Yori Nentou

[Yori Nentou]

Name: Yori Nentou

Bloodlimit: None

Height: 4ft 3 in.

Weight: 80lbs

Age: 8 years old

Gender: Male

Alignment: Evil, Lawful

Birth Country: Tsuchi no Kuni (Land of Earth)

Village: Iwagakure (Village of Stone)

Specialist: Genjutsu Master



Weapons:

Primary Weapon:

Staff and Spear Weapons (Overview
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Bludgeoning/Piercing, Staff/Spear
Effect: Blunt stick like weapons used for bashing, attacking and defense that reaches within a certain length and genre. Some of these weapons are piercing, and slashing as well. Some of the weapons that fit in this genre are weapons that consist of blades at the end of the large staff like weapon.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Types of weapons that are large staffs, or spear like weapons. These weapons range in the length of over five feet to even eight feet in length. These weapons are plentiful and diverse when it comes to mid range. These weapons range from the Bo, th Eku, the Ji, the Lathi, the Pudao, the Halberd, the Monk's spade, the Nagamaki, Naginata, the Quarterstaff, Spear, Taiaha, the Kanabo, the Yari. Different weapons with different styles of blades or staff creations.
Limit: These types of weapons may be capable of being bought inside any Weapon Shop


Secondary Items"

o User starts with a Butt Bag Type 1 (5 Grenade (5 slots) fragmentation, 6 Grenade Smoke(6 slots), 16 Bolas - Boleadora(4 slots))


Non-Weapon Items: None



Character Depth:

Personality:

Determination describes him. Determination to succeed and make sure that he accomplishes everything imaginable. To feel sorry for the weak and insignificant is a sign of sympathy which is weakness. However, Yori knows that he must play by the rules. But he also knows he must use the rules to get to where he wants to be.

He is kind or so it seems and also respectful to authority figures. However, my advice to you is keep one eye open while you sleep. He is so determined to rise to the top he will do anything to get there. He won't lie or cheat because he plays by the rules. But he will do anything necessary to get there.

Trustworthy, possibly. Either your on his side or not. He is very calm and calculative, taking every option into deep consideration. Very quite he appears to be, but if necessary will let out a storm. He likes the shadows because it hides himself and when ready he will strike. Also the shadows of minds is where he likes to reside.

Appearance:

His complexion is an interesting thing. His face is smooth and white but not to white. A chin which points downward, where he intends to put people. Tan eyes which glimmer in the moonlight and squints in the sun. Hair which flows downwards as a river flows. It is blue and long.

The cloths he wears reflects his personality, dark. He wears dark clothing to hide himself from others. As said earlier he likes to stay hidden away from society. Night is his friend and the darkness that night brings him helps him achieve just that. But he will change if necessary to accomplish a task.

Overall he looks like a normal person, from a distance. You notice as you get closer a mysterious aura about him. That is if you can get close enough to see him. As stated he tends to stay away from society as much as possible. His looks and clothing help him do just that. He only goes into society to get what he needs.

Background:

That one night changed it all. It changed who he was. Before, life was good. His mother and father were at peace and love was in his life. He was a good child with ambitions to fight for his village and become a powerful ninja to bring peace, but everything changed. That one night changed it all.

Yori comes from a medium sized merchant family trying to advance themselves in the political side of the village. They want their children to become ninjas, and so they became. However, some turned evil, some turned chaotic. Yori's brother was no exception. That one night showed how evil corrupts the mind and evil takes hold of the body. Even in a body who wants to do good, such as Yori, evil took hold because of that one night.

After killing an innocent human Yori's brother fled only to return one night. After Yori opened the door to his home fire burst throughout the house. His parents room was locked from the inside. Trying to save his parents all he could hear was screaming from his two elderly parents and an evil hysterical laugh from his brother. Finally the door gave way only to see his brother slit the throat of both of his parents after their torture. In a blink of an eye his brother disappeared. Ninjas in the area who saw the fire had to drag Yori from the burning home, but only after seeing death take his parents lives. He now lives with his aunt and uncle who treat him very well but cannot show him love as his parents did. As for the brother. He was captured and killed. But the evil he left in his younger brother clung on to Yori and grew and took hold of him. He isn't as bad as his older brother but still, evil is evil.

[Yori Nentou]

Techniques:

3 Freebies:

Figment Perception
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: With this technique the user is capable of performing Jutsus that deals with the type of perception of Figment kind.
Special: ---
Drawback: Without this the user is unable to perform Jutsus dealing with the Figment Perception.
Description: Figment Perception creates a false Sensation. When a Figment Technique is perceived everyone feels the same thing, there is no alter, or different versions of a technique from person to person. This means that if a user performs a Figment Perception on a group, everyone feels the exact same Perception. With a Figment Perception if a user wishes to create an affect such as speech, the user must pick the speech first in order for it to speak or else no audible speech will be heard. If intelligible speech is possible, it must be in a language the user can speak. This goes the same with images, a user cannot create an image unless the user knows the image. User can only create figments out of two sensory, sight and sound. Figments cannot cause damage to objects or creatures, support weight, provide nutrition, or provide protection from the elements. Figments are pure illusions, used for distractions, confounding, or delaying enemies. This is not a mind affecting perception.
Limit: No Limitation.



Glamour Perception
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: With this technique the user is capable of performing Jutsus that deals with the type of perception of Glamor kind.
Special: ---
Drawback: Without this the user is unable to perform Jutsus dealing with the Glamor Perception.
Description: Glamour Perception changes a person's sensory qualities, making it look, feel, taste, smell, or sound like something else, or even seem to disappear. This means a person could hear something that is not there, feel something that is not there, taste something that is not there, see something that is not there. Glamour are basically hallucinations, delusions, making someone feel, see, taste, smell, or hear something that is not there, or make something not exist while being there. Glamour is illusions, used for distractions, confounding, or delaying enemies. This is not a mind affecting perception.
Limit: No Limitation.



Pattern Perception
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: With this technique the user is capable of performing Jutsus that deals with the type of perception of Pattern kind.
Special: ---
Drawback: Without this the user is unable to perform Jutsus dealing with the Pattern Perception.
Description: Pattern Perception are like figments, a pattern technique creates an image that others can see, but a pattern also affects the minds of those who see it or are caught in it. This means that those who are trapped within Pattern Perception Techniques are also affected by other sensations that affects the mind itself such as blindness, unconscious, stunned, or even nausea. In affect, Patterns are very similar to Figment, however they have added affect used to subdue an opponent, harming their inner mind in a certain way to allow the user to perform more harmful techniques or escape without problems.
Limit: No Limitation




Techniques:

Chakura Kyuin Jutsu (Chakra Absorption Technique)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The user is capable of draining a small piece of the opponent's chakra by pushing their arm off, making sure that they are close to the opponent.
Special: ---
Drawback: The user must have some sort of ground, or must be within close range of the opponent. What this means is that they must be at least couple of feet from the opponent in a maximum range, or they must have hold of something that is pure chakra such as chakra strings.
Description: The user focuses their own chakra within their body and pushes it towards their very hands. As the user does so they create a somewhat "vacuum" like effect within their own chakra along the palm of their hands. What this occurs is when the user grows close to the opponent and does a punching like motion the opponent will feel a small amount of chakra escape from their very own body and be used towards the user's own special like force. This can be used to further the strength of the user with their own chakra supply.
Limit: Anyone is capable of learning this technique.



Lure
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: A technique that creates an illusion that lures an opponent towards a set direction using an enticing image. This technique when hits the opponent connects with such a feeling that the user becomes enticed until the image disappears.
Special: Handseals
Drawback: Only works whenever the opponent is touched. This technique may not work in any other way, however since the technique is touched base, the technique has more of a powerful kick towards it to where the opponent will automatically know it is a GenJutsu. This means Kai does not work.
Description: A GenJutsu creates an illusion of something extremely attractive and mobile to the target of the Jutsu. Unless the opponent is two classes stronger then that of the user the target is compelled to follow the illusion, which always seems to stay just a few steps ahead of the opponent. The affected target must follow the illusion until the GenJutsu expires, or until the user mentally wills the GenJutsu to end. Typically, these illusions are of something highly desirable, such as a cart laden with gold, or a comely figure beckoning the affected target. Only the affected target would be capable of seeing the illusion. The GenJutsu lasts only as that of four rounds per class Level the user may be. The user must determine the specific path that the illusion must take. This path cannot lead into any obviously dangerous areas. If the target is lead into a place that is obviously dangerous such as a cliff, an obvious trap that a small child would be capable of seeing the user is capable of escaping and snapping out of senses.
Limit: Must know Must know Figment Perception of GenJutsus.




Faceless
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: A technique that makes all distinguishing characteristics melt away, making them appear utterly mundane and mediocre.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: This technique lasts only so long depending on the user's class level.
Description: A technique that makes all distinguishing characteristics melt away, making them appear utterly mundane and mediocre. Those who see the user are unable to recognize them later and all descriptions of the user is vague and useless. This technique does not draw unwarranted attention while they are in the effect of this jutsu. This technique however fails if the user is doing something that would draw them attention such as killing someone, or breaking into a home to whoever is within a thirty-meter radius of that of the user performing these actions. This technique lasts for only one hour when the user first learns as a "D" Class character. For every Class power higher then that of "D" Class this technique is capable of lasting for five hours additional. This means a "B" Class character is capable of having this technique up for duration of eleven hours.
Limit: Must know Glamour Perception of GenJutsus





Genwaku Haibun no Jutsu - (Blinding Deafening Technique)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: Causes Blindness, or Defness upon a person for an amount of time.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: The user is only capable of using one technique at a time, this means that if a user uses one form either Blinding or Deafening against a few or one opponent, the user is unable to turn and start using the other on the same or even a different opponent. The user's hand must touch the ground and must stay along the ground, which may keep them somewhat vulnerable if the time is finally done.
Description: The user performs a few handseals as they slam their hand down against the very ground. The user spreads forth their chakra in a hundred foot radius from them as they create an illusion within that dome. That illusion messes with one of the two senses of the human body. One is the sense of Site, and the other is the sense of Sound. Those who step into this radius will be affected by the illusion as the user picks one of the two they wish to have stricken away from the opponents. The illusion is that they cannot see, nor hear within the very radius and are unable to understand all around as the one of the two senses is disrupted. If the opponents leave the radius, or if the user removes their hand the opponents is still under the illusion for still one round. For every Class that the user is the distance that the radius can be increased is by twenty feet. If the user is a GenJutsu Specialist, however the distance increases by twenty-five feet, while a GenJutsu Master is increased by thirty feet.
Limit: Must know Pattern Perception of GenJutsus




Magen: Hana Arashi no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Flower Storm Technique)
Rank: “C” Rank
Skill: Genjutsu
Effect: Sends an illusionary swirl of flower petals around the opponent, which acts as a hypnotism to slow down the speed at which the brain interprets the signal that the eyes send to the brain.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: The Genjutsu only works as long as the opponent can see the flower petals themselves. If the opponent can view the area through another object (glasses, etc), then the Genjutsu does not work.
Description: The user performs the handseals, releasing a flow of chakra at the opponent. From that point, a giant swirl of flowers, normally cherry blossoms, will move rapidly in a circular formation around the user. This hypnotizes the mind into lowering the speed at which the brain processes the signals received from the eyes. Because of this, everything seems to move incredibly fast to the opponent, except for the cherry blossoms, which stay at the same speed.
Limit: Must know Pattern Perception

[atem.]

Firstly, a 4'3" eight year-old who weighs 160 pounds? That's like, the weight of a full grown man, plus more. Either describe why your character is freakishly overweight in your Appearance, which I still think should be toned down a bit regardless, or make the ratio more accurate, in which he is more likely to weigh between 50 to 80 pounds.

Pick the Violin or the Staff, not both. You are only allowed either a Main Weapon or a Non-Weapon Item at creation, one or the other, and the Violin counts as a Primary Weapon, btw.

For Secondary Weapons, for the Bolas, do you mean one slot or just one Bolas? Remember, one slot is 4 Bolas, so one Bolas is only a fourth of a slot. Secondly, you have three slots remaining. You could fill them up or leave them, your choice.

Lastly, your Freebies are fine, but where are your five free techniques? You get five free C-Rank and under techniques to start with, be sure to take this opportunity and take them free while you can.

PM me once the changes are made to review this bio.

[Yori Nentou]

fixed

[Corvus]

first of all, you can't have Underground Fish Projection, you'd need to start with double suicide decapitation to have it, but you don't so you can't. Also, it looks like you've removed ranks from some of your starting techniques. You're not supposed to do that. Put them back and either bold, italicize, or underline the rank that you know. In addition, with multi-rank jutsu, each rank is treated as a separate jutsu, so to start with two ranks of a multi-ranked jutsu, it takes up two of your five starting jutsu.

Also, why are you starting with Earth release and earth jutsu when you're a Genmaster and all three of your freebies are Perceptions? There's nothing particularly wrong with that, but I'd like to know your reasoning.

As for your secondary weapons, I'm pretty sure you're only allowed to start with the most basic version of the item, but seeing as how the basic Bola is A ranked and the 3 weight version is C ranked, I think there may be an exception.(other staff confirmation please?)

Everything else looks fine though.

[Yori Nentou]

fixed

[Corvus]

looks good, you have my 1/3 if another staff member confirms that it's fine for you to start with the 3 weight Bola.

[atem.]

Almost, but not quite. 4 slots of Bolas is 16 Bolas, not 1. Just increase the number you have from 1 to 16 if you want 4 slots full.

You do not meet the requirements for White Noise Technique, which requires you to know Sasayaki no Jutsu beforehand. Replace it, or another technique with Sasayaki no Jutsu.

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As for your inquiry Corvus, yes, he can. That rule only applies to Non-Weapon Items.

[Yori Nentou]

fixed

[atem.]

1/3

Good luck.

[KARKAT]

2.3 <3

[Ravenous]

3!3