Kinza Kobayashi (Complete)

[kinza]

Basic Information

Name: Kinza Kobayashi
Bloodlimit: none
Height: 6' 2”
Weight: 183
Age: 17
Gender: male
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Birth Country: Land of Wind
Village: Hidden Sand
Special:

• Medic

Taijutsu Specialty

Ninjutsu Non-Specialty
Clan Non-Specialty

• Kumomusha
  

Miscellaneous(1 spent, 9 remaining):
Rituals – Augmentation


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Primary Equipment

Secondary Equipment (28024)

Apparel (7600 spent)

Character Depth

Personality

Appearance

Background

[kinza]

Freebies

Techniques:

Healing Hands (Minor) (10TP)
Rank: "D"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A Healer gains the ability to heal Minor Wounds within an amount of time.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: When laying the hand upon a living creature, the user channels positive energy that cures Minor wounds within the amount of time performing a "D" Rank technique in handseals. While curing Minor wounds this technique brings higher wound levels down by 1 step. Since undead are powered by negative energy, this Jutsu deals damage to them instead of curing their wounds.
Limit: Must be a Medical Doctor.

Chakra Scalpel (30TP)
Rank: "C" (Boosted by Gifted Adept to work at +1 class rank)
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The user creates chakra blade along the index and middle finger that is no longer than 1 inch long.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture The user creates chakra blade along the index and middle finger that is no longer than 1 inch long. This allows the user to create a highly precise cutting tool. This can be used for highly accurate incisions necessary for surgeries and anatomical dissections. Unlike regular scalpels, the Chakra Scalpel can make cuts inside the body without actually creating a wound, limiting the risks of infection. The chakra scalpel can also be used offensively, although it requires great precision to be effective. Because of this requirement, using the chakra scalpel offensively is highly unusual. In heated combat, even the greatest Medical Doctors will not be able to exert the precision needed to make fatal cuts, but it can still effectively cut muscle tissues and tendons, rendering the target immobile.
Limit: Must be a Medical Doctor.

Cerberus Thrust (30TP)
Rank: C
Skill: TaiJutsu
Effect: The user uses three fingers and jabs any joint in the opponent's body with extreme force, causing numbing of the limb for two posts.
Special: None.
Drawback: Causes little pain to the opponent.
Description: The user lifts their arm and extends the index, middle, and ring finger. Jabbing the area where the joints are located, the user is able to hinder the opponent from using the associated limb for a limited time.
Limit: Universal TaiJutsu Technique

Shunshin no Jutsu - Oshi (Body Flicker Technique - Push) (30TP)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu/TaiJutsu
Effect: A Jutsu that allows a user to rush forward in almost instantaneous speed. Used to draw the user close to the opponent.
Special: ---
Drawback: May use 3 times a day. May perform 1 more each time learned. Passing amount renders the user's legs immobile due to severe pain. Unable to perform again unless gained medical treatment. Must move through an opening. Unable to maneuver around obstructing objects. Can't attack while performing any Shunshin or Variation.
Description: User is able to move forward in a straight line along the ground in almost instantaneous untraceable speed while temporarily masking the user's movements within 10 meters. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by focusing the user's chi along the ankles and foot. User mostly moves just with their ankles and feet. Jutsu takes up no movements. User may only use this Jutsu half of the movements may allow in a single round while rounding down. Example: User has 5 movements, user is able to perform Jutsu 2 times per round.
Limit: Universal NinJutsu or Universal TaiJutsu.

Shunshin no Jutsu - Ken'in (Body Flicker Technique - Pull) (10TP)
Rank: "D"
Skill: NinJutsu/TaiJutsu
Effect: A Jutsu that allows a user to rush backwards in almost instantaneous speed. Allows the user to retreat from the opponent.
Special: ---
Drawback: Takes away the number of usages Shunshin no Jutsu - Oshi (Body Flicker Technique - Push). Same distance applications apply. Same drawbacks apply when over using.
Description: User is able to move backwards in a straight line along the ground in almost instantaneous untraceable speed while temporarily masking the user's movements within 10 meters. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. Supplement of Shunshin no Jutsu - Oshi (Body Flicker Technique - Push) while using same schematics.
Limit: Universal NinJutsu or Universal TaiJutsu, Must know Shunshin no Jutsu - Oshi (Body Flicker Technique - Push)

Shunshin no Jutsu - Ko (Body Flicker Technique - Arc) (10TP)
Rank: "D"
Skill: NinJutsu/TaiJutsu
Effect: A Jutsu that allows a user to rush in an arc in almost instantaneous speed. Allows the user to avoid the opponent's attack and gaze.
Special: ---
Drawback: Takes away the number of usages Shunshin no Jutsu - Oshi (Body Flicker Technique - Push). Same distance applications apply. Same drawbacks apply when over using.
Description: User is able to move in an arc along the ground in almost instantaneous untraceable speed while temporarily masking the user's movements within 10 meters. User may move forward, or backwards if they know Tweh version of Shunshin. This Jutsu is used to get around and behind an opponent without sacrificing multiple Shunshins. Supplement of Shunshin no Jutsu - Oshi (Body Flicker Technique - Push) using same schematics.
Limit: Universal NinJutsu or Universal TaiJutsu, Must know Shunshin no Jutsu - Oshi (Body Flicker Technique - Push)

Movement Training (30TP)
Rank: C
Skill: TaiJutsu (Knowledge)
Effect: A training that allows one to properly use one’s arms.
Special: Must have had the “Ritual of the Spider” performed on one.
Drawback: Must be monitored and guided by a Kumomusha member. (May be a NPC)
Description: This training will allow one to use one’s extra arms as if it were their normal pair of arms. Without this training, movement would be slower, the arms would hinder eachother and the channeling of chakra would be extremely tough. By doing a small amount of simple yet usefull exercises, one can easily get rid of these problems and use them to their full potential.
Limit: Kumomusha clan only.

[Starnaess]

overall seems good, just need to modify a few things.

Under your miscellaneous list u have 2 things that are wrong.

Cursed seal is an EPIC and doesnt take a misc slot , u cant start with it u need to earn it through a long event.

Soshi Chouin is a seal that u cant start with because it can only be obtained through an event, it requires chuunin and u are a genin. And same as cursed seal it doesnt take a misc slot.

Since u picked a few techniques like the medic ones , u want to add "Medic" under medical specialty. =)

[kinza]

edited

[Deleted]

1/3

Looks good the prices on your equipment are correct. But you need to include the WHOLE index of each item. do that and you got my 1/3

[Starnaess]

2/3

For convenience u should write the number of Tp next to each technique u learned - so for now 1d rank 10 tp 1 c rank 30 tp this is convenient for both you and us when we check out your profile and for a possible revamp in the future . Beside that everything else looks good

[Shallistera]

3/3 Welcome to Sand