Lesson A ~ Jak

[ladymia]

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Age:18
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Okay, for this Lesson, I'll be asking you to learn this technique:

Kawara Shuriken, 瓦手裏剣 (Roof Tile Shuriken)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A technique where the user hurls Roof tiles towards the opponent, concentrating the chakra along the technique making the shurikens stronger then normal.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: A Jutsu similar to that of the Manipulating Attack Blades Jutsu with similar principle. The user concentrates and performs their technique on the tiles as they spin the tiles towards the opponent. In addition to being able to control the tiles individually, the user is capable of pressurizing the tiles with their chakra creating a more stronger tile then before.
Limit: Universal NinJutsu Technique

You will write a minimum of three posts detailing how you go about learning it. I will have an assistant grade whatever it is you write, and I'll help you from there =]

[Jak]

Learning

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Kawara Shuriken, 瓦手裏剣 (Roof Tile Shuriken)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A technique where the user hurls Roof tiles towards the opponent, concentrating the chakra along the technique making the shurikens stronger then normal.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: A Jutsu similar to that of the Manipulating Attack Blades Jutsu with similar principle. The user concentrates and performs their technique on the tiles as they spin the tiles towards the opponent. In addition to being able to control the tiles individually, the user is capable of pressurizing the tiles with their chakra creating a more stronger tile then before.
Limit: Universal NinJutsu Technique

jak walked along the village rooftops, his feet clinking against the tiles. He carried a collapsible target on his back that he had "borrowed" from his grandpa. As he walked he scanned the roof scape, searching for the ideal place to learn the jutsu he had in mind. Before long, he had spotted a long narrow building, about 15 meters by 45 meters. He set the target up on one side and took a stance on the other, preparing his chakra for the jutsu.

Quickly forming the hand seals, he focused his chakra down though his body and into the tiles below. The rooftop rattled and creaked as the chakra tried to spin the tiles, but that was the only reaction. It was a good start jak thought, then he tried again. quickly repeating the process and this time causing a few tiles to jump a few feet away from their original spot.

as Jak continued this repeated process, the effects became more prominent. Tiles began to not only jump, but fly through the air, spinning dangerously, Jak was pleased with how well the training was going.

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