Han Takedaya

[ironmaiden]

Basic Information



Name: Han Takedaya

Bloodlimit: None

Height: 167cm / 5.4ft

Weight: 63kg / 138 pounds

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Alignment: Neutral Good

Birth Country: Fire

Village: Leaf

Special:

[/b]-Water Release(Release)
  -5x Unknown
 
-TaiJutsu Specialist
  -6x Unknown

-GenJutsu Non-Specialist
  -4x Uknown

-Clan Non-Specialist[/ul]         -4x Uknown

    
Weapons


Primary Weapon:

Secondary Items:

     -Utility Belt Type 2 (Overview)

Character Depth

Personality:

Appearance:

        



Background:

         
      

[ironmaiden]

Techniques

Freebies:
-Water Release(Release)
-Flame-Touched (Trait)
-Storm-Touched (Trait)
-Water-Touched (Trait)
-Air-Touched (Trait)
-Courageous (Trait)

Traits

Air-Touched
Rank: "C"
Skill: Chakra Trait
Effect: User shares an affinity with Elemental Air.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: User gains a trait bonus of Damage Resistance of +10 Armour Points against creatures and attacks with the Wind type. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.

-Courageous
Rank: "C"
Skill: Combat Trait
Effect: User's childhood was brutal, but they persevered through force of will and faith.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: No matter how hard things go, the user knew they can make it through as long as they kept a level head. The user gains a +2 trait bonus on Saves against fear effects. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.


-Flame-Touched
Rank: "C"
Skill: Chakra Trait
Effect: User's share an affinity with elemental fire.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: User gains a trait bonus of Damage Resistance of +10 Armour Points against creatures and attacks with the Fire type. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.

-Water-Touched
Rank: "C"
Skill: Chakra Trait
Effect: User's share an affinity with elemental water.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: User gains a trait bonus of Damage Resistance of +10 Armour Points against creatures and attacks with the Water type. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.


-Storm-Touched
Rank: "C"
Skill: Chakra Trait
Effect: User's share an affinity with elemental lightning.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: User gains a trait bonus of Damage Resistance of +10 Armour Points against creatures and attacks with the Lightning type. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.

Techniques
Kirigakure no Jutsu (Hidden Mist Skill)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A Skill where a user uses the water around them to create a massive mist to fill around the user.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: A skill which creates a very dense fog that descreases the surrounding visibility to near zero. It produces an environment perfect for a silent assassin who follows an opponent through sound. This mist can not be blown away by any type of Wind Jutsu.
Limit: Water Release

Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu (Water Clone)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited; however, it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state. When first learned the user is capable of having or capable of creating up to Five Clones. Each time learned the user learns this technique the number of Clones is capable of increasing by one. The maximum amount of clones is Ten for the Difficulty Class of D Rank. For each Difficulty Rank Increase the number increases by five of maximum but learning is still one per learned.
Limit: Water Release

Suiton – Suirou no Jutsu (Water Prison)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A Technique that may be used in order to trap an opponent by creating a prison made of water. The water is used so that the opponent may drown within the water if the opponent does not know how to escape forth.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bushin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.
Limit: Water Release

Suiton - Teppodama
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: Allows a user to shoot a ball of water out of their mouth.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: The Teppodama is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does some hand seals which then causes a a big ball of water to come from the users mouth and then hit their target.
Limit: Water Release

Suiton: Tottei No Jutsu (Water Release: Art of the Breakwater)
Rank: "D," "C," "B," "A," "S"
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user creates a wave of water in front of them to ward off techniques from the front.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: User must know the same level of this technique as the technique they wish to affect. For the user to block a Fire and Lightning techniques, the user must know this technique one rank above the technique they wish to block.
Description: The user performs this technique right after they perform the handseals for it, the user will whip their hands up into the air and have them meet near the level of their head, creating a sort of "v" or wedge shape in the air. Once this is done, water will rise up from below the user to create this same shape. This is done just as a long or medium range technique is flying towards the user, this technique will cut the technique in half so that the two sides fall harmlessly on either side of the user. This technique works in steps, if the user wishes to cut a "D" level water technique, the user must know the "D" rank version if this technique, and so on.
Limit: Water Release

[Coal]

Need a bit more personality, around 3-5 paragraphs is the required. Appearance could be fleshed out more as well, perhaps 2 more full paragraphs. History should also be 3-5 paragraphs in length, more if you're feeling froggy. Since nobody memorizes everything, it's always nice to put the full description of your traits as well, just for convenience sake.

[ironmaiden]

Done C:

[Seira Kimura]

To add onto what Coal said, you also have a 13,000 Ryo primary allowance that you could spend on more primary weapons, you've only used 4,000 of it, so you could use 9,000 more. These don't only have to be main weapons, but can be any main item.

Moving onto secondaries, you'll want to add which of the 15 slot items you're taking. They're all listed in this thread. To go along with this, you might want to add the full overview of the items just to be on the safe side.

You also get six freebies, so you can take another release, perception, stance, skill, or trait. You'll want to mark what rank of Suiton: Tottei No Jutsu you have, either with a underline, italic, or something, just to let staff know, and to remind you which rank you have!

[ironmaiden]

Fixed everything.
Except that I'm satisfied with the amount of allowance ryo I spent.
Thanks for the help c:

[Father 'Suke]

Just a few things here:

• I want to see more in all of your writing sections. The paragraphs be looking on the small side and you need to feed them some pork and beans.
  
• In your specials you have certain things listed that do work, however the part that bothers me is the mention of swordplay. You don't have any sword stances therefore you can still use a sword, just you won't have techniques or anything. Now, my suggestion is to do as I put below for you supplied in the quotes.
  
• Some of your techniques have more ranks to them than you quoted in. I suggest returning the original quoted technique and just bolding or underlining the ranks of the multi-ranked jutsu you know. I quoted the techniques down below for you. You also must start the lowest rank possible in multi-ranks and learn your way up, for you that'd be the D-rank version of this technique.
  
• In your primary weapons section where you have "A rather old-looking but well manufactured katana" you can move that to be directly above the sword quoted in or beside the spot that says "(Overview)" or even in your appearance, just don't have it on its own little world because then it appears as though you have a second weapon without an overview. Also know you have 9000 more Ryo of primary items you may spend.
  

-NinJutsu Specialist
Mark in your 6 bullets, they don't all have to be filled in, just put in the releases you know in here. 4 of them you can master while 2 you cannot.
-TaiJutsu Specialist [Katana swordfighting]
First, deleted the crossed out part, then mark in your 6 bullets, they don't all have to be filled in, just put in the fighting styles you know in here, as you have none my suggestion is to look through our index for taijutsu and find some you like and mark them as future. However again, you don't have to mark them in at all yet until you actually find one you want to learn. 4 of them you can master while 2 you cannot.
-GenJutsu Non-Specialist
Mark in your 4 bullets, they don't all have to be filled in, just put in the perceptions you know in here. 2 of them you can master while 2 you cannot.
-Clan Non-Specialist
Mark in your 4 bullets, they don't all have to be filled in, just put in the clans you know in here. 2 of them you can master while 2 you cannot.

Suiton: Tottei No Jutsu (Water Release: Art of the Breakwater)
Rank: "D," "C," "B," "A," "S"
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user creates a wave of water in front of them to ward off techniques from the front.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: User must know the same level of this technique as the technique they wish to affect. For the user to block a Fire and Lightning techniques, the user must know this technique one rank above the technique they wish to block.
Description: The user performs this technique right after they perform the handseals for it, the user will whip their hands up into the air and have them meet near the level of their head, creating a sort of "v" or wedge shape in the air. Once this is done, water will rise up from below the user to create this same shape. This is done just as a long or medium range technique is flying towards the user, this technique will cut the technique in half so that the two sides fall harmlessly on either side of the user. This technique works in steps, if the user wishes to cut a "D" level water technique, the user must know the "D" rank version if this technique, and so on.
Limit: Water Release

[ironmaiden]

I think I fleshed everything up a bit and fixed all the mistakes I did.
Thanks for letting me know.

[👺 Usiel]

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2|3.

[Father 'Suke]

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