[ -- the storm sage]

[– red]

only designated staff are allowed to grade here, my storyline will be starting soon.

[35 -- 80]

Sutomu Keiro [Storm Channeling]
Rank: B Rank
Skill: Ninjutsu
Special: Requires use of Shuugoumanako, adds 4 Hand Seals to techniques used through this jutsu - Ox, Dog, Horse, Dragon.
Effect: After activating the Shuugoumanako, the ninja can extend his own Chakra through the elements his eye can see, allowing him to create jutsu up to 50 feet away (17 yards) from where he stands. Other jutsu must be used in conjunction with this one to take advantage of this ranged manipulation. The appropriate Release Channelling Jutsu(s) must also be used in order to take advantage of this jutsu.
Limits: Requires Sansutomu Blood Limit, requires Shuugoumanako jutsu. Can only use this ability three times per day.

Chapter One

-- Rise, The Storm Sage


A dull rain, seemingly not to touch the light crimson complexion of his face. The sansutomu wore the black cloak given to him by his father proudly. Hands were too short to actually fit in through the sleeves so right hand rested upon the button of the cloak, hanging out. The storms eye was not yet activated but a jutsu was already being prepared. Crimson vessels stared into the distance, before actually closing ocular vision to peer into dark and to finally open them once more, eye changing to a more blue approach. The world swirled in it’s regular elliptical motion and a gaze sat upon the moon that day, opposing forces. Eyes could see as far as the water shot forth, and over 50 yards his eyes could see. A smirk came forth, towards the moon a yell from the rain forest could be heard. ’Wolves do not descend in rain…’ he spoke, the thoughts of a curios sansutomu fluttered for but a moment. Fingers upon the left of him, shot forth into his own pocket and pulled out kunai though the motion had not been visible.

Not once would danger come to mind, but it seemed he could stand in one place and train himself for this. Even much more meters would have to be attained in order for him to complete the training but lots of chakra drain, occurred within it’s beauty. Handseals occurred within his cloak, the kunai acting as a small utensil in order to just wave around loosely in it’s steel texture to cut the very wind itself. Closing his eyes still did not stop the sight. Looking straight into the distance he would have to focus on a surface of wind. It moved in every sort of place, but going to the furthest distance possible was great as ever. But in the meantime, there would be native forces moving along the forest, possibly spies who wished to kill the poor kid. ’We’ll get this one and use his body!’ said one of the black masked men. There were two in total but it did not occur to Hannibal that danger was approaching. Searching for a sign, any controlling of the wind was going to be fatal for him to learn.

’Finally!’ he shouted out. A wind source, as far as he could go was seen. Sweat mixed within rain as the boy seemed to be straining his powers a bit to even get this far sight and to create chakra within it’s limit. Swiftly doing so, the wind would form into a giant ball and begin spinning from a while away. It’s course was known from no one, it was unseen. But a swift wind was dragging through the trail as the trees on either side of the road would blow in it’s rage as it brushed its way on down to Hannibal. The criminals swiftly took out their senbon, chanting a slow chant as the needles would begin to glow. A swift reaction was made as Hannibal with his brilliant outlook swiftly spun around without any motion or muscle in his body moving at all. The wind created a giant barrier, a razor wind of sorts and cut off the senbons trail and had them stick to a tree. Soon enough they would explode into a fury of wood splinters and still be shot off course within the razor wind, traveling back to his enemies.

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The splinters would shoot forth, as rain drops ascended into them. Hannibal would hear the explosion and immediately begin staring at two wet shinobi that seemed to be dodging some sort of projectile shot at them. The precaution was made and the signal to fight also. Jutsu was being created forth as they spoke, and it was good enough that Hannibal had decided on fighting them and bringing them to the Amekage. There were rumors of a new election of Amekage, his name had been shot around into the crowd also, and admirably there was a few people that seemed to be on his mind for doing so. ’Arial…’ he said. A smirk placed upon his face, because only the strongest of the village were granted the position of being the Amekage, and he was sure that anyone running was not of his caliber. Staff wielded into hands and his eyes stretched forth a mighty forest filled within rain, and the terrain was easily set for someone to die upon. Disappearing within a veil of water, Hannibal would appear before one of the men.

Trapping them both by standing in front of them, he would push forth his staff in order to pummel both of them in mouths. Exact facial expressions were estimated from the cerebellum, in which it’s eyes matched at the two in a split second. Brute strength placed within the force of the staff and it seemed that the shinobi were not ordinary. It was going to take much more for them to get killed. Twisting his staff clockwise and then back counter clockwise would start a chain reaction, knives slipping out of each end. A spin would emerge from the creative shinobi and it seemed the black masked men were not easily beaten. Falling a little faster than normal, they would get a little more leeway than expected and only get cuts upon their chests instead of on their faces. Hannibal began spinning his staff quickly and as they reached the ground the blade would slip back into its respectable place and feet would land upon the staff, applying pressure so it would there forth bend down.

Springing him forward in a faster motion than the body flicker itself, he would be in range of them, and the kunai pulled out earlier which was in his sleeve, in perfect range. The two nodded to each other, and the world within the Sansutomu’s eyes would glimmer once, seeing them preparing something beneath them. It seemed like a rush from the ground itself surged through them, purely chakra condensed in rain, water, and lightning itself shot forth at the sage. Un expectantly, the blast would hit the chest of the shinobi and a blast would there forth cause a chain reaction. The momentum of the ball was even faster than that of two body flickers combined. It’s speed courageously pounded the shinobi into the mud and stammered him onto his staff. It swiftly changed course, and it seemed that the one named Hannibal was in a bit of a predicament because now he was facing some one he had never faced before, a new power which needed no hand seals and, why?

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’He must not know us Ying…’ said Yang. ’Possibly, but who hasn’t heard of us? Hahahaha’ laughed Ying. A black and white ora filled both of their places and a laughter shot forth into the heavens as a giant dragon formed of ying and yang. At that point, Hannibals eyes seemed to see beauty within it, the velocity of the storm was such an inspiring thing to see behind them. They had no idea of the power that he held within him, the storm sage. A smirk fell forth, their names were known and he would chisel it upon their tombstone when they were six feet under. Of course their caliber seemed to match his within a single movement, but it wasn’t going to be enough for the shinobi to just stand there. Quickly a leap forth and running to his opponents with open intention. Shots from the dragon, black and white balls of chakra which steamed their way down to him. Swift jumps into the air and spins of the entire legs which made him look like a dog made the moment golden.

His hands stood in one symbol after many, and holding it as he ran forth. His shady hat covering him from the rain, any sensei would wear it though he was none. The great sansutomu hopped off trees to get towards them within a matter of seconds. His palm stretched forth and an black orb took it’s empty space. Lightning surrounded it, and as he threw it into the air after descending he would create even more seals. Just like the fight before, his opponents would be preparing another jutsu. They seemed to be aiming their fingers with direct contact with each other to shoot at him. ’Unless you can somehow create a massive defense right now, your going nowhere!’ said Ying and Yang at the same time. Their hands covering each other and a blue orb of light with a black radiance following around it’s elliptical shape was shot forth. Quickly the orb was thrown simultaneously from both ends and they would meet within a single second. Sound itself seemed to stop within that second.

Ying and Yang were experiencing the same thoughts which occurred within the minds of all three. Sound was being absorbed within the orb, and life itself seemed to be dragging in with it. Now the symbol of ying and yang following with crimson lightning following its course was here. The orb would become unstable and begin falling. Hannibal still descending would kick it, and would be sent flying backwards with immense force as the orb would destroy creating a giant explosion. A radioactive bounce would fly out in every direction, the velocity of a nuclear explosion. It was being a little arrogant as all were trapped within the orb. A siren flew throughout the entire village, bouncing off of every water substance possible. It was a little odd to see although. Both of the opposing enemies were given their voices back but they could not throw it over the sound being created by the powerful explosion, who would crawl forth from this giant explosion alive?

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’Fuck!’ screamed the Sansutomu. The explosion left a crater within the center of the forest, and the ying yang twins were not standing. The shinobi took his staff out the ground as scars became visible around his arms. Quickly he stepped back out of the crater, a storm was overhead, and there was no more light visible, and only lightning was giving off a little light as it went off. Within the first strike of lightning, the ying yang twins were getting up. Within the second strike of lightning, a sort of lightning radiance was coming off of their entire body. ’Just how many damn releases do these guys have!?’ thought Hannibal as he began dancing around knowing they could not see him as he saw them. The rain was really helping out his vision a lot, visibly seeing the two looking around for any signs. It seemed one was rarely good at hearing and the other at sight. ’Over there!’ said Ying. A giant beam was shot forth in the direction.

A flicker of his body was heard once more. ’Amazing…’ said Hannibal as he looked confused standing atop the first tree he could find. ’Right there yang!’ said Ying. It had to be a transition within powers. They both could give each other their power within a limit of seconds, or that was the only thing that the sansutomu could come up with at the moment. Another giant beam of light lit up the scenery and a high jump would have to be made. But now that he was in the air, you could hear the two laughing a very sinister laugh. Both holding a hand in the air with a giant radiance forming on their two first fingers. ’Dragon beam!’ they said in a very high pitched tone, harmonically. Hannibals eyes shot open, the beam was unavoidable now, and as the beam hit him, his eyes shot off, it felt as if he was dying at that very second as Ying and Yang began to cheer. His entire world went black for him, but it could have been the no light scene that was going on.

Lightning shot past him as he fell, giving him light in his harsh time. The kunai still in his hand was going to prove much more useful than he attempted it to be. Little strength he only held it out towards Yang’s head, and as soon as he would descend before them, Ying would dodge his body as a kunai stuck into the head of his twin. Rage was seen within his eyes as lightning flickered upon his body. The kunai stuck in and quickly Hannibal jumped back as he looked up. He did not have to use his blood limit to know when lightning was coming down at this point, it felt radioactive in the spot he was standing in. Kunai acted as a rod and lightning surged through the body of Yang and the body steamed as it fell down. Fire lit upon his back as it set light for the two. A laughter, cynical nonetheless was produced within the next flurry of seconds and it seemed as an aggravating tone other than one that was going towards actual laughter. A very depressing feeling fell over Hannibal at that very second, was he in trouble?

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Hannibal began running, no more chakra was left within him and the search for it was going to be a little hard to recover. ’Psst, over here!’ said a familiar voice as he ran looking back. A thump would stop him in his tracks and create a very uneasy feeling in the person talking. ’Damn Hannibal! That really hurt!’ said Arial. His eyes brightened finally, the chakra seemed to be surging through him as she gave him a kiss. It was a little uneasy seeing what his personality and history had for him. Vengeance was becoming sort of an outlook rather than a feeling. Wanting to protect this girl was only giving him thoughts of protecting the village that his parents had protected, because why would they still protect their village even after their people were being wiped out? Chakra could now be seen, his eyes awakened, and techniques could be shot forth from over 50 meters away, his eyes needed to take a rest momentarily before coming back to do their work.

It was going to be a little hesitant to fight this man now with Arial here, she created many problems. It seemed she was still reading. The book was wet so she could understand better than him how to really see things in her eyes, a miracle truly. A fury of sounds came forth as water trickled down the two. They were evenly matched now that he had a little chakra to fight him with. A sword came forth in his hands, although not seen being on his body at first, but another thing seemed to dazzle the one named Hannibal. Ying smiled and chuckled as Hannibal began to recognize what really was going on. Breathing really hard, he would begin to get many thoughts of retreating, he had no real intention of what to do now that he was in trouble. ’How in the hell are you able to do that!?’ said Hannibal. ’You shall see soon enough, yeeehahahahahahahah!!!’

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