Esteed again [Training]
Jul 25, 2008 14:01:24 GMT -7
Post by Runeska on Jul 25, 2008 14:01:24 GMT -7
8/20
"Tai," called his master, "You're supposed to have a wakizashi in the other hand. There is nothing wrong with the stance at this second.”
However, Tai’s face squenched up more, still unsure of himself. “Are you sure? I feel…” His blades dropped downward for a second reflecting the confusion within his mind. If he did this right, he’d have moved on already. But this was more than strange
“Yes,” he said, furrowing his brown while cutting Tai off, “You just have a lot to work toward this style. Continue.”
Renewing his effort, Tai attempted getting back into his stance. Getting into the stance itself was easy, but when instructed to hold it in that position, his left arm started to falter. It was such a strain, due to the extra weight. His left arm was obviously weaker than the left. To add to that, holding the blade as he had caused the weight to tip toward the outside of his body, further weakening the stance. He dealt with however, and pushed on through the pain. It would be worth it in the end. After holding that position for about half an hour without moving, his master finally allowed him to move.
As soon as he tried to take his first step, he fell over. Both his legs were asleep from standing in one spot for so long. It was stupid of him, but apparently, Tai had locked his legs to deal with the unease. As a result, his legs were both asleep, and he couldn’t stand at first.
"Come on Tai, if you struggle with a mere stance, I'm not sure if this style is for you. Perhaps you should leave."
Shaking his head profusely, Tai yelled out, "No wait! I got it, I'm getting up!" It took a bit of effort, but he was up within a minute. Both legs were still sleep, and he was still ready to fall. To wake them up, he tried slapping them with the flat of his blades. The strikes were numb on his legs, as if they wouldn’t respond. However, the circulation got moving after a minute. Turning back to his master, he said, "See, I'm up"
"Very well," said his mater "Now, get back in the stance again and wait. I'll give you further instruction in just a moment."
Without asking question, Tai resumed from where he left off. This time, he didn't lock his legs, and tried not to let his blades drop. He knew that as soon as he had, his master would be back on him again. He didin't plan on failing.
A frame of time passed, perhaps another twenty minutes. His master was still yet to return. His arms were slowly tiring, and beginning to feel like lead weights. Focusing himself, he held the offhand sword tighter, for it was beginning to droop to the side. Another ten minutes passed by, and he was beginning to lose it again. All the other students inside the dojo were laughing at his efforts, and it was getting very annoying. He’d have turned around and said something, but that’s when his master returned.
He was surprised that Tai had stayed there that long. “I thought you’d have moved by now? Hm…” He appeared to be inspecting his stance for any flaws or mistakes in it. A moment later, he began to scrutinize and point out so many mistakes in his stance. “Your knees aren’t supported enough. Your feet are too far apart.” He then inspected his upper body. Your back shouldn’t be bent or arched. Raise your right arm a little more.” He then stopped, and looked on his left arm again. “Tai, I’m warning you. You cannot lag behind, or else you will be here forever. You may stop for a moment”
Immediately, Tai lowered his arms and relaxed his legs. Almost in response, their was a great release of sweat and heat from his body, as if a great tension had lifted from air. He relished in this relaxed state for a moment. However, as soon as the soreness set into his body, master Ren told him to rise again. He did so at such a hurried panicky pace, that the aches and pain in his body didn’t catch up until a moment later. He was fine and ready to continue within one second. Then the next, his face tensed up with his neck craning sideways. Every limb in his body suddenly had so much unrestrained tension and pain, but he tried not to let it show.
“Now, raise your blades again,” said Ren again. Tai stood in the stance that he was told to. Every muscle and nerve in his body was yelling and creaking. From here, Ren inspected his stance again. It had improved only slightly. He still had his left blade angled too low, for his left arm felt like it would collapse. He pushed on forward, and corrected that, which his only major flaw in his stance. It held for less than a minute, then collapsed. Shaking his head, his master called down to him, “Still to heavy for your off arm? Would you like a wooden sword instead?” A second passed, then he said, “You’ll never get anywhere without holding that stance properly for any length of time.”
"Tai," called his master, "You're supposed to have a wakizashi in the other hand. There is nothing wrong with the stance at this second.”
However, Tai’s face squenched up more, still unsure of himself. “Are you sure? I feel…” His blades dropped downward for a second reflecting the confusion within his mind. If he did this right, he’d have moved on already. But this was more than strange
“Yes,” he said, furrowing his brown while cutting Tai off, “You just have a lot to work toward this style. Continue.”
Renewing his effort, Tai attempted getting back into his stance. Getting into the stance itself was easy, but when instructed to hold it in that position, his left arm started to falter. It was such a strain, due to the extra weight. His left arm was obviously weaker than the left. To add to that, holding the blade as he had caused the weight to tip toward the outside of his body, further weakening the stance. He dealt with however, and pushed on through the pain. It would be worth it in the end. After holding that position for about half an hour without moving, his master finally allowed him to move.
As soon as he tried to take his first step, he fell over. Both his legs were asleep from standing in one spot for so long. It was stupid of him, but apparently, Tai had locked his legs to deal with the unease. As a result, his legs were both asleep, and he couldn’t stand at first.
"Come on Tai, if you struggle with a mere stance, I'm not sure if this style is for you. Perhaps you should leave."
Shaking his head profusely, Tai yelled out, "No wait! I got it, I'm getting up!" It took a bit of effort, but he was up within a minute. Both legs were still sleep, and he was still ready to fall. To wake them up, he tried slapping them with the flat of his blades. The strikes were numb on his legs, as if they wouldn’t respond. However, the circulation got moving after a minute. Turning back to his master, he said, "See, I'm up"
"Very well," said his mater "Now, get back in the stance again and wait. I'll give you further instruction in just a moment."
Without asking question, Tai resumed from where he left off. This time, he didn't lock his legs, and tried not to let his blades drop. He knew that as soon as he had, his master would be back on him again. He didin't plan on failing.
A frame of time passed, perhaps another twenty minutes. His master was still yet to return. His arms were slowly tiring, and beginning to feel like lead weights. Focusing himself, he held the offhand sword tighter, for it was beginning to droop to the side. Another ten minutes passed by, and he was beginning to lose it again. All the other students inside the dojo were laughing at his efforts, and it was getting very annoying. He’d have turned around and said something, but that’s when his master returned.
He was surprised that Tai had stayed there that long. “I thought you’d have moved by now? Hm…” He appeared to be inspecting his stance for any flaws or mistakes in it. A moment later, he began to scrutinize and point out so many mistakes in his stance. “Your knees aren’t supported enough. Your feet are too far apart.” He then inspected his upper body. Your back shouldn’t be bent or arched. Raise your right arm a little more.” He then stopped, and looked on his left arm again. “Tai, I’m warning you. You cannot lag behind, or else you will be here forever. You may stop for a moment”
Immediately, Tai lowered his arms and relaxed his legs. Almost in response, their was a great release of sweat and heat from his body, as if a great tension had lifted from air. He relished in this relaxed state for a moment. However, as soon as the soreness set into his body, master Ren told him to rise again. He did so at such a hurried panicky pace, that the aches and pain in his body didn’t catch up until a moment later. He was fine and ready to continue within one second. Then the next, his face tensed up with his neck craning sideways. Every limb in his body suddenly had so much unrestrained tension and pain, but he tried not to let it show.
“Now, raise your blades again,” said Ren again. Tai stood in the stance that he was told to. Every muscle and nerve in his body was yelling and creaking. From here, Ren inspected his stance again. It had improved only slightly. He still had his left blade angled too low, for his left arm felt like it would collapse. He pushed on forward, and corrected that, which his only major flaw in his stance. It held for less than a minute, then collapsed. Shaking his head, his master called down to him, “Still to heavy for your off arm? Would you like a wooden sword instead?” A second passed, then he said, “You’ll never get anywhere without holding that stance properly for any length of time.”