I know. It shocked me too.

[[Calibretto]]

Name: Calibretto

Age: 32

Gender: M

Desired Position: Assistant

Experience

Role-Play Experience and/or Event

[/a] exams. [/ul]

[/a] mission that lead to the Iwa tower event[/ul]

[/a] iwa tower event[/ul]

[/a] in the whisperings of war event. [/ul]

[/a] link contains the movement of a diplomacy mission that eventually ended up in tie going away from site for an extended period. So as people left, I used the same thread to return home. It also shows the beginnings of a duel with another PC. But that player also went away from site for an extended period, and so Instead of claiming crits and auto-wins I decided to just exit on. So this one shows 2 separate interactions.[/ul]

[/a] link is the actual diplomacy mission upon arrival from the travelling.[/ul]

Additional Comments

[Tieren]

So due to my absence, I haven't yet taken a look at this. However, after looking through your past posts, I've seen 4 posts made since this application was made 2 months ago. That doesn't show well for activity. There's one post in that 2 month time frame that is in support. And having gone through all of the character subs today, I know there have been characters in those two months that you could have posted in. I'm not pleased with the activity or the helping, so I'm giving a 1/2 denial.

[The Bearer of Bad News]

we kinda need the help, so i'll toss a few questions your way and see how it goes.

1) A character is being created that wishes to begin with the Benihime custom weapon. Given that they are an A-Class character, the money isn't an issue. Can they do this legally? Why or why not?

2) What is the Guard Meter and how does it work?

3) Please look over the following character application and determine what if any corrections need to be made.

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Hands Shi(kenkai genkai)-
When looked into eyes given a strong illusion of some sort of suffocation such as Drowning or choked.

Basic Information-
Weight-120ib
Height-5.2feet
Age-12
Gender-male
Neutral,True
Birth Village-
Village Hidden in the Water
Current Village-
Village Hidden in the Leaf
Weakness's-Children and Swordmen
Rank-Genin/D

Appearance-
Decent figure hear shaped face,short silver hair with a violet tint,blue right eye magenta left eye covered by eyepatch.pale complexion and bangs covering eye patch eye.A long sleeved blue converse with blue roses acting as a waistband.A red ribbon under the collar of a blue striped under shirt and a double layered blue pants with a light blue line on the bottom of the pants.Light purple fishnet suit with black school shoes
(When using Kenkai Genkai)
I have Magenta eyes and light purple vines around her pupils.

BIO-
My name is Fume.My friend usually call me the Darklord or wispee.My main elements Water,Earth,and Ice.
I usually keep to my self.I Like to think of myself as a skilled shining but not a cocky one just a respectable one.I focus mostly on silent killing.

My past has a dark turn unfortunately I was born in a power hungry clan called the Kaiyo(Ocean)Clan.Are looks were supposed to consist of blue hair and eyes but seeing as I have silver eyes and mismatch blue and magenta eyes I was thought to be a failure and disgrace seeing as my name means failure.I have a photographic memory many would think of this as a blessing I thought of it as a curse because it means I remember every merciless beating.I had one friend though she was kind to me sadly she died with the rest of the clan when it was slaughtered by an unknown man.

I escaped to the Leaf with minor injuries and started a new beginning and gotten new motives such as to protect those who can't protect themselves.

Secondary Items-
Right Claw(overview)
Cost:30,000ryo

Cloak type 1(overview)900ryo

Jutsu's-
Enclosing Technique:
Rank-D
Using this technique,a wide variety of objects and even living things can be stored within scrolls,and can be released when the scrolls opened and it's possible to seal a new ninjutsu into a scroll.
Tool Creation Technique-
Rank-C
The user has the ability to manifest special red chakra.Which,when on standby floats in a chakram like formation behind their back.The user is able to manipulate it to form various makeshift tools and weapons.
Sandstone Fist-
Rank-D
The user gathers sand in their fist which then changes form into stone made weapons like a mallet or a shield.The created weapons are also very solid and durable.
Whip of Water-
Rank-C
Whip of Water is a ninjutsu technique
that utilizes water to make a whip.
A ninja can also send lightning through the whip electrocuting the other person.
Water Puddle Technique-
Rank-D
By altering a personal body shape,t he user can melt into puddle of water on the ground these can prove affective as you can ambush easier.

Water Shield Technique-
Rank-D
A shield of water forms around the user the durability and size of it depends on the user health you can as well form it around other people trapping them or protecting them.

[[Calibretto]]

1) No a character cannot start with the benihime custom weapon, because it has as % to find. And all items that have a % to find are restricted from being items you “start with”. It also has techniques associated with it and this also disqualifies the item from being a starter weapon.

2) The guard meter was introduced when Armiger was brought into being. Armiger information can be found Here.

The Guard Meter is a measurement of “defense” held when you are in a “defensive position” or a “guard” position. Such as holding up a shield and bracing for an attack. Or trying to deflect an attack from an oncoming foe using your shield. While in guard position you have a penalty to your movements based on the size of your shield. Please see armiger section for details on that.

This thread gives details on how much damage an attack deals. If you're hit with an attack your guard meter drops based on the rank you're hit with (plus or minus some AP based on any other combat modifiers such as buffing techniques). When the meter is depleted the guard is "broken" and you take damage normally. This meter's size is based on various factors listed in the armiger post including but not limited to taijutsu slot status (spec/non-spec) , type of shield, and other techniques which may modify guard meter. The guard meter regenerates at a rate of 1/6th per second while not in a guard position and thus if you spend one full round (6 seconds) out of a guard position you'll recharge your entire meter.

Guard meter also reduces damage from something referred to as “after effect damage” such as burns from fire, electrocution from lightning, etc. If you are not an armiger that rate is 50% , if you are an armiger that rate is 80%.



3) Im going to do this in list format.

• As this sheet appears to have no format I would recommend putting it in the basic format listed in the character submission information post Here.
  
• The name fume is listed in the history section (you have labeled "bio") please utilize the afformentioned template so the name is also somewhere at the top.
  
• Hands Shi is not an approved kekkei genki This Is the location of all the bloodlimits (kekkei genkai) allowed. Read over them carefully, some have restrictions.
  
• Kekkei genki is misspelled as “Kenkai Genkai” multiple times.
  
• Weight is listed as 120ib, if you meant LB please correct as ib is not a recognized weight measurement.
  
• I would not recommend listing 5.2 feet as the height. 5.2 feet is 5 feet 6 centimeters. If you meant 5 foot 6 centimeters please correct it to read this, if you meant 5 foot 2 inches you can use formats such as 5'2” or simply 5 foot 2 inches.
  
• The History does not meet the minimum requirements of 5 paragraphs for a character with a BL. It also does not meet the minimum requirements of 3 paragraphs for a non BL character. Once your blood limit is corrected (to either an applicable one or none) please add more to the bio.
  
• The History lists water, earth, and ice as your "element" but the appropriate releases are not aquired (see the chahracter submission information page for number of freebies and starting techniques you can have based on being BL or not to see if you can make this happen.) (If you cannot, then you can still have it in your history as RP fluff but must train the appropriate techniques later on to actually utilize those releases)
  
• The History lists you have photographic memory, there is a trait called eidetic memory that covers this. I recommend you use a freebie to get this if you're actually wanting it. Otherwise its RP fluff and not valid for any kind of actual situation that would require it.
  
• The History lists your clan as Kaiyo(Ocean) Clan. This is alright if this is just RP fluff as we do not have a Kaiyo(Ocean) Clan in our clan lists. If this is something you're looking to make a real clan with real jutsu we are currently not accepting custom clans.
  
• The History makes no mention of how you were born to village hidden in water but are now a member of the village hidden in the leaf. This should be placed in the history. Also you'll not retain any knowledge of village locations save for the one you're an active member of regardless of how many villages you've visited/been in/seen/etc.
  
• Items need to be listed with their entire overview entry. Such as
  

  Claw (Overview)
  Rank: "C"
  Type: Main, Piercing/Slashing, Claw
  Effect: Claws attached to Gauntlets to add slashing or piercing damage.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: ---
  Description: A Light Weapon. These weapons do +4 Amour Points of Damage. A weapon that either gives claws to a gauntlet, or a blade(s) are attached to a horizontal handle that projects out from the fist when held. These weapons allow the wielder to hold things in their hand while using a Clawed weapon, however the user cannot use the claw and a weapon in the same hand at the same time to attack. Since these weapons are basically variants of Gauntlets they cannot be disarmed unless they are removed from the user's hand. Examples of Claw Weapons: Bagh nah, Katara, Pata, Push Dagger, Roman Scissors, Tekko, Claws, and Tekagi-shuko.
  Limit: These items may be bought inside any Weapon Shop.
  Cost: 3,000 Ryo each

  
  
• Also, the claw item in the application is listed at the incorrect price. Please see the full overview information of that item for the correct price.
  
• The cloak item listed is the right price but must also follow the rules of having the full overview posted.
  
• If you're not wanting to start with an apparel item that holds 15 slots (such as cloak type 3) then please state so. Otherwise if you want you can replace your cloak type 1 listed with cloak type 3 at no cost and save the 900 ryo for something else.
  
• Jutsu techniques are all in the incorrect format. And also, not actual techniques we have here on NFRP. We have some techniques with similar names but they do not act the way listed. Please re-read over the specific releases in question and ensure you have all of the requirements in order to use those techniques. This includes their releases (the very first technique listed in any of the release posts that describes the release)
  
• You have 8 unassigned freebies (such as traits or what not) and either 3 or 5 (depending on if you're a BL or not) free starting techniques since the techniques currently listed are not valid.
  

[The Bearer of Bad News]

looks solid, very detailed.

im going to call it 1/3

[[Calibretto]]

TY. I have also been alerted my links all went back to this page... not sure why but if you need i'll repost the links in raw link format for you.

[Solus]

I must say, you did good on those questions. 2/3

[👺 Usiel]

I'm saying. No too. 2.2. Here's why, our personalities clash, you got out of unmanned from the cbox a bit ago and I always feel this conflict whenever we interact. I already have stress from other things and I know we will clash to much.