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A splash, Shiel's dainty feet touching down upon the wetted turf, and a perfectly good pair of sliipers were soaked through. How nice. She approached with a measured and neutral step, her long blonde pigtails flowing behind her in a pleasantly dramaic manner.
Slipping the ends of the absurdly long scarlet ribbon in her hair around her shoulders, she let them twine aroung her bare arms and gather static. Sheil wasn't very good at Raiton techniques yet, so this was a necessary measure.
She smiled benificently to all in attendance, a twisted thing that would give nightmares to any small children. It was the eyes that betrayed her. The blue orbs were icy steel behind a facade of cotton purity.
"So, who wants to be 'friends'?" She drawled.
Neutral or Passive Stance [Freebie #1] Rank: "E" Skill: TaiJutsu Effect: The Neutral, or Passive, stance is your natural, unprepared position. Special: --- Drawback: --- Description: It is extremely useful for all aspects of training, considering that, on the street, you will most likely need to perform combatives and self-defense techniques without any preparation. Be sure to train from this position at least part of the time when working on combatives, and at all times when practicing self-defense techniques. The Stance: Stand with your feet about hip-width apart (or less), with your arms hanging to the sides. Limit: Must be Yellow Belt of Krav Maga.
Post by Poëtische Rechtvaardigheid on Dec 1, 2010 13:36:00 GMT -7
Aneko stared at the girl who just said, "who wants to be friends?" her eyes were bright blue but were steel eyes of a killer. hmm, looks like i shouldn't try to fight her, thought Aneko with amused grin, "hmm well it's time to get this party started." she stared at the older male close to her age, she judge him to be 'showing' off. but the younger male interested her greatly, along with how that older male would deal with them. Aneko's clone decided at that moment to speak up and say in a sing-song voice about five meters south from Aneko, "oh ME!! I want to be friends!" Aneko crossed her eyes, her clones were always acting like dorks. Aneko then started to slink her way to the older male to see what he would do with the wolves thing going on and hopeful the other girl wouldn't do anything to the clone. Aneko then creeps up until about 20 meters from the two males.
Post by zenoske1ryu on Dec 1, 2010 13:46:52 GMT -7
This time the wolves didn’t reform and the boy jumped and was now standing 15 meters from Yūkimaru, he span around to look at him so he wouldn’t be attacked from the rear. He watched as the boy looked around and declared that other people where he by the way he had looked at area’s for long Yūkimaru had a good idea where the people where. Who then foolishly showed themselves they were either powerful or dumb.
[blue]“Friends of yours”[/blue] Yūkimaru as the boy
He slipped the sword back into his scabbard and decided to start to make some hand seals. He stood perfectly still other than his hands. As the boy had stopped fighting showing that the match really was a sparring match.
I'm sure I don't have to tell you how detailed and wonderful a read your posts are. Perfectly structured, awesome grammar and punctuation is placed properly. There isn't really much I can say here. xD
You might want to try looking at Sets' or even Ryu's posts or those of advanced RPers to get a better sense of structure, grammar and punctuation. It might just be that you completely rush to get posts out. Don't do this. You don't want people to ignore your posts just because they're too hard to read or understand. If you're not clear with your writing, it could seriously backfire on you later on.
The tenses you write in conflict with one another. Present and past tenses should never meet in the same post. It's one or the other.
I specifically mean stuff like this;
Aneko then creeps up until about 20 meters from the two males.
Should never meet the rest of your post. What you could have said was "Aneko began to creep closer to the two males, arriving 20 metres away before she stopped." That's not perfect either, but it gives the same effect and also fits snugly in your post.
A good tip when finished writing, you read what you had written to yourself out loud. If it sounds funny to you, it probably needs changing. If not, then it's probably read-able.
And by the way, the wolves had already disappeared. >/
Your posts are getting hellova better and have become a joy to read now. It's not quite at the level Sets is producing but you've already outgrown the stuff you were coming out with before. It's really a big improvement. All I can really say here is watch the punctuation. I picked out one or two mistakes.
Keep up the good work though.
Rhydas could clearly see his target sheath his blade before starting a string of handseals. Glancing at the other two, it was obvious that neither would be capable of doing anything to stop him in time. Whatever technique he had, it was probably going to be activated with little trouble.
Though, Rhydas hadn't included himself in that equation. Placing his finger into the air, a sapphire flame erupted upon it and Rhydas drew a short pattern. A pattern that the teenager was likely to hate should it took effect.
"I have no idea of who they are." He replied.
Finishing the seal within a second or two from whence he started, the blond boy projected his chakra from his body and around the hands that meshed together short distance away. With his finger still aglow as he dropped it to his side, Rhydas made sure to glance at the other two girls to make sure there'd be no interruption. He couldn't afford something like that now could he?
Once the jutsu was firmly in place, he'd force the balls of water that surrounded and encased the teen's hands to remain until he felt the handseals were cancelled. It was a second later when he released his hold on the technique, allowing the orbs to turn back into mere water and he focused upon a technique of his own.
With the techniques completion, Rhydas would watch as ten orbs of water, each about the size of his fist, would appear within the rain around his form. With that accomplished, the boy would fire one, aimed straight for the teenagers head.
He didn't mean to ignore the two girls, but he felt the teenager deserved his undivided attention. After-all, he was his sparring partner. And those girls only seemed to be here to play, which was confirmed by the one furthest away.
Suiton: Mizu Hyoushi no Jutsu (Water Release: Water Binding Technique) Rank: “C” Rank Skill: Ninjutsu, Offensive Effect: Creates a much smaller version of the Suiro no Jutsu, which specifically targets the opponent’s hands. Special: "Handseals" Drawback: The user must the Snake seal for the duration of the technique, preventing them from using other nin or Genjutsu. If the user breaks the hand seal, then the effect wears off instantly. Must have a water source. Requires the user to keep eyesight of the opponent. Description: The user performs the handseals, ending and holding the sequence with the Snake seal. Water rushes from the source towards the opponents hands. A small ball of water forms around each hand, with a diameter of about six inches. The water is of the same property as Suiro no Jutsu, preventing movement within it. Also, because of the Hand Seal requirement, the jutsu cannot be performed by Mizu Bunshins, like the regular Suiro no Jutsu can. If at any point the opponent moves out of eyesight from the user, this technique is broken. A variation of this technique may be used at will, targeting the opponent’s legs, preventing them from moving. Limit: Water Release, Suiro no Jutsu
Suiton: Mahou Mizu Misairu Renda no Jutsu (Water Release: Magic Water Missile Barrage Technique) Rank: "C" Skill: Ninjutsu Effect: --- Special: "Handseals" Description: User focuses her chakra into tiny bits of water, condensing them to form nearly-solid balls while still retaining their liquid properties. The balls levitate in the air, much like in the system invovled with her Ochiru Ame no Jutsu. The balls will then fly at the opponent, and depending on the amount of chakra used to throw them, the "Missiles" can easily dent thick metal armor or to knock down wooden doors on metal hinges. When a "missile" strikes an oponent, the chakra holding the water together will release into the atmosphere, causing the water to loose its ball-like shape and revert back into flowing water. Only 10 missiles can be created at a time, but when one is used, another can be instantly recreated for an additional cost in chakra. Limit: Must have Water Release
Localized rain. Interesting. Clearly the work of mister burny-finger-of-doom, if the manipulaions he made were anything to guess by.
The insects would speak. For the most part it was beneath the interest of the Divine One, eyes having locked solidly onto the water-user. She wanted him. He would make a far superior asset to her goals than the others. Though even the Messiah had to quirk an eyebrow at the behavior of the other female. One of the two was a fake, that was simple enough to tell. But which?
A talent necessary to one who would brook no deceptions, she closed her eyes and began to focus. When next they opened, they would see the world in a new light - colors would dain from reality, making it rather bland to be honest, but from all life she would veiw an aura splashed with the colors of nature and intent through eyes of glistening lavendar.
From the girl in truth, her aura was plain as day. From the copy? Nothing.
Well. That simplified matters. Perhaps now introductions were in order?
"Kyuusaisha Shiel..." Her grin widened eerily.
"I am the Messiah."
Chaos First Stage ‘Chaos Unlearnt’ Rank: ‘C’ Skill: Taijutsu Effect: The first stage of chaos allows the user to unlock twenty-five percent of there max strength, there endurance and durability remains the same as stated as above. There speed however suffers the side effects of becoming sluggish and moving with problems at first. Once activated the user is now capable of seeing ones aura as it emanates from there body. This also allows the user to negated pain for a short period of time. Special: ---- Drawback: You receive one negative to movement. Though a Kamyuja member is not capable of using chakra gates, they can use there chaos as as substitute in order to go into a chakra gate related fighting style. This eye is capable of mimicking the first and second gate. Please note you don't gain the benefits of those chakra gates. Description: Picture When activated the user’s eyes turn into a brilliant glittering shade of lavender color. The significance of the color shows a hidden life wishes to explode out as the outer area of the colored eye gleams in a darker shade of purple, this causes the user to see in black n’ white as if they are colored blind. But instead of this being a disadvantage towards them they are able to see ones aura of chakra that emanates from there body. Once chaos is activated the user is able to demonstrate feats of incredible strength, this is possible due to the fact it allows the Kamyuja member to tap into only twenty five percent of there true strength. Though this allows the user to become incredible strong for a short period of time, there speed is reduce greatly as there movement becomes sluggish. When activated the nociceptor that allows a person to feel pain is shut down for a short duration of time. While the nocieptor may be shut down allowing no pain to precede forth to the brain so the brain can register to causing neuropathic pain. While the pain may not be able to transmit to the brain at the time, it is forced to be backed up until the nocieptor is open again. This can be dangerous due to the fact too much pain may not only cause physical pain but psychogenic pain that may kill him if too much damage is taken. That is why the body reacts by letting the pituitary gland release endorphins at a remarkable rate to reduce the pain consumption by fifteen percent only allowing the user to feel only eighty-five percent of the pain that is dealt to them. Limit: Must have the Kamyuja Bloodlimit, This ability only last for twenty turns before automatically shutting off. After five turns after Chaos has been shut off the user is capable of activating it once again.
Post by Poëtische Rechtvaardigheid on Dec 1, 2010 15:48:04 GMT -7
Aneko was so startled by the other girl speaking, "I am the Messiah." that she droped to the ground and ressed her body flat on the ground. and watched the two males while keeping a eye on girl just in case she would do something out of the ordinary. Aneko watched the younger male quietly and with no feelings at that time. he did several hand signs, and judging his look on his face something was up with that water. then did a replacement clone and creep back about ten meters so what ever was going down wouldn't hit or damage her so bad. she wasn't that much of a fool to be that close to a pair of fight ninja.
Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Switch Skill)Rank: "E" Skill: Ninjutsu Effect: The Replacement technique. A technique where one quickly replaces their body with an animal or an object by making it seem like they were attacked, this usually distracts and confuses an enemy and create a chance to attack. Special: --- Drawback: A user may only switch with an object of similar size from the nearby area. A user must perform the jutsu ahead of time, and not within the same round they are attacking in. The Background must be explained correctly in order to perform. The user may not switch with an object on them, only something around them. The technique only works within a distance of five meters from the user. Objects changed may only be of at the most two feet in different fo size. A user may not perform this technique, and perform other techniques after because it gives out the position of the user. This technique does not work on area effect techniques that exceed the user's capabilities of performing Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Switch Skill) Description: The Kawarimi no Jutsu, allows a ninja to dodge attacks, whether they are weapons such as kunai, ninjutsu, taijutsu, or any other attack type. Coupled with other jutsu, it can be very effective in confusing your opponent, and catching them off-guard. The only downside, is it often takes a strategic mind to effectively utilize it, not that it can't be useful in the hands of an inexperienced ninja. Limit: An academy Jutsu that all is capable of performing if they wish to do so.
Reason for Editing: because i forgot to put in the tech >.>
Post by zenoske1ryu on Dec 1, 2010 16:20:20 GMT -7
Yūkimaru was performing hand seals but was stopped by a water technique this boy really was a pain. When the technique was released a ball would come flying at Yūkimaru’s head. He would stay in the same position until the latest possible time then, simply move his head to the side so that it touched his shoulder the ball would fly pass him missing by centimeters. If his attempt of dodging the water failed and it came after him Yūkimaru would wait next to the same boulder out of sight to the boy meaning he would have less control over it and at the last minute move causing the water ball to shahs into the rock almost shattering it but still leaving Yūkimaru enough cover.
Now it was Yūkimaru’s turn to go on the offensive again but with the strange girl charging in he would retreat so that he was behind a large stone. Leaning a 30 meter distance between himself at the boy. At this position Yūkimaru was closer to the girl that hidden said her name, he looked at her closely to see what items she had and then noticed something strange the rain made by the boy was going straight though her. This was weirdo she must be a Genjutsu of some sorts. Meaning that the real person was close by Yūkimaru would be on a high alert and keep his guard up in case she attacked. He lent against the boulder his gourd pressing against the rock and started to look around prepared for what ever happened next. After this he would draw his katana and stand in a stance that made it hard for anyone to see.
# Reflex Training Rank: D, C and B Rank Effect: D Rank - Improves evasive and deflection/blocking skill marginally. C Rank - Improves evasive and deflection/blocking skill slightly. B Rank - Improves evasive and deflection/blocking skill moderately Special: None Drawbacks: Cannot learn Quick Strike training. Description: The practitioner is put through a series of rigorous repetitive movements to improve their ability to reflexively react to attacks by evading or deflecting/blocking with their sword. As they develop their training, their speed and reflexes slowly increase. Restriction: Must have a Senpai/Sensei of a Kenjutsu Dojo to learn.
# Hitoshirenu no Shisei (Rear Hidden Posture) Rank: "E" Skill: Taijutsu Effect: A stance with a sword held behind the body. Special: --- Drawback: --- Description: Hitoshirenu no Shisei is the most deceptive of the six stances of Gyakusatsu and offers the highest peak of surprise attacks. The user brings his/her sword down to the waist pointing away to the rear of the body in order to hide the full length of the blade and only show the pommel to the opponent. The hands are held with the dominate hand at the hilt. The user's feet are opposite of the hands with the dominate foot in the rear of the stance. Limit: Gyakusatsu, Kousou no Shisei
Waia Soujuu (Wire Handling) Rank: E Skill: Ninjutsu Effect: The user is capable of wielding the Itosen Blade without harming themselves on the wire. Special: -- Drawback: -- Description: The user exudes a faint amount of chakra from their hands, which allows them to grasp the wire without cutting themselves along it. This technique is the equivalent of a 'stance'. Limit: Must have Itosen Blade
Last Edit: Dec 3, 2010 10:56:22 GMT -7 by zenoske1ryu
You really don't need me for the RP parts, do you? xD You're better than me when it comes to consistency and flow. Not to mention your posts read like a dream. Beautiful<3!!!
A sizeable improvement from your post before. Your post, although I wasn't quite able to gauge much about your character, was still cleaned up quite a bit with the structure, grammar and punctuation. I'd say spend a little more time describing what your character sees, feels, smells and thinks to get a better understanding of what she's about and you'll soon notice what I mean when I talk about character development.
Other than that, keep it up. Just pay attention to the detail and you'll be flashing out posts like Sets in no time.
I was actually a bit surprised. Your post this time seemed to be slightly lacking compared to the last two you wrote. I could only really guess you were distracted with something else because one cannot simply lose the skill you'd just recently acquired.
Like I said with Aneko. Pay attention to the detail. Grammar and punctuation can make or break a great post. Try to keep that in mind.
The teenager dodged the attack, but that was Rhydas' intention anyway. What good would a sparring partner be if he had his head smashed in?
One of the girls seemed to be approaching, and it was at this time that both the girl with the genjutsu clone and the teenager Rhydas had been facing decided to shrink away. Out of sight.
Well, not entirely out of sight. He did have his goggles in heat vision after-all.
Turning his focus away from the teenager who decided to hide from him, Rhydas kept his attention on the girl who stated her name.
Kyuusaisha Sheil.
For some reason, the moment she stated her name, Rhydas deduced instantly that she was a threat. He couldn't tell if it was her confidence, her voice or even the way she walked. Either way, he needed to deal with her first before anything. Forming another pattern within the air with his chakra-covered finger, the blond boy created clones of water besides him which formed instantly. The both of them would be used to keep their eyes on the girl and boy still hiding behind the rocks.
The girl was only thirty metres away from him now, and still moving closer. It was about time he showed her his power.
"Well Messiah. You can call me Rhydas." He said, slightly mocking her, which was unusual for him. "And I-" He gestured with his hands to everything around them, "- am a water master."He flashed through a set of seals and completed it in seconds. What was in stall for this girl, she couldn't even imagine.
A small amount of water around her feet would suddenly become viscous, swirling in a clockwise motion as it gradually increased in size and width. It wouldn't be long before this girl was subdued.
2 Clones Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu (Water Clone) Rank: "C" Rank Skill: NinJutsu Effect: --- Special: "Handseals" Drawback: --- Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited; however, it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state. When first learned the user is capable of having or capable of creating up to five Clones. Each time learned the user learns this technique the number of Clones is capable of increasing by one. The maximum amount of clones is Ten for the Difficulty Class of D Rank. For each Difficulty Rank, increase the number by a maximum of five but learning is still one per learned. Limit: Water Release
Suiton: Uzumaki no Jutsu (Whirlpool Technique) Rank: “B” Type: Ninjutsu Effect: Creates a fast-moving whirlpool underneath someone’s feet. Special: Handseals Description: The user creates a whirlpool with a diameter of ten feet around the opponent. The water begins to swirl directly under the opponent’s feet, sucking them down under. Each second that the technique exists, the whirlpool expands half a foot, until ten feet is reached. The whirlpool can exist for a total duration of three turns, at which point, the water stops swirling. Opponents trapped inside of the whirlpool are thrust downwards, further into the depths of whatever water source is around. Limit: Water Release
Last Edit: Dec 1, 2010 17:12:25 GMT -7 by zenoske1ryu
The Messiah's grin stretched further. This was pure gold, Fate was clearly on her side.
"Rhydas, then."
A water master. Obvious ninja clearly felt like being obvious. Idiot. Still, she didn't want him for his cognition anyway. It was the abilities she was after. Followers are a necessity in the course of world dominion.
Of course the clones were no effective dversion, but they were solid. That could prove problematic. The whirlpool forming under her feet was another issue. Actually, it might be an idea to MOVE, rather than stand about contemplating it. It was hard enough figuring out what the hell was going on when the inanimate world existad solely in shades of grey.
A motion faster than the blink of an eye, and what manner of weaponry would find itself in her left hand than a simple plastic flashlight. She would dart forward, straight for the Rhydases out of the whirlpool's range. The sluggishness of her boost was already kicking in, reducing her ability to perform multiple actions in rapid succession, but her speed was still equal to that of a Taijutsu Specialist
She would perforn a basic swinging attack, attempting not to injure him rather than to set him off-balance - the fewer peices she left him in the easier it would be for him to do her bidding. What he would most likely never see coming was the swipe falling short, so that if he remained immoble she would be able to flick the device into its 'on' position, blinding him momentarily. Of course she didnt expect sucess so easy, and sho she made certain she was tensed to get out of harm's way.
This could be acheived with a simple jump for the least amount of energy expended, but against an opponent like this it seemed more likely she would have to be more creative.
Post by Poëtische Rechtvaardigheid on Dec 2, 2010 5:19:39 GMT -7
Aneko was full of a few feelings like relaxation, happiness, and mischievous. she wanted to 'play' or in this case fight with younger of the males, but then the other girl thought it best to confront him her self. Which was fine with her, he seemed a little advanced in the ways of a ninja for her anyway.
Aneko was about a 3 meters from the older male. taking out two smoke and the stun grenade she grinned with a delight. The first thing that happen after taking them out was the replacement clone and the other clone came running up straight at the male. then taking the stun grenade she took out the pin and tossed it over to the male, it landed at his feet; then it exploded.
Her eyes darken and a happy smile would show if her mask wasn't on her face at the moment.
Yeah Girl I like that~
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Yūkimaru new that the grenades took time to detonate so quickly stuck it with the back of his blade causing the grenade to be knocked back behind the rock were it would exploded. Blinding the girl and making her unable to hear. Yūkimaru moved back so he was behind another large rock 23 meters away from the girl. She had given away here position, now to make her pay for it. Yūkimaru would start to form hand seals the rest of his body not moving. As the girl would be blind and deaf for the next six seconds it would be almost impossible for her to stop him.
When looking around Yūkimaru had noticed that the boys attention had turned to the ninja that was charging, this was the perfect opportunity to strike but he was out of the range to use change lightning of a bounce and with this amateur running around throwing grenades it would be difficult to concentrate so Yūkimaru had decided that the best Idea was to take her out first
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Edit, OOC: Just to let you know since you didnt move that you would have been deafened by the bomb as it has a 15meter range
Aneko was about a 3 meters from the older male.
Last Edit: Dec 2, 2010 8:37:38 GMT -7 by zenoske1ryu
Once again, nothing much I can say here. The post was detailed and I could see plenty of points about your characters personality and such And wtf, even a flash light. xD Nice stuff once again Sets. just watch out for the minor spelling mistakes that were in that post, but they in no way ruined the post.
This post wasn't very good in terms of quality. I can tell you are trying to take what I said on board. But I'd say you need to go into a bit more detail. The work you put into a post shows to those who read it and though you did do a good job, it's still lacking. For instance;
Aneko was full of a few feelings like relaxation, happiness, and mischievous
Here, you could have expanded a bit on the feelings rather than simply list them. Rather than say the above, to suit the rest of your post, you might instead say, "Aneko was calm, yet happy she was able to witness the current turn of events. This was mostly due to her mischievous side."
As you can see, rather than simply list her feelings, which does nothing for your post as a whole, you should try to make them blend in so that they don't become a glaring eyesore. Anyway, onto the battle part of your post.
Aneko was about a 3 meters from the older male. taking out two smoke and the stun grenade she grinned with a delight. The first thing that happen after taking them out was the replacement clone and the other clone came running up straight at the male. then taking the stun grenade she took out the pin and tossed it over to the male, it landed at his feet; then it exploded.
Her eyes darken and a happy smile would show if her mask wasn't on her face at the moment.
Your post went downhill here for some reason. Just like I said to Ryu in his last post, you were either distracted or couldn't be bothered with this one. Everything you've learned up to this point should be integrated into this part as well. There was no reason it should have suffered like this.
Your posts can really only get batter at this point. But it depends on the effort you put in.
Though your post was perfect overall, apart from the grammar and spelling mistakes you made, you made one glaring mistake.
Auto's...
An auto is when you state what happens before it is actually agreed upon. Your words were;
knocked back behind the rock were it would exploded. Blinding the girl and making her unable to hear.
But it was never stated in Aneko's post that it affected her. Not yet anyway. You don't control what happens to other people's characters. Until you catch them out and use their post against them. Or until they allow for something stated in your post to occur to them and you follow up with it.
We'll touch more upon this in detail later on if needed.
I apologise if this post wasn't very helpful. I had a lot to do at uni today and have even more stuff to do from now until the end of next week. I'll post at least once a night though, so don't worry about that. I keep my word.
The young water master watched as Shiel escaped the grasp of his whirlpool and darted towards him at impressive speeds. But by the looks of it, her speed was nothing special.One of the clones tapped Rhydas on the shoulder and Rhydas nodded in response, knowing the guy was making handseals without having to look himself. That's what clones were for after-all.
With the "go-ahead" already given, the clone quickly formed a short pattern with ease. Once the technique was completed successfully, twenty-five needles of water were created ten metres above the guy in a small cluster and would descend quickly upon him. Naturally aiming for his head. Should he be incapable of moving in time, he'd be in big trouble and with the rain in place, it would be difficult to even determine he was being attacked at all.
As his clone handled that little problem, Rhydas turned back in time to see Shiel about to raise the flashlight up to his eyes. Of course, a parry of the hand was all that was needed to avoid the expected strike to the skull. The movement made, simply to redirect the strike completely, reversing the swing with his own hand. Once that was accomplished, Rhydas would send an uppercut fist into her chin. Lifting her off the ground by a few metres should it connect.
If the attack was successful, Rhydas would follow her into the air and would strike at her with various blows that depended upon speed rather than accuracy. Rhydas doubted she'd be able to stand if all sixteen hits connected.
Clone 1: Suiton: Mizu Kunai no Jutsu (Water Kunai) Rank: “C” Type: Ninjutsu Effect: Creates Kunai, Shiruken, or Senbon out of water. Special: "Handseals" Description: The user creates Kunai, Shiruken, or Senbon out of water. The user can create a total of five kunai, fifteen shiruken, or twenty five senbon at once with the jutsu. After striking a solid object, they lose their shape about three seconds later, Limit: Water Release
Tetsu Tekken (Iron Fist) Rank: "C" Skill: TaiJutsu Effect: A Brawler's true capabilities is within his fists and legs. The Brawler is capable of hitting as if his fists were gauntlets themselves. They say a Brawler's punch is like being smacked by a bull and that is where these power attacks come to play. Those who get hit by a Brawler's Iron Fist feel a knock back effect depending on the user's class. Special: --- Drawback: The user is only capable of performing this attack so many times per day depending on how many times the user knows this technique as well as the Class level of the user. Description: When the user first learns this technique they are capable of performing this technique a total of five times per day as well as any other technique that is in conjunction of the Iron Fist. Every time this technique is learned the user is capable of performing this technique as well other techniques into conjunction one more time. This means that if a user learns this technique twice they are capable of performing this technique a total of six times. Depending on how well and how strong the user is by Class, the user is capable of performing the technique with devastating power. The higher the class is the more devastating the attack will be creating a more sufficient way of breaking one's bones. D Class - Five Meters Knock back C Class - Fifteen Meters Knock back B Class - Twenty Five Meters Knock back - 10% Chance Bones may Break A Class - Forty Meters Knock back - 30% Chance Bones may Break S Class - Sixty Meters Knock back - 50% Chance Bones may Break
Limit: Must be a Brawler
Gekijou Atemi (Fury of Blows) Rank: "C" Skill: TaiJutsu Effect: The user is capable of hurling a flurry of attacks, of strong like blows against the enemy more times then one is capable of within a single movement. The user gains the capability of attacking faster using their speed, but at that rate they also loose great accuracy for they are punching somewhat wildly. Special: --- Drawback: The user is capable of using this technique only to the amount of times they are capable of using Tetsu Tekken (Iron Fist) Description: The user sacrifices what he knows of Tetsu Tekken (Iron Fist) for this technique and attacks in a Fury of Blows. Normally a person is capable of attacking with their left and right hand within one movement one time. With Fury of Blows the user is capable of attacking two times with their left hand, and two times with their right hand per movement equal to that of the whole round. When the user attacks they are capable of attacking faster, but they attack wildly, their attacks are never precise and they are not very accurate as well. Speed is gained but accuracy drops down dramatically. Some believe it is best to pin the opponent down against the wall, or against the ground before the user is capable of attacking correctly. Limit: Must know Tetsu Tekken (Iron Fist)
Last Edit: Dec 2, 2010 18:28:08 GMT -7 by zenoske1ryu
Her strike would be parried, this is true, but through her training in krav maga, little though it was, Shiel could see the intent behind his motion and had a basic understanding of kinetics. Thus would she allow herself to twirl in the direction of the deflection, just barely out of reach of the initial blows of the wild flurry the water-user unleashed. He was becoming more interesting by the second. And she said as much, even as her long hair flared out, potentially obscuring his vision before she launched her flashlight, now turned 'on' in the general direction of his head.
"You interest me," The Messiah would chuckle.
Of course the remainder of the strikes would hit, or most of them would anyhow. All said she was crushed by those hammering fists ten times, and though the Chaos would protect her from a large portion of the pain, even the Divine must admit that they stung ferociously. This had the sole effect of angering her.
Which meant she continued to smile. Although there was a visciousness to it that was not there previously. Tact was gone. Tactics? Likewise. All that remained was bloodlust. She would hurt him. She would hurt him untill he wished for death. And she would grant him new life under her own service.
Post by Poëtische Rechtvaardigheid on Dec 2, 2010 19:28:23 GMT -7
Aneko after tossing the bomb figured it would be best if she went else where for a while away from the deadly item and the male. Aneko then body flickered one time back away ducking into a hole she covered her ears because she didn't make it out of the danger zone.
her heart beat faster and she tightly closed her dark green eyes. then it blew up causing a bright blinding light and a great noise, but thankfully she was behind the rock and that saved her eyes, but her ears was a differnt story. her eyes then darken more in anger and then a calmness claimed her, and a slow smile came to face. the male was going to pay for hurting her. she wasn't playing anymore.
she might not have her hearing, and the ringing in her ears was driving her crazy, but that came with the job. she peeked out behind the rock once the noise was over. her mind was was strangely calm for the fact that her lost her hearing, one would think that she would be crying or screaming in some type of emotion. but she wasn't feeling anything at this time. so still smiling, the deaf hunter went hunting for a male who had hurt her.
Yeah Girl I like that~
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From where Yūkimaru was standing he could see the rock that the female ninja was behind, he could also see the young boy and his clone. As Yūkimaru couldn’t move his full attention was focused on both the rock and the boy. As he stood making his hand seals he noticed the boy was making some hand seals the boy had not made these hand seals before so it couldn’t be anything he had made before. Yūkimaru quickly adjusted his plan, he had taken this into account with his original plan but it looked like it would be tricky for him to fight two people, so the basis of his plan was the same to take one person out so that he would have more of a chance. And as one girl was attacking the young boy he would leave her after all the enemy of my enemy is my friend. Yūkimaru’s original plan had factored in the boy attacking, he had planned for two types of attacks; ranged and doll style. He had planned for this by seeing the boy previous attacks. So his response for this would be easy both the ranged and doll style could be effected where Yūkimaru stood, and the boy was mostly attacking to stop him performing the ninjustu, so the most likely form of attack would be the ranged attack as it would be faster acting.
Yūkimaru quickly moved backwards by using a quick jump back into a back handstand. As Yūkimaru made the short jump back he drew a senbon. Yūkimaru preformed the handstand with just one hand so when he was in midflow the threw the senbon at the boy. When he had completed the handstand he darted behind a large boulder this one blocked his view of the young boy meaning that he wouldn’t be able see him or intervene this time. Again he started to form his hand seals. If any senbon were to hit Yūkimaru they would make contact with his gourd meaning that he wouldn’t be hurt by it. This time the distance between Aneko was 40 meters. He would now start to form more handseals the boy and girl would be out of his range how ever as he was behind a large rock this would protect him from most long ranged attack, the area around him was all uneven, with dents in the floor and shattered rock every where.