Kinzoku Sabure (Finished)

[Kinz]

Name: Kinzoku Sabure
Age: 17
Height: 6'8
Weight: 320lbs
Gender: Male
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Birth Country: Thunder
Village: Non Ninja
Special:

Ninjutsu/Taijutsu specialist

Releases: Earth, Lightning, Metal (metal is from bl)

Secondary Weapons:

2 Kunai- 2 slots
40 Exploding tags- 10 slots
6 Smoke bombs - 3 slots

Primary Weapon:

Name Gourd of Iron
Rank: All ranks
Type: Gourd type weaponry (primary)
Effect: Holds Iron sand (see more below)
Special:Gourd used by the Masamune clan
Drawback: none
Description: The iron gourd is a large black cylinder with two large red lines running around the top and bottom of the cylinder. The gourd is also designed with few strange marking, kanji and tags here and there. It’s roughly 5 feet long, 2 feet in diameter (worn on the back of clan members). It contains a large amount of Iron sand, which is used for battle and various purposes. The gourd can contain roughly 250lbs of iron sand, which is not heavy to the clan whatsoever. Due the magnetic field which the Masamune clan members emit and the closeness within the magnetic field, the heavy gourd weighs close to nothing. (see more in jutsu section)
Limit: Can only be sold to masamune can members, extremely unlikely to be stolen….
Cost:900 Ryo

Personality:

Kinzoku Sabure:

Society:
A group of good people full of potential, being suppressed below the thumb of the wealthy and useless.

Law:
The means by which the suppressed masses can fight against their overpowered leaders.

Ninja Villages:
The place where people to weak to fight their suppression learn to strengthen themselves for the purpose of benefiting the suppressors.

The World:
A place to live and fight for the beliefs one holds dear, where a wealthy man may give orders, and where an unwealthy man may gain the strength to change the world and remove the iron fist holding him and his comrades in the depths of sadness.

Kinzoku Sabure is a man of few words. His past is riddled with loneliness and loss. He has been secluded the past 4 years of his life and in this time has developed a seriouse lack of social ability. He tends to laugh at inappropriate times, and also tends to do the opposite. His main reason for living is to free his clan that has been inslaved by the feudal lords of the thunder country.

Kinzoku generally has a tough time showing any kind of emotion. He sees everything as potential. Whether it has the potential to assit him in his only goal, or not. He isn't mean or anything of that nature, but many people see him as scary or a bully mainly due to his unusual size and build. He hates ninja villages because he sees them as a place where powerfull people congrigate to assist their own goals, and to further oppress the masses.

Appearance:

Kinzoku is a very large man. He stands at an average hieght for most of the men in his clan, but dwarfs mst others in comparison. Having light, brown, straight, shoulder length hair, and dark green eyes, Kinzoku is truely a sight to behold. He wears a sand colored brown longsleeve shirt, and the same color pants. He also has a white garment that hands around his waist and trails behind him. This garment is a variable tapestry. It shows a picture of a large mass of people toppleing a statue in a burning village. He has a gourd of iron strapped to his back, the strap of which is black and is at a diagnal slant across his front. On his right ear is 3 silver earings. One is in the lobe, and 2 following up the side of the ear. These earings are ment as a symbol of pride, used to show his comitment to his clans customs. Kinzoku's face is very stiff. It seems almost emtionless, like he is lost in thought or something. He has a dark tan skin color.

Bloodlimit: the Masamune (Iron Sand)
NinJutsu Techniques:
Curse seal of servitude
Seal Requirements: The seal is given to all members of the Masamune clan. The seal itself was created for the feudal lords who wish to control the entire clan. At around the age of 5, the seal is placed on the lower neck regions of both frontal and dorsal sides of the body (more so on the back of the neck). The reason behind the young age and location is to remind to clan members who they serve.
~Feudal lords Gensho, Hazanko and Diesho all know how to create the seal as they were the ones to overthrow and conquer the Masamune clan. They have only told oh so many people about the seal and its creation (mainly those who are ordered to apply the seal on the Clan members)
Seal Description: ~Looks like this~
The seal is tattooed on with a dark-red dye. It cannot be removed in anyway possible and all members of the clan bear it around there necks. There are specific and secret hand seal and movements which are performed by the lords which activate the seal (they do not have to be close at all for the seal to work). There are two types of activation from the seal. The first one completely cancels out any and all magnetic fields used by the Masamune clansmen; also send immense/crippling amounts of pain throughout the body. The second one uses the same type of cancellation and causes instant death, destroying neural connection from the head to the body. This causes massive seizures during activation and is horrible to witness. The clan member dies from not only asphyxiation, but complete loss of control for there lower regions (heart failure). Both activation types are extremely painful and help prevent any rebellion or secretes of the clan to be revealed.
Seal Bonus: No bonuses what so ever.
Seal Drawbacks: Besides there own death upon activation, no drawbacks.
Seal Cost: None, only to be placed on the necks of all the members.

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GenJutsu Techniques:

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TaiJutsu Techniques:

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History:

Kinzoku Sabure is a man of few words and one that few words can be said about. Not much is truly known about him. He never talks with anyone, and has never been one to stay in the same place for an extended amount of time. His overwhelming size has made it so that very few people do anything but fear him, though he has never given anyone cause for this reaction. This abnormal size comes from his genes. Every one of his clan members is larger then average, but few are seen away from the village. This is what separates Kinzoku from his fellow clan members. He is free.

Before Kinzoku was born, his clan had suffered a major disturbance. They had been enslaved for their unique powers, and made prisoners of those who were meant to protect them. He was lucky though. When he was first born and the Markers placed the seal on his skin his mother sent him away via a messenger bird. He could only assume his mother was punished, or more then likely dead. The bird carried the crying infant far down the mountain towards the cloud ninja village, where a kindly old man, who gave him a roof over his head and food in his stomach, adopted him.

Those first thirteen years are now a blur. He was in the ninja academy and his adopted father, the old man, provided him a home. In the academy he was basically a failure. He succeeded very rarely in learning most techniques, but that was about to change. On his thirteenth birthday he had a general party like most thirteen year olds would, but something odd happened. Every piece of silverware in the house began to shake and finally launch itself across the rooms. This obviously scared people attending, and they informed the guards. This immediately alerted the guards, because they knew of such an ability that was not meant to be kept warm here. This oddity needed to be imprisoned with its kind.

That was when he left the village. His father also had some knowledge about his clan, and after telling and gathering all the information and money he could, Kinzoku’s adopted father snuck him out of cloud and brought him along as far as he could. He let the 13-year-old boy off in the nearest village, and gave him instructions to keep moving and stay free. With that message said, the old man died, leaving the free boy all alone again.

Since that time, Kinzoku has been on the run. Gaining strength to accomplish his ultimate goal. The information he had received had opened his eyes to the atrocities of the world and gave him his mission. He would stop those that meaning to suppress those meant to be protected. He had lost everything in the name of freedom, and it made him realize the importance of it. Those that threatened freedom, especially that of his clans, needed to pay.

[Kinz]

Bloodlimit Techs:

Name: “Polarity Field”
Rank: C, B, A, (trained 6 c and 1 b)
Skill: Supplementary, Kekkai Genkai
Effect: Creates a constant field of Magnetism.
Special: The field is constantly emitted. When not in use, the field itself only expands a few inches from the body, but during use, it stretches so that the clansmen may use there Iron sand (directly affected by Rank). To maintain the constant field, Clan members chakra is very well refined (very similar to the refinement levels of the “Aburame clan”) See more below
Drawback: The field cannot be turned off and can only be suppressed to within a few inches off there body. This gives them a small, constant glow to those with chakra seeing power.
Description: Through decades of usage and refinement, Masamune clan members have found a way to convert there chakra into a Magnetic field. They have allowed them selves to become literally “walking electromagnets” with positive and negative poles being emitted from head to toe. Unfortunately, the Masamune clan members cannot turn off this field; they can only suppress it. These means that from a very young age, they have to learn how to refine there chakra to maintain and feed the field around them.
The field itself appears as a rather large dome that is emitted from the user, but in many cases, it can be be stretched and reshaped for certain jutsus and/or chakra conservation (think of the shape created when a magnetic placed onto of a pile of iron shavings).
When first learned, obtained, the members of the clan emit a field that stretches 10 meters long. If the iron sand were to pass there maximum range, then the sand would merely fall to the floor and becomes normal iron powder.
This means that the field must be relearn many times over if a clan member wishes to use there Iron sand and further. The training to increase the size of the field remains C-ranked and adding 10 more meters until a distance of 60 meters is achieved. From there, training becomes harder and goes up to B-rank training. Every B-ranked achieved after add an additional 10 meters until 120 meters is achieved. From 120 meters, training becomes much more difficult and is bumped to A-rank. A-rank training reaches a maximum of 180 meters. If the Masamune clan members wish to continue to gain more distance, then training is considered B-rank and you can only acquire 10 additional meters ever time learned.
Limit: Raiton release. Masamune , Kekkai Genkai. Must be relearned, if not, the Iron sand just falls to the floor as normal Iron powder

Name: “Iron Sand Domination”
Rank: C, B, A, S
Skill: Supplementary, Kekkai Genkai
Effect: Allows Clan members to control a set amount of Iron sand within there Magnetic field.
Special: No hand seals are required when controlling Iron sand. (see more below)
Drawback: ---
Description: With this technique, Masamune clan members can control there Iron sand (which is really Iron powder). The Iron sand within the magnetic field they emit is under there complete control. Unfortunately, the clan members can only control a set amount of Iron sand within there magnetic field.
C-ranked knowledge means that Clan members can control roughly 250lbs of Iron sand within there magnetic field.
B-ranked knowledge means that clan members can control roughly 500lbs of Iron sand within there magnetic field.
A-ranked knowledge means that clan members can control roughly 1000lbs of Iron sand within there magnetic field
S-ranked knowledge means that clan members can control roughly 3000lbs of Iron sand within there magnetic field.
After S-ranked, if the a clan members still wishes to control more Iron sand, then training is considered C-ranked, and you can add 150lbs.
Limit: Metal release. Masamune , Kekkai Genkai Must be relearned

Name: Iron Sand Transmutation
Rank: C, B, A
Skill: Supplementary, Kekkai Genkai
Effect: Allows Iron sand to be solidified, yet still controlled.
Special: No handseals required to alter the Iron sand. Directly affected by both “polarity field” and “Iron sand Domination”
Drawback:---
Description: With this skill, Masamune clan members can alter and solidify their Iron sand into any shape they desire. Through their Magnetic field, they can command their iron sand to realign and crystallize itself, forming solid Iron shapes. If the solid Iron sand were to go beyond the Magnetic field, it would simply return to its original iron powder state and fall to the floor. Any assortment of weapons can be created through this jutsu, from a large array of kunai, sendon and shuriken to Large swords, staffs, etc.
C-ranked: Allows the clan members to create medium size shapes (Equal to the normal a size of Humans~250bls worth.)
B-ranked: allows the clan members to create Large size shapes
(Equal to the size of a car~1000lbs worth)
A-ranked: Allows the clan members to create Huge size shapes
(Equal to large trucks~ unlimited worth)
Limit: Metal release. Masamune , Kekkai Genkai

Name: "Setsudanki" (Serration)
Rank: D-ranked
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Adds sharper triangular edges to solid iron sand. Maybe paired with most Iron sand creations.
Special: Dog hand sign only
Drawback: ---
Description: With this jutsu, Masamune clan members can add sharp triangular edges of any design to there Solid Iron sand. This add additional slashing and cutting power to there weaponry or Iron sand
Limit: Masamune , Kekkai Genkai. C-rank in Polarity field, Iron sand Transmutation and Iron sand Domination

Name: Iron sand Extraction
Rank: C, B, A
Skill: Supplementary, Kekkai Genkai
Effect: Extracts Iron to add to the users command
Special: No handseal
Drawback: Cannot extract any iron sand beyond that of the Magnetic field emmited. Some areas cannot yield the desired Iron what so ever
Description: By pumping additional amounts of chakra into there polarity field, users can extract the and convert metal in the ground to be used as Iron sand. The field creates a sort of a "vacuum" effect which can be used to break down rocks, stone, etc. and extract iron sand.
C-rank: Allows for free floating metal particles to be extracted from the ground below. In about one post, a user can add roughly 200 lbs of of iron sand to there field
B-rank: Allows much more iron to be extracted for use. The polarity fields penetrates deeper into the ground below, tapping large amounts of Iron to be used . Roughly 400lbs extracted in one post.
A-rank: The speed at which extraction occurs as well as the amount increases. In addition to the ground metals being converted into Iron sand, enemy weaponry will slowly break down and be used as apart of the iron sand reserves. Roughly 800lbs of iron sand can be extracted within one post from the floor. Extracting iron sand from enemy weapons takes 12 posts. Taking iron sand from weapons is a longer process, and extract very little sand (not very effective). Weapons look as if they are slowly crumbling into sand and cannot be pulled away from opponents.
Limit: Masamune , Kekkai Genkai. C-rank in Polarity field, Iron sand Transmutation and Iron sand Domination

Name: "Satetsu shokushu" (Iron Tendrils)
Rank: C-ranked
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Creates offensive/defensive type tentacles from back.
Special: Dog, rat, dragon, bird
Drawback: ---
Description: The users solidifies their iron sand and creates 2 large whip like tentacles (roughly 10 meters long, 4in thick). The tentacles can stay close to the body of the user, attaching themselves to the users back or gourd; or be used upon a pile of Iron sand on the floor (like a tendril sticking straight out from the floor). These tentacles can fulfill a variety of tasks, from attacking and slashing opponents like whips, or providing some sort of defense against close range attacks. If the user wishes to gain more tendrils, then they must relearn this technique over again, gaining two more tendrils each time (Max of 8)
Limit:Masamune , Kekkai Genkai. C-rank in Polarity field, Iron sand Transmutation and Iron sand Domination

"Shougeki Koa" (Ballistics Core)
Rank: C-ranked
Skill: Ninjutsu, offensive
Effect: Explodes selected creations, causing shrapnel to damage enemies.
Special: Rat, Dog. Use Tiger to activate
Drawback: May harm both friend and foe. Iron sand may also exceed polarity field and be lost. Must make some sort of physical contact with creations.
Description: By creating a small orb of intensified electrical chakra, the user can cause an Iron sand creation to explode. He/she must place electrified chakra orb into a creation, which drastically and violently shifts the magnetic fields in the orb (which are opposite to the users) upon command. The solid creations begin to erupt and explode outward, causing lumps of fast moving iron and shrapnel to collide and harm everyone (radius of 20 meters).
Limit: Cloud village exclusive (Raiton release). Masamune , Kekkai Genkai. C-rank in Polarity field, Iron sand Transmutation and Iron sand Domination

"Satetsu No Bushin" (Iron Sand clones)
Rank: C, B
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Creates clones of Iron sand that can fill of variety of tasks.
Special: Dog, Dragon, tiger
Drawback: Can only travel 3/4 of the users “Polarity field”. Moves somewhat slow since there made of iron
Description: By solidify the Iron sand, The user is able to create clones of iron sand, with hollowed insides (to use less chakra and sand). The clones can punch, kick and use weapons assigned by the user. C-rank allows 3 clones to be create, while B-ranked allows 6 clones to be created. The clones can take a good hit, but revert back to its original powder state if struck with an attack that is stronger then "1C-rank". If the user wishes to attain more clones, then it is considered C-ranked training, to add 1 more clone.
Limit: Masamune , Kekkai Genkai. C-rank in Polarity field, Iron sand Transmutation and Iron sand Domination

"Satetsu Kidou" (Magnetic Orbital Assault) (only 5)
Rank: C-ranked
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Creates multiple triangle the size of large tennis balls which hover around the user. Used in both attack and defense
Special: Dragon, Rat
Drawback: Lasts for 10 turns
Description: By solidifying there Iron sand, the user creates 5 triangles which hover and orbit roughly a few feet around the body. These little triangles continue to hover around the user and provide an offensive and defensive orbit. If an enemy were to come to close, the triangles can proceed to attack by colliding into the enemies body, Or can be used to deflect throwing projectiles by colliding into them. If the user wishes to add more Triangles, they can relearn this jutsu and add 3 more triangles to the orbit. (Maximum of 15 all together)
Limit: Masamune , Kekkai Genkai. C-rank in Polarity field, Iron sand Transmutation and Iron sand Domination

"Karada Kousatetsu"(Iron sand Body Armor)
Rank: C-rank
Skill: Ninjutsu, defensive
Effect: Allows the user to create a suite of armor from iron sand
Special: Hold Dragon while Iron sand forms around user
Drawback: Cuts polarity field in half. Reduced movement.
Description: By allowing the iron sand to cover there body, the user can transform the iron powder into a suite of armor. The Iron powder will begin to surround the user, with some parts solidifying,while others remaining in a powdered form. The solidifying Iron sand acts like strong plates of Iron (think like scales), while the none solidified portions still allows for movement. The users, from head to toe is covered in this plated armor (with eyes, ears, etc exposed for senses), armor is extremely durable, and can withstand "3C-ranks" jutsus before being destroyed. This does consume much more chakra to maintain, as well as it does effect the polarity field of the user (meaning that the field emitted will be having a much more difficult time extending outward)
Limit:Masamune , Kekkai Genkai. C-rank in Polarity field, Iron sand Transmutation and Iron sand Domination

"Satetsu Shojo"(Iron Maiden)
Rank: A-ranked
Skill:Ninjutsu, offensive
Effect: The deadly finishing move of the Masamune clan. If they capture an opponents in Iron sand, then can proceed to impale them within a large metal box
Special:Must capture opponent in Iron sand, Holds Tiger seal.
Drawback:---
Description: Upon capturing an enemy in their iron sand, The user allows the Iron sand to surround the opponents body completely immobilizing them. The iron sand begins to reform and reshape into a medieval "Iron Maiden". Only the eyes of the opponent are exposed during this. Within seconds, the iron sand on the surface turns inward and begins to form spikes which impale the enemy all over there body(head to toe), killing them very fast or slow if the user wishes so.
Limit:Masamune , Kekkai Genkai. C-rank in Polarity field, and Iron sand Domination, B-ranked in Iron sand Transmutation

[Kinz]

Other ninjutsu:

[Kinz]

Genjutsu:

[Kinz]

Taijutsu:

Senbon Taitoku Stance
Rank: E Rank
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: A way of holding senbon that adds to all attacks made with them.
Special:None
Drawback: Required to know for ALL other Senbon Taitoku jutsu
Description: Holding the senbon between knuckles but also holding their wrist back and the senbon farther up then most senbon users hold it. This adds to power and accuracy and allows the Senbon Taitoku to master their craft.
Limit: Must be of the Senbon Taitoku

Gouken no Kamae (Iron fist stance)
Rank: E
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Once in this stance one’s speed and strength increases due to positioning of muscles and limbs.
Special: None
Drawback: None
Description: Not exactly a technique, but a fighting style. It packs tons of speed and power and relies on the user's physical strength and fitness. It is also the prime holder of the majority of Konoha's elite taijutsu techniques. Standing with one arm behind their back and one extended, the user is ready for a quick strick with their fists and feet. This leaves them open for quick spins and jumps that will power their attacks.
Limit: none

Shunshin no Jutsu, ug‚̏p, (Body Flicker Technique)
Rank: "C" Rank
Type: NinJutsu
Effect: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported.
Special: ---
Drawback The user is only capable of doing this THREE Times per day after learning it the first time. Each time learned the user is capable of going into this multiple times. Each time learned the user is capable using this technique an extra turn per day. If the user uses this technique more then stated, the user's muscles will cramp and render the user unable to run about.
Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination. Shisui Uchiha, one of the most talented Uchiha, was feared as "Shisui of the Body Flicker" ("Shunshin no Shisui"), likely referring to this technique.
Limit: Universal Technique for all Academy Students, this technique is needed however for the Senkou Kensei Kenshiki

[Kinz]

Kido is dead and this charry is ready to go

[Okami]

Pretty good I guess. One thing though is that smoke bombs are 2 per 1 slot. You get more. :]

[ryu]

-_-'' Not very heart broken it seems?

1/3

[Kinz]

Not to sad about it, kido was boring except for his perviness, and there are like 3 girl stone nin......boring

[ryu]

-_-''''' Ok thenn...

Have fun with this new character...

[seishou]

Longer Personality. Those segmented paragraphs wont do.

More detail in History. (If you want)

Longer Appearance. 1 Paragraph seems dreadfully short

This Bloodlimit is awful specific in its BIO requirements. And I intend to adhere very Strictly especially in this one.

[Kinz]

I expanded the personality, and as far as the appearence goes...I think i laid it out pretty well. It explains everything he wears and everything he looks like. I really would not know how to describe the contores of his face or anything so that seems ok. I like the history the way it is cause it rounds out. Thanks for the insight, all comments are oppreciated

[ryu]

Yeah,

I ve seen other BIOs with similar personality layouts.

Its ok.

[[.:Uchiha Obuza:.]]

Looks good I guess...

[1/3]

[Kinz]

actually thats 2/3 ryu already approved and restated happiness with this

Himiko already gave acceptence to me via pm fyi.

[/ Toki /]

3/3 Then.