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[Takenshi Hyuuga]

Name: Takenshi Hyuuga
Age: 15
Height: 5'7
Weight: 162 lbs
Gender: Male
Alignment: True Neutral
Birth Country: Fire
Village: Waterfall
Special:

Taijustu Specialist
Ninjustu Specialist
GenJustu Nonspecialist

Minor
Herbalist
Future ANBU-Falcon Divsion
Beast Master

Release
Water Release
Lighting Release

Fighting Style
Jyuuken

Secondary Weapons:

Exploding Tagx20
Senbonx25
Smoke Grenade x4
Light bomb x2

Primary Weapon:

Short Sword (Overview)
Rank: "C"
Type: Main
Effect: Swords that slash hack, dice and anything else within this genre that reaches a certain length.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Any bladed weapon that is longer then one foot, but shorter then two feet. These swords can be any types such as the Short Sword, or the Tanto, or even the Mechete.
Limit: These types of weapons may be capable of being bought inside any Weapon Shop
Cost: 1,000 Ryo

Personality:

Takenshi suffer from a Muti-Personality disease mostly found with child abuse or violence in the home. Takenshi has 3 different alter ego which are completely and may switch in and out of each other at anytime.

1st Alter Ego
This alter ego is extreme hyperactive with no common sense at all. This is extreme clumsy sometimes can’t even walk in a straight line, but is very charismatic never on anyone bad side. Does anything that anyone tell him to do good or bad. Also this ego is extremely artistic can draw anything it he want or write with such details it makes right in the story. In the mix of battle this ego is very unpredictable in battle just does anything that comes mind.

2nd Alter Ego
This alter is ego is down to earth kind of person. He takes life for what is it, he is a real downer. He likes to shatter the plan or dream of people by using pure straight facts or common sense, but is very formal in how he presents himself. Always use his fine table matters. Even in a fight he very elegant and dramatic in all his move and Justus in the heat of battle, and takes his time on every ting.

3rd Ego
Now this alter is just quiet but as crazy and demented such anyone. When he talk he about extremely graphic things such tear or ripping people organs out his bare hands in extreme details makes anyone back away from him, but when a fight is brewing that is not directed at him he shy away from, but when a fight comes to him he is always ready. In battle he loves to use this hand in battle. To him it makes feel the anguish he places upon his opponent much more satisfying for him.

Appearance:

Head&Face
Takenshi is sandy blonde hair down to his neck. His face is more of a ball shape then a egg shape head. He has hazel color eyes that change depending on the season and the temperature .His ears are very small and are cover by has his hair. He also wear a necklace around his neck. The symbol on the necklace is the Hyuuga symbol.

Upper body
His upper is slim build but show some muscle. Very compact how his body is structure. He wears a long sleeve shirt where the sleeves come over his hands. The shirt is a black with the Hyuuga symbol on the back. Under the shirt there is a underarmour type shirt for extra protection. A sword sling comes across his body to prevent any hinder in his movement and reaction time.

Lower body
He wears dark blue short down to his knees, and the rest is taped up. On his right hips is his pouch wear he keeps all his secondary weapons. Also beneath the tape on his left leg is the side branch seal instead of on his head like most Hyuuga.On the sole of Takenshi ninja sandal is grooved different for grip mainly help the 1st ego not fall.

Bloodlimit: Hyuuga
NinJutsu Techniques:

Look Below

GenJutsu Techniques:

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TaiJutsu Techniques:

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History:

Before the Academy:
Takenshi was born in the leaf at the Hyuuga Mansion like all Hyuuga. Like his father he was also a side-branch member of the Hyuuga clan. Takenshi felt fine being a side-branch no one treaty any different expect his Father. His father expected the world of Takenshi. Anything that Takenshi did wrong or not perfect he would hit for it. The first time he did something was on his back from an errand given by his father to pick eggs, milk, ramen, and a stick of butter. On the way coming into the store he trip an felling cracking all the eggs all over the floor. His father turns a dark red, as Takenshi said sweetly “Sorry Daddy”. Then Slap him across the face, then slam him against wall by his shirt. Yelling in such a way could understand what he was saying. Spitting all over face Takenshi instantly started to tear up but Father slap him again for tearing up and then just drop him leave their in the kitchen. Takenshi just sat there trying his hardest not cry. This all the age of 5.His Mother would not even help at all she would just watch as her only children just pummeled day and night. She may be showing her fear in not stand up the father and telling to stop. Then throughout the day anyone what happened he say some lame excuse like I fell or I just got in a fight with bully. Slowly Takenshi was being withdrawn from the house getting in his room talking to himself. His mother was concern about him talking to him so took him to a doctor. The hand charka then a bright red moving up and down over Takenshi head and found strong pattern of brain waves but more one set of brainwave. The doctor continued by saying this indicate that your child as more than one personality actually according to the brain waves he has 3 different personalities. The doctor also said this is usually means your child being abuse or has withdrawn from the world. Mother was overwhelm with emotion spilled everything about the abuse and Takenshi Father was arrested and put Prison. Few days later…
In the newspaper was Takenshi Father has escaped from Prison. Then the ANBU knocked on the door and they were going to relocated them to the waterfall because it far away from the leaf and have good relation with the waterfall. Once relocated his Mom said” It is time for up to learn ninjustu and the way of the ninja safety reasons and was enrolled into the waterfall academy.

2nd year in the academy
The people of the waterfall had taken the Hyuuga family. Takenshi feel likes this should been has with birth village. Everyone know about Takenshi condition of muti-personality. Most people just accept it but there are a few people who have to make fun of him for it. None of Takenshi Hyuuga power has been activate. But one day on his way home his way from academy. Some punks were messing with him. Takenshi clenches his fist with anger turn towards him. Something inside of him just to say “Byukugan” His Byukugan activated the punk were somewhat scared from not expecting this and never seen that before. The punk felt threaten so rush him, Takenshi only defending him stood him ground. There were three of them. The first one try to punch him, Takenshi easily dodge him and grab by the arm flipping him the second punk. The third punk came behind him but using the power of Byukugan sweep kick the third person over him. Then standing over him starting punching the third one in the face over and over again as hard as could, the other punk run off leaving by himself with Takenshi as he beat the final punk face in until he bleed from nose and mouth. Takenshi saw someone coming from the west and took off leaving the punk bloody and bruised .When Takenshi got home he told his mom what happened. This triggers something in her mind if he is this violence now he will be like that in the future. So the mother being a Hyuuga herself decided to take him under her wing teaching the Hyuuga for him learn respect for everyone.Mother also from being hyuuga living in the waterfall he never got his side branch seal before they move to the waterfall.His mother until the 1st alter ego took over and told they going to visiting family at the leaf.Well techically it was not a lie but the how she said it sound fun trip which the complete opposite what really was going to happen.

Once they got to village Takenshi sprints to the Hyuuga mansion expecting like a calm relax feel to the mansion.When Takenshi bursted through the everything was normal Hyuuga mansion things.Takenshi was shock and confuse until his Mother walk in and said" Their upstair waiting for us" everyone knew what was going expect for Takenshi.He does a fast walk up the stairs,with his mom following him.Takenshi walk into a slightly lit room with candle all around the room.Takenshi turn and look at his mother had no emotion on her face.Some older hyuuga grab Takensi and place him in ritual circle.Takenshi trying his hardest kicking and flailing to no succed.The ritualer walked into with his hand glowing a dark green.Takenshi had this horrorifed look on his face that ritualist walk toward him.The ritualist hand toward his head.But with a heet of the moment leg broke of one weakest hyuuga grip but the reaction on the grip his leg when staight into the path of the ritualist causing instead of the seal being on his head now it is on his left shin.The room was slient for mintune until the ritualist was forgiving enough to let it go the purpose of the ritual is done and he leaves the room and the other hyuuga following afterr.Takenshi's Mother was shocked that the ritualist was that forgiving but not worring about they the hyuuga mansion and head home.

[Takenshi Hyuuga]

Hyuuga Family Branch Seal
Seal Requirements: The people that know this seal are the high members found within the Hyuuga Main Branch. The only way you would be capable of becoming a high level of the High Branch family is by showing your worth within the Hyuuga Family. The seal is a technique ritual like form, but for the High Branch members who are capable of using this technique are the only ones capable of performing the true effect of the technique. This technique is only capable of being placed upon a member of the Hyuuga Family. Those of the Branch families are the main targets. If a Branch member leaves the Village will have the seal branded upon them. When the Branch member is at the age of three the seal is placed upon them without exceptions. To be capable of learning this seal you must first ask the main Branch leader, but you must he part of the Main branch as well. The knowledge of this seal is within certain amounts of Scrolls found within deep of the Hyuuga Mansion of Leaf. If there is a family in another village, or in another location other then Leaf, the Main branch knows of this and those within the other countries are considered to be as Branch members.
Seal Description: The seal is shown along the head of the barer. When the seal is performed the seal stays upon the head of the user and is uncapable of being removed. With this seal the one who has the seal is branded known as a branch member. The seal is within a nice color of a light green as it is attached against the user's head. By using a certain technique those who know this seal is capable of performing a certain technique that is in conjunction with the technique. If one who knows this seal and the technique in conjunction the person is capable of creating great harm upon the one who has this seal. Please look at the Technique below to have a better understanding of how exactly the technique works and why the technique would be used.
Seal Bonus: There are no true bonuses upon this technique other then the fact that when the one who has the seal upon them dies, then the seal automatically takes place using the effects as the Hyuuga Branch Seal technique.
Seal Drawbacks: ---
Seal Cost:

Cast/Creation: Casting is an "S" Rank

Cost Per Round: ----


Byakugan
Rank:"C""B""A"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: Allows the user
Special: ---
Drawback: Byakugan user has a 360 degree field of vision, with the exception of a small blind spot behind the user's first thoracic vertebrae (as stated in the manga). Lacks the power of Analysis. This is demonstrated in an anime filler arc by Ranmaru, who created false chakra circulatory systems through the use of a dôjutsu (possibly a bloodline limit), causing the Byakugan to see inanimate objects as people and the objects themselves at the same time. However, it is not considered canon in a filler episode that a Byakugan user is unable to see the workings of such an "illusion".
Description: Can see the minuscule chakra pressure points. With the use of certain hand seals, it also has telescopic, X-ray, and thermal vision. The Byakugan is the key to Konohagakure's strongest Taijutsu, the Jûken, as it allows the user to see the chakra circulatory system of an opponent. Each level of its insight can therefore be mystified by proper means. When first learned they are capable of seeing up to fifty yards in a 360 Degree radius except for that blind spot. Each time learned this amount of distance is increased by ten yards. When the user reaches up to a distance of One hundred yards the amount of training is increased to that of "B" Rank Level Training. The amount of distance is still increased by ten. When the user reaches up to a distance of Four Hundred Yards the user is capable of seeing even further but with an amount of A Rank Training.
Limit: Must be part of the Hyuuga Bloodlimit.

Sight of Chakra Nature
Rank: "D" "C", "B", "A", "S"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A technique used in conjunction with the Byakugan in which allows the user the capability of seeing the Chakra Natures within the opponent's body by seeing their chakra points. These are used to see what elemental Nature the opponent has to use it against them.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: When the user learns this technique they are capable of seeing the Chakra Holes within the human body with more in depth. The user is capable of deciphering what type of Elemental Nature the opponent has within their body. Depending on what the user knows, the user is capable of seeing the Elemental Nature from strongest to weakest. When the user first learns this technique they are capable of seeing one Chakra Nature that emits out the most. This means the type of Release the opponent knows the most. When the user learns the "C" Rank version of this technique they are capable of seeing two chakra natures within the opponent's body from strongest to weakest. When the user learns the "B" Rank version of this technique the user is capable of seeing three chakra natures within the human body from Strongest to Weakest. When the user learns the "A" Rank version of this technique the user is capable of seeing four chakra natures within the human body. Finally when the user learns the "S" Rank of this technique they are capable of seeing up to five chakra natures within the human body.
Limit: Must be a Hyuuga, Must know Byakugan


Jyuuken Basic Stance
Rank: E
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Allows the user to use a number of basic Jyuuken techniques.
Special: --
Drawback: --
Description: The user faces in a sideways formation, with the front leg extended and the back leg turned in the same direction. The user bends their knees slightly, but their weight is distributed evenly through the legs. The front arm is extended before them. The palm of hand of the front arm is open, with the fingers outstretched and held together. The other hand is extended in the same direction, forming an ‘L’ shape.
Limit: Must learn from a Jyuuken teacher or at the Hyuuga Mansion. Must be a Hyuuga.

[Takenshi Hyuuga]

Water Release Moves

[Takenshi Hyuuga]

Raiton - Raikyuu (Lightning Ball)
Rank: "D"Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: Creates a ball of lightning used to where the technique is capable of being hurled towards the person.
Special: "Hand Seals"
Drawback: The user is unable to move while using this technique.
Description: The user does an amount of handseals as they quickly concentrate on the chakra along the palm of their hands. The technique is used to where they create a small ball of lightning to where the user is capable of hurling it towards the opponent. This technique is weak however and is only capable of paralyzing an opponent for approximately one round no matter how strong the opponent may be.
Limit: Lightning Release

[Takenshi Hyuuga]

Reserved

[Takenshi Hyuuga]

Reserved

[Takenshi Hyuuga]

bump

[Takenshi Hyuuga]

today's bump

[destroyer]

Don't bump too often, it doesn't help your chances of getting accepted. Anyways a few things:

1. You can't start out with 4 starting jutsus, and the stance is a freebie just FYI.

2. I would suggest maybe adding another short sentence for the lower body description.

3. Since your starting in waterfall your going to be a branch member, so you need to put in the branch family seal and add in your history how you got it.

[Takenshi Hyuuga]

Ok it fixed all of that stuff

[Uchiha Satoshi]

1/3

[Takenshi Hyuuga]

Staff only plz from now on

[Kinz]

2/3

[Takenshi Hyuuga]

Only one more hurry Please

[Leonov]

3/3