai again, and that meant that the rest of it would also follow so Jai got ready to avoid at anytime. Jai easily moved around it for the last time before letting the tornado go. He was tired and felt that he had deserved a break.

[nokemono]

+8

[Umehara]

Bunryuu Funshutsu (Cracking Eruption)
Rank: "C"
Description: Upon completing a series of hand seals, the user stomps their foot on the ground hard, in which tiny cracks will appear and spread out. The cracks will move quickly and can reach up to ten feet before releasing large gouts of flames. The blasts can be controlled by the user, in which they can direct the blasts with their chakra.
Limit: Uchiha Technique

The Chuunin once again pulled himself from his dreams, waking and sitting at the edge of the bed. The confirmation of the KazeKage had not been returned, and he began to wonder just what the hell had been taking so long. As he rose to his full height, the rather muscular frame of Uchiha Atsuhiro dragged itself to the door. He was fully clad at this point, the afternoon having presented no amusement. Thus, he layed there and napped until the late night when he could once again resume his training. The door to the shack was unlatched soon after he had wiped the sleep from his eyes, stepping out into the distance yet again to the endless mounds of sand that rested all around his person. It seemed as though there was an eternity of the stuff...he could not see the shrubbery...the lush emerald of gaia...flora and fauna could not exist here, and this put him in an isolated mood...normally, such a thing would have proven to be beneficial. This, however, was a forced realization that he would not be leaving the premises until he chose...the consequences, he figured, would merely have to come later.

He had been gazing over yet another scroll before the nap had taken place, another Katon elemental jutsu memorized and put to the test as he began to gather a massive amount of chakra. It swirled about his character as he leaned forward now, the arms closed inwardly to prevent too much of a force against its binding to his frame. "Cracking..." he muttered, his legs beginning to pulse...courses of his essence quickly shutting down only when reaching his foot...and there, he would unleash brutality upon the edifice in which he stood. He rose the right foot only slightly, the sole of the shoes he wore dragging sand before it fell off from the sides and fell lifelessly back down into the pile that it had originated from. The Sharingan Eyes were immediately activated upon the success of feeling that surge of power through the appendage, each obsidian tomoe glowing ominously in light of the attack.

"Eruption Jutsu!" he finished. As the very words came spilling valiantly from his lips, he would stomp down upon the ground as the mighty beast would when claiming territory. None would trample upon his holy ground without some sort of recognition, and the sand's rumbling signified that Atsuhiro had accomplished something of similar effect. Entire mounds of the grains were pushed aside and uplifted as it travelled along the ground, its next set of sequences powered only by the perfected use of chakra. The Chuunin watched as a single, massive erupton of flame proportion found its way from underneath the ground, exploding and hurling the hidden mounds into the air to be picked apart by the wind and dragged along. Atsu would weave his chakra in and out of the cracks as they continued to dance along, a chain reaction similar to multiple gas stations to the fire setting off a cataclysmic amount of damage ensuing.

His attempt was a success, he figured. The area seemed to calm down minutes after he had engaged in the jutsu, his foot feeling a slight tinge of pain. He would have to watch how he slammed it against the ground, or he would eventually be one of those that was crippled, bound to a wheelchair indefinitely. That, he was not too fond of. He began to sit amidst the sand now, mouth agape as a strong yawn proceeded forth from his person. Strange...the sand below appeared to be rising up and off of the ground without reason. Small grains of the material could be seen wading throughout air here and there, these intervals short-lived as he watched the sand once again settle. The urge for sanguine measure was growing stronger in him...could it, perhaps, been the foreign presence he had detected not so long ago?

Taking precaution, Atsuhiro stood to full height and pushed himself into the Iron Fist stance. If there were powerful genjutsu at work here, he would be the one to disband it in its entirety. The crimson gaze of the Sharingan was unwavering in ferocity as he silently waited....for an opponent that would never come.

[43]

[Yun.]

+9

[Umehara]

[9/20]

Moments would pass before the Chuunin came to rest, standing straight up. The right arm hovering for seconds, he used it to scratch the back of his head in pure confusion. One thing was for certain: His expressions...his very character..they were all at their peak. The Uchiha was actually making his emotions known. It was as if he was forced into sociable degree to those about him...but the task at hand was to gain power...and whatever he could of it. That being noted, the shinobi once again settled and spread his legs a good shoulder-width apart. Bending them at the knee, the head would yet again remain parallel to the ground as he stared out into the vastness of what was called the night. The oblivion that rested out there gave him a sense of serenity: At least he would be cast into an eternal home should he have wanted to give up the claim to his own life then and there.

The chakra swelled once more. Atsuhiro would begin to beckon it to the surface once more, as mother nature did when the winds were to blow past in a fluctuating pattern. Each strand was carefully woven and intricately categorized, fitting perfectly to bring the Chuunin's ability to an abrupt awakening. The success of such a thing was purely uncommon, most other shinobi wasting their reserves to attempt to gain the upper hand. This would not be so with him. Atsu's chakra would yet again burst forth into the legs, passing down the hamstrings and creating a mild sensation against his ankles as he stood there. There was no need to state his jutsu this time: It was clear as day what he was attempting to do, small embers seeping and crackling from the very fabrics of his clothing before he rose his foot slightly higher this time. The elevation was rather miniscule in comparison to what he was capable of, but without the proper precautions the jutsu would be seen coming from "miles away".

Atsuhiro resolved to step forward with the mighty jutsu this time, his arms folding over the abdomen in that casual way as his foot pounded into the ground with force. A titanic wave of fire would thus spread forth now, the inconsistencies within the ground slowly spanning outward in no definite manner. The Uchiha manipulated his chakra for only a breath's notice..gathering the masses of energy and reaching forward with his power to lay explosions of fire in almost every direction. They would seep out of the ground in the form of a torrential wave of chakra, molding and spreading outward until a sensational display of ferocity was given. As he focused upon the points that he would attack first...it was all becoming clear to him. Even the sand itself began to rise from its place as he stood there, circling him yet again as he began to comprehend..to understand...to accept.

Once satisifed, Atsuhiro allowed the flames to erupt in the mightiest of fashions toward the skies that loomed overhead. Not even the constant blink of the stars above were as brilliantly lit as this place, the Chuunin's chakra dissipating only after the final explosion had taken place. Atsuhiro stood upward in the wake of such power...the heat waves rising from the ground causing a bit of fatigue to cross his person. Though this jutsu was fairly easy to perform...the edifice below had to have been suffering some type of damage, if any. The Chuunin resolved to mark his footsteps, or what he could of them..moving into the distance and leaving rather gargantuan imprints upon the sand to go noticed by noone. Breathing calculated and relaxed once more...Atsuhiro resumed the tedious task of mastering yet another jutsu of this element.

[44]

[shinzo-kori]

[46/70]

He lay out on the hot sun with his head rested on his folded up shirt. His eyes closed and relaxed as he got in a little rest. It was a very tiresome job he was placed to do, and he just wanted to go home. Well till then, training would be the only thing to do till he would be allow out of this hell hole. He pulled himself up and wiped the sand off his hands as he stood up. He walked a little further from the gate and to some more hilly terrain. He slid down a hill into a sand dune and placed his hands together as he slid. He focused his chakra into his hands and created the handseals for the jutsu. “Rat, Dog, Horse, Rabbit, Dragon, Boar, Horse.” Then a rush of heat came to his hand as he reached the bottom of the dune. The flames quickly grew allowing Jai to begin his normal flaming whirlpool at the bottom of the dune. Then he took in a deep breath and began to mix in a large amount of chakra into his lungs and held it there.

Then he blew out the wind release into the center of the whirlpool and watched as the flames grew larger. Then that small tornado quickly turned into a large one that blew flames all over the place. The Tornado was ten feet wide, and rather close to Jai who was still climbing the top of the steep dune. As if caught in quick sand, the tornado began to spin so fast that it pulled in the sand from under Jai’s feet. A sudden fear came over Jai, and for some odd reason that fear kept him pumping out chakra. He was trying to use it to pull himself up against the grains of sand, but the tornado sucked it up as he tried to get away. Of course he had no idea that that was the reason he couldn’t end the jutsu, so he had to find another option. He decided to slide down with the hill, but eventually the tornado would wear off…..at least he hoped. He began to skid along the slops of the dune trying to get up going sideways.

Jai still could not reach the top, which was about twelve feet from where he was. He had a distance about the same from him and the tornado at the bottom of the dune, so chances were equal. He was trying to think of ways to get out as he skipped around the circle of the dune, and during that time the sand was beginning to pile up. He was also very light headed, but he knew that if he were to stop, he would die of his own jutsu. He continued running up the side of the dune in hopes that an idea would come to him. He wanted training on avoiding the jutsu, but not getting himself in a trap almost impossible to get out of. The mental note he had made to himself also came back, “Learn Great Breakthrough.” Jai thought to himself as he continued up the side of the dune. He couldn’t take it anymore, so he decided to use as many jutsu he could possibly think of to stop the tornado.

He continued running up the side of the dune, but at the same time created different handseals to make different jutsu to get himself out of this predicament. His first idea was to the Vortex Sphere and electric based attack. Of course he had no idea of what would happen, but he had to try so he created the handseals. A large vortex surrounded him and the tornado, and for a moment it seemed as time slowed down in this vortex, as he saw almost every grain of sand blow into the sky from the tornado. The amazing thing he noticed was the speed of the bottom of the tornado that moved at fast pace even with the events slowed. ”That’s it!” Jai yelled out loud as he let go of the sphere and continued to scale along the side of the dune. He took in a large breath of air and held it for a good fifteen seconds before aiming a wind drill directed towards the bottom of the tornado. It was a direct hit, and it also ended the tornado stopping the flow of the sand towards the bottom of the dune. It was a real close call, but now he was drained of his strength. He fell asleep on the side of the dune with his hands title tied together.

[Umehara]

+7

[shinzo-kori]

(thanks, I think Yun is ignoring me on purpose, I have no idea why but its getting annoying. I didn't do anything to him cuz I only speak to him when I need tp's.....weird :/)

[Nira]

(Actually we are chatting on YIM. No one is ignoring you...)

Jai: Void, I'm way too late

Atsuhiro: +10