The Will To Learn ( Training/Open )

[Yuudai Kazuko]

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•Fuuton no Jutsu (Wind Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Wind. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Wind Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

 10/30

I wake up bright and early I can smell breakfast cooking. I head down the steps as I see my uncle walk pass the bottom of the steps "Hey Good Morning Yuudai are you hungry?" he asks. I nod slightly in a yes way "Yes that would be nice thank you." I reply, as I run back up the steps I think to my self [ oops I forgot to brush my teeth and wash my face ] I brush my teeth and wash my face and soon after im called down to eat. I think my uncle for my food with a huge smile on my face, I run back up stares after I wash my dish to switch my cloths.

I put on the usually a plane black shirt with nothing on it, a pair of shorts with 2 pockets on both sides of the pants but no back pockets , bandage rap on my right arm and on both of my legs , and my headband and my shoes I put my kunai's in my cloak and put my cloak on. "Bye uncle im heading out" I yell from my room as I hop out of my window traveling from building to building, As I stop and turn back and realize I forgot my books I run back to the house and collect my books and run back to the field.

As I look around a empty field with flowers and grass a, field as far as you can see with great colorful flowers. I start to do the handsels { Earth Release: Art of the Great Muddy Field } but then my picture book falls to the floor and I bend to pick it up. As I reach for the book a picture catches my and I sit down and start going threw the book until a loud noise i quickly pop up and look around but don't see nothing so I place the book back in my cloak and start to practice the my wind release hoping that I would be able to get it right today I place a plastic small ball in my hand and starch my hand straight out and concentrates wind chakra into my right hand where the ball is placed as the ball starts to transform over and over again into different shapes hoping for the ball to pop finally it pops so now I reaches into my cloak

grabbing a new ball but this time its rubber and I reach out once again trying to pop the rubber ball which he could never do I keep trying over and over again not taking a break I try over 30 times and finally it pops as I cheer over and over again as I finally figured out how to use wind chakra.

[Draven]

+10

[Yuudai Kazuko]

after running out of balls he quickly ran looking for a tree he seen one in a distance and ran for it once there grabbed a leaf off of it and held it in his hand and attempted to cut the leaf in half but not with his sword or kunai but with his wind chakra and it works but after he cuts that one he reaches up and grab two more proceeding to cut those aswell after cutting half the leafs on the tree he knew he had to keep training so he ran to his home and entered in his room from his window grabbing a shirt and he than stood on the roof of his home and held his shirt in his hand attempting to cut that in half.


he knew it wouldn't be as easy as a leaf but he also knew he could do it.  he stared at that shirt with the hardest stare to ever happen on the face of this earth on the 5th try or so it finally ripped he wasent as excited as the first time so he made this one even more hard he went in his room again but this time he went looking for a thick jacket he then climbs on the roof after getting that thick grey jacket this one would be much much harder. knowing it was hard he barley could get a small tear in it so he sat down taking a breather and quickly stood back up as there is no time to rest he then stares an stares at the jacket when finally the left side arm completely tears off he sat in disbelief and headed in for alittle snack knowing he was going to be at it again sooner or later

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•Fuuton no Jutsu (Wind Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Wind. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Wind Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

10/30

[Madame Loki]

+4

Very short training post. You're going to want to increase the length if you want to consistently get 10s. Also you can create multiple posts before asking for a grade, as long as all those posts are going towards learning one technique.  

[Yuudai Kazuko]

as of lately he wanted to focus on his earth this time the first thing that came to his mind was the earth senbons so he made mud around him then made mud clones to fight the only thing was he had to dodge the mud clones and each mud clone had a kunai and had intents on killing him he stepped 5 feet back from the clones and when h said go the clones quickly rushed to him he then pulled 5 earth senbons and they shot at each clone.

since the clones aren't that bad they easily dodged them he had to think of a way to trick them so he did multiple back flips trying to dodge the kunai's being swiped at him from all sides he figured how to kill one as the clone was charging straight for his chest he he quickly rised a senbon from the earth and the senbon would proceed to kill him and now he had to deal with the other 4

as he turned around he seen to charging at him from both side he tried shooting senbons at both of them but they dodged it seeing what happened to the other clone they nearly took his head off just as he ducked he send one senbon from behind the clone that nearly took his head to to strike his neck causing that clone to be killed

as the other clone come he gets a small cut near yuudais heart nearly killing him if it was any closer he flt his chest but in no time the clone cam sticking again to his heart he quickly jumps back and releases all clones not understanding why he released them he then starts to stand back up waiting for round 2

Learning new tech abandoning wind

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Doton Senbon Soushi no Jutsu (Earth Senbon Creation Technique)
Rank: "D" "D" "D" "D" "C" "B"
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Creates Senbon out of the earth and fires them at the opponent.
Special: "Hand Seals"
Drawback: Must be learned more and more in order to be capable of performing better, and capable of producing more Senbon. Cannot be used on Sand.
Description: Forming the hand seals, the User begins to use the Earth Creation Technique to form Senbon in the ground wherever they choose. These Senbon can then fire from the ground at the same speed and strength as if someone had thrown it. These earthen Senbon are shaped like those that are sold in stores and are just as sharp. At D rank, this jutsu forms five Senbon wherever the caster wants. This can be five in different spots, or five all together. The D rank can be learned 4 times for 20 Senbon. Then this jutsu can be learned C rank for 10 more and then B rank for 20 more. Fifty Senbon (after learning 4 D, 1 C, and 1 B rank Jutsu) can be fired from all around the opponent, aimed wherever the caster chooses.
Limit: Earth Release.

0/10

[Madame Loki]

Are you abandoning learning the wind release, to learn this earth technique? If so please indicate so in your post. Like put something like,

((OOC: stopping training of wind release, current Tp count:  14/30.)) 

just something to let me know you're not trying to train 2 techniques simultaneously. 

[Madame Loki]

+2

You have a lack of punctuation, and appropriate capitalization in your paragraphs. Well they're not really paragraphs, just a really long run-on sentence. Please try to be more watchful of this in future training. 

[Yuudai Kazuko]

Not giving up he runs to the market asking for empty can bottles. He then gathers 30 empty small cans, He then runs back to the field and sits the cans down living 2 in his hand he asks a random kid walking by to throw the cans in the air at any time but throw them away from his body. The kid agrees and grabs the to cans Yuudai had, he then steps 5 feet back Yuudai then performs the handseals arising 5 earth senbon.

The kid then throw up the cans one by one in different directions. One senbon went towards one can and other senbon went to the other can. knowing that that was easy he then made the Kid throw 2 cans very high, High enough to grab and throw one more. Yuudai then 2 senbon quickly flies towards the two cans as the other two starts to come down he forgets he only have 1 senbon left. SO he shoots the senbon at the can some how missing as the other can falls to the ground.

he then closes his eyes to make it harder the kid then picked up 3 cans. As Yuudai performed the handseals to arise 5 senbons again the Kid then yells out go. yuudai shoots his 3 senbon as 2 of the senbon misses so he keeps trying with his eyes closed the kid then throws up 3 more cans.
handseals are performed as 3 more senbons are formed and the 3 senbon flies towards the cans again only striking 1.

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Doton Senbon Soushi no Jutsu (Earth Senbon Creation Technique)
Rank: "D" "D" "D" "D" "C" "B"
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Creates Senbon out of the earth and fires them at the opponent.
Special: "Hand Seals"
Drawback: Must be learned more and more in order to be capable of performing better, and capable of producing more Senbon. Cannot be used on Sand.
Description: Forming the hand seals, the User begins to use the Earth Creation Technique to form Senbon in the ground wherever they choose. These Senbon can then fire from the ground at the same speed and strength as if someone had thrown it. These earthen Senbon are shaped like those that are sold in stores and are just as sharp. At D rank, this jutsu forms five Senbon wherever the caster wants. This can be five in different spots, or five all together. The D rank can be learned 4 times for 20 Senbon. Then this jutsu can be learned C rank for 10 more and then B rank for 20 more. Fifty Senbon (after learning 4 D, 1 C, and 1 B rank Jutsu) can be fired from all around the opponent, aimed wherever the caster chooses.
Limit: Earth Release.

(2/10)

[Draven]

+4


Keep a TP tracker, So far you have 6/10 (2 from Loki's previous grade, 4 from my grade here) into that tech right now. This helps stuff to keep track as well.

Uuumm for the training itself. You are learning how to make earth Senbon with chakra and dirt, not learn how to use a senbon. Had to deduct you for that unfortunately. Work on keeping content in line with the technique a bit, it will help you in known how to use the technique when you need it.