Kiyoshi's Signatures

[Kvasir]

Ok, I'm posting here for two reasons...

One, I have a few signatures I've made during my free time and would like to show them off.

And second, I want to become better at making GFX! I want people to come in here and go "Oh that looks nice, but that needs work." or "Nice idea, but you should blah blah blah." In other words, I want criticism! GIVE IT TO MEH! >=O

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Not a square! XD

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[sugerchan]

I like them! ^^ Especially the last one *is dazed by the pretty color*

[roko]

They're all nice.
Though, the general shape on the first one is odd, but, its a change so it isn't bad at all-- looks like a coffin though.

The second one is possibly my favorite. I personally like it how you added transperancy into the second render in there, as well as the general color and feel to it, its a bit more calming. The expression on the renders face also sets the mood to a whole nother levle.

The third one is okay. Nothing really special when it comes to GFX, other then the snazzy way you made it, once more, good job.

The fourth ones real good, but, the render is a bit oddly placed if you ask me. The colors flow together nicely, and the expression on her/his face is a soft one, fitting with the 'cool' feeling of the blue colors. The way you shadowed the edges/corners is also a nice touch.

[❖ Tama]

Judgement day... By Tama Productions If it ain't Tama then who da f is judgin ya?
Note: This is my opinion so don't take all of it too harsh cause I'm a b*(@*(%)!*(%*@
First Offense (1)
† Font shows out most.
† Wolf is more shown that the man but if you were trying to show the wolf more, then it worked out well.
† Border is like scratchy and off and like idk xD

Second Offense (2)
† The overlayed stock in the back shows out more than the stock in the middle.... Pretty much saying the showed stock is too dark.
† Blend could've been better with stock

Third Offense (3)
† Hate it... sorry xD
† The background is just like bleh made
† Render isnt blended just splat on there plus the pop out part still shows the white dots of leftovers from the rendering
† The circle doesnt blend well with the Box and also has white spots.

Fourth Offense (4)
† MY EYES ITS BRIGHT!
† The stock doesnt stand out but its not hidden. Its just there like its part of the background
† Text i don't really like

Bleh Not guilty... your probation will be to do more tutorials and practice practice practice. Court is adjourned. *smacks Kiyoshi*

[Kvasir]

Weee! Criticism! *Hugs People* *Is smacked*

Thanks for the praise/criticism/smacks.

*Jots down stuff in a note before going to serve my sentence of doing more tuts and practice.*

I will post more stuff once I serve my time. D=

P.S. The wolf was supposed to show more than the man, so I'm glad that you can tell. ;D

[Kvasir]

*Double*

More sigs! I had nothing to do this morning so I looked up some tuts and got to work. I decided that in order to improve the quality of my unique signatures (Not a square ones and whatnot) that I need to be able to make epic basic signatures, so far a little while I'm going to stick with rather basic signatures.

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Now give meh more criticism! *Kicks GFX mods into overdrive*

[❖ Tama]

*Turns into grandpa judging form* *Kicks you back* Get off my lawn you darned kids!

Cane Combo (1)
† Seems like too much white light
† The light of the sig or whiteness makes that background not shown as much and shows the stock way too much like its just a white pic with a stock and some redness in it
† I suggest you try learning to blend the picture in with the photo in a way.

Cane Smack (2)
† Duplicated stock too much times
† Like the border but the border seems to dissappear at some places and seems erased wouldve been good to keep it like how the bottom part is.
† Once again blend
† Once again too much white
† Not contrasted well
† Too bright or like blurry idk its the brightness tone that does it

Cane Limit Break (3)
† It was all good but it seems to focus upon the text more than the stock
† stock seems blurry again
† Not really blended.

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Btw I think that your best sig out of all the ones in this thread is either the wolf one or the melting glacier one. But you are getting better just practice will be good
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*Hits with cane far away into the sky with a ding* GET OFF MY LAWN AND GO PRACTICE (not too much)

[❖ Tama]

†Double†

You can use these links to help you with your GFXing

What JPG, PNG, and GIF is used for
Help for people that use Gimp
In Depth GFX for newbs :D
Everything you should Know about GFX

[/ Toki /]

o.o Your on your way. The best ones were what Tama said... but I think you do better with the creative borders than with the normal sigs. On some you need more interesting backgrounds and on others more focal point. Just keep practicing. XD I will let Tama say where you need to improve.

[Kvasir]

Two new ones, tried a different program with the first one... the first one sucks but whatever... =/

I absolutely love the second one though. <3

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Akatsuki have taken over my thread. D=

[Kvasir]

I'm back! Oh how I've missed GFXing, my computer crashed and hasn't been able to get fixed in months. T-T

Anyways, I've got something I made soon after my computer was back up and running, just to make sure that I didn't loose all my talent during those long two months.

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Edit: Another video game signature, bonus points toward anyone who has ever played this epic game.

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