Shima [approved]

[Shima Exus]

Name: Shima Exus
Age: 15
Height: 5'10
Weight: 156lbs
Gender: Male
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Village: Leaf
Special:

AUBU

Secondary Weapons:

Hikari (Light) Bomb: 4 slots
Smoke Grenade:2 slots
Kunai: 3 slots
Exploding Tags: 2slots
Shuriken: 2 slots

Primary Weapon:

Kunai

Personality:

Very sure of himself, tries to help the helpless. Seems normal, but on the inside an Avenger. Shy when it comes to girls, and usually has to go(with some excuse) when he gets to chatting to one.

Appearance:

Hair: Between black and brown
Eyes: Brown with a greenish hue.
SkinColor: a lil brigh then Karmel
Usually Wearing: red sleveless undershirt with a black over coat similiar to the Chunnin vest. with kacky or black shorts
Have a bandage on his left thigh

Bloodlimit: None
NinJutsu Techniques:

Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Shadow Clone Jutsu)
Type: B-rank, Supplementary
Users: Uzumaki Naruto, Hatake Kakashi, Uchiha Itachi, Ebisu, etc.
Unlike the normal Bunshin no Jutsu (Art of the Doppelganger), this jutsu creates not just an illusion, but real bodies of the ninja. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among the user and every clone. This could be very dangerous if the user is low on chakra or makes many clones (like with Taju Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Multiple Shadow Clone Technique), making this technique forbidden), something Naruto doesn't have to worry about, since his chakra supply is very high thanks to the Kyubi. Kage Bunshin can't be detected by Byakugan (Hyuga Neji states this during his fight with Naruto during the third part Chunin exam). This is because the clones are real bodies with real chakra systems, identical to the user. It can't even be detected by the Sharingan. Because the clones are real they can do real damage and can take some damage themself, being even able to bleed, although they'll still disappear when enough damage has been done, which is usually after one hit.

Limitations of the Kage Bushin no Jutsu. An average User is capable of performing a Kage Bushin no Jutsu of up to Five clones, when first making a Clone each clone will cost twenty five chakra points, reasons why is because they need enough power to be capable of actually running around and being capable of multiple TaiJutsu attacks which are quite simple. Within each round a user at first hand MUST place in Five chakra points to keep the Clone alive one more round then they are capable of which is one round. This means that if a user makes two clones and wishes to have the clones active for three rounds the user must release a total of seventy chakra points in order to keep them up for basic TaiJutsu attacks. Such a technique is shunned against NinJutsu techniques for they would need more chakra points in order to perform.


]Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Jutsu)
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu, literally "Clone Technique", Viz "Art of the Doppelganger", English TV "Clone Jutsu"
Type: E-rank, Supplementary
Users: Uzumaki Naruto, Haruno Sakura, etc.
This is a basic technique known to all genin. Bunshin no Jutsu creates a clone of the user, which can used to create a diversion or cause confusion. Unlike Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Art of the Shadow Doppelganger), these clones aren't real, and thus cannot do any damage.

Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
Name: Henge no Jutsu, literally "Transformation Technique" English TV "Transformation Jutsu"
Type: E-rank, Supplementary
Users: Uzumaki Naruto, Umino Iruka, etc.
The user assumes the appearance of another person or animal. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Ninja Academy.

Joro Senbon (It's Raining Needles From Heaven)
Name: Joro Senbon, literally "Sprinkling Needles" Viz "It's Raining Needles From Heaven"
Type: C-rank, Offensive, Mid-range (5-10m)
Users: Shigure
A barrage of needles fly at the enemy from sockets in an umbrella that has been flung into the air. They come at the enemy from all directions and are controlled by chakra to increase accuracy. These needles have been known to have the power to pierce 5 mm of steel.

Kakuremino no Jutsu (Cloak of Invisibility Technique)
Name: Kakuremino no Jutsu, literally "Cloak of Invisibility Technique"
Type: E-rank, Supplementary
Users: Konohamaru
With this jutsu one uses a cloak or piece of cloth to make oneself blend in with the background, rendering oneself invisible.

Kanashibari no Jutsu (Temporary Paralysis Technique)
Name: Kanashibari no Jutsu, literally "Temporary Paralysis Technique"
Type: D-rank, Supplementary, Short to mid-range (0-10m)
Users: Orochimaru, ANBU, etc.
Used to cause one's opponent to lose the advantage of movement. Freezing them in their tracks, this Jutsu creates an opening for a more dangerous attack. Most ANBU seem to know this technique.

Henge No Jutsu
Rank: D Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: Allows the user to transform into an inanimated object (Non Moving) into the size of user while size of an animal or human decreases.
Special: Dog, Boar, Reverse Ram
Drawback: You can never gain the attributes of what you turn into. You are only capable of transforming into a human or animal that is of size, or few feet smaller. If hit once the user immediatly reverts back to their original state. If you transform into an inanimated object you can not move in any way for are transforming into something that can not move. The only way an inanimated object can move is if someone moves it for them. In animated objects in Henge does not have the ability to do or use jutsus.
Description: When using the seals of the Dog, Boar, and Reverse Ram the user cam quickly transform into any human, animal that is of size or a few feet smaller, or even a foot or two larger then before. At this level the user is capable of transforming into an object that is of size or a few inches smaller. The user at this stage is only capable of holding the form for five turns if transforming using E Henge, and Four Turns using D Henge at a time.

Konoha Shunshin no Jutsu (Leaf Instantaneous Body Skill) - Hidden Leaf Village
Rank: E
A technique which allows the user to transport in a veil of leaves.

GenJutsu Techniques:

Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique)
Name: Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu, literally "Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique"
Type: D-rank, Supplementary, Short range (0-5m)
Users: Hatake Kakashi
Narakumi no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a horrifying vision. The ninja will use the rat hand seal to cause a circle of leaves to spin and envelop the target and then fall away. Once cast the world will appear normal to the target until they see the illusion.

Kori shinchu no jutsu (Sly mind affect technique)
Name: Kori Shinchu no Jutsu, literally "Sly Mind Affect Technique"
Type: C-rank, supplementary, mid- to long-range (5+m)
Users: Oboro, Kagari, Mubi
Kori Shinchû no Jutsu is a Genjutsu which causes the target to travel around in circles. If the ninja is unable to detect the illusion very quickly, they can become exhausted mentally and physically because they are unable to reach their desired target by traveling along the same path over and over.

Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique)

TaiJutsu Techniques:

Gouken no Kamae (Iron fist stance)
Dainamikku-Entori (Dynamic Entry)
Konoha Daisenpu (Leaf Great Whirlwind)
Konoha Goriki Senpu (Leaf Strong Whirlwind)
Konoha Reppu (Leaf Gale)
Konoha Senpu (Konoha Hurricane)
Konoha Shoufuu (Leaf Rising Wind)
Konoha Boufuu (Leaf Winding Wind)
Kage Konoha Buyo (Shadow of the Dancing Leaf)
Douyou Kobushi (Shaking fist)
Omote Renge (Front Lotus)
Ura Renge (Reverse Lotus)
Asaku Jaku (Morning Peathingy)

History:

The Exus, a family which consisted of Shima's sister, mom, and dad. Living the poor life, Shima at the age of 6 lived in a world of arguments with his father, and strange men. Not knowing why they were arguing Shima ran out the door to see what the comotion was about. To great surprise Shima stod in silence as these men in tan capes and hoods(covering thier face) held shima's dad against the wall;choking the very life out of him. Three of them as the boy thought looking around. The three men hearing Shima come drops his father and say " well...well...what do we have here?" As soon as Shima's father heard that he said "Shima run!" Standing in fear shima didn' move. "Hey boss..?" one of the men say. "Yeah?" says the biggest man of them. "Why don't we take the boy until we get our money?". says the man. Shima flinching steped back slowly. When one of the men look over to finda Shinobi of the sit standing there. "Baru, my name. are these guys giving you trouble?" says the Shinobi. "Yes!" says Shima's father gasping for air. Baru moving fast a light kicks one of the hooded men; knocking him out. "Let's go we don't ned this!" says the guys carry the knocked out comrade with them...you have until next week!" as they run away. "using a healing tech. Baru quickly revives Baru's dad and disappears. "Who was that guy" Shima thought to himself. Shima's father takes him inside and explains his debt's he owns and how it's not safe here anymore.


When his sister and mother came home they soon packed up and headed for Konoha. 2 says in on the journey, a man with light blue eyes and grey hair appeared. shima's father yells "Who the hell are you!" "Non of your concern, no tell me are you Haruzai Exus?!"says the man. "What of it!....no...don't tell me your working for them" says Haruzai. "Hmph you'e saved me alot of time! NOW YOU DIE!" THe killer intent in his eyes was so powerful. Shima fell to his knees. Looking atte man he noticed a scar on his chest that said "Pain". The man began to use a fire style, tech. and all of a sudden a man Drop kicks him in the faces canceling his tech "Baru!" Haruzai yells. Wiping blood from his chin then man said finnaly a challenge". then the battle began non-stop they went at it they wee quals until he using a wierd move maing this giant bird appear grabing Baru and crshing him befor Shima's eyes. Breathing hard the man said "Now... where was i ...O THE PART WERE YOU DIE" pulling out a kunai the man slit Haruzai's throat and his sisters, and his moms with pure accuracy. But out of some miracle he missed the place which would instantly kill exus. Walking away the man said " What filth...:

Barely alive shima graps the map out of his dad's pocket and began to head torwards Konoha. When he reached the gate he collapsed. Guards spotted this a quickly sent him for threatment awakining he finds that this wasn't a dream and is questions my AUBU. Telling them everything he knows; they give him his own apartment to live in. Remembering the physical attributes he became mad that we wasn't able to save his family nor try. Training everyday to become powerful and somday reach AUBU classand use his power to findte man with the scar of "pain" and help the inocent.

[dragonfire]

Joro Senbon (It's Raining Needles From Heaven)
Name: Joro Senbon, literally "Sprinkling Needles" Viz "It's Raining Needles From Heaven"
Type: C-rank, Offensive, Mid-range (5-10m)
Users: Shigure
A barrage of needles fly at the enemy from sockets in an umbrella that has been flung into the air. They come at the enemy from all directions and are controlled by chakra to increase accuracy. These needles have been known to have the power to pierce 5 mm of steel.

This technique happens to have a prerequisite, you need to possess an umbrella as your main weapon, not a kunai. If you wish to have an umbrella as a weapon, which you would need to be from one of the three water oriented countries to have such a weapon, then you could use this technique.

Name: Tsūtenkyaku, 痛天脚, literally "Painful Sky Leg"
Type: C-rank, Offensive, Short range (0-5m)
Users: Tsunade
This jutsu is simply a kick to the ground. Combined with Tsunade's incredible strength, this kick results in either a gigantic crater or fracture along the ground, and can cause serious damage to the person she is attacking.

Other than the fact that you posted this technique twice, there is a prerequisite for its usage. You would need to be a medical nin. Only a medical nin get such techniques as this, since it requires quite a bit of chakra control to execute, and medical nin possess that type of control.

The rest looks fine to me, although I wish there was more Appearance and Personality.

[Shima Exus]

Better?! And also, i'll edit the personality and apperance if you want me to. I'd just like to know what you'd like me to add about it. You see i wrote this late last night and i don't think i really examined the jutsu i entered. Well i'm awake now and thank you for locical answer.

Signed, Shima Exus

[👺 Usiel]

I accept it

[fang]

...... >> << 2/3

[moondog]

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