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[Gohan]

Name: Gohan
Age: 21
Gender: M
Desired Position: Assistant
Experience

Role-Play Experience and/or Event

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Kaishaba
Animal hunting
Hella lame missions
Me sucking at life[/ul]Additional Comments

 

[Solus]

Yeap, I see it, I remember you doing quite a bit before the break, but since there are almost no recent substantial posts of you helping out I'm afraid I'm going to have to ask you if you could please answer me these questions three?

1) Could you graqde this bio?

Name: Keith
Bloodlimit: Ryuugan
Height: 5'0''
Weight: 90
Age: 12
Gender: Male
Alignment: Neutral Good
Birth Country: Konoha
Village: Rain
Special:

Ninjutsu Specialist

• Water Release
  
• Fire Release
  
• Earth Release

Taijutsu Specialist

Primary Weapon:

• Calm Emotions
  Rank: "C"
  Type: Deception Ritual
  Effect: User is able to calm the emotions of those around him within a certain range.
  Special: To perform: 1 minute; Duration: Until Discharged
  Drawback: ---
  Description: User perform this ritual while speaking. When user completes the ritual, non-hostile humanoid creatures within 10 meters of the user, other than those the user excludes from the ritual’s effect, become calm and reasonable. The ritual grants a +10 ritual bonus to Acting checks, Intimidate checks, and Evidence Analysis when Gathering Information from a person checks made against the affected creatures.
  Limit: Must be a Ritualist for Deception Rituals.
  Cost: Market Price: 12,000 Ryo Performing Price: 9,000 Ryo
  

• Cloak Type 1 (Overview)
  Rank: "C"
  Type: Main, Tailor, Slot Holder, Holds 5 Slots (5 for Items of Scroll Length), Cloak/Harness
  Effect: A Cloak that holds an amount of items inside without giving a hint that the cloak may actually hold items inside.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: ---
  Description: Picture A Harness and Cloak that attaches to one another. This harness is attached to the chest to be held up right that have long strips of leather reaching down to the cloak that attaches to the end of the cloak. Consider each strip to be a thick belt that attaches to the chest harness. Each harness has 5 pouches that holds 1/2 a slot each. These pouches are scroll length so they are able to hold knives, senbon, kunai and other items that are the same length as a scroll. This Cloak only has 2 belts that have a total of 5 slots to carry items inside. When hands are hidden inside user gains a +10 circumstance bonus to Sleight of Hand and Pick Pocket.
  Limit: These type of items may be bought inside any Tailor Shop.
  Cost: 900 Ryo
  

Secondary Weapons:

• 5 flash grenades - 5 Slots
  
• 20 Kunai - 10 Slots

Non-Weapon Items:

Book: Textbook: Volume II: Appraisals
Rank: "B"
Type: Main, Book, Reference
Effect: Volume II of The Encyclopedia of Loremaster Linus Winterguest pertaining to Appraisals.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Page count: 470 pages. The book is divided into categories and explains what to look for in appraising various items to determine their value. It grants a -20 Competence Bonus to Appraisal checks.
Limit: These These items may be bought inside any Special Book Shop. 5% chance finding.
Cost: 13,000 Ryo

Personality:

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NinJutsu Techniques:

Water Release

Suichuu (Underwater)
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Allows the user stay underwater for some time.

Difficulty Class
D Rank Difficulty Class - 20 minutes
C Rank Difficulty Class - 40 minutes
B Rank Difficulty Class - 80 minutes
A Rank Difficulty Class - 120 minutes
S Rank Difficulty Class - 180 minutes
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: After returning to surface the user must rest half of the time used underwater. As example, if the user has stayed under for 20 minutes, he’ll have to rest 10 minutes before the jutsu can be used again.
Description: Simple technique used by channeling chakra to mouth, lungs, ears and eyes. With chakra moved to mouth and lungs the user gathers air from the water and is able breath underwater, chakra guided to ears protects from the aching caused by pressure, lenses of chakra protecting eyes work like swim goggles.
Limit: Anyone can learn it, the techinque doesn’t even need a scroll, smart ninjas should be able to figure out the process on their own.

Suiton - Kokuun no Jutsu (Black Clouds)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A technique in which a user creates a form of black clouds that may be used in conjunction with a Fire type of technique do to the flamible components.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: This is a water based technique. After forming the necessary hand seals, a black mist will emit from the user’s body and rise into the sky. Black clouds will form, releasing a flammable rain of oil onto the targets. The oil is easily flammable and can cause Katon techniques to backfire, hurting the Katon user with the technique instead. Affects Katon attacks used after this technique is used and lasts for two turns or until a Katon technique is used that burns the oil.
Limit: Water Release

Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu (Water Clone)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited; however, it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state. When first learned the user is capable of having or capable of creating up to Five Clones. Each time learned the user learns this technique the number of Clones is capable of increasing by one. The maximum amount of clones is Ten for the Difficulty Class of D Rank. For each Difficulty Rank Increase the number increases by five of maximum but learning is still one per learned.
Limit: Water Release

Deido Nohara no Jutsu (Mud Field)
Rank: D
Skill:Ninjutsu
Effect:Causes the area(10m x 10m) around the user, given that it is some sort of sand, dust, dirt, or weak stone, to become mud.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: It doesn’t work in certain environments, such as tile and metallic floors.
Description:After the hand signs are performed, the user slams his/her hands into the ground. If the environment allows it, the area around the user will become a thick and heavy mud. No chakra is required to maintain the state of the area.
Limit: Earth Release, Water Release

Fire Release

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Rank: "C" "B" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The user is capable of performing a few handseals in which gives them the capability of blowing a large body of fire in size of a large sphere that has great fire proportions and explosive capabilities.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: Depending on the Rank, is dependent on how strong or how much the user is capable of doing with the Goukakyuu no Jutsu.
Description: The user quickly performs a few handseals. The user then places the hand over their mouth creating a small like circle. This technique in turn is then to help the user control the great flame. The use then blows out and creates a large fireball that twice the size of a normal human body. When the "C" Rank version is first learned the user is only capable of blowing out the Great Fireball that is cannot be moved or go anywhere else. This also means that the technique does not explode in a fiery explosion, but burns greatly to anyone that is caught within the technique. When the user learns the "B" Rank version then the user is capable blowing the Great Fireball into the distance, sending it away from the use it to hurl towards the very opponent. This technique is only capable of going into a straight line and this is capable of having the size three times the size of a human body. This technique when launched at an opponent then becomes dangerous because at this point the technique can explode causing damage that is even more devastating.
Limit: Must have the Fire Release[/ul]

GenJutsu Techniques:

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TaiJutsu Techniques:

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2) A member submitted the following custom technique, what is your verdict?

[Name] Karite no Jutsu (Hunting Hand Technique; AKA Reaper Technique)
[Rank] “A” Rank
[Type] Genjutsu
[Effect] Shadows within the vicinity of the user transform themselves into demonic hands with claws which hunt down and attack the target inducing fear and pain.
[Special] “Handseals”
[Drawback] Once used, the user cannot use any other Shadow Perception techniques for a following turn.
[Description] Once the technique is completed, all shadows within 50 feet of the user ripple, almost like water. Immediately afterwards, they launch upwards from whatever surface they’re created from and dash towards the target while forming clawed hands. Upon contact with the target, the claws pass through them, causing no actual damage. Instead the target feels as though they have just been stabbed, experiencing a level of pain equivalent to how many claws have passed through him/her. These hands are not real, but the effects can often leave the target unconscious from the pain or completely in shock.
[Limit] Must know Shadow Perception, Shadow Claws, Sesshou Nora no Jutsu "C" and "B"

3 You see the following support question, how do you answer?

I want to perform a ritual on a charry to get him some damn wingz. How do I get wingz?

[Gohan]

1)

• Ryuugan is the name of an ability from the Kazeraikou clan. You should put Kazeraikou under bloodlimit

• Your weight needs to have units!

• Alignment has two parts and you choose one from each. Chaotic; True; Lawful and Evil; Neutral; Good. It seems as though you have picked two from the second category. Here is some more information if you’re interested! narutoforumrp.proboards.com/board/18/alignments

• Konoha is a village. If you wanted to be born in Konoha, your birth country would be Fire

• Going back to your bloodline, it comes with some requirements which I’ve quoted below. You should change your specialties and techniques to meet the requirements.
  

  Must Have Water, Lightning and Wind Releases.
  Must Start with Arashi no Kiero D Rank.

• You can’t start with Calm Emotions since it’s a deception ritual which is essentially a technique. You can, however, start with an augmentation ritual! (For future reference, you need to sacrifice a misc. slot for ritualist to use deception rituals)

• You can start with a Cloak type 3, but not type 1. This is actually in your favor since the type 3 version holds 10 more slots of items!
  
  
• We have stun grenades instead of flash grenades! Also, you need to list the price of the secondary items. Also, you have only used 17.5 out of the 30k you could spend on secondary items, if you wanted to use the rest of it.
  
  
  
• Although your book is within the price range of your non-weapon item, you can’t start with items with special requirements. You can only start with items that you can walk into any regular store and buy without a roll. This book requires you to both find a special store and roll to get.
  
  
• Looking at your techniques, you should first make sure you meet the requirements I mentioned earlier if you want to start with the Kazeraikou bloodline. However, there did seem to be a few issues that need to be addressed:
  
  It seems that the limit of the Suichuu (Underwater) technique was altered somehow. Please change the limit to “water release”.
  
  Also, please note that you can only have 6 freebies (3/6 consumed by your bloodline requirements) and 3 techniques (1/3 consumed by your bloodline requirements). You will need to make some cuts.
  
  In addition to freebies and techniques, you have 6 trait slots that are free to have. Please see here, if you're interested! 
  narutoforumrp.proboards.com/thread/102859/06-traits
  
  

2)

We don’t allow custom genjutsu. Honestly, there are some pretty broad techniques that you can learn which you can use to mimic this technique. Take a look at the phantasm and shadow index!

3)

First you need to figure out whether you want to join the Tsubasa clan or to just get a wings ritual. If you go the clan route, you need to sacrifice a clan slot, pay the costs, and roleplay getting the ritual performed.

Or, you could go to the augmentation rituals index and find the ritual to give you wings. Then you make a roleplay post saying you pay so and so to do the ritual and that’s about it.

Please note that there are a limited number of rituals you can do (see augmentation points here narutoforumrp.proboards.com/thread/104429/01-rituals-augmentation)
Given you don’t have any rituals at the moment, you should have enough augmentation slots available to just get the ritual.


Edit: Grammar

[N A T S U M I]

Wow, you seriously ripped those questions apart! I’m satisfied with these results.
1|3

Good luck!

[Nira]

Aye.

2/3 accepted.

[👺 Usiel]

3.3 welcome aboard