medic training [staff only plz]

[leo117]

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Ketsuki Gyouku (Blood Coagulation)
Rank: D, C, B
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Stops blood flow from injuries through clotting.
Special: --
Drawback: Large wounds can take a long time to stop the blood flow from.
Description: The user focuses chakra around their hands, creating a faint white glow around their hands. The user then places their hands on the wound, focusing chakra into the blood and coagulating it. Minor wounds take three movements to clot, whilst major ones require six movements, and critical injuries, such as a severed limb, requires nine movements to clot. For every rank above D you possess of this technique, remove one movement from the coagulation, to a minimum of one. For every difficulty rank above D you possess, remove one movement from the process.
Limit: Must be a medic.


any other jutsu is jest of story

Crimson was walking home form a long day of training in the woods when comes along a dog. It has one of his back lags stuck in a bear trap and it's badly broken after having a closer look at the dogs lag crimson concludes that to save the dogs life he have to amputate the lag."well this is a good time to try out a new techniques" after restraining the crimson forms a chakra scalpel in his right hand in one swift cut the lag is removed and blood begins to flow out. focusing chakra around their hands thay begin to glow a faint white crimson places his hands on the wound the blood begins to slow and then it stops quickly forms some bandage from the area around him and rap whats left of the lag tightly in them. crimson stand up and looks at his work satisfied that the dog will live he lets it go."not get the hell out of here be for i take the other three lag jest for more practise"

[I C H I R O™]

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[leo117]

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Ketsuki Gyouku (Blood Coagulation)
Rank: D, C, B
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Stops blood flow from injuries through clotting.
Special: --
Drawback: Large wounds can take a long time to stop the blood flow from.
Description: The user focuses chakra around their hands, creating a faint white glow around their hands. The user then places their hands on the wound, focusing chakra into the blood and coagulating it. Minor wounds take three movements to clot, whilst major ones require six movements, and critical injuries, such as a severed limb, requires nine movements to clot. For every rank above D you possess of this technique, remove one movement from the coagulation, to a minimum of one. For every difficulty rank above D you possess, remove one movement from the process.
Limit: Must be a medic.


feeling that he didn't learn anything for from the dog crimson sets of in in search of something that will better help him master the skill of Ketsuki Gyouku.after a bit of walking he come to a small hut as he goes by the door he notices an old man performing medical jutsu on a small animal. "hay old man can you help me with some thing" the old man look at crimson "way yes i can sunny come on in and tell me what you need help with" with out saying anything crimson picks up his hand and it begins to glow a faint white glow. the old man stands up "so your need help with the Ketsuki Gyouku well i can tell you rite now you aren't going to stop any blood with that" feeling confused and mad at the old crimson put his hand down "where the hell do you get off saying some thing like that i jest save a dog with i a few minuets ago with this" the old man turns and goes in to the back room when he got back hes was holding the dog the bandages soaked in blood and the dog half dead "like i was saying you are not going to stop anything with that" "i can tell jest by what you showed me that you put too little chakra in to it so that it may work of a bit its not going to stick"the old man puts the dog down and gos up to crimson "now show it to me again".
crimson gos over to the dog and sits down beside it he take a minute to focuses his chakra and then he puts his hand over the dogs lag it begins to glow faint white. ofter a few minutes the blood stop and crimson slowly removes his hands and looks at the old man who was sitting quietly of to the side the old man gave him a smile and a nod.crimson stands up and bows "thank you of your time and maybe i can come back to you sometime"

[Uchiha Satoshi]

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I suggest separating into paragraphs and adding as much detail and storyline as possible.

[leo117]

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Ketsuki Gyouku (Blood Coagulation)
Rank: D, C, B
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Stops blood flow from injuries through clotting.
Special: --
Drawback: Large wounds can take a long time to stop the blood flow from.
Description: The user focuses chakra around their hands, creating a faint white glow around their hands. The user then places their hands on the wound, focusing chakra into the blood and coagulating it. Minor wounds take three movements to clot, whilst major ones require six movements, and critical injuries, such as a severed limb, requires nine movements to clot. For every rank above D you possess of this technique, remove one movement from the coagulation, to a minimum of one. For every difficulty rank above D you possess, remove one movement from the process.
Limit: Must be a medic.



after leving the old mans hut crimson begins the long run to his house on his way he pass the ninja academy where he can see the young ninjas practicing their kunai throwing he stops for a minute to remember his day at the academy.

"LOOK OUT" a young boy yeals

snaped out of his daydreaming by a sharp pain in his left lag looking at his lag he can see a bloody cut and behind him there was a kunai.a small boy runs up to crimson.

"are you ok" " crap it hit you your are bleeding"

with out saying any thing crimson puts his hands over the cut and focuses chakra in to them and thay start glow a faint white because it's a small cut the it begins to clot after a few moments.

"wow what was that it was cool looking"

ignoring the boy crimson turns and picks up the the kunai it was chiped and the the edge was dull and poorly maintained telling him that the boy was bad with kunai.in a low voice crimson said to the boy.

"you need to keep your grip loose and your weapons in better condition"

after giveing the boy his kunai back crimson and continues on his way home.

[eclipse]

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[leo117]

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Ketsuki Gyouku (Blood Coagulation)
Rank: D, C, B
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Stops blood flow from injuries through clotting.
Special: --
Drawback: Large wounds can take a long time to stop the blood flow from.
Description: The user focuses chakra around their hands, creating a faint white glow around their hands. The user then places their hands on the wound, focusing chakra into the blood and coagulating it. Minor wounds take three movements to clot, whilst major ones require six movements, and critical injuries, such as a severed limb, requires nine movements to clot. For every rank above D you possess of this technique, remove one movement from the coagulation, to a minimum of one. For every difficulty rank above D you possess, remove one movement from the process.
Limit: Must be a medic.



when crimson got home lay on his bed tierd from the long day. sitting up going through the process of performing Ketsuki Gyouku one last time befor going to bed.

thinking to him self "step one focuse chakra around my hands not to much not ot littel" after a moment crimson hands had a faint white glow around them."step two places my hands on the wound and hold" smiling crimson lays back and kicks off his boots. "i got it"


{ooc} sorry its so short but i only need 1 and im short on time

[goliath764]

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[leo117]

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Seimei no Jutsu (Clean and Pure Technique)
Rank: D Rank
Skill: Medical Ninjutsu
Effect: Cleans out a wound so that it can be bandaged and fixed properly.
Special: ---
Drawback: The technique is difficult to use on large wounds, requiring greater chakra precision to ensure a properly cleaned wound. Is not effective against poisons unless the technique is administered immediately on the area where the poison was entered, and only works on poisons which are placed upon items, and not poisons that are inhaled. Only removes Poisons D Rank or lower.
Description: As everyone within the medical profession is aware, in order to stimulate proper healing without fear of infection, a wound, before healing, should be properly cleaned. In order to save patients from experiencing a greater amount of pain, a medical genius invented this technique. By channeling chakra through the hands, a clear white light envelops them. Then, channeling this white chakra into the wound, the user removes impurities within the wound, such as dirt and grime. It also works to actively remove bacteria in the area of the wound. Once completed, the wound is clean and ready to heal. This technique, as a side effect, helps reduce the visibility of scarring as a result of injury. One movement for every six inches is required.
Limit: Medical Ninjutsu

its a bright new day crimson rolls out of his bed and put on his gear. he could barely sleep the night be for cuz he know that today was the day he was going to learn one of the most important jutsu of being a medic. he begins the short walk to the hospital on his why there he was thinking how lucky he got to find a work doctor will to spend there day helping a young aspiring medic. as crimson got to the steps of the hospital he looked around the doctor who he had never meet was going to meet him there jest then he felt a tap on his shoulder and herd a sweet voice from behind him.

young doc} " you must be crimson your early ya know "

crimson} he terned and to his surprise it was a beautiful young women with long white hair she had to be only a few years older than him. "can i help you miss" thinking to himself there's no way she was the master medic that he was going to be training under."how do you know who i am?"

young doc} flashing a smile and a short giggle "well way wound i know the name of my temporary pupal"

crimson} shocked he immediately bowed with his head still down " forgive me sensei i didn't know"

young doc} giggling " your cute you don't need to bow or call me sensei plz jest call me Serika" 'well shall we go in and get to work we have a lot to do today"

as the two go through the doors of the hospital there is a seen of chaos. patients covered in dust and dirt were every were all of them having broken limes and cuts.

Serika} grabs a nearby nurse "what happen" still as cool as she was outside, after a few moment's she terned to crimson "there was a building collapse come with me" she begins to run to the ER "I'm only going to show you what to do one time"

as they entered the ER Serika immediately began going to work on the first patient she came to he had at lest a dozen cut with dirt all through them.Serika put her hands over a cut a clear white light envelops her hands crimson cud see dirt and foreign matter being removed from the wound.

Serika} "this jutsu is vary simple theirs only two steps to first channel chakra into your hands and then put it into the wound" she looks and crimson and smiles "got it".

crimson} visibly in awe of her skill he nodded and began the jutsu on anther open wound.channeling chakra into his hands and pressing them on the wound the patient let out a yell when crimson removed his hands to find chakra burns on his skin

Serika} "a lot less chakra now do it again ".

crimson puts his hands back over the wound this time channeling less than half the chakra making a much liter glow the dirt slowly began o be removed


Serika} "good good that looks great but you are going to need to do it faster or u will be here all night"

after several hours crimson hands were completely covered with chakra burns because of the constant flow of chakra through them. pay no attention to the burns he continues working on patient after patient.hes able to preform the seimei no jutsu in a matter of seconds.

Serika} " you've gotten quite good at that haven't you" putting her hands on crimsons "jest like a nobby to get burns on their hands".


crimson} "I'm OK plz let me continue there are still so many patients left".


Serika} " no we can handle it from here you go home and get some sleep" after making crimson stop she leads him to the door "you did good today so i hope to see you tomorrow there's still alot for you to learn".

leaving the hospital crimson spends the walk home reflecting on his day.

[eclipse]

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[leo117]

7/10

Seimei no Jutsu (Clean and Pure Technique)
Rank: D Rank
Skill: Medical Ninjutsu
Effect: Cleans out a wound so that it can be bandaged and fixed properly.
Special: ---
Drawback: The technique is difficult to use on large wounds, requiring greater chakra precision to ensure a properly cleaned wound. Is not effective against poisons unless the technique is administered immediately on the area where the poison was entered, and only works on poisons which are placed upon items, and not poisons that are inhaled. Only removes Poisons D Rank or lower.
Description: As everyone within the medical profession is aware, in order to stimulate proper healing without fear of infection, a wound, before healing, should be properly cleaned. In order to save patients from experiencing a greater amount of pain, a medical genius invented this technique. By channeling chakra through the hands, a clear white light envelops them. Then, channeling this white chakra into the wound, the user removes impurities within the wound, such as dirt and grime. It also works to actively remove bacteria in the area of the wound. Once completed, the wound is clean and ready to heal. This technique, as a side effect, helps reduce the visibility of scarring as a result of injury. One movement for every six inches is required.
Limit: Medical Ninjutsu


the next day crimson returned to the hospital just like Serika asked him to.as he came the steps to the hospital was agen greeted by Serika this time she was waiting at the doors."how are ypur hands feeling"she said with a smile zero picked up his hane to show her the thin layer of badges complete wrapping both hands " there ok i put a band aid on it im good to go".she laughed and motioned him inside "well thas good lets get to work".


as thay walked thru the halls Serika exspland the says work "i have a surgery to do this morning so you will have to help out the nurses do you remember the justu i show you" crimson nods his head. she continues "good cuz i want you to do it on any walk-ins who need it got it""yes" crimson replies and goes to the walk-in room.after a few minutes of looking for a patient he see a kid come thru the door with sand in a deep cut "perfect" he thinks to himself. takeing him to an exam room crimson start preforming the justu by puting his hands on the cut and channeling chakra through them the white chakra gos into the wound expelling all the sand along with some yellowish liquid. what the hell is that he thought then it hit him it was poison."how did you get this cut"shouted at the boy
"i fell at the beach"the boy replied "bullshit you are laying"crimson said.the boy begens to cry and explain how he stole his father's kunia.after bandaging the kid crimson let him go and he reternd to the to the walk-in room where Serika was waiting for him.

[✗ Kaeor ✗]

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[leo117]

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Suji Rirakkusu (Muscle Relaxer)
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Relaxes the muscles.
Special:
Drawback: If overused, can erase muscle memory.
Description: The user focuses chakra into their hands and causing a light blue glow to emit from their hands. The user then places their hands over the afflicted area, relaxing the muscles over a course of two movements. If used for four movements or longer, the user’s muscles will soften and their muscle memory will fade.
Limit: Must be a medic.

crimson woke up earlier than most day so he decided to go for a morning run grabbing his gear he runs out the door.25 miles should do it he thought to himself as he starting off.mile 5 the sun came up and so did the heat crimson being in full gear he begins to sweat. at about mile 16 crimson's left leg begans to cramp from a combination of dehydration and the heat mad at himself he stops and sits under a tree "god im so fucking stupid im a medic i should known better" crimson said out loud.
befor the pain got too bad crimson puts his hands over his badly cramping leg thay began to glow a soft blue.as the chakra starts to penetrate the muscle the cramp slowly begens to release."i should stop now but i can still feel the cramp" he thought to himself as continued the treatment.feeling better crimson attempt to get up from under the tree to finish his run when the era of his decision set in as he stood up his left leg immediately gave out he could not feel it.
amazed by the effect of overuse of his jutsu crimson sits back up with an even more pissed off look on his face "well at lest no one's here to see me like this" he thought as he relaxed and wanted to regain feeling in his leg.as a breeze rushed over his body cooling him off he recalled the first time he tried the Suji Rirakkusu it was two day ago".


FLASHBACK TWO DAYS


"hay stop daydreaming i have an important jutsu to show you" a familiar voice jerked him to attention. he would come to know this voice well it was Serika a young master medic he had been training under of a few weeks now. "ya what is THIS jutsu" crimson said as his attention went to Serika."THIS jutsu is simple so even you should get it"she said in reply to his sarcastic remark. crimson looked down a the dead body thay were standing over it was all he has clearly been dead for some time because rigamortis had already set in.cutting Serika off midsentence "way are we standing over a dead guy" she smirked i was jest geting to that i will be teaching you Suji Rirakkusu or Muscle Relaxer and a patient that has rigamortis is the perfect test subject".after a few minutes she had show crimson all he needed to know "ok ok i got it now let me give it a go" he said as he put his hands over one of the man's elbows. as he forced chakra in the the man's muscles crimson hands glowed with light blue after a few moments the man's joint began to loosen and move "hell ya i did it".


PRESENT

after those few minutes of relaxing crimson tried to stand up again this time with no problem "i guess the after effects only last a few minutes" he thought to himself as he started to run "thats good to know.

[leo117]

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Suji Rirakkusu (Muscle Relaxer)
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Relaxes the muscles.
Special:
Drawback: If overused, can erase muscle memory.
Description: The user focuses chakra into their hands and causing a light blue glow to emit from their hands. The user then places their hands over the afflicted area, relaxing the muscles over a course of two movements. If used for four movements or longer, the user’s muscles will soften and their muscle memory will fade.
Limit: Must be a medic.

after his run crimson stoped by the hospital it was his day off to so Serika his medical teacher was not expecting him.after a few minutes of look his tercher without success crimson stop a nurse "excuse me where can i find Serika"the busy nurse quickly replies "sorry but shes off today".leting the nurse go back to work crimson was disappointed because hadnt gotten the hang of the Suji Rirakkusu jutsu."well i guess i will just go practice on the dead guy agen" he said to himself as he set off to the morgue upon arrival he found the man and began his jutsu to relax the muscles in his lags.starting crimson place his hands on either side of the mans right knee as he did he focused his chakra into his hands macking them glow light blue.after a few minutes the right lag was completely relaxed and had its original range of motion."ok one down" lifting his headband so he can see with both eyes crimson cracked his knuckles and began to work on the right arm.after an hour he finally finished tired crimson picked up his gear to leave when he heard.

"so that's what you are hiding under your headband" quickly pulling down his headband to cover his scar he turned around to see Serika in the doorway."iv got some thing to do" crimson said as he pushed past the young doctor and heads to the exit just as the door was closing behind him he heard Serika say "good work cranky pants see you tomorrow".

[yets3]

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