Coming out of the Hyouga (training)

[neo543]

Drax stand in the middle of an snow countrys larges glacier, the glacier is know for being very remove and nobody usuals venture to it. He stands look at his teacher (Misku). He looks deep within his teachers eyes and preforms the handseals for the technique he is attenpting to learn.

Flying Water Needles of Death
Rank: C-Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: Same as the Description.
Drawback: ---
Description: This is the basis of using the Sensatsu Suisho. When first learned the user gains the capability of using this technique to where they are only capable of creating a hundred Water Like needles and then directs them a specific target at high speed, leaping backwards before impact so then the user doesn't get caught in the crossfire. The user is capable of using this as well to shoot the needles towards other directions that does not interface with the user. This technique can be raised by how many needles will be created. Each time the user learns this technique they gain the capability of forming a hundred more needles. This technique can only be learned nine times before the user has to go up a higher rank to learn this technique.
Limit: Suiton Soushi (Water Creation). Must have the Water Release. Must be part of the Kaishin Bloodlimit. Must have knowledge of Kuri Buki E Rank

drops of water rise around drax as he lauches his had violently towards his teacher the water splaches a few centremeters throught the air and them drop to the ground.
"WHY WON'T THIS DAM TECHNIQUE WORK" Drax yell in his fury if failing again.
"Carm yourself Draxernal your anger wont help you at the moment, you problem is speed withut that your needls aren't freezing or having the charka transfered to then to dart towards your target. You need to work on the way you preform the seal thrust your arms forwards and preform the seals faster these things should make the skill you want. So try again."Misku say clamly with a sigh.
Drax looks up thinking his teacher is full of it but he is probably right. He looks up sharply and throws his arms in frount of him in fury slaming his hands together and rushing through the handseals. The water appears around him is eyes cold as the snow, the throws his arm once again at his teacher the needles formed and start to fly towards his teacher. His face cevelops an evil grin but his teacher stays still, as the needles reach half there distance the brust into dops of water creating a small vaper cloud that instantly drops to the floor. Drax's Smile cracks. At that moment Misk clamps his hands together making Ice surronds Drax creating a prison. He look sa Drax tired and bored of watching him fail for the day.
"Ok Drax I'm not putting up with another of your rampages. Your just going to have to train harder. Since the speed is your problem I will have to make you faster and preforming the seals. Now I want to to preform the seals twenty time in a minute and them I will let you out." Drax looks at his with the obious look to kill. But his is situation only leaves him one option. He started to preform the handseals as quickly as he can. He puts all his concentration into it.

A few hours past and Drax become to bored to continue, he sighs and say "Misku haven't we done this section of training enough" Drax turns to look at his teacher to see nobody within the glacier but him. Drax's eyes grow tiwce there size and the left beings to twicth.
"HE LEFT ME HERE AGAIN!!!!!" a vein on his head bulding "I CAN'T BELIEVE HIM!!!". His anger now having full control of his action, he reaches in his coat and pulls out an explosive tag than he attaches to a Kuri Buki and troughs it just out side the prison the tag goes off and creates a strong expolsion that echeos around the glacier and cracks the unforgiving ice of the glaciers surface. the prison is mostly destroyed Drax is sent flying thought the air spinning and is able to land continuing the spining stoping major damage to himself. the snow also softens the blow but his is still wounded quite badly. cluching his side he feels very proud of him landing thinking of how cool it was. "that training had better of worked or Misku is died. the prefomes the handseals and thorws his arm the needle form and fly only to shatter and fall. Drax falls to the snow his mind raging with anger, his body injured his chakra low.

[pandoru]

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Drax picks himself up out of the blanket of snow that was starting to freeze his face. He made his way over to his possessions where he had food and drink. He sat to himself alone in the glacier building his rage going over and over the fact his teacher had run off again.
He thought about his training and that practicing that hand seals had worked. He got to his feet but his bag over his back. He knew Misku would have just headed for the nearest village and would be back by the next day. Drax knew his way out of the glacier and began to run it. Since speed was his problem he believes increasing his physical speed would help him. As he reached the edge of the glacier the wondered if it was actual his body that was to slow or he if he just needed the force of the speed.
He continued to run and perform the hand seals then suddenly stopped, using the stop as a force to throw the needles the flew a good distance he thought that he had improved a large amount since he began. He continued to run as it would help his training in completing the technique. After the glacier he knew there was a small forest. He could see it in sight the forest was very green and full of life, all the trees were pine, the forest looked very dense and not must light reached thought the branches of the forest Drax slowed thinking he didn't want to hit his head and fall unconscious. As he reached the forest he climbed in though the roots and branches thinking “This is the only way to catch him up, the edge of the forest route is twice as long as going through" . Drax felt his legs getting a bit weak from the large amount of running. "Dam looks like I’m going to have to rest". He said biting his lip. He stopped took out his flask and drank the warm tea within. He looked at his rations he was running low. Drax looked to the tree tops wondering if he would catch up this time. His teacher Misku was a branch member of his clan and Drax was a main branch descendant. He was hated for his bloodlimit. Thinking of this increased the rage that he had lost on the run. Drax rose to his feet about to shout, when he spotted a fox leaving his burrow. He looked at it with piercing eyes, foxes where fast and it would be eatable. He moved his hand together slowly and he sprinted as fast as he could perform the water needle jutsu. The fox turned its head in shock, looked for a second then started to run. Drax had finished the seals by this moment and released the needle that went flying at the fox, Drax’s face was filled with joy as the needle caught up with the fox and made contact. The needles had no effect. Drax ran over to the collision point and sore a puddle of water. The needle hadn’t formed properly or frozen he had just made a fancy splash he fell to the floor and punched the ground in more anger.

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[neo543]

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Drax looks at his fist he has rammed into the half froze grass of the forest. “Why can’t I get this just, I keep getting so close, I learn one part and learn to other but am unable to do the first with it” he thinks to himself. “I must have to completely wrong approach to this.” Drax gets to his feet feeling worthless and determined. He looks around and finds a tree in front of him. Drax tries to preform the jutsu make the handseals. The water appeared from around him and formed a needle like shape, and headed for the tree, the water hit as it did the fox, only to turn to make splash marks on the bark of the tree. Drax turns around take about 10 steps, faces the tree. He runs performing the jutsu stopping where he stood the last attempt at the jutsu and use the force of the run with his jutsu. Once again the needle made splashes. Drax was destroy inside all this training for nothing.
But then the noticed a colour change in the trees bark it was only faint but there was a small scratch meaning that one of his needles had formed correctly.
Drax was pleased a needle had made a mark in a tree. The jutsu may not have been anything near done but he was happy to see some kind of progress.
Drax felt his legs beginning to weaken after all his training, he look around for some kind of shelter. He found an overgrown pine tree that’s roots where coming of the ground and had ground over a quite large ditch. Drax walked down into the ditch, his foot making crackleing noises as he stepped on the frozen leaves on the floor. In the ditch he looked up there were three large roots that would protect him with rain if he got sticks and leave to make a kind of roof.
He spent a good two hours on it and made a heap on top of the roots that he hoped would work.
Drax lay down in the ditch thinking about his training and began to make the handseals again repeating the seals over and over again so that he could perform them in any situation. The night came and it was cool Drax was unable to sleep but at least could rest. He got to up and look at the tree. “I wonder if I’m better after recovering from my wounds and I have regaining most of my chakra.” Drax said to himself in barely more than a whisper. The cold wind swept the ground as Drax stood at the top of the ditch, wondering if it was a good idea to do this, he may not even make a mark… If he couldn’t, he would get angry again and do something stupid, like the way he ended up in the forest. Misku could be back up in the glacier for all Drax really knew. Drax stopped these thought and took a few steps back ran at the tree stopped at the edge of the ditch and activated the jutsu. Water rose and darted at the tree, Drax had lowered his head to stop himself seeing how well he had done. He lifted his head slowly and looked forward, Draxs eye grew with joy as he not only saw the water but two three marks on the tree. Drax was so pleased he wanted to see it happen and not lower his head , he ran back to the place he started last time.
Drax sprinted at the tree but tripped on a root, Drax started to stumble and wobble he knew he couldn’t stop himself from going over the edge of the ditch. Drax decided to jumped in stead of fall, he managed to do this but at an odd angle. He remembered that this was to see the jutsu and span round in the air commanding the needle with target (the tree). Drax watch as he fell to the ground seeing elven marks being made in the tree's bark before he landed. Drak landed in the bottom of the ditch head thirst.

[fina]

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I'm being generous since you're not proofreading this well enough, though you've improved slightly from your last post. Just watch the grammar and the spelling and you'll be fine.

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Drax had knocked himself out with the fall and awoke the next day, he looked up at the sky to see if he could tell the time from the position of the sun, but the sun was blocked by trees of the forest.
Drax went to his possessions and gathered them up. He then put his bag over his back and remembered how he fell in the ditch. Drax climbed out of the ditch and looked at the trees bark. It was a dark musky brown and clearly shown where the three marks and the eleven marks.
Drax turned to look at another great pine tree, a bit smaller and a bigger distance from the ditch. He did the run towards it a grin covered his face and perform the jutsu. The needles rose and darted to the tree but to drax’s disappointment only three marks where made. He looked puzzled for a moment and shook his head.
“It’s just because I woke up” he said to himself he moved back and repeated the technique. It left only three marks! Once again Drax’s anger starts to show. A stray vein showed across his forehead hidden by his forehead protector. Then he moved back through the dense forest and stopped at about 50metres from the tree, a silence hit the forest not even a breeze swept the frozen air. Drax’s hand gripped the strap on his bag harder. He turned in a fury and charged like a rampaging bison towards the tree! Unlike before, he jumped thinking of last night.

Drax sprinted at the tree but tripped on a root, Drax started to stumble and wobble he knew he couldn’t stop himself from going over the edge of the ditch. Drax decided to jumped in stead of fall, he managed to do this but at an odd angle. He remembered that this was to see the jutsu and span round in the air commanding the needle with target (the tree). Drax watch as he fell to the ground seeing eleven marks being made in the tree's bark before he landed.

The only thing that Drax could think of that would have improved the technique was the jump. Drax released the needles in mid air; a savage flurry off needles was loosened! The needle rain drummed heavily on the tree bark armour. Drax landed in front of the tree, confident he had worked out how he could use the technique. Drax looked up to see that in all there where nine marks on the tree’s bark. He had used the jutsu three times which meant the jump had no effect on the jutsu.
Drax grabs his head in despair “why, what did I do, I didn’t do anything differently why can I only form three needles… Did I get brain damage when I fell!? WHAT AM I DOING WRONG!!!” Drax shouted.
[color=Yellow]“Being to loud is your problem”[/color] says an unfamiliar voice. Drax turns his head to see a man holding a dagger to him. The man wears torn cloths. He has a bean hat placed on his head. Around his chest is a hooded fur coat and he wears fur trousers. He has a gold necklace/locket round his neck that he probably stole from a previous victim.
“Drop your bag and I won’t come over and stab you” he laughed at Drax in an arrogant tone. Drax took his bag off his bag, holding it at arms length and dropped it. A small amount of water fell with the bag to the floor. He brought his hand back to his side, cupping it and poking it forward so he can see it. A small ball of water forms in it.

Suiton Soushi (Water Creation)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The user who is part of the Haku Bloodlimit takes this into consideration to where they are capable of forming moving and molding water techniques without great effort. The Chakra consumption for using their water techniques that is used is smaller then that of a normal water ninja.
Special: ---
Drawback: If a Haku Member never gains this when they first create a character, they can never recieve it and they can never create or use the Haku Bloodlimit techniques. This is to be used for the Haku Water Bloodlimit Techniques.
Description: By taking the molecules within the air the user is capable of taking shape and form of techniques within the air to create a formation of water. By doing so the user creates and conjunctions of water so then the user may use their techniques for any type of form that they wish. This is in conjunction for any other technique that user needs in order for the user to use their techniques. In conjunction with this technique a user can do from creating a ball of water around the palm of their hands to even create a large typhoon if needed. This is the start and the true knowledge of the Bloodlimit
Limit: Must be Part of the Haku Bloodlimit

“It’s no use to me over there; throw the bag towards me, and no funny stuff.” He gives Drax a piercing stare as he says this.
“You have two problems, one I’m a ninja and your a thief, I can take you easily” Drax replies in an arrogant tone to match the thief’s.
“That’s what my last victim said but he didn’t listen to my kind warning, that’s how I stole his scroll, now be a good kid and hand it over with out a fuss and I will let you live.” He gave a snort of laughter as he finished.
Drax dropped the ball of water grasped his hands together “the second Problem!!! I have surrounded myself with water” Drax spins round performing the jutsu as he knew it so will in the practice. The two puddles he had made rose and more water was created from the spin, all the water formed needles that swarmed at the thief. The thief gave out a yell as the needles pierced his skin. Drax could see fifteen visible cut wounds on the thief. “I finally hit!!” Drax had realised how he made many more needles than before, the reason he made eleven marks on the tree last night was from the spin he did. Rotation was enabling Drax to use the technique may be not the perfect 100 needles, but it was a lot better than he had been doing.
Drax realise he still needed to escape, the thief that was ripping needles from his body. Drax did another esoteric 360 degree spin, creating more water with the spin with performing the jutsu. He came back round and noticed that he was fully facing the thief, and needles shot in his direction. Fortunately he wasn’t too far off and hit with a few needles.
Drax looked at what had just happened, he knew since he was unable to aim the needles well he shouldn’t use them… Then the thief charged at Drax, staggering in a manic and unpredictable way. A blade plunged into Draxs side and he let out a whelp! In bitter retaliation, he pulled an explosive tag out and slammed it right between his eyes!. Drax fell to the floor in pain and took cover! the tag activated blowing the thefts head off, the carnage was shocking as meaty chunks flew through the air…
Drax was lying on the floor screaming in pain clutching his open wound that pulsed with blood. After a few seconds he knew he must act he use his grasp to create water to clean his wound. He reached over to the headless body of the theft and rips off a piece of his clothing. He pulled it round him and tied it to put pressure on the wound.
Drax also ripped off the locket from the thefts neck and finds a scroll in his pocket. Drax put his coat back on... Drax applied pressure to the wound. He started to stumble around trying to make his way through the forest as quickly as he could. (which is very slowly. He may not be a medic but he slowed the bleeding enough.)
Drax eventually reached the end of the forest and he could see the village. He was heading forward but he collapsed again… He had a habit of that… He found the road again and some ninja ran towards him, recovering his bleeding body… The figures fade to black… (blackout)

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Drax awoke in a weirdly decorated room. The walls were a faded pink colour and covered with pictures of boats. The wall opposite him had a large window with a view looking out across the icy sea of the snow country. Drax lay in a bed feeling fairly dizzy, the bed sheet a sky blue with matching pillows. To his right was a pine chest of drawers. On top of the drawers Drax could see his coat, scarf and t-shirt folded neatly and placed next to two scrolls. The far right corner of the room contained a pine rocking chair. “All this pine must come from the forest outside the village” the thought remembering his recent training.
“Even the bed is made of pine.” Drax thought as he examined the room.
He realized that he had been bandage well and felt his wound was almost healed. He sat up and felt the locket bounce against him gently, as the covers of the bed slid off him. He also noticed that the locket was still hanging around his neck smooth to the touch against the pale skin of his chest.

“I see you’re awake” called a high pitch voice that instantly annoyed Drax. He turned to the right to see a young girl about the age of 14 standing in an open door way. She stood in a long pink dress that had been tightened at the waist with a red ribbon. Her hair long and brown, had been platted and tied with a matching red ribbon, tied with a fairly large bow. Her eyes light blue carefully watching Drax.
“You been out for weeks, we thought we may have lost you for a while.” She said with a smile.
“Thanks for the reassurance” Drax mumbled with an odd look on his face. He had never seen this girl before and she was talking to him as if they were good friends. Drax looked out the window deep in thought watching a small fishing boat floating towards the horizon.
“I guess I can’t complain her family if save me” went through his head as he evaluated the situation he was now in, also thinking of his black out.
“Well Drax… Misku said to tell you, he left you a scroll on some of you clan’s jutsu, Also that he will no longer be able to teach, you as he’s on a mission in the stone country but I think that may have been a lie. He said that you should make you way to the waterfall and rain counties to learn water style jutsu as they will improve you clan abilities.” The girl said in a slight giggle first pointing at the second scroll on the chest of draws. And then moved her finger to her bottom lip and her eyes gazed around the room as she thought of what she was saying. Drax looked up at her in shock she had just said his name, the name of his now ex-teacher and something that made him very angry.
He instantly rose from the bed throwing the covers over the bottom of the bed.
“SO HE’S COMPLETELY DITCHED ME” Drax shouted in probably his biggest rage yet, it even made the young girly jump. The moved over to his clothes and scrabbled into them showing a force rage as he throw his coat other this back, In the rage Drax forgot the scrolls and he even forgot to take off locket.

“Excuse me” Drax says biting his lip as he had reached the door way block by the little girl. Drax could see the rest of the hall way, it was the same faded pink color. There where three pine doors and a pine stair case. He expected the rooms were most likely bedrooms but gave then little thought. The girl looks up at Drax and skipped to the right. Drax head for the stairs the girl followed
“Umm Drax we are meant to take care of you unit you’re wounds healed, my grandmothers out at the moment but she will be home soon, you should probably rest… Drax are you listening!” She started to shout going down the stairs. When she closed her mouth they were down the stair Drax could see the front door that was on the right of the bottom of the stairs. The walked straight outside without even looking at the bottom floor of the house.
“I’m going to training for a bit, I have to take in what you’ve told me” he said looking back with a forced smile.
Drax walked behind the house that he now could see was right on shore near the harbor. Not many houses were this close to the shore line so it was pretty secluded. A large number of boats all of a very different size lay in the harbor. They were all made from pine; Drax was now starting to get sick of seeing pine everywhere.
In the distance a small withered tree caught Drax’s eye. He moved towards it thinking about his encounter with the thief. Drax clutched his wound he was lucky to have survived that attack.
Drax remembered his inaccuracy; Drax knew that to perfect the jutsu he would have to improve his accuracy. Knowing he would have killed the thief easily if it worked.
Drax now stood a little distance from the tree looking at it; the cool ocean breeze wiping across his face the taste of salt in the air. Drax raised his left arm cross his body, and then swung it back violently using the ‘water creation’ jutsu leaving a trail of water in the air right in front of him, as soon as he had his arm stuck out to the left he grasped it tightly using ‘ice creation’ jutsu and ‘Kuri Buki’ jutsu to create twenty needles of ice that fell into the soft snow.
Drax kneeled and picked each frozen needle out of the stabbed snow one at a time collecting them in his other hand. He formed a small pile of the needles to his right.
He picked one up holding it firmly in his hand Drax looked in a frown at the tree, thinking about what he has to do, he wanted to test how good he was naturally at accuracy. Drax did a 360 spin on the spot, stopping and throwing the needle at the same time. As Drax had expected he missed, the needle veered to the left of the tree, not so much that he had a big problem but a distance that needed to be fixed.

Drax looked in the direction the needle had flown add thought about how to improve his knowledge of when to stop and throw. He thought for about an hour then realised his problem was that he couldn’t see that well during the rotation, and that if he had focused vision he would be able to measure how much force should be using in the spin and the distance unit he would have to stop and throw.
Drax picked up a second needle closed his eyes and focused his charkra to his eyes. Drax stayed in a meditation state for about 10 minutes and opened his eyes. He felt the effect of his vision being increased he could see thing more clearly that before even thought they we a good distance away. The seagulls in the sky were easily defined by small details with him enhanced vision.

Drax gripped the needle in his hand and span again and was able to see a great deal more easily than before, he stopped and throw the needle. The needle veered off to the right and missed. Thanks to his improved vision Drax had seen the problem, he had focused a great deal of chakra to his eyes that he had lots a small amount in other places in this case the feet. Drax was now slipping slightly on the snow/ice making him miss.

Drax laughed to himself. As he planned the next step to his training Drax closed his eyes and began to refocus his chakra. This time Drax sent the chakra to both his eyes and his feet. This took about 20 minutes as he felt the warmth of the chakra build in these areas of his body. Drax opened his eye again and thought it would be best to test his chakra control. Drax began to spin around on the spot continuously gain speed with every spin, then he stop. The stop so suddenly that the force hurt his body, mostly on his wound. The pain made Drax fall from the sudden shock. However he was happy as he had seen his stop was perfect.

Drax gave himself another 30 min meditating checking his chakra throughout his body the felt it pulsing movement, he didn’t want to be too weak in a certain area so that the jutsus would fail again. Drax was slightly shaken from the pain of his wound, it was the first time he had felt pain from the time it had happened.
Drax took a deep breath of the frozen air. Looking at the tree this time with a smile thinking this could be it after all this time he may have the learnt this jutsu. Drax held 10 of the needles in his hand. He furiously span around the gazed a the landscape as the did hoping that it would work, his eye caught the sight of the tree and he slammed his foot down, halting his body and letting is arm glide across his body releasing the needle that darted as swiftly as birds toward the tree, Drax was pleased to see nine of the needles in the withered tree he was practicing on.

jutsu I used in this post

Suiton Soushi (Water Creation)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The user who is part of the Haku Bloodlimit takes this into consideration to where they are capable of forming moving and molding water techniques without great effort. The Chakra consumption for using their water techniques that is used is smaller then that of a normal water ninja.
Special: ---
Drawback: If a Haku Member never gains this when they first create a character, they can never recieve it and they can never create or use the Haku Bloodlimit techniques. This is to be used for the Haku Water Bloodlimit Techniques.
Description: By taking the molecules within the air the user is capable of taking shape and form of techniques within the air to create a formation of water. By doing so the user creates and conjunctions of water so then the user may use their techniques for any type of form that they wish. This is in conjunction for any other technique that user needs in order for the user to use their techniques. In conjunction with this technique a user can do from creating a ball of water around the palm of their hands to even create a large typhoon if needed. This is the start and the true knowledge of the Bloodlimit
Limit: Must be Part of the Haku Bloodlimit

Aisu Soushi (Ice Creation)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: With this technique this allows a user the capability and understanding of lowering temperatures around the user in a small radius to where the user is capable of using the Suiton Soushi techniques and creating ice for other techniques for the users.
Special: ---
Drawback: If a Haku Member never gains this when they first create a character, they can never recieve it and they can never create or use the Haku Bloodlimit techniques. This is to be used for the Haku Ice Bloodlimit Techniques. Can not be used in dried air areas. This technique must be learned more and more in order to allow the user to drop the temperature for certain techniques. Depending on the distance the user is capable of using this for techniques by rank. Please look at the description for understanding.
Description: By using and understanding the formation and basics of Cryomancy the user pushes their chakra past around them in a large circle, doing this and pushing in their understanding the Bloodlimit Kaishin is capable of lowering and dropping the temperatures within the certain distance in order to create ice for their techniques to use. A conventional Ice User must have cold climate in order for the user their techniques, but with the Kaishin bloodlimit allows a user to create Ice Techniques without the option of litterally having cold climate. This technique allows the user to drop temperatures to the point of water freezing allowing the user to create Ice Techniques. When first learned the user is capable of pushing off in the distance of Five meters for the user to create their techniques, where the user drops the temperature towards the right respectable limit. Each time learned the distance increases by ten meters. When first learned the user is only capable of creating techniques of C-Rank formation. After twenty meters the distance increases to B-Rank Training and the user is capable of using B-Rank Techniques. When the user reaches the distance of fourty Meters the training increases to A-Rank Training and the user is capable of performing A-Rank Techniques. When the user reaches at the A-Rank Stage the Ice techniques can not be melted away by conventional means. The only way capable of getting through is by crushing through the ice techniques. When the distance reaches to Sixty Meters the user reaches to his final form of training and must learn the S-Rank version of this technique to perform S-Rank techniques but must be learned with a S-Rank Training.
Limit: Must be part of the Haku Bloodlimit


Kuri Buki
Rank: E
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user creates an ice weapon of any shape or size, depending on the amount of chakra the user has, from a body of water. The weapon's liquid-like structure is an excellent medium for sound and can use sound at a much larger capacity than just with your bare hands.
Special: -dragon- -rat- -dog-
Drawback: -Requires sufficient water per rank-
Description: The user summons up water from a near by body of water, the size of a fist; the water can then be shaped into a weapon of any shape, and any size depending on the amount of chakra the user has. Once the shape and size of water is determined, it is hardened into a dense ice, as if it was an actual weapon.
Limit: Blood limit of Haku

E: minimal chakra: kunai sized weapons that are somewhat brittle
Estimated water needed: cubic foot

[👺 Usiel]

Meh you learned it.

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Kuri Buki
Rank: E-S
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user creates an ice weapon of any shape or size, depending on the amount of chakra the user has, from a body of water. The weapon's liquid-like structure is an excellent medium for sound and can use sound at a much larger capacity than just with your bare hands.
Special: -dragon- -rat- -dog-
Drawback: -Requires sufficient water per rank-
Description: The user summons up water from a near by body of water, the size of a fist; the water can then be shaped into a weapon of any shape, and any size depending on the amount of chakra the user has. Once the shape and size of water is determined, it is hardened into a dense ice, as if it was an actual weapon.
Limit: Blood limit of Haku

E: minimal chakra: kunai sized weapons that are somewhat brittle
Estimated water needed: cubic foot

D: small chakra: Any weapon creatable using two cubic feett of space, solid as ice
Estimated water needed: two cubic feet

C: moderate chakra: Any weapon creatable using four cubic feet of space, solid as iron
Estimated water needed: four cubic feet

B: High chakra: Any weapon creatable using six cubic feet of space, solid as titanium
Estimated water needed: six cubic feet

A: extreme chakra: Any weapon creatable using ten cubic feet of space, solid as damascus steel
Estimated water needed: ten cubic feet

S: Hokage level chakra:Any weapon creatable using thirty cubic feet of space: solid as adamantine.
Estimated water needed: thirty cubic feet

Side note: All weapons are as light as the original body of water minus the chakra needed to use the technique, so the weapon more-or-less always weighs that of a kunai.

Drax feel happy, knowing he can perform the water needles of death jutsu. A seagull squawks catching Drax’s attention as it wildly flaps it wings. Looking up at it with dark eyes Drax gives an evil smile, he spin a round on the spot, performing the handseals and pointing at the seagull as he finishes the rotation. Water created from the rotation (water creation) forms the demonic icy needles that point at the seagull. The water needles thrust into the air towards the seagull piercing its flesh making it into a pincushion. Blood splatters and rains down into the ocean as the seagull falls like a rock; it splashes its way to an icy grave in the shallow depths.

Drax feels ever pleased with his new technique. But thinks it still needs to be improved. The only way he thinks this would be possible was to train up his Kuri Buki jutsu, the jutsu was what made the needles and it was at its lowest rank; at the moment if he improved it the needles he makes would be stronger. This would improve the water needles of death jutsu.

Drax sat in the snow, he reached over and picked up one of the remaining needles. He began to play with it judging his workmanship and tested its strength. He snapped it with ease, Drax knew there was a way to strengthen the jutsu but what was it. He thought the best way to find that out was to examine the way he made them at the moment. He grasped his hand then stretched it out: creating a small amount of water in his hand (using water creation).
Drax activated his Kuri Buki jutsu, the water jumped from his hand into the salty air. The water started too crystallised into a thin brittle ice needle. Drax paid close attention to very action in the crystallisation of the water, he kept a mental record of all the chakra being released and how it was releases.
When the needle was formed he knew that the inside was hollow and that the chakra was released from his hands to freeze the water.

Drax thought that to dive right in and continue trying for the end result would be foolish he had learnt this from his last training. Drax went to the shore; he watched the wave’s crash against the frost cover sand. So far Drax had only made needles out of his Kuri Buki jutsu knowing he could make any weapon. Drax thought that making something different would help him gain better control of this ability.
Drax lifted his arms gave a serious look over the ocean and took a deep breath. The water rose from the ocean, he moved his hands out from his body shaping the water into a staff. The water froze over making what seems to be a very long needle.
Drax looks at what he had made. He throws it into the ocean in disgust
“I know I can do better that” he says.
Drax put his hands together and meditated, channelling his chakra to his hands. Drax moves apart hands after ten minutes.
Drax now tries the jutsu again. The water raises out of the ocean he moves his hands across he pours his chakra out of his hands into the water creating the icy crystallisation. Drax kept his hand held over one end of his staff creating a blade. Drax starts to feel under a little strain keeping the jutsu going this long, but his determination keeps him going, sweat starts to form oh his face. He moves his is arm up and down his newly made ice spear, this strengthen it as more chakra was applied, Drax does this twice more each time putting more strain upon him, eventually on the third stroke he falls to his knees, the spear dropped into the ocean floating in front of him moving with the tide. Drax stands again; picking up the spear and swings it a few times feeling the strength he has added.

[Spamato]

+8

[neo543]

8/10

Drax moved to the edge of the icy beach. He sat on the snow looking down over the frosty sand and the cold ocean into the horizon. Drax started to think about his decision to leave the glacier, he tapped the ice spear on his shoulder deep in thought.
“Drax… umm we are going to eat now, I’ve have been told to come get you.” Faint and familiar voice said. Drax turned to see the young girl he had met this morning as he had awoken from his black out.
“Oh, ok thank you” Drax got to his feet using his spear as an aid; he felt the weakness of the spear as he did. Drax started to head back through the snow with the girl thinking Drax suddenly said “Um what’s your name? I was so angry this morning that I forgot to ask” he said looking down at the snow that they were walking in. He was ashamed that he had shown this to a person he had only just met.
“It’s Rosie” she said with a smile “You must care a lot about Misku to get that upset about him leaving” a silence hangs in the air.
“Not really… he’s not only my teacher but he’s also my guardian. My parents sent me to live with him, and just keeps trying to ditching me and now he finally has.” Drax sighed. A silence fell upon the two until they reached the house; smoke was puffing from the chimney.
They entered the house, Drax looked around the bottom floor of the building this time, unlike his quick escape this morning. The room was very large and would be seen as four different rooms without walls; in the far right was the kitchen where an elderly woman standing at a stove, mixing a liquid in a pot placed on the stove. The woman was wearing a purple robe, her hair was grey and was short. She had a thick wool hat on her head. Her skin was old and wrinkled. Drax thought it best to look at the rest of the rooms, to the far left a table stood five chairs placed around it. The near left has a group of chairs made of leather with feather cushion placed on them. The chairs all faced an old fire place that breathed a red fire, sparks danced up the chimney with a cloud of smoke, the warm fills the room. Over to the right of the room was a large bookcase that held many books mainly on the history of the snow country. After he had examined the bookcase he noticed the table had been set and the pot from the stove was now on the table, the two women moving over to sit at the table. Drax thought that he should join them has he had been invited back for the food. All three of them sat at the table looking at each other.
“So Drax it nice to see you moving” the old woman croaks “I am granny Paku, that is what you may call me, I hear you were eager to get back to your training”
“Yeah how did it go?” Rosie buts in
“It went well, I feel a lot stronger than I did before the black out. Thank you every much for looking after me during my unconsciousness.” Drax said humbly being handed a bowl of soup from Granny Paku.
“Think nothing of it child, we have also arranged you journey over sea for you, you leave in three days the one after the festival where we celebrate the good fishing season.” Granny Paku to sips out of a wine glass that was very full as she spoke, Drax sat speechless these people had never even met him before and they had done all this for him. He had never felt like people had cared for him before. Drax ate the soup and began to think of how he had first reacted when he met them. After dinner Granny Paku and Rosie went to bed Drax stayed down stairs. He had started thinking of his training again.

Drax went over to the fire place with the empty pot the soup had been in. he went outside where he had left his spear and brought it into the house placing it in the pot. The spear quickly melted being placed so close to the raging fire. Soon the pot was filled with water Drax put his hand over the pot and activated Kuri Buki jutsu. A portion of the water climbs to his hand he begins to focus his chakra into the water making a needle. Then Drax began to infuse it with chakra, carefully pushing it all round to make the strength even. Drax could see that the needles are now twice as thick as they were. He quickly grasped the needle and examined it. Drax had to put a bit of effort into breaking it.
Drax could see his training had paid off. The fact he had also completed a c rank jutsu as showed his progress.
Drax took the pot to his room where the pictures of boats hung on the walls. He went straight to the window. Opening it, he felt the cold sea breeze sweep in through his room, he it was so bitterly cold, it was as if he felt ice crystals forming on his face. Drax put the pot on the floor in front of the window. He lifted his hand over the pot and all the water in the pot began to levitate. Drax began to mould the water into and he channelled his chakra one again. The water splits dividing into many separate needles that iced over with the assistance of the sea breeze, forming needles that looked like the one he made before, in his previous his training.
Drax looked at them thinking he was about to perfect the water needles of death. The holds the technique and pushes more chakra into them he watches them grow he feels the strain return to his arms, Drax’s arm began to shake as he feels the pressure.
Drax spins performing handseals and points out the window, the needles flew out the window with great velocity. He smiled thinking he had at last mastered the jutsu and it had improved from It’s previous level. “If I continue with these weak techniques I will improve my chakra control.”

[psyche]

Learned!