Lesson A ~ Iizuka
Sept 21, 2010 12:44:43 GMT -7
Post by ladymia on Sept 21, 2010 12:44:43 GMT -7
Username: Iizuka
Age: 16
What You Want Help With: I'd like to work on my description and keeping a good quality throughout the entirety of my posts rather than seeing it contained to the few areas it ever appears in. Basically, the quality of my posts, as well as making them look nicer, is what I'm looking to improve on.
Age: 16
What You Want Help With: I'd like to work on my description and keeping a good quality throughout the entirety of my posts rather than seeing it contained to the few areas it ever appears in. Basically, the quality of my posts, as well as making them look nicer, is what I'm looking to improve on.
Alright. Lets begin, Ill make a scenario, and I want you to write a 4 paragraph minimum piece of RP about whats happening, your thoughts feelings etc. Just write it as you normally would, the same tense, detail etc. This is just to see an example of how you'd normally RP, and how I can help ya.
Scenario
Your Village has just been attacked, a gargantuan number of ninja of various ranks, ranging from Genin all the way to Jonin stand outside the Village gates, attempting to break through using powerful fire style techniques. Golden flames are blasting against the thick wooden doors, many smaller parts of the fire breaking off and falling over the side of the doors. Women and children of the Village are currently being taken to safety by a minority of Chunin, and all Genin. The rest of the ninja - Chunin, Jonin and the Hokage himself, are all lining up. Preparing for battle, all battle capable medics have been commanded to step foot onto the battlefield, while all those who are not - remain in the Village hospital awaiting the waves of casualties.
The doors are eventually broken down with one great " Bash " , and the huge army of enemy ninja speed forwards, waving their kunai, swords, maces, fans and chains high in the air, giving out a number of mighty war cries as they clashed together with your own forces, and did battle. As the battle progressed, many of your dear friends and loved ones who were forced to fight, were mortally injured, or even killed, your Hokage forces you to go back and protect the women and children, as some enemy scouts are currently roaming the Village in search of them. However, your Villages forces are cutting down rather rapidly, and the enemies forces aren't doing so quite so fast. The Hokage is outnumbered, and its your decision what you do, do you go back and help other Genin and Chunin protect the Women and Children, or do you continue fighting here? And use whatever strength you have left in helping your Kage keep these enemy ninja as far outside the Village as possible?
Alright - Go!